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UPDATE 37
ravi - itna pyar karti ho ap mujhse ...
tanu - tumhe koi shak hai to azma kar dekh lo ....
ravi - nahi didi mujhe apke upar pura bharosha hai .... Didi mujhe agla lesson kab dogi ....
tanu - Aj to mere aage peechhe logo ki bhid hogi kal time dekh kar tujhe message karungi .... chalo main tumhe lunch ke liye bulane aayi thi ....
AB AAGE
Raat me tanu ki haldi ki rashm thi isliye aj uske ghar me kafi bheed jama thi .... Uske friends neighbors sabhi jama the ... Jyadatar ladies ya girls hi maujud thi waha .... rajni bhi aj duty se jaldi hi laut aayi thi ....
ravi bhi ek acha sa dress pahankar idhar udhar busy dikh raha tha ....
Haldi ka function chhat par rakha gaya tha .... Achi lighting wagairah se raat ke andhere me bhi din sa ujala tha ..... Jyadatar jawan ladkiyo ki najar hamare hero ko hi ghur rahi thi waise bhi aj ravi tanu ke select kiye huye kapde me kafi handsome lag raha tha .... Abhi tanu aur rajni chhat par nahi pahunchi thi .... rachna bhi chori chhipe najro se kabhi kabhi ravi ki taraf dekh le rahi thi ....
divya khushi ke sath hi chhat par ek kone me chair par baithi apas me gappe hank rahi thi ....
divya - yaar khushi tera bhai kitna handsome hai .... bilkul kisi bhi ladki ke dil me bana lene layak ...
khushi - kya didi ap bhi usko to bakhushih do wo to bechara abhi bachcha hai ....
divya - yaar khushi bura mat manna par agar isko bachcha kahenge to mard kise kahenge ...
khushi - kya didi ap bhi shaadi suda hokar bhi aisi baatein ....
divya - are maine galat kya kaha .... wo agar ek baar muskura kar baat kar mujhe ek baar ishara to kar de main to khushi khushi apne aage peechhe dono taraf ke khazane ki chabhi usko de du ....
khushi - chhi didi you are so cheap ... waise dekha jaye to wo bhi apka bhai hi lagega ...
divya - everything is fair in love my dear ....
khushi - oye tere ki apko kab usse love hua ....
divya - ye attraction wala love hai ....Ek baar tu apna bahan wala chasma hata kar ek aam ladki ki tarah dekh to sahi fir batana tujhe usme kya najar aata hai ....
khushi sach me divya ki baat maan kar ravi ki taraf bahan wali feeling hata kar dekhti hai ... Ek pal ko to wo khud bhi shock ho jati hai kyuki abhi usko ravi pahle se bhi jyada handsome lag raha tha ....
Par khushi apni feeling daba kar jhut mut ka divya ko kahti hai ki usko to koi difference najar hi nahi aa raha ....
Tabhi chhat par tanu aur rajni ki entry hoti hai .... Tanu bahut khubsurat lag rahi thi par jise dekh sabse jyada khalbali machayi huyi thi wo rajni thi .... rajni ko dekh waha maujud ladkiyo ki najre bhi uske upar chipki huyi thi .... Unki bhi kya galti hai designer lehenge aur khule baalo me rajni wakeyi kafi khubsurat lag rahi thi ....
Khair pandit ji ki agya se haldi ki rashm ki suruat huyi pahle tanu ke parents ne apni beti ko haldi laga kar rashm ki suruat ki .... Waise hi fir baki sabhi ne bhi tanu ko haldi laga kar rashm nibhaya ..... Jyadatar log ab neeche ja chuke the ....
Ravi ne dekha ki rachna ek kone me khadi aasman ki taraf dekh ....
ravi - kya hua rachna madam aj hi taare count karne ka irada hai kya ....
rachna kuch nahi bolti ek baar bas ravi ko dekhti hai fir se aasman me dekhne lagti hai ....
ravi - lagta hai uss raat ki baat ke liye ab bhi naraj ho ... (apne ek kaan ko pakad masum si shakal bana kar) acha baba sorry ab to maaf kar do ....
ravi ki shakal dekh rachna ko hasi aa jati hai ....
ravi - are wah hasi to fasi ....
rachna - nahi mister yaha to no entry hai ....
ravi - apne mujhe maaf to kiya na ....
rachna - jab apse naraz hi nhi hu to maafi kyu ....
ravi - thank god .... mujhe laga ki ap uss din ki wajah se mujse naraz ho ....
rachna - maafi to mujhe mangni chahiye thi ....
ravi - waise maine apke liye ek dress apke room me rakhwa diya hai ....
rachna - par uski kya jarurat thi ... i mean mujhe nahi chahiye koi dress wress ....
Tabhi waha ek single lever ka admi hilte dulte aa gaya .... Ab tak baki sabhi log neeche ja chuke the ....
Aadmi - sali sahiba any problem .... (ravi ki taraf dekhte huye) agar koi problem ho to bataiye maine ache acho ko thik kiya hua hai ....
rachna - nahi jija ji koi problem nahi .... ye tanu didi ke bhai lagte hain aur ravi ji ye meri didi ke husband yani mere jija ji hain ....
rachna ka jija rachna ki peeth par hath ferta hai par jis tarah se wo hath fer raha tha usse ravi ko thoda awkward lag raha tha ....
rachna ka jija - rachchu chalo na kahi bahar se ghum kar aate hain yaha maza nahi aa raha ...
rachna - abhi nahi jija ji fir kabhi ... ap neeche jao didi apko dhund rahi hogi ....
rachna ka jija ek do baar aur uski peeth par haath fer kar ravi ko ghurte huye waha se chala jata hai ....
ravi - rachna ji apke ye jija i mean bura mat maniyega kis type ke insan hain ....
rachna ki aankho me aanshoo aa jate hain ...
ravi - rachna ji sorry ... okay main kuch nahi puchunga chaliye neeche chalte hain .... lijiye pahle mere handkerchief se apne aanshoo poch lijiye ....
rachna - main apki wajah se nahi ro rahi ravi ji apni kismat ki wajah se ro rahi hu ....
ravi - kyu aisa kya hua apke sath ... i mean agar ap batana chahti hain to ..... ap mujhe as a friend samajh kar apni baat share kar sakti hain ....
rachna - ravi ji mera ye jija nihayati ghatiya aur tharki type insan hai ..... Didi ko talak dene ki dhamki ke sath mere sath galat harkat karta hai ....
ravi - to apne parents ya apni bahan ko kyu nahi bataya ....
rachna - main darti thi ki kahi inke sath jhagda hua to meri didi ki life barbad ho jayegi .... Ab to ek nanhi si jaan bhi hai unki jholi me ....
ravi - i mean ye sab kaise suru hua .... agar mujhe thik se batao to ho sakta hai main apki koi help kar saku ....
rachna - short me hi batati hu .... Main lower middle class family se belong karti hu ..... ye baat unn dino ki hai jab meri didi ki delivery hone wali thi .... Didi ke sasural me unki saas ya nanad na hone ki wajah se mujhe hi didi ke yha jana pada .... Unke sasural me unke sasur ke alawa yehi do log the .... Didi ko kuch dino baad hospital me bharti karwa diya gaya ....
2 - 3 din se lagatar main hospital me thi to didi ke sasur ne mujhe ghar bhej diya taki main thodi der aram kar saku .... Evening ko main didi ghar aayi to mujhe bahut thakan si mehsus ho rahi thi jiske wajah se jald hi mujhe neend aa gayi .... Jab meri neend khuli to nashe me dhutt apne jija ko dekha jo meri chunni hata kar mere urojo ko kapde ke upar se hi masal raha tha .... Maine pahle bhi dekha tha ki wo mujhe gandi najro se dekhta tha par uss din to hadd hi ho gayi .... Maine khud ko usse pare kiya to usne kaha ki jija sali me ye common baat hai .... Usne mujhe fir se dabochna chaha par main waha se bhag kar dusre kamre me jakar gate lock kar li .... Jija bahar khada badi der minnate karta raha par maine gate nahi khola .....
