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BASIC INTRO OF STORY
The story revolves around Rumi, a servant in a Thakur household, who is caught in a web of power dynamics, family politics, and personal vendettas. Rumi, who has lost his memory, is guided by a mysterious entity named Rabi. He navigates through the complexities of the Thakur family, dealing with various characters, each with their own agendas and secrets. Rumi's journey is marked by his struggle to reclaim his identity, his interactions with the Thakur family, and his quest for revenge against those who wronged him. The narrative explores themes of loyalty, betrayal, and the quest for power.


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2 3 Martaba story likhne ki koshish ki lekin har dafa koi na koi masla pesh aa jaata aur mujhe story chorni pardti khair wapis sy ussi khawab ussi umeed ki rah par chalte huwe k kabhi tou mai bhi apni aik Long sex story complete krr k doon gaa iss forum ko tou haazir hoon phir wohi khawab poora krne k liye aik baar phir sy -------- Aap sab ka sath aur aapki support mera Hosla banne tou mujhe ziada muskhil nahi ho gi ye story complete krne mai

Rahi baat Story ki tou ye aik incest story hai lekin baaki incest Stories sy thoda hatt k iss mai Hero jo hai story ka uss ki family ko marwa diya jaata hai aur hero ko bhi lekin God uss ko aik aur Chance deta hai kisi aur body mai bhejj k aur wo body uss k dushmano k ghar mai nokar ki thi
lekin Hero unn sabhi ko jaan sy marne ki bajaye kuch ziada hi saza dene ka sochta hai ------- aur wo sazain dekhne k liye bane rahiye story k sath


abhi aap soch rahain hon gye k incest kahan hai iss mai tou aapko mai bata doon k story jab kaafi saari adultry krr chuki ho gi tou hero ki family ko shamil kiya jaaye gaa
Iss story ka maksak 100% entertainment hai so koi bhi agar aisa plot aa jaaye jo aapko pasnd naa ho tou khul k apni raaye ka izhar kijye gaa
 
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Noori_Natt

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aik baat
mai bata doon iss story k baare mai aur
mai unn writers mai sy nahi hoon jo 99.9% sex likhain balki meri story mai detailed aur kuch Reality based decisions ho gye

like ye nahi k samne 150 Ghunda khada hai aur un sab k hath mai pistol hai aur mera hero unn ko zameen sy koi nalka ukhad k maar daale yaa koi murghi phain k maar daale
Bhale hi maine Apni story mai aik System ko add kiya hai lekin maine apne Hero ko kaafi kazor banaya hai jo aista aista Grow up ho gaa aur iss sy story mai bohut overpowered hero nahi mille gaa q k bohut ziada overpowered hero jo hai wo story ka maza kirkara krr deta hai

so jahan hero ko maar khani padi wo khaaye gaa jahan uss ko logon ki tatte uthane pade wo uthaye gaa aur ache sy polish kry gaa lekin mai aik cheez ki Guarranty deta hoon k Baap ka Dada ka Bhai ka sab ka badla le gaa apun



Baaki story Kuch themes ko follow kry gi

1--- Jin sy badla lena hai unko nuqsaan pohnchana aur unki izzat ko nuksaan pohnchana

2--- Gaon ki aurton aur k sath sex aur bina sex wali zindagi

3--- College k doston Teachers aur unse related logon k sath sex aur bina sex wali zindagi

4---Buissness krna aur iss k saath baaki cheezain sambhalna

5--- Apne aap ko low profile rakhne ki poori koshish krna

6--- jab tak hero ki doosri life k parents nahi aate tou tab tak aapko normal Characters ka incest deta rahoon gaa taa k mery pyare readers ko ye naa lage k maine ooper incest likha hai aur neechy
 
