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Adultery Hawas aur Badla (completed)
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Thank youlagta hai tavar taur training mili hai in charo ko isiliye haal behal hai.. ghar aate hi so gaye....
sanaya agarwal kahi Kajal agarwal ki bahan to nahi
.. waise ye baaki ke logis aise khush hi rahe jaise sanaya Deepak ke liye nahi balki Sam ke liye aa rahi ho
Sorry just kidding...
Ye kajal jis story pe bhi rahti hai, hamesha kuch na kuch karti hi rehti hai... isme naya kya hai
Khair... jo karna kare apni marzi se.. Mujhe kya
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills Jaguaar saheb
Aur main yeh soch hi raha thaaa Kajal ka naam dekh kar Naina ji ne kuch bola kaiseee nhiii
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Update 68
Sam: Deepak itna wait kiya hai thoda sa aur wait karle.
Deepak: Yaar 1 saal se nhi dekha hai. Ab intezaar nhi horaha hai. Bas video call pe jo baat hoti thi.
Tabhi waha Kajal aati hai.
Ritika: Kya baat hai Kajal aaj itna sajdhaj ke. Kahi jaa rahi ho.
Kajal: Nhi. Bas aaj kuch special karna hai.
Mahi: Kyaaa karna hai. Kisi ko propose karna hai kyaa.
Kajal: Haa aisa hi kuch samaj lo.
Charo ladkiyan khush hojaati hai. Aur Sam thoda pareshan. Uski yeh pareshani Ritika Mahi aur Neha ne dekh li.
Natasha: Kyaa baat hai Kajal kaun hai woh khushnaseeb.
Kajal: Bas abhi pata chal jayegaa.
Idher Deepak ki nazar toh bas entrance pe hi thi.
Kajal Deepak ke saamne jaati hai. Jisse dekh Rishi ko chor sab shocked hojaate hai par Deepak ne usko dekha hi nhi.
Ritika Mahi aur Neha jab Sam ko dekhte hai toh woh ishare se unko puri baat bata deta hai jiska shak unko hua tha.
Natasha: Dheere se. Aree yeh kya karne jaarahi hai.
Rishi: Kya hua jaan.
Natasha: Baby yeh Kajal galat kar rahi hai. Deepak kisi aur ko pyaar karta hai.
Rishi: Kyaaa tumhe kaise pata.
Natasha: Aree aaj subah hi isne ghar mein sabko bataya. Aur woh abhi yaha aane wali hai.
Rishi: My God. Isilliye woh baar baar entrance ki taraf dekh raha hai.
Natasha: Hmmm.
Idher Kajal Deepak ke saamne khadi hoti hai.
Deepak: Kya baat hai Kajal.
Kajal: Kya tum khade hojaoge.
Deepak bina kuch soche khada hota hai.
Ritika: Kajal meri baat sunn.
Kajal: Baad mein Riti.
Mahi: Aree sunn tohhh.
Kajal: Deepak maine bahot si galtiyan ki hai. Kuch aisi galtiyan jinki maafi shayad mujhe kabhi naa milti.
Deepak: Entrance ki taraf dekhte hue hi. Par ab yeh sab kyo bol rahi ho.
Kajal: Maine meri best friend ke saath galat karna chaha. Par usne mujhe maaf kiya. Sachhe dosto ki pehchan karna shikaya. Par unn dosto mein ek insaan mere liye khash ban gaya. Kab bana kaise bana pata nhi. Aur woh insaan tum ho Deepak.
Deepak: Entrance ki taraf dekhte hue bekhayali mein hi. Hmmmmmm.
Kajal: Mere yeh jism toh shayad kabhi pavitra nhi hosakega. But mera yeh dil ekdum pavitra hai jisme tum bas gaye ho. I Love You Deepak. Do you Love Me?
Deepak Entrance ki taraf dekhte hi muskura utha. Aur baaki sab buri tarah se shocked aur pareshan hogye.
Kajal usko muskurate dekh kar khushi se uchal padhii. Abhi woh aage kuch karti uske pehle hi Deepak waha se Entrance ki taraf bhagg gaya.