Tabhi waha divya ki awaz aati hai ....
"are bhai kaun si gate kholne ki baat ho rahi hai "
rachna to bilkul shocked si ho gayi ....
rachna - didi ap kab aayi ....
divya - are abhi just aa hi rahi hu par tu aise chaunk kyu rahi hai ....
rachna - didi sabhi bahar ke log chale gaye kya ....
divya - haan to .... abhi tum logo ko dinner ke liye hi bulane aayi hu ....
rachna - aur jiju kaha hain .....
divya - kyu wo mere room me khushi ke sath baatein kar rahe hain ....
ravi ne jaise hi ye suna usko bechaini si hone lagi kyuki jo insan sagi saali ko blackmail kar galat harkat kar sakta hai uska kya bharosa waise bhi wo ye bhi janta tha ki uski khushi didi hadd se jyada bholi hai ....
Wo teeno seedhiya utar rahe the tabhi ravi ne dekha ki first floor se diya aur khushi aur rachna ka jija yani ki divya ka pati seedhiyo se utar rahe hain tab jakar ravi ko tasalli mili ....
Dinner ke baad sabhi apne apne kamro me sone chale gaye kyuki aj waise bhi kafi raat ho chuki thi ....
Ravi apne bed par leta hua rachna ki kahi baato ko soch raha tha .... Tabhi uska gate knock hota hai .... ravi jakar gate kholta hai to bahar diya khadi thi ....
ravi - mami ap yaha iss wakt ....
Diya - beta wo divya ke husband aaye hain na isliye rachna hamare room me sone aa gayi aur main tumhare room aa gayi .....
ravi - okay mami ji andar aa jaiye ....
Ab ravi diya ke sath so to jata hai par uski aankho me neend nahi thi wajah thi khushi aur rachna ki safety ....
ravi - itna pyar karti ho ap mujhse ...
tanu - tumhe koi shak hai to azma kar dekh lo ....
ravi - nahi didi mujhe apke upar pura bharosha hai .... Didi mujhe agla lesson kab dogi ....
tanu - Aj to mere aage peechhe logo ki bhid hogi kal time dekh kar tujhe message karungi .... chalo main tumhe lunch ke liye bulane aayi thi ....
AB AAGE
Raat me tanu ki haldi ki rashm thi isliye aj uske ghar me kafi bheed jama thi .... Uske friends neighbors sabhi jama the ... Jyadatar ladies ya girls hi maujud thi waha .... rajni bhi aj duty se jaldi hi laut aayi thi ....
ravi bhi ek acha sa dress pahankar idhar udhar busy dikh raha tha ....
Haldi ka function chhat par rakha gaya tha .... Achi lighting wagairah se raat ke andhere me bhi din sa ujala tha ..... Jyadatar jawan ladkiyo ki najar hamare hero ko hi ghur rahi thi waise bhi aj ravi tanu ke select kiye huye kapde me kafi handsome lag raha tha .... Abhi tanu aur rajni chhat par nahi pahunchi thi .... rachna bhi chori chhipe najro se kabhi kabhi ravi ki taraf dekh le rahi thi ....
divya khushi ke sath hi chhat par ek kone me chair par baithi apas me gappe hank rahi thi ....
divya - yaar khushi tera bhai kitna handsome hai .... bilkul kisi bhi ladki ke dil me bana lene layak ...
khushi - kya didi ap bhi usko to bakhushih do wo to bechara abhi bachcha hai ....
divya - yaar khushi bura mat manna par agar isko bachcha kahenge to mard kise kahenge ...
khushi - kya didi ap bhi shaadi suda hokar bhi aisi baatein ....
divya - are maine galat kya kaha .... wo agar ek baar muskura kar baat kar mujhe ek baar ishara to kar de main to khushi khushi apne aage peechhe dono taraf ke khazane ki chabhi usko de du ....
