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Adultery Hawas aur Badla (completed)

Jaguaar

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nahi aisi baat nahi hai.. actually us time ke baad king saheb itne stories pe tag kar diya ki main confused ho gayi ki read karu to Kounsi story, aur revo du to kounsi story pe..
well ab ek ek karke read karing ushi tarah se revo bhi post karing...
Aapke creation nili aankho wala Aryan ki fantasy story pe revo next week ko.. :thumbup:
Intezaar rahegaaa
 
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Naina

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Update kya bhai mene puri story bina skeep kiye padi bs name mistake ho gya
ek baat hamesha yaad rakhiyega hero ya heroine ki sagi mom kabhi negative kirdaar role mein nahi aati... kayi stories pe to sauteli mom bhi positive kirdaar ki bhumika nibhati hai.... :approve:
 

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ek baat hamesha yaad rakhiyega hero ya heroine ki sagi mom kabhi negative kirdaar role mein nahi aati... kayi stories pe to sauteli mom bhi positive kirdaar ki bhumika nibhati hai.... :approve:
Wese Naina ji 1 story he jis me hero ke mom or dad dono negative role me the or story ke end tak khud hero ne unko buri mot di thi agar aap padhna chaho to me story ka name bata dunga short story he 30 ya 35 update ki hi he
 

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Wese Naina ji 1 story he jis me hero ke mom or dad dono negative role me the or story ke end tak khud hero ne unko buri mot di thi agar aap padhna chaho to me story ka name bata dunga short story he 30 ya 35 update ki hi he
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achhe logo ke sath kabhi kabhar bura ho jata hai lekin unki achhai ke chalte unhe ant mein achha phal hi milta hai... mana ki sangeeta ji goli lagne ki wajah se seriously injured ho gayi thi par ant thik hoke ghar bhi aa gayi.. jindagi bhar kisika bura na sochne wali Sangeeta ji ko aise kaise kuch ho jata.. lekin Sam kuch zyada hi panic ho gaya tha apni mom ki haalat dekh.. waise apni mom ki aisi haalat dekh koi bhi gusse pe pagal ho jayega.. par Sam ke sadharan insaan nahi hai.. isliye kuch bhi karne pehle thodi bahot ekhtiyat baratni chahiye... Khair... Villain logis ne ye sabse badi galti kar di.. kyunki goli Sam ki mom pe lagi.. aur uska khamiyaza bhugatna para un logo ko apni jaan deke wo bhi khaufnaak tarike se par isike chalte Sam ko kayi raaz ki baatein pata chali... ki unka boss koun hai unka base kidhar hai...
Hmm... so Marcus ne jo bure karmo se samrajya banaya tha uski barbadi suru..
waise Sam iski band bajake hi dum lega..
udhar neha, Mahi, ritika, soniya training lene ko taiyar..
waise Sangeeta ji se baatein to chupa rahi hai par aaj nahi kal kuch na kuch pata chal hi jaye.. jaise aaj wo jaan gayi wo baat ki sam ke paas adbhut shaktiya hai..
Khair.... Update kaafi dilchasp aur action se bharpur tha..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills writer sahab :applause: :applause:
waise jab CG sir is story padh rahe hai to itna jaan lijiye ki aapki story sachme kaafi interesting aur entertaining hai 200% :bow:
Ghuma fira kar lapete mein le hi lete ho :)
 

