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Incest Jaidev --- The Merchant Of Death

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Some Characters Intro-----

shamsher singh-- 75 dev dada
gayatri singh -- 74 dev dadi

NO:1.. beta...vikram singh-- lavanya (dev parents)
dev sisters--- arunita(25) ashmita(23) ruchika(21)

N0:2 beta...ranveer singh -- sadhna(dev chacha) inke teen bete do betiyan han..

NO:3 beti...divyanka... ashok...(dev bua & fufa) 2 beti ek beta
NO:4 beti...jyothika... deepak..(dev bua & fufa) 1 beti pihu ek beta

rana bhairav singh-- 76
laxmi

pratab singh -- devika

2 bete 3 betiyan han
parerna(25) vijay(24) ruchi(22) rahul(20) chanchal(18)


harmit singh nana......
kaushalya singh nani...


characters bohut zayada han.. sabka intro dunga to khichdi ban jayegi.. zarurat ke anusar parichay deta rahunga..




aahun siskiyon ne sitting room ka naksha hi badal kar rakh dia tha. ladka jis ka naam jack tha. lavanya ke gale lage uski nazar ek side padi. wo lavanya se turant alag hua. lavanya abhi bhi ro rahi thi. jack se door nahi hona chahti thi.. jack se usay apne dev ki khushbu aa rahi thi.. par jack lavanya se alag hokar chalta hua ek mahila ke saamne ja pohncha.
jack -- aap mansi ho na..
mansi is haveli ki purani naukrani thi -- wo jack ko dekh boli -- haan main mansi hon..

jack ekdum se harkat me aaya aur uske hath me maujud mobile chheen liya.. mobile ko dekha... fir cheekh pada -- ye kabir ki jasoos hai.

mansi haklane lagi -- nn.. nahi nahi mm..main kisi ki jasoos nahi hon.
jack lavanya ko dekh kar -- mummy ye naukrani mansi apke dushman kabir ki jasoos hai... iske kapde utarwa kar iski talashi len.. iske paas kuch aur aisa ho sakta hai. jisse ye kabir ya uske uske admiyon se rabta kar sakti hai..fir pratab ko dekh kar bola -- papa naukaron me hariya aur guards me raman kabir ke jasoos han.. turant unko bhi kabze me le len. nahi to wo dev bhaiya ke zinda hone ki khabar kabir tak pohncha denge..

jack ki baat par kisi ko yakin nahi aaya -- papa.. dada ji plz der na karen.. nahi to gadbad ho jayegi.. teeno ki achhe se talashi len.. ye waqt hath se nikal gaya to hamesha ke liye loss uthana pad jayega.

lavanya hukam deti hui-- rahul.. vijay.. prakash.. tum sab khade kya dekh rahe ho.. mera beta jaisa kah raha hai. vaisa karo..


turant sab harkat me aa gaye.. haveli ki mahilayen mansi ko lekar ek kamre me gai aur uske kapde utarwa kar uski talashi lene lagi.. mansi jaise ghabra gai thi. sabko yakin ho chala gaya wo dushman se mili hui hai. hariya aur raman ko bhi khamoshi se dhar liya gaya. un ki bhi talashi li gayi.. raman ke paas ek transmitter mila.. mobile fone kam na karne ki surat me tranmitter par khas khabaren pohnchana uska kam tha.

teeno ko haveli ke tahkhane me band kar dia gaya.. sab bhi wahan ja pohnche. jack se milna aur dev ke zinda hone ki khabar ke sath sath haveli ke andar teen jasoos bhi hai.. is baat ne sabko hila kar rakh dia tha...


mansi, hariya aur raman teeno kursiyon pr bandhe bethe the. teeno khaufzada nazron se dekh rahe the.

hariya gidgidate hue -- mm... main gaddar nahi hon maalik..
harmit singh hariya ko adhik guse se dekh raha tha -- tu gaddar nahi to fir ghabra kyu raha hai.. bata.. kab se hamare dushman ka kutta bana hua hai tu

hariya -- bhagwan ki saugandh maalik.. mm.. mai gaddar nahi hon.

jack -- dada ji ye aise moh nahi kholega.. mere paas kuch aisa hai. jisse iska moh bhi khulega aur ye far far bolega bhi..

sab jack ko dekhne lage.. jack ne apni pocket se ek chhoti sheeshe ki bottle nikali. uske andar ajib tarah ke keede the... jack us sheeshi ko
sabko dikhate hue bade hi darawane andaz me bola -- ye samandar ki tah me paye jane wale bohut hi khatarnak keede han. ye insani jism me ghus kar khoon hi nahi chooste.. maas bhi khate han. dhire dhire inka aakaar badhta chala jata hai.. main ye keede in teeno ke upar daal dunga.. ye keede in teeno ke jismo me ghus kar apna kaam shuru kar denge.. dekhte hi dekhte inka sara khoon pi jayenge.. sara maas kha jayenge..

jack bade hi dahshatnak lahje me bolta hua teeno ke samne ja pohncha.. teeno jack ki baat samjh nahi paaye the.. jack english me bola tha. par keede dekh kar jack ke andaz se wo bohut kuch samjh gaye the.. jack ko karib aate dekh teeno cheekhne lage.. rehem ki bheek mangne lage. par inpar rehem karne wala koi nahi tha.. barson se gaddar bane sabko zabardast haani pohncha rahe the.


rahul -- sab sach sach bata do. nahi to ye keede tum teeno ka khoon pee jayenge. maas kha jayenge.. dhire dhire inka aakaar badhta jayega.. abhi samay hai.. sach ugal do.. ek baar keede tum teeno par aaye to fir inhe tum teeno ke shariron se koi alag nahi kar paayega..

jack ne dhakan kholna shuru kar dia.. pahle jo teeno apna moh band rakhe hue the.. cheekh chillla rahe the.. ab bepanah dehshat me aay cheekhte hue sara sach ugalne lage..

jack honto par muskan liye peeche hat gaya.. jahan sab jack ki is karni par khush the. wahin bohut zayada dukh me bhi the.. apne hi barson purane naukar gaddar ban gaye the..

rahul to pistol nikal kar teeeno ko shoot hi karne wala tha.. par jack ne rok dia.. kuch der me sab tahkhane se bahar the..

jack ne keedo wali sheeshi lavanya ke aage kar di.. lavanya ghabra kar piche hat gai.. jack ne haste hue dhakan khola aur un keedon ko apne haath par chhodne laga.. kuch cheekhe.. kuch bhagraye..

jack -- ye keede harmless han mummy.. bohut masum han.. wo to maine un teeno ko darane ke liye bola tha..


jack ek ek karke sare keedon ko pakad kar firse bottle me band karne laga. jab sab keede band ho gaye to lavanya se ja kar lipat gaya..

lavanya -- beta! mere dev ke baare me tumne sab nahi bataya..

jack smile se -- wo to maine apne bare me bhi nahi bataya.... fir thodi si narazgi jatata hua bola... kisi ne mujhse mera nam bhi nahi puchha..

lavanya pyar se usay chumti hui-- to ab bata do na.. mere dusre bete ka naam kya hai...

jack -- mera naam jack ha.. chalen andar chalte han. wahin baaten karenge..

sab ek bade kamre me ja pohnche.. haveli ke sare naukron ko satark kr dia gaya tha..

jack -- sabse pahli baat.. dev bhaiya ne kaha hai.. abhi mansi..hariya aur raman ko kuch na kaha jaaye.. un teeno ko zindagi ki zamanat ka lalach de kar kuch din zinda rakha jaaye.. wo teeno kabir se ya uske admiyon se rabte me rahte han.. aur dev bhaiya kuch dino tak kabir ko dhoke me rakhna chahte han.. kuch gaurds ko un teeno ki rakhwali par chhod den. jab bhi kabir ya uske admiyon ka fone aaye to apne saamne baat karwayen.. aise koi baat haveli se bahar nahi jayega. aur kabir dhoke me rahega..

aise hi jack ne dev ki kai aur indications dohra di.. jise sabne ghaur se suna ...

lavanya jack ko ek bar firse chumti hui -- mera dev kitna samjhdar hai.. ek ek baat par dhayan rakhta hai mera dev....

ab sabne yakin kar liya tha. jack sach bol raha hai.. dev zinda hai. ye bohut badi thi.. jitni hairankun thii.. utni hi khushi se labrez bhi thi. sabka mann ho raha tha. jack ko pakad kar chumna shuru kar den. usse dev ke bare me ek ek baat jaanen.. par lavanya jack ko nahi chhod rahi thi.. jaidev ki bahne, pratab ke betiyan aur bete to jaidev ke zinda hone ki khabar sunkar pagal ho uthe the.. jahan bohut zayada khush the. wahan ek dard bhi sabke dilon me jaag utha tha..

jack -- haan dev bhaiya bohut samjhdar han.. itne ki dunya ka mushkil se mushkil maamle me chutkiyon me solve kar lete han..

lavanya shauk se -- aur batao ne mujhe mere dev ke bare me.. wo dikhta kaisa hai..

jack ka moh theda ho gaya

lavanya -- aise moh kyu bana liya tumne jack beta.. batav na mera dev kaisa dikhta hai..

uttar me jack kuch aise bola -- kya bataun mummy main aapko.. dev bhaiya sar se adhe takle ho gaye han. ek ankh se bhenge ho gaye han.. hont aur gaal aise bhul gaye han.. jaise kisi madhumakkhi ke kaatne par soojan aa jati hai.. vaise hi dev bhaiya ka chahra bhi phoola hua hai.. ek taang thodi si chhoti ho gai hai. jab wo langda kar chalte han to bade ajib dikhte han.. dekhne wale dev bhaiya par awazen kaste han..

jack ne jaidev ki shakal o surat ka naksha aise andaz me khencha.. sabke moh khul gaye. fir ek dum se hansi ka tufan aaya.. dar o deewar goonj uthe.. barson baad haveli me hasi ka aisa tufan aaya tha. warna to sab hasna hi bhul gaye the..

dev ki badi didi arunita -- oye bandar ki aulad.. mera dev aisa bilkul bhi nahi dikhta.. 10 saal pahle wo kisi prince se kam nahi dikhta tha.. ab to koi uske jaisa hoga hi nahi.. sach sach bata.. kaise dikhta hai mera dev..

jack -- sach sach bata dun.

ashmita -- bohut hasa liya tumne humen.. hamare andar ke gham ko khatam karna tha.. wo tum khatam kar chuke.. ab hamare shauk ko pura kar.. bata mera dev kaisa dikhta hai..

jack ekdum se sharma gaya -- to fir thaam lijiye.. haaye main kis moh se dev bhaiya ki tareef karun.. aaj tak suna tha.. dunya ki sabse sundr ladki kisi road se guzre to dekhne wali ankhen hatna bhul jaya karti han.. koi gadi dirver karta hua us haseena ko dekhe.. to aage wali gadi ko thok de.. par mere dev bhaiya.. dunya ki sabhi haseen ladkiyon se hazaron guna badhkar haseen han.. aisa glow hai unke chahre par.. chand bhi sharma jaaye. aisi chaal hai dev bhaiya ki.. morni apni chaal bhul jaaye.. unki neeli ankhen dharti ki har ek chiz se badhkar sundr han.. itni kashish itni sundrta hai unki neeli ankhon me.. jo ek bar unki ankhon me dekh le.. dil tham le.. un ankhon me doob marne ko bechain ho jaaye..