khushi - chhi didi you are so cheap ... waise dekha jaye to wo bhi apka bhai hi lagega ...
divya - everything is fair in love my dear ....
khushi - oye tere ki apko kab usse love hua ....
divya - ye attraction wala love hai ....Ek baar tu apna bahan wala chasma hata kar ek aam ladki ki tarah dekh to sahi fir batana tujhe usme kya najar aata hai ....
khushi sach me divya ki baat maan kar ravi ki taraf bahan wali feeling hata kar dekhti hai ... Ek pal ko to wo khud bhi shock ho jati hai kyuki abhi usko ravi pahle se bhi jyada handsome lag raha tha ....
Par khushi apni feeling daba kar jhut mut ka divya ko kahti hai ki usko to koi difference najar hi nahi aa raha ....
Tabhi chhat par tanu aur rajni ki entry hoti hai .... Tanu bahut khubsurat lag rahi thi par jise dekh sabse jyada khalbali machayi huyi thi wo rajni thi .... rajni ko dekh waha maujud ladkiyo ki najre bhi uske upar chipki huyi thi .... Unki bhi kya galti hai designer lehenge aur khule baalo me rajni wakeyi kafi khubsurat lag rahi thi ....
Khair pandit ji ki agya se haldi ki rashm ki suruat huyi pahle tanu ke parents ne apni beti ko haldi laga kar rashm ki suruat ki .... Waise hi fir baki sabhi ne bhi tanu ko haldi laga kar rashm nibhaya ..... Jyadatar log ab neeche ja chuke the ....
Ravi ne dekha ki rachna ek kone me khadi aasman ki taraf dekh ....
ravi - kya hua rachna madam aj hi taare count karne ka irada hai kya ....
rachna kuch nahi bolti ek baar bas ravi ko dekhti hai fir se aasman me dekhne lagti hai ....
ravi - lagta hai uss raat ki baat ke liye ab bhi naraj ho ... (apne ek kaan ko pakad masum si shakal bana kar) acha baba sorry ab to maaf kar do ....
ravi ki shakal dekh rachna ko hasi aa jati hai ....
ravi - are wah hasi to fasi ....
rachna - nahi mister yaha to no entry hai ....
ravi - apne mujhe maaf to kiya na ....
rachna - jab apse naraz hi nhi hu to maafi kyu ....
ravi - thank god .... mujhe laga ki ap uss din ki wajah se mujse naraz ho ....
rachna - maafi to mujhe mangni chahiye thi ....
ravi - waise maine apke liye ek dress apke room me rakhwa diya hai ....
rachna - par uski kya jarurat thi ... i mean mujhe nahi chahiye koi dress wress ....
Tabhi waha ek single lever ka admi hilte dulte aa gaya .... Ab tak baki sabhi log neeche ja chuke the ....
Aadmi - sali sahiba any problem .... (ravi ki taraf dekhte huye) agar koi problem ho to bataiye maine ache acho ko thik kiya hua hai ....
rachna - nahi jija ji koi problem nahi .... ye tanu didi ke bhai lagte hain aur ravi ji ye meri didi ke husband yani mere jija ji hain ....
rachna ka jija rachna ki peeth par hath ferta hai par jis tarah se wo hath fer raha tha usse ravi ko thoda awkward lag raha tha ....
rachna ka jija - rachchu chalo na kahi bahar se ghum kar aate hain yaha maza nahi aa raha ...
rachna - abhi nahi jija ji fir kabhi ... ap neeche jao didi apko dhund rahi hogi ....
rachna ka jija ek do baar aur uski peeth par haath fer kar ravi ko ghurte huye waha se chala jata hai ....
ravi - rachna ji apke ye jija i mean bura mat maniyega kis type ke insan hain ....
rachna ki aankho me aanshoo aa jate hain ...
ravi - rachna ji sorry ... okay main kuch nahi puchunga chaliye neeche chalte hain .... lijiye pahle mere handkerchief se apne aanshoo poch lijiye ....
