Fantasy Hayaan - Ek Insaan Ya Shaitaan

[Hayaan]

Very nice updates ..........
Keep it up bro ........
waiting for next .........

Thanks Abbasi bhai
Reading and supporting

 

[Hayaan]

Ab tak ke updates ki Baat kare to
Fantastic hai.
Everything is superb good narration
Lets talk about story.

Kahani achi hai veer ka character bhi Mast hai
Mujhe sabse jyada veer aur meera ki chemistry achi lagi.
Unka pyaar karne ka tarika awesome hai.
Bhi story ko heroine ki jagah par hero narrate kare.
Villan mandali.

Iblis ka Naam badale dark devil thik hai ya wo jo ap chahe lekin Iblis nhi.
Aur angels ko add na kare kyoki unki sachai ap bhi ache se jante hai pichli updates me apne angels ke bare me jo likha wo bahut jyada bad hai isse logo ke dilo me angels ko lekar bu4ayi paida hogi

Itne characters hain ap unhe le le lekin angels nhi plz i request you.

Mai kisi ki story nhi padta apki story achi lagi that's i reading.
Agar esa hi raha to shayad age na pad paaun.

Thanks For Review and Advise

Jaisa aapne bataya hai waisa hi Edit kar dunga.....Bas thoda time dein....

 

[Hayaan]

Hii Friends thank you so much for reading my story and given your Valuable Review

Aaj ka update thodi der mein

 

[Hayaan]

Abb..takk...
Hum-dono bathroom gaye,
Kabeer ne Pyaar ki Nishani ko Saaf kiya,
Meera aur Kabeer Ekdusre ki Bahon mein so gaye......

Update No. 11 (Change-Life Style)
Abb..Aage...

Chidiyan Chah-chaha Rahi thi, Shor macha kar jaise bata rahi ho Subah ho chuki hai,

Suraj ki kirnon ne Kabeer ki aankho me dastak de di,
Jisse kabeer ki Aankhe khul gayi,

Aankhein kholte hi Sabse Pahle Kabeer ki Nazar Meera par padi,

Jo Bahut hi khoobusurat lag rahi thi,
uska chehra suraj ki kirno se aur bhi jyada Khila-Khila sa lag raha tha,

KABEER KO APNI bahon mei jakde huye badi hi masumiyat se so rahi thi,

Kabeer ne dhire se Meera ki Palkon ko choom liya apne hotho se,



Fir dhire se uske Surkh-Gulaab se Laal Gaal ko bhi Choom liya,
Meera Kashmasha gayi aur Aankhein khol di,

Kabeer ko, Khud ko ghurte huye Paya Jo muskurate huye ghoor raha tha,

Meera - Good morning !!

Kabeer - Aise thode na wish kiya jata ho,

Meera - To firr kaise..??



Kabeer ne aage badhkar,
Meera ke Gulab ki Pankhudi jaise Naram aur Shahad jaise meethe Hontho ko apne Hontho mein Kaid kar liya aur choosne laga,

Pahle Meera thoda Ladkhadayi lekin fir Kabeer ka sath dene lagi, aur dono iss rashbhare aanad ka maza uthane lage,

Jub dono ki Saans fool gayi to alaga huye,

Kabeer - Meri Jaan !!Aise kiya Jata hai,

Meera - Dhatt !! Besharam kahin ke, aur sharma gayi

Nayi subah ka aagaz dono ek dusre k hotho ko choomkar kiya,

Aisa hi Pyaar bhara Ek hafta- Guzar gaya,
Ab Meera ki Maa Rachna Devi bhi Aakar yehi Sabke sath rahne lagi,

""Aaj Kabeer aur Meera Maana Ganv Ja rahe the"", 'Catherine se milne,

Catherine Ek British Professor thi, jo jagah-Jagah jakar Invirnoment ke bare Researche karti thi,


Lekin pichhle 1 saal se Maana ganv me hi ruki huyi hai,

Meera se achhi dosti hai, Kyuki Meera aur Catherine sath-sath aas-pas ke jungle mein ghoomne aur Prakriti ki saundarya ko niharane jaya karte the !!

Meera ne, Kabeer aur Catherine, dono ko Ek-dusre ka Parichay karwaya,
aur apne aane ka karan bataya,

Pahlento catherine ne mana kiya,
Lekin Meera ne kaha wo jub tak yaha hai tab tak to hame kuchh sikha sakti hai,

Meera ne kisi bhi tarah karke Catherine ko Teaching ke liye Raazi kar liya,

Ghar ke saare kaam se farig hokar,
Kabeer aur Meera Pratidin Dupaher mein Sonpur se Maana ganv aate Study ke liye,
aur Shaam ko wapis ghar chale jate,

Ab to dono ka yehi Routine ho gaya tha,

Catherine, Meera aur Kabeer ko Language aur Communication sikha rahi thi,
aur sath mein basic Bussiness Knowledge bhi deti Ja rahi thi,

Aise hi din guzarte ja rahe the, Aur Meera aur Kabeer ka Pyaar bhi samay ke sath aur Gehra hota ja raha tha,

