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Mira ke perfect smile ke peeche kuch aur bhi chhupa hua tha.
Woh pyaar mein nahi thi.
Kabhi thi hi nahi uske pyar mai woh....
William uske liye bas ek jariya tha…
Ek raasta, jisse woh apni manzil tak pahunch sake.
Usse William ke baare mein sab pata tha usko ...
Woh self-obsessed tha, logon ke saath bura behave karta tha, aur andar se kaafi khokla tha.
Phir bhi…
Usse koi problem nahi thi.
Jab tak woh usse top par banaye rakhta hai....
Tab tak Mira sab kuch accept karne ko ready thi.
Still, jab aaj usne door se Vihaan ko unhe dekhte hue pakda, uski aankhon mein kuch aisa tha....
Jo use thoda bechain kar gaya.
Woh usual dar ya gussa nahi tha...
jo woh expect karti thi.
“Woh shaant tha…
aankhon mein thandak thi… aur woh bas aaraam se wait kar raha tha.”
(Sabke ache se lavde lagane ka...)
Vihaan ki nazar kuch aur pal tak un par tikki rahi.
Class khatam hone ke baad bhi woh wahi baitha raha,
jab tak zyada tar log bahar nahi chale gaye.
Phir aaram se apni seat se utha.
“Usse shanti zyada achi lagti thi.”
“Lunch ka time
ho gaya.”
Woh dheere se classroom se bahar nikla, halki si chaal ke saath, dono haath pockets mein daalte hue.
“academy ke raaste jaldi hi bharne lage the…”
students chhote chhote groups mein, baat karte hue cafeteria ki taraf ja rahe the.
Woh bina kisi effort ke bheed mein ghul mil gaya…
bas ek aur uniform, baaki sab jaise.....
Phir bhi, kuch log uski taraf curious nazar se dekhne se khud ko rok nahi paaye...
Academy ka cafeteria poore ek wing mein phaila hua tha.
Uski unchi chhat par tairti hui lights lagi thi, jo neeche lambi tables par halki si garam, golden roshni daal rahi thi.
Hawa mein pakke hue meat, masalon aur abhi abhi bani hui bread ki khushboo faili hui thi
itni zabardast ki jo student apne hi khayalon mein khoya ho, usse bhi achanak bhook lag jaaye.
Vihaan chup chaap line mein khada ho gaya, jaise wait karna uski aadat ho.
Jab uski baari aayi, usne sabse simple khana liya...
“ek bowl meat wali gravy, saath mein thodi salad, ek tukda bread aur ek glass cold drink.”
Kuch bhi khaas nahi…
bas garam aur pet bharne wala khana.
Phir woh apni tray uthakar ek kone wali khaali table par jaa baitha...
shor se thoda door.
Baaki students ki awaazein dheere dheere peeche chali gayi, bas halka sa shor reh gaya jab woh baith gaya.
Pehla chamach lete hi meat wali gravy ka taste zabardast laga....
“aisa ki woh expect bhi nahi kar raha tha, aur use thoda sukoon sa feel hua.”
Sukoon
Chhoti si cheez thi, par itne mahino ke dard ke baad yeh bhi ajeeb sa lag raha tha.
Ab uske paas strong hone ka ek raasta tha.
Ab use aisa feel nahi ho raha tha jaise uske sir par hamesha koi talwar latak rahi ho.
Phir bhi…
mujhe jaldi system points chahiye.
“System points nahi honge ... matlab ekdum se strong hone ka koi mauka nahi.”
Kya power waise hi hoti hai jaise log bolte hain?
Insaan ko andha aur bigaad deti hai?
Mujhe dhyaan rakhna hoga…
kabhi bhi zyada overconfident nahi banna hai.
Vihaan aaraam se dheere dheere khaata raha, paas wali tables se aa rahi halki si awaazon ko bas aise hi sunte hue.
Zyada tar baatein waise bhi itni khaas nahi thi ki unpar dhyaan diya jaaye.
Usne kuch baatein suni....
Agli field assignment ki afwaayein, seniors ke duels ki gossip, aur kaun kiske saath hai uski charcha.
Vihaan ne bread ka ek tukda toda aur use meat wali gravy mein duboya, aadhi band aankhon ke saath…
Uske khayal dheere dheere andar ki taraf mud gaye.
Uske jism mein halka sa dard abhi bhi tha, jo use yaad dila raha tha ki use abhi kitna grow karna baaki hai...
Physicaliy... Maintally....Power
Par usne pehla step le liya tha.
Kisi ne change notice nahi kiya…..
usne socha
Aur uske liye yeh achha hi tha
kyunki zyada tar logon ne toh usse pehle kabhi dhyaan se dekha hi nahi tha.
Agar kisi ne sach mein dhyaan se dekha hota, toh unhe fark zaroor dikhta...
uski height thodi badh gayi thi, aankhon mein ek halki si chamak aa gayi thi jo pehle nahi thi‚
kandhon mein ek tightness thi…
aur saans lene ke tareeke mein chhupa hua confidence.
Par kisi ne notice nahi kiya.
Unka dimaag in chhoti chhoti details ko samajhne se pehle hi ignore kar deta tha.
Aur yeh baat Vihaan ke liye bilkul perfect thi.
Usne apna khana chup chaap finish kiya, aur last tak apna cold drink bhi khatam kar diya.
Abhi use William se deal karna tha.
Kya woh uska saamna karne ke liye ready tha?
Nahi
Par ab woh itna kamzor bhi nahi raha tha ki pehle ki tarah kuch kar hi na paaye.
Academy ke andar bina duel file kiye fights allowed nahi thi…
par William ke paas uski life hell banane ke aur bhi tareeke the.
