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Thriller Hotel Royal Palace (Completed)
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jab jab jo jo hona hai tab tab wo wo hota hai...
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shukriya bhai
aage aage kai raaz samne aayenge
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koi baat nahi dost intzaar rahega
thank you for support bhailog
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agla update bas thodi der main
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Update 16
"ha wo ghatna bhi kuch samay pehle hi ghati hai matlab mujhe abhi us bare main..." ajit apni baat puri kar pata isse pehle hi nera cheekh padi thi aur dusre hi pal behosh ho gayi..............
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Ajit ya jaal dono main se koi bhi nera ko sambhal nahi paya tha aur is ghatna se antahpur main bhishan shanti fail gayi thi, waha maujood har kisi ki najar unlogo par thi jaal niche baith kar nera ko uthane ki koshish karne laga aur ajit ki or dekh kar bola
"halkat!! meri panti minochar ki beti hai...!" jaal
Ajit ne kuch bolne ki liye muh khola lekin fir band kar diya, Nera agar waha paagal jaisi na baithti aur ajit ko agar pata hota ki nera minochar irani ki beti hai to wo uske samne jaal ke ye baat nahi batata.
Minochar Irani ke bare main jaal aur uski patni sari information de sakte hai aisa Lamba ne ajit se kaha tha iska matlab use ab samajh main aa raha tha lekin jo hona tha ho chuka tha ab uske bare main jyada sochne se koi matlab nahi tha
Kuch hi palo main nera ko hosh aa gaya aur jaal aur ajit ne use jaal ke bade se office ke sofe par baitha diya. Jaal ne office ke inbuilt bar se brandy nikali aur uska kadak peg bana kar nera ko diya jise wo ek ghut main pi gayi lekin apne pita ki maut ke shock se wo ab bhi ubri nahi thi jaal ne usse aaram se baat ki aur fir kone main baithe ajit ke paas aaya
"Mr. Deshmukh main nera ko ghar chhod aata hu" Jaal
"jaroor"
"bahut bhayanak ghatna huyi hai" jaal bola, nera jitna wo bhi ghabraya dikh raha tha "wo pregnent hai...chautha mahina chalu hai, kuch ulta seedha na ho bas..." jaal ne aage kaha, wo kabhi pareshan ho gaya tha
"kuch bhi nahi hoga" ajit jaal ko dheer dete huye bola aur ek cigarette jalayi "main ghatna ke bare main nahi bolunga lekin mujhe aapko aur bhi kai sari bate batani hai aap sabse pehle apne wakeel se contact kariye aur lamba ko chhudane ki koshish kariye main maine jo abhi aapko bataya wo hum dono ke alawa kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye aisa lamba ka strict order hai!" ajit ne baat puri ki
Jaal ne ha main garden hilayi
"lekin ye sab hua kaise??" jaal ne pucha aur ajit ne uske paas jitni info thi sab bataya
"MY GOD!! unhe goli mari gayi hai??lekin iske piche kya reason ho sakta hai??" jaal ne pucha
"mujhe isi bare main aapse baat karni hai, kuch idea hai aapko ki kon aisa kar sakta hai?? unki kisi se dushmini thi kya??" ajit ne pucha
"Nahi. aur unhe goli mari gayi hai ispar ab bhi mujhe vishwas nahi ho raha hai, business ke alawa wo bahut kam ghar se bahar nikalte the aur haal hi main to wo kisi se jyada milte bhi nahi the jyadatar samay wo apne ghar main hi hote the" jaal ne kaha
"aambetpada wale ghar main ??"
"ha, ambetpada main unka 70 acre ka chiku ka bagicha hai aur wahi unka bada bangla hai. main aur nera unhe dusre chotre bangle main rehte hai" jaal ne kaha
"hmm aap aaj dophar main gaye the anbetpapa??"
