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UPDATE - 122

Waha Elf Nation mein itna kuch ho raha tha....wahi dusri taraf.....Fumos pe Lucifer ki mulakat uske bete se ho gayi thi......

Uss Immortal ne pahle to kuch waqt tak koshish kari......ki Lucifer ko powers ki lalach deke usko rokk ke rakha jaaye......par acchanak pata nahi uske dimmag mein kya aaya......usne khud se ek portal khol diya Lucifer ke saamne......aur Lucifer ke upar se apne saare jaadu wapas le liye......haa par Lucifer ke upar Fumos pe jo uske jaadu kare gaye the wo sab ke sab kaam kar hi rahe the....usme koi anter nahi aaya tha......

Matlab uske pass abhi bhi Fumos pe aane pe jo taqat milli thi wo sab to thi hi uske pass......

Ab jab Portal khula to Lucifer ko samajh kuch aa nahi raha tha......ye ekdum acchanak se ho gaya tha.......abhi kuch waqt tak wo kya kar raha tha.....usko ye sab yaad aate hi wo sann rah gaya tha.......wo uss portal ko dekh raha tha.....saath hi ass pass ki chizzon ko.....

Ek baat usko acche se samajh aa chukki thi.....ye jagah......ye bahut badal chukki hai......wo yaha pe pahle bhi aa chukka thaa......par usne kabhi kuch aisa mehsoos nahi kiya tha.....aur iss baar....iss baar ye jagah ekdum se.....ekdum se badal gayi thi uske hisab se....

Upar se wo immortal dekh raha tha Lucifer ko dhyaan se......aur har ek pahlu pe gaur kar raha tha wo.....

Ab portal bhi to ek darwaje ke tarah hi hota hai.....darwaja jiske dono taraf se hi aaya jaaya jaa sakta hai......aur theek yahi hua bhi.....

Lucifer uss taraf jaa nahi raha tha kyunki usko iss jagah pe ab sab kuch hi ajeeb lag raha tha.....aur wo ye nahi chahta tha ki jo wo yaha pe aane ke baad itne waqt se kar raaha tha wapas se kuch waisa hi kare.......Par dusri taraf jo tha......usko uss jagah se bahar nikalna tha.....aur abhi uske saamne ek portal aa gaya tha.....wo kaise iss mauke ko chod deta......

Wo uss Portal se bahar aa gaya.......aur jab aaya to usne apne saamne Lucifer ko paaya.......

Ye koi aur nahi tha.......Slayer ke body mein Justin tha......iss waqt Dhruv ka puri tarah se kaabu nahi tha uss body pe.....

Ab Justin to jaanta tha apne pita ko.....to wo ekdum se khush ho gaya ye dekh ke ki uske pita waha pe hai......par isse pahle ki wo kuch kah pata.......

Lucifer ne uspe hamla kar diya.......

Lucifer koi aam banda tha nahi......wo Demos ka Raja tha......usne naa jaane kitni ladaiyan ladi hui thi.......wo jaanta tha......ki pahli nazar mein kisi ko bhi dost to nahi kaha jaa sakta......aur jo dost nahi hai.....usse agar aap kisi anjaan si aur ajeeb si jagah pe milo to.....hamla karna aur uske upar kaabu pana hi sabse sahi tarika hai.....

Ye har tarah ke jeevon mein hota hai......

To Lucifer ne kar diya hamla.....aur Justin iss baat ko samajh nahi paaya.......

Ab Justin theek hai rajkumar hai Demos ka......par ye banda paida hone ke baad se hi bimar raha hai.......Lucifer ne isko training dilwai thi.....khud se bhi di thi.....par ek limit mein di thi.......Justin kabhi bhi.....ek kaddi training ke liye taiyar hi nahi tha......uska sarir itna kamzor tha ki agar usko training di jaati acche se to wo mar jaata....

Haa par dimmag tez tha iss Justin ka......ye banda plans banaya karta tha.....aur plans acche bhi hote the......

Par yaha pe....yaha pe kuch alag hi tha.....

