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Incest Jaidev --- The Merchant Of Death

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Some Characters Intro-----

shamsher singh-- 75 dev dada
gayatri singh -- 74 dev dadi

NO:1.. beta...vikram singh-- lavanya (dev parents)
dev sisters--- arunita(25) ashmita(23) ruchika(21)

N0:2 beta...ranveer singh -- sadhna(dev chacha) inke teen bete do betiyan han..

NO:3 beti...divyanka... ashok...(dev bua & fufa) 2 beti ek beta
NO:4 beti...jyothika... deepak..(dev bua & fufa) 1 beti pihu ek beta

rana bhairav singh-- 76
laxmi

pratab singh -- devika

2 bete 3 betiyan han
parerna(25) vijay(24) ruchi(22) rahul(20) chanchal(18)


harmit singh nana......
kaushalya singh nani...


characters bohut zayada han.. sabka intro dunga to khichdi ban jayegi.. zarurat ke anusar parichay deta rahunga..




aahun siskiyon ne sitting room ka naksha hi badal kar rakh dia tha. ladka jis ka naam jack tha. lavanya ke gale lage uski nazar ek side padi. wo lavanya se turant alag hua. lavanya abhi bhi ro rahi thi. jack se door nahi hona chahti thi.. jack se usay apne dev ki khushbu aa rahi thi.. par jack lavanya se alag hokar chalta hua ek mahila ke saamne ja pohncha.
jack -- aap mansi ho na..
mansi is haveli ki purani naukrani thi -- wo jack ko dekh boli -- haan main mansi hon..

jack ekdum se harkat me aaya aur uske hath me maujud mobile chheen liya.. mobile ko dekha... fir cheekh pada -- ye kabir ki jasoos hai.

mansi haklane lagi -- nn.. nahi nahi mm..main kisi ki jasoos nahi hon.
jack lavanya ko dekh kar -- mummy ye naukrani mansi apke dushman kabir ki jasoos hai... iske kapde utarwa kar iski talashi len.. iske paas kuch aur aisa ho sakta hai. jisse ye kabir ya uske uske admiyon se rabta kar sakti hai..fir pratab ko dekh kar bola -- papa naukaron me hariya aur guards me raman kabir ke jasoos han.. turant unko bhi kabze me le len. nahi to wo dev bhaiya ke zinda hone ki khabar kabir tak pohncha denge..

jack ki baat par kisi ko yakin nahi aaya -- papa.. dada ji plz der na karen.. nahi to gadbad ho jayegi.. teeno ki achhe se talashi len.. ye waqt hath se nikal gaya to hamesha ke liye loss uthana pad jayega.

lavanya hukam deti hui-- rahul.. vijay.. prakash.. tum sab khade kya dekh rahe ho.. mera beta jaisa kah raha hai. vaisa karo..


turant sab harkat me aa gaye.. haveli ki mahilayen mansi ko lekar ek kamre me gai aur uske kapde utarwa kar uski talashi lene lagi.. mansi jaise ghabra gai thi. sabko yakin ho chala gaya wo dushman se mili hui hai. hariya aur raman ko bhi khamoshi se dhar liya gaya. un ki bhi talashi li gayi.. raman ke paas ek transmitter mila.. mobile fone kam na karne ki surat me tranmitter par khas khabaren pohnchana uska kam tha.

teeno ko haveli ke tahkhane me band kar dia gaya.. sab bhi wahan ja pohnche. jack se milna aur dev ke zinda hone ki khabar ke sath sath haveli ke andar teen jasoos bhi hai.. is baat ne sabko hila kar rakh dia tha...


mansi, hariya aur raman teeno kursiyon pr bandhe bethe the. teeno khaufzada nazron se dekh rahe the.

hariya gidgidate hue -- mm... main gaddar nahi hon maalik..
harmit singh hariya ko adhik guse se dekh raha tha -- tu gaddar nahi to fir ghabra kyu raha hai.. bata.. kab se hamare dushman ka kutta bana hua hai tu

hariya -- bhagwan ki saugandh maalik.. mm.. mai gaddar nahi hon.

jack -- dada ji ye aise moh nahi kholega.. mere paas kuch aisa hai. jisse iska moh bhi khulega aur ye far far bolega bhi..

sab jack ko dekhne lage.. jack ne apni pocket se ek chhoti sheeshe ki bottle nikali. uske andar ajib tarah ke keede the... jack us sheeshi ko
sabko dikhate hue bade hi darawane andaz me bola -- ye samandar ki tah me paye jane wale bohut hi khatarnak keede han. ye insani jism me ghus kar khoon hi nahi chooste.. maas bhi khate han. dhire dhire inka aakaar badhta chala jata hai.. main ye keede in teeno ke upar daal dunga.. ye keede in teeno ke jismo me ghus kar apna kaam shuru kar denge.. dekhte hi dekhte inka sara khoon pi jayenge.. sara maas kha jayenge..

jack bade hi dahshatnak lahje me bolta hua teeno ke samne ja pohncha.. teeno jack ki baat samjh nahi paaye the.. jack english me bola tha. par keede dekh kar jack ke andaz se wo bohut kuch samjh gaye the.. jack ko karib aate dekh teeno cheekhne lage.. rehem ki bheek mangne lage. par inpar rehem karne wala koi nahi tha.. barson se gaddar bane sabko zabardast haani pohncha rahe the.


rahul -- sab sach sach bata do. nahi to ye keede tum teeno ka khoon pee jayenge. maas kha jayenge.. dhire dhire inka aakaar badhta jayega.. abhi samay hai.. sach ugal do.. ek baar keede tum teeno par aaye to fir inhe tum teeno ke shariron se koi alag nahi kar paayega..

jack ne dhakan kholna shuru kar dia.. pahle jo teeno apna moh band rakhe hue the.. cheekh chillla rahe the.. ab bepanah dehshat me aay cheekhte hue sara sach ugalne lage..

jack honto par muskan liye peeche hat gaya.. jahan sab jack ki is karni par khush the. wahin bohut zayada dukh me bhi the.. apne hi barson purane naukar gaddar ban gaye the..

rahul to pistol nikal kar teeeno ko shoot hi karne wala tha.. par jack ne rok dia.. kuch der me sab tahkhane se bahar the..

jack ne keedo wali sheeshi lavanya ke aage kar di.. lavanya ghabra kar piche hat gai.. jack ne haste hue dhakan khola aur un keedon ko apne haath par chhodne laga.. kuch cheekhe.. kuch bhagraye..

jack -- ye keede harmless han mummy.. bohut masum han.. wo to maine un teeno ko darane ke liye bola tha..


jack ek ek karke sare keedon ko pakad kar firse bottle me band karne laga. jab sab keede band ho gaye to lavanya se ja kar lipat gaya..

lavanya -- beta! mere dev ke baare me tumne sab nahi bataya..

jack smile se -- wo to maine apne bare me bhi nahi bataya.... fir thodi si narazgi jatata hua bola... kisi ne mujhse mera nam bhi nahi puchha..

lavanya pyar se usay chumti hui-- to ab bata do na.. mere dusre bete ka naam kya hai...

jack -- mera naam jack ha.. chalen andar chalte han. wahin baaten karenge..

sab ek bade kamre me ja pohnche.. haveli ke sare naukron ko satark kr dia gaya tha..

jack -- sabse pahli baat.. dev bhaiya ne kaha hai.. abhi mansi..hariya aur raman ko kuch na kaha jaaye.. un teeno ko zindagi ki zamanat ka lalach de kar kuch din zinda rakha jaaye.. wo teeno kabir se ya uske admiyon se rabte me rahte han.. aur dev bhaiya kuch dino tak kabir ko dhoke me rakhna chahte han.. kuch gaurds ko un teeno ki rakhwali par chhod den. jab bhi kabir ya uske admiyon ka fone aaye to apne saamne baat karwayen.. aise koi baat haveli se bahar nahi jayega. aur kabir dhoke me rahega..

aise hi jack ne dev ki kai aur indications dohra di.. jise sabne ghaur se suna ...

lavanya jack ko ek bar firse chumti hui -- mera dev kitna samjhdar hai.. ek ek baat par dhayan rakhta hai mera dev....

ab sabne yakin kar liya tha. jack sach bol raha hai.. dev zinda hai. ye bohut badi thi.. jitni hairankun thii.. utni hi khushi se labrez bhi thi. sabka mann ho raha tha. jack ko pakad kar chumna shuru kar den. usse dev ke bare me ek ek baat jaanen.. par lavanya jack ko nahi chhod rahi thi.. jaidev ki bahne, pratab ke betiyan aur bete to jaidev ke zinda hone ki khabar sunkar pagal ho uthe the.. jahan bohut zayada khush the. wahan ek dard bhi sabke dilon me jaag utha tha..

jack -- haan dev bhaiya bohut samjhdar han.. itne ki dunya ka mushkil se mushkil maamle me chutkiyon me solve kar lete han..

lavanya shauk se -- aur batao ne mujhe mere dev ke bare me.. wo dikhta kaisa hai..

jack ka moh theda ho gaya

lavanya -- aise moh kyu bana liya tumne jack beta.. batav na mera dev kaisa dikhta hai..

uttar me jack kuch aise bola -- kya bataun mummy main aapko.. dev bhaiya sar se adhe takle ho gaye han. ek ankh se bhenge ho gaye han.. hont aur gaal aise bhul gaye han.. jaise kisi madhumakkhi ke kaatne par soojan aa jati hai.. vaise hi dev bhaiya ka chahra bhi phoola hua hai.. ek taang thodi si chhoti ho gai hai. jab wo langda kar chalte han to bade ajib dikhte han.. dekhne wale dev bhaiya par awazen kaste han..

jack ne jaidev ki shakal o surat ka naksha aise andaz me khencha.. sabke moh khul gaye. fir ek dum se hansi ka tufan aaya.. dar o deewar goonj uthe.. barson baad haveli me hasi ka aisa tufan aaya tha. warna to sab hasna hi bhul gaye the..

dev ki badi didi arunita -- oye bandar ki aulad.. mera dev aisa bilkul bhi nahi dikhta.. 10 saal pahle wo kisi prince se kam nahi dikhta tha.. ab to koi uske jaisa hoga hi nahi.. sach sach bata.. kaise dikhta hai mera dev..

jack -- sach sach bata dun.

ashmita -- bohut hasa liya tumne humen.. hamare andar ke gham ko khatam karna tha.. wo tum khatam kar chuke.. ab hamare shauk ko pura kar.. bata mera dev kaisa dikhta hai..

jack ekdum se sharma gaya -- to fir thaam lijiye.. haaye main kis moh se dev bhaiya ki tareef karun.. aaj tak suna tha.. dunya ki sabse sundr ladki kisi road se guzre to dekhne wali ankhen hatna bhul jaya karti han.. koi gadi dirver karta hua us haseena ko dekhe.. to aage wali gadi ko thok de.. par mere dev bhaiya.. dunya ki sabhi haseen ladkiyon se hazaron guna badhkar haseen han.. aisa glow hai unke chahre par.. chand bhi sharma jaaye. aisi chaal hai dev bhaiya ki.. morni apni chaal bhul jaaye.. unki neeli ankhen dharti ki har ek chiz se badhkar sundr han.. itni kashish itni sundrta hai unki neeli ankhon me.. jo ek bar unki ankhon me dekh le.. dil tham le.. un ankhon me doob marne ko bechain ho jaaye..


jack ne ek bar firse jaidev ki charming personality ka naksha kamal ke andaz me khencha to is baar sab jaise dev ki kalpanik tasveer bana kar live dekhne lage.. sabke chahre chamak uthe.. kuch pal ko koi kuch bol hi nahi saka.

fir dev ki sabse chhoti didi ruchika boli -- oye.. itni mat phenk. lapetna mushkil ho jaye. sab jante han.. dev ki ankhen light brown thee.. neeli to thi hi nahi dev ki ankhen.. chal chal sahi se bata.. kaisa hai mera dev...


pratab ki beti bhavana boli -- bolne do na jack ko.. kitna meetha bolta ha.. kitne ache se dev ka parichay dia hai isne. kitna sukhad ahsas hua mujhe.. jack mere bhai.. kya sach me dev aisa hi hai. jaisa tumne kaha.

jack -- haan.. is bar main sach kah raha hon..

lavanya -- par mere dev ki ankhen halki brown se neeli kaise ho gayi..

jack -- jaise dev bhaiya zinda bach gaye.. vaise hi dev bhaiya ki ankhon ka rang bhi neela ho gaya..

kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa??

pratab-- ooo .. humne to pucha hi nahi.. dev zinda kaise bacha.. samandar ke us area me.. kahan hamara pura ship khatre se dochar tha.. dev ka zinda bach pana asambhav tha..

rahul -- bata jack.. dev kaise bacha..

yahan mela laga hua tha. sab ek sath nahi bol sakte the.. bade khamoshi se sara majra dekh aur sun rahe the.. wo sabar wale the.. jante the, chhote aur ghar ki mahilayen sabar nahi kar payengi.. kisi ko bolne nahi dengi. barson baad khul kr bolne ka avsar mila tha. wo sabko bolne dena chahte the.

jack -- koi mujhe batayega kyaa. india me koi gyani aisa hai.. jo aatmashkti me perfect ho. jo ghanton tak ya kai kai dino tak apni saanse rok sakta ho.

shamsher singh -- main janta hon ek aise hi mahagyani ko.. jo hafta hafta bhar bina saans liye sadhna me leen rahte han..

harmit singh -- main bhi ek bar gaya tha us mahagyani ke darshan karne.

dadi gayatri singh -- hamare apne parivar ke ek sadasy ne sansar tyag kar jog apna liya tha.. wo apni aatma ko apne sharir se alag karke sara sansar ghum liya karte the...

lavanya -- jack beta.. tumhari is baat ka matlab kya hua..

jack -- simple sa fanda hai mummy.. is dunya me jaise ser par sawa ser maujud han.. vaise hi is dunya ne insano ki kai kismen han.. kudrat ki banai is dharti me bhi hazaron lakhon secrets chhupe hue han. jinke baare me koi nahi jaanta.. aaye din kahin na kahin ye khabar sunne ko milti hai. kisi ne mermaid ko dekha hai. jisne dekha.. usne sach maan liya.. jo apni ankhon se nahi dekh saka. usne ise jhutla diya.. aise hi hamari tarah dikhne wale kuch insan aise bhi han is dharti me.. jo sea ceatures ke jaise samandar me saans bhi le sakte han aur kha pi bhi sakte han. sea creatures ke jaise swing bhi kar sakte han.. kuch to aise swimmers hote han. samandar ka koi bhi jeev uska mukabla nahi kar sakta..

pratab ka beta vijay piche khada tha. usne ek dhap maar di jack ke kandhe par..

vijay -- abhi kuch der pahle ruchika ne kaha tha na tujhse.. itni mat phenk. lapetna mushkil ho jaaye.. tu seedhe se batata hai ya tujhe utha kr niche pathak dun..

jack ekdum se uth khade hua.. vijay ko ungli dikhata hua bola -- apun se panga nahi lene ka.. apun dev ka chhota bhai hai.. samjha kyaa.. himmat se dev se bhaiya se kam hon main.. par aap se kahin badhkar hon.. aap mujhe kya utha kar patkhenge.. main hi aapko patakh dunga.. fir na haddi rahegi aur na hi pasli..

sab nanhe jack ko dekh uski baaten aur andaz par bohut lutf bhi utha rahe the.. sab zor se hasne lage...

vijay -- abe chalgoze.. saala dedh ungli ke jitna hokar mujhe ungli dikhata hai.....





harmit singh ko khamosh betha hua tha.. jack ko uskara hua -- shabash mere sher.. bata de is vijay ke bachhe ko. tu bhi mera pota hai.. patakh de.. main ijazat deta hon tujhe..

vijay - hahaha.. dada ji kyu iski haddi pasli tudwane ka mann hai aapka. abhi isne dunya me dekha hi kya hai. ji lene de ise do char din..

jack rahasmai muskan ke sath -- chalen fir ho jaaye.. dekhte han. kiski hadi pasli tootti hai.

vijay hairan hua -- lagta hai tu aise nahi maanega. tujhe sabak sikhana hi padega..

vijay saamne aa gaya.. jack do kadam piche hatkar vijay ke piche dekhta hua.. nahi rahul bhaiya vijay bhaiya ko main pichhadunga..

vijay jhonk me aa kar piche dekhne laga. jack turant harkat me aaya aur vijay ka ek bazo pakad kar uski tang me taang phansa kar vijay ko niche gira dia..

sab zor zor se hasne lage.. vijay niche leta hua ashcharyachakit sar ghuma ghuma kar sabko dekh raha tha.. jack firse lavanaya ke paas ja betha tha.. aur lavanya usay chum rahi thi..

lavanya -- ummmmha..meta beta.. tu sach much ka sher hai..

vijay hasta hua utha -- chalaki se.. hmmm.. beta.. aise kushti nahi ladi jati.

jack -- maine dev bhaiya se seekha hai. jahan mubakle par takat me koi zayada ho. wahan takat se nahi dimag se ladte han.

bhairav singh -- shabash mere sher.. tu sach me vijeta hai.. buddi wali bat kahi tumne..

lavanya -- chal ab bata.. kya bata raha tha tu dev ke baare me..

vijay bhi ek side beth gaya. usay jack par bohut pyar aa raha tha.. usay subki mahsus nahi hui thi. usay garv ho raha tha jack par..

jack -- hamari earth par samandar 70% plus hai. aur hamare scientist abhi tak only 5% hi samandaron ko khoj sake han.. kya meri ye information sahi hai.



jaidev ki sabse chhoti bua ki beti pihu jo jack ki umar ki thi.. wo bol padi..

pihu -- jack tumhari info ekdum correct hai.. mujhe dev bhaiya ke baare me aur batav na..

pihu zamane bhar ke shauk bhare bhav chahre par liye apni maa ke sath bethi boli..
jack ne usay dekha.. dekhta raha.. fir uske honto par muskan utar aai. jo pal bhar me hi gahri ho gayi..

jack -- pihu.. tum pihu ho naa..

pihu hairan hoke -- haan. main pihu hon.. tumhe mera naam kisne bataya..

jack uth ka nachne laga --- yaaaaaahoooo.. mil gai.. mil gai..

sab ke moh hairat se khul gaye. wo samjh nahi paye. jack aise kyu nachne laga. rahul ne usay bazo se pakad kar lavanya ke paas bitha dia..



rahul -- abe bandar ki aulad.. maskhari hi karta rahega ya sab batayega bhi.. ghante bhar se drama kiye ja raha hai. yahan hamara khoon itna tez daud raha ha.. ragon se bahar aane ko betab hai. aur tere drame han ki khatam hone me hi nahi aa rahe..

jack dhime lahje me bola --- mil gai.. mil gai.. mummy mujhe mil gai..

lavanya jack ko kandhe se thaam kar -- kya mil gai.. kon mil gai..

jack ne lavanya ko dekha.. fir pihu ko dekha. jo hairani se jack ko dekh rahi thi.. usay samjh nahi aai thi.. jack itna excited kis baat kar hone laga tha.

jack -- mummy mujhe mere sapno ki shahzadi mil gai.. mummy main pihu se shadi karunga.. mummy mummy main pihu se shadi karunga..

lavanya -- kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa??

sab -- kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

pihu astonished face ke sath bethi jack ko dekhne lagi. fir wo buri tarah sharmati hui apni maa ke seene me moh chhupa gai..

sab kuch der khamosh rahe.. firse wo bhara kamra sabki zordar hansi se goonj utha..

lavanya -- hehehe... jack tum... hehehe tumm..tumm bohut shararti ho..
pihu ki mummy jyothika -- hehehe.. bada aaya.. meri beti se shadi karega.. shakal dekhi hai kabhi aaine me..

arunita -- bua ji.. shakal ki baat na karen.. jack dev ki shakal me hai.. jack is samay dunya ka sabse chahre ke sath hai..

jack khushi se uchala aur jakar arunita ki god me beth kar apni bahen arunika ke gale me daal gaya.. arunita ke gaalon par kiss kar di..

jack -- i love you di.. mujhe yakin hai. aap meri shadi pihu se karwa kar hi dum lengi..

arunita -- hehehe.. zarur.. mere bhai ho tum jack.. tumhara mann hai pihu se shadi ka to main to fir zarur karwaungi apne bhai ki shadi pihu se.. main mere bhai ka dil to nahi tootne de sakti na..

pihu aur bhi sharam se laal hone lagi..

jyothika -- hehehe.. aise kaise.. bina ladki ki maa ki permision liye. bina sharten maane.. bina bheek maange tum kaise mujhse meri beti ka hath maang sakti ho apne bhai ke liye.. tumhara bhai heera hai to meri beti bhi croro me ek hai.. chand ka tukda hai meri pihu..kyu deepak maine sahi kaha na..

deepak -- bat sahi hai ki galat. par ab jack ne bol dia hai to ye shadi ab hoke ke rahegi..

deepak uthta hua ashok se bola -- chal ashok. shadi ki tayari karte han..

ek bar firse sab hasne lage.. pihu rone lagi..

jyothika -- chup kar aap sab. meri phool si beti ko rula dia. meri beti ko ye rishta manzoor nahi hai. aap jack ke liye koi dusri ladki dekh lo. kyu pihu beti.. sach me jack ke liye koi aur ladki dhund len hum sab.. vaise jack ke jaise tumhe puri dunya me nahi milega..

sab maze le rahe the. pihu bheegi ankhon se apni maa ko dekhne lagi.

jyothika -- batav.. haan kar doon.. tumhara aur jack ka rishta pakka kar dun..

pihu ko kuch samjh nahi aa rahi thi. wo bohut ghabra gai thi.. usne ek baar jack ko dekha.. jo usay meethi nazron se dekh raha tha. fir sabko dekhne lagi.. fir ekdum se haan me sar hilane lagi..

jack uth kar firse nachne laga. pihu firse apne mummy ke seene me chahra chhupa gai.. sab aur bhi khilkhila kar hasne lage..

saalon ka sara gham kuch hi ghanto me khatam hoke rah gaya tha.. kuch der aur masti chali.. fir jack se dev ke baare me aage ki kahani sunne ko kaha gaya..

is baar jack serious hoke bolne laga.. pihu bhi firse pure shauk ke sath jack ki baaten sunne lagi..

jack -- jaisa ki maine kaha.. earth par phele samandar me hazaron secrets ab bhi dunya ki nazron se chhupe hue han. aisa hi ek ilaka hai.. jahan insano ki bastiyan abad han. wahan har chiz neeli hai. ped pode. zameen asman yahan tak wahan suraj bhi neela dikhai deta hai.. wahan ki dhup aisi hai. na sardi ka ahsas hota hai aur na hi garmi ka ahsas.. wahan ka atmosphere kuch is prakar ka hai. wahan saans lene walun ke andar sea creatures ki jaisi capabilities paida hone lagti hai. kuch hi mahino me wo real me sea creature ban jata hai..

us din bhi usi basti ka ek couple wahan maujud tha. jahan dev bhaiya ko aap sabne mara hua jaan kar lohe se baandh kar samandar ki gahrai me phenk dia tha. bass unhi ne bachaya dev bhaiya ko. dev bhaiya ki saans ki bimari hi nahi gai. dev bhaiya chatan jitne powerful bhi ban gaye.. shark se tez swimmer ban gaye.. pani me octopus se bhi shaktishali ban gaye.. wahan rahne se dev bhaiya ki ankhen bhi neeli ho gai.. bhaiya raat ke ghane andhere me bhi din ke jaise dekh sakte han.

sui girti to bhi awaz sunaai deti... itni khamoshi chhaa gai thi wahan.. sab apni zindagi ki sabse hairan kar dene wali baaten sun rahe teh.. unka dev zinda hi nahi tha... aise roop me saamne aaya tha. koi kalpana bhi nahi kar sakta tha. upar se samandar me saans lene wale insano ka zikr hoa tha. unbelievable tha.. yakin karne layak nahi tha. par sabko yakin karna pad raha tha. jis desh me rahte the. us desh me bhi aise hazaron chamatkar maujud the...

sab mantramugdh hue jack se dev ki kahani sun rahe the.. jack uske bad ki baaten batane laga.. ship ko kaise bachaya.. finland ki royal family se parichay... dev ki pahle wali masumiyat fir trainning sab bata dia..

pihu hi sabse pahle boli -- jack.. dev bhaiya itne powerful han to fir dev bhaiya to fir finland ki royal family se bol kar mamu ko london wali jail se azad karwa sakte han..

sab pahle hairan bhi the aur khush bhi.. ab vikram singh ka zikr aaya to sab gham me doob gaye.. khushi ke is avsar par wo vikram ko bhul hi gaye the..

arunita sisakti hui -- batav jack.. jab dev itna sab kar sakta hai. to papa kyu ab tak kaid me han.. wo dev papa ko azad bhi nahi kar sakta.

jack -- karwa sakte han.. bhaiya ke liye ye kam chutki bajane jitna asan hai.. finland ki royal family ne bhi kaha tha dev bhai se.. par dev bhaiya nahi maaane..

lavanya sisakti hui -- kyu.. kyu nahi mana dev.. kya usay apne papa se mohabbat nahi rahi.. ya uske dil me apne papa ki kaid e tanhai ka jaan kar dard nahi jaga..

jack -- dev bhaiya aap ka beta ha mummy..

jack shamsher singh ko dekh kar bola -- dada ji dev bhaiya ki ragon me aapka khoon daud raha hai. kya wo kisi ka ahsan le sakta hai.. dev bhaiya ne royal family par itne ahsan kiye han. umar bhar wo dev bhaiya ka karz nahi chuka sakte.. aap sab ke jaise dev bhaiya ahsan karte to han.. par kisi ka ahsan lete nahi han.. sab kuch apne dum par hasil karne ki himmat wo khud me rakhte han.. dev bhaiya ne bass itna karwaya hai. london jail me papa ko wo sari facilities di ja rahi han.. jo ek royal parivar ke member ko di jaati hai..

bass ab kuch hi dino ka khel baaki hai.. fir papa bhi aap sab ke beech honge. dushmano ke sar bhi jhuk jayenge.. aur aap sabke sar bhi uth jaayenge. aur us unchai par ja pohnchenge.. us unchai tak dekhne wale peeth ke bal gir padenge.. aise hi han dev bhaiya.. isi waja se wo aap sab se pahle nahi mile.. kaise mil sakte han wo aap sabse.. jab tak wo papa ko azad nahi karwa lete.. aap sab ke jhuke sar nahi utha dete.. giri shaan ko badha nahi dete.. dushman ko unki, sabki nazron me zaleel nahi kar dete.. wo aap se kisi se bhi nahi milenge..

lavanaya roti hui -- fir to usay bohut samay lag jayega mujhse milne ke liye.. mera dil uske liye tadap raha hai.. usse kaho ek baar mujhse to aa kar mil jaaye.. mere dil ko karar aa jayega..

jack -- jahan itne baras wait kiya ha.. kya 8-10 din aur wait nahi kar sakti aap mummy.. kya aapki tadap parivar ke jhuke saron se badhkar hai..

lavanya tadap kar boli -- nahi jack nahi.. parivar hai to main hon. sab kuch hai. aur parivar shan ke sath hota hai. mere liye parivar ki sabse upar hoti hai. isi shan ko banaye rakhne ke liye to maayen apne jigar ke tukdon ko maidan e jung me jhonk deti han..

jack -- yakin rakhen mummy.. bohut jald.. bohut jald dev bhaiya apne iradon me safal ho jayenge.. tab tak main hon dev bhaiya ka chahra liya aapke dard ko kam karne ke liye aapke pass.

lavanya jack ko chumti hui -- haan tu bhi mera dev hai.. mera dusra dev hai tu... main intezar karungi.. jahan itne baras tadap li uske liye wahin kuch din aur sahi.. tum na batate to main to aise hi umar bhar dev ke bina jeene wali thi. nahi. main achhe dino ka intezar karungi..



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FLASHBACK




mecheal ne jan liya tha.. jaidev ek extraordinary ladka hai. jise wo dunya bhar se chhupana chahta tha. jaidev se usne baat kari.. karibi port tak ka fasla 4 din ka rah gaya tha. to micheal ne jaidev ko sabki nazron me chhupe rahne ke liye bol dia.. ship ke kai passengers har din jaidev ko dekhte rahte han. kaiyon ke mann me kai kai baten thi... jab ek pura din jaidev nahi dikha to pure ship par hungama mach utha. jaidev ko pure ship par talash kiya jane laga. par wo nahi mila..

is baat ka fayda micheal ne uthaya aur usne jaidev ko unki madad karne wala angel bata dia.. jo chupke se aaya aur sabko bacha kar wahan se gayab ho gaya. agle 3 din tak jab jaidev kisi ko nazar na aaya to sabne maan liya. jaidev sach me ek angle tha. jo unki madad karne ke liye aaya tha. madad karke nikal gaya..


finland royal family ke dono members ko micheal ne apne sath mila lia tha. wo ache log the. jab port karib aaya to jaidev chupke se samandar me utar sahil par ja pohncha.. wahin baad me usay micheal aur dono royal members mile.. immediately air tickets book karwai gai. aur 2 agle do ghanto me us country se nikal chuke the.. itni der me jaidev ek angel ki tarah har news channel par bataya jane laga tha..


finland pohnchne par jaidev ka bohut badhiya se sawagat kiya gaya..
Nice update bhai
Jaidev ka flashback bhi start hua jo shikayat readers ki thi jaidev ko leke ki jaidev ekdum se badal diya vo bhi dur ho jayegi. But flashback jyada lamba mat rakhna 2-3 update me nipta dena
 

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Yha to dev ne shock hi de diya bhaya kya hi Khatarnak tarike se planning karke sabko jhatka lgaya hai, sale commissioner sp Inspacter ke sath sath us home minister or ramakant ki bhi paint gili pili Ho gyi hai dar se...

Maza hi aa gya hai padh kr, us ramakant Ki bitiya ke to hosh hi ude huye hai dev ka background Sunkr...

Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab amazing
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ins -- mr dev! you are under arrest!

jaidev muskuraya -- nice joke!

ins jaidev ko ghoorta hua -- nice joke?.. maine koi joke nahi sunaya hai. tum khud ko hirasat me samjho....... fir sipahiyon se bola... lagao ise hathkadi aur dalo gadi me.... fir dev se bola... thane me bataunga tumhe. police wale ki baat ko serious na lene ka parinam kya hota hai..
jaidev ne honto ki muskan gayab ho gayi. ghambirta ne uski jaga le li.
jaidev -- inspector! aaj tak koi aisi hathkadi nahi bani.. jo dev ki kalaiyon ko shikanje me le sake.
SP bhi guse me aa gaya.. wo sipahiyon se bola -- tum khade khade tamasha kyu dekh rahe ho. lagao ise hathkadi.. fir dev se bola... koi mujram aisa nahi hai. jiske hath hathkadiyon se bache rah gaye hon.

sipahi aage badhe to ek jaidev ki ek zordar laat us sipahi ke pet par lagi. jiske hath me hathkadi thi. wo cheekhta hua dusron se tarkaya.. sab gir pade. laat bade zor ki lagi thi. sipahi chilla uthe.

turant hi dusre sipahiyon ne guns jaidev par taan di. hotel me sab dekh shocked rah gaye. bhala koi aam banda bhi police walun par hath utha sakta hai. yahan to dev ne ek zordar kick hi jad di thi.

ins-- tujhe to main hawalat me dekhonga haramza--- oughgh.... gaali moh me hi dabi rah gayi.. jaidev turant harkat me aaya.. unse ins ka gala pakad liya.

jaidev-- ek to bina karan bataye ek respected person ko arrest karte ho. upar se gali dete ho.. honge kai bebas aur lachar.. jinpar tum logo ki dadagiri chalti hogi. devvv.. main devvvv honn.. suna tumne.. devvv hon main... mujhe gali dene wale ko main sendkdon ft zameen me dafan kar diya karta hon. tumhari hasiyat gutter me reengne wale keede se zayada nahi hai meri nazar me..


sipahi abhi bhi guns tane khade hue the. unhe goli chalane ki permission nahi mili thi sp ki orr se.. sp cheekh chilla raha tha. jaidev ke bazo ko pakad kar ins ke gale se hatane ki koshish kar raha tha.. jab tak jaidev ki baat puri nahi hui.. usne sp par koi dhayan nahi dia... ins se baat karke jaidev sp ki orr muda.. aur khuni nazron se usay ghoorne laga..

sp -- bohut pachhtaye tu.. police power kya hoti hai. tujh jaise laofer ko aaj achhe se bataonga main.. chhod iski gardan.. nahi to main shoot ka order de dunga.. ins ki ankhen ubalne wali ho gai thi. jaidev ne pakad kuch dheeli kar di..





jaidev-- badbole ho tum sab.. bohut badh chadh kar bolne ki adat hai tum police walun ko. samjh kya rakha hai tum logo ko khud ko.. police walun ki izzat hai to hum jaiso ki koi izzat nahi.. bhul hai tumhari sp.. mujhe thane le jana chahte ho na tum.. chalo.. main khud chalta hon tumhare sath. dekhta hon tum mera kya ukhad lete ho... aisa parichay karwaunga tum sabko.. khana, hagna mootna sab bhul jaaoge.. par mujhe kabhi nahi bhul paaoge.


jaidev ne ins ki gardan chhod di... aur police walun ke sath jane laga.. ins apni gardan masalte hue abhi tak ukhuu ukhuu kar raha tha.. dusre police wale jaidev se ghabraye hue the.. fir bhi jaidev ko guse se dekh rahe the. ins aur sp mann me soch rahe the. saale ek baar tu thane to pohnch.. hum batayenge tujhe.. police walun se panga lene ka parinam kya hota hai.


jaidev police van me nahi apni gadi me ek police ko bitha kar police van ko follow karta hua police headquarter ja pohncha. jaise hi jaidev gadi se utar kar andar pohncha.. piche se kai police wale uspar toot pade.. mukkon se laaton se guns ko ulta karke jaidev ki pitai karne lage..

par jaidev ko ghanta bhi fark nahi pada.. wo loha ka bana tha. sahn shakti me kamal hasil tha usay. kuch der pitne ke baad jaidev puri takat ke sath khade khade pure round me ghum gaya. parinam ye hua.. jo police wale uski lapet me aaye wo sare idhar udhar gir pade... jaidev ne isi par bass nahi kiya.. is bar jaidev ne sp ki gardan naap li..

jaidev -- koi bhi shayana shayanpatti nahi karega.. warna.. ek jhatka aur sp ki gardan....kad kad kad kad

jaidev aise khunkhar lahje me bola.. ins jo hath holister par rakhe pistol nikalne ja raha tha. khada khada kaanp utha. sp ki to maa hi marne wali ho gai thi. ins se bhi zayada power ke sath jaidev ne sp ki gardan tham rakhi thi.. police headquarter ke andar ek aam person police walun ki aisi halat kar raha tha.. baat tajjub ki bhi thi aur shocking bhi..

tabhi ananya apne dad ramakant oberoi ke sath aati dikhai di. sath the police commissioner.. jaidev unhe dekh ghoorne laga.. fir ananya ko dekh uske honto par muskan aa gayi..

jaidev -- main janta tha. is sab ke peeche tumhi hogi. isliye ek bar firse tumse milne ke liye main yahan chala aaya. wo kya hai ki tumhare sath bitai wo ek kaali raat meri zindagi ki haseen raton me se ek thi.. tum bohut hi hot bohut hi lustful bohut hi sexy bohut hi garm aur bohut hi lazeez chiz ho.. ek bar chakha hai. bar bar chakhne ka mann hai..

ramakanth -- kya bak raha ha ladke.. phansi par latakwa dunga.. shoot karwa dunga.. fir commissioner se bola... commissioner tum dekhte hi rahoge ya kuch karoge bhi.. kal ka launda sare aam meri izzat uchhaal raha hai aur tum chup chaap khade sun rahe ho.

commissioner bhi unhi ke jaisa tha.

comm sipahiyon se bola -- main teen tak ginoga.. ye sp ko na chhode to ise shoot kar dena..

jaidev -- wahh commissioer wahh.. main to samjha tha. police commissioner koi akal wala insan hoga. par tum bhi inspector aur sp ke jaise nalla nikle.. tum bhi insano ko pahchanne ki ability nahi rakhte.. ability aayegi bhi kaisi.. bade logo ke talve chatne walun ke pass akal rahti hi kahan hai. akal insano ke hisse me aati ha.. kutton ke hisse me nahi..

commssioner jo 1 kahne ke liye moh khol hi raha tha. jaidev ki baat sunkar guse se pagal ho gaya -- shoot this bastard..

jaidev -- hahaha.. pagal ho gaya hai kyaa commissioner.. hahaha.. sathya gaya hai.. tum police commissioner ho ke jallad..

jaidev commissioner ke sath sath sabke maze lene laga.. wo ratti barabar bhi kisi se khaufzada nahi hua tha..

fir is sare hungame ko khatam karne ke liye wo bola --- jante ho commissioner main kon hon.. tum jo ramakant oberoi ke talve chat rahe ho na.. is jaise ko main apna naukar bhi na rakhon.. i am a member of the Finnland royal family. samjhe.. main hon devv.. Finland se..

dev ne jhatke se sp ki gardan chhod kar usay niche phenk dia.. dev ki baat sunkar sab ko jhatka laga tha..
ananya ka moh maare hairat ke khul gaya tha.. wo phati phati ankhon se jaidev ko dekh rahi thi..