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Update 67
Phir yehlog India wapas aate hai.
Neha wapas aake sidha apne maa ke kamre mein jaati hai. Toh dekhti hai woh so chuki hai. Phir Neha waha se apne kamre mein jaati hai. Sam bhi apne room mein aata hai toh dekhta hai Mahi aur Ritika bhi so chuki hai. Phir woh bhi fresh hoke unke beech jaake so jaata hai.
Jaise hi woh unke beech jaata hai woh dono usse chipak jaati hai aur apne ek pairr ko uske upar rakh deti hai.
Sam unki yeh harqat dekh ke hash deta hai phir unko apni baahon mein jakad ke unke kiss karke so jaata hai.
Agle din woh log college jaate hai. Phir ghar aake Sangeeta ke saath time spend karte hai aur raat ko Sangeeta Natasha aur Riya ke sone ke baad woh log Deepak ko bolke chale jaate hai apni training mein.
Sab ne apna suit pehna tha aur apne muh pe ek mask pehna tha.
PM ne Sam ki mulakat uss agency ke head se karwaa di thi par apna chehra nhi dikhaya tha. Vishal bhi inko bahot maanta tha. Jab Vishal ek agent tha tab yeh deputy chief the.
Chief: Welcome. Toh aaj se tumlogo ki training start horahi hai. Kya tum sab ready ho.
Sab: Haaa.
Chief: Tumlog thoda wait karo kyoki abhi tumlogo ke trainers aaye nhi hai.
Sab: Okk.
Chief: Agar tumlog chaho toh apna face dikha sakte ho.
Sam: Sir. Humara face sirf PM sir hi jaante hai aur wohi dekh sakte hai aur koi nhiii.
Chief: Okkk no problem. Par Agent Hunter....
Sam: Agent Hunter ne humhe bataya tha uss waqt ke chief ne unhe dhokha diya tha aur unhe agency se nikal diya tha. Jisko baad mein Agent Hunter ne maar diya tha kyoki woh ek gaddar tha.
Chief: Kyaa usko Agent Hunter ne maara tha.
Sam: Haa.
Chief: Bahot achha kaam kiya tha. Agency chorne ke baad bhi usne duty complete ki. Waise kaha hai woh aaya nhi PM sir ne bola tha woh bhi join karega.
Neha: Sir woh 1.5 months ke baad join karenge.
Chief: Okkk. Waise aaplogo ka intro nhi hua.
Sam: Sir yeh meri patniyaan yeh meri didiyan Yeh(Neha didi) Agent Hunter ki wife hai.
Chief: Whattttt usne shaadi karli. Mujhe bolta tha kabhi bhi shaadi nhi karega.
Abhi Chief aur kuch bolta tabhi woh dekhta hai inke trainers aarahe hai.
Chief: Tumhare trainers aarahe hai.
Trainers: Chief kya yehi hai woh jinko humhe training deni hai.
Chief: Haaa. Yeh hai humare new agents. Tum sabko inko puri tarah train karna hai.
Trainers: Thik hai. Par inhone mask kyo pehna hai.
Chief: They will don’t show there face and they will known as Team DEVIL.
Trainers: DEVILLLLLL.
Chief: Aree shant shant inme aur unme koi similarity nhi hai. Sirf team ka naam diya hai.
Trainers: Oookkkk. So inka naam.
Chief: Agent Jaguar(Sam), Agent White wolf(Ritika), Agent Thunder Dragon(Mahi), Agent Eagle(Neha), Agent Phoenix(Soniya).
Trainers: Okkk.
Chief: Ek aur hai. Agent Hunter(Vishal)
Trainers: Kyaaaaa. Agent Hunter. Kya woh zinda hai. Humhe toh pata hai unhe agency se nikal diya gaya tha aur unhe maar diya gaya tha.
Neha yeh sunke gussa hojaati hai. Uske saamne hi uske pati ke marne ki baat. Sam Neha ka haath pakad leta hai aur ishare se naa bolta hai. Par Neha ne mann hi mann kuch soch liyaa tha.
Chief: Haa woh zinda hai aur aaj bhi tumsab ka senior hai. Filhal woh kuch din ke liye bahar hai. Jald hi woh bhi inke saath hogaa.
Trainers: Okkk Sir.
Chief: So Agents aaj se yehi pe tumhari training hogi. Aur yeh tumhe train karenge.
Sab: Okk Sir.
Phir Chief waha se chala jaata hai aur yehlog training karne lagte hai. 2 ghante tak inki jabardast tarike se training hoti hai. Sam ko toh thakawat nhi hoti hai par charo ladkiyon ka dumm nikal chuka tha.
2 ghante baad Sam inko leke ghar teleport hota hai. Ghar mein aate hi yehlog girr jaate hai.
Ritika: Aaahhh Sammmmm. Bahot dard horaha hai.
Mahi: Puri body mein jagah jagah dard horaha hai.
Neha: Bhaiiiii ab toh uthne ki bhi taqat nhi hai.
Soniya: Saalon ne pura band baja diyaaa.
Sam: Areee aaj pehla din tha naa isiliye horaha hai. Ab so jao. Aur yeh painkiller le lo aaram milega.
Charo: Hilne ki bhi taqat nhi bachhi hai aur tum keh rahe ho yaha se apne room mein jaake soye.
Sam: Achha achha thik hai main chorr deta hu.
Phir Sam Neha aur Soniya ko unke room mein chorta hai aur Mahi Ritika ko leke apne room mein aajata hai.
Mahi aur Ritika bed ko dekhte hi waha girr jaati hai aur so jaato hai.
Sam unko achhe se sula ke unke beech so jaata hai.
Agle din yeh yeh charo thoda late uthe par ab inki halat thik thi.
Natasha: Kya baat hai aaj tum charo late hogye.
Charo: Pata nhi aaj aankh hi nhi khuli.
Natasha: Kamaal hai charo ka ek saath.
Charo: Ittefaq hoga.
Natasha: Hmm. Chalo breakfast karlo phir college chalte hai.
Charo: Hmm.
Yehlog Nashta kar rahe the par Deepak apne mobile mein hi laga hua tha.
Mahi: Deepak.
Deepak: Hmm.
Mahi: Kya hua. Kab se dekh rahi hu tu mobile mein hi laga hua hai. Kya baat hai.
Deepak: Mahi Sam Soniya di woh aarahi hai. Aaj pure 1 saal baad woh aarahi hai. Aur ab woh humesha ke liye yaha rahegi.
Teeno: Kyaaaa. Kab aarahi hai.
Deepak: Aaj woh direct college aayegi.
Natasha: Deepak Mahi Sam Soniya kaun aarahi hai. Jiske liye yeh itna khush hai.
Ritika aur Neha: Haa kaun aarahi hai.
Soniya: Shanaya. Shanaya Agarwal.
Ritika: Sam kaun hai yeh Shanaya Agarwal.
Sam: Humare Deepak ki zindagi.
Ritika: Kyaaaaa.
Mahi: Haaaa. Yeh usse 1 saal se pyaar karta hai. Jab yeh India aaya humare saath tab woh Australia mein thi apni studies ke liye. Uska aane ka bahot mann tha par aana saki. Ab woh apni aage ki padhai yehi se karegi.
Neha: Waaahhh. Lekin tumlogo ne kabhi bataya nhi Deepak ki bhi girlfriend hai.
Mahi: Kabhi mauka hi nhi mila.
Natasha: Achhi baat hai. Yaani meri ek aur bhabhi aarahi hai. Waise uske baare mein kuch batao Deepak
Deepak: Shanaya. Shanaya Agarwal. Humari neighbour thi. Hum bachpan ke dost the. Dosti kab pyaar mein badli humhe pata nhi chala. Hum ekdusre se pyaar toh karte the yeh humdono ko pata tha. Par humne kabhi ek dusre se bola nhi. Aur jab bolne ka time aaya tab woh Australia jaa rahi thi apni family ke saath aur mujhe India aana tha.
Humne Airport pe ekdusre ko propose kiya tha. Uske Mom ne promise kiya tha uski Australia ki padhai ke baad woh usse mere paas bhej dengi. Toh finally woh aarahi hai.
Natasha: Waaaahh. Bahot khubb. Toh kab aarahi hai.
Deepak: Aaj direct college join karegi. Mere stream mein meri class mein.
Mahi: Toh jaldi chalo.
Deepak: Abhi nhi woh recess mein tak aayegi.
Sam: Thik hai. Waise bhi time hogya hai chalo chalte hai college.
Phir sab college aate hai.
Idher Kajal ne aaj kuch soch rakha tha woh aaj kuch karne wali thi.
Thodi der baad jab yehlog college aate hai toh class ka time hogya tha. Isiliye yehlog class mein chale jaate hai.
Recess mein Deepak baar baar entrance ki taraf hi dekh raha tha. Usse aur intezaar karna mushkil horaha tha.
 
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