Fantasy Jiye Jiye Kaise
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DEAR RAGHUAVENDRA007 BRO
AAP SE EK HI REQUEST HAI KI AAP BHALE HI EK DIN KE ANTRAAL PER UPDATE DO PAR DHANG KA UPDATE DO BHAI.KYUN KI EK TOH AAP KE UPDATE KA KOI OATA NAHI RAHTA HAI KI KAB AAYEGA AUR AAYA HAI TOH 15 SE 20 LINE KA
JO AGER SAHI SE DEKHA JAYE TOH UTNA TOH READERS KE COMMENTS HO JATE HAIN .
KHAIR BHAI AGER BURA LAGA TOH MAAF KARNA .PER KYA KAREN BHAI ITNI ACHCHHI STORY KI JAB AISE WAAT LAGTI HAI TOH JO PASAND KARNE WALE READERS HAIN UNKA AISA HI REACTION HOGA YA ISSE BHI JYADA HO SAKTA HAI.
IS SITE PAR AAP KO YE STORY START KARKE 2 YEARS HONE KO HAIN PAR AAP NE KITNE UPDATE DIYE .
AGER DEKHA JAYE TOH STORY JAHA SE AAP NE START KI THI WAHI HAI.ABHI TAK KOI PROGRESS NAHI HAI.
BAHUT JYADA HI BOL DIYA HAI MAINE BHAI BURA LAGE TOH .MAAF KARNA
AAP SE EK HI REQUEST HAI KI AAP BHALE HI EK DIN KE ANTRAAL PER UPDATE DO PAR DHANG KA UPDATE DO BHAI.KYUN KI EK TOH AAP KE UPDATE KA KOI OATA NAHI RAHTA HAI KI KAB AAYEGA AUR AAYA HAI TOH 15 SE 20 LINE KA
JO AGER SAHI SE DEKHA JAYE TOH UTNA TOH READERS KE COMMENTS HO JATE HAIN .
KHAIR BHAI AGER BURA LAGA TOH MAAF KARNA .PER KYA KAREN BHAI ITNI ACHCHHI STORY KI JAB AISE WAAT LAGTI HAI TOH JO PASAND KARNE WALE READERS HAIN UNKA AISA HI REACTION HOGA YA ISSE BHI JYADA HO SAKTA HAI.
IS SITE PAR AAP KO YE STORY START KARKE 2 YEARS HONE KO HAIN PAR AAP NE KITNE UPDATE DIYE .
AGER DEKHA JAYE TOH STORY JAHA SE AAP NE START KI THI WAHI HAI.ABHI TAK KOI PROGRESS NAHI HAI.
BAHUT JYADA HI BOL DIYA HAI MAINE BHAI BURA LAGE TOH .MAAF KARNA
Badshah Khan
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Raghuavendra007 bhai apki story ka concept Acha hai but story Tooo slow hai
SStory mai kuch improvements nahi ho rahe hai aur updates bhi bohut chote deto ho isliye story tab padte hai to 3 se 4 update ke baad bhi scenes agey nahi badh rahe hai.
Aap agar story ko time dekar concept ko badiya tarike se agey badao ge to story bohut hi hit hogi kyonki story ka base Acha banaya apne.
Hope ki aap agey long updates doge aur kahani ko intresting banao ge
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SStory mai kuch improvements nahi ho rahe hai aur updates bhi bohut chote deto ho isliye story tab padte hai to 3 se 4 update ke baad bhi scenes agey nahi badh rahe hai.
Aap agar story ko time dekar concept ko badiya tarike se agey badao ge to story bohut hi hit hogi kyonki story ka base Acha banaya apne.
Hope ki aap agey long updates doge aur kahani ko intresting banao ge
Keep writing
Keep posting