jack ne ek bar firse jaidev ki charming personality ka naksha kamal ke andaz me khencha to is baar sab jaise dev ki kalpanik tasveer bana kar live dekhne lage.. sabke chahre chamak uthe.. kuch pal ko koi kuch bol hi nahi saka.

fir dev ki sabse chhoti didi ruchika boli -- oye.. itni mat phenk. lapetna mushkil ho jaye. sab jante han.. dev ki ankhen light brown thee.. neeli to thi hi nahi dev ki ankhen.. chal chal sahi se bata.. kaisa hai mera dev...


pratab ki beti bhavana boli -- bolne do na jack ko.. kitna meetha bolta ha.. kitne ache se dev ka parichay dia hai isne. kitna sukhad ahsas hua mujhe.. jack mere bhai.. kya sach me dev aisa hi hai. jaisa tumne kaha.

jack -- haan.. is bar main sach kah raha hon..

lavanya -- par mere dev ki ankhen halki brown se neeli kaise ho gayi..

jack -- jaise dev bhaiya zinda bach gaye.. vaise hi dev bhaiya ki ankhon ka rang bhi neela ho gaya..

kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa??

pratab-- ooo .. humne to pucha hi nahi.. dev zinda kaise bacha.. samandar ke us area me.. kahan hamara pura ship khatre se dochar tha.. dev ka zinda bach pana asambhav tha..

rahul -- bata jack.. dev kaise bacha..

yahan mela laga hua tha. sab ek sath nahi bol sakte the.. bade khamoshi se sara majra dekh aur sun rahe the.. wo sabar wale the.. jante the, chhote aur ghar ki mahilayen sabar nahi kar payengi.. kisi ko bolne nahi dengi. barson baad khul kr bolne ka avsar mila tha. wo sabko bolne dena chahte the.

jack -- koi mujhe batayega kyaa. india me koi gyani aisa hai.. jo aatmashkti me perfect ho. jo ghanton tak ya kai kai dino tak apni saanse rok sakta ho.

shamsher singh -- main janta hon ek aise hi mahagyani ko.. jo hafta hafta bhar bina saans liye sadhna me leen rahte han..

harmit singh -- main bhi ek bar gaya tha us mahagyani ke darshan karne.

dadi gayatri singh -- hamare apne parivar ke ek sadasy ne sansar tyag kar jog apna liya tha.. wo apni aatma ko apne sharir se alag karke sara sansar ghum liya karte the...

lavanya -- jack beta.. tumhari is baat ka matlab kya hua..

jack -- simple sa fanda hai mummy.. is dunya me jaise ser par sawa ser maujud han.. vaise hi is dunya ne insano ki kai kismen han.. kudrat ki banai is dharti me bhi hazaron lakhon secrets chhupe hue han. jinke baare me koi nahi jaanta.. aaye din kahin na kahin ye khabar sunne ko milti hai. kisi ne mermaid ko dekha hai. jisne dekha.. usne sach maan liya.. jo apni ankhon se nahi dekh saka. usne ise jhutla diya.. aise hi hamari tarah dikhne wale kuch insan aise bhi han is dharti me.. jo sea ceatures ke jaise samandar me saans bhi le sakte han aur kha pi bhi sakte han. sea creatures ke jaise swing bhi kar sakte han.. kuch to aise swimmers hote han. samandar ka koi bhi jeev uska mukabla nahi kar sakta..

pratab ka beta vijay piche khada tha. usne ek dhap maar di jack ke kandhe par..

vijay -- abhi kuch der pahle ruchika ne kaha tha na tujhse.. itni mat phenk. lapetna mushkil ho jaaye.. tu seedhe se batata hai ya tujhe utha kr niche pathak dun..

jack ekdum se uth khade hua.. vijay ko ungli dikhata hua bola -- apun se panga nahi lene ka.. apun dev ka chhota bhai hai.. samjha kyaa.. himmat se dev se bhaiya se kam hon main.. par aap se kahin badhkar hon.. aap mujhe kya utha kar patkhenge.. main hi aapko patakh dunga.. fir na haddi rahegi aur na hi pasli..

sab nanhe jack ko dekh uski baaten aur andaz par bohut lutf bhi utha rahe the.. sab zor se hasne lage...

vijay -- abe chalgoze.. saala dedh ungli ke jitna hokar mujhe ungli dikhata hai.....





harmit singh ko khamosh betha hua tha.. jack ko uskara hua -- shabash mere sher.. bata de is vijay ke bachhe ko. tu bhi mera pota hai.. patakh de.. main ijazat deta hon tujhe..

vijay - hahaha.. dada ji kyu iski haddi pasli tudwane ka mann hai aapka. abhi isne dunya me dekha hi kya hai. ji lene de ise do char din..

jack rahasmai muskan ke sath -- chalen fir ho jaaye.. dekhte han. kiski hadi pasli tootti hai.

vijay hairan hua -- lagta hai tu aise nahi maanega. tujhe sabak sikhana hi padega..

vijay saamne aa gaya.. jack do kadam piche hatkar vijay ke piche dekhta hua.. nahi rahul bhaiya vijay bhaiya ko main pichhadunga..

vijay jhonk me aa kar piche dekhne laga. jack turant harkat me aaya aur vijay ka ek bazo pakad kar uski tang me taang phansa kar vijay ko niche gira dia..

sab zor zor se hasne lage.. vijay niche leta hua ashcharyachakit sar ghuma ghuma kar sabko dekh raha tha.. jack firse lavanaya ke paas ja betha tha.. aur lavanya usay chum rahi thi..

lavanya -- ummmmha..meta beta.. tu sach much ka sher hai..

vijay hasta hua utha -- chalaki se.. hmmm.. beta.. aise kushti nahi ladi jati.

jack -- maine dev bhaiya se seekha hai. jahan mubakle par takat me koi zayada ho. wahan takat se nahi dimag se ladte han.

bhairav singh -- shabash mere sher.. tu sach me vijeta hai.. buddi wali bat kahi tumne..

lavanya -- chal ab bata.. kya bata raha tha tu dev ke baare me..

vijay bhi ek side beth gaya. usay jack par bohut pyar aa raha tha.. usay subki mahsus nahi hui thi. usay garv ho raha tha jack par..

jack -- hamari earth par samandar 70% plus hai. aur hamare scientist abhi tak only 5% hi samandaron ko khoj sake han.. kya meri ye information sahi hai.



jaidev ki sabse chhoti bua ki beti pihu jo jack ki umar ki thi.. wo bol padi..

pihu -- jack tumhari info ekdum correct hai.. mujhe dev bhaiya ke baare me aur batav na..

pihu zamane bhar ke shauk bhare bhav chahre par liye apni maa ke sath bethi boli..
jack ne usay dekha.. dekhta raha.. fir uske honto par muskan utar aai. jo pal bhar me hi gahri ho gayi..

jack -- pihu.. tum pihu ho naa..

pihu hairan hoke -- haan. main pihu hon.. tumhe mera naam kisne bataya..

jack uth ka nachne laga --- yaaaaaahoooo.. mil gai.. mil gai..

sab ke moh hairat se khul gaye. wo samjh nahi paye. jack aise kyu nachne laga. rahul ne usay bazo se pakad kar lavanya ke paas bitha dia..



rahul -- abe bandar ki aulad.. maskhari hi karta rahega ya sab batayega bhi.. ghante bhar se drama kiye ja raha hai. yahan hamara khoon itna tez daud raha ha.. ragon se bahar aane ko betab hai. aur tere drame han ki khatam hone me hi nahi aa rahe..

jack dhime lahje me bola --- mil gai.. mil gai.. mummy mujhe mil gai..

lavanya jack ko kandhe se thaam kar -- kya mil gai.. kon mil gai..

jack ne lavanya ko dekha.. fir pihu ko dekha. jo hairani se jack ko dekh rahi thi.. usay samjh nahi aai thi.. jack itna excited kis baat kar hone laga tha.

jack -- mummy mujhe mere sapno ki shahzadi mil gai.. mummy main pihu se shadi karunga.. mummy mummy main pihu se shadi karunga..

lavanya -- kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa??

sab -- kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

pihu astonished face ke sath bethi jack ko dekhne lagi. fir wo buri tarah sharmati hui apni maa ke seene me moh chhupa gai..

sab kuch der khamosh rahe.. firse wo bhara kamra sabki zordar hansi se goonj utha..

lavanya -- hehehe... jack tum... hehehe tumm..tumm bohut shararti ho..
pihu ki mummy jyothika -- hehehe.. bada aaya.. meri beti se shadi karega.. shakal dekhi hai kabhi aaine me..

arunita -- bua ji.. shakal ki baat na karen.. jack dev ki shakal me hai.. jack is samay dunya ka sabse chahre ke sath hai..

jack khushi se uchala aur jakar arunita ki god me beth kar apni bahen arunika ke gale me daal gaya.. arunita ke gaalon par kiss kar di..

jack -- i love you di.. mujhe yakin hai. aap meri shadi pihu se karwa kar hi dum lengi..

arunita -- hehehe.. zarur.. mere bhai ho tum jack.. tumhara mann hai pihu se shadi ka to main to fir zarur karwaungi apne bhai ki shadi pihu se.. main mere bhai ka dil to nahi tootne de sakti na..

pihu aur bhi sharam se laal hone lagi..

jyothika -- hehehe.. aise kaise.. bina ladki ki maa ki permision liye. bina sharten maane.. bina bheek maange tum kaise mujhse meri beti ka hath maang sakti ho apne bhai ke liye.. tumhara bhai heera hai to meri beti bhi croro me ek hai.. chand ka tukda hai meri pihu..kyu deepak maine sahi kaha na..

deepak -- bat sahi hai ki galat. par ab jack ne bol dia hai to ye shadi ab hoke ke rahegi..

deepak uthta hua ashok se bola -- chal ashok. shadi ki tayari karte han..

ek bar firse sab hasne lage.. pihu rone lagi..

jyothika -- chup kar aap sab. meri phool si beti ko rula dia. meri beti ko ye rishta manzoor nahi hai. aap jack ke liye koi dusri ladki dekh lo. kyu pihu beti.. sach me jack ke liye koi aur ladki dhund len hum sab.. vaise jack ke jaise tumhe puri dunya me nahi milega..

sab maze le rahe the. pihu bheegi ankhon se apni maa ko dekhne lagi.

jyothika -- batav.. haan kar doon.. tumhara aur jack ka rishta pakka kar dun..

pihu ko kuch samjh nahi aa rahi thi. wo bohut ghabra gai thi.. usne ek baar jack ko dekha.. jo usay meethi nazron se dekh raha tha. fir sabko dekhne lagi.. fir ekdum se haan me sar hilane lagi..

jack uth kar firse nachne laga. pihu firse apne mummy ke seene me chahra chhupa gai.. sab aur bhi khilkhila kar hasne lage..