ramakant oberoi -- kya sabut hai tumhare paas.. tumhara connetion finland ki royal family se ha..
jaidev -- ye bhi sabat hoga.. aur bhi bohut kuch sabat hoga.. tum jaise jo paison ki power har kisi ko dikhate firte ho na..

dev chutki bajate hue -- gand ke raste wo sari power na nikaal di.. sadak ka bhikari na bana di to mera naam bhi dev nahi..

jaidev ne apna mobile nikala aur ek msg send kr dia.. fir wahi ek chair par baze sukun se ja betha... sab pagalpan ki hadh ko pohnche jaidev ko dekh rahe the..

jaidev -- abhi kuch der... bohut kuch hone wala hai.. ins tum.. sp tum.. commissioner tum teeno ab baki ki zinadgi ghar par guzaroge.. desh ko tum jaiso ki koi zarurat nahi hai.. aur ramakant oberoi.. ananya oberoi.. main pahle se hi tumhari nature jaanta tha.. tumhari surat achhi thi. nature nahi.. socha ek shaam maze se kat jayegi. isliye tujhe apne jaal me phansa.. aur baki ki zindagi sach ke kisi sadak chhap ke sath bitaoge.. koi baid hasiyat wala tumhara life partner nahi banne wala.. ye baat tum likh ke rakh lo..

finland ki royal family ka naam hi kafi tha.. jaidev ka confidence uski sachai ka bohut bada sabut tha..





agle 15 minat me police headquarter ke bahar gadiyon ki ek line lag gayi..
shahar ke kai bade jaane maane log wahan aan pohnche the.. unme home minister kabir singh bhi shamil tha..


jaidev kisi ke sawagat ke liye nahi khada hua.. aane walun ne pahle charon taraf dekh kar situation ka andaza lagaya.. fir badi shan se bethe jaidev ko dekh bhagne ke se andaz me chalte hue jaidev ke paas ja pohnche.....

dgp jo kisi kaam se gaye hue the.. wo bhi wapis aa gaye.. jaidev ke saamne pohnch kar wo achhe andaz me bole..

dgp -- sir.. main shama chahta hon jo hamare department ki taraf se aapke sath misbehave hua.. ye jante nahi the.. ap kon han.. kindly inki galati par inhe shama kar den..

jaidev dgp ki ankhon me dekhta hua uth khada hua..
jaidev -- sir aap by nature achhe insan han.. bado ki respect karna mera dharam bhi hai aur karam bhi.. aap jaise respecpted person ko inkar karna mere liye mumkin nahi hai.. lekin.. aap mujhe shama kr dijiye sir.. jo main main inhe saza dene ja raha hon uske liye.. iska karan hai.. aise log ab tak najane kitno ki zindigiyon se khel chuke han. aur najane kitni zinadgiyon se khelenge.. talve chatte hue wo ye bhul jate han.. jise arrest kar rahe han uski koi galati bhi hai ya nahi.. aam admi kisi jurm kare to umar bhar ke liye ya to jail me band ho jaye.. ya phansi par latka dia jaaye.. police wale aneko zindagiyon se khel kar bhi ek chhota sa shabd "sorry" bol kar apni jan bacha lete han.. nahi sir.. main aisa kuch nahi karne wala hon. jo main soch chuka hon.. main usse peeche nahi hat sakta.. ye achhe hote to main khud hath jod kar inse shama maangta apne kiye ki. par gunahegaron ko saza diye bina peeche hatna maine seekha hi nahi hai..

dgp jaidev ke meethe aur apne liye samman bhare shabdo par nihaal ho uthe.. to wahi apne police department ke kuch police walun ki saza par chinta me bhi aaye..

is moke par home minister bole -- mr dev! main home minister hon maharashtra ka.. kya aap meri bhi baat nahi sunenge.. chhote logo se galtiyan ho jaya karti han.. unhe maaf kar dena chahiye.. hum dono bade han. hum dono ko ek dusre ki baat ka maan rakhna chahiye. ramakant mera dost bhi hai aur mera business partner bhi. apni beti ki bhul par wo behadh sharminda bhi hai. aise hi commissioner se bhi mere parivarik sambandh han. kya aap ramakant aur commissioner ki baat ko nazar andaz nahi kar sakte.. saza deni hi hai to sp aur inspector ko de den..

jaidev ke honto par muskan aa gai..jaidev ne ek nazar sabko dekha.. ins ko sp ko.. comm ko.. ananya aur ramakant ko bhi dekha.. ramakant bokhlaya hua lag raha tha.. ananya ka to chahra hi peela pada hua tha.. khadi khadi larz rahi thi..

jaidev ne dgp ko dekh kr unke kandhe ko thapthapaya aur home minister ko dekh kar smile se bole -- sahi kaha home minsiter saab aapne.. chalne hum dono akant me kuch baaten kar len. inki baaten baad me kar lenge..

home minister khush ho gaya. kuch der me dono ek secret room me bethe hue the...

home minsiter -- mr dev aap ne meri baat ka maan rakha. main ye baat hamesha yaad rakhunga. aur aap dekhna.. ye kabir singh yaaron ka yaar hai. jaan dekar bhi yaari nibhayega.

jaidev ke honto par ek rahasmai muskan aa gayi..

jaidev -- nahi kabir... tum se meri kabhi dosti nahi ho sakti.. main to aaya hon tumse apni dushmani nibhane.. bahar jo khel dikha na tumhe..wo sara khel maine tumhe yahan bulwa kar khud ko introduce karwane ke liye kiya tha.. tum kya samjhe the.. tum home minister ho to koi bhi tumhari baat maan lega.. hahaha.. teri hasiyat hi kahan hai kabir.. tujhse badhkar to gali ke kutte ki hasiyat hoti hai...


home minister kabir singh pahle jaidev ke badle svar par hairan tha.. fir jaise hi jaidev ne apni baat puri ki.. usay gali ke kutte se bhi kam hasiyat bola to gusse se pagal ho gaya.. wo cheekhne laga.. par awaz bahar nahi ja sakti thi.. room soundproof tha..

home minister -- mr dev.. tum finland ki royal family se na hote to yahan par tumhari laash padi hoti.. tum nahi jante ho kabir singh ki bala ka naam hai..

fir jaise usay kuch yaad aaya -- kya kaha tumne.. dushmani nibhane aaye ho tum mujhse..

yahan wo kuch hairan hua -- dushmani.. meri tumse kaisi dushmani.. main to tumhe janta bhi nahi hon...

jaidev -- par main tujhe bohut achhe se jaanta hon kabir singh.. tujhe to main wahan se jaanta hon. jab teri ne tujhe janam dia diya tha.. kya bataon.. tu kon hai.. kaise is dunya me aaya hai.. kis haal me aaya. kaise tu apni maa ki kokh me aaya... harami hai tu saale.. teri maa ek randi thi.. ek thakur ne teri maa ko choda tha.. uski ka parinam hai.. jo tu is dharti par saanse le raha hai... kaha tha na maine .. tujhse gali ka kutta bhi bartar hai..

jaidev firse chutki bajata hua -- tera countdown shuru ho chuka hai kabir.. ek hafta ke andar andar tujhe do bade jhatke dunga.. siska siska kar marunga.. gali ke kute se bhi bartar tera haal karunga... likh ke rakh le.. aur haan.. bahar jo maine kaha tha.. wo final tha.. tera ek partner to gaya... jo kar sakta hai kar le.. tu tera dumm dikha.. main mera dum dikhaunga...



jaidev bol kar nikal pada.. kabir singh us parivar se tha.. jo jaidev ke parivar ka dushman tha.. dushman to us parivar me aur bhi kai the.. par sabse bada dushman kabir singh tha..

jaidev ne ship walun ko bacha kar sabke dil me ghar kar liya tha.. wahin finland ki royal family se bhi uske close relation ban gaye the.. jo ab tak the.. jaidev to apni trainning ke liye nikal gaya tha.. piche finland ki royal family ne uske parivar ke sare halat par nazar banaye rakhi thi.. trainning puri hone ke baad jaidev ko sari detail unhi se mil gayi thi..


story me zaruri hua to finland ki royal family baare likha jayega.. otherwise usay skip karta rahunga..
 

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Some Characters Intro-----

shamsher singh-- 75 dev dada
gayatri singh -- 74 dev dadi

NO:1.. beta...vikram singh-- lavanya (dev parents)
dev sisters--- arunita(25) ashmita(23) ruchika(21)

N0:2 beta...ranveer singh -- sadhna(dev chacha) inke teen bete do betiyan han..

NO:3 beti...divyanka... ashok...(dev bua & fufa) 2 beti ek beta
NO:4 beti...jyothika... deepak..(dev bua & fufa) 1 beti pihu ek beta

rana bhairav singh-- 76
laxmi

pratab singh -- devika

2 bete 3 betiyan han
parerna(25) vijay(24) ruchi(22) rahul(20) chanchal(18)


harmit singh nana......
kaushalya singh nani...


characters bohut zayada han.. sabka intro dunga to khichdi ban jayegi.. zarurat ke anusar parichay deta rahunga..




aahun siskiyon ne sitting room ka naksha hi badal kar rakh dia tha. ladka jis ka naam jack tha. lavanya ke gale lage uski nazar ek side padi. wo lavanya se turant alag hua. lavanya abhi bhi ro rahi thi. jack se door nahi hona chahti thi.. jack se usay apne dev ki khushbu aa rahi thi.. par jack lavanya se alag hokar chalta hua ek mahila ke saamne ja pohncha.
jack -- aap mansi ho na..
mansi is haveli ki purani naukrani thi -- wo jack ko dekh boli -- haan main mansi hon..

jack ekdum se harkat me aaya aur uske hath me maujud mobile chheen liya.. mobile ko dekha... fir cheekh pada -- ye kabir ki jasoos hai.

mansi haklane lagi -- nn.. nahi nahi mm..main kisi ki jasoos nahi hon.
jack lavanya ko dekh kar -- mummy ye naukrani mansi apke dushman kabir ki jasoos hai... iske kapde utarwa kar iski talashi len.. iske paas kuch aur aisa ho sakta hai. jisse ye kabir ya uske uske admiyon se rabta kar sakti hai..fir pratab ko dekh kar bola -- papa naukaron me hariya aur guards me raman kabir ke jasoos han.. turant unko bhi kabze me le len. nahi to wo dev bhaiya ke zinda hone ki khabar kabir tak pohncha denge..

jack ki baat par kisi ko yakin nahi aaya -- papa.. dada ji plz der na karen.. nahi to gadbad ho jayegi.. teeno ki achhe se talashi len.. ye waqt hath se nikal gaya to hamesha ke liye loss uthana pad jayega.

lavanya hukam deti hui-- rahul.. vijay.. prakash.. tum sab khade kya dekh rahe ho.. mera beta jaisa kah raha hai. vaisa karo..


turant sab harkat me aa gaye.. haveli ki mahilayen mansi ko lekar ek kamre me gai aur uske kapde utarwa kar uski talashi lene lagi.. mansi jaise ghabra gai thi. sabko yakin ho chala gaya wo dushman se mili hui hai. hariya aur raman ko bhi khamoshi se dhar liya gaya. un ki bhi talashi li gayi.. raman ke paas ek transmitter mila.. mobile fone kam na karne ki surat me tranmitter par khas khabaren pohnchana uska kam tha.

teeno ko haveli ke tahkhane me band kar dia gaya.. sab bhi wahan ja pohnche. jack se milna aur dev ke zinda hone ki khabar ke sath sath haveli ke andar teen jasoos bhi hai.. is baat ne sabko hila kar rakh dia tha...


mansi, hariya aur raman teeno kursiyon pr bandhe bethe the. teeno khaufzada nazron se dekh rahe the.

hariya gidgidate hue -- mm... main gaddar nahi hon maalik..
harmit singh hariya ko adhik guse se dekh raha tha -- tu gaddar nahi to fir ghabra kyu raha hai.. bata.. kab se hamare dushman ka kutta bana hua hai tu

hariya -- bhagwan ki saugandh maalik.. mm.. mai gaddar nahi hon.

jack -- dada ji ye aise moh nahi kholega.. mere paas kuch aisa hai. jisse iska moh bhi khulega aur ye far far bolega bhi..

sab jack ko dekhne lage.. jack ne apni pocket se ek chhoti sheeshe ki bottle nikali. uske andar ajib tarah ke keede the... jack us sheeshi ko
sabko dikhate hue bade hi darawane andaz me bola -- ye samandar ki tah me paye jane wale bohut hi khatarnak keede han. ye insani jism me ghus kar khoon hi nahi chooste.. maas bhi khate han. dhire dhire inka aakaar badhta chala jata hai.. main ye keede in teeno ke upar daal dunga.. ye keede in teeno ke jismo me ghus kar apna kaam shuru kar denge.. dekhte hi dekhte inka sara khoon pi jayenge.. sara maas kha jayenge..

jack bade hi dahshatnak lahje me bolta hua teeno ke samne ja pohncha.. teeno jack ki baat samjh nahi paaye the.. jack english me bola tha. par keede dekh kar jack ke andaz se wo bohut kuch samjh gaye the.. jack ko karib aate dekh teeno cheekhne lage.. rehem ki bheek mangne lage. par inpar rehem karne wala koi nahi tha.. barson se gaddar bane sabko zabardast haani pohncha rahe the.


rahul -- sab sach sach bata do. nahi to ye keede tum teeno ka khoon pee jayenge. maas kha jayenge.. dhire dhire inka aakaar badhta jayega.. abhi samay hai.. sach ugal do.. ek baar keede tum teeno par aaye to fir inhe tum teeno ke shariron se koi alag nahi kar paayega..

jack ne dhakan kholna shuru kar dia.. pahle jo teeno apna moh band rakhe hue the.. cheekh chillla rahe the.. ab bepanah dehshat me aay cheekhte hue sara sach ugalne lage..

jack honto par muskan liye peeche hat gaya.. jahan sab jack ki is karni par khush the. wahin bohut zayada dukh me bhi the.. apne hi barson purane naukar gaddar ban gaye the..

rahul to pistol nikal kar teeeno ko shoot hi karne wala tha.. par jack ne rok dia.. kuch der me sab tahkhane se bahar the..

jack ne keedo wali sheeshi lavanya ke aage kar di.. lavanya ghabra kar piche hat gai.. jack ne haste hue dhakan khola aur un keedon ko apne haath par chhodne laga.. kuch cheekhe.. kuch bhagraye..

jack -- ye keede harmless han mummy.. bohut masum han.. wo to maine un teeno ko darane ke liye bola tha..


jack ek ek karke sare keedon ko pakad kar firse bottle me band karne laga. jab sab keede band ho gaye to lavanya se ja kar lipat gaya..

lavanya -- beta! mere dev ke baare me tumne sab nahi bataya..

jack smile se -- wo to maine apne bare me bhi nahi bataya.... fir thodi si narazgi jatata hua bola... kisi ne mujhse mera nam bhi nahi puchha..

lavanya pyar se usay chumti hui-- to ab bata do na.. mere dusre bete ka naam kya hai...

jack -- mera naam jack ha.. chalen andar chalte han. wahin baaten karenge..

sab ek bade kamre me ja pohnche.. haveli ke sare naukron ko satark kr dia gaya tha..

jack -- sabse pahli baat.. dev bhaiya ne kaha hai.. abhi mansi..hariya aur raman ko kuch na kaha jaaye.. un teeno ko zindagi ki zamanat ka lalach de kar kuch din zinda rakha jaaye.. wo teeno kabir se ya uske admiyon se rabte me rahte han.. aur dev bhaiya kuch dino tak kabir ko dhoke me rakhna chahte han.. kuch gaurds ko un teeno ki rakhwali par chhod den. jab bhi kabir ya uske admiyon ka fone aaye to apne saamne baat karwayen.. aise koi baat haveli se bahar nahi jayega. aur kabir dhoke me rahega..

aise hi jack ne dev ki kai aur indications dohra di.. jise sabne ghaur se suna ...

lavanya jack ko ek bar firse chumti hui -- mera dev kitna samjhdar hai.. ek ek baat par dhayan rakhta hai mera dev....

ab sabne yakin kar liya tha. jack sach bol raha hai.. dev zinda hai. ye bohut badi thi.. jitni hairankun thii.. utni hi khushi se labrez bhi thi. sabka mann ho raha tha. jack ko pakad kar chumna shuru kar den. usse dev ke bare me ek ek baat jaanen.. par lavanya jack ko nahi chhod rahi thi.. jaidev ki bahne, pratab ke betiyan aur bete to jaidev ke zinda hone ki khabar sunkar pagal ho uthe the.. jahan bohut zayada khush the. wahan ek dard bhi sabke dilon me jaag utha tha..

jack -- haan dev bhaiya bohut samjhdar han.. itne ki dunya ka mushkil se mushkil maamle me chutkiyon me solve kar lete han..

lavanya shauk se -- aur batao ne mujhe mere dev ke bare me.. wo dikhta kaisa hai..

jack ka moh theda ho gaya

lavanya -- aise moh kyu bana liya tumne jack beta.. batav na mera dev kaisa dikhta hai..

uttar me jack kuch aise bola -- kya bataun mummy main aapko.. dev bhaiya sar se adhe takle ho gaye han. ek ankh se bhenge ho gaye han.. hont aur gaal aise bhul gaye han.. jaise kisi madhumakkhi ke kaatne par soojan aa jati hai.. vaise hi dev bhaiya ka chahra bhi phoola hua hai.. ek taang thodi si chhoti ho gai hai. jab wo langda kar chalte han to bade ajib dikhte han.. dekhne wale dev bhaiya par awazen kaste han..

jack ne jaidev ki shakal o surat ka naksha aise andaz me khencha.. sabke moh khul gaye. fir ek dum se hansi ka tufan aaya.. dar o deewar goonj uthe.. barson baad haveli me hasi ka aisa tufan aaya tha. warna to sab hasna hi bhul gaye the..

dev ki badi didi arunita -- oye bandar ki aulad.. mera dev aisa bilkul bhi nahi dikhta.. 10 saal pahle wo kisi prince se kam nahi dikhta tha.. ab to koi uske jaisa hoga hi nahi.. sach sach bata.. kaise dikhta hai mera dev..

jack -- sach sach bata dun.

ashmita -- bohut hasa liya tumne humen.. hamare andar ke gham ko khatam karna tha.. wo tum khatam kar chuke.. ab hamare shauk ko pura kar.. bata mera dev kaisa dikhta hai..

jack ekdum se sharma gaya -- to fir thaam lijiye.. haaye main kis moh se dev bhaiya ki tareef karun.. aaj tak suna tha.. dunya ki sabse sundr ladki kisi road se guzre to dekhne wali ankhen hatna bhul jaya karti han.. koi gadi dirver karta hua us haseena ko dekhe.. to aage wali gadi ko thok de.. par mere dev bhaiya.. dunya ki sabhi haseen ladkiyon se hazaron guna badhkar haseen han.. aisa glow hai unke chahre par.. chand bhi sharma jaaye. aisi chaal hai dev bhaiya ki.. morni apni chaal bhul jaaye.. unki neeli ankhen dharti ki har ek chiz se badhkar sundr han.. itni kashish itni sundrta hai unki neeli ankhon me.. jo ek bar unki ankhon me dekh le.. dil tham le.. un ankhon me doob marne ko bechain ho jaaye..


jack ne ek bar firse jaidev ki charming personality ka naksha kamal ke andaz me khencha to is baar sab jaise dev ki kalpanik tasveer bana kar live dekhne lage.. sabke chahre chamak uthe.. kuch pal ko koi kuch bol hi nahi saka.

fir dev ki sabse chhoti didi ruchika boli -- oye.. itni mat phenk. lapetna mushkil ho jaye. sab jante han.. dev ki ankhen light brown thee.. neeli to thi hi nahi dev ki ankhen.. chal chal sahi se bata.. kaisa hai mera dev...


pratab ki beti bhavana boli -- bolne do na jack ko.. kitna meetha bolta ha.. kitne ache se dev ka parichay dia hai isne. kitna sukhad ahsas hua mujhe.. jack mere bhai.. kya sach me dev aisa hi hai. jaisa tumne kaha.

jack -- haan.. is bar main sach kah raha hon..

lavanya -- par mere dev ki ankhen halki brown se neeli kaise ho gayi..

jack -- jaise dev bhaiya zinda bach gaye.. vaise hi dev bhaiya ki ankhon ka rang bhi neela ho gaya..

kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa??

pratab-- ooo .. humne to pucha hi nahi.. dev zinda kaise bacha.. samandar ke us area me.. kahan hamara pura ship khatre se dochar tha.. dev ka zinda bach pana asambhav tha..

rahul -- bata jack.. dev kaise bacha..

yahan mela laga hua tha. sab ek sath nahi bol sakte the.. bade khamoshi se sara majra dekh aur sun rahe the.. wo sabar wale the.. jante the, chhote aur ghar ki mahilayen sabar nahi kar payengi.. kisi ko bolne nahi dengi. barson baad khul kr bolne ka avsar mila tha. wo sabko bolne dena chahte the.

jack -- koi mujhe batayega kyaa. india me koi gyani aisa hai.. jo aatmashkti me perfect ho. jo ghanton tak ya kai kai dino tak apni saanse rok sakta ho.

shamsher singh -- main janta hon ek aise hi mahagyani ko.. jo hafta hafta bhar bina saans liye sadhna me leen rahte han..

harmit singh -- main bhi ek bar gaya tha us mahagyani ke darshan karne.

dadi gayatri singh -- hamare apne parivar ke ek sadasy ne sansar tyag kar jog apna liya tha.. wo apni aatma ko apne sharir se alag karke sara sansar ghum liya karte the...

lavanya -- jack beta.. tumhari is baat ka matlab kya hua..

jack -- simple sa fanda hai mummy.. is dunya me jaise ser par sawa ser maujud han.. vaise hi is dunya ne insano ki kai kismen han.. kudrat ki banai is dharti me bhi hazaron lakhon secrets chhupe hue han. jinke baare me koi nahi jaanta.. aaye din kahin na kahin ye khabar sunne ko milti hai. kisi ne mermaid ko dekha hai. jisne dekha.. usne sach maan liya.. jo apni ankhon se nahi dekh saka. usne ise jhutla diya.. aise hi hamari tarah dikhne wale kuch insan aise bhi han is dharti me.. jo sea ceatures ke jaise samandar me saans bhi le sakte han aur kha pi bhi sakte han. sea creatures ke jaise swing bhi kar sakte han.. kuch to aise swimmers hote han. samandar ka koi bhi jeev uska mukabla nahi kar sakta..

pratab ka beta vijay piche khada tha. usne ek dhap maar di jack ke kandhe par..

vijay -- abhi kuch der pahle ruchika ne kaha tha na tujhse.. itni mat phenk. lapetna mushkil ho jaaye.. tu seedhe se batata hai ya tujhe utha kr niche pathak dun..

jack ekdum se uth khade hua.. vijay ko ungli dikhata hua bola -- apun se panga nahi lene ka.. apun dev ka chhota bhai hai.. samjha kyaa.. himmat se dev se bhaiya se kam hon main.. par aap se kahin badhkar hon.. aap mujhe kya utha kar patkhenge.. main hi aapko patakh dunga.. fir na haddi rahegi aur na hi pasli..

sab nanhe jack ko dekh uski baaten aur andaz par bohut lutf bhi utha rahe the.. sab zor se hasne lage...

vijay -- abe chalgoze.. saala dedh ungli ke jitna hokar mujhe ungli dikhata hai.....





harmit singh ko khamosh betha hua tha.. jack ko uskara hua -- shabash mere sher.. bata de is vijay ke bachhe ko. tu bhi mera pota hai.. patakh de.. main ijazat deta hon tujhe..

vijay - hahaha.. dada ji kyu iski haddi pasli tudwane ka mann hai aapka. abhi isne dunya me dekha hi kya hai. ji lene de ise do char din..

jack rahasmai muskan ke sath -- chalen fir ho jaaye.. dekhte han. kiski hadi pasli tootti hai.

vijay hairan hua -- lagta hai tu aise nahi maanega. tujhe sabak sikhana hi padega..

vijay saamne aa gaya.. jack do kadam piche hatkar vijay ke piche dekhta hua.. nahi rahul bhaiya vijay bhaiya ko main pichhadunga..

vijay jhonk me aa kar piche dekhne laga. jack turant harkat me aaya aur vijay ka ek bazo pakad kar uski tang me taang phansa kar vijay ko niche gira dia..

sab zor zor se hasne lage.. vijay niche leta hua ashcharyachakit sar ghuma ghuma kar sabko dekh raha tha.. jack firse lavanaya ke paas ja betha tha.. aur lavanya usay chum rahi thi..

lavanya -- ummmmha..meta beta.. tu sach much ka sher hai..

vijay hasta hua utha -- chalaki se.. hmmm.. beta.. aise kushti nahi ladi jati.

jack -- maine dev bhaiya se seekha hai. jahan mubakle par takat me koi zayada ho. wahan takat se nahi dimag se ladte han.

bhairav singh -- shabash mere sher.. tu sach me vijeta hai.. buddi wali bat kahi tumne..

lavanya -- chal ab bata.. kya bata raha tha tu dev ke baare me..

vijay bhi ek side beth gaya. usay jack par bohut pyar aa raha tha.. usay subki mahsus nahi hui thi. usay garv ho raha tha jack par..

jack -- hamari earth par samandar 70% plus hai. aur hamare scientist abhi tak only 5% hi samandaron ko khoj sake han.. kya meri ye information sahi hai.



jaidev ki sabse chhoti bua ki beti pihu jo jack ki umar ki thi.. wo bol padi..

pihu -- jack tumhari info ekdum correct hai.. mujhe dev bhaiya ke baare me aur batav na..

pihu zamane bhar ke shauk bhare bhav chahre par liye apni maa ke sath bethi boli..
jack ne usay dekha.. dekhta raha.. fir uske honto par muskan utar aai. jo pal bhar me hi gahri ho gayi..

jack -- pihu.. tum pihu ho naa..

pihu hairan hoke -- haan. main pihu hon.. tumhe mera naam kisne bataya..

jack uth ka nachne laga --- yaaaaaahoooo.. mil gai.. mil gai..

sab ke moh hairat se khul gaye. wo samjh nahi paye. jack aise kyu nachne laga. rahul ne usay bazo se pakad kar lavanya ke paas bitha dia..



rahul -- abe bandar ki aulad.. maskhari hi karta rahega ya sab batayega bhi.. ghante bhar se drama kiye ja raha hai. yahan hamara khoon itna tez daud raha ha.. ragon se bahar aane ko betab hai. aur tere drame han ki khatam hone me hi nahi aa rahe..

jack dhime lahje me bola --- mil gai.. mil gai.. mummy mujhe mil gai..

lavanya jack ko kandhe se thaam kar -- kya mil gai.. kon mil gai..

jack ne lavanya ko dekha.. fir pihu ko dekha. jo hairani se jack ko dekh rahi thi.. usay samjh nahi aai thi.. jack itna excited kis baat kar hone laga tha.

jack -- mummy mujhe mere sapno ki shahzadi mil gai.. mummy main pihu se shadi karunga.. mummy mummy main pihu se shadi karunga..

lavanya -- kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa??

sab -- kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

pihu astonished face ke sath bethi jack ko dekhne lagi. fir wo buri tarah sharmati hui apni maa ke seene me moh chhupa gai..

sab kuch der khamosh rahe.. firse wo bhara kamra sabki zordar hansi se goonj utha..

lavanya -- hehehe... jack tum... hehehe tumm..tumm bohut shararti ho..
pihu ki mummy jyothika -- hehehe.. bada aaya.. meri beti se shadi karega.. shakal dekhi hai kabhi aaine me..

arunita -- bua ji.. shakal ki baat na karen.. jack dev ki shakal me hai.. jack is samay dunya ka sabse chahre ke sath hai..

jack khushi se uchala aur jakar arunita ki god me beth kar apni bahen arunika ke gale me daal gaya.. arunita ke gaalon par kiss kar di..

jack -- i love you di.. mujhe yakin hai. aap meri shadi pihu se karwa kar hi dum lengi..

arunita -- hehehe.. zarur.. mere bhai ho tum jack.. tumhara mann hai pihu se shadi ka to main to fir zarur karwaungi apne bhai ki shadi pihu se.. main mere bhai ka dil to nahi tootne de sakti na..

pihu aur bhi sharam se laal hone lagi..

jyothika -- hehehe.. aise kaise.. bina ladki ki maa ki permision liye. bina sharten maane.. bina bheek maange tum kaise mujhse meri beti ka hath maang sakti ho apne bhai ke liye.. tumhara bhai heera hai to meri beti bhi croro me ek hai.. chand ka tukda hai meri pihu..kyu deepak maine sahi kaha na..

deepak -- bat sahi hai ki galat. par ab jack ne bol dia hai to ye shadi ab hoke ke rahegi..

deepak uthta hua ashok se bola -- chal ashok. shadi ki tayari karte han..

ek bar firse sab hasne lage.. pihu rone lagi..

jyothika -- chup kar aap sab. meri phool si beti ko rula dia. meri beti ko ye rishta manzoor nahi hai. aap jack ke liye koi dusri ladki dekh lo. kyu pihu beti.. sach me jack ke liye koi aur ladki dhund len hum sab.. vaise jack ke jaise tumhe puri dunya me nahi milega..

sab maze le rahe the. pihu bheegi ankhon se apni maa ko dekhne lagi.

jyothika -- batav.. haan kar doon.. tumhara aur jack ka rishta pakka kar dun..

pihu ko kuch samjh nahi aa rahi thi. wo bohut ghabra gai thi.. usne ek baar jack ko dekha.. jo usay meethi nazron se dekh raha tha. fir sabko dekhne lagi.. fir ekdum se haan me sar hilane lagi..

jack uth kar firse nachne laga. pihu firse apne mummy ke seene me chahra chhupa gai.. sab aur bhi khilkhila kar hasne lage..

saalon ka sara gham kuch hi ghanto me khatam hoke rah gaya tha.. kuch der aur masti chali.. fir jack se dev ke baare me aage ki kahani sunne ko kaha gaya..

is baar jack serious hoke bolne laga.. pihu bhi firse pure shauk ke sath jack ki baaten sunne lagi..

jack -- jaisa ki maine kaha.. earth par phele samandar me hazaron secrets ab bhi dunya ki nazron se chhupe hue han. aisa hi ek ilaka hai.. jahan insano ki bastiyan abad han. wahan har chiz neeli hai. ped pode. zameen asman yahan tak wahan suraj bhi neela dikhai deta hai.. wahan ki dhup aisi hai. na sardi ka ahsas hota hai aur na hi garmi ka ahsas.. wahan ka atmosphere kuch is prakar ka hai. wahan saans lene walun ke andar sea creatures ki jaisi capabilities paida hone lagti hai. kuch hi mahino me wo real me sea creature ban jata hai..

us din bhi usi basti ka ek couple wahan maujud tha. jahan dev bhaiya ko aap sabne mara hua jaan kar lohe se baandh kar samandar ki gahrai me phenk dia tha. bass unhi ne bachaya dev bhaiya ko. dev bhaiya ki saans ki bimari hi nahi gai. dev bhaiya chatan jitne powerful bhi ban gaye.. shark se tez swimmer ban gaye.. pani me octopus se bhi shaktishali ban gaye.. wahan rahne se dev bhaiya ki ankhen bhi neeli ho gai.. bhaiya raat ke ghane andhere me bhi din ke jaise dekh sakte han.

sui girti to bhi awaz sunaai deti... itni khamoshi chhaa gai thi wahan.. sab apni zindagi ki sabse hairan kar dene wali baaten sun rahe teh.. unka dev zinda hi nahi tha... aise roop me saamne aaya tha. koi kalpana bhi nahi kar sakta tha. upar se samandar me saans lene wale insano ka zikr hoa tha. unbelievable tha.. yakin karne layak nahi tha. par sabko yakin karna pad raha tha. jis desh me rahte the. us desh me bhi aise hazaron chamatkar maujud the...

sab mantramugdh hue jack se dev ki kahani sun rahe the.. jack uske bad ki baaten batane laga.. ship ko kaise bachaya.. finland ki royal family se parichay... dev ki pahle wali masumiyat fir trainning sab bata dia..

pihu hi sabse pahle boli -- jack.. dev bhaiya itne powerful han to fir dev bhaiya to fir finland ki royal family se bol kar mamu ko london wali jail se azad karwa sakte han..

sab pahle hairan bhi the aur khush bhi.. ab vikram singh ka zikr aaya to sab gham me doob gaye.. khushi ke is avsar par wo vikram ko bhul hi gaye the..

arunita sisakti hui -- batav jack.. jab dev itna sab kar sakta hai. to papa kyu ab tak kaid me han.. wo dev papa ko azad bhi nahi kar sakta.

jack -- karwa sakte han.. bhaiya ke liye ye kam chutki bajane jitna asan hai.. finland ki royal family ne bhi kaha tha dev bhai se.. par dev bhaiya nahi maaane..

lavanya sisakti hui -- kyu.. kyu nahi mana dev.. kya usay apne papa se mohabbat nahi rahi.. ya uske dil me apne papa ki kaid e tanhai ka jaan kar dard nahi jaga..

jack -- dev bhaiya aap ka beta ha mummy..

jack shamsher singh ko dekh kar bola -- dada ji dev bhaiya ki ragon me aapka khoon daud raha hai. kya wo kisi ka ahsan le sakta hai.. dev bhaiya ne royal family par itne ahsan kiye han. umar bhar wo dev bhaiya ka karz nahi chuka sakte.. aap sab ke jaise dev bhaiya ahsan karte to han.. par kisi ka ahsan lete nahi han.. sab kuch apne dum par hasil karne ki himmat wo khud me rakhte han.. dev bhaiya ne bass itna karwaya hai. london jail me papa ko wo sari facilities di ja rahi han.. jo ek royal parivar ke member ko di jaati hai..

bass ab kuch hi dino ka khel baaki hai.. fir papa bhi aap sab ke beech honge. dushmano ke sar bhi jhuk jayenge.. aur aap sabke sar bhi uth jaayenge. aur us unchai par ja pohnchenge.. us unchai tak dekhne wale peeth ke bal gir padenge.. aise hi han dev bhaiya.. isi waja se wo aap sab se pahle nahi mile.. kaise mil sakte han wo aap sabse.. jab tak wo papa ko azad nahi karwa lete.. aap sab ke jhuke sar nahi utha dete.. giri shaan ko badha nahi dete.. dushman ko unki, sabki nazron me zaleel nahi kar dete.. wo aap se kisi se bhi nahi milenge..

lavanaya roti hui -- fir to usay bohut samay lag jayega mujhse milne ke liye.. mera dil uske liye tadap raha hai.. usse kaho ek baar mujhse to aa kar mil jaaye.. mere dil ko karar aa jayega..

jack -- jahan itne baras wait kiya ha.. kya 8-10 din aur wait nahi kar sakti aap mummy.. kya aapki tadap parivar ke jhuke saron se badhkar hai..

lavanya tadap kar boli -- nahi jack nahi.. parivar hai to main hon. sab kuch hai. aur parivar shan ke sath hota hai. mere liye parivar ki sabse upar hoti hai. isi shan ko banaye rakhne ke liye to maayen apne jigar ke tukdon ko maidan e jung me jhonk deti han..

jack -- yakin rakhen mummy.. bohut jald.. bohut jald dev bhaiya apne iradon me safal ho jayenge.. tab tak main hon dev bhaiya ka chahra liya aapke dard ko kam karne ke liye aapke pass.

lavanya jack ko chumti hui -- haan tu bhi mera dev hai.. mera dusra dev hai tu... main intezar karungi.. jahan itne baras tadap li uske liye wahin kuch din aur sahi.. tum na batate to main to aise hi umar bhar dev ke bina jeene wali thi. nahi. main achhe dino ka intezar karungi..



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mecheal ne jan liya tha.. jaidev ek extraordinary ladka hai. jise wo dunya bhar se chhupana chahta tha. jaidev se usne baat kari.. karibi port tak ka fasla 4 din ka rah gaya tha. to micheal ne jaidev ko sabki nazron me chhupe rahne ke liye bol dia.. ship ke kai passengers har din jaidev ko dekhte rahte han. kaiyon ke mann me kai kai baten thi... jab ek pura din jaidev nahi dikha to pure ship par hungama mach utha. jaidev ko pure ship par talash kiya jane laga. par wo nahi mila..

is baat ka fayda micheal ne uthaya aur usne jaidev ko unki madad karne wala angel bata dia.. jo chupke se aaya aur sabko bacha kar wahan se gayab ho gaya. agle 3 din tak jab jaidev kisi ko nazar na aaya to sabne maan liya. jaidev sach me ek angle tha. jo unki madad karne ke liye aaya tha. madad karke nikal gaya..


finland royal family ke dono members ko micheal ne apne sath mila lia tha. wo ache log the. jab port karib aaya to jaidev chupke se samandar me utar sahil par ja pohncha.. wahin baad me usay micheal aur dono royal members mile.. immediately air tickets book karwai gai. aur 2 agle do ghanto me us country se nikal chuke the.. itni der me jaidev ek angel ki tarah har news channel par bataya jane laga tha..


finland pohnchne par jaidev ka bohut badhiya se sawagat kiya gaya..
Marvelous awesome fabulous jabardast Shandar update bro
 
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jaidev ne jo kaha tha. wo kar dikhaya. ins..sp aur comm ko unke pad se hata dia gaya.. 2 ghante baad ramakant ko uske PA se pata chala. uske 4 bade foreign contact cancel kar diye gaye han.. ramakant sar pakad kar beth gaya. ananya gahre sadme thi. dev ko fraud samjh kar usne dev ko sabak sikhane ke liye apne papa ko bola tha. par ulta uske papa hi musibat me aa gaye the.. dev ko bhi haar gai thi.. paiso ka loss bhi uthana pad gaya tha.


home minister se baat karke jab jaidev wapis se sabke beech pohncha to dgp se bola tha...

jaidev -- mujhe nahi bataya gaya tha mujhe kis aarop ke chalte arrest kiya ja raha tha.. lekin mai janta hon.. ananya ne apne papa ke sath milkar kya kaise khel ki rachna ki. ananya ne apne papa se baat karke wapis se paise mere account par bhej kar mujhe phaswane ki koshish kari thi. lekin ananya ya ramakant mujhe sabak sikhane ke chakkar me hosh se kam lena bhul gaye. jo paise mere account me tranfer kiye gaye the. turant hi maine wo sare paise wapis kar diye the. jo ye apni power ke ghamand ke chalte dhayan me nahi rakh paaye.. warna jaan lete... itna sab sahn na karna padta..


ins..sp aur comm ki taqdeer ka faisla karke jaidev wahan se chala gaya. jate jate dgp ko dhire se uske kaan me bol gaya tha.."main indian hon.. desh prem meri nas nas me hai.. desh ke liye bohut kuch karunga.. bas bure logo ke liye main kabhi achha nahi ban sakta" jispar dgp ke honto par muskan aa gai thi..




jaidev ke jane ke bad kabir singh bhi sabke saamne aa gaya.. wo apne bhav kisi se chhupa nahi saka tha. sab ne jaan liya kabir singh aur jaidev ke beech tu tu main main hui hai.. kabir singh bohut guse me police headquarter se nikla tha.. jald hi shahar ke jane maane logo ne jaan liya.. jaidev aur kabir singh ki apas me koi dushmani hai.. jiske chalte wo aisa sab kar guzra hai..

jaidev kon hai.. ye jaanne ke liye kabir singh ne as a home minister finland call bhi kari. par usay taka sa jawab mila.. firse dev ko discuss nahi kiya jayega. aisa warning bhi de di gai thi. kabir singh maare guse ke tilmila kar rah gaya tha.. ek baat jo finland ki royal family se usay jaanne ko mili.. wo ye thi.. ki wo chahe to apne taur par dev ke sath kuch bhi kar sakta hai. usse apne apman ka badla le sakta hai.. haan par apni power ka istemal karne police ki surat me karne ki koshish karega to usay home minister ke pad se hataya bhi ja sakta hai..



jaidev aur kabir singh ki dushmani wali baat chhupi nahi rah saki...


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Location Delhi City...


double story banglow ke room me bethe hue brijlal tivari ke mobile ne shor machana shuru kar dia. birjlal ne mobile utha kar number dekha. fir call pick karte hue mobile kaan se laga kar dusri orr se baaten sunne laga.. wo sari baaten uske mobile par record hone lagi.. call end hote hote brijlal bohut zayada josh me aa chuka tha..

usne der na karte hue wo recording aage jaidev ke nana ke number par send kar di..


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Location Udaipur Rajashtan.


jaidev ke nana Thakur harmit singh ki haveli ke sitting area me rana pratab singh aur vikram singh ke parivar ke sabhi mard bethe hue the. vikram singh aur pratab singh dono ke jija bhi wahin the.. halat kuch aise badle the. sab udaipur tak seemat hokar rah gaye the..
wahin jaidev ki maa lavanya bhi ek side bethi sabko dekh rahi thi. uske chahre par kai tarah ke bhav the. bohut samay baad ek sath kai bhav uske chahre me aaye the.

brijlal tivari ki taraf se send ki gayi voice recording sab sun chuke the. sab gahri soch me doobe hue the.


harmit singh ne sar utha kar sabko dekha aur fir rana pratab singh ko dekh kar bole --- pratab beta.. kya vichar han tumhare is baare me..

pratab singh -- chacha ji.. vichar to bohut se han mere mann me.. main kuch bhi kahne se pahle aapke vichar jaanna chahta hon. aap bade han hamare.. aap hi sabse pahle apni baat rakhen sabke saamne..

harmit singh ne apne dono sambandhiyon rana bhairav singh(pratab ke papa) aur shamsher singh(vikram ke papa) ko dekha.. fir wo bole -- bhairav, shamsher baat hai to bade sharam ki. humne bohut zor lagaya par ladai me safalta nahi pa sake.. mayank(pratab ka bhai) ki ladai se shuru hui dushmani me hum buri tarah nakam rahe. aisa nuksan uthaya humne. jo hamare purkhon me bhi kabhi nahi uthaya.. hamare sar sharam se jhuk chuke han.. kai jaanen chali gai is ladai me.. karobar tabah hua wo alag. rahi sahi kasar hamari saakh ke khatam hone par puri ho gai.. bohut dukh hai humen.. ab jab hamara is dunya se jaane ka samay ho chuka hai to jhuke sar ke sath jana nahi chahte hum.. sar utha kar seena taan kar dushman se ladne hue usay hara hue dekh kar is dunya se jana chahte han.. apne dum par.. apne zore baazo par hum dushman ko harana chahte han. usay batana chahte han hum kayar nahi han. balwan the.. han aur rahenge..

bhairav -- yahi baat mere dil ki bhi hai harmit.. sar to mera bhi sharam se jhuk gaya hai. jis shan se jiya hon. usi shan se is dunya se jana bhi chahta hon.

shamsher -- shadyantr rachne walun ne hamare khilaf kai shadyantr rache. par kabhi koi humen harane me safal nahi ho paye the.. hamare bad hamare bachhe bhi sher ki tarah jiye.. sher ki tarah lade. par is baar ki ladai aur shadyantr me hum buri tarah peeth ke bal gir pade han harmit.. meri bhi nak kat chuki hai. jaisi shaan wali nak lekar main is dunya me aaya tha.. vaisi hi shaan wali nak salamat lekar main bhi is dunya se jana chahta hon. jaise izzat se jiya tha. usi izzat ke sath jana chahta hon.. ye ladai hamari thi.. hamari hai aur hamari hi rahegi.. koi bhi hamari ladai me aaya.. uske sath bhi wahi hoga.. jo kabir singh aur uske parivar ke sath hoga..

pratab singh -- chachi ji main bhi yahi kahna chahta tha.. us dev naam ke ladke ne kabir singh ko bohut badi chot di hai..wo kabir singh ki takkar ka bhi lagta hai. aise me agar wo kabir ko hara kar moh ke bal gira deta hai.. usay tabah kar deta hai to hamare jhuke sar kabhi uth nahi payenge. hum fir kabhi shaan se ji nahi paayenge.. isliye zaroori hai. pahle us dev ko raste se hata dia jaaye... fir kabir singh aur uske parivar ka sarvanash karke hum apne jhuke sar uthayenge.

pratab ka bhai mayank -- us ladke ke relation finland ki royal family se han bhai.. aisa sunne me aaya hai.. aise me usse humne ladai ki gayi. usay apna dushman banaya gaya to baat bohut badh bhi sakti hai.. hum jo firse power hasil karke kabir singh se takrana chahte han. aise me dev jaise dushman se ladai hamare liye khatarnak na sabat ho. politically humpar dabav aa sakta hai. aur fir hum ye bhi to nahi jante. dev ki kabir se kya dushman hai..

shamsher singh -- dev ki kabir se kya dushmani hai. hum nahi jante. pahle uski janam kundli nikalo. fir usse baat karo. usay samjhao... kabir aur hamare beech se nikal jaaye. pyar se maane to theek nahi.. nahi to usay kabir ke sath sath humse bhi takrana hoga..

lavanya jo sari baaten sun rahi thi.. ekdum se uth khadi hui..


lavanya -- papa! aap kaisi baten kar rahe han.. dev hai na us ladke ka naam.. mere bete ka naam bhi dev tha.. jo mere dil me ab bhi zinda hai. mere dil me dhadkan bankar ab bhi dhadakta hai. ye wala dev jis maa ka bhi beta hai. dhany hai wo maa. jisne is dev ko janam diya.. kabir ki ankhon me ankhon daali han usne.. wo bhi police headquarter me.. wo dev hai dev.. mera beta nahi hai to kya hua.. hai to dev hi na.. lado aap sab.. apni aan baan ke liye.. apni shaaan ke liye.. apne jhuke sar uthane ke liye lado.. kuch bhi kar jaao. kisi bhi hadh se guzar jaao. par dev ko kuch nahi hoga.. hamari is ladai me jitne bhi devv aayenge.. kisi bhi dev ko kuch kahe bina kabir se uske parivar se ladai karo.. sarvanash karo. par kisi dev ko kabhi koi haani na pohnchne dena.. warna mujhe lagega.. mera dev mere dil me bhi mar raha hai..


4 minat pahle haveli ke gate par 10 saal ka ek ladka aaya. gate ke bahar khade guards se wo bola.."mujhe peene ke liye pani mil sakta hai".. uski maang sweekar karte hue usay gate se andar aane ko kah dia gaya... ladka gate ke andar gaurd room ke paas rakhi ek chair par ja baitha. usay pani la kar dia gaya.. wo peene laga. paani peene hi wo utha aur andar haveli ki taraf bhaagne laga..

haveli ke andar akhri shabd bolte hue lavanya ki awaz bheeg gayi.. ek bar firse jaidev ka zikr hua tha. ek bar firse sab dev ke gham me doob gaye.. koi kuch bolta.. bahar shor ki awaz sunaai di.. fir bhagte kadmo ki awaz sunaai.. koi kahne laga..

"pakdo.. pakdo.. is ladke ko pakdo"

sab hairan se uth khade hue.. itni der me woh ladka sabke saamne aa kar khada ho gaya.. bhagte samay ek rumal se usne apna chahra cover kar liya tha.. kamre me aate hi wo lavanya ko dekhne laga.. sab usay hairat se dekh rahe the. guards bhagte hue uske piche aaye the. lekin door par khade ho maalikon ke hukam ka intezar karne lage. sab ladke ko hairat se dekh rahe the.. lavanya jo dev ke gham me thi.. ladke ko apni aur dekhte paya to wo bhi ladke ki ankhon me dekhne lagi...

kuch pal guzre.. koi kuch bolta.. ladka bol pada.. ladka english me bola tha.. uska svar bohut meetha prantu videshi tha.. -- mummy hamari ladai me kisi dev ki jaan nahi jayegi.. haan par har wo dev salamat rahega.. jo acha aur sacha insan hoga. jo bura hoga. wo marega.. fir chahe uska naam dev hi kyun na ho..!!

ladke ke moh se "mummy" shabd sunkar lavanya ke dil ki dhadkan badhi. barson bad kisi ladke ke moh se "mummy" shabd suna tha usne.. wo chalti hui ladke ke saamne ja pohnchi. aur english me hi boli..

lavanya -- beta tum kon ho.. mujhe mummy kyu kah rahe ho. tumhare shabdo me mithas hai. apnapan hai..mere liye pyar aur samman hai. kon ho tum beta.. tumne ye chahra kyu chhupa rakha hai..

ladke ki ankhen chamki.. ek hath apne chahre par late hue usne cover hata diya.. lavanya samet sabko jhatka laga.. sabke saamne jaidev ka chahra tha. das saal ki umar bhi jaidev aisa hi dikhta tha..

lavanya ki ankhen phel gayi.. fir woh "devvv" cheekhti hui ladke ko pakad kar apni aaghosh me bharne hi wali thi. pratab ka beta rahul jo paas hi khada tha. usne ladke ko bazo se pakad kar piche khench liya..

lavanya -- chhod rahul mere dev ko..mujhe mere dev se milne do..

rahul -- aunty ye aapka dev nahi hai.. ye koi bahrupiya hai. hamari bhavanaon se khelne ke liye kabir ne koi naya shadyantr racha hai.

lavanya -- nahi.. ye mera dev hai. mujhe mere bete se milne do.. sab ko ladke ke chahre me dev ka chahra dekh kar shocked hue the. wo bhi stark ho gaye.. same to same dev jaisa dikhna wala ye ladka kabir ki kisi gahri chaal ka parinam bhi ho sakta tha..

jabki aisa nahi tha.. is ladke ko bhejne wala jaidev tha..

ladka -- kabir ke paas aisa dimag kahan.. wo mujhe dev ki shakal dekar aap ke paas bhetja.. rahul bhaiya aapko yaad hai.. ek baar jaidev bhaiya bheem banne ke chakkar me aap ke chahre par mukka maar bethe the.. teen din tak aap ne jaidev bhaiya se baat nahi kari thi..

lavanaya cheekh padi.. shor ki awaz par parivar ki sabhi mahilayen bhi wahi aa gai thi.. ladke ki is baat par wo cheekh padi..

lavanya aage badhi aur ladke ke hath ko pakad liya -- tujhe ye sab kisne bataya..

ladka bade itminan se -- usi ne.. jisne mujhe ye chahra de kar aapke pass bheja hai..

lavanya -- kisne dia hai ye chahra tujhe..

ladka -- usi ne.. jiska ye chahra hai..

kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa??

ek sath kaiyon ke moh se nikla tha.. sab shocked ho gaye the..

rahul -- bakwas.. jiska ye chahra hai. usay humse bichhde saalon beet gaye. sabne milkar usay samandar ki tah me pohncha diya tha..

ladka -- badkismati hai aapki.. jo aap sab ne aisa kiya.. kya aap bhul gaye the. jaidev bhaiya ko saans ki bimari bhi thi.. wo us samat mare nahi the.. usi bimari ke chalte unki saaans andar kahin gum ho gai thi.. aap sab ne usay mara hua jaan kar lohe ke sath bandh kar samandar me utaar dia tha..

lavanaya larz uthi.. woh girne lagi... jaidev ki didiyan bhi wahi aa gai thi. unhe ne apni mummy ko thaam liya..

ladka aage bola -- jaidev mara nahi tha.. wo zinda tha.. tab bhi aur aaj bhi.. jise aapne samandr me phenk dia tha mara hua jaan kar. upar wale usay zindagi de di.. wo aaj bhi zinda hai mummy.. aapka sab jaidev sonog vikram singh zinda hai.. haan wo zinda hai.. na sirf aap sab ke dilon me.. is dunya me bhi zinda hai...

lavanaya roti bilakti ladke ko thaam gayi.... boli -- kahan hai mera dev..

ladke ke honto par muskan aa gai.. wo sabko dekhne laga.. sab usay dekh rahe the.. sab round shape me uske gird khade ho gaye the...

ladka -- aap sab andaza hi nahi laga paye.. koi aisa hai... jo kabir ki ankhon me ankhen daal kar sake.. aisa karne wala kisi sher ka hi khoon ho sakta hai.. jise aap anjan dev samjh rahe han.. wahi ha aap sab ke dilon ka tara jaidev .. vikram singh ka beta.. aap sab ke dilon ka noor..


lavanya cheekhti hui ladke ko gale se laga kar bilak bilak kar rone lagi. sab abhi bhi shak aur yakin ke beech jhool rahe the. dimag nahi maan raha tha. par dil cheekh cheekh kar gawahi de raha tha.. wahi un sab ka dev hai..sher jaisa kaleja rakhna wala dev unhi ka khoon hai..


(agle update se flashback shuru ho jaayega..)

Update - 11


Some Characters Intro-----

shamsher singh-- 75 dev dada
gayatri singh -- 74 dev dadi

NO:1.. beta...vikram singh-- lavanya (dev parents)
dev sisters--- arunita(25) ashmita(23) ruchika(21)

N0:2 beta...ranveer singh -- sadhna(dev chacha) inke teen bete do betiyan han..

NO:3 beti...divyanka... ashok...(dev bua & fufa) 2 beti ek beta
NO:4 beti...jyothika... deepak..(dev bua & fufa) 1 beti pihu ek beta

rana bhairav singh-- 76
laxmi

pratab singh -- devika

2 bete 3 betiyan han
parerna(25) vijay(24) ruchi(22) rahul(20) chanchal(18)


harmit singh nana......
kaushalya singh nani...


characters bohut zayada han.. sabka intro dunga to khichdi ban jayegi.. zarurat ke anusar parichay deta rahunga..




aahun siskiyon ne sitting room ka naksha hi badal kar rakh dia tha. ladka jis ka naam jack tha. lavanya ke gale lage uski nazar ek side padi. wo lavanya se turant alag hua. lavanya abhi bhi ro rahi thi. jack se door nahi hona chahti thi.. jack se usay apne dev ki khushbu aa rahi thi.. par jack lavanya se alag hokar chalta hua ek mahila ke saamne ja pohncha.
jack -- aap mansi ho na..
mansi is haveli ki purani naukrani thi -- wo jack ko dekh boli -- haan main mansi hon..

jack ekdum se harkat me aaya aur uske hath me maujud mobile chheen liya.. mobile ko dekha... fir cheekh pada -- ye kabir ki jasoos hai.

mansi haklane lagi -- nn.. nahi nahi mm..main kisi ki jasoos nahi hon.
jack lavanya ko dekh kar -- mummy ye naukrani mansi apke dushman kabir ki jasoos hai... iske kapde utarwa kar iski talashi len.. iske paas kuch aur aisa ho sakta hai. jisse ye kabir ya uske uske admiyon se rabta kar sakti hai..fir pratab ko dekh kar bola -- papa naukaron me hariya aur guards me raman kabir ke jasoos han.. turant unko bhi kabze me le len. nahi to wo dev bhaiya ke zinda hone ki khabar kabir tak pohncha denge..

jack ki baat par kisi ko yakin nahi aaya -- papa.. dada ji plz der na karen.. nahi to gadbad ho jayegi.. teeno ki achhe se talashi len.. ye waqt hath se nikal gaya to hamesha ke liye loss uthana pad jayega.

lavanya hukam deti hui-- rahul.. vijay.. prakash.. tum sab khade kya dekh rahe ho.. mera beta jaisa kah raha hai. vaisa karo..


turant sab harkat me aa gaye.. haveli ki mahilayen mansi ko lekar ek kamre me gai aur uske kapde utarwa kar uski talashi lene lagi.. mansi jaise ghabra gai thi. sabko yakin ho chala gaya wo dushman se mili hui hai. hariya aur raman ko bhi khamoshi se dhar liya gaya. un ki bhi talashi li gayi.. raman ke paas ek transmitter mila.. mobile fone kam na karne ki surat me tranmitter par khas khabaren pohnchana uska kam tha.

teeno ko haveli ke tahkhane me band kar dia gaya.. sab bhi wahan ja pohnche. jack se milna aur dev ke zinda hone ki khabar ke sath sath haveli ke andar teen jasoos bhi hai.. is baat ne sabko hila kar rakh dia tha...


