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Romance Izhaar - a - Mohabbat ( sab & bad Love story ) ~ Completed
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Hello guy's . I hope ki app sab khairiyat se honge or zindagi ka acche se mje lutt reh honge , lutne ki chij hai to lutna bhi chahiye ....Khair asli mudde par ATA hu ...me apke samne ek choti si pyar si nanhi se story leke aya hu jise mene 4 month pehle hi likhna shuru kar diya tha . Jab bhi kahi ekant me rehta to Mann me aye khayalato ko panno me samet leta or ye silsila ab bhi jari hai .. to socha kyo ne en panno ko app logo ke sath share kiya jaye ... Ek or bat me filhall koi new story start nhi karna chahta bcoz abhi hall filhall thoda bussy hu bs ye story likhi hue hai hai or thodi si baki hai to socha esse apke samne pesh kar hi du ...I hope ki es choti si story ko app bda pyar denge and last es story Ka kisi jivit or Mart prani se koi vasta nhi hai or na vastvikta se agar kahi thodi bahut matching ho jati hai to ye sirf ek chamatkar hi hoga ... Ye sirf ek manoranjanatmk rchna hai
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Roj ki trah me aaj bhi gaon ke main raste par hi bne chai ke thele par apne dost Vedant ke sath betha chai ki chuskiyan le rha tha , chai ka to bahana tha asal me , me yha kisi or reason ke se ata tha , yha ane ka mera time fix tha chahe suryoday valamb se ho ya fir suryast vilambh se par me yha ek fix time par hi ata tha ... gaon vale mere bare me na jane kya kya khyalat bna bethe par mujhe in sab se koi matlab nhi tha
Abhi sham ke 5 bajne me kuch hi vakt baki tha or meri najar apne gaon ke viprit Disha me shtit main road par kendrit thi . Jaise hi us raste se bus ke horn ki awaj mere kano me pdi To mene jaldi se apna chai ka cup khatam kiya or pass me hi sthish saloon me tej se bhaga or apne sar par pani ka sprey kar , or sath hi Apne chehre par bhi thoda sprey kar balo me kangi kar vapas chai ke thele ki or teji se chal pda .
es vakt dil 72*5 ki speed se dhadak rha tha thodi der pehle apne sar par 2°temreture vala child pani dalne ke bad bhi mere mathe par pasine ki bunde
chalakne lgi par meri najar ab bhi pass ati bus ki awaj par kendrit thi
, har gujrta kshan mujhe ghanto sman lagne lga . Mene apne pass ki khde Vedant ke kandhe ko right hand se pakad liya mano agar uska sahara na ho to me vhi gir jaunga
“ Dhruva mere dost agar isi trah chalta rha to tumhare sath sath meri bhi zindagi es chai ke thele par guzar jani hai . Akhir kab tak yu hi use dur se dekhta rehega Kahi aisa na ho ki tu use yu hi dekhte rehga or Teri ankho ke samne se koi uska hath pakad kar le jayega ” Vedant ke shabd mamuli the par me ek pal ye sochkar Ander tak kamp sa gya or mene apni najar ghuma kar dev ki taraf dekha
“ Yar Jo bhi bola kar kuch soch samaj kar to bola kar . Tum to acchi trah se jante ho ki vo mere liye kya hai . Dekhna ek din me use apne dil ke jajbat bya Kar dunga or vo hamesha hamesha ke liye meri ho jayegi ” mene apne chehre par muskan late hue bola par koi bhi normal insan mera chahra dekh kar ye bta Sakta hai ki meri muskan jhuti thi
“Pii—pippp.....pii—pipp ..tuuruu tuuruu pii –pipp ” abhi hum dono kuch or bate karte usse pehle hi bus hamare karib aa gaii etni karib ki 60 sal ka buddha bhi bus me Bethe passenger ko dekh ske .... Kuch hi second me bus chai ke thele se 7 meter ki duri par ruki .
Me bus ke gate se utarte hue har ek yatri ko bde gour se dekh rha tha palke jhapakna band ho gaii
fir last me 5 ladkiyaan utri par meri ki najar jis shkas ko dhund rhi thi vo ab bhi nhi utri ... Jab 1 minute bad bhi mere sapno ki Mallika nhi utri to mera dil Beth gya or najre niche jhuk gaii
“ phiiii phiiii Ramnagar utarne vala koi reh to nhi gya . Agar koi ho to jaldi utar jao bus jyada der nhi rukegi ” gate ke pass hi khda khlasi apne muhh me siti fasaye hue jor se bola
“ roko roko uncle Mera duppata sheet se fass gya hai please koi meri help kijiye ese nikalne me ” Ander se ek surili madhur awaj mere sath sath sabhi ke kano me gunji jis awaj ko me millions bhid ke ho hallle me se pehchan Sakta tha ....kuch der bar ek ladki apne hath me duppta liye sad sa face banaye hue bus se niche utri ek pal ke liye vha moujud sabhi admiyon ki najar us kishori par gaii
Dudh SA safed chehra gora charhra badan lambi gardan jis par duppta lapeta hua tha lambe Kale bal Jo uske sine se lekar pet tak lehra rhe the . Uska chehra duniya bhar ki masumiyat samete hue tha .kapde normal salvar shuit pehne hue thi par uske badan par vo normal kapde bhi asadharan lag rhe the ...kandhe par ek chota sa bag latkaye apni seheliyo ki or chal pdi
....vhi me usse 5 meter ki duri par khda ektak use dekhe ja rha tha mere liye to samay mano Ruk sa gya ... Mere aaspass ho rhi gatividhiyon ka mujhe koi bhann nhi tha uske chehre par ek dilkash muskan tair gaii ... Me vha esi ummid me khda tha ki safed kapdo me lipti vo khubsurat kishori mujhe bs sirf ek bar dekh le ... Mera baya hath swatah hi mere dil ke pass chla gya mere bagal me khda Vedant bs mujhko hi dekhe ja rha tha
“ Ajeeb hai yar tu or usse bhi ajeeb tumhari chahat . Es jamane me koi etni siddhat se mohhabbat koi bhla kaise kar sakta hai ”vedant mere kandhe par hath rkh kar bola par uske shabd mere kano me pahunchkar bhi nhi pahunche kyo ki me to apni mashuka ko dekhne me hi leen the esi ummid me vo bs ek bar pyar se meri taraf dekh le
.... Par aisa kuch nhi hua vo ladkiya meri ankho se oujal ho gaii or mere ke chehre par jo kuch der pehle muskan chaii thi ab vo udasi me tabdeel ho gaii or me us ladki ke mohh se bahar aa gya
“Lawda dekh liyo tu randwa hi marega . Jab bolne ki himmat hi nhi to kyo uske piche debdash bna betha hai . Tere sath sath mera bhi time Jaya karta hai roj roj ” Vedant apni adat anusar thoda khij kar bola par mene koi pratikriya nhi Di...
“ ab chalna bhi hai ya fir kal ka intejar karega . Chal ab nhi to ghar par dadi meri tange tod degi budiya etni umr me bhi bde joro se sutai karti hai meri ” mera hath pakad kar khinchte hue vedant mujhe pass me hi khdi bike par le gya or khud hadle driving sheet par beth kar apne gaon ki or chal diye Jo vha se karib 1.8 km ki duri par hi tha .
Kuch der bad hum dono apne gantavya sthan par pahunch gye . Me niche utarkar apne ghar ki disha me thoda hi chla tha ki vapas piche muda
“ Vedant meri ek bat manega or ha tujhe pta hai na mujhe na sunne ki adat nhi hai to tumhara javab mujhe ha me chahiye ”vedant bike start kar apne raste Jane hi vala tha ki meri awaj sunkar Ruk gya or mujhe jhuta gussa dikhakar dekhne lga
“ tu mujhse request kar rha hai ya fir warning de rha hai ”vo meri or ungali karte hue bola “ agar request kar rha hai to fir thik hai or agar warning de rha hai to apni na hai ”
“ Meri request hi warning Hoti hai or warning hi request tu to ye acchi trah se janta hai fir ye bayanbaji kahe ko ” thoda ruk kar fir bola “ me sidhe mudde par ATA hu vo bat darasal ye hai ki do din bad hamari panchayat me kabbaddi pratiyogita hone vali hai or ye pratiyogita hamare padose ke sarpanch jo organize karva rhe hai ” Etna sunte hi Vedant ne apni ungali niche kar li or use ye bhi abhas hone lga ki shyam age kya bolne vale hai
“ ha mene bhi suna hai to Esme hum kya kre ”
“ Karna tujhe nhi balki mujhe hai you know me 12th me state level tak kabbaddi khel chuka hu or ye bat hamare ass pass ke sabhi logo ko pta hai ..... To Bhai bat ye hai ki me es pratiyogita me bhag le rha hu or eske liye mujhe khudd sarpanch ji ne bola hai ki me apni panchayat ki team ka hissa bnu ..... Me kabbaddi me intrested nhi hu but Bhai vo pratiyogita hamare pados ke gaon me ho rhi hai..... Participate Karne vale khiladi or usse sambandhit members 5 Dino tak vhi rehenge uske khane pine ki vyavastha vhi ki jayegi .... to Bhai asli mudda ye hai ki kya pta ese bahane vha mere sapno ko rani mujhe mil jaye ... Kya pta vha rehne se mere dil ka hal use pta chal jaye or uske Mann mandhir me bhi mere prati pyar ka Dipak jhal jaye ” mene sari bate ek hi sans me bol gya mano age mujhe Vedant bolne ka mouka hi na de
“ dekh Bhai me apne job se leave nhi le sakta or agar request karke le bhi lu to uska koi matalab nhi niklega ... Tu chaye ek month tak uske gaon ki jagah uske Ghar chla ja par tere mukh Mandal se ek swar bhi nhi niklega are use dekh kar hi tere hath paun javab de jate hai fattu ban jata hai tu use dekhkar to vha tu kya khak kuch kar lega or es bat ka kya bharosha ki vo vha ayegi ? Kya uski vha duty lga rkhi hai ? Dekh meri bat mann or apna idea drop Kar de ”
“ mujhe teri koi dalile nhi Sunni samjha tujhe mere sath chalna hai to bs chalna hai or agar nhi chla to fir teri or meri dosti swahha ” shyam ne apna antim prahar Vedant par Kiya or uska pura asar uspar hua or usne bujhe Mann se ha kardi ...me khushi se doud Kar uske gle lag gya or use thank you thank you bolne lga fir dono apne apne ghar chle
Me Etna Khush tha mano mujhe apna pyar mil gya ho . Uske agle din bhi sham 5 bje Vedant ke sath bus stand yani chai ke thele ke vha gya bs us ladki ka didar karne . Me aisa kuch dino se nhi balki usi din se se karte aa rha hu jabse mene use first time use bus me utarte hue dekha tha
. Tab mene apna graduation complete Kiya tha or ajj mujhe graduation kiye hue karib 1 sal se bhi uper ka samay ho gya . Mujhe abhi tak uske bare me bs Etna hi pta chla ki vo roj hamare pass ki city me collage jati hai ... Sochne me bhi ajeeb Lagta hai ki mere Pados ki ladki jise me dilo Jann se pyar karta hu uske bare me mujhe kuch bhi nhi pta ? Darasal ye ek ettefak hi ki me bachpan se matrix ki study tak nanihal me rehkar study ki
. Mujhe nhi pta tha ki mera dil churane vali yha yani apne gaon rehti thi ya nhi bs Etna pta hai ki jab me yha aya tab vo yha nhi thi , kaha thi I don’t know or mene kabhi janne ki koshish bhi nhi ki
... Zindagi me kabhi kisi se pyar nhi hua tha even mujhe pyar par bharosha bhi nhi tha ki kya scch me kisi ko kisi se pyar hota hai par jab mujhe hua tab pta chla ki hota hai bepnah hota
. Us din se jis din se mene us ladki ko dekha ajj din tak sayad hi koi din gya hoga jis din mene use apne sapno me nhi dekha ........ har badte time ke sath mera pyar bhi badta ja rha tha ab to sochkar bhi dar lagta hai ki agar vo mujhe nhi mili to mera kya hoga , Kaise zindagi gujarungi me uske bina , esliye mene aise vichar dilo dimag me Lana hi band kar diya
. Me fattu nhi hu par pta nhi use dekhakar meri sari dileri pta nhi kaha chu mantar ho jati hai ... Jab kabhi mera dost mujhe ye kehta hai ki Dhruva tujhe vo ladki nhi milega tab Mann karta hai ki sale ki gardan marod du , par ye khayal kuch hi second ka hota tha or by chance kabhi vo mujhe ye kehta hai ki Dhruva tujhe tera pyar jarur milega to Mann karta hai ki uske photo par roj agarbatti kru us vakt me use bhagvan se bda insan samjhne lag jata hu .
Ye bate befaltu lagti hai par yhi sachh hai ....yhi sab sochta me kab nind ke agosh me chla gya pta hi nhi chla
“ Dhruva I love you I love you Dhruva me tumse Etna pyar karti hu jitna suraj apni kirno se shyam apni Radha se . Kya tum bhi mujhse utna hi pyar karte hue ” ek ladki meri god me soi ektak mujhe hi dekhe ja rhi thi es vakt hum dono nirjann pahadi ke top par akele bethe hue the ... charo or prakarti apni sundarta bikher rhi thi madhyam gati se chalti hawa dil ko anadar tak sukun pahuncha rhi thi ...me apne hatho ko piche ki or tag lagaye uske sundar chehre ko nihare ja rha tha
“ Nhi AKSHA ab me tumse bilkul bhi pyar nhi karte hu bilkul bhi nhi . Par past me , me tumse Etna pyar karta tha jitna aajtak kisi ne kisi ko nhi kiya hoga ... Tum mere rag rag sma chuki thi meri har sanso or khwabo me bs tum hi thi par ab nhi tum bahut buri ho Aksha bahut etni ki jitna koi nhi ”
me ab bhi Aksha ke chehre ko nihare ja rha tha mere chehre par ab bhi vo dilkashh muskan thi jo pehle thi . Ajeeb bat ye thi ki Aksha ke chehre par bhi muskan thi
“ Tum Jhut bol rhe Hona ” vo bde pyar se mere ek gal par apna mulayam hath ferte hue boli. “ Tum jhut bol Sakte ho par ye tumhari ankhe kabhi jhut nhi bol Sakti ” Aksha meri godd se thodi uper uth kar mere gal par kiss kra or vapas apne ytha sthan par let Gai
“ Achha tumhe eyes reading ati hai ? Khair Jo bhi hai ab me tumse scch me pyar nhi karta or accha hoga ki tum bhi mujhse pyar na kro ab ye tumhara pyar bhi mujhe nafrat pratit hota hai ” me jhukar uske dono galo par kiss kar diya or vapas apni mudra me aa gya
....kuch vakt bad aksha meri godd se uth kar mere parallel Beth gaii or hum dono samne beh rhi nadi ko dekh rhe the Jo bilkul sant beh rhi thi
“ Dhruva tum jhut kabse bolne lag gye ? Agar agli bar or jhut Bola to me hamesha ke liye tumse dur chli jaungi or fir kabhi lout Kar nhi aungi ” Etna bol kar usne apna sar mere kandhe par tika diya
“ hatt pagli ye to tum already kar chuki ho ” me bhi apna sar uske sar se sta liya or hath me chote chote pathar lekar us pahadi se niche fenkle lga meri dekha dekhi Aksha bhi pathar fenkne lgi
Jis Dil Main Basa Tha Naam Tera Humne Wo Tod Diya ...... Na Hone Diya Tujhe Badnaam Bus Tere Naam Lena Chod Diya
To be countinue ....
Roj ki trah me aaj bhi gaon ke main raste par hi bne chai ke thele par apne dost Vedant ke sath betha chai ki chuskiyan le rha tha , chai ka to bahana tha asal me , me yha kisi or reason ke se ata tha , yha ane ka mera time fix tha chahe suryoday valamb se ho ya fir suryast vilambh se par me yha ek fix time par hi ata tha ... gaon vale mere bare me na jane kya kya khyalat bna bethe par mujhe in sab se koi matlab nhi tha
Abhi sham ke 5 bajne me kuch hi vakt baki tha or meri najar apne gaon ke viprit Disha me shtit main road par kendrit thi . Jaise hi us raste se bus ke horn ki awaj mere kano me pdi To mene jaldi se apna chai ka cup khatam kiya or pass me hi sthish saloon me tej se bhaga or apne sar par pani ka sprey kar , or sath hi Apne chehre par bhi thoda sprey kar balo me kangi kar vapas chai ke thele ki or teji se chal pda .
es vakt dil 72*5 ki speed se dhadak rha tha thodi der pehle apne sar par 2°temreture vala child pani dalne ke bad bhi mere mathe par pasine ki bunde
chalakne lgi par meri najar ab bhi pass ati bus ki awaj par kendrit thi
, har gujrta kshan mujhe ghanto sman lagne lga . Mene apne pass ki khde Vedant ke kandhe ko right hand se pakad liya mano agar uska sahara na ho to me vhi gir jaunga
“ Dhruva mere dost agar isi trah chalta rha to tumhare sath sath meri bhi zindagi es chai ke thele par guzar jani hai . Akhir kab tak yu hi use dur se dekhta rehega Kahi aisa na ho ki tu use yu hi dekhte rehga or Teri ankho ke samne se koi uska hath pakad kar le jayega ” Vedant ke shabd mamuli the par me ek pal ye sochkar Ander tak kamp sa gya or mene apni najar ghuma kar dev ki taraf dekha
“ Yar Jo bhi bola kar kuch soch samaj kar to bola kar . Tum to acchi trah se jante ho ki vo mere liye kya hai . Dekhna ek din me use apne dil ke jajbat bya Kar dunga or vo hamesha hamesha ke liye meri ho jayegi ” mene apne chehre par muskan late hue bola par koi bhi normal insan mera chahra dekh kar ye bta Sakta hai ki meri muskan jhuti thi
“Pii—pippp.....pii—pipp ..tuuruu tuuruu pii –pipp ” abhi hum dono kuch or bate karte usse pehle hi bus hamare karib aa gaii etni karib ki 60 sal ka buddha bhi bus me Bethe passenger ko dekh ske .... Kuch hi second me bus chai ke thele se 7 meter ki duri par ruki .
Me bus ke gate se utarte hue har ek yatri ko bde gour se dekh rha tha palke jhapakna band ho gaii
fir last me 5 ladkiyaan utri par meri ki najar jis shkas ko dhund rhi thi vo ab bhi nhi utri ... Jab 1 minute bad bhi mere sapno ki Mallika nhi utri to mera dil Beth gya or najre niche jhuk gaii
“ phiiii phiiii Ramnagar utarne vala koi reh to nhi gya . Agar koi ho to jaldi utar jao bus jyada der nhi rukegi ” gate ke pass hi khda khlasi apne muhh me siti fasaye hue jor se bola
“ roko roko uncle Mera duppata sheet se fass gya hai please koi meri help kijiye ese nikalne me ” Ander se ek surili madhur awaj mere sath sath sabhi ke kano me gunji jis awaj ko me millions bhid ke ho hallle me se pehchan Sakta tha ....kuch der bar ek ladki apne hath me duppta liye sad sa face banaye hue bus se niche utri ek pal ke liye vha moujud sabhi admiyon ki najar us kishori par gaii
Dudh SA safed chehra gora charhra badan lambi gardan jis par duppta lapeta hua tha lambe Kale bal Jo uske sine se lekar pet tak lehra rhe the . Uska chehra duniya bhar ki masumiyat samete hue tha .kapde normal salvar shuit pehne hue thi par uske badan par vo normal kapde bhi asadharan lag rhe the ...kandhe par ek chota sa bag latkaye apni seheliyo ki or chal pdi
....vhi me usse 5 meter ki duri par khda ektak use dekhe ja rha tha mere liye to samay mano Ruk sa gya ... Mere aaspass ho rhi gatividhiyon ka mujhe koi bhann nhi tha uske chehre par ek dilkash muskan tair gaii ... Me vha esi ummid me khda tha ki safed kapdo me lipti vo khubsurat kishori mujhe bs sirf ek bar dekh le ... Mera baya hath swatah hi mere dil ke pass chla gya mere bagal me khda Vedant bs mujhko hi dekhe ja rha tha
“ Ajeeb hai yar tu or usse bhi ajeeb tumhari chahat . Es jamane me koi etni siddhat se mohhabbat koi bhla kaise kar sakta hai ”vedant mere kandhe par hath rkh kar bola par uske shabd mere kano me pahunchkar bhi nhi pahunche kyo ki me to apni mashuka ko dekhne me hi leen the esi ummid me vo bs ek bar pyar se meri taraf dekh le
.... Par aisa kuch nhi hua vo ladkiya meri ankho se oujal ho gaii or mere ke chehre par jo kuch der pehle muskan chaii thi ab vo udasi me tabdeel ho gaii or me us ladki ke mohh se bahar aa gya
“Lawda dekh liyo tu randwa hi marega . Jab bolne ki himmat hi nhi to kyo uske piche debdash bna betha hai . Tere sath sath mera bhi time Jaya karta hai roj roj ” Vedant apni adat anusar thoda khij kar bola par mene koi pratikriya nhi Di...
“ ab chalna bhi hai ya fir kal ka intejar karega . Chal ab nhi to ghar par dadi meri tange tod degi budiya etni umr me bhi bde joro se sutai karti hai meri ” mera hath pakad kar khinchte hue vedant mujhe pass me hi khdi bike par le gya or khud hadle driving sheet par beth kar apne gaon ki or chal diye Jo vha se karib 1.8 km ki duri par hi tha .
Kuch der bad hum dono apne gantavya sthan par pahunch gye . Me niche utarkar apne ghar ki disha me thoda hi chla tha ki vapas piche muda
“ Vedant meri ek bat manega or ha tujhe pta hai na mujhe na sunne ki adat nhi hai to tumhara javab mujhe ha me chahiye ”vedant bike start kar apne raste Jane hi vala tha ki meri awaj sunkar Ruk gya or mujhe jhuta gussa dikhakar dekhne lga
“ tu mujhse request kar rha hai ya fir warning de rha hai ”vo meri or ungali karte hue bola “ agar request kar rha hai to fir thik hai or agar warning de rha hai to apni na hai ”
“ Meri request hi warning Hoti hai or warning hi request tu to ye acchi trah se janta hai fir ye bayanbaji kahe ko ” thoda ruk kar fir bola “ me sidhe mudde par ATA hu vo bat darasal ye hai ki do din bad hamari panchayat me kabbaddi pratiyogita hone vali hai or ye pratiyogita hamare padose ke sarpanch jo organize karva rhe hai ” Etna sunte hi Vedant ne apni ungali niche kar li or use ye bhi abhas hone lga ki shyam age kya bolne vale hai
“ ha mene bhi suna hai to Esme hum kya kre ”
“ Karna tujhe nhi balki mujhe hai you know me 12th me state level tak kabbaddi khel chuka hu or ye bat hamare ass pass ke sabhi logo ko pta hai ..... To Bhai bat ye hai ki me es pratiyogita me bhag le rha hu or eske liye mujhe khudd sarpanch ji ne bola hai ki me apni panchayat ki team ka hissa bnu ..... Me kabbaddi me intrested nhi hu but Bhai vo pratiyogita hamare pados ke gaon me ho rhi hai..... Participate Karne vale khiladi or usse sambandhit members 5 Dino tak vhi rehenge uske khane pine ki vyavastha vhi ki jayegi .... to Bhai asli mudda ye hai ki kya pta ese bahane vha mere sapno ko rani mujhe mil jaye ... Kya pta vha rehne se mere dil ka hal use pta chal jaye or uske Mann mandhir me bhi mere prati pyar ka Dipak jhal jaye ” mene sari bate ek hi sans me bol gya mano age mujhe Vedant bolne ka mouka hi na de
“ dekh Bhai me apne job se leave nhi le sakta or agar request karke le bhi lu to uska koi matalab nhi niklega ... Tu chaye ek month tak uske gaon ki jagah uske Ghar chla ja par tere mukh Mandal se ek swar bhi nhi niklega are use dekh kar hi tere hath paun javab de jate hai fattu ban jata hai tu use dekhkar to vha tu kya khak kuch kar lega or es bat ka kya bharosha ki vo vha ayegi ? Kya uski vha duty lga rkhi hai ? Dekh meri bat mann or apna idea drop Kar de ”
“ mujhe teri koi dalile nhi Sunni samjha tujhe mere sath chalna hai to bs chalna hai or agar nhi chla to fir teri or meri dosti swahha ” shyam ne apna antim prahar Vedant par Kiya or uska pura asar uspar hua or usne bujhe Mann se ha kardi ...me khushi se doud Kar uske gle lag gya or use thank you thank you bolne lga fir dono apne apne ghar chle
Me Etna Khush tha mano mujhe apna pyar mil gya ho . Uske agle din bhi sham 5 bje Vedant ke sath bus stand yani chai ke thele ke vha gya bs us ladki ka didar karne . Me aisa kuch dino se nhi balki usi din se se karte aa rha hu jabse mene use first time use bus me utarte hue dekha tha
. Tab mene apna graduation complete Kiya tha or ajj mujhe graduation kiye hue karib 1 sal se bhi uper ka samay ho gya . Mujhe abhi tak uske bare me bs Etna hi pta chla ki vo roj hamare pass ki city me collage jati hai ... Sochne me bhi ajeeb Lagta hai ki mere Pados ki ladki jise me dilo Jann se pyar karta hu uske bare me mujhe kuch bhi nhi pta ? Darasal ye ek ettefak hi ki me bachpan se matrix ki study tak nanihal me rehkar study ki
. Mujhe nhi pta tha ki mera dil churane vali yha yani apne gaon rehti thi ya nhi bs Etna pta hai ki jab me yha aya tab vo yha nhi thi , kaha thi I don’t know or mene kabhi janne ki koshish bhi nhi ki
... Zindagi me kabhi kisi se pyar nhi hua tha even mujhe pyar par bharosha bhi nhi tha ki kya scch me kisi ko kisi se pyar hota hai par jab mujhe hua tab pta chla ki hota hai bepnah hota
. Us din se jis din se mene us ladki ko dekha ajj din tak sayad hi koi din gya hoga jis din mene use apne sapno me nhi dekha ........ har badte time ke sath mera pyar bhi badta ja rha tha ab to sochkar bhi dar lagta hai ki agar vo mujhe nhi mili to mera kya hoga , Kaise zindagi gujarungi me uske bina , esliye mene aise vichar dilo dimag me Lana hi band kar diya
. Me fattu nhi hu par pta nhi use dekhakar meri sari dileri pta nhi kaha chu mantar ho jati hai ... Jab kabhi mera dost mujhe ye kehta hai ki Dhruva tujhe vo ladki nhi milega tab Mann karta hai ki sale ki gardan marod du , par ye khayal kuch hi second ka hota tha or by chance kabhi vo mujhe ye kehta hai ki Dhruva tujhe tera pyar jarur milega to Mann karta hai ki uske photo par roj agarbatti kru us vakt me use bhagvan se bda insan samjhne lag jata hu .
Ye bate befaltu lagti hai par yhi sachh hai ....yhi sab sochta me kab nind ke agosh me chla gya pta hi nhi chla
“ Dhruva I love you I love you Dhruva me tumse Etna pyar karti hu jitna suraj apni kirno se shyam apni Radha se . Kya tum bhi mujhse utna hi pyar karte hue ” ek ladki meri god me soi ektak mujhe hi dekhe ja rhi thi es vakt hum dono nirjann pahadi ke top par akele bethe hue the ... charo or prakarti apni sundarta bikher rhi thi madhyam gati se chalti hawa dil ko anadar tak sukun pahuncha rhi thi ...me apne hatho ko piche ki or tag lagaye uske sundar chehre ko nihare ja rha tha
“ Nhi AKSHA ab me tumse bilkul bhi pyar nhi karte hu bilkul bhi nhi . Par past me , me tumse Etna pyar karta tha jitna aajtak kisi ne kisi ko nhi kiya hoga ... Tum mere rag rag sma chuki thi meri har sanso or khwabo me bs tum hi thi par ab nhi tum bahut buri ho Aksha bahut etni ki jitna koi nhi ”
me ab bhi Aksha ke chehre ko nihare ja rha tha mere chehre par ab bhi vo dilkashh muskan thi jo pehle thi . Ajeeb bat ye thi ki Aksha ke chehre par bhi muskan thi
“ Tum Jhut bol rhe Hona ” vo bde pyar se mere ek gal par apna mulayam hath ferte hue boli. “ Tum jhut bol Sakte ho par ye tumhari ankhe kabhi jhut nhi bol Sakti ” Aksha meri godd se thodi uper uth kar mere gal par kiss kra or vapas apne ytha sthan par let Gai
“ Achha tumhe eyes reading ati hai ? Khair Jo bhi hai ab me tumse scch me pyar nhi karta or accha hoga ki tum bhi mujhse pyar na kro ab ye tumhara pyar bhi mujhe nafrat pratit hota hai ” me jhukar uske dono galo par kiss kar diya or vapas apni mudra me aa gya
....kuch vakt bad aksha meri godd se uth kar mere parallel Beth gaii or hum dono samne beh rhi nadi ko dekh rhe the Jo bilkul sant beh rhi thi
“ Dhruva tum jhut kabse bolne lag gye ? Agar agli bar or jhut Bola to me hamesha ke liye tumse dur chli jaungi or fir kabhi lout Kar nhi aungi ” Etna bol kar usne apna sar mere kandhe par tika diya
“ hatt pagli ye to tum already kar chuki ho ” me bhi apna sar uske sar se sta liya or hath me chote chote pathar lekar us pahadi se niche fenkle lga meri dekha dekhi Aksha bhi pathar fenkne lgi
Jis Dil Main Basa Tha Naam Tera Humne Wo Tod Diya ...... Na Hone Diya Tujhe Badnaam Bus Tere Naam Lena Chod Diya
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Padkar apni pratikriya jarur De ... dhanyavad
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Start me mujhe thora sa ek Bilal saeed ke song “Baari” Jaisi lagi lekin aage kafi kuch naya tha lekin intresting tha
Jab Larki ka Dupata aise phanse aur wo madad maange....to ashiqo ka kaam hota haj sab ko peeche chor ker khud aage ja ker apne pyaar ki madad karna lekin start me he pata chal gaya hero chutiya hai iss per hum hero ko sirf ek baat he keh sakte hai
Visudh Chutiye larke ho tum!
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I'm to smartAisi umeed wale larke zindagi me sirf ek he kaam karte reh jate hai
ithas Gawah hai.......Dost ke ishq me hamesha dusre dost ke laure lagte hai jo bakhubi lag rahe hai yahan
ye konsi duniya me pohanch gye aise kaam se pehle warning dena ka bhayia direct scene nahi badalte hote
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Update acha tha.....Lekin main Agar As a writer bolu to mujhe update thora down down laga....sorry mujhe honest review dene ki adat hai kiu ke iss se writer ko motivation ke saath suggestion bhi milte hai.....Ap chaho to update behtar ker sakte hai thori wording per dhayan de aur thora saaf saaf scene ko likhe.....Baki story ka plot acha hai ap aise he aage barhte rahe hum ap ke saath hai