Ab Kabeer aur Meera Ki Jindagi Poori Badal chuki thi,
English mein Achha knowledge ke karan..Life -Style bhi Change hone lagi,
Kyuki Kabeer aur Meera Dono Travelling Agent Ban gaye the,

Dono Maana point se Foreigners ko pick karte aur Tour-Guide karte,
Pahadi Ilaakon mein Adventure Plan karte,


Jisse dono ko Foreigner se achhi khaasi Moti-Rakam Vasool hoti thi,

Sab kuchh badhiya aur khushi-Khushi chal raha tha

Wanhi ab Teeno ki Khoob achhi Jamne lagi thi,
Study karte,
Mauj-Masti, Ganv ki Pahadiyon mein Jakar Adventure trip bhi karte,


Lekin iss beech Bansi Thoda door-door rahne laga tha, Kabeer se,

Kyuki ab Kabeer ke Paas waqt hi nahi tha,
Bansi ke sath samay bitane ke liye,
shikar par jane ke liye,

beech ke kuchh mahino me Meera, Kabeer aur Bansi Sirf teen hi baar gayein honge Shikar Par,

Pure Ek saal ho gaye the Dono ko Catherine ke Paas aate huye,
aur 3months Tour-Guide karte huye,

Catherine bahut jyada surprised huyi Kabeer aur Meera ki Learning Skill dekhkar,

1 saal ke kam samay mein Meera aur Kabeer ki English mein Shandar pakad ho gayi thi,

Jitni bhi skill Catherine ne sikhaya Sab Par dono pass hote gaye,

Catherine ka Visa expire ho raha tha,
Issliye use 2 din baad wapas London jana pad raha tha,

iss khabar se Teeno ko bahut Dukh hua,

Kabeer aur Meera, Catherine ko Sonpur liva laye ghumane ke liye,
Jise dekhakar Catherine ko bahut Hairani huyi ki aisi bhi koi jagah hai Yaha, aur log bhi Rahte hai,



Sonpur mein milkar sabne Catherine ko khoob Ghumaya aur picnic bhi ki,..

Agle din Sabse Milkar,
Catherine Dehradoon ke liye Ravana ho gayi,,,

Meera-Kabeer Dono ne milkar Khud ka Ek Bangla banaya Lakdi aur Patthar ka,
Jismein Bansi ne Bahut Madad ki,



Bangle bahar Ek badhiya sa Baithak Banaya gaya,
Ab to Pita ji ki Thath hi Nirale ho gaye the,
Jisme ab baithke
Pita ji,
Ab Poora Din Darbar lagaye baithe rahte aur Mukhiyagiri Jhadte the,

Meera aur Kabeer ki
Shadi ke 1.5 Saal ho chuke the,

Ab tak to Meera Ko Maa ban jana chahiye tha,
Kintu Kabeer abhi iss jimmedari bachna chahta tha,
Wo abhi Meera ke Sath aise hi Pyaar bhare lamhe Guzarna Chahta tha,

Daily Spot se Foreigner Ko pick karte aur Jagah-Jagah ghoomate rahte the,

Iss par Kabeer aur Meera ne Apni Bussiness skill use ki,
aur Foreigners ko Secret Adventures trip ke bare mein Batate Jiski Keemat Bahut Jyada Vasoolte the dono, other trip ka 2.5guna Kyuki ismein Khatra rahta tha,

Aur unhe Sonpur ke secret Adventures Guide karate !!



Dono ne Milkar khud ki Ek Alag Pahchan bana li,
Inn 2 salon mein Kabeer aur Meera ne Kaafi Jama-Punji Bana li,
Khud ke Bussiness Plan se,
Alag -Alag Desh se aaye huye Different types ke Ke longo ke Beech pura din rahne ke karan Inka bhi duniya dekhne ka najariya badalta gaya,
Bahut si batein Seelhne aur Janne ko milti thi,
Bussiness Ko aage badhne ke bahut se idea milne lage,
kuchh aisa hua Jisse Sab dhara ka dhara rah gaya....

Dono ki Zindagi Bahut hi Achhi Ja Rahi thi, Koi pareshani nahi thi,

Lekin Samay Kab badal jaye kise kya Pata..??

Aise hi Ek Dukhad Ghatna kabeer ke Sath Huyi Jisse wo puri Tarah se toot Gaya tha....??


Aaj ke liye Bas itna Hi,
Comment kijiye aur Batayein Kaisa laga Update...??

 

[Sharad97]

Meera ki dead huyi hai

Ya meera kisike sath chali gayi

Ya dusre aadmi ke sath kabeer ne dekh liya

Yehi vajah ho sakte hai tutne ke

 

[Hayaan]

Meera ki dead huyi hai

Ya meera kisike sath chali gayi

Ya dusre aadmi ke sath kabeer ne dekh liya

Yehi vajah ho sakte hai tutne ke

Thanks For comment and Support !!
Sharad Bhai Ab ye to Next Update mein hi Pata chalega,

Tab tk yunhi Sath Bane rahiye

Thanks for comment and Support

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Nice update

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Nice update

 

[Hayaan]

Thanks Ashish Bhai For Reading and Comment

Nice update

 

[johnsamuri]

Nice update bhai