mansi, hariya aur raman teeno kursiyon pr bandhe bethe the. teeno khaufzada nazron se dekh rahe the.

hariya gidgidate hue -- mm... main gaddar nahi hon maalik..
harmit singh hariya ko adhik guse se dekh raha tha -- tu gaddar nahi to fir ghabra kyu raha hai.. bata.. kab se hamare dushman ka kutta bana hua hai tu

hariya -- bhagwan ki saugandh maalik.. mm.. mai gaddar nahi hon.

jack -- dada ji ye aise moh nahi kholega.. mere paas kuch aisa hai. jisse iska moh bhi khulega aur ye far far bolega bhi..

sab jack ko dekhne lage.. jack ne apni pocket se ek chhoti sheeshe ki bottle nikali. uske andar ajib tarah ke keede the... jack us sheeshi ko
sabko dikhate hue bade hi darawane andaz me bola -- ye samandar ki tah me paye jane wale bohut hi khatarnak keede han. ye insani jism me ghus kar khoon hi nahi chooste.. maas bhi khate han. dhire dhire inka aakaar badhta chala jata hai.. main ye keede in teeno ke upar daal dunga.. ye keede in teeno ke jismo me ghus kar apna kaam shuru kar denge.. dekhte hi dekhte inka sara khoon pi jayenge.. sara maas kha jayenge..

jack bade hi dahshatnak lahje me bolta hua teeno ke samne ja pohncha.. teeno jack ki baat samjh nahi paaye the.. jack english me bola tha. par keede dekh kar jack ke andaz se wo bohut kuch samjh gaye the.. jack ko karib aate dekh teeno cheekhne lage.. rehem ki bheek mangne lage. par inpar rehem karne wala koi nahi tha.. barson se gaddar bane sabko zabardast haani pohncha rahe the.


rahul -- sab sach sach bata do. nahi to ye keede tum teeno ka khoon pee jayenge. maas kha jayenge.. dhire dhire inka aakaar badhta jayega.. abhi samay hai.. sach ugal do.. ek baar keede tum teeno par aaye to fir inhe tum teeno ke shariron se koi alag nahi kar paayega..

jack ne dhakan kholna shuru kar dia.. pahle jo teeno apna moh band rakhe hue the.. cheekh chillla rahe the.. ab bepanah dehshat me aay cheekhte hue sara sach ugalne lage..

jack honto par muskan liye peeche hat gaya.. jahan sab jack ki is karni par khush the. wahin bohut zayada dukh me bhi the.. apne hi barson purane naukar gaddar ban gaye the..

rahul to pistol nikal kar teeeno ko shoot hi karne wala tha.. par jack ne rok dia.. kuch der me sab tahkhane se bahar the..

jack ne keedo wali sheeshi lavanya ke aage kar di.. lavanya ghabra kar piche hat gai.. jack ne haste hue dhakan khola aur un keedon ko apne haath par chhodne laga.. kuch cheekhe.. kuch bhagraye..

jack -- ye keede harmless han mummy.. bohut masum han.. wo to maine un teeno ko darane ke liye bola tha..


jack ek ek karke sare keedon ko pakad kar firse bottle me band karne laga. jab sab keede band ho gaye to lavanya se ja kar lipat gaya..

lavanya -- beta! mere dev ke baare me tumne sab nahi bataya..

jack smile se -- wo to maine apne bare me bhi nahi bataya.... fir thodi si narazgi jatata hua bola... kisi ne mujhse mera nam bhi nahi puchha..

lavanya pyar se usay chumti hui-- to ab bata do na.. mere dusre bete ka naam kya hai...

jack -- mera naam jack ha.. chalen andar chalte han. wahin baaten karenge..

sab ek bade kamre me ja pohnche.. haveli ke sare naukron ko satark kr dia gaya tha..

jack -- sabse pahli baat.. dev bhaiya ne kaha hai.. abhi mansi..hariya aur raman ko kuch na kaha jaaye.. un teeno ko zindagi ki zamanat ka lalach de kar kuch din zinda rakha jaaye.. wo teeno kabir se ya uske admiyon se rabte me rahte han.. aur dev bhaiya kuch dino tak kabir ko dhoke me rakhna chahte han.. kuch gaurds ko un teeno ki rakhwali par chhod den. jab bhi kabir ya uske admiyon ka fone aaye to apne saamne baat karwayen.. aise koi baat haveli se bahar nahi jayega. aur kabir dhoke me rahega..

aise hi jack ne dev ki kai aur indications dohra di.. jise sabne ghaur se suna ...

lavanya jack ko ek bar firse chumti hui -- mera dev kitna samjhdar hai.. ek ek baat par dhayan rakhta hai mera dev....

ab sabne yakin kar liya tha. jack sach bol raha hai.. dev zinda hai. ye bohut badi thi.. jitni hairankun thii.. utni hi khushi se labrez bhi thi. sabka mann ho raha tha. jack ko pakad kar chumna shuru kar den. usse dev ke bare me ek ek baat jaanen.. par lavanya jack ko nahi chhod rahi thi.. jaidev ki bahne, pratab ke betiyan aur bete to jaidev ke zinda hone ki khabar sunkar pagal ho uthe the.. jahan bohut zayada khush the. wahan ek dard bhi sabke dilon me jaag utha tha..

jack -- haan dev bhaiya bohut samjhdar han.. itne ki dunya ka mushkil se mushkil maamle me chutkiyon me solve kar lete han..

lavanya shauk se -- aur batao ne mujhe mere dev ke bare me.. wo dikhta kaisa hai..

jack ka moh theda ho gaya

lavanya -- aise moh kyu bana liya tumne jack beta.. batav na mera dev kaisa dikhta hai..

uttar me jack kuch aise bola -- kya bataun mummy main aapko.. dev bhaiya sar se adhe takle ho gaye han. ek ankh se bhenge ho gaye han.. hont aur gaal aise bhul gaye han.. jaise kisi madhumakkhi ke kaatne par soojan aa jati hai.. vaise hi dev bhaiya ka chahra bhi phoola hua hai.. ek taang thodi si chhoti ho gai hai. jab wo langda kar chalte han to bade ajib dikhte han.. dekhne wale dev bhaiya par awazen kaste han..

jack ne jaidev ki shakal o surat ka naksha aise andaz me khencha.. sabke moh khul gaye. fir ek dum se hansi ka tufan aaya.. dar o deewar goonj uthe.. barson baad haveli me hasi ka aisa tufan aaya tha. warna to sab hasna hi bhul gaye the..

dev ki badi didi arunita -- oye bandar ki aulad.. mera dev aisa bilkul bhi nahi dikhta.. 10 saal pahle wo kisi prince se kam nahi dikhta tha.. ab to koi uske jaisa hoga hi nahi.. sach sach bata.. kaise dikhta hai mera dev..

jack -- sach sach bata dun.

ashmita -- bohut hasa liya tumne humen.. hamare andar ke gham ko khatam karna tha.. wo tum khatam kar chuke.. ab hamare shauk ko pura kar.. bata mera dev kaisa dikhta hai..

jack ekdum se sharma gaya -- to fir thaam lijiye.. haaye main kis moh se dev bhaiya ki tareef karun.. aaj tak suna tha.. dunya ki sabse sundr ladki kisi road se guzre to dekhne wali ankhen hatna bhul jaya karti han.. koi gadi dirver karta hua us haseena ko dekhe.. to aage wali gadi ko thok de.. par mere dev bhaiya.. dunya ki sabhi haseen ladkiyon se hazaron guna badhkar haseen han.. aisa glow hai unke chahre par.. chand bhi sharma jaaye. aisi chaal hai dev bhaiya ki.. morni apni chaal bhul jaaye.. unki neeli ankhen dharti ki har ek chiz se badhkar sundr han.. itni kashish itni sundrta hai unki neeli ankhon me.. jo ek bar unki ankhon me dekh le.. dil tham le.. un ankhon me doob marne ko bechain ho jaaye..


jack ne ek bar firse jaidev ki charming personality ka naksha kamal ke andaz me khencha to is baar sab jaise dev ki kalpanik tasveer bana kar live dekhne lage.. sabke chahre chamak uthe.. kuch pal ko koi kuch bol hi nahi saka.

fir dev ki sabse chhoti didi ruchika boli -- oye.. itni mat phenk. lapetna mushkil ho jaye. sab jante han.. dev ki ankhen light brown thee.. neeli to thi hi nahi dev ki ankhen.. chal chal sahi se bata.. kaisa hai mera dev...


pratab ki beti bhavana boli -- bolne do na jack ko.. kitna meetha bolta ha.. kitne ache se dev ka parichay dia hai isne. kitna sukhad ahsas hua mujhe.. jack mere bhai.. kya sach me dev aisa hi hai. jaisa tumne kaha.

jack -- haan.. is bar main sach kah raha hon..

lavanya -- par mere dev ki ankhen halki brown se neeli kaise ho gayi..

jack -- jaise dev bhaiya zinda bach gaye.. vaise hi dev bhaiya ki ankhon ka rang bhi neela ho gaya..

kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa??

pratab-- ooo .. humne to pucha hi nahi.. dev zinda kaise bacha.. samandar ke us area me.. kahan hamara pura ship khatre se dochar tha.. dev ka zinda bach pana asambhav tha..

rahul -- bata jack.. dev kaise bacha..

yahan mela laga hua tha. sab ek sath nahi bol sakte the.. bade khamoshi se sara majra dekh aur sun rahe the.. wo sabar wale the.. jante the, chhote aur ghar ki mahilayen sabar nahi kar payengi.. kisi ko bolne nahi dengi. barson baad khul kr bolne ka avsar mila tha. wo sabko bolne dena chahte the.

jack -- koi mujhe batayega kyaa. india me koi gyani aisa hai.. jo aatmashkti me perfect ho. jo ghanton tak ya kai kai dino tak apni saanse rok sakta ho.

shamsher singh -- main janta hon ek aise hi mahagyani ko.. jo hafta hafta bhar bina saans liye sadhna me leen rahte han..

harmit singh -- main bhi ek bar gaya tha us mahagyani ke darshan karne.

dadi gayatri singh -- hamare apne parivar ke ek sadasy ne sansar tyag kar jog apna liya tha.. wo apni aatma ko apne sharir se alag karke sara sansar ghum liya karte the...

lavanya -- jack beta.. tumhari is baat ka matlab kya hua..

jack -- simple sa fanda hai mummy.. is dunya me jaise ser par sawa ser maujud han.. vaise hi is dunya ne insano ki kai kismen han.. kudrat ki banai is dharti me bhi hazaron lakhon secrets chhupe hue han. jinke baare me koi nahi jaanta.. aaye din kahin na kahin ye khabar sunne ko milti hai. kisi ne mermaid ko dekha hai. jisne dekha.. usne sach maan liya.. jo apni ankhon se nahi dekh saka. usne ise jhutla diya.. aise hi hamari tarah dikhne wale kuch insan aise bhi han is dharti me.. jo sea ceatures ke jaise samandar me saans bhi le sakte han aur kha pi bhi sakte han. sea creatures ke jaise swing bhi kar sakte han.. kuch to aise swimmers hote han. samandar ka koi bhi jeev uska mukabla nahi kar sakta..

pratab ka beta vijay piche khada tha. usne ek dhap maar di jack ke kandhe par..

vijay -- abhi kuch der pahle ruchika ne kaha tha na tujhse.. itni mat phenk. lapetna mushkil ho jaaye.. tu seedhe se batata hai ya tujhe utha kr niche pathak dun..

jack ekdum se uth khade hua.. vijay ko ungli dikhata hua bola -- apun se panga nahi lene ka.. apun dev ka chhota bhai hai.. samjha kyaa.. himmat se dev se bhaiya se kam hon main.. par aap se kahin badhkar hon.. aap mujhe kya utha kar patkhenge.. main hi aapko patakh dunga.. fir na haddi rahegi aur na hi pasli..

sab nanhe jack ko dekh uski baaten aur andaz par bohut lutf bhi utha rahe the.. sab zor se hasne lage...

vijay -- abe chalgoze.. saala dedh ungli ke jitna hokar mujhe ungli dikhata hai.....





harmit singh ko khamosh betha hua tha.. jack ko uskara hua -- shabash mere sher.. bata de is vijay ke bachhe ko. tu bhi mera pota hai.. patakh de.. main ijazat deta hon tujhe..

vijay - hahaha.. dada ji kyu iski haddi pasli tudwane ka mann hai aapka. abhi isne dunya me dekha hi kya hai. ji lene de ise do char din..

jack rahasmai muskan ke sath -- chalen fir ho jaaye.. dekhte han. kiski hadi pasli tootti hai.

vijay hairan hua -- lagta hai tu aise nahi maanega. tujhe sabak sikhana hi padega..

vijay saamne aa gaya.. jack do kadam piche hatkar vijay ke piche dekhta hua.. nahi rahul bhaiya vijay bhaiya ko main pichhadunga..

vijay jhonk me aa kar piche dekhne laga. jack turant harkat me aaya aur vijay ka ek bazo pakad kar uski tang me taang phansa kar vijay ko niche gira dia..

sab zor zor se hasne lage.. vijay niche leta hua ashcharyachakit sar ghuma ghuma kar sabko dekh raha tha.. jack firse lavanaya ke paas ja betha tha.. aur lavanya usay chum rahi thi..

lavanya -- ummmmha..meta beta.. tu sach much ka sher hai..

vijay hasta hua utha -- chalaki se.. hmmm.. beta.. aise kushti nahi ladi jati.

jack -- maine dev bhaiya se seekha hai. jahan mubakle par takat me koi zayada ho. wahan takat se nahi dimag se ladte han.

bhairav singh -- shabash mere sher.. tu sach me vijeta hai.. buddi wali bat kahi tumne..

lavanya -- chal ab bata.. kya bata raha tha tu dev ke baare me..

vijay bhi ek side beth gaya. usay jack par bohut pyar aa raha tha.. usay subki mahsus nahi hui thi. usay garv ho raha tha jack par..

jack -- hamari earth par samandar 70% plus hai. aur hamare scientist abhi tak only 5% hi samandaron ko khoj sake han.. kya meri ye information sahi hai.



jaidev ki sabse chhoti bua ki beti pihu jo jack ki umar ki thi.. wo bol padi..

pihu -- jack tumhari info ekdum correct hai.. mujhe dev bhaiya ke baare me aur batav na..

pihu zamane bhar ke shauk bhare bhav chahre par liye apni maa ke sath bethi boli..
jack ne usay dekha.. dekhta raha.. fir uske honto par muskan utar aai. jo pal bhar me hi gahri ho gayi..

jack -- pihu.. tum pihu ho naa..

pihu hairan hoke -- haan. main pihu hon.. tumhe mera naam kisne bataya..

jack uth ka nachne laga --- yaaaaaahoooo.. mil gai.. mil gai..

sab ke moh hairat se khul gaye. wo samjh nahi paye. jack aise kyu nachne laga. rahul ne usay bazo se pakad kar lavanya ke paas bitha dia..



rahul -- abe bandar ki aulad.. maskhari hi karta rahega ya sab batayega bhi.. ghante bhar se drama kiye ja raha hai. yahan hamara khoon itna tez daud raha ha.. ragon se bahar aane ko betab hai. aur tere drame han ki khatam hone me hi nahi aa rahe..

jack dhime lahje me bola --- mil gai.. mil gai.. mummy mujhe mil gai..

lavanya jack ko kandhe se thaam kar -- kya mil gai.. kon mil gai..

jack ne lavanya ko dekha.. fir pihu ko dekha. jo hairani se jack ko dekh rahi thi.. usay samjh nahi aai thi.. jack itna excited kis baat kar hone laga tha.

jack -- mummy mujhe mere sapno ki shahzadi mil gai.. mummy main pihu se shadi karunga.. mummy mummy main pihu se shadi karunga..

lavanya -- kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa??

sab -- kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

pihu astonished face ke sath bethi jack ko dekhne lagi. fir wo buri tarah sharmati hui apni maa ke seene me moh chhupa gai..

sab kuch der khamosh rahe.. firse wo bhara kamra sabki zordar hansi se goonj utha..

lavanya -- hehehe... jack tum... hehehe tumm..tumm bohut shararti ho..
pihu ki mummy jyothika -- hehehe.. bada aaya.. meri beti se shadi karega.. shakal dekhi hai kabhi aaine me..

arunita -- bua ji.. shakal ki baat na karen.. jack dev ki shakal me hai.. jack is samay dunya ka sabse chahre ke sath hai..

jack khushi se uchala aur jakar arunita ki god me beth kar apni bahen arunika ke gale me daal gaya.. arunita ke gaalon par kiss kar di..

jack -- i love you di.. mujhe yakin hai. aap meri shadi pihu se karwa kar hi dum lengi..

arunita -- hehehe.. zarur.. mere bhai ho tum jack.. tumhara mann hai pihu se shadi ka to main to fir zarur karwaungi apne bhai ki shadi pihu se.. main mere bhai ka dil to nahi tootne de sakti na..

pihu aur bhi sharam se laal hone lagi..

jyothika -- hehehe.. aise kaise.. bina ladki ki maa ki permision liye. bina sharten maane.. bina bheek maange tum kaise mujhse meri beti ka hath maang sakti ho apne bhai ke liye.. tumhara bhai heera hai to meri beti bhi croro me ek hai.. chand ka tukda hai meri pihu..kyu deepak maine sahi kaha na..

deepak -- bat sahi hai ki galat. par ab jack ne bol dia hai to ye shadi ab hoke ke rahegi..

deepak uthta hua ashok se bola -- chal ashok. shadi ki tayari karte han..

ek bar firse sab hasne lage.. pihu rone lagi..

jyothika -- chup kar aap sab. meri phool si beti ko rula dia. meri beti ko ye rishta manzoor nahi hai. aap jack ke liye koi dusri ladki dekh lo. kyu pihu beti.. sach me jack ke liye koi aur ladki dhund len hum sab.. vaise jack ke jaise tumhe puri dunya me nahi milega..

sab maze le rahe the. pihu bheegi ankhon se apni maa ko dekhne lagi.

jyothika -- batav.. haan kar doon.. tumhara aur jack ka rishta pakka kar dun..

pihu ko kuch samjh nahi aa rahi thi. wo bohut ghabra gai thi.. usne ek baar jack ko dekha.. jo usay meethi nazron se dekh raha tha. fir sabko dekhne lagi.. fir ekdum se haan me sar hilane lagi..

jack uth kar firse nachne laga. pihu firse apne mummy ke seene me chahra chhupa gai.. sab aur bhi khilkhila kar hasne lage..

saalon ka sara gham kuch hi ghanto me khatam hoke rah gaya tha.. kuch der aur masti chali.. fir jack se dev ke baare me aage ki kahani sunne ko kaha gaya..