"nahi, main hotel main party ki tayari karne main busy tha, wo bhi ek tamasha hi hai" akhri vakya jaal ne dheere se bola lekin ajt ne sunliya lekin react nahi kiya aur jaal aage bola "dophar main nera shopping ke liye gayi thi aur sidhe hotel par aayi, main use bar main hi milne wala tha ye to aap samajh hi gaye honge"
"hmm, ek aur baat mujhe lagta hai us ladki ke aur minochar ke khoon main kuch commen link hai kya aapko bhi aisa lagta?" ajit ne sawaal kiya
"nahi mujhe to aise koi chances najar nahi aate" jaal ne ek line main jawaab diya
"mujhe lagta hai aap minochar ko ache se jante the"
"ha, sach kahu to ek saal pehle jab meri aur nera ki shadi huyi uske baad main unhe ache se janne laga lekin unka ki dushman nahi tha ye main kasam kha kar keh sakta hu...............mujhe lagta hai ab mujhe nikalna chahiye" jaal ne apni baat puri ki aur nera ke paas gaya aur use samjhake use khada rehne main madad ki
"main koi madad karu??" ajit ne pucha
"nahi wo theek hai, main jald se jald lautne ki koshish karta hu aur mujhe lagta hai aapko bhi party ke liye tayar hona hoga" ajit ke sharir par najar ghumate huye jaal bola
"ha mujhe bhi naha kar kapde change karne hai"
"main aapko adhe ghante main fir antahpur main milta hu"
"badhiya, man raah dekhunga"
bees minute ke baad ajit apne suit main tha, lamba ne use ek khas suite dene ko kaha tha, naha ke badhiya se party ke liye ready ajit fir se antahpur main aaya
cobra kiss ka teesra peg khatam ho gaya tha fir bhi jaal ab tak nahi aaya tha, usne aaram aaram se drink lene ka socha, antahpur ab sachme bharne laga tha lekin ajit ki ab kisi se bhi baat karne ki icha nahi thi wo to apne hi khayalo main khoya hua tha
Ajit ke hisab se ab tak koi bhi baat uske manlayak nahi huyi thi, uski aur lamba ki jaisi decide huyi thi waisi mulakat nahi ho payi thi uske baad madhuri sen ka uski aankhon ke samne khoon hua tha, rati ganguly ne use kast moment pe kalti de di thi aur nera ke sath to acha khasa tamasha hua tha aur pehle hi do khoon hone ki wajah se ab ajit se sambhalkar rehne ka nirnay liya
lekin............
itna sochne ke baad bhi ajit se murkhta ho gayi....aap kitna bhi acha plan banao0 lekin jab jab jo jo hona hai tab tab so so hota hai
kuch to hone wala hai aisa ajit ko reh reh kar lag raha tha, uska man bachain tha, waise to aisa kam hi hota tha lekin jab jab uska man baichain hota hai tab tab kuch hota hai iska use acha anubhav tha tabhi uski najaro main wo giri aur niyati ne sochi huyi ghatna hona suru ho gayi..........
"ha wo ghatna bhi kuch samay pehle hi ghati hai matlab mujhe abhi us bare main..." ajit apni baat puri kar pata isse pehle hi nera cheekh padi thi aur dusre hi pal behosh ho gayi..............
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Ajit ya jaal dono main se koi bhi nera ko sambhal nahi paya tha aur is ghatna se antahpur main bhishan shanti fail gayi thi, waha maujood har kisi ki najar unlogo par thi jaal niche baith kar nera ko uthane ki koshish karne laga aur ajit ki or dekh kar bola
"halkat!! meri panti minochar ki beti hai...!" jaal
Ajit ne kuch bolne ki liye muh khola lekin fir band kar diya, Nera agar waha paagal jaisi na baithti aur ajit ko agar pata hota ki nera minochar irani ki beti hai to wo uske samne jaal ke ye baat nahi batata.
Minochar Irani ke bare main jaal aur uski patni sari information de sakte hai aisa Lamba ne ajit se kaha tha iska matlab use ab samajh main aa raha tha lekin jo hona tha ho chuka tha ab uske bare main jyada sochne se koi matlab nahi tha
Kuch hi palo main nera ko hosh aa gaya aur jaal aur ajit ne use jaal ke bade se office ke sofe par baitha diya. Jaal ne office ke inbuilt bar se brandy nikali aur uska kadak peg bana kar nera ko diya jise wo ek ghut main pi gayi lekin apne pita ki maut ke shock se wo ab bhi ubri nahi thi jaal ne usse aaram se baat ki aur fir kone main baithe ajit ke paas aaya
"Mr. Deshmukh main nera ko ghar chhod aata hu" Jaal
"jaroor"
"bahut bhayanak ghatna huyi hai" jaal bola, nera jitna wo bhi ghabraya dikh raha tha "wo pregnent hai...chautha mahina chalu hai, kuch ulta seedha na ho bas..." jaal ne aage kaha, wo kabhi pareshan ho gaya tha
"kuch bhi nahi hoga" ajit jaal ko dheer dete huye bola aur ek cigarette jalayi "main ghatna ke bare main nahi bolunga lekin mujhe aapko aur bhi kai sari bate batani hai aap sabse pehle apne wakeel se contact kariye aur lamba ko chhudane ki koshish kariye main maine jo abhi aapko bataya wo hum dono ke alawa kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye aisa lamba ka strict order hai!" ajit ne baat puri ki
Jaal ne ha main garden hilayi
"lekin ye sab hua kaise??" jaal ne pucha aur ajit ne uske paas jitni info thi sab bataya
"MY GOD!! unhe goli mari gayi hai??lekin iske piche kya reason ho sakta hai??" jaal ne pucha
"mujhe isi bare main aapse baat karni hai, kuch idea hai aapko ki kon aisa kar sakta hai?? unki kisi se dushmini thi kya??" ajit ne pucha
"Nahi. aur unhe goli mari gayi hai ispar ab bhi mujhe vishwas nahi ho raha hai, business ke alawa wo bahut kam ghar se bahar nikalte the aur haal hi main to wo kisi se jyada milte bhi nahi the jyadatar samay wo apne ghar main hi hote the" jaal ne kaha
"aambetpada wale ghar main ??"
"ha, ambetpada main unka 70 acre ka chiku ka bagicha hai aur wahi unka bada bangla hai. main aur nera unhe dusre chotre bangle main rehte hai" jaal ne kaha
"hmm aap aaj dophar main gaye the anbetpapa??"
"nahi, main hotel main party ki tayari karne main busy tha, wo bhi ek tamasha hi hai" akhri vakya jaal ne dheere se bola lekin ajt ne sunliya lekin react nahi kiya aur jaal aage bola "dophar main nera shopping ke liye gayi thi aur sidhe hotel par aayi, main use bar main hi milne wala tha ye to aap samajh hi gaye honge"
"hmm, ek aur baat mujhe lagta hai us ladki ke aur minochar ke khoon main kuch commen link hai kya aapko bhi aisa lagta?" ajit ne sawaal kiya
"nahi mujhe to aise koi chances najar nahi aate" jaal ne ek line main jawaab diya
"mujhe lagta hai aap minochar ko ache se jante the"
"ha, sach kahu to ek saal pehle jab meri aur nera ki shadi huyi uske baad main unhe ache se janne laga lekin unka ki dushman nahi tha ye main kasam kha kar keh sakta hu...............mujhe lagta hai ab mujhe nikalna chahiye" jaal ne apni baat puri ki aur nera ke paas gaya aur use samjhake use khada rehne main madad ki
"main koi madad karu??" ajit ne pucha
"nahi wo theek hai, main jald se jald lautne ki koshish karta hu aur mujhe lagta hai aapko bhi party ke liye tayar hona hoga" ajit ke sharir par najar ghumate huye jaal bola
"ha mujhe bhi naha kar kapde change karne hai"
"main aapko adhe ghante main fir antahpur main milta hu"
"badhiya, man raah dekhunga"
bees minute ke baad ajit apne suit main tha, lamba ne use ek khas suite dene ko kaha tha, naha ke badhiya se party ke liye ready ajit fir se antahpur main aaya
cobra kiss ka teesra peg khatam ho gaya tha fir bhi jaal ab tak nahi aaya tha, usne aaram aaram se drink lene ka socha, antahpur ab sachme bharne laga tha lekin ajit ki ab kisi se bhi baat karne ki icha nahi thi wo to apne hi khayalo main khoya hua tha
Ajit ke hisab se ab tak koi bhi baat uske manlayak nahi huyi thi, uski aur lamba ki jaisi decide huyi thi waisi mulakat nahi ho payi thi uske baad madhuri sen ka uski aankhon ke samne khoon hua tha, rati ganguly ne use kast moment pe kalti de di thi aur nera ke sath to acha khasa tamasha hua tha aur pehle hi do khoon hone ki wajah se ab ajit se sambhalkar rehne ka nirnay liya
lekin............
itna sochne ke baad bhi ajit se murkhta ho gayi....aap kitna bhi acha plan banao0 lekin jab jab jo jo hona hai tab tab so so hota hai
kuch to hone wala hai aisa ajit ko reh reh kar lag raha tha, uska man bachain tha, waise to aisa kam hi hota tha lekin jab jab uska man baichain hota hai tab tab kuch hota hai iska use acha anubhav tha tabhi uski najaro main wo giri aur niyati ne sochi huyi ghatna hona suru ho gayi..........
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