saalon ka sara gham kuch hi ghanto me khatam hoke rah gaya tha.. kuch der aur masti chali.. fir jack se dev ke baare me aage ki kahani sunne ko kaha gaya..

is baar jack serious hoke bolne laga.. pihu bhi firse pure shauk ke sath jack ki baaten sunne lagi..

jack -- jaisa ki maine kaha.. earth par phele samandar me hazaron secrets ab bhi dunya ki nazron se chhupe hue han. aisa hi ek ilaka hai.. jahan insano ki bastiyan abad han. wahan har chiz neeli hai. ped pode. zameen asman yahan tak wahan suraj bhi neela dikhai deta hai.. wahan ki dhup aisi hai. na sardi ka ahsas hota hai aur na hi garmi ka ahsas.. wahan ka atmosphere kuch is prakar ka hai. wahan saans lene walun ke andar sea creatures ki jaisi capabilities paida hone lagti hai. kuch hi mahino me wo real me sea creature ban jata hai..

us din bhi usi basti ka ek couple wahan maujud tha. jahan dev bhaiya ko aap sabne mara hua jaan kar lohe se baandh kar samandar ki gahrai me phenk dia tha. bass unhi ne bachaya dev bhaiya ko. dev bhaiya ki saans ki bimari hi nahi gai. dev bhaiya chatan jitne powerful bhi ban gaye.. shark se tez swimmer ban gaye.. pani me octopus se bhi shaktishali ban gaye.. wahan rahne se dev bhaiya ki ankhen bhi neeli ho gai.. bhaiya raat ke ghane andhere me bhi din ke jaise dekh sakte han.

sui girti to bhi awaz sunaai deti... itni khamoshi chhaa gai thi wahan.. sab apni zindagi ki sabse hairan kar dene wali baaten sun rahe teh.. unka dev zinda hi nahi tha... aise roop me saamne aaya tha. koi kalpana bhi nahi kar sakta tha. upar se samandar me saans lene wale insano ka zikr hoa tha. unbelievable tha.. yakin karne layak nahi tha. par sabko yakin karna pad raha tha. jis desh me rahte the. us desh me bhi aise hazaron chamatkar maujud the...

sab mantramugdh hue jack se dev ki kahani sun rahe the.. jack uske bad ki baaten batane laga.. ship ko kaise bachaya.. finland ki royal family se parichay... dev ki pahle wali masumiyat fir trainning sab bata dia..

pihu hi sabse pahle boli -- jack.. dev bhaiya itne powerful han to fir dev bhaiya to fir finland ki royal family se bol kar mamu ko london wali jail se azad karwa sakte han..

sab pahle hairan bhi the aur khush bhi.. ab vikram singh ka zikr aaya to sab gham me doob gaye.. khushi ke is avsar par wo vikram ko bhul hi gaye the..

arunita sisakti hui -- batav jack.. jab dev itna sab kar sakta hai. to papa kyu ab tak kaid me han.. wo dev papa ko azad bhi nahi kar sakta.

jack -- karwa sakte han.. bhaiya ke liye ye kam chutki bajane jitna asan hai.. finland ki royal family ne bhi kaha tha dev bhai se.. par dev bhaiya nahi maaane..

lavanya sisakti hui -- kyu.. kyu nahi mana dev.. kya usay apne papa se mohabbat nahi rahi.. ya uske dil me apne papa ki kaid e tanhai ka jaan kar dard nahi jaga..

jack -- dev bhaiya aap ka beta ha mummy..

jack shamsher singh ko dekh kar bola -- dada ji dev bhaiya ki ragon me aapka khoon daud raha hai. kya wo kisi ka ahsan le sakta hai.. dev bhaiya ne royal family par itne ahsan kiye han. umar bhar wo dev bhaiya ka karz nahi chuka sakte.. aap sab ke jaise dev bhaiya ahsan karte to han.. par kisi ka ahsan lete nahi han.. sab kuch apne dum par hasil karne ki himmat wo khud me rakhte han.. dev bhaiya ne bass itna karwaya hai. london jail me papa ko wo sari facilities di ja rahi han.. jo ek royal parivar ke member ko di jaati hai..

bass ab kuch hi dino ka khel baaki hai.. fir papa bhi aap sab ke beech honge. dushmano ke sar bhi jhuk jayenge.. aur aap sabke sar bhi uth jaayenge. aur us unchai par ja pohnchenge.. us unchai tak dekhne wale peeth ke bal gir padenge.. aise hi han dev bhaiya.. isi waja se wo aap sab se pahle nahi mile.. kaise mil sakte han wo aap sabse.. jab tak wo papa ko azad nahi karwa lete.. aap sab ke jhuke sar nahi utha dete.. giri shaan ko badha nahi dete.. dushman ko unki, sabki nazron me zaleel nahi kar dete.. wo aap se kisi se bhi nahi milenge..

lavanaya roti hui -- fir to usay bohut samay lag jayega mujhse milne ke liye.. mera dil uske liye tadap raha hai.. usse kaho ek baar mujhse to aa kar mil jaaye.. mere dil ko karar aa jayega..

jack -- jahan itne baras wait kiya ha.. kya 8-10 din aur wait nahi kar sakti aap mummy.. kya aapki tadap parivar ke jhuke saron se badhkar hai..

lavanya tadap kar boli -- nahi jack nahi.. parivar hai to main hon. sab kuch hai. aur parivar shan ke sath hota hai. mere liye parivar ki sabse upar hoti hai. isi shan ko banaye rakhne ke liye to maayen apne jigar ke tukdon ko maidan e jung me jhonk deti han..

jack -- yakin rakhen mummy.. bohut jald.. bohut jald dev bhaiya apne iradon me safal ho jayenge.. tab tak main hon dev bhaiya ka chahra liya aapke dard ko kam karne ke liye aapke pass.

lavanya jack ko chumti hui -- haan tu bhi mera dev hai.. mera dusra dev hai tu... main intezar karungi.. jahan itne baras tadap li uske liye wahin kuch din aur sahi.. tum na batate to main to aise hi umar bhar dev ke bina jeene wali thi. nahi. main achhe dino ka intezar karungi..



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mecheal ne jan liya tha.. jaidev ek extraordinary ladka hai. jise wo dunya bhar se chhupana chahta tha. jaidev se usne baat kari.. karibi port tak ka fasla 4 din ka rah gaya tha. to micheal ne jaidev ko sabki nazron me chhupe rahne ke liye bol dia.. ship ke kai passengers har din jaidev ko dekhte rahte han. kaiyon ke mann me kai kai baten thi... jab ek pura din jaidev nahi dikha to pure ship par hungama mach utha. jaidev ko pure ship par talash kiya jane laga. par wo nahi mila..

is baat ka fayda micheal ne uthaya aur usne jaidev ko unki madad karne wala angel bata dia.. jo chupke se aaya aur sabko bacha kar wahan se gayab ho gaya. agle 3 din tak jab jaidev kisi ko nazar na aaya to sabne maan liya. jaidev sach me ek angle tha. jo unki madad karne ke liye aaya tha. madad karke nikal gaya..


finland royal family ke dono members ko micheal ne apne sath mila lia tha. wo ache log the. jab port karib aaya to jaidev chupke se samandar me utar sahil par ja pohncha.. wahin baad me usay micheal aur dono royal members mile.. immediately air tickets book karwai gai. aur 2 agle do ghanto me us country se nikal chuke the.. itni der me jaidev ek angel ki tarah har news channel par bataya jane laga tha..


finland pohnchne par jaidev ka bohut badhiya se sawagat kiya gaya..




 

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Some Characters Intro-----

shamsher singh-- 75 dev dada
gayatri singh -- 74 dev dadi

NO:1.. beta...vikram singh-- lavanya (dev parents)
dev sisters--- arunita(25) ashmita(23) ruchika(21)

N0:2 beta...ranveer singh -- sadhna(dev chacha) inke teen bete do betiyan han..

NO:3 beti...divyanka... ashok...(dev bua & fufa) 2 beti ek beta
NO:4 beti...jyothika... deepak..(dev bua & fufa) 1 beti pihu ek beta

rana bhairav singh-- 76
laxmi

pratab singh -- devika

2 bete 3 betiyan han
parerna(25) vijay(24) ruchi(22) rahul(20) chanchal(18)


harmit singh nana......
kaushalya singh nani...


characters bohut zayada han.. sabka intro dunga to khichdi ban jayegi.. zarurat ke anusar parichay deta rahunga..




aahun siskiyon ne sitting room ka naksha hi badal kar rakh dia tha. ladka jis ka naam jack tha. lavanya ke gale lage uski nazar ek side padi. wo lavanya se turant alag hua. lavanya abhi bhi ro rahi thi. jack se door nahi hona chahti thi.. jack se usay apne dev ki khushbu aa rahi thi.. par jack lavanya se alag hokar chalta hua ek mahila ke saamne ja pohncha.
jack -- aap mansi ho na..
mansi is haveli ki purani naukrani thi -- wo jack ko dekh boli -- haan main mansi hon..

jack ekdum se harkat me aaya aur uske hath me maujud mobile chheen liya.. mobile ko dekha... fir cheekh pada -- ye kabir ki jasoos hai.

mansi haklane lagi -- nn.. nahi nahi mm..main kisi ki jasoos nahi hon.
jack lavanya ko dekh kar -- mummy ye naukrani mansi apke dushman kabir ki jasoos hai... iske kapde utarwa kar iski talashi len.. iske paas kuch aur aisa ho sakta hai. jisse ye kabir ya uske uske admiyon se rabta kar sakti hai..fir pratab ko dekh kar bola -- papa naukaron me hariya aur guards me raman kabir ke jasoos han.. turant unko bhi kabze me le len. nahi to wo dev bhaiya ke zinda hone ki khabar kabir tak pohncha denge..

jack ki baat par kisi ko yakin nahi aaya -- papa.. dada ji plz der na karen.. nahi to gadbad ho jayegi.. teeno ki achhe se talashi len.. ye waqt hath se nikal gaya to hamesha ke liye loss uthana pad jayega.

lavanya hukam deti hui-- rahul.. vijay.. prakash.. tum sab khade kya dekh rahe ho.. mera beta jaisa kah raha hai. vaisa karo..


turant sab harkat me aa gaye.. haveli ki mahilayen mansi ko lekar ek kamre me gai aur uske kapde utarwa kar uski talashi lene lagi.. mansi jaise ghabra gai thi. sabko yakin ho chala gaya wo dushman se mili hui hai. hariya aur raman ko bhi khamoshi se dhar liya gaya. un ki bhi talashi li gayi.. raman ke paas ek transmitter mila.. mobile fone kam na karne ki surat me tranmitter par khas khabaren pohnchana uska kam tha.

teeno ko haveli ke tahkhane me band kar dia gaya.. sab bhi wahan ja pohnche. jack se milna aur dev ke zinda hone ki khabar ke sath sath haveli ke andar teen jasoos bhi hai.. is baat ne sabko hila kar rakh dia tha...


mansi, hariya aur raman teeno kursiyon pr bandhe bethe the. teeno khaufzada nazron se dekh rahe the.

hariya gidgidate hue -- mm... main gaddar nahi hon maalik..
harmit singh hariya ko adhik guse se dekh raha tha -- tu gaddar nahi to fir ghabra kyu raha hai.. bata.. kab se hamare dushman ka kutta bana hua hai tu

hariya -- bhagwan ki saugandh maalik.. mm.. mai gaddar nahi hon.

jack -- dada ji ye aise moh nahi kholega.. mere paas kuch aisa hai. jisse iska moh bhi khulega aur ye far far bolega bhi..

sab jack ko dekhne lage.. jack ne apni pocket se ek chhoti sheeshe ki bottle nikali. uske andar ajib tarah ke keede the... jack us sheeshi ko
sabko dikhate hue bade hi darawane andaz me bola -- ye samandar ki tah me paye jane wale bohut hi khatarnak keede han. ye insani jism me ghus kar khoon hi nahi chooste.. maas bhi khate han. dhire dhire inka aakaar badhta chala jata hai.. main ye keede in teeno ke upar daal dunga.. ye keede in teeno ke jismo me ghus kar apna kaam shuru kar denge.. dekhte hi dekhte inka sara khoon pi jayenge.. sara maas kha jayenge..

jack bade hi dahshatnak lahje me bolta hua teeno ke samne ja pohncha.. teeno jack ki baat samjh nahi paaye the.. jack english me bola tha. par keede dekh kar jack ke andaz se wo bohut kuch samjh gaye the.. jack ko karib aate dekh teeno cheekhne lage.. rehem ki bheek mangne lage. par inpar rehem karne wala koi nahi tha.. barson se gaddar bane sabko zabardast haani pohncha rahe the.


rahul -- sab sach sach bata do. nahi to ye keede tum teeno ka khoon pee jayenge. maas kha jayenge.. dhire dhire inka aakaar badhta jayega.. abhi samay hai.. sach ugal do.. ek baar keede tum teeno par aaye to fir inhe tum teeno ke shariron se koi alag nahi kar paayega..

jack ne dhakan kholna shuru kar dia.. pahle jo teeno apna moh band rakhe hue the.. cheekh chillla rahe the.. ab bepanah dehshat me aay cheekhte hue sara sach ugalne lage..

jack honto par muskan liye peeche hat gaya.. jahan sab jack ki is karni par khush the. wahin bohut zayada dukh me bhi the.. apne hi barson purane naukar gaddar ban gaye the..

rahul to pistol nikal kar teeeno ko shoot hi karne wala tha.. par jack ne rok dia.. kuch der me sab tahkhane se bahar the..

jack ne keedo wali sheeshi lavanya ke aage kar di.. lavanya ghabra kar piche hat gai.. jack ne haste hue dhakan khola aur un keedon ko apne haath par chhodne laga.. kuch cheekhe.. kuch bhagraye..

jack -- ye keede harmless han mummy.. bohut masum han.. wo to maine un teeno ko darane ke liye bola tha..


jack ek ek karke sare keedon ko pakad kar firse bottle me band karne laga. jab sab keede band ho gaye to lavanya se ja kar lipat gaya..

lavanya -- beta! mere dev ke baare me tumne sab nahi bataya..

jack smile se -- wo to maine apne bare me bhi nahi bataya.... fir thodi si narazgi jatata hua bola... kisi ne mujhse mera nam bhi nahi puchha..

lavanya pyar se usay chumti hui-- to ab bata do na.. mere dusre bete ka naam kya hai...

jack -- mera naam jack ha.. chalen andar chalte han. wahin baaten karenge..

sab ek bade kamre me ja pohnche.. haveli ke sare naukron ko satark kr dia gaya tha..

jack -- sabse pahli baat.. dev bhaiya ne kaha hai.. abhi mansi..hariya aur raman ko kuch na kaha jaaye.. un teeno ko zindagi ki zamanat ka lalach de kar kuch din zinda rakha jaaye.. wo teeno kabir se ya uske admiyon se rabte me rahte han.. aur dev bhaiya kuch dino tak kabir ko dhoke me rakhna chahte han.. kuch gaurds ko un teeno ki rakhwali par chhod den. jab bhi kabir ya uske admiyon ka fone aaye to apne saamne baat karwayen.. aise koi baat haveli se bahar nahi jayega. aur kabir dhoke me rahega..

aise hi jack ne dev ki kai aur indications dohra di.. jise sabne ghaur se suna ...

lavanya jack ko ek bar firse chumti hui -- mera dev kitna samjhdar hai.. ek ek baat par dhayan rakhta hai mera dev....

ab sabne yakin kar liya tha. jack sach bol raha hai.. dev zinda hai. ye bohut badi thi.. jitni hairankun thii.. utni hi khushi se labrez bhi thi. sabka mann ho raha tha. jack ko pakad kar chumna shuru kar den. usse dev ke bare me ek ek baat jaanen.. par lavanya jack ko nahi chhod rahi thi.. jaidev ki bahne, pratab ke betiyan aur bete to jaidev ke zinda hone ki khabar sunkar pagal ho uthe the.. jahan bohut zayada khush the. wahan ek dard bhi sabke dilon me jaag utha tha..

jack -- haan dev bhaiya bohut samjhdar han.. itne ki dunya ka mushkil se mushkil maamle me chutkiyon me solve kar lete han..

lavanya shauk se -- aur batao ne mujhe mere dev ke bare me.. wo dikhta kaisa hai..

jack ka moh theda ho gaya

lavanya -- aise moh kyu bana liya tumne jack beta.. batav na mera dev kaisa dikhta hai..

uttar me jack kuch aise bola -- kya bataun mummy main aapko.. dev bhaiya sar se adhe takle ho gaye han. ek ankh se bhenge ho gaye han.. hont aur gaal aise bhul gaye han.. jaise kisi madhumakkhi ke kaatne par soojan aa jati hai.. vaise hi dev bhaiya ka chahra bhi phoola hua hai.. ek taang thodi si chhoti ho gai hai. jab wo langda kar chalte han to bade ajib dikhte han.. dekhne wale dev bhaiya par awazen kaste han..

jack ne jaidev ki shakal o surat ka naksha aise andaz me khencha.. sabke moh khul gaye. fir ek dum se hansi ka tufan aaya.. dar o deewar goonj uthe.. barson baad haveli me hasi ka aisa tufan aaya tha. warna to sab hasna hi bhul gaye the..

dev ki badi didi arunita -- oye bandar ki aulad.. mera dev aisa bilkul bhi nahi dikhta.. 10 saal pahle wo kisi prince se kam nahi dikhta tha.. ab to koi uske jaisa hoga hi nahi.. sach sach bata.. kaise dikhta hai mera dev..

jack -- sach sach bata dun.

ashmita -- bohut hasa liya tumne humen.. hamare andar ke gham ko khatam karna tha.. wo tum khatam kar chuke.. ab hamare shauk ko pura kar.. bata mera dev kaisa dikhta hai..

jack ekdum se sharma gaya -- to fir thaam lijiye.. haaye main kis moh se dev bhaiya ki tareef karun.. aaj tak suna tha.. dunya ki sabse sundr ladki kisi road se guzre to dekhne wali ankhen hatna bhul jaya karti han.. koi gadi dirver karta hua us haseena ko dekhe.. to aage wali gadi ko thok de.. par mere dev bhaiya.. dunya ki sabhi haseen ladkiyon se hazaron guna badhkar haseen han.. aisa glow hai unke chahre par.. chand bhi sharma jaaye. aisi chaal hai dev bhaiya ki.. morni apni chaal bhul jaaye.. unki neeli ankhen dharti ki har ek chiz se badhkar sundr han.. itni kashish itni sundrta hai unki neeli ankhon me.. jo ek bar unki ankhon me dekh le.. dil tham le.. un ankhon me doob marne ko bechain ho jaaye..


jack ne ek bar firse jaidev ki charming personality ka naksha kamal ke andaz me khencha to is baar sab jaise dev ki kalpanik tasveer bana kar live dekhne lage.. sabke chahre chamak uthe.. kuch pal ko koi kuch bol hi nahi saka.

fir dev ki sabse chhoti didi ruchika boli -- oye.. itni mat phenk. lapetna mushkil ho jaye. sab jante han.. dev ki ankhen light brown thee.. neeli to thi hi nahi dev ki ankhen.. chal chal sahi se bata.. kaisa hai mera dev...


pratab ki beti bhavana boli -- bolne do na jack ko.. kitna meetha bolta ha.. kitne ache se dev ka parichay dia hai isne. kitna sukhad ahsas hua mujhe.. jack mere bhai.. kya sach me dev aisa hi hai. jaisa tumne kaha.

jack -- haan.. is bar main sach kah raha hon..

lavanya -- par mere dev ki ankhen halki brown se neeli kaise ho gayi..

jack -- jaise dev bhaiya zinda bach gaye.. vaise hi dev bhaiya ki ankhon ka rang bhi neela ho gaya..

kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa??

pratab-- ooo .. humne to pucha hi nahi.. dev zinda kaise bacha.. samandar ke us area me.. kahan hamara pura ship khatre se dochar tha.. dev ka zinda bach pana asambhav tha..

rahul -- bata jack.. dev kaise bacha..

yahan mela laga hua tha. sab ek sath nahi bol sakte the.. bade khamoshi se sara majra dekh aur sun rahe the.. wo sabar wale the.. jante the, chhote aur ghar ki mahilayen sabar nahi kar payengi.. kisi ko bolne nahi dengi. barson baad khul kr bolne ka avsar mila tha. wo sabko bolne dena chahte the.

jack -- koi mujhe batayega kyaa. india me koi gyani aisa hai.. jo aatmashkti me perfect ho. jo ghanton tak ya kai kai dino tak apni saanse rok sakta ho.

shamsher singh -- main janta hon ek aise hi mahagyani ko.. jo hafta hafta bhar bina saans liye sadhna me leen rahte han..

harmit singh -- main bhi ek bar gaya tha us mahagyani ke darshan karne.

dadi gayatri singh -- hamare apne parivar ke ek sadasy ne sansar tyag kar jog apna liya tha.. wo apni aatma ko apne sharir se alag karke sara sansar ghum liya karte the...

lavanya -- jack beta.. tumhari is baat ka matlab kya hua..

jack -- simple sa fanda hai mummy.. is dunya me jaise ser par sawa ser maujud han.. vaise hi is dunya ne insano ki kai kismen han.. kudrat ki banai is dharti me bhi hazaron lakhon secrets chhupe hue han. jinke baare me koi nahi jaanta.. aaye din kahin na kahin ye khabar sunne ko milti hai. kisi ne mermaid ko dekha hai. jisne dekha.. usne sach maan liya.. jo apni ankhon se nahi dekh saka. usne ise jhutla diya.. aise hi hamari tarah dikhne wale kuch insan aise bhi han is dharti me.. jo sea ceatures ke jaise samandar me saans bhi le sakte han aur kha pi bhi sakte han. sea creatures ke jaise swing bhi kar sakte han.. kuch to aise swimmers hote han. samandar ka koi bhi jeev uska mukabla nahi kar sakta..

pratab ka beta vijay piche khada tha. usne ek dhap maar di jack ke kandhe par..

vijay -- abhi kuch der pahle ruchika ne kaha tha na tujhse.. itni mat phenk. lapetna mushkil ho jaaye.. tu seedhe se batata hai ya tujhe utha kr niche pathak dun..

jack ekdum se uth khade hua.. vijay ko ungli dikhata hua bola -- apun se panga nahi lene ka.. apun dev ka chhota bhai hai.. samjha kyaa.. himmat se dev se bhaiya se kam hon main.. par aap se kahin badhkar hon.. aap mujhe kya utha kar patkhenge.. main hi aapko patakh dunga.. fir na haddi rahegi aur na hi pasli..

sab nanhe jack ko dekh uski baaten aur andaz par bohut lutf bhi utha rahe the.. sab zor se hasne lage...

vijay -- abe chalgoze.. saala dedh ungli ke jitna hokar mujhe ungli dikhata hai.....





harmit singh ko khamosh betha hua tha.. jack ko uskara hua -- shabash mere sher.. bata de is vijay ke bachhe ko. tu bhi mera pota hai.. patakh de.. main ijazat deta hon tujhe..

vijay - hahaha.. dada ji kyu iski haddi pasli tudwane ka mann hai aapka. abhi isne dunya me dekha hi kya hai. ji lene de ise do char din..

jack rahasmai muskan ke sath -- chalen fir ho jaaye.. dekhte han. kiski hadi pasli tootti hai.

vijay hairan hua -- lagta hai tu aise nahi maanega. tujhe sabak sikhana hi padega..

vijay saamne aa gaya.. jack do kadam piche hatkar vijay ke piche dekhta hua.. nahi rahul bhaiya vijay bhaiya ko main pichhadunga..

vijay jhonk me aa kar piche dekhne laga. jack turant harkat me aaya aur vijay ka ek bazo pakad kar uski tang me taang phansa kar vijay ko niche gira dia..

sab zor zor se hasne lage.. vijay niche leta hua ashcharyachakit sar ghuma ghuma kar sabko dekh raha tha.. jack firse lavanaya ke paas ja betha tha.. aur lavanya usay chum rahi thi..

lavanya -- ummmmha..meta beta.. tu sach much ka sher hai..

vijay hasta hua utha -- chalaki se.. hmmm.. beta.. aise kushti nahi ladi jati.

jack -- maine dev bhaiya se seekha hai. jahan mubakle par takat me koi zayada ho. wahan takat se nahi dimag se ladte han.

bhairav singh -- shabash mere sher.. tu sach me vijeta hai.. buddi wali bat kahi tumne..

lavanya -- chal ab bata.. kya bata raha tha tu dev ke baare me..

vijay bhi ek side beth gaya. usay jack par bohut pyar aa raha tha.. usay subki mahsus nahi hui thi. usay garv ho raha tha jack par..

jack -- hamari earth par samandar 70% plus hai. aur hamare scientist abhi tak only 5% hi samandaron ko khoj sake han.. kya meri ye information sahi hai.



jaidev ki sabse chhoti bua ki beti pihu jo jack ki umar ki thi.. wo bol padi..

pihu -- jack tumhari info ekdum correct hai.. mujhe dev bhaiya ke baare me aur batav na..

pihu zamane bhar ke shauk bhare bhav chahre par liye apni maa ke sath bethi boli..
jack ne usay dekha.. dekhta raha.. fir uske honto par muskan utar aai. jo pal bhar me hi gahri ho gayi..

jack -- pihu.. tum pihu ho naa..

pihu hairan hoke -- haan. main pihu hon.. tumhe mera naam kisne bataya..

jack uth ka nachne laga --- yaaaaaahoooo.. mil gai.. mil gai..

sab ke moh hairat se khul gaye. wo samjh nahi paye. jack aise kyu nachne laga. rahul ne usay bazo se pakad kar lavanya ke paas bitha dia..



rahul -- abe bandar ki aulad.. maskhari hi karta rahega ya sab batayega bhi.. ghante bhar se drama kiye ja raha hai. yahan hamara khoon itna tez daud raha ha.. ragon se bahar aane ko betab hai. aur tere drame han ki khatam hone me hi nahi aa rahe..

jack dhime lahje me bola --- mil gai.. mil gai.. mummy mujhe mil gai..

lavanya jack ko kandhe se thaam kar -- kya mil gai.. kon mil gai..

jack ne lavanya ko dekha.. fir pihu ko dekha. jo hairani se jack ko dekh rahi thi.. usay samjh nahi aai thi.. jack itna excited kis baat kar hone laga tha.

jack -- mummy mujhe mere sapno ki shahzadi mil gai.. mummy main pihu se shadi karunga.. mummy mummy main pihu se shadi karunga..

lavanya -- kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa??

sab -- kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

pihu astonished face ke sath bethi jack ko dekhne lagi. fir wo buri tarah sharmati hui apni maa ke seene me moh chhupa gai..

sab kuch der khamosh rahe.. firse wo bhara kamra sabki zordar hansi se goonj utha..

lavanya -- hehehe... jack tum... hehehe tumm..tumm bohut shararti ho..
pihu ki mummy jyothika -- hehehe.. bada aaya.. meri beti se shadi karega.. shakal dekhi hai kabhi aaine me..

arunita -- bua ji.. shakal ki baat na karen.. jack dev ki shakal me hai.. jack is samay dunya ka sabse chahre ke sath hai..

jack khushi se uchala aur jakar arunita ki god me beth kar apni bahen arunika ke gale me daal gaya.. arunita ke gaalon par kiss kar di..

jack -- i love you di.. mujhe yakin hai. aap meri shadi pihu se karwa kar hi dum lengi..

arunita -- hehehe.. zarur.. mere bhai ho tum jack.. tumhara mann hai pihu se shadi ka to main to fir zarur karwaungi apne bhai ki shadi pihu se.. main mere bhai ka dil to nahi tootne de sakti na..

pihu aur bhi sharam se laal hone lagi..

jyothika -- hehehe.. aise kaise.. bina ladki ki maa ki permision liye. bina sharten maane.. bina bheek maange tum kaise mujhse meri beti ka hath maang sakti ho apne bhai ke liye.. tumhara bhai heera hai to meri beti bhi croro me ek hai.. chand ka tukda hai meri pihu..kyu deepak maine sahi kaha na..

deepak -- bat sahi hai ki galat. par ab jack ne bol dia hai to ye shadi ab hoke ke rahegi..

deepak uthta hua ashok se bola -- chal ashok. shadi ki tayari karte han..

ek bar firse sab hasne lage.. pihu rone lagi..

jyothika -- chup kar aap sab. meri phool si beti ko rula dia. meri beti ko ye rishta manzoor nahi hai. aap jack ke liye koi dusri ladki dekh lo. kyu pihu beti.. sach me jack ke liye koi aur ladki dhund len hum sab.. vaise jack ke jaise tumhe puri dunya me nahi milega..

sab maze le rahe the. pihu bheegi ankhon se apni maa ko dekhne lagi.

jyothika -- batav.. haan kar doon.. tumhara aur jack ka rishta pakka kar dun..

pihu ko kuch samjh nahi aa rahi thi. wo bohut ghabra gai thi.. usne ek baar jack ko dekha.. jo usay meethi nazron se dekh raha tha. fir sabko dekhne lagi.. fir ekdum se haan me sar hilane lagi..

jack uth kar firse nachne laga. pihu firse apne mummy ke seene me chahra chhupa gai.. sab aur bhi khilkhila kar hasne lage..

saalon ka sara gham kuch hi ghanto me khatam hoke rah gaya tha.. kuch der aur masti chali.. fir jack se dev ke baare me aage ki kahani sunne ko kaha gaya..

is baar jack serious hoke bolne laga.. pihu bhi firse pure shauk ke sath jack ki baaten sunne lagi..

jack -- jaisa ki maine kaha.. earth par phele samandar me hazaron secrets ab bhi dunya ki nazron se chhupe hue han. aisa hi ek ilaka hai.. jahan insano ki bastiyan abad han. wahan har chiz neeli hai. ped pode. zameen asman yahan tak wahan suraj bhi neela dikhai deta hai.. wahan ki dhup aisi hai. na sardi ka ahsas hota hai aur na hi garmi ka ahsas.. wahan ka atmosphere kuch is prakar ka hai. wahan saans lene walun ke andar sea creatures ki jaisi capabilities paida hone lagti hai. kuch hi mahino me wo real me sea creature ban jata hai..

us din bhi usi basti ka ek couple wahan maujud tha. jahan dev bhaiya ko aap sabne mara hua jaan kar lohe se baandh kar samandar ki gahrai me phenk dia tha. bass unhi ne bachaya dev bhaiya ko. dev bhaiya ki saans ki bimari hi nahi gai. dev bhaiya chatan jitne powerful bhi ban gaye.. shark se tez swimmer ban gaye.. pani me octopus se bhi shaktishali ban gaye.. wahan rahne se dev bhaiya ki ankhen bhi neeli ho gai.. bhaiya raat ke ghane andhere me bhi din ke jaise dekh sakte han.

sui girti to bhi awaz sunaai deti... itni khamoshi chhaa gai thi wahan.. sab apni zindagi ki sabse hairan kar dene wali baaten sun rahe teh.. unka dev zinda hi nahi tha... aise roop me saamne aaya tha. koi kalpana bhi nahi kar sakta tha. upar se samandar me saans lene wale insano ka zikr hoa tha. unbelievable tha.. yakin karne layak nahi tha. par sabko yakin karna pad raha tha. jis desh me rahte the. us desh me bhi aise hazaron chamatkar maujud the...

sab mantramugdh hue jack se dev ki kahani sun rahe the.. jack uske bad ki baaten batane laga.. ship ko kaise bachaya.. finland ki royal family se parichay... dev ki pahle wali masumiyat fir trainning sab bata dia..

pihu hi sabse pahle boli -- jack.. dev bhaiya itne powerful han to fir dev bhaiya to fir finland ki royal family se bol kar mamu ko london wali jail se azad karwa sakte han..

sab pahle hairan bhi the aur khush bhi.. ab vikram singh ka zikr aaya to sab gham me doob gaye.. khushi ke is avsar par wo vikram ko bhul hi gaye the..

arunita sisakti hui -- batav jack.. jab dev itna sab kar sakta hai. to papa kyu ab tak kaid me han.. wo dev papa ko azad bhi nahi kar sakta.

jack -- karwa sakte han.. bhaiya ke liye ye kam chutki bajane jitna asan hai.. finland ki royal family ne bhi kaha tha dev bhai se.. par dev bhaiya nahi maaane..

lavanya sisakti hui -- kyu.. kyu nahi mana dev.. kya usay apne papa se mohabbat nahi rahi.. ya uske dil me apne papa ki kaid e tanhai ka jaan kar dard nahi jaga..

jack -- dev bhaiya aap ka beta ha mummy..

jack shamsher singh ko dekh kar bola -- dada ji dev bhaiya ki ragon me aapka khoon daud raha hai. kya wo kisi ka ahsan le sakta hai.. dev bhaiya ne royal family par itne ahsan kiye han. umar bhar wo dev bhaiya ka karz nahi chuka sakte.. aap sab ke jaise dev bhaiya ahsan karte to han.. par kisi ka ahsan lete nahi han.. sab kuch apne dum par hasil karne ki himmat wo khud me rakhte han.. dev bhaiya ne bass itna karwaya hai. london jail me papa ko wo sari facilities di ja rahi han.. jo ek royal parivar ke member ko di jaati hai..

bass ab kuch hi dino ka khel baaki hai.. fir papa bhi aap sab ke beech honge. dushmano ke sar bhi jhuk jayenge.. aur aap sabke sar bhi uth jaayenge. aur us unchai par ja pohnchenge.. us unchai tak dekhne wale peeth ke bal gir padenge.. aise hi han dev bhaiya.. isi waja se wo aap sab se pahle nahi mile.. kaise mil sakte han wo aap sabse.. jab tak wo papa ko azad nahi karwa lete.. aap sab ke jhuke sar nahi utha dete.. giri shaan ko badha nahi dete.. dushman ko unki, sabki nazron me zaleel nahi kar dete.. wo aap se kisi se bhi nahi milenge..

lavanaya roti hui -- fir to usay bohut samay lag jayega mujhse milne ke liye.. mera dil uske liye tadap raha hai.. usse kaho ek baar mujhse to aa kar mil jaaye.. mere dil ko karar aa jayega..

jack -- jahan itne baras wait kiya ha.. kya 8-10 din aur wait nahi kar sakti aap mummy.. kya aapki tadap parivar ke jhuke saron se badhkar hai..

lavanya tadap kar boli -- nahi jack nahi.. parivar hai to main hon. sab kuch hai. aur parivar shan ke sath hota hai. mere liye parivar ki sabse upar hoti hai. isi shan ko banaye rakhne ke liye to maayen apne jigar ke tukdon ko maidan e jung me jhonk deti han..

jack -- yakin rakhen mummy.. bohut jald.. bohut jald dev bhaiya apne iradon me safal ho jayenge.. tab tak main hon dev bhaiya ka chahra liya aapke dard ko kam karne ke liye aapke pass.

lavanya jack ko chumti hui -- haan tu bhi mera dev hai.. mera dusra dev hai tu... main intezar karungi.. jahan itne baras tadap li uske liye wahin kuch din aur sahi.. tum na batate to main to aise hi umar bhar dev ke bina jeene wali thi. nahi. main achhe dino ka intezar karungi..



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mecheal ne jan liya tha.. jaidev ek extraordinary ladka hai. jise wo dunya bhar se chhupana chahta tha. jaidev se usne baat kari.. karibi port tak ka fasla 4 din ka rah gaya tha. to micheal ne jaidev ko sabki nazron me chhupe rahne ke liye bol dia.. ship ke kai passengers har din jaidev ko dekhte rahte han. kaiyon ke mann me kai kai baten thi... jab ek pura din jaidev nahi dikha to pure ship par hungama mach utha. jaidev ko pure ship par talash kiya jane laga. par wo nahi mila..

is baat ka fayda micheal ne uthaya aur usne jaidev ko unki madad karne wala angel bata dia.. jo chupke se aaya aur sabko bacha kar wahan se gayab ho gaya. agle 3 din tak jab jaidev kisi ko nazar na aaya to sabne maan liya. jaidev sach me ek angle tha. jo unki madad karne ke liye aaya tha. madad karke nikal gaya..


finland royal family ke dono members ko micheal ne apne sath mila lia tha. wo ache log the. jab port karib aaya to jaidev chupke se samandar me utar sahil par ja pohncha.. wahin baad me usay micheal aur dono royal members mile.. immediately air tickets book karwai gai. aur 2 agle do ghanto me us country se nikal chuke the.. itni der me jaidev ek angel ki tarah har news channel par bataya jane laga tha..


finland pohnchne par jaidev ka bohut badhiya se sawagat kiya gaya..
Ye pahuche hum finland..😍...
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Some Characters Intro-----

shamsher singh-- 75 dev dada
gayatri singh -- 74 dev dadi

NO:1.. beta...vikram singh-- lavanya (dev parents)
dev sisters--- arunita(25) ashmita(23) ruchika(21)

N0:2 beta...ranveer singh -- sadhna(dev chacha) inke teen bete do betiyan han..

NO:3 beti...divyanka... ashok...(dev bua & fufa) 2 beti ek beta
NO:4 beti...jyothika... deepak..(dev bua & fufa) 1 beti pihu ek beta

rana bhairav singh-- 76
laxmi

pratab singh -- devika

2 bete 3 betiyan han
parerna(25) vijay(24) ruchi(22) rahul(20) chanchal(18)


harmit singh nana......
kaushalya singh nani...


characters bohut zayada han.. sabka intro dunga to khichdi ban jayegi.. zarurat ke anusar parichay deta rahunga..




aahun siskiyon ne sitting room ka naksha hi badal kar rakh dia tha. ladka jis ka naam jack tha. lavanya ke gale lage uski nazar ek side padi. wo lavanya se turant alag hua. lavanya abhi bhi ro rahi thi. jack se door nahi hona chahti thi.. jack se usay apne dev ki khushbu aa rahi thi.. par jack lavanya se alag hokar chalta hua ek mahila ke saamne ja pohncha.
jack -- aap mansi ho na..
mansi is haveli ki purani naukrani thi -- wo jack ko dekh boli -- haan main mansi hon..

jack ekdum se harkat me aaya aur uske hath me maujud mobile chheen liya.. mobile ko dekha... fir cheekh pada -- ye kabir ki jasoos hai.

mansi haklane lagi -- nn.. nahi nahi mm..main kisi ki jasoos nahi hon.
jack lavanya ko dekh kar -- mummy ye naukrani mansi apke dushman kabir ki jasoos hai... iske kapde utarwa kar iski talashi len.. iske paas kuch aur aisa ho sakta hai. jisse ye kabir ya uske uske admiyon se rabta kar sakti hai..fir pratab ko dekh kar bola -- papa naukaron me hariya aur guards me raman kabir ke jasoos han.. turant unko bhi kabze me le len. nahi to wo dev bhaiya ke zinda hone ki khabar kabir tak pohncha denge..

jack ki baat par kisi ko yakin nahi aaya -- papa.. dada ji plz der na karen.. nahi to gadbad ho jayegi.. teeno ki achhe se talashi len.. ye waqt hath se nikal gaya to hamesha ke liye loss uthana pad jayega.

lavanya hukam deti hui-- rahul.. vijay.. prakash.. tum sab khade kya dekh rahe ho.. mera beta jaisa kah raha hai. vaisa karo..


turant sab harkat me aa gaye.. haveli ki mahilayen mansi ko lekar ek kamre me gai aur uske kapde utarwa kar uski talashi lene lagi.. mansi jaise ghabra gai thi. sabko yakin ho chala gaya wo dushman se mili hui hai. hariya aur raman ko bhi khamoshi se dhar liya gaya. un ki bhi talashi li gayi.. raman ke paas ek transmitter mila.. mobile fone kam na karne ki surat me tranmitter par khas khabaren pohnchana uska kam tha.

teeno ko haveli ke tahkhane me band kar dia gaya.. sab bhi wahan ja pohnche. jack se milna aur dev ke zinda hone ki khabar ke sath sath haveli ke andar teen jasoos bhi hai.. is baat ne sabko hila kar rakh dia tha...


mansi, hariya aur raman teeno kursiyon pr bandhe bethe the. teeno khaufzada nazron se dekh rahe the.

hariya gidgidate hue -- mm... main gaddar nahi hon maalik..
harmit singh hariya ko adhik guse se dekh raha tha -- tu gaddar nahi to fir ghabra kyu raha hai.. bata.. kab se hamare dushman ka kutta bana hua hai tu

hariya -- bhagwan ki saugandh maalik.. mm.. mai gaddar nahi hon.

jack -- dada ji ye aise moh nahi kholega.. mere paas kuch aisa hai. jisse iska moh bhi khulega aur ye far far bolega bhi..

sab jack ko dekhne lage.. jack ne apni pocket se ek chhoti sheeshe ki bottle nikali. uske andar ajib tarah ke keede the... jack us sheeshi ko
sabko dikhate hue bade hi darawane andaz me bola -- ye samandar ki tah me paye jane wale bohut hi khatarnak keede han. ye insani jism me ghus kar khoon hi nahi chooste.. maas bhi khate han. dhire dhire inka aakaar badhta chala jata hai.. main ye keede in teeno ke upar daal dunga.. ye keede in teeno ke jismo me ghus kar apna kaam shuru kar denge.. dekhte hi dekhte inka sara khoon pi jayenge.. sara maas kha jayenge..

jack bade hi dahshatnak lahje me bolta hua teeno ke samne ja pohncha.. teeno jack ki baat samjh nahi paaye the.. jack english me bola tha. par keede dekh kar jack ke andaz se wo bohut kuch samjh gaye the.. jack ko karib aate dekh teeno cheekhne lage.. rehem ki bheek mangne lage. par inpar rehem karne wala koi nahi tha.. barson se gaddar bane sabko zabardast haani pohncha rahe the.


rahul -- sab sach sach bata do. nahi to ye keede tum teeno ka khoon pee jayenge. maas kha jayenge.. dhire dhire inka aakaar badhta jayega.. abhi samay hai.. sach ugal do.. ek baar keede tum teeno par aaye to fir inhe tum teeno ke shariron se koi alag nahi kar paayega..

jack ne dhakan kholna shuru kar dia.. pahle jo teeno apna moh band rakhe hue the.. cheekh chillla rahe the.. ab bepanah dehshat me aay cheekhte hue sara sach ugalne lage..

jack honto par muskan liye peeche hat gaya.. jahan sab jack ki is karni par khush the. wahin bohut zayada dukh me bhi the.. apne hi barson purane naukar gaddar ban gaye the..

rahul to pistol nikal kar teeeno ko shoot hi karne wala tha.. par jack ne rok dia.. kuch der me sab tahkhane se bahar the..

jack ne keedo wali sheeshi lavanya ke aage kar di.. lavanya ghabra kar piche hat gai.. jack ne haste hue dhakan khola aur un keedon ko apne haath par chhodne laga.. kuch cheekhe.. kuch bhagraye..

jack -- ye keede harmless han mummy.. bohut masum han.. wo to maine un teeno ko darane ke liye bola tha..


jack ek ek karke sare keedon ko pakad kar firse bottle me band karne laga. jab sab keede band ho gaye to lavanya se ja kar lipat gaya..

lavanya -- beta! mere dev ke baare me tumne sab nahi bataya..

jack smile se -- wo to maine apne bare me bhi nahi bataya.... fir thodi si narazgi jatata hua bola... kisi ne mujhse mera nam bhi nahi puchha..

lavanya pyar se usay chumti hui-- to ab bata do na.. mere dusre bete ka naam kya hai...

jack -- mera naam jack ha.. chalen andar chalte han. wahin baaten karenge..

sab ek bade kamre me ja pohnche.. haveli ke sare naukron ko satark kr dia gaya tha..