Usko aise bhagte dekh Kajal ko jhatka laga. Sablog uss taraf dekhte hai.
Deepak bhagte hue jaata hai aur ek ladki ke saamne khada hojaata hai.
Yeh dekh kar Kajal ki aankho mein aansu aajate hai. Ritika uske paas jaake usko pakadti hai.
Idher Deepak uss ladki ke saamne khada rehta hai aur uss ladki ek tak dekhta hi rehta hai usko bas apni aankho mein basa leta hai.
Woh ladki bhi bas Deepak ko hi dekh rahi thi usko bas nihar rahi thi aur apni aankho mein basa rahi thi.
Kuch der ekdusre ko bas dekhte hai yeh dono.
Deepak: Khushi se aur namm aankho se. Shanayaaaaa.
Shanaya: khushi aur namm aankho se. Deepakkkkkkk.
Yeh bol woh ekdusre ke gale lag jaate hai. Aur ekdusre ko aise kash lete hai jaise agar chorenge toh kahi bhagg naa jaaye. Dono ki aankhe hi namm thi.
Inndono ko koi hosh nhi tha yeh dono kaha khade hai kis haal mein khade hai. Yehlog toh bas ekdusre ko mehsus kar rahe hai.
Shanaya: Maine tumhe bahot miss kiya Deepak. Yeh 1 saal meri zindagi ka sabse jyaada lamba saal thaa. Iss pal ke liye main bahot tadapi hu Deepak.
Deepak: Main bhi utna hi tadpa hu. Yeh 1 saal meri zindagi ka bhi sabse lamba saal tha. Maine yeh time kaise kaata hai yeh maine tumhe shabdo mein nhi bata sakta Shanaya. Maine bhi tumhe bahot miss kiyaaaa.
Shanaya: I Love You Deepak.
Deepak: I Love You Too Shanaya. I Love you more than my life.
Yeh bol woh phir se gale lag jaate hai.
Idher Kajal toh bas roye jaarahi thi aur inndono ko dekh rahi thi.
Ritika: Kajallll.
Kajal kuch nhi bolti bas rote hue Ritika ke gale lag jaati hai.
Kajal: Yeh sab kya hua Riti. Mere saath hi aisa kyo hua.
Ritika: Chup hoga Kajal. Chup hoja. Mat ro. Dekh isiliye maine tujhe roka tha tujhe bola tha meri baat sunn.
Kajal: Matlab tujhe pata tha.
Ritika: Haaaa. Humhe bhi aaj subah hi pata chala. Isiliye tujhe rokk rahe the. Par tu bina sunhe hi propose kar baithi.
Kajal: Rote hue. Isme meri kya galti Riti.
Mahi: Kajal isme tumhari koi galti nhi hai. Chup hojao dekho wohlog aarahe hai.
Kajal jaise bhi karke chupp hoti hai. Par uski aankhe saaf bata rahi thi ke woh ro rahi hai.
Deepak aur Shanaya inn sab ke paas aate hai.
Shanaya: Sammmmm Mahiiiiiii. Kaiseee ho tumloggggg.
Dono: Shanayaaaa. Hum bahot achhe hai. Tum kaisi hooo.
Shanaya: Pichlee 1 saal se toh bahot buri thi. Par ab toh puri zindagi achhii hu.
Yeh bol woh inn dono ke gale lag jaati hai.
Deepak: Shanaya yeh hai Ritika Sam ki....
Shanay: Sam ki wife. Yeh hai Neha Didi. Yeh hai Natasha meri nanad yeh Rishi Natasha ka fiancée aur Sam ka childhood best friend. Aur yeh Kajal.
Neha: Tumhe humare baare mein kaise pata.
Shanaya: Main bhale hi aaplogo se durr thi par aaplogo ki saari khabar roj mujhe milti.
Neha: Ooooo.
Deepak: Aur Guys. Yeh hai Shanaya. Meri Shanaya. Shanaya Agarwal. Meri zindagi, meri jaan, meri girlfriend meri sab kuch.