is baar jack serious hoke bolne laga.. pihu bhi firse pure shauk ke sath jack ki baaten sunne lagi..

jack -- jaisa ki maine kaha.. earth par phele samandar me hazaron secrets ab bhi dunya ki nazron se chhupe hue han. aisa hi ek ilaka hai.. jahan insano ki bastiyan abad han. wahan har chiz neeli hai. ped pode. zameen asman yahan tak wahan suraj bhi neela dikhai deta hai.. wahan ki dhup aisi hai. na sardi ka ahsas hota hai aur na hi garmi ka ahsas.. wahan ka atmosphere kuch is prakar ka hai. wahan saans lene walun ke andar sea creatures ki jaisi capabilities paida hone lagti hai. kuch hi mahino me wo real me sea creature ban jata hai..

us din bhi usi basti ka ek couple wahan maujud tha. jahan dev bhaiya ko aap sabne mara hua jaan kar lohe se baandh kar samandar ki gahrai me phenk dia tha. bass unhi ne bachaya dev bhaiya ko. dev bhaiya ki saans ki bimari hi nahi gai. dev bhaiya chatan jitne powerful bhi ban gaye.. shark se tez swimmer ban gaye.. pani me octopus se bhi shaktishali ban gaye.. wahan rahne se dev bhaiya ki ankhen bhi neeli ho gai.. bhaiya raat ke ghane andhere me bhi din ke jaise dekh sakte han.

sui girti to bhi awaz sunaai deti... itni khamoshi chhaa gai thi wahan.. sab apni zindagi ki sabse hairan kar dene wali baaten sun rahe teh.. unka dev zinda hi nahi tha... aise roop me saamne aaya tha. koi kalpana bhi nahi kar sakta tha. upar se samandar me saans lene wale insano ka zikr hoa tha. unbelievable tha.. yakin karne layak nahi tha. par sabko yakin karna pad raha tha. jis desh me rahte the. us desh me bhi aise hazaron chamatkar maujud the...

sab mantramugdh hue jack se dev ki kahani sun rahe the.. jack uske bad ki baaten batane laga.. ship ko kaise bachaya.. finland ki royal family se parichay... dev ki pahle wali masumiyat fir trainning sab bata dia..

pihu hi sabse pahle boli -- jack.. dev bhaiya itne powerful han to fir dev bhaiya to fir finland ki royal family se bol kar mamu ko london wali jail se azad karwa sakte han..

sab pahle hairan bhi the aur khush bhi.. ab vikram singh ka zikr aaya to sab gham me doob gaye.. khushi ke is avsar par wo vikram ko bhul hi gaye the..

arunita sisakti hui -- batav jack.. jab dev itna sab kar sakta hai. to papa kyu ab tak kaid me han.. wo dev papa ko azad bhi nahi kar sakta.

jack -- karwa sakte han.. bhaiya ke liye ye kam chutki bajane jitna asan hai.. finland ki royal family ne bhi kaha tha dev bhai se.. par dev bhaiya nahi maaane..

lavanya sisakti hui -- kyu.. kyu nahi mana dev.. kya usay apne papa se mohabbat nahi rahi.. ya uske dil me apne papa ki kaid e tanhai ka jaan kar dard nahi jaga..

jack -- dev bhaiya aap ka beta ha mummy..

jack shamsher singh ko dekh kar bola -- dada ji dev bhaiya ki ragon me aapka khoon daud raha hai. kya wo kisi ka ahsan le sakta hai.. dev bhaiya ne royal family par itne ahsan kiye han. umar bhar wo dev bhaiya ka karz nahi chuka sakte.. aap sab ke jaise dev bhaiya ahsan karte to han.. par kisi ka ahsan lete nahi han.. sab kuch apne dum par hasil karne ki himmat wo khud me rakhte han.. dev bhaiya ne bass itna karwaya hai. london jail me papa ko wo sari facilities di ja rahi han.. jo ek royal parivar ke member ko di jaati hai..

bass ab kuch hi dino ka khel baaki hai.. fir papa bhi aap sab ke beech honge. dushmano ke sar bhi jhuk jayenge.. aur aap sabke sar bhi uth jaayenge. aur us unchai par ja pohnchenge.. us unchai tak dekhne wale peeth ke bal gir padenge.. aise hi han dev bhaiya.. isi waja se wo aap sab se pahle nahi mile.. kaise mil sakte han wo aap sabse.. jab tak wo papa ko azad nahi karwa lete.. aap sab ke jhuke sar nahi utha dete.. giri shaan ko badha nahi dete.. dushman ko unki, sabki nazron me zaleel nahi kar dete.. wo aap se kisi se bhi nahi milenge..

lavanaya roti hui -- fir to usay bohut samay lag jayega mujhse milne ke liye.. mera dil uske liye tadap raha hai.. usse kaho ek baar mujhse to aa kar mil jaaye.. mere dil ko karar aa jayega..

jack -- jahan itne baras wait kiya ha.. kya 8-10 din aur wait nahi kar sakti aap mummy.. kya aapki tadap parivar ke jhuke saron se badhkar hai..

lavanya tadap kar boli -- nahi jack nahi.. parivar hai to main hon. sab kuch hai. aur parivar shan ke sath hota hai. mere liye parivar ki sabse upar hoti hai. isi shan ko banaye rakhne ke liye to maayen apne jigar ke tukdon ko maidan e jung me jhonk deti han..

jack -- yakin rakhen mummy.. bohut jald.. bohut jald dev bhaiya apne iradon me safal ho jayenge.. tab tak main hon dev bhaiya ka chahra liya aapke dard ko kam karne ke liye aapke pass.

lavanya jack ko chumti hui -- haan tu bhi mera dev hai.. mera dusra dev hai tu... main intezar karungi.. jahan itne baras tadap li uske liye wahin kuch din aur sahi.. tum na batate to main to aise hi umar bhar dev ke bina jeene wali thi. nahi. main achhe dino ka intezar karungi..



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mecheal ne jan liya tha.. jaidev ek extraordinary ladka hai. jise wo dunya bhar se chhupana chahta tha. jaidev se usne baat kari.. karibi port tak ka fasla 4 din ka rah gaya tha. to micheal ne jaidev ko sabki nazron me chhupe rahne ke liye bol dia.. ship ke kai passengers har din jaidev ko dekhte rahte han. kaiyon ke mann me kai kai baten thi... jab ek pura din jaidev nahi dikha to pure ship par hungama mach utha. jaidev ko pure ship par talash kiya jane laga. par wo nahi mila..

is baat ka fayda micheal ne uthaya aur usne jaidev ko unki madad karne wala angel bata dia.. jo chupke se aaya aur sabko bacha kar wahan se gayab ho gaya. agle 3 din tak jab jaidev kisi ko nazar na aaya to sabne maan liya. jaidev sach me ek angle tha. jo unki madad karne ke liye aaya tha. madad karke nikal gaya..


finland royal family ke dono members ko micheal ne apne sath mila lia tha. wo ache log the. jab port karib aaya to jaidev chupke se samandar me utar sahil par ja pohncha.. wahin baad me usay micheal aur dono royal members mile.. immediately air tickets book karwai gai. aur 2 agle do ghanto me us country se nikal chuke the.. itni der me jaidev ek angel ki tarah har news channel par bataya jane laga tha..


finland pohnchne par jaidev ka bohut badhiya se sawagat kiya gaya..
Oye hoye hoye hoye maza hi aa gya padh kr kya behtreen update diya hai, pure ghar me hasi khusi ka mahaul ho gya hai...

Sabne Kai varso baad aisi khusi mahsus kiya hai ,jaha ek taraf lavanya ji jack ko apne gale lgaye huye hai vo use chhod hi nhi rhi hai, Vahi dusri taraf jack dev ki kahani sunate huye apni setting bhi karva liya, aaj bhale hi sab maze me Ise jyada tul na de rhe ho pr jack NE pihu ko dekh kr hi jo apna rista arunita ke madhyam se pakka karvaya hai or pihu ne bhi apni sahmati di hai usko dekh kr Lagta hai vo final ho gya hai...

Jack ne vo raaj bta diya ki kaise dev bcha or Finland pahucha vha ki royal family ke sath milkr, papa ke liye jail me royal treatment bhi provide karva diya hai or ab jald hi dev unhe chhudane vala hai jail se...

Idhar jack ne ek mukabla bhi kiya puri family ke samne Jisme Usne dev ki sikhai gyi bato ka prayog kiya or apni buddhi ka prayog kr dharashai kr diya, sabhi khush huye is karname me...

Superb jabarjast amazing lajavab updates bhai sandar mazedar...
 
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Super awesome update Aqua-man bhai lekin ye jack asliyat mein kon hai aur iska dev se kya rishta hai.kya flashback mein Jack apne baare mein bhi batayega....
 
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rana pratab singh aur thakur vikram singh dono bachpan ke dost the. dono ne ek hi parivar me shadi ki..thakur harmit singh ki do betiyan.. badi beti devika pratab singh ki patni bani.. chhoti lavanya vikram singh ki patni bani.. youn do jano ki jodi 4 jano me convert ho gai. pariravik business bohut badhiya tha. isi business ko badhane ke liye charon london sattle ho gaye. charon khub maze ki zindagi jeene lage. jahan charon ki dosti aur mohabbat misaal bani... wahin business ne bhi khub tarakki ki.






aaj 15 saal baad sab ek sath by sea india laut rahe the hamesha hamesha ke liye. apnu se bohut door rah liya.. ab baki ki zindagi sab ke sath jiyenge. aisa irada karke sab nikal pade the.
par kismat me kuch aur hi likha tha. insan jo sochta hai. wo hota nahi. jo nahi sochta wo ho jata hai.
raat ke akhri pahar bhayankar samandri toofan ne ship ko apni lapet me le liya.. jahaz tinke ki tarah samandr ki biphri lahron par hichkole khane laga. toofan ki bhayankar awaz me musafiron ke cheekhne chillane ki awazen mix hone lagi.
apne apne cabino me band pratab singh aur vikram singh apne parivar ke liye chintit ho gaye. aise bhayankar toofan me koi kisi ke liye kya kar sakta tha. 2 kadam chalna tak mahaal tha. fir bhi dono yaar milkar sath wale cabino me ja kar apne bachhu ko lekar apne cabino me ja ghuse..
maut ki dahshat ke wo kuch ghante bohut hi bhayankar beete.. subah hoi to tufan bhi tham gaya.
agli subah toofan ki asli tabahkari ka pata chala. jahaz ke arshe par, corrider me ja baja lashon ke dher dikhai de rahe the.




rat bhayankar toofan me jahan sab apni sudh budh kho bethe the. wahin ek vikram aur lavanya bhi the. jo apne hisab se apne bachu ke sath apne cabin me safe the. jaise hi subah hui aur sab ke hosh thikane aaye to lavanya idhar udhar dekhti cheekh padi..
lavanya -- jaidev.. mera dev.. vikram mera dev nahi hai yahan par..
lavanya phoot phoot kar roti hui boli. to vikram aur sabko pata chala.. jaidev sach me nahi hai..
sab ghabra gaye.
vikram -- pratab tum sab ko lekar arshe chalo. main dev ka pata karke aata hon.
vikram fir se dusre sath wale cabin me gaya. wahan gaya to pata chala jaidev to toote bed ke niche phasa pada hai. kai zakham aa chuke the usay.
jaidev ki aisi sthiti dekh vikram cheekh pada.. dev.. meri jaan.. vikram cheekhta hua bed ko utha kar jaidev ko bahar nikalne laga. jald hi vikram sfal bhi ho gaya. jaidev ke sharir ko bazuon me uthaye jaidev cabin se daudta hua bahar nikla..
vikram ki cheekh sunkar sab bhi bahar nikal pade the. sab jo arshe par jane ke liye nikal rahe the. vikram ki bahun me jaidev ko dekh kar cheekh pade. jaidev se badi teen bahne apne iklote bhai ko zakhmo se choor dekh kar phoot phoot kar rone lagi. lavanya to dhadam se gir padi thi. apni iklote bete ki aisi halat dekh kar uska dil dhadakna bhul gaya tha.. vikram ne jaidev ko pratab ko thamaya aur lavanya ko bahun me utha kar tezi se sab ko liye arshe par jane laga. raste me kai lashen padi dikhai de rahi thi. arshe par pohnche to wahan mela laga hua tha. har dusra person rota hua dikhai de raha tha.





captian ki awaz goonji-- sab khamosh ho jaayen. zakhmiyon ko, lashon ko alag karne me hamari madad karne. pure jahaz ko search karen. jahan bhi koi zakhmi ya lash mile. usay yahan laayen. dekhiye! is waqt hum sab ek jaisi pareshani ka shikar han. to kindly ye rona dhona kuch der ke liye stop kar den. kahin aisa na ho. ye rona dhona aur bhi badh jaye. jinko bachaya ja sakta hai. unko bachane me hamari madad karen.



baat sabki samjh me aa gai. bachho ko aurton ko chhod sab bhag khade hue aur apni madad aap ke sath kam par lag gaye. vikram aur bhanu pratab singh captain se mile usay lavanya aur jaidev baare bataya.
captain -- dekhiye main aap ki pareshani samjhta hon. main akela kuch nahi kar sakta hon. aap in dono ko wahan line me lita den. doctors ki quantity kam hai.. bari aane par wo inko bhi dekh lenge. kindly uparwale par bharosa rakhte hue hamara sath den. aur andar maujud zakhmiyon ko yahan laane me hamari madad karen.
pratab aur vikram ne pure privar ko ek jut kiya.. aur sambha kar dusro ki madad ke liye nikal pade.
agle adhe ghante me lavanya ko hosh aa chuka tha. jaidev ke sar par zakham aaya tha. uski halat bohut nazuk thi. doctor ne pray ke liye bol dia tha.
sabki ankhon ka tara jaidev ginti ki saanse le raha tha. sab ka ro ro kar bura haal tha.

safar firse shuru hua. ek hafte baad captain ne ship ke passengers me se khas logo ko apne pass bulwaya. jinme pratab aur vikram bhi the.

captain -- main ek afsosnak khabar hai. compas toot chuke han aur hum disha kho bethe han. isliye gentlemen mujhe mashwara do main kya karoon. hamare paas 110 din ka fuel ha. itne hi dino ki khurak hai. agar to do mahino me disha humen mil hati hai. to sab theek ha. dusri surat me hum in samandron me bhatakte rahenge aur fuel ke sath sath khurak ka stock bhi khatam ho jayega. fuel khatak ho jaye to hum ek jaga ruk kar kisi madad ka intezar kar sakte han. khurak ka stock khatam hua to fir hum nahi bach payenge. isliye mujhe mashwaro do. mujhe kya karna chahiye.




sab captain ki baat sunkar ghani chinta me aa gaye the. ab tak wo is baat se anjan the. samjhte the ek samandri tufan ke baad ab koi aur khatra nahi banega. par captain ki suni baat badi hi dahshatnak thi. pratab singh aur vikram singh ko apni backbone me sansanahat hi daudti mahsus hui. wo abhi jaidev ke liye chintit the. jahaz bhatak chuka tha. gahre aur anjan samandron me the. apni patniyon aur bachhu ke sath..


sab chinte me doobe sochon me gum ho gaye.. sab bade aur samjhadr the.. salah mashwara hone laga. aur ek team bana di gayi. ek team khurak ke liye to dusri team jo samandri safar ka tajurba rakhte the, unki banai gai. dusri team captain ke sath masroof ho gai. safar firse shuru hua. aur is baar ka safar kuch logo ke liye ronghte khade kar dene wala safar tha. agle ek mahine tak koi bhi ship nahi dikha to sab aur bhi ghabra gaye. captain ne jaan liya wo samandar ke un raston se guzar rahe han. jahan se kabhi koi ship guzarta hi nahi hai. ab to bass uparwala hi sabko bacha sakta tha.

27 dino tak neem behoshi me rahne ke baad jaidev ki saanse band ho gayee. in 27 days me kai zakhmi mare the. un sab ko samandar me phenk dia gaya tha.
jaidev ki saanse thami to lavanya aur sab dahaden maar maar rone lage. ship crew ne jaan liya ek aur maut ho chuki hai..

kuch minto me jaidev ke marit sharir ko bhi samandar ke lahron ke hawale kiya jane laga.
lavanya vikram ke pairon me gir padi-- nahi.. nahi mere dev ko machliyon ki khurak mat banao. vikram mere dev ko machhliyan nahi khayengi.. mera dev.. mere dil ka tukda..
wahi khada captain bola -- sorry madam hum kuch nahi kar sakte.. aapki hi nazron ke saamne humne kai lashon ko samandr ki nazar kiya hai.
lavanya captain ke pairon me pad gai -- kya iske sharir ko safe nahi kiya ja sakta.. main. main ise apne desh le jaaungi. wahan iska antim---
captain nirdai bante hue -- nahi... aisa nahi ho sakta.. aise to sabne kaha tha. sabki maanta to pure ship par lashon ka dher laga hota. aur epidemic ki waja se sab maare ja chuke hote.. sorry madam! ise phenke bina koi chara nahi hai.
sabki ankhon me darya bah rahe the.
lavanya -- ek ahsan kar sakte han kya aap is lachar maa par
captain- kahiye
lavanya-- mere bete ko bhari saman ke sath baandh kar phenk den. ho sakta hai niche narm mitti ho, ret ho. mere bete ka sharir usme dafan ho jayea. aise me wo machhliyon ke pet me jane se bach jayega.
lavanya ki baat vikram aur pratab ke dil ko lagi..
vikram singh ne hath jod diye -- sir! agar aisa ho sakta hai. ye dekhen hamare hath bandhe han aapke saamne.
captian ne kuch der socha aur haan me sar hila dia. kuch der me jaidev ke sharir ke sath uske wazan se kuch badhkar loha bandh kar usay samandar me phenk dia gaya.
lavanya apne jaidev ko samandar me girte dekh ek bar firse dhadam se gir padi thi. uspar qayamat toot padi thi. uske jigad ka tukda usse hamesha hamesha ke liye door ho chuka tha...





vikram aur pratab ko jaidev ki chinta thi. par ab baki sabki chinta badhkar thi. kyunki wo sab zinda the.. aur zindagi band muthi me ret ke mafik ghatti ja rahi thi..






safar jari raha aur 2 mahine beet gaye. par kahin manzil nahi mili.. lavanya uski betiyan, devika aur uske bachhe abhi tak jaidev ke gham me the. apni ghat rahi saanso se anjan the. maut ki aahat nahi sun pa rahe the.
par kismat me bakiyon ki zindagi likhi ja chuki thi. teesre mahine ke end hone se pahle hi ek ship dikhai de gaya. sab ke andar zindagi ki lahar daud gai. ship ko singal dekar rukne ko kaha gaya.
uske bad sari pareshaniyan khatam ho gai. compass, zaroorat ke mutabik fuel aur khurak us ship se lekar wo ship karib ki bandargah ke liye nikal pada. agle do mahino me jahaz mumbai port par tha. london se nikalne ke 6 mahino baad jahaz apni manzil par pohncha tha..


media aur sarkar ke sath sath aam logo se pura mumbai port khacha khach bhara hua tha.. wahan vikram aur pratab ke parivar wale bhi the.. lavanya apni maa ko dekh usse lipat kar dahaden maarti hui firse behosh ho gai..

sabne jaan liya.. lautne walun me jaidev nahi ha...