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THE OFFER ----------




Maine story sath sath likhni hai matlab pehle sy prepared nahi hai bass aik mind mai line khenchi hui hai k kahan sy kahan ly k jaani hai story tou abhi 90% of the story line aur characters nahi likhe huwe so jo Bhi Reader meri Har aik post par React aur uss ka koi postive yaa creative reply krta rahe gaa har baar tou yakeen maaniye jab bhi mujhe koi maze ka character introduce krna huwa tou mai uss reader sy rabta krr k uss sy uss ki marzi ka naam pooch k character ka naam rakhoon gaa
Baaki Love you Guys
 
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Hukum utna jitna koi sunn k maan ly ——————— (wo aadmi kursi sy uth k apne sharab k glass mai dekhta huwa phir bola) aur Hakoomat utni jitni Hukum sunne walon k zameen ho Kamlesh
(matlab k Hakoomat sirf wahan tak jahan tak Hukum manne wale hon ————- my fav line from Landa Bazar drama)
Kamlesh= tou iss ka matlab ab Kamlesh thakur darr k beth jaaye bajaye ladne k ( ghusse mai bolta huwa)
Wo aadmi= Apne sipahion sy Jangain nahi ladi jaati __________ kamlesh kab samjho gye tum iss baat ko
Kamlesh= mai bass itna jaanta hoon k aaj uss ny Mangru ki laat todi hai kal ko Gard………
Aadmi= basss ————— (Naam hai Ramlal Thakur —— kabhi sirf apne pariwar ka Head huwa krta tha lekin abhi Poori iss state mai thakuron ka Head hai Thakuron ki aik purani parampara ki madad sy
Ramlal= bass kamlesh bass ———— Uss ki itni himmat nahi k …….
Kamlesh= himmat tou hai ———- Himmat tou hai wrna aaj tak thakuron k aam insan ki taraf koi aankh nahi utha sakta tha aur uss ny thakuron k sardar k bety ki taang todd di

Tabhi kamre mai peechy sy koi chalte huwe andar aaya
Lakshman= bass tang bhai ————— arre Drs keh rahy hain 2 paslian bhi tooti hain aur gattar ka paani munh sy pett k andar bhi gaya hai
Ramlal apni mutthi ko kasta hai lekin abhi bhi kaafi shant hi tha banisbat uss insan k jiss k bety ko kisi ny iss tarah maara ho k uss ki aik laat toot gayi ho aur 2 paslian aur ooper sy ilaake mai thu thu alag hui ho k aik nokar sy wo insan pitt k aa gaya jiss ny Ramlal ko sardari dilwai thi
Kamlesh= sunn liya (apne baap ko dekhte huwe)
Ramlal peechy kursi par bethta hai aur Sharab ka aik ghoont gale sy utarte huwe ghor sy kamlesh ko dekhte huwe bola
Ramlal= Mangru aakhir krne kiya gaya tha akku choudhary ki haveli par
Kamlesh= baat ye nahi hai k wo krne kiya gaya tha ————- baat ye hai k……….
Ramlal= baat ye hai k wo jo nokar hai wo akku ka khaas hai ————- aur Akku koi aisa nahi hai k jab munh chaha uss ka koi aadmi maar diya jaaye khaas krr k wo jiss ko k sab uss k dono haath paon kehte hain

Kamlesh= tum kabhi Iss sardari k Hakdaar ho hi nahi
Ramlal= tameez sy baat kro baap hoon tumhara
Kamlesh khada hota hai aur samne sy apni kameez ko ooper utha k uss ko bola
Kamlesh= lund ka baap ———— mera naa sahi uss ka tou ho jo tera sagga banta tha ————- jiss ny tumhain ye sardari dilai (aur ye bol k wo uss kamre sy nikal gaya)
Ramlal= hyee bhagwan iss ko aqal dy ———- iss ko sabar dy bhagwan (Lakshman ki taraf dekhte huwe)
Lakshman= mai janta hoon aap sulah ka soch rahe ho k abhi abhi tou khoon bahana roka hai ham ny aur wapis sy shuru na ho jaaye kahin lekin baat abhi izzat ki hai aur wo nokar hai
Ramlal= wohi nokar k jiss ko k akku ny hamara aur apna karobaar sambhalne k liye diya hai
Lakshman= filhaal tou baat ye hai k ham aik sulah k peechy aise chupp nahi beth sakte naye naye sardar banne hain aap agar ham ny khamoshi saadhi tou saare thakur iss cheez ko sweekar nahi karain gye