Woh log bina mana use kiye bhi usse maar sakte the.
Of course, ab Vihaan itna confident ho chuka tha ki pehle ki tarah koi usse easily daba nahi sakta tha.
Khana khatam karne ke baad woh seedha apne dorm (Room) ki taraf nikal gaya.
Mujhe apna plan jaldi shuru karna hoga.
Uska plan simple tha.
Aria uska pehla target hone wali thi.
Us chhoti si ladki ne uske saamne thoda zyada hi bold behave kiya tha…
aur uski charm ability ne already cheezein shuru kar di thi.
Vihaan ne ek kagaz nikala likhne ke liye, aur haath aage badhaya....
jaise hi usne socha, ek chhoti si glass ki bottle uske haath mein aa gayi...
jisme bilkul normal si dikhne wali ink bhari hui thi...
“Mujhe nahi pata iska effect usi raat hoga ya kisi bhi din… System, yeh kaise kaam karta hai?”
[System]
{Host… Yearning Ink ka effect tab start hoga jab target pehli baar so jayega.}
[System]
{Effect repeat karne ke liye—target ka naam dobara likhna zaroori hai, Host.}
[System]
{Host ....ek baat bolu}
Haa bolo
{Host...Aap gussa thye aur mai bich Mai bol padi sry.... }
{Host....mai sirf thodi si masti kar rahi thi ...usa chutiye ke wajah se aap gusaa thye isliye }
It's ohk par aagye se dhyan rakhna ...
{Ohk host ....aagye se dhyan rakhungi ...mood acha ho ya sad tab masti majak karungi mai... aur mai aapke sath hun host hamesha...}
Ha baba
{Mere pyare host ....}
....
"Sahi baat hai. Ink toh khatam hone se rahi, toh tension ki koi baat hi nahi.
Jab dil chahe, tab use kar sakta hoon."
Usne table se wo quill (pankh wali pen) uthayi aur pehla naam likha.
Friend's wohi like thokne ka aur review rakhne ka kaisa laga chapter batana ....jaisa chahte ho vaise improvement kiya gaya hai....aur bhi suggestion ho toh dedena ka bindhast .....late hua uske liye mafi time lagta thoda sochne mai aise hi Post nahi kar sakta na .... samza karo friend's
Aria.
Aur phir doosra.
Mira.
"Mira ka naam likhna ek risk tha, ye wo achi tarah jaanta tha.
Lekin kal use saamne dekh kar Mira ka reaction kya hoga, ye janne ki utsukta usme kahin zyada thi.
Uska maqsad ye dekhna tha ke is 'effect' ka asar alag alag logon par kaise hota hai.
Agar wo ise kisi aise anjaan insaan par use karta hai
jiska usse koi lena-dena nahi hai, ya kisi aise insaan par jo usse nafrat karta hai
kya tab bhi unke nazariye mein koi badlao ayega?
Aur phir Aria thi....
Uske naam ke saath wo ye dekhna chahta tha
ke jab pehle se koi mulaqat ho, tab ye effect kaisa kaam karta hai.
Aria ke mamle mein, use laga ke kal subah ke mulaqat ki wajah se wo yahi sochegi ke use aisa khwaab aaya.
Aur agar sab kuch plan ke mutabiq raha, toh kal Aria khud chalkar uske paas ayegi."
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Plan in motion━━━━━✧━━━━━✧━━━━━
Mira ke perfect smile ke peeche kuch aur bhi chhupa hua tha.
Woh pyaar mein nahi thi.
Kabhi thi hi nahi uske pyar mai woh....
William uske liye bas ek jariya tha…
Ek raasta, jisse woh apni manzil tak pahunch sake.
Usse William ke baare mein sab pata tha .....
Woh self-obsessed tha, logon ke saath bura behave karta tha, aur andar se kaafi khokla tha.
Phir bhi…
Usse koi problem nahi thi.
Jab tak woh usse top par banaye rakhta hai....
Tab tak Mira sab kuch accept karne ko ready thi.
Still, jab aaj usne door se Vihaan ko unhe dekhte hue pakda, uski aankhon mein kuch aisa tha....
Jo use thoda bechain kar gaya.
Woh usual dar ya gussa nahi tha...
jo woh expect karti thi.
“Woh shaant tha…
aankhon mein thandak thi… aur woh bas aaraam se wait kar raha tha.”
(Sabke ache se lavde lagane ka...)
Vihaan ki nazar kuch aur pal tak un par tikki rahi.
Class khatam hone ke baad bhi woh wahi baitha raha,
jab tak zyada tar log bahar nahi chale gaye.
Phir aaram se apni seat se utha.
“Usse shanti zyada achi lagti thi.”
“Lunch ka time
ho gaya.”
Woh dheere se classroom se bahar nikla, halki si chaal ke saath, dono haath pockets mein daalte hue.
“academy ke raaste jaldi hi bharne lage the…”
students chhote chhote groups mein, baat karte hue cafeteria ki taraf ja rahe the.
Woh bina kisi effort ke bheed mein ghul mil gaya…
bas ek aur uniform, baaki sab jaise.....
Phir bhi, kuch log uski taraf curious nazar se dekhne se khud ko rok nahi paaye...
Academy ka cafeteria poore ek wing mein phaila hua tha.
Uski unchi chhat par tairti hui lights lagi thi, jo neeche lambi tables par halki si garam, golden roshni daal rahi thi.
Hawa mein pakke hue meat, masalon aur abhi abhi bani hui bread ki khushboo faili hui thi
itni zabardast ki jo student apne hi khayalon mein khoya ho, usse bