Jay raj
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Awesome update bro
Apki story suru me padne me thori problem hoi thi but fir jese jese aage pada aur apne bhi writing me thori bahot change kia uske bad padne ne jada maza aaya
Keeping rocking like this
1. Rati se madhav singh ne kya vachan liya tha? (jab vo haridavar me gaye the aur madhav singh ne bola tha vo rat ke 12 ke bad sab bhul jayega)
2. Raghu ko villain mat banana yar kyu ki vo aryan ka bhai jesa he aur bichare bheema ka ekklota beta he
3. Ram singh sacha me accident me mara gya he ya madhav singh me usse kai gyab kar diya he ? Kyu ki mahi ke janam k bad uski family me sab ke liye acha hi hona tha par ram singh ki dead he vo bhi ghar ka bada beta khandan ke liye bahot badi buri khabar he
4. Ani ka character bahot hi danger lag raha he muje to lagta he aate hi rati aur geeta (khandan ki do sabse dangerous) aurto ki gand maregi vo ??
5. Apne vo sence to bataya hi nahi ki saroo aur raj kese paheli bar ek dusre ko mile aue rati ne bhi kab paheli bar raj ko dekha? And saroo ko yesa kyu laga ki rati usse raj ko chiin legi? Kya bo rati ko characterless manti thi jo uske hone vale handsome pati ko dekh ke usse chin legi ?
Apki story suru me padne me thori problem hoi thi but fir jese jese aage pada aur apne bhi writing me thori bahot change kia uske bad padne ne jada maza aaya
Keeping rocking like this
1. Rati se madhav singh ne kya vachan liya tha? (jab vo haridavar me gaye the aur madhav singh ne bola tha vo rat ke 12 ke bad sab bhul jayega)
2. Raghu ko villain mat banana yar kyu ki vo aryan ka bhai jesa he aur bichare bheema ka ekklota beta he
3. Ram singh sacha me accident me mara gya he ya madhav singh me usse kai gyab kar diya he ? Kyu ki mahi ke janam k bad uski family me sab ke liye acha hi hona tha par ram singh ki dead he vo bhi ghar ka bada beta khandan ke liye bahot badi buri khabar he
4. Ani ka character bahot hi danger lag raha he muje to lagta he aate hi rati aur geeta (khandan ki do sabse dangerous) aurto ki gand maregi vo ??
5. Apne vo sence to bataya hi nahi ki saroo aur raj kese paheli bar ek dusre ko mile aue rati ne bhi kab paheli bar raj ko dekha? And saroo ko yesa kyu laga ki rati usse raj ko chiin legi? Kya bo rati ko characterless manti thi jo uske hone vale handsome pati ko dekh ke usse chin legi ?