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Incest Kahani ek family ki ..... (completed)

Kis character ke sath hero ka first intimate scene hona chahiye

  • Mohini

    Votes: 427 58.8%
  • Rajni

    Votes: 199 27.4%
  • Tanu

    Votes: 90 12.4%
  • Khushi

    Votes: 79 10.9%
  • Rajni ki koi saheli

    Votes: 46 6.3%
  • any other female member

    Votes: 28 3.9%
  • jhanvi

    Votes: 30 4.1%

  • Total voters
    726
  • Poll closed .

zopion

Happiness of life : to love & be loved
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Zopion bro, first of all I want to apologize for giving you a late review. Very happy to see your return and I congratulate you for completing 300 pages. Both Update 51 and Update 52 were very good updates.
Shalini is telling her entire story to Ravi and Ravi is listening and understanding everything carefully. Shalini asks Ravi for help and Ravi agrees to help. Shalini likes Ravi and something is going to happen soon between the two.
Glad to know that Divya expelled Sunil from her life and Diya made a good excuse in front of Rajni.
Diya forgets all the old pains between her mother and forgives her mother and you did not say what Ravi has promised Kamala.
Overall I want to say that you are writing very well and keep on writing like this. Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You.....
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thanks :dost: for your lovely review
 

zopion

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UPDATE 53

Aate hi usne ravi ki taraf dekhte huye smile pass ki aur purani nurse ke jane ka wait karne lagi .... Uske jate hi muskura kar Ravi ko pyar se good evening wish kiya ....
Ravi - wah shalini madam aj to kafi khus najar aa rahi ho kisi doctor ne propose wagairah to nahi kar diya ....
Shalini - dhatt ye main aj apne kisi khas ke liye saj dhaj kar aayi hu kisi ko rijhana hai ....

Ravi dheere dheere smile karne lagta hai .....


AB AAGE

Kuch der me dinner ka wakt ho gaya aur sabhi patient ke liye hospital ki taraf se dinner provide kiya gaya .... Ravi ab normal ho chuka tha aur apna khana khud bhi kha sakta tha par shalini ne khud apne hatho se usko khana khilaya .....

Shalini - ruko mere paas apke liye kuch aur bhi hai .....

Shalini apne bag se ek lunch box nikalti hai jisko kholte gajar ke halwe ki manmohak sugandh kamre me phail jati hai ....

Ravi - ye mere liye hai kya ....

Shalini - ji haan ... chaliye muh kholiye .....

Ravi muh kholta hai aur Shalini bade pyar se ek chammach halwa uske muh me dalti .....

Ravi - it's fantastic yaar .... itna acha kaise banaya hai i mean kya kya dala hai isme .....

Shalini - gajar ka halwa banane ke sare ingredients aur thoda sa pyar .....

Ravi - oho madam sambhal kar kahi apko mujhse pyar na ho jaye .....

Shalini - wo to kabka ho gaya hai ....

Ravi - kya matlab .....

Shalini (baat ko sambhalte huye) - i mean ham jo karne ja rahe hain usme agar thoda sa pyar ka tadka mix ho to aur bhi jyada maza aayega ..... Waise bhi ap mere liye itna kuch kar rahe hain to mera bhi kuch farz banta hai ....

Ravi - yaar ap kitni beautiful ho aur baatein bhi kitni achi karti ho ..... apka pati duniya ka sabse bada bewkuf hoga jise ap jaisi pyari biwi ki koi kadra nahi uski jagah main hota to palko par bithata apko aur dil me chhupa kar rakhta ....

Shalini - please Ravi ji aj apne kah diya to koi baat nahi par aainda se mere husband ke bare me kuch galat na kahna .... Wo jaisa bhi hai mera husband hai .... wo bhale hi mujhe mare pite ya mujhe thukra de par main hamesa unki ijjat karti rahungi ......

Ravi ka chehra utar jata hai .... Similar story uske sath diya wale incident me bhi huyi thi .... Ab usko samajh aa gaya tha ki kisi ke samne uske husband ki burayi na karo bhale hi wo kitna bhi kutta kamina hi kyu na ho .....

Shalini ne apne dhun me ye sab bol to diya par jab usne Ravi ka utra hua chehra dekha to usko apni galti ka ehsas hua aur udhar Ravi bhi apni galti sudharna chahta tha .....

Coincidentally dono ke muh se ek sath " sorry " nikla .....

Ravi (apni baaat ko jaari rakhte huye) - i am really sorry Shalini ji mujhe apke husband ke bare me aisa nahi kahna chahiye tha ....

Shalini - sorry to mujhe kahna chahiye tha ki main na jane apko kya kya kah gayi jabki ap mere pariwar aur rishte ko bachane ke liye kitna kuch kar rahe hain .... i am really sorry Ravi ji mujhe maaf kar dijiye ....

Ravi - main samajh sakta hu apki feeling .... waise mere sath rishta bana kar ap apne husband ko technically dhokha nahi dene wali ho .....

Shalini - oh com'on Ravi ji ye sab main unke sath apna rishta bachane ke liye hi to karungi .....

Ravi - oh to ap mera use karna chahti hain aur apna matlab pura ho jane ke baad mujhe doodh me padi makkhi ki tarah fek dengi .....