Lakshman glass ko neechy rakhta hai aur uss ko pair sy girata hai lekin pair sy girane sy hi wo toot gaya
Ramlal= samjhe kuch
lakshman= (chupp)
Ramlal= uss ko maine aista saa hi paon maara tha aur phir bhi wo toot gaya_________ iss wakt Choudhary aur hamare jo chuppe huwe raabte bann rahy hain ye issi tarah kache hain abhi agar paon maara tou aise hi toot jain gye aur apne hi paon mai lagain gye
Lakshman= aur abhi jo thakur aur baaki thu thu karain gye
Ramlal= Chalo phir raabta krr k dekhte hain unn sy ———— gaadian taiyar krao mai choudharion ki taraf jaa raha hoon aur Basheer ko bhi ye bata do

wo phir apni jagah sy uthta hai aur wahan sy chala jaata hai kahin

Akku= hakim tera dimaagh tou nahi kharab ho gaya tha jo tum ny mangru ……..
Hakim= malik wo kameena meri biwi par ………
Akku= tu jaanta bhi hai iss ka ab anjaam kiya ho gaa
Hakim= jo bhi anjaam ho gaa aap k hukum sy mai bhugtane ko taiyaar hoon aakhir 20 saal aapka namak khaya hai malik aapke liye jaan bhi dy sakta hoon
Akku= jaan deni hi tou nahi hai naa bewakoof ———— uss saale mangru ki ye Jurrat hui thi tu mujhe batata ———— tujhe kiya yakeen nahi tha mujh par
Hakim= ghalti ho gayi malik wo mai ghusse mai aa gaya tha apni pati ko haath lagata dekh (hakim sir jhuka k bola)
Akku= 20 saal ho gaaye hain tujhe yahan aaye huwe aur 20 saal tum ny namak halali ki hai meri chal tu preshan na ho tu mujhe bhi apne liye namak halal hi paaye gaa

Hakim g theek hai malik aur hakim wahan sy uth k ghar aa jaata hai jahan uss ki patni dari sehmi preshan bethi thi
Hakim= maine kaha tha naa k malik hamara sath dain gye maine aik umar di hai malik ki nokri mai
uss ki patni uss ki baat sunn k uss ko bhi apne sath gale laga leti hai
aur unn ka beta bhi unn dono ko gale laga leta hai
uss ka beta kareeb ** saal ka tha iss wajah sy uss ko ziada samajh nahi aa rahi thi k aakhir ho kiya raha ahi lekin wo maa baap ko preshan dekh k unn k gale laga huwa tha
khair thodi derr baad Ramlal ki gaadi Basheer k ghar sy ho k aane k Baad seedhi Akku choudhary k daare ( aik khulli haveli numa jagah jahan par kuch charpiyain bichai hoti hai aur gaon k log waise bethy hote hai) wahan andar aati hai aur rukti hai
Akku takur betha hukka pee raha tha

car sy Basheer Choudhary utarta hai
Akku= aao Choudhary aao ————- ab tou bhai khulle aam hi thakuron k saath aik hi gaadi mai
Basheer= bass ab kiya karain nayi nayi dostian hain tou purani dushmanion ka khoon dho rahe hain
Akku= aao bhai betho hamare bhi bhaag khulle k aaj yahan khud Ramlal thakur aaya hai apne pairon par (apne pairon par iss wajah sy kehta hai k yahan aik baar wo iss ko kidnap krr k laaya tha)
Ramlal= apne pairon par bhi aur hathiyar bhi ghar rakh k ( thoda dostana mahol mai bolte huwe)
Akku= akku choudhary k dery par tou hathiyar kab sy hatta diye gaye hai thakur ————— aao betho (aik charpai ki taraf ishara krte huwe) wo baat poori krne k baad apne hukke ka kashh maarta hai
Basheer bhi ramlal k sath akku k samne wali charpai par bethta hai
Akku= kaake bade malik aaye hain jaa sohna doodh ki baalti ly k aaa (oonchi si awaz sy kisi nokar ko)