rachna - main apki wajah se nahi ro rahi ravi ji apni kismat ki wajah se ro rahi hu ....
ravi - kyu aisa kya hua apke sath ... i mean agar ap batana chahti hain to ..... ap mujhe as a friend samajh kar apni baat share kar sakti hain ....
rachna - ravi ji mera ye jija nihayati ghatiya aur tharki type insan hai ..... Didi ko talak dene ki dhamki ke sath mere sath galat harkat karta hai ....
ravi - to apne parents ya apni bahan ko kyu nahi bataya ....
rachna - main darti thi ki kahi inke sath jhagda hua to meri didi ki life barbad ho jayegi .... Ab to ek nanhi si jaan bhi hai unki jholi me ....
ravi - i mean ye sab kaise suru hua .... agar mujhe thik se batao to ho sakta hai main apki koi help kar saku ....
rachna - short me hi batati hu .... Main lower middle class family se belong karti hu ..... ye baat unn dino ki hai jab meri didi ki delivery hone wali thi .... Didi ke sasural me unki saas ya nanad na hone ki wajah se mujhe hi didi ke yha jana pada .... Unke sasural me unke sasur ke alawa yehi do log the .... Didi ko kuch dino baad hospital me bharti karwa diya gaya ....
2 - 3 din se lagatar main hospital me thi to didi ke sasur ne mujhe ghar bhej diya taki main thodi der aram kar saku .... Evening ko main didi ghar aayi to mujhe bahut thakan si mehsus ho rahi thi jiske wajah se jald hi mujhe neend aa gayi .... Jab meri neend khuli to nashe me dhutt apne jija ko dekha jo meri chunni hata kar mere urojo ko kapde ke upar se hi masal raha tha .... Maine pahle bhi dekha tha ki wo mujhe gandi najro se dekhta tha par uss din to hadd hi ho gayi .... Maine khud ko usse pare kiya to usne kaha ki jija sali me ye common baat hai .... Usne mujhe fir se dabochna chaha par main waha se bhag kar dusre kamre me jakar gate lock kar li .... Jija bahar khada badi der minnate karta raha par maine gate nahi khola .....
Tabhi waha divya ki awaz aati hai ....
"are bhai kaun si gate kholne ki baat ho rahi hai "
rachna to bilkul shocked si ho gayi ....
rachna - didi ap kab aayi ....
divya - are abhi just aa hi rahi hu par tu aise chaunk kyu rahi hai ....
rachna - didi sabhi bahar ke log chale gaye kya ....
divya - haan to .... abhi tum logo ko dinner ke liye hi bulane aayi hu ....
rachna - aur jiju kaha hain .....
divya - kyu wo mere room me khushi ke sath baatein kar rahe hain ....
ravi ne jaise hi ye suna usko bechaini si hone lagi kyuki jo insan sagi saali ko blackmail kar galat harkat kar sakta hai uska kya bharosa waise bhi wo ye bhi janta tha ki uski khushi didi hadd se jyada bholi hai ....
Wo teeno seedhiya utar rahe the tabhi ravi ne dekha ki first floor se diya aur khushi aur rachna ka jija yani ki divya ka pati seedhiyo se utar rahe hain tab jakar ravi ko tasalli mili ....
Dinner ke baad sabhi apne apne kamro me sone chale gaye kyuki aj waise bhi kafi raat ho chuki thi ....
Ravi apne bed par leta hua rachna ki kahi baato ko soch raha tha .... Tabhi uska gate knock hota hai .... ravi jakar gate kholta hai to bahar diya khadi thi ....
ravi - mami ap yaha iss wakt ....
Diya - beta wo divya ke husband aaye hain na isliye rachna hamare room me sone aa gayi aur main tumhare room aa gayi .....
ravi - okay mami ji andar aa jaiye ....
Ab ravi diya ke sath so to jata hai par uski aankho me neend nahi thi wajah thi khushi aur rachna ki safety ....
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