jack -- sabse pahli baat.. dev bhaiya ne kaha hai.. abhi mansi..hariya aur raman ko kuch na kaha jaaye.. un teeno ko zindagi ki zamanat ka lalach de kar kuch din zinda rakha jaaye.. wo teeno kabir se ya uske admiyon se rabte me rahte han.. aur dev bhaiya kuch dino tak kabir ko dhoke me rakhna chahte han.. kuch gaurds ko un teeno ki rakhwali par chhod den. jab bhi kabir ya uske admiyon ka fone aaye to apne saamne baat karwayen.. aise koi baat haveli se bahar nahi jayega. aur kabir dhoke me rahega..

aise hi jack ne dev ki kai aur indications dohra di.. jise sabne ghaur se suna ...

lavanya jack ko ek bar firse chumti hui -- mera dev kitna samjhdar hai.. ek ek baat par dhayan rakhta hai mera dev....

ab sabne yakin kar liya tha. jack sach bol raha hai.. dev zinda hai. ye bohut badi thi.. jitni hairankun thii.. utni hi khushi se labrez bhi thi. sabka mann ho raha tha. jack ko pakad kar chumna shuru kar den. usse dev ke bare me ek ek baat jaanen.. par lavanya jack ko nahi chhod rahi thi.. jaidev ki bahne, pratab ke betiyan aur bete to jaidev ke zinda hone ki khabar sunkar pagal ho uthe the.. jahan bohut zayada khush the. wahan ek dard bhi sabke dilon me jaag utha tha..

jack -- haan dev bhaiya bohut samjhdar han.. itne ki dunya ka mushkil se mushkil maamle me chutkiyon me solve kar lete han..

lavanya shauk se -- aur batao ne mujhe mere dev ke bare me.. wo dikhta kaisa hai..

jack ka moh theda ho gaya

lavanya -- aise moh kyu bana liya tumne jack beta.. batav na mera dev kaisa dikhta hai..

uttar me jack kuch aise bola -- kya bataun mummy main aapko.. dev bhaiya sar se adhe takle ho gaye han. ek ankh se bhenge ho gaye han.. hont aur gaal aise bhul gaye han.. jaise kisi madhumakkhi ke kaatne par soojan aa jati hai.. vaise hi dev bhaiya ka chahra bhi phoola hua hai.. ek taang thodi si chhoti ho gai hai. jab wo langda kar chalte han to bade ajib dikhte han.. dekhne wale dev bhaiya par awazen kaste han..

jack ne jaidev ki shakal o surat ka naksha aise andaz me khencha.. sabke moh khul gaye. fir ek dum se hansi ka tufan aaya.. dar o deewar goonj uthe.. barson baad haveli me hasi ka aisa tufan aaya tha. warna to sab hasna hi bhul gaye the..

dev ki badi didi arunita -- oye bandar ki aulad.. mera dev aisa bilkul bhi nahi dikhta.. 10 saal pahle wo kisi prince se kam nahi dikhta tha.. ab to koi uske jaisa hoga hi nahi.. sach sach bata.. kaise dikhta hai mera dev..

jack -- sach sach bata dun.

ashmita -- bohut hasa liya tumne humen.. hamare andar ke gham ko khatam karna tha.. wo tum khatam kar chuke.. ab hamare shauk ko pura kar.. bata mera dev kaisa dikhta hai..

jack ekdum se sharma gaya -- to fir thaam lijiye.. haaye main kis moh se dev bhaiya ki tareef karun.. aaj tak suna tha.. dunya ki sabse sundr ladki kisi road se guzre to dekhne wali ankhen hatna bhul jaya karti han.. koi gadi dirver karta hua us haseena ko dekhe.. to aage wali gadi ko thok de.. par mere dev bhaiya.. dunya ki sabhi haseen ladkiyon se hazaron guna badhkar haseen han.. aisa glow hai unke chahre par.. chand bhi sharma jaaye. aisi chaal hai dev bhaiya ki.. morni apni chaal bhul jaaye.. unki neeli ankhen dharti ki har ek chiz se badhkar sundr han.. itni kashish itni sundrta hai unki neeli ankhon me.. jo ek bar unki ankhon me dekh le.. dil tham le.. un ankhon me doob marne ko bechain ho jaaye..


jack ne ek bar firse jaidev ki charming personality ka naksha kamal ke andaz me khencha to is baar sab jaise dev ki kalpanik tasveer bana kar live dekhne lage.. sabke chahre chamak uthe.. kuch pal ko koi kuch bol hi nahi saka.

fir dev ki sabse chhoti didi ruchika boli -- oye.. itni mat phenk. lapetna mushkil ho jaye. sab jante han.. dev ki ankhen light brown thee.. neeli to thi hi nahi dev ki ankhen.. chal chal sahi se bata.. kaisa hai mera dev...


pratab ki beti bhavana boli -- bolne do na jack ko.. kitna meetha bolta ha.. kitne ache se dev ka parichay dia hai isne. kitna sukhad ahsas hua mujhe.. jack mere bhai.. kya sach me dev aisa hi hai. jaisa tumne kaha.

jack -- haan.. is bar main sach kah raha hon..

lavanya -- par mere dev ki ankhen halki brown se neeli kaise ho gayi..

jack -- jaise dev bhaiya zinda bach gaye.. vaise hi dev bhaiya ki ankhon ka rang bhi neela ho gaya..

kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa??

pratab-- ooo .. humne to pucha hi nahi.. dev zinda kaise bacha.. samandar ke us area me.. kahan hamara pura ship khatre se dochar tha.. dev ka zinda bach pana asambhav tha..

rahul -- bata jack.. dev kaise bacha..

yahan mela laga hua tha. sab ek sath nahi bol sakte the.. bade khamoshi se sara majra dekh aur sun rahe the.. wo sabar wale the.. jante the, chhote aur ghar ki mahilayen sabar nahi kar payengi.. kisi ko bolne nahi dengi. barson baad khul kr bolne ka avsar mila tha. wo sabko bolne dena chahte the.

jack -- koi mujhe batayega kyaa. india me koi gyani aisa hai.. jo aatmashkti me perfect ho. jo ghanton tak ya kai kai dino tak apni saanse rok sakta ho.

shamsher singh -- main janta hon ek aise hi mahagyani ko.. jo hafta hafta bhar bina saans liye sadhna me leen rahte han..

harmit singh -- main bhi ek bar gaya tha us mahagyani ke darshan karne.

dadi gayatri singh -- hamare apne parivar ke ek sadasy ne sansar tyag kar jog apna liya tha.. wo apni aatma ko apne sharir se alag karke sara sansar ghum liya karte the...

lavanya -- jack beta.. tumhari is baat ka matlab kya hua..

jack -- simple sa fanda hai mummy.. is dunya me jaise ser par sawa ser maujud han.. vaise hi is dunya ne insano ki kai kismen han.. kudrat ki banai is dharti me bhi hazaron lakhon secrets chhupe hue han. jinke baare me koi nahi jaanta.. aaye din kahin na kahin ye khabar sunne ko milti hai. kisi ne mermaid ko dekha hai. jisne dekha.. usne sach maan liya.. jo apni ankhon se nahi dekh saka. usne ise jhutla diya.. aise hi hamari tarah dikhne wale kuch insan aise bhi han is dharti me.. jo sea ceatures ke jaise samandar me saans bhi le sakte han aur kha pi bhi sakte han. sea creatures ke jaise swing bhi kar sakte han.. kuch to aise swimmers hote han. samandar ka koi bhi jeev uska mukabla nahi kar sakta..

pratab ka beta vijay piche khada tha. usne ek dhap maar di jack ke kandhe par..

vijay -- abhi kuch der pahle ruchika ne kaha tha na tujhse.. itni mat phenk. lapetna mushkil ho jaaye.. tu seedhe se batata hai ya tujhe utha kr niche pathak dun..

jack ekdum se uth khade hua.. vijay ko ungli dikhata hua bola -- apun se panga nahi lene ka.. apun dev ka chhota bhai hai.. samjha kyaa.. himmat se dev se bhaiya se kam hon main.. par aap se kahin badhkar hon.. aap mujhe kya utha kar patkhenge.. main hi aapko patakh dunga.. fir na haddi rahegi aur na hi pasli..

sab nanhe jack ko dekh uski baaten aur andaz par bohut lutf bhi utha rahe the.. sab zor se hasne lage...

vijay -- abe chalgoze.. saala dedh ungli ke jitna hokar mujhe ungli dikhata hai.....





harmit singh ko khamosh betha hua tha.. jack ko uskara hua -- shabash mere sher.. bata de is vijay ke bachhe ko. tu bhi mera pota hai.. patakh de.. main ijazat deta hon tujhe..

vijay - hahaha.. dada ji kyu iski haddi pasli tudwane ka mann hai aapka. abhi isne dunya me dekha hi kya hai. ji lene de ise do char din..

jack rahasmai muskan ke sath -- chalen fir ho jaaye.. dekhte han. kiski hadi pasli tootti hai.

vijay hairan hua -- lagta hai tu aise nahi maanega. tujhe sabak sikhana hi padega..

vijay saamne aa gaya.. jack do kadam piche hatkar vijay ke piche dekhta hua.. nahi rahul bhaiya vijay bhaiya ko main pichhadunga..

vijay jhonk me aa kar piche dekhne laga. jack turant harkat me aaya aur vijay ka ek bazo pakad kar uski tang me taang phansa kar vijay ko niche gira dia..

sab zor zor se hasne lage.. vijay niche leta hua ashcharyachakit sar ghuma ghuma kar sabko dekh raha tha.. jack firse lavanaya ke paas ja betha tha.. aur lavanya usay chum rahi thi..

lavanya -- ummmmha..meta beta.. tu sach much ka sher hai..

vijay hasta hua utha -- chalaki se.. hmmm.. beta.. aise kushti nahi ladi jati.

jack -- maine dev bhaiya se seekha hai. jahan mubakle par takat me koi zayada ho. wahan takat se nahi dimag se ladte han.

bhairav singh -- shabash mere sher.. tu sach me vijeta hai.. buddi wali bat kahi tumne..

lavanya -- chal ab bata.. kya bata raha tha tu dev ke baare me..

vijay bhi ek side beth gaya. usay jack par bohut pyar aa raha tha.. usay subki mahsus nahi hui thi. usay garv ho raha tha jack par..

jack -- hamari earth par samandar 70% plus hai. aur hamare scientist abhi tak only 5% hi samandaron ko khoj sake han.. kya meri ye information sahi hai.



jaidev ki sabse chhoti bua ki beti pihu jo jack ki umar ki thi.. wo bol padi..

pihu -- jack tumhari info ekdum correct hai.. mujhe dev bhaiya ke baare me aur batav na..

pihu zamane bhar ke shauk bhare bhav chahre par liye apni maa ke sath bethi boli..
jack ne usay dekha.. dekhta raha.. fir uske honto par muskan utar aai. jo pal bhar me hi gahri ho gayi..

jack -- pihu.. tum pihu ho naa..

pihu hairan hoke -- haan. main pihu hon.. tumhe mera naam kisne bataya..

jack uth ka nachne laga --- yaaaaaahoooo.. mil gai.. mil gai..

sab ke moh hairat se khul gaye. wo samjh nahi paye. jack aise kyu nachne laga. rahul ne usay bazo se pakad kar lavanya ke paas bitha dia..