Shalini - oh my god ye ap kya kya sochne lage apki value meri najar me mere husband se kafi jyada hai ..... Agar ap peechhli baaat ko soch kar ye sab bol rahe ho to once again i am very very sorry .... mera husband kutta kamina harami sab kuch hai ab to khus ho na ap .....

Ravi - mere kahne ka ye matlab nahi tha .....

Ravi kuch aur bolta usse pahle hi Shalini ne uske lips ko apne lips se lock kar liya ..... kuch der tak Ravi ki taraf se to koi response nahi aaya par Shalini ke josh aur deewangi ko dekhte huye Ravi ne bhi response dena suru kar diya ....

Kuch der ke ghamasan smooching ke baad dono ke lips alag huye .....

Shalini - i love you sweet heart ..... bhale hi main apki real wife to nahi ban sakti par kuch dino ke liye hi sahi bistar par apki wife to ban hi sakti hu .....

Ravi - pagal ho kya ye hospital hai aur yaha ye sab karna safe nahi ....

Shalini - ap ghabra kyu rahe ho yaha koi camera wagairah nahi laga hai to band kamre me hame dekhne wala kaun hai ..... waise aj tak kabhi yu public place me aisa kiya nahi par aj na jane kyu ye dil behakne ko bekarar hai .....

Ravi - par main yaha ye sab nahi karne wala ....

Shalini - ye to meri lines honi chahiye janab .... jab main ek ladies hone ke ke bawjud nahi dar rahi to apke 12 kyu baje huye hain ..... mujhe to ap bade fattu malum hote ho ....

Ravi - tumhe kya main fattu dikhta hu .... chalo aj tumhe dikha hi deta hu asli mard ka power ....

Shalini jaan bujh kar Ravi ko uksane ke liye ye sab bol rahi thi .....

Ravi apne bed se neeche utar jata hai aur jor se Shalini ko pakad kar apne hontho ko uske hontho par chipka deta hai ..... Aur smooching karte huye hi apne hath neeche le jakar Shalini ke matke jaise par soft soft chutado ko tham kar apni taraf chipkane lagta hai ..... Wo kabhi unhe dabane lagta to kabhi dono matko ko ek dusre ke different direction me le jakar chhod deta .....

Shalini ke liye ye sab ek naya experience tha uske pati ne bhi aj tak uske jism ko iss tarah nahi masla tha .... Shalini ko bahut maza aa raha tha par sath hi sath sharm bhi aa rahi thi ki wo ek gair mard ke sath band kamre me hai ....

Shalini ne nurse wali uniform ke andar salwar suit pahna hua tha jiske wajah se Ravi ko Shalini ka peechhwada ache se feel kar pa raha tha .....

Jab dono alag huye to Shalini Ravi se najre chura rahi thi .....

Ravi - kya hua madam ab apka chehra kyu utra hua hai kahi apne apna mind to nahi change kar liya .... koi nahi abhi bhi mauka hai agar ap mere sath comfortable nahi ho to kisi aur ke sath ye sab kar lena .....

Shalini (kuch der baad ) - maine kab kaha ki main comfortable nahi hu .... main to ye soch rahi hu ki jis tarike se apne iss process ka aagaz kiya hai uske parinam ke liye ye jagah sahi rahega ya nahi .....

Ravi - darne ki koi jarurat nahi ye to apne hi uksaya tha warna main to pyar se sab kuch karne me biswas rakhta hu ....

Shalini - thank god .... mujhe to laga tha ki aj meri shamat pakki hai .....

Ravi - don't worry ..... chaliye ab apne jism ko belibas kijiye taki apki chudayi kar saku ....

Shalini - chhi kitna ganda bolte ho .....

Ravi - wah karne me ganda nahi hota hai aur bolne se ganda ho jata hai .... lund gand boor choot chuchi ye sab to jism ke parts ke naam hain to isme bura kya hai .... kya apke paas gand choot ya chuchi nahi hai ....

Shalini - hai par maine aise words aj tak use nahi kiye aur please yaha normal wala hi karte hain na kal se ham mere ghar me shaan se karenge aj bas aram se mute version me karte hain na .....

Ravi - ok chalo jaldi se nangi ho jao ....

Shalini jaldi se fatafat apne jism se sare kapde utar fenkti hai ..... Ab uske jism par kapde ke naam par ek dhaaga bhi na tha ..... chhati par do santre ke size ki chuchiya thi jinke upar kismis ka rasila dana chipka hua tha jo uski shobha me char chand laga de raha tha ..... Sapat pet ke neeche gehri naabhi thi aur naabhi ke chand inches neeche chhota sa bagicha tha aur bagiche ke neeche masti ka saagar jisme chahe jitni bhi baar dubki laga lo man tript nahi hone wala ....

Ravi Shalini ke jism ko dhyan se dekh hi raha tha ki uska gate knock hone lagta hai .... Shalini jaldi jaldi apne kapde pahanti hai aur Ravi jakar bed par let jata hai .... Kapde thik karne ke baad Shalini jakar gate kholti hai bahar ek chutiya wardboy khada tha daant nikale huye .....

Kya uss chapadganju wardboy ne sab sun to nahi liya ????? Kya wo Shalini ko blackmail karne wala hai ????
 
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