Kajal jab yeh sunti hai toh uski aankho mein aansu aajate hai. Par woh control kar leti hai.
Ritika: Welcome Shanaya Bhabhi.
Shanaya: Ritika hum friends hai so please yeh bhabhi sirf kisi occassion ya family meeting mein. Akele mein only Shanaya.
Ritika: Okkkk Shanaya.
Mahi: Shanaya aao baitho naa.
Phir sablog baith jaate hai.
Shanaya: Soniya di aur Vishal bhaiya kaha hai.
Sam: Vishal bhaiya toh london mein hai aur Soniya di office mein hongi.
Shanaya: Haa Deepak ne mujhe bataya tha unke accident ke baare mein ab kaise hai woh.
Neha: Ab thik hai bas 1 month mein ghar aajayega.
Shanaya: Achhi baat hai.
Natasha: Shanaya tum India kab aayi.
Shanaya: Bas aaj Subah.
Natasha: Aree toh rest karleti pehle.
Shanaya: Sach kahu toh Deepak se milne ki khushi mein mujhe koi thakaan ya jetlag hua hi nhi. Mujhe toh bas mere Deepak se milna thaa.
Mahi: How Sweet. Sam kya yeh wohi hai jo baat baat mein jhagda karte the. Ek dusre ko humesha maar khilate the.
Sam: Pyaar sab badal deta hai Mahi.
Ritika: Bilkul Sahi kaha. Warna humara bhi kam locha nhi hua tha.
Shanaya: Bilkul sahi kaha Sam. Aur Mahi woh sab bhi humara pyaar hi tha jisme hum jhagde karte. Ekdusre ke parents ko ekdusre ki shikayat karke maar khilwate. Aur Ritika Deepak ne mujhe tum dono ki kahani bhi batayi thi. Manna padega bahot lamba intezaar kiya tha tumlogo ne. Mere se toh yeh 1 saal nhi sehan hua.
Ritika: Pyaar sab sikha deta hai. Aur Sam ke liye woh kuch saal kya main saari zindagi wait karti.
Shanaya: Sahi kahaaa.
Deepak: Aree Kajal tum uss waqt kuch bol rahi thi mujhe par maine sunaa nhi.
Rishi: Dheere se. Achha hua sunna nhi. Warna abhi yaha pe ek jung horahi thi.
Rishi itna hi bolta hai ke Natasha uske pairr mein apne pairr se maarti hai aur aankhe dikhati hai.
Rishi: Ouchhh
Shanaya: Kya hua Rishi.
Rishi: Natasha ko dekhte hue. Kuch nhi bas meri jaan ka hill mere pairr mein lag gaya.
Natasha: Aankhe dikhte hue. Ooo Sorry baby.
Deepak: Haa Kajal bolo.
Kajal: Namm aankhe aur bemann se. Kuch nhi Deepak bas aise hi.
Achha main chalti hu. Mujhe dad ne kuch kaam diya tha. Okk Byeee.
Yeh bol Kajal bina kisi ka kuch sunne waha se chali jaati hai. Kyoki usko bahot rona aaraha tha aur usse waha rukaa nhi jaaraha tha.
Deepak aur Shanaya ko chorke sabko uski halat ka pata thaa.
Shanaya: Aree iss kya hua.
Ritika: Woh kuch nhi. Usko koi kaam hogaa.
Shanaya: Strangeee.
Mahi: Aree choro yeh sab. Aur bolo class karna hai ya ghar jaana hai.
Deepak: Ghar chalte hai. Shanaya ko thakan horahi hogi.
Natasha: Haaa bhaiii. Thakan toh horahi hogi hi.
Natasha ki baat sunn sab has dete hai toh Shanaya sharma jaati hai aur Deepak jhepp jaata hai.
Sam: Thik hai toh ghar chalte hai.
Phir sab ghar aajate hai.
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Toh... Kaajal ka dil phir se tut gaya dekhte hain uske tute dil par kab aur kaise malham lagegi aur kaun yeh malham lagaayega