Lucifer ne uspe hamla kar diya......aur wo sambhal nahi paaya......

Waise jyada kuch hua nahi tha......Slayer ki body mein tha wo.....bahar kya hi hona tha.......haa bas 2-4 kadam picche ko chala gaya tha wo.....

Lekin wo akela to tha nahi uss body mein jo uss body ko control kar paaye.....bahar kuch nahi hua......par body ke ander ek alag si halchal hone lag gayi.......Dhruv ab Slayer ki body pe wapas se control lene ki koshish karne lag gaya aur......aur wo dheere dheere kamiyab bhi ho raha tha.....

Yaha bahar Lucifer ne dekha ki uske vaar ka jyada koi asar hua nahi hai uske saamne wale pe.....to usne wapas se waar karne ka socha......

Justin - Dad......ye main...hu.....Justin....

Usne bolne ki koshish to kari.....par wo kuch bol paata usse pahle......uske muh ke aadhe hisse pe Dhruv ka control aa gaya tha.....jis wajah se wo bol nahi paaya.....aur bas ak ajeeb si gurrahat nikli muh se.....

Ab halat aise the ki body ke kuch parts pe Justin ka to kuch parts pe Dhruv ka control tha......Justin body ko rokne ki koshish kar raha tha kyunki saamne uska apna baap khada tha.....Dhruv Lucifer ko maarne ki koshish kar raha tha kyunki saamne wala......matlab Lucifer uspe hamla kar raha tha.....

Lucifer iss baar waar kar pata usse pahle hi....Dhruv ne usko ek haath se pakad liya......aur waha se durr fenk diya.......aur Justin.....wo uss haath ko control hi nahi kar paa raha tha.....

Lucifer ne jo waar kiya tha wo wala bhale hi naa laga ho inko.....par ye jo fenka tha Dhruv ne Lucifer ko.......wo dur tak gaya tha....aur akela nahi aas pass ke kuch ped bhi leke gaya tha wo.....aur Dhruv iske baad rukne wala nahi tha.....wo aage gaya.....aur usne uske baad wapas se Lucifer ko utaya aur usko maarne ke liye apne dusre haath ka use karne ki koshish karne lag gaya......par....wo use nahi kar paa raha tha....

Justin ka body pe jitna bhi control iss waqt tak baccha hua tha.....wo usse puri koshish kar raha tha ki wo apne pita ko baccha sakke.....par uski baari khatam ho rahi thi.....

Dhruv se jab dusra haath use nahi ho paa raha tha....to Lucifer ko mauka mil gaya.....aur usne wapas se waar kar diya.....waar theek thaak tha.....jiski wajah se Dhruv ke haath se wo chhut gaya.....aur chuttne ke baad kisi tarah dur hatt ke khada hone ki koshish karne lag gaya.....par usse nahi hua jaa raha tha.....

Slayer ki body mein hadd se jyada takat aa gayi thi iss waqt ko..... Yahi to karan thi ki wo Dhruv jaise ko bhi apne sarir ke ander rakh paa rahi thi....aur Justin...jisko itni power de di gayi usko bhi apne ander rakh paa rahi thi.

Wahi dusri taraf....Pankaj aur Madhu dono hi abhi tak neend mein the...aur ye accha tha unn sab ke liye...Prateek aur baaki sab wapas to aa gaye the par inko samajh nahi aa raha tha jab dono jaagenge to kya hoga..

Kya unn dono ko wo sab yaad hoga yaa phir nahi...iske picche ki bhi wajah thi...Madhu jab uss mahel mein pahuchi to wo ek taraf Pankaj ko bacha rahi thi apne ek haath se usko ek suraksha ghere mein rakh kar...bas yahi wali baat Prateek ko samajh nahi aa rahi thi aur pareshan kiye jaa rahi thi.

Uske hisab se abhi bhi Madhu ko kuch bhi yaad nahi hai...to jab bhi wo Golden power ke control mein hoti hai to wo puri tarah se apne ass pass ke chizzon ko bhul ke bas wahi karti hai jo itne hazaron saalo mein Golden power ne usse sikha tha...apno ki suraksha karna aur jo unke liye khatra sabit ho rahe ho unko khatam karna...aur uske apne kaun hai ye baat bhi usko Golden power ko hi pata hoti thi.

Iss baar ye alag tha... Prateek ke hisab se agar Madhu usko bachane aati hai jab wo musibat mein ho to ye baat samajh aati bhi hai....dono ka rishta bahut purana hai aur uss samay se hai jab Madhu Golden Power ko acche se control kar liya karti thi....lekin Pankaj...ye to bas kuch waqt pahle ka mila hua hai....

Iske karan hi uske mann mein wo sawal baar baar aa raha tha wapas se....kahi Madhu ko sab yaad to nahi hai.... Aur agar aisa hai to inn sab ka kya hi matlab banta hai.,...ye sab jo hai.... Wo yaha hai apne Mata Pita ko dhundhne ke liye unke saath rahne ke liye apne pariwar walo ki talash mein...... Ye sab bas aise hi hai....

Aur jaisa ki pahle bhi hua tha..... Iss point pe aane ke baad Prateek ko lagta hai ki wo hi galat soch raha hai...

Rupal - Prateek.... Prateek kya hua... Tu bol kyun nahi raha....

Prateek - ahaaaa.... Kya hua... Aap kuch bol rahi thi.

K.Bua - arre hum baat kar rahe the ki Pankaj ko to kisi tarah se sambhal hi lenge par ye Madhu ka kya....

Prateek - hume unn dono ke uthne ka intezar karna hoga usse pahle humme nahi pata hai ki unko kya kuch yaad hoga aur kya nahi.

Rupal - arre ghadi dekho...kuch hi der mein Mummy wapas aa jaayengi aur jab wo unn dono ko yaha dekhengi sote hue....to phir unko batana hoga...

Chachi - kya batana hoga.....tum sab ke sab yaha pe....Nikita tumhe to school mein hona chahiye tha naa aur tum dono ko bhi...

P.Bua - wo bhabhi wo classes khatam ho hi gaye the....to humne socha ki yahi pe aa jaaye...

Chachi - manna tum sab ko school se bahar nikalne ka khufiya rasta pata hai.... Parye acchi baat nahi hai ki roj ke roj waha se nikal hi jaao... Aur tum dono to waha pe padhati ho... Aise padhane wale honge to pata nahi padhne wale bacche kaise honge.... Kabhi Kisi niyam ko maanege bhi yaa nahi...

Chachi ne aate hi lecture dena shuru kar diya tha par abhi unki nazar Prateek pe nahi padi thi... Abhitak to nahi

Chachi - Tum bhi yaha aa gaye... Tumko to iss waqt Wo Madhu ke pass hona chahiye tha... Madhu se yaad aaya.... Wo Pankaj aaya tha yaha pe kaam tha sayad usko kuch...

Koi kuch aur bolta usse pahle hi room mein se saman girne ki aawaj aayi....

Next update mein dekhte hai Pankaj aur Madhu ke jaagne pe kya hota hai saath hi Nikita ka Leader se milna aur Lucifer ki halat..
Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai
 

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UPDATE - 122

Waha Elf Nation mein itna kuch ho raha tha....wahi dusri taraf.....Fumos pe Lucifer ki mulakat uske bete se ho gayi thi......

Uss Immortal ne pahle to kuch waqt tak koshish kari......ki Lucifer ko powers ki lalach deke usko rokk ke rakha jaaye......par acchanak pata nahi uske dimmag mein kya aaya......usne khud se ek portal khol diya Lucifer ke saamne......aur Lucifer ke upar se apne saare jaadu wapas le liye......haa par Lucifer ke upar Fumos pe jo uske jaadu kare gaye the wo sab ke sab kaam kar hi rahe the....usme koi anter nahi aaya tha......

Matlab uske pass abhi bhi Fumos pe aane pe jo taqat milli thi wo sab to thi hi uske pass......

Ab jab Portal khula to Lucifer ko samajh kuch aa nahi raha tha......ye ekdum acchanak se ho gaya tha.......abhi kuch waqt tak wo kya kar raha tha.....usko ye sab yaad aate hi wo sann rah gaya tha.......wo uss portal ko dekh raha tha.....saath hi ass pass ki chizzon ko.....

Ek baat usko acche se samajh aa chukki thi.....ye jagah......ye bahut badal chukki hai......wo yaha pe pahle bhi aa chukka thaa......par usne kabhi kuch aisa mehsoos nahi kiya tha.....aur iss baar....iss baar ye jagah ekdum se.....ekdum se badal gayi thi uske hisab se....

Upar se wo immortal dekh raha tha Lucifer ko dhyaan se......aur har ek pahlu pe gaur kar raha tha wo.....

Ab portal bhi to ek darwaje ke tarah hi hota hai.....darwaja jiske dono taraf se hi aaya jaaya jaa sakta hai......aur theek yahi hua bhi.....

Lucifer uss taraf jaa nahi raha tha kyunki usko iss jagah pe ab sab kuch hi ajeeb lag raha tha.....aur wo ye nahi chahta tha ki jo wo yaha pe aane ke baad itne waqt se kar raaha tha wapas se kuch waisa hi kare.......Par dusri taraf jo tha......usko uss jagah se bahar nikalna tha.....aur abhi uske saamne ek portal aa gaya tha.....wo kaise iss mauke ko chod deta......

Wo uss Portal se bahar aa gaya.......aur jab aaya to usne apne saamne Lucifer ko paaya.......

Ye koi aur nahi tha.......Slayer ke body mein Justin tha......iss waqt Dhruv ka puri tarah se kaabu nahi tha uss body pe.....

Ab Justin to jaanta tha apne pita ko.....to wo ekdum se khush ho gaya ye dekh ke ki uske pita waha pe hai......par isse pahle ki wo kuch kah pata.......

Lucifer ne uspe hamla kar diya.......

Lucifer koi aam banda tha nahi......wo Demos ka Raja tha......usne naa jaane kitni ladaiyan ladi hui thi.......wo jaanta tha......ki pahli nazar mein kisi ko bhi dost to nahi kaha jaa sakta......aur jo dost nahi hai.....usse agar aap kisi anjaan si aur ajeeb si jagah pe milo to.....hamla karna aur uske upar kaabu pana hi sabse sahi tarika hai.....

Ye har tarah ke jeevon mein hota hai......

To Lucifer ne kar diya hamla.....aur Justin iss baat ko samajh nahi paaya.......

Ab Justin theek hai rajkumar hai Demos ka......par ye banda paida hone ke baad se hi bimar raha hai.......Lucifer ne isko training dilwai thi.....khud se bhi di thi.....par ek limit mein di thi.......Justin kabhi bhi.....ek kaddi training ke liye taiyar hi nahi tha......uska sarir itna kamzor tha ki agar usko training di jaati acche se to wo mar jaata....

Haa par dimmag tez tha iss Justin ka......ye banda plans banaya karta tha.....aur plans acche bhi hote the......

Par yaha pe....yaha pe kuch alag hi tha.....

Lucifer ne uspe hamla kar diya......aur wo sambhal nahi paaya......

Waise jyada kuch hua nahi tha......Slayer ki body mein tha wo.....bahar kya hi hona tha.......haa bas 2-4 kadam picche ko chala gaya tha wo.....

Lekin wo akela to tha nahi uss body mein jo uss body ko control kar paaye.....bahar kuch nahi hua......par body ke ander ek alag si halchal hone lag gayi.......Dhruv ab Slayer ki body pe wapas se control lene ki koshish karne lag gaya aur......aur wo dheere dheere kamiyab bhi ho raha tha.....

Yaha bahar Lucifer ne dekha ki uske vaar ka jyada koi asar hua nahi hai uske saamne wale pe.....to usne wapas se waar karne ka socha......

Justin - Dad......ye main...hu.....Justin....

Usne bolne ki koshish to kari.....par wo kuch bol paata usse pahle......uske muh ke aadhe hisse pe Dhruv ka control aa gaya tha.....jis wajah se wo bol nahi paaya.....aur bas ak ajeeb si gurrahat nikli muh se.....

Ab halat aise the ki body ke kuch parts pe Justin ka to kuch parts pe Dhruv ka control tha......Justin body ko rokne ki koshish kar raha tha kyunki saamne uska apna baap khada tha.....Dhruv Lucifer ko maarne ki koshish kar raha tha kyunki saamne wala......matlab Lucifer uspe hamla kar raha tha.....

Lucifer iss baar waar kar pata usse pahle hi....Dhruv ne usko ek haath se pakad liya......aur waha se durr fenk diya.......aur Justin.....wo uss haath ko control hi nahi kar paa raha tha.....

Lucifer ne jo waar kiya tha wo wala bhale hi naa laga ho inko.....par ye jo fenka tha Dhruv ne Lucifer ko.......wo dur tak gaya tha....aur akela nahi aas pass ke kuch ped bhi leke gaya tha wo.....aur Dhruv iske baad rukne wala nahi tha.....wo aage gaya.....aur usne uske baad wapas se Lucifer ko utaya aur usko maarne ke liye apne dusre haath ka use karne ki koshish karne lag gaya......par....wo use nahi kar paa raha tha....

Justin ka body pe jitna bhi control iss waqt tak baccha hua tha.....wo usse puri koshish kar raha tha ki wo apne pita ko baccha sakke.....par uski baari khatam ho rahi thi.....

Dhruv se jab dusra haath use nahi ho paa raha tha....to Lucifer ko mauka mil gaya.....aur usne wapas se waar kar diya.....waar theek thaak tha.....jiski wajah se Dhruv ke haath se wo chhut gaya.....aur chuttne ke baad kisi tarah dur hatt ke khada hone ki koshish karne lag gaya.....par usse nahi hua jaa raha tha.....

Slayer ki body mein hadd se jyada takat aa gayi thi iss waqt ko..... Yahi to karan thi ki wo Dhruv jaise ko bhi apne sarir ke ander rakh paa rahi thi....aur Justin...jisko itni power de di gayi usko bhi apne ander rakh paa rahi thi.

Wahi dusri taraf....Pankaj aur Madhu dono hi abhi tak neend mein the...aur ye accha tha unn sab ke liye...Prateek aur baaki sab wapas to aa gaye the par inko samajh nahi aa raha tha jab dono jaagenge to kya hoga..

Kya unn dono ko wo sab yaad hoga yaa phir nahi...iske picche ki bhi wajah thi...Madhu jab uss mahel mein pahuchi to wo ek taraf Pankaj ko bacha rahi thi apne ek haath se usko ek suraksha ghere mein rakh kar...bas yahi wali baat Prateek ko samajh nahi aa rahi thi aur pareshan kiye jaa rahi thi.

Uske hisab se abhi bhi Madhu ko kuch bhi yaad nahi hai...to jab bhi wo Golden power ke control mein hoti hai to wo puri tarah se apne ass pass ke chizzon ko bhul ke bas wahi karti hai jo itne hazaron saalo mein Golden power ne usse sikha tha...apno ki suraksha karna aur jo unke liye khatra sabit ho rahe ho unko khatam karna...aur uske apne kaun hai ye baat bhi usko Golden power ko hi pata hoti thi.

Iss baar ye alag tha... Prateek ke hisab se agar Madhu usko bachane aati hai jab wo musibat mein ho to ye baat samajh aati bhi hai....dono ka rishta bahut purana hai aur uss samay se hai jab Madhu Golden Power ko acche se control kar liya karti thi....lekin Pankaj...ye to bas kuch waqt pahle ka mila hua hai....