Basheer uss ko muskra k dekhta hai aur phir bola
Basheer= doodh Akku iss ghar ka masi k marne k baad ajj peeny aaya hoon lajj rakhi ————— iss aaye ki
Akku= paa (bhai) basheer saadi tarfoon ty wekho buhe hi nahi ————- tussi kawidd krr gaye si k wakhri gall aye ( hamari taraf sy tou darwaze hi nahi hain aap hi ghussa krr gaye tou alag baat hai)
Basheer= jaante tou ho gye aakhir kia baat mujhe aur Ramlal ko yahan khench k laayi hai
Akku= Mangru ki ghalti
Ramlal= (Sawaliya andaaz mai apni roubdaar awaz sy) Mangru ki Ghalti ????
Akku= q tum kiya samajh rahy ho k Akku beghairat ho gaya hai jo sach nahi bole gaa (apne munh sy dhuwaan nikalne k baad Akku badi garajdaar awaaz mai bola)
Basheer= akku dekho ham yahan ladne nahi aaye

Akku= maine bhi koi hathiyar haath mai nahi liya huwa bhaa basheer
Basheer= Zuban sy bada bhi koi hathiyar hai Akku ———— iss ki dhaar badi tezz hoti hai
Akku= Mangru ny mery dery par aa k mery kaame ki biwi ki izzat par haath daalne ki koshish ki thi Bhaa ————- Naa tou Akku itna beghairat huwa hai naa hi Akku k kaame k wo apni aurton ki izzat naa bacha paayain
Basheer= ham badon ka abhi abhi samjhota huwa hai Akku ———- tu wapis sy khoon bahana chahta hai
Akku= 20 saal mery saath ho k wo banda lada hai ————- 20 saal pehle yahan aaya tha tou mainy uss ko nokar rakha tha aur aaj 20 saal baad uss ny aik sahi kaam kiya hai tou mai khoon behne k darr sy uss ko akaila chorr doon
Ramlal= Nokar Nokar hota hai Akku uss ko tum ny malik k tal……….
Akku= Nokar wo mera hai malik uss ka mai tha ————— (basheer ki aankhon mai dekhte huwe wo kehta hai)
Basheer= baat tumhari sahi hai lekin Akku phir bhi wo hai tou nokar hi Choudharion ka yaa Wo bhi choudhary ho gaya

Akku chhup chaap uss ki taraf dekhta raha aur phir tabhi aik baalti bhar k wo nokar dhoodh ki laata hai
Akku= theek hai nokar hai lekin ghalti mangru ki thi ————- ham ny Thakuron k sath haath milaya seeny seeny sy lagaye aur gale mily the barabri par ————— naa k ham ny koi aurtain pesh krr k sulah ki thi
jab uss wakt ham ny aurtain pesh nahi ki thi tou thakuron ko abb q laga k akku k dery par kaam krne wali aurtain uss k liye hain k aaye aur kuch bhi krne ka soche
Ramlal= Akku baat tumhari theek hai Ham ny barabari mai sulah ki hai lekin barabri ki sulah mai Mangru sy koi ghalti hui bhi thi tou uss ki ye saza nahi banti thi
Akku= hmm saza tou uss ko panchayat mai dena banta tha aakhir jo aurat ki izzat lootne ki saza hoti hai yaani k sir kaatna lekin masle ki baat ye hai k mera aadmi wakt par wahan pohnch gaya aur uss ny izzat lutne nahi di aur phir iss wajah sy uss ko kam saza di gayi khud sy hi

Ramlal= bass akku…….. lagta hai tum ny sulah ko gale sy utara nahi hai jo tu aik nokar ki wajah sy wapis sy khana jangi chahta hai
Basheer= Ramlal ki baat thik hai Akku ___________ Choti zaat ka nokar hai uss ko kaho k saza ly ly sab k samne aur phir kuch paise dy ly k……….
Akku= Bhaa basheer Ghalti Mangru ki hai aur aap q bhool rahe hain k ……..
Basheer= ab tu laaj nahi rakhe gaa mery yahan aane ki
Akku chupp krr jaata hai
Basheer= batao kitni paise deny hain uss ko mai dy doon gaa uss ko
Akku= mera wafadaar hai wo
Basheer= 20 lac theek hai ab tera khaas hai tou rakkam bhi badi dy raha hoon
Akku= baat sirf uss ko maarne peetne ki hogi ————- uss aadmi sy mujhe hazaron kaam padte hain agar koi ulti seedhi chot uss ko dy k nakam banaya gaya tou mai phir thakuron k sath apni sulah tooti hui hi dekhoon gaa

Ramlal= befikkar raho aakhir mera bhi paisa tumhare sath iss naye project par laga hai mai tumhare manager ko nakara nahi banaoon gaa
Akku= phir aik nokar ko bhejj k Hakim ko bulane ka kehta hai
uss k baad hona kiya hai Hakim aaya aur uss ko Akku k kehne par 300 Kode maare gaye aur uss ki bhi aik taang aur 2 paslian todii gayi
Hakim k dill par ye baat bohut burre tareeky sy lagi
wo bilkul chota saa tha jab wo apne ghar sy bhaag k yahan aaya tha aur yahan uss ko akku ny apna nokar rakha tha aur aaj 20 saal ho gaye the uss ko takreeban yahan uss ny koi aisa kaam nahi kiya jiss sy akku ny uss ko mana kiya aur koi aisa kaam nahi jo akku ny kaha ho aur uss ny kiya na ho
sir uss ka ooper ankhain neechi aur kaam sy kaam rakhna uss ka kaam
20 saalon mai uss ny kabhi nazar utha k akku ki ghar ki kisi aurat ko nahi dekha tha
akku uss par ankh band krr k bharosa krta tha uss ki inhi khasoosiyat ki wajah sy


Pehli Update kaisi lagi zaroor bataiye gaa aur agar thoda aur fast kroon story past ko tou bataiye gaa
 
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Hukum utna jitna koi sunn k maan ly ——————— (wo aadmi kursi sy uth k apne sharab k glass mai dekhta huwa phir bola) aur Hakoomat utni jitni Hukum sunne walon k zameen ho Kamlesh
(matlab k Hakoomat sirf wahan tak jahan tak Hukum manne wale hon ————- my fav line from Landa Bazar drama)
Kamlesh= tou iss ka matlab ab Kamlesh thakur darr k beth jaaye bajaye ladne k ( ghusse mai bolta huwa)
Wo aadmi= Apne sipahion sy Jangain nahi ladi jaati __________ kamlesh kab samjho gye tum iss baat ko
Kamlesh= mai bass itna jaanta hoon k aaj uss ny Mangru ki laat todi hai kal ko Gard………
Aadmi= basss ————— (Naam hai Ramlal Thakur —— kabhi sirf apne pariwar ka Head huwa krta tha lekin abhi Poori iss state mai thakuron ka Head hai Thakuron ki aik purani parampara ki madad sy
Ramlal= bass kamlesh bass ———— Uss ki itni himmat nahi k …….
Kamlesh= himmat tou hai ———- Himmat tou hai wrna aaj tak thakuron k aam insan ki taraf koi aankh nahi utha sakta tha aur uss ny thakuron k sardar k bety ki taang todd di

Tabhi kamre mai peechy sy koi chalte huwe andar aaya
Lakshman= bass tang bhai ————— arre Drs keh rahy hain 2 paslian bhi tooti hain aur gattar ka paani munh sy pett k andar bhi gaya hai
Ramlal apni mutthi ko kasta hai lekin abhi bhi kaafi shant hi tha banisbat uss insan k jiss k bety ko kisi ny iss tarah maara ho k uss ki aik laat toot gayi ho aur 2 paslian aur ooper sy ilaake mai thu thu alag hui ho k aik nokar sy wo insan pitt k aa gaya jiss ny Ramlal ko sardari dilwai thi
Kamlesh= sunn liya (apne baap ko dekhte huwe)
Ramlal peechy kursi par bethta hai aur Sharab ka aik ghoont gale sy utarte huwe ghor sy kamlesh ko dekhte huwe bola
Ramlal= Mangru aakhir krne kiya gaya tha akku choudhary ki haveli par
Kamlesh= baat ye nahi hai k wo krne kiya gaya tha ————- baat ye hai k……….
Ramlal= baat ye hai k wo jo nokar hai wo akku ka khaas hai ————- aur Akku koi aisa nahi hai k jab munh chaha uss ka koi aadmi maar diya jaaye khaas krr k wo jiss ko k sab uss k dono haath paon kehte hain

Kamlesh= tum kabhi Iss sardari k Hakdaar ho hi nahi
Ramlal= tameez sy baat kro baap hoon tumhara
Kamlesh khada hota hai aur samne sy apni kameez ko ooper utha k uss ko bola
Kamlesh= lund ka baap ———— mera naa sahi uss ka tou ho jo tera sagga banta tha ————- jiss ny tumhain ye sardari dilai (aur ye bol k wo uss kamre sy nikal gaya)
Ramlal= hyee bhagwan iss ko aqal dy ———- iss ko sabar dy bhagwan (Lakshman ki taraf dekhte huwe)
Lakshman= mai janta hoon aap sulah ka soch rahe ho k abhi abhi tou khoon bahana roka hai ham ny aur wapis sy shuru na ho jaaye kahin lekin baat abhi izzat ki hai aur wo nokar hai
Ramlal= wohi nokar k jiss ko k akku ny hamara aur apna karobaar sambhalne k liye diya hai
Lakshman= filhaal tou baat ye hai k ham aik sulah k peechy aise chupp nahi beth sakte naye naye sardar banne hain aap agar ham ny khamoshi saadhi tou saare thakur iss cheez ko sweekar nahi karain gye

Lakshman glass ko neechy rakhta hai aur uss ko pair sy girata hai lekin pair sy girane sy hi wo toot gaya
Ramlal= samjhe kuch
lakshman= (chupp)
Ramlal= uss ko maine aista saa hi paon maara tha aur phir bhi wo toot gaya_________ iss wakt Choudhary aur hamare jo chuppe huwe raabte bann rahy hain ye issi tarah kache hain abhi agar paon maara tou aise hi toot jain gye aur apne hi paon mai lagain gye
Lakshman= aur abhi jo thakur aur baaki thu thu karain gye
Ramlal= Chalo phir raabta krr k dekhte hain unn sy ———— gaadian taiyar krao mai choudharion ki taraf jaa raha hoon aur Basheer ko bhi ye bata do

wo phir apni jagah sy uthta hai aur wahan sy chala jaata hai kahin

Akku= hakim tera dimaagh tou nahi kharab ho gaya tha jo tum ny mangru ……..
Hakim= malik wo kameena meri biwi par ………
Akku= tu jaanta bhi hai iss ka ab anjaam kiya ho gaa
Hakim= jo bhi anjaam ho gaa aap k hukum sy mai bhugtane ko taiyaar hoon aakhir 20 saal aapka namak khaya hai malik aapke liye jaan bhi dy sakta hoon
Akku= jaan deni hi tou nahi hai naa bewakoof ———— uss saale mangru ki ye Jurrat hui thi tu mujhe batata ———— tujhe kiya yakeen nahi tha mujh par
Hakim= ghalti ho gayi malik wo mai ghusse mai aa gaya tha apni pati ko haath lagata dekh (hakim sir jhuka k bola)
Akku= 20 saal ho gaaye hain tujhe yahan aaye huwe aur 20 saal tum ny namak halali ki hai meri chal tu preshan na ho tu mujhe bhi apne liye namak halal hi paaye gaa

Hakim g theek hai malik aur hakim wahan sy uth k ghar aa jaata hai jahan uss ki patni dari sehmi preshan bethi thi
Hakim= maine kaha tha naa k malik hamara sath dain gye maine aik umar di hai malik ki nokri mai
uss ki patni uss ki baat sunn k uss ko bhi apne sath gale laga leti hai
aur unn ka beta bhi unn dono ko gale laga leta hai
uss ka beta kareeb ** saal ka tha iss wajah sy uss ko ziada samajh nahi aa rahi thi k aakhir ho kiya raha ahi lekin wo maa baap ko preshan dekh k unn k gale laga huwa tha
khair thodi derr baad Ramlal ki gaadi Basheer k ghar sy ho k aane k Baad seedhi Akku choudhary k daare ( aik khulli haveli numa jagah jahan par kuch charpiyain bichai hoti hai aur gaon k log waise bethy hote hai) wahan andar aati hai aur rukti hai
Akku takur betha hukka pee raha tha

car sy Basheer Choudhary utarta hai
Akku= aao Choudhary aao ————- ab tou bhai khulle aam hi thakuron k saath aik hi gaadi mai
Basheer= bass ab kiya karain nayi nayi dostian hain tou purani dushmanion ka khoon dho rahe hain
Akku= aao bhai betho hamare bhi bhaag khulle k aaj yahan khud Ramlal thakur aaya hai apne pairon par (apne pairon par iss wajah sy kehta hai k yahan aik baar wo iss ko kidnap krr k laaya tha)
Ramlal= apne pairon par bhi aur hathiyar bhi ghar rakh k ( thoda dostana mahol mai bolte huwe)
Akku= akku choudhary k dery par tou hathiyar kab sy hatta diye gaye hai thakur ————— aao betho (aik charpai ki taraf ishara krte huwe) wo baat poori krne k baad apne hukke ka kashh maarta hai
Basheer bhi ramlal k sath akku k samne wali charpai par bethta hai
Akku= kaake bade malik aaye hain jaa sohna doodh ki baalti ly k aaa (oonchi si awaz sy kisi nokar ko)

Basheer uss ko muskra k dekhta hai aur phir bola
Basheer= doodh Akku iss ghar ka masi k marne k baad ajj peeny aaya hoon lajj rakhi ————— iss aaye ki
Akku= paa (bhai) basheer saadi tarfoon ty wekho buhe hi nahi ————- tussi kawidd krr gaye si k wakhri gall aye ( hamari taraf sy tou darwaze hi nahi hain aap hi ghussa krr gaye tou alag baat hai)
Basheer= jaante tou ho gye aakhir kia baat mujhe aur Ramlal ko yahan khench k laayi hai
Akku= Mangru ki ghalti
Ramlal= (Sawaliya andaaz mai apni roubdaar awaz sy) Mangru ki Ghalti ????
Akku= q tum kiya samajh rahy ho k Akku beghairat ho gaya hai jo sach nahi bole gaa (apne munh sy dhuwaan nikalne k baad Akku badi garajdaar awaaz mai bola)
Basheer= akku dekho ham yahan ladne nahi aaye

Akku= maine bhi koi hathiyar haath mai nahi liya huwa bhaa basheer
Basheer= Zuban sy bada bhi koi hathiyar hai Akku ———— iss ki dhaar badi tezz hoti hai
Akku= Mangru ny mery dery par aa k mery kaame ki biwi ki izzat par haath daalne ki koshish ki thi Bhaa ————- Naa tou Akku itna beghairat huwa hai naa hi Akku k kaame k wo apni aurton ki izzat naa bacha paayain
Basheer= ham badon ka abhi abhi samjhota huwa hai Akku ———- tu wapis sy khoon bahana chahta hai
Akku= 20 saal mery saath ho k wo banda lada hai ————- 20 saal pehle yahan aaya tha tou mainy uss ko nokar rakha tha aur aaj 20 saal baad uss ny aik sahi kaam kiya hai tou mai khoon behne k darr sy uss ko akaila chorr doon
Ramlal= Nokar Nokar hota hai Akku uss ko tum ny malik k tal……….
Akku= Nokar wo mera hai malik uss ka mai tha ————— (basheer ki aankhon mai dekhte huwe wo kehta hai)
Basheer= baat tumhari sahi hai lekin Akku phir bhi wo hai tou nokar hi Choudharion ka yaa Wo bhi choudhary ho gaya

Akku chhup chaap uss ki taraf dekhta raha aur phir tabhi aik baalti bhar k wo nokar dhoodh ki laata hai
Akku= theek hai nokar hai lekin ghalti mangru ki thi ————- ham ny Thakuron k sath haath milaya seeny seeny sy lagaye aur gale mily the barabri par ————— naa k ham ny koi aurtain pesh krr k sulah ki thi
jab uss wakt ham ny aurtain pesh nahi ki thi tou thakuron ko abb q laga k akku k dery par kaam krne wali aurtain uss k liye hain k aaye aur kuch bhi krne ka soche
Ramlal= Akku baat tumhari theek hai Ham ny barabari mai sulah ki hai lekin barabri ki sulah mai Mangru sy koi ghalti hui bhi thi tou uss ki ye saza nahi banti thi
Akku= hmm saza tou uss ko panchayat mai dena banta tha aakhir jo aurat ki izzat lootne ki saza hoti hai yaani k sir kaatna lekin masle ki baat ye hai k mera aadmi wakt par wahan pohnch gaya aur uss ny izzat lutne nahi di aur phir iss wajah sy uss ko kam saza di gayi khud sy hi

Ramlal= bass akku…….. lagta hai tum ny sulah ko gale sy utara nahi hai jo tu aik nokar ki wajah sy wapis sy khana jangi chahta hai
Basheer= Ramlal ki baat thik hai Akku ___________ Choti zaat ka nokar hai uss ko kaho k saza ly ly sab k samne aur phir kuch paise dy ly k……….
Akku= Bhaa basheer Ghalti Mangru ki hai aur aap q bhool rahe hain k ……..
Basheer= ab tu laaj nahi rakhe gaa mery yahan aane ki
Akku chupp krr jaata hai
Basheer= batao kitni paise deny hain uss ko mai dy doon gaa uss ko
Akku= mera wafadaar hai wo
Basheer= 20 lac theek hai ab tera khaas hai tou rakkam bhi badi dy raha hoon
Akku= baat sirf uss ko maarne peetne ki hogi ————- uss aadmi sy mujhe hazaron kaam padte hain agar koi ulti seedhi chot uss ko dy k nakam banaya gaya tou mai phir thakuron k sath apni sulah tooti hui hi dekhoon gaa

Ramlal= befikkar raho aakhir mera bhi paisa tumhare sath iss naye project par laga hai mai tumhare manager ko nakara nahi banaoon gaa
Akku= phir aik nokar ko bhejj k Hakim ko bulane ka kehta hai
uss k baad hona kiya hai Hakim aaya aur uss ko Akku k kehne par 300 Kode maare gaye aur uss ki bhi aik taang aur 2 paslian todii gayi
Hakim k dill par ye baat bohut burre tareeky sy lagi
wo bilkul chota saa tha jab wo apne ghar sy bhaag k yahan aaya tha aur yahan uss ko akku ny apna nokar rakha tha aur aaj 20 saal ho gaye the uss ko takreeban yahan uss ny koi aisa kaam nahi kiya jiss sy akku ny uss ko mana kiya aur koi aisa kaam nahi jo akku ny kaha ho aur uss ny kiya na ho
sir uss ka ooper ankhain neechi aur kaam sy kaam rakhna uss ka kaam
20 saalon mai uss ny kabhi nazar utha k akku ki ghar ki kisi aurat ko nahi dekha tha
akku uss par ankh band krr k bharosa krta tha uss ki inhi khasoosiyat ki wajah sy


Pehli Update kaisi lagi zaroor bataiye gaa aur agar thoda aur fast kroon story past ko tou bataiye gaa
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