rahul -- abe bandar ki aulad.. maskhari hi karta rahega ya sab batayega bhi.. ghante bhar se drama kiye ja raha hai. yahan hamara khoon itna tez daud raha ha.. ragon se bahar aane ko betab hai. aur tere drame han ki khatam hone me hi nahi aa rahe..

jack dhime lahje me bola --- mil gai.. mil gai.. mummy mujhe mil gai..

lavanya jack ko kandhe se thaam kar -- kya mil gai.. kon mil gai..

jack ne lavanya ko dekha.. fir pihu ko dekha. jo hairani se jack ko dekh rahi thi.. usay samjh nahi aai thi.. jack itna excited kis baat kar hone laga tha.

jack -- mummy mujhe mere sapno ki shahzadi mil gai.. mummy main pihu se shadi karunga.. mummy mummy main pihu se shadi karunga..

lavanya -- kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa??

sab -- kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

pihu astonished face ke sath bethi jack ko dekhne lagi. fir wo buri tarah sharmati hui apni maa ke seene me moh chhupa gai..

sab kuch der khamosh rahe.. firse wo bhara kamra sabki zordar hansi se goonj utha..

lavanya -- hehehe... jack tum... hehehe tumm..tumm bohut shararti ho..
pihu ki mummy jyothika -- hehehe.. bada aaya.. meri beti se shadi karega.. shakal dekhi hai kabhi aaine me..

arunita -- bua ji.. shakal ki baat na karen.. jack dev ki shakal me hai.. jack is samay dunya ka sabse chahre ke sath hai..

jack khushi se uchala aur jakar arunita ki god me beth kar apni bahen arunika ke gale me daal gaya.. arunita ke gaalon par kiss kar di..

jack -- i love you di.. mujhe yakin hai. aap meri shadi pihu se karwa kar hi dum lengi..

arunita -- hehehe.. zarur.. mere bhai ho tum jack.. tumhara mann hai pihu se shadi ka to main to fir zarur karwaungi apne bhai ki shadi pihu se.. main mere bhai ka dil to nahi tootne de sakti na..

pihu aur bhi sharam se laal hone lagi..

jyothika -- hehehe.. aise kaise.. bina ladki ki maa ki permision liye. bina sharten maane.. bina bheek maange tum kaise mujhse meri beti ka hath maang sakti ho apne bhai ke liye.. tumhara bhai heera hai to meri beti bhi croro me ek hai.. chand ka tukda hai meri pihu..kyu deepak maine sahi kaha na..

deepak -- bat sahi hai ki galat. par ab jack ne bol dia hai to ye shadi ab hoke ke rahegi..

deepak uthta hua ashok se bola -- chal ashok. shadi ki tayari karte han..

ek bar firse sab hasne lage.. pihu rone lagi..

jyothika -- chup kar aap sab. meri phool si beti ko rula dia. meri beti ko ye rishta manzoor nahi hai. aap jack ke liye koi dusri ladki dekh lo. kyu pihu beti.. sach me jack ke liye koi aur ladki dhund len hum sab.. vaise jack ke jaise tumhe puri dunya me nahi milega..

sab maze le rahe the. pihu bheegi ankhon se apni maa ko dekhne lagi.

jyothika -- batav.. haan kar doon.. tumhara aur jack ka rishta pakka kar dun..

pihu ko kuch samjh nahi aa rahi thi. wo bohut ghabra gai thi.. usne ek baar jack ko dekha.. jo usay meethi nazron se dekh raha tha. fir sabko dekhne lagi.. fir ekdum se haan me sar hilane lagi..

jack uth kar firse nachne laga. pihu firse apne mummy ke seene me chahra chhupa gai.. sab aur bhi khilkhila kar hasne lage..

saalon ka sara gham kuch hi ghanto me khatam hoke rah gaya tha.. kuch der aur masti chali.. fir jack se dev ke baare me aage ki kahani sunne ko kaha gaya..

is baar jack serious hoke bolne laga.. pihu bhi firse pure shauk ke sath jack ki baaten sunne lagi..

jack -- jaisa ki maine kaha.. earth par phele samandar me hazaron secrets ab bhi dunya ki nazron se chhupe hue han. aisa hi ek ilaka hai.. jahan insano ki bastiyan abad han. wahan har chiz neeli hai. ped pode. zameen asman yahan tak wahan suraj bhi neela dikhai deta hai.. wahan ki dhup aisi hai. na sardi ka ahsas hota hai aur na hi garmi ka ahsas.. wahan ka atmosphere kuch is prakar ka hai. wahan saans lene walun ke andar sea creatures ki jaisi capabilities paida hone lagti hai. kuch hi mahino me wo real me sea creature ban jata hai..

us din bhi usi basti ka ek couple wahan maujud tha. jahan dev bhaiya ko aap sabne mara hua jaan kar lohe se baandh kar samandar ki gahrai me phenk dia tha. bass unhi ne bachaya dev bhaiya ko. dev bhaiya ki saans ki bimari hi nahi gai. dev bhaiya chatan jitne powerful bhi ban gaye.. shark se tez swimmer ban gaye.. pani me octopus se bhi shaktishali ban gaye.. wahan rahne se dev bhaiya ki ankhen bhi neeli ho gai.. bhaiya raat ke ghane andhere me bhi din ke jaise dekh sakte han.

sui girti to bhi awaz sunaai deti... itni khamoshi chhaa gai thi wahan.. sab apni zindagi ki sabse hairan kar dene wali baaten sun rahe teh.. unka dev zinda hi nahi tha... aise roop me saamne aaya tha. koi kalpana bhi nahi kar sakta tha. upar se samandar me saans lene wale insano ka zikr hoa tha. unbelievable tha.. yakin karne layak nahi tha. par sabko yakin karna pad raha tha. jis desh me rahte the. us desh me bhi aise hazaron chamatkar maujud the...

sab mantramugdh hue jack se dev ki kahani sun rahe the.. jack uske bad ki baaten batane laga.. ship ko kaise bachaya.. finland ki royal family se parichay... dev ki pahle wali masumiyat fir trainning sab bata dia..

pihu hi sabse pahle boli -- jack.. dev bhaiya itne powerful han to fir dev bhaiya to fir finland ki royal family se bol kar mamu ko london wali jail se azad karwa sakte han..

sab pahle hairan bhi the aur khush bhi.. ab vikram singh ka zikr aaya to sab gham me doob gaye.. khushi ke is avsar par wo vikram ko bhul hi gaye the..

arunita sisakti hui -- batav jack.. jab dev itna sab kar sakta hai. to papa kyu ab tak kaid me han.. wo dev papa ko azad bhi nahi kar sakta.

jack -- karwa sakte han.. bhaiya ke liye ye kam chutki bajane jitna asan hai.. finland ki royal family ne bhi kaha tha dev bhai se.. par dev bhaiya nahi maaane..

lavanya sisakti hui -- kyu.. kyu nahi mana dev.. kya usay apne papa se mohabbat nahi rahi.. ya uske dil me apne papa ki kaid e tanhai ka jaan kar dard nahi jaga..

jack -- dev bhaiya aap ka beta ha mummy..

jack shamsher singh ko dekh kar bola -- dada ji dev bhaiya ki ragon me aapka khoon daud raha hai. kya wo kisi ka ahsan le sakta hai.. dev bhaiya ne royal family par itne ahsan kiye han. umar bhar wo dev bhaiya ka karz nahi chuka sakte.. aap sab ke jaise dev bhaiya ahsan karte to han.. par kisi ka ahsan lete nahi han.. sab kuch apne dum par hasil karne ki himmat wo khud me rakhte han.. dev bhaiya ne bass itna karwaya hai. london jail me papa ko wo sari facilities di ja rahi han.. jo ek royal parivar ke member ko di jaati hai..

bass ab kuch hi dino ka khel baaki hai.. fir papa bhi aap sab ke beech honge. dushmano ke sar bhi jhuk jayenge.. aur aap sabke sar bhi uth jaayenge. aur us unchai par ja pohnchenge.. us unchai tak dekhne wale peeth ke bal gir padenge.. aise hi han dev bhaiya.. isi waja se wo aap sab se pahle nahi mile.. kaise mil sakte han wo aap sabse.. jab tak wo papa ko azad nahi karwa lete.. aap sab ke jhuke sar nahi utha dete.. giri shaan ko badha nahi dete.. dushman ko unki, sabki nazron me zaleel nahi kar dete.. wo aap se kisi se bhi nahi milenge..

lavanaya roti hui -- fir to usay bohut samay lag jayega mujhse milne ke liye.. mera dil uske liye tadap raha hai.. usse kaho ek baar mujhse to aa kar mil jaaye.. mere dil ko karar aa jayega..

jack -- jahan itne baras wait kiya ha.. kya 8-10 din aur wait nahi kar sakti aap mummy.. kya aapki tadap parivar ke jhuke saron se badhkar hai..

lavanya tadap kar boli -- nahi jack nahi.. parivar hai to main hon. sab kuch hai. aur parivar shan ke sath hota hai. mere liye parivar ki sabse upar hoti hai. isi shan ko banaye rakhne ke liye to maayen apne jigar ke tukdon ko maidan e jung me jhonk deti han..

jack -- yakin rakhen mummy.. bohut jald.. bohut jald dev bhaiya apne iradon me safal ho jayenge.. tab tak main hon dev bhaiya ka chahra liya aapke dard ko kam karne ke liye aapke pass.

lavanya jack ko chumti hui -- haan tu bhi mera dev hai.. mera dusra dev hai tu... main intezar karungi.. jahan itne baras tadap li uske liye wahin kuch din aur sahi.. tum na batate to main to aise hi umar bhar dev ke bina jeene wali thi. nahi. main achhe dino ka intezar karungi..



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mecheal ne jan liya tha.. jaidev ek extraordinary ladka hai. jise wo dunya bhar se chhupana chahta tha. jaidev se usne baat kari.. karibi port tak ka fasla 4 din ka rah gaya tha. to micheal ne jaidev ko sabki nazron me chhupe rahne ke liye bol dia.. ship ke kai passengers har din jaidev ko dekhte rahte han. kaiyon ke mann me kai kai baten thi... jab ek pura din jaidev nahi dikha to pure ship par hungama mach utha. jaidev ko pure ship par talash kiya jane laga. par wo nahi mila..

is baat ka fayda micheal ne uthaya aur usne jaidev ko unki madad karne wala angel bata dia.. jo chupke se aaya aur sabko bacha kar wahan se gayab ho gaya. agle 3 din tak jab jaidev kisi ko nazar na aaya to sabne maan liya. jaidev sach me ek angle tha. jo unki madad karne ke liye aaya tha. madad karke nikal gaya..


finland royal family ke dono members ko micheal ne apne sath mila lia tha. wo ache log the. jab port karib aaya to jaidev chupke se samandar me utar sahil par ja pohncha.. wahin baad me usay micheal aur dono royal members mile.. immediately air tickets book karwai gai. aur 2 agle do ghanto me us country se nikal chuke the.. itni der me jaidev ek angel ki tarah har news channel par bataya jane laga tha..


finland pohnchne par jaidev ka bohut badhiya se sawagat kiya gaya..
Awesome update bhai
 
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