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wahin jaidev ke bhagy me bhi kuch hatke likha ja chuka tha. uski saanse ruk zaroor gai thi. par wo mara nahi tha. jaidev ke sath 4 saal pahle bhi aisa hua tha. jaidev ki saans ekdum se ruk si gai thi. usay hospital lejaya gaya tha. jahan uski ruki saans theek ho gai. pata chala tha. jaidev ko ek ajib bimari ha. jiske chalte uski saans ruk gai hai.

agle ek saal me jaidev ke sath kai bar ye ghatna ghati. kabhi adhe ghante ke liye to kabhi 40 minutes ke liye jaidev ki saans atki rahti thi. baad me jaidev normal ho gaya tha.
ship me uski saans ruki to koi soch bhi nahi saka tha. jaidev ki bimari firse laut aai hai. jaidev mara nahi hai. usi bimari ka shikar hua hai. aise me sabne usay mara hua samjh kar samandar me phenk dia tha....

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das varshy jaidev ki ankh khuli to usne khud ko neele rang ke narm lekin lachkeele patto par paya. jo pathar ke bane ek ek palang par biche the.. jaidev "maa" pukarta uth betha. tabhi ek ladki uske samne aai. jaidev usay dekh kar hairan hua.. ladki usse do saal badi dikhai de rahi thi. aur pure sharir alag alag rangon se rango hua tha. seena aur tangon ke beech ka area neele patto se dhaka hua tha. jo uske badan ke sath chipke hue the..neele patto ke jaise us ladki ki ankhen bhi neeli thi..

jaidev-- main kahan hon. tum kon ho..
wo jaidev ki bat nahi samjh paai. aur ankhen patpata kar hairat bhari nazron se jaidev ko dekhne lagi. wo jaise kho si gai thi jaidev ko dekh kar.. jaidev firse bola to uchhal padi.. aur cheekhti hui ajib se shabd moh se nikalti hui wahan se bhaag nikli..

jaidev bhi ghabraya hua tha. anjan jaga anjan ladki ke saamne tha. ladki bhagi to wo bhi uth kar usi raste se bahar nikal pada.. jaise hi jaidev bahar nikla.. wo ladkhada sa gaya. uski nazron ke saamne ki dunya sapno ki dunya thi. jahan tak nazar padti thi. wahan ka sab kuch neela tha. neeche zameen se lekar upar aakash tak sab kuch neela tha. door samandar nazar aa raha tha. wo bhi gahra neela tha. itna gahra neela ki jitna hamari dunya ke samandar ka rang bhi nahi tha.


niche zameen kahin dikhai de rahi thi. kuch fasle par neele rang ke pathar dikhai de rahe the... jaga jaga ped pode belen jo neele rang ke alag alag shades me the. kuch halke neele to kuch gahre neele.

jaidev-- hey bhagwan ye kya majra hai..
jaidev apne mathe ko masalte hue bola.. wo aur bhi zayada ghabra gaya tha.
jaidev -- maaa.. papa.. aunty.. uncle.. didi.. bhai tum sab kahan ho..


jaidev rota hua wahan pade ek halke neele rang ke pathar par ja betha.. aur sabko yaad karte hue rone laga.. jane kitni der guzri.. fir jaidev ne apne kandhe par ek hath mahsus kiya to geeli ankhon se sar utha kar dekha.. uske saamne kai chahre maujud the. sab ke sab doodh se bhi gore chitte.. sab ke sab rangon se range hue shariron ke sath the. sabke sharir ke gupt ang ajib neeele rang ke lachkeele patto se dhake hue the.


jaidev sabko dekh kar aur bhi ghabra gaya aur uth khada hua
jaidev-- mujhe meri maa ke paas jana hai. mujhe mere papa ke paas jana hai.
jaidev ki ankhon se bah rahe ansu uski chin par aa kar ikathe hue aur boondon ki surat niche tapakne lage.
pahle wali ladki tukar tukar jaidev ko dekh rahi thi. uski sath uski maa thi.. jiske chahre par bohut hi narm aur payar bhare bhav the. ankhon me mamta ka bharpur ahsas tha. usne jaidev ko apne seene se laga liya. ajib anjan bhasha me jaidev ko pachkarne laga.
jaidev aur bhi dara. par jald hi usay us mahila ke sharir se mamta ka sa skun milne laga. jaidev kuch der me shant ho gaya..



mahila ne jaidev ko khud se alag kiya aur usi pathar par beth kar jaidev ko apne sath bitha kar apni bhasha me baaten karne lagi. sab khamosh khade sun rahe the.
kuch ankhon me jaidev ke liye pyar bhare bhav the to kuch ankhon me hairat bhare..

jaidev ko mahila ki koi bhi baat samjh me nahi aa rahi thi. par bhavanaon ki bhi ek bhasha hoti hai. jise jaidev achhe se samjhne laga. jaane kaisa sukun tha mahila ke sparsh me. jo dhire dhire jaidev ke sharir me utarta chala gaya. kuch der me jaidev firse so gaya..

agli bar jaidev ki ankh khuli to usi kamre me tha. ab tak jaidev ne samjh lia tha. yahan koi bhi ghar zameen se upar nahi hai.. yahan ke sabhi ghar unchai par the. par the sabke sab zameen ke andar gufa ki surat me.. jaidev utha to usne sath ek dusre pathar par sabse pahle milne wali ladki ko sote dekha jo usse kuch hi badi thi. jaidev samjh gaya.. raat ka samay hai. kam roshni se bhi usne andaza laga liya tha. jaidev ko dar mahsus hua. wo utha aur ladki ke sath ja let gaya.
ek ajib sa skun tha is jaga. kuch der me jaidev ki firse ankh lag gai.. dusri subah uski ankh ek hasi se khuli.. jaidev ne dekha to wahi ladki ek kohni niche pathar wale bistar par tikaye hatheli par sar rakhe usay dekh has rahi thi.
kaise khanakti hui awaz theee.. jaidev uski hasi ke sahar me jaise jakadne laga. ladki firse hasi aur jaidev ke chahre par phoonk maar kar khilkhilati hui wahan se bahar jane lagi. jaidev jaise sammohit ho chuka tha uske masum chahre aur khanakti hasi ke karan. wo bhi utha aur uske piche jaane laga.

pahli bar jaidev ne suraj ko dekha tha. kal wo dhayan nahi de paya tha. ab dhayan diya to wo hairan rah gaya. yahan ajib chakkar tha. suraj tak usay neela dikhai de raha tha. dhup jo chhan chhan karti niche aa rahi thi. uski kirnen tak neele mahsus ho rahi thi. na yahan thand ka ahsas tha aur na hi garmi ka..


jaidev mantramugdh hua firse kudrat ke is haseen nazare ke sahar me madhosh hone laga..




yahan koi jaidev ki bhasha nahi samjhta tha. na jaidev kisi ko apni baat samjha sakta tha, sivaye isharon ke.. na hi dusro ki bhasha samjh sakta tha. apne parivar se door hone par usay bohut dukh tha. par yahan ka ajib aur surur bakhsh mahaul usay zayada der sad nahi rahne deta tha. jaidev sabko jald hi bhool kar mahaul ke sahar me kho jata tha. wo jald normal ho jata tha.



agle 6 mahino me jaidev ne yahan ki bhasha seekh li. har koi usay anjan bhasha bolte dikhai deta tha. mahaul ka aadi bana to mahino me hi wo bhasha seekh gaya.
tab usne jana, usay yahan aaye 7 mahine beet chuke han. matlab wo 1 mahina behosh raha tha. uski saans aur sar ke zakham ke chalte usay ek mahine tak behosh rahna pada tha. usay ye bhi pata chala ki usay koi aisi bimari thi, jiske chalte uski saans bohut der tak ruki jaya karti thi. jaiden ne apni bachpan ki bat bata di. fir to jaise jaidev ki bimari ko jad se khatam karne ke liye sab masruf ho gaye. sab jaidev ko apne parivar ka ek sadasy samjhne lage the.





jaidev ko is neeli rang wali dharti ki jo chiz sabse ajib lagi. wo thi yahan ke rahne walun ka pani bhi saans lena. jaise pani ke kuch jeeb pani aur khushki dono par rah lete han. aise hi ye insan bhi the. jaidev jan gaya tha. usay pathar se bandh kar samandar me phenka gaya tha. wo log lohe ke bare me nahi jante the. wahan jaidev ne lohe se bani koi chiz nahi dekhi thi. loha unke liye ek pathar hi tha.. jab jaidev niche gir raha tha. tab is basti ka ek couple samandar ke is area me maujud tha. unhi ne jaidev ko dekh jaidev ki madad ki thi. warna to kai machhliyan jaidev ko niche gahrai me girte dekh uske piche lapak padi thee..




waqt guzarta gaya aur jaidev jawan ho gaya.. wahan ke atmosphere ka ye kamal tha. wahan ke rahne walun ke sharir me naturally taur par bohut zayada changes aane lagte the. unke andar samandri jeevo ki si khasiyat paida hone lagti thi. wahan ki khurak, wahan ki oxygen, sab kuch change tha dusri dunya ki nisbat..


jaidev 18 saal ka hua to wo wahan ke rahne walun ke jaisa ban chuka tha. matlab insan hone ke sath sath samandri jeev bhi ban chuka tha. samandron me saans lena khana peena tak wo jaan gaya tha. kisi bhi samandri jeeb se tez wo swing kar sakta tha. bahar ki nisbat paani me uski shakti kahin badh jati thi. kisi aam insan ke liye uske khushki par ladna asan nahi raha tha. pani ke andar to wo bala tha. jaise wahan ke rahne wale. kisi vishal machhli ko maat de sakte the.. jaidev ki ankhen bhi unki jaise neeli ho chuki thee.







jaidev aaj kuch udas tha. usay rah rah kar apne parivar ki yaad aa rahi thi. wo ab apne ghar laut jana chahta tha. bohut saal beet gaye the. ab aur wo apne parivar se door nahi rahna chahta tha. ye bhi uska parivar tha. aur in sab ke liye bitaye kuch saalon ne uske dil me sabke liye beinteha mohabbat aur chahat bhar di thi. wo in sab ko bhi nahi chhodna chahta tha. par chhodna mukaddar tha...



shaam se kuch pahle wo laut aaya. jisse jaidev ko mamta mili thi. jaidev ja kar uski god me sar rakh kar let gaya gaya. mahila jaidev ke sar ke balon me ungliyan ferne lagi.
mahila - kya hua dev beta. tum aaj kuch udas ho.
jaidev bina uski ankhon me dekhe -- haan maa. mai udas hon. mujhe sab yaad aa rahe han. maa mujhe batao main kya karun. aap sab ko chhodne ka bhi mann nahi hai. par mujhe jana to hai na.
mahila bhi sisak padi -- haan beta. tujhe jana to hai. tu yahan ka nahi hai. chahe to yahan rah sakta hai. par yahan tera dil hamesha nahi lagega. tera dil apnu ke liye hamesha tadapta rahega..
jaidev -- yahi to dard hai mere dil ka maa. yahan se gaya to aapke liye tadapta rahunga..
mahila -- tu ab humme se hai dev beta. jab dil kare milne aa jaya karna.
mahila ka pati bola -- nahi poni dev beta ek baar gaya to laut kar nahi aa payega..
mahila -- sabura! aisa to na kaho. dev ke liye mera dil tadapta rahega. ise firse dekhne ko machalta rahega.
sabura - hamari is dunya ki suraksha ke liye zaroori hai. jab dev beta jaye to iski ankhon par patti bandh di jaaye. kabhi ye apni dunya me jaaye to hamari disha se anjan rahe. na ye kabhi aa sakega. aur na hi koi isse jaan sakega. bhool gai ho.. barson pahle kuch ajnabi hamari dunya me aaye the. aur hamare liye kitne khatarnak sabat hone wale the. hum milkar sab ko khatam na karte to hum kabke mar chuke hote ya unke ghulam bane ji rahe hote.
mahila hont bhinche khamosh ho gai. ye baat jaidev ne bhi sun rakhi thi.
jaidev sochne laga...sahi kaha tha baba ne. aisi swarg jaisi dharti par kisi anjan ka saaya bhi nahi padna chahiye..


kuch dino bad jaidev jane ke liye tayar tha. sab ankhen nam thi. sabse adhik maa aur shoni(wahi ladki jo sabse pahle jaidev ko mili thi) ki ankhen nam thi. wo dil hi dil me jaidev se pyar karne lagi thi. par na jaidev wahan ruk sakta tha. aur na hi wo jaidev ke sath ja sakti thi. ek jaidev ke liye wo sabko nahi chhod sakti thi. aur fir dunya us masum ke liye thi bhi nahi..



aahun siskiyon me jaidev ki ankhen ek khas kisam ke patte lapet kar band kr di gai. aur jaidev sabke sath milkar wahan se nikal pada.. kuch chahro par chinta bhare bhav the. kuch chahre jo jaidev ko wahan rakhne ke khilaf the. par insaniyat unke andar sahi maano me zinda thi. jaidev bacha na hota. sabko usse pyar na ho gaya hota to wo kabhi jaidev ko jaane na dete. jaidev ki ankhon par bandhi patti ke chalte unki chinta ghati bhi thi. fir bhi dilon me ek dar sa tha.

aur unka dar banta bhi tha.. dunya wale to khoj ke chalte dharti ka kona kona chhaanne ke liye tabahi barpa kar dia karte the. wo dharti ab jaidev ki dharti bhi thi. usne bhi soch lia tha. jaan de dega. par us dharti ke baare me ek shabd bhi apne moh se nahi nikalega.. jhooti mooti kahani ghad kar suna dega..


bohut door tak jaane ke bad jaidev ki ankhon par bandhe patte ki patti ko jab khola jane laga to jaidev bol pada..

jaidev -- nahi abhi patti mat utaaro.. mujhe malum hai yahan se wapis kaise jaya ja sakta hai.. aisa karo mujhe aur aage le jaao.. ghumate hue le jaao. mujhe kai chakkar do. taki mai main andaza na laga paaun.. main kis disha se aaya tha. sabko jaidev ki baat bohut pasand aai. wo jaidev se bohut khush hue. kitni fikr kar raha tha jaidev sabki.. vaisa hi kiya gaya. jaisa jaidev ne kaha tha..


jab jaidev ne kaha-- haan ab main koi bhi andaza nahi laga paunga. agar mere dunya me koi mujhe jaan bhi le lega na to bhi wo mere andar se sahi disha nahi jaan paayega..

patti utri... jaidev sabse bari bari milne laga. samandar ki gharai me bhavanaon bhara milan bada hi ajib tha.
kuch minto me jaidev fast speed ke sath tairta hua apni dunya ki orr badh raha tha. jaidev soch raha tha.. uske parivar wale jo usay mara hua samjh kar samandar ki nazar kar chuke the. usay firse apne beech jaan kar khushi se pagal ho jayenge. uski maa, uska papa uski bahne aur sab uske liye kitna tadpe honge.. jaidev apni tadap ke sath sath sabki tadap mitane ke liye jald se jald apne desh pohnch jana chahta tha.




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mumbai sahil se 10km door ek 25 manzila imarat.. jiske top floor ek kamre ki khidki ke pass rakhe ek table par 25-46x150 size ki ek badi aur latest binoculars rakhi thi. us binoculars ke piche bethi lavanya singh samandar ka nazara kar rahi thi. jab se uska beta jaidev usse bichhda tha. lavanya jaise sabse door ho gai thi. milti thi sabse. par uske honto ki hasi hamesha ke liye rukhsat ho gai thi.
hona to ye chahiye tha. bete ko samandar me phenk dene ke baad usay samanadr se nafrat ho jaati. samandar ne uske iklote bete ko nigal liya tha. par lavanya ko jaise puri dharti ke samandar me apne jaidev ki jhalak dikhai dene lagi thi. samandar ka nazara karna uske liye aisa tha. jaise wo samandar ko nahi apne bete dev ko dekh rahi ho. saalon se yahi uski routine thi. daily wo yahi aati aur shaam tak samandar par nazren gaadhe bethi rahti. shaam hote hi wo chali jaya karti.. jaane ko mann nahi hota tha. par raat me wo kuch dekh nahi sakti thi. teen betiyan thee. unhe bhi samay dena tha.
yahan usay bohut sukun milta tha. par aaj usse ye sukun aur suvidha bhi chhin rahi thi. 25 manzila imarat ka maalik jo saalon se vikram singh tha. ab iska maalik koi aur ban chuka tha.




bade logo ki dushmaniyan bhi badi hoti han. jo dhire dhire parwan chadti chali jati han aur tabahi phelati jati hai.



rana pratab singh ke sath bhi aisa hi hua. uske bhai ki ladai se shuru hui dushmani itni aage badhi.. kai jaano ke sath sath business ka bhi dher sara loss hua.. vikram singh ne uski madad kari. par wo jaidev ke gham ko apne andar se nikaal nahi saka tha. pure hosh aur jsoh se ladai nahi kar saka. aur pratab singh ke sath hui ladai me wo bhi lapet me aa gaya..


jaidev wali ghatna ke 3 saal baad vikram singh london gaya. par kabhi laut kar nahi aa saka. pratab singh ke dushmano ne vikram singh ko bhari drugs ke case me aisa uljhaya. vikram singh umar bhar ke liye salakhon ke piche kaid kar dia gaya..

jaidev ka gham kam nahi tha. vikram singh ke gham ne sabki jaise kamar hi tod kar rakh di. din prati din halaat bigadte chale gaye. aur aaj nobat yahan tak aa pohnchi thi. jaidev aur vikram ke gham ke baad lavanya ke paas ek zariye bacha tha sukun paane pane ka.. building ke top floor par binoculars ki madad se samandar ka door tak nazara karne ki suvidha bhi usse chhin rahi thi. dushmani ka asar chhote bade sabhi par hone laga. bachhu ke bahtar future ke liye paisa tezi se kam hone laga..

fir bhi sab itne strong zaroor the. dushman ki ankhon me ankhen daal kar ji rahe the. wo alag baat thi ki paise ki power ke sath sath political power aur manpower badi tezi se ghatti ja rahi thi.. ye ek bohut hi serious matter tha. jispar aksar bade mil beth kar charcha karte dikhai dete the..




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Nice update and a fantastic story plot... Best of luck bro
 
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