Iske karan hi uske mann mein wo sawal baar baar aa raha tha wapas se....kahi Madhu ko sab yaad to nahi hai.... Aur agar aisa hai to inn sab ka kya hi matlab banta hai.,...ye sab jo hai.... Wo yaha hai apne Mata Pita ko dhundhne ke liye unke saath rahne ke liye apne pariwar walo ki talash mein...... Ye sab bas aise hi hai....

Aur jaisa ki pahle bhi hua tha..... Iss point pe aane ke baad Prateek ko lagta hai ki wo hi galat soch raha hai...

Rupal - Prateek.... Prateek kya hua... Tu bol kyun nahi raha....

Prateek - ahaaaa.... Kya hua... Aap kuch bol rahi thi.

K.Bua - arre hum baat kar rahe the ki Pankaj ko to kisi tarah se sambhal hi lenge par ye Madhu ka kya....

Prateek - hume unn dono ke uthne ka intezar karna hoga usse pahle humme nahi pata hai ki unko kya kuch yaad hoga aur kya nahi.

Rupal - arre ghadi dekho...kuch hi der mein Mummy wapas aa jaayengi aur jab wo unn dono ko yaha dekhengi sote hue....to phir unko batana hoga...

Chachi - kya batana hoga.....tum sab ke sab yaha pe....Nikita tumhe to school mein hona chahiye tha naa aur tum dono ko bhi...

P.Bua - wo bhabhi wo classes khatam ho hi gaye the....to humne socha ki yahi pe aa jaaye...

Chachi - manna tum sab ko school se bahar nikalne ka khufiya rasta pata hai.... Parye acchi baat nahi hai ki roj ke roj waha se nikal hi jaao... Aur tum dono to waha pe padhati ho... Aise padhane wale honge to pata nahi padhne wale bacche kaise honge.... Kabhi Kisi niyam ko maanege bhi yaa nahi...

Chachi ne aate hi lecture dena shuru kar diya tha par abhi unki nazar Prateek pe nahi padi thi... Abhitak to nahi

Chachi - Tum bhi yaha aa gaye... Tumko to iss waqt Wo Madhu ke pass hona chahiye tha... Madhu se yaad aaya.... Wo Pankaj aaya tha yaha pe kaam tha sayad usko kuch...

Koi kuch aur bolta usse pahle hi room mein se saman girne ki aawaj aayi....

Next update mein dekhte hai Pankaj aur Madhu ke jaagne pe kya hota hai saath hi Nikita ka Leader se milna aur Lucifer ki halat..
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Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum


"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

As you all know, in previous week we announced USC and also opened Rules and Queries thread after some time. Before all this, chit-chat thread already opened in Hindi section.

Well, Just want to inform that it is a Short story contest, in this you can post post story under any prefix. with minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words . That is why, i want to invite you so that you can portray your thoughts using your words into a story which whole xforum would watch. This is a great step for you and for your stories cause USC's stories are read by every reader of Xforum. You are one of the best writers of Xforum, and your story is also going very well. That is why We whole heatedly request you to write a short story For USC. We know that you do not have time to spare but even after that we also know that you are capable of doing everything and bound to no limits.

And the readers who does not want to write they can also participate for the "Best Readers Award" .. You just have to give your reviews on the Posted stories in USC

"Winning Writer's will be awarded with Cash prizes and another awards "and along with that they get a chance to sticky their thread in their section so their thread remains on the top. That is why This is a fantastic chance for you all to make a great image on the mind of all reader and stretch your reach to the mark. This is a golden chance for all of you to portrait your thoughts into words to show us here in USC. So, bring it on and show us all your ideas, show it to the world.

Entry thread will be opened on 7th February, meaning you can start submission of your stories from 7th of feb and that will be opened till 25th of feb. During this you can post your story, so it is better for you to start writing your story in the given time.

And one more thing! Story is to be posted in one post only, cause this is a short story contest that means we can only hope for short stories. So you are not permitted to post your story in many post/parts. If you have any query regarding this, you can contact any staff member.



To chat or ask any doubt on a story, Use this thread — Chit Chat Thread

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Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof 200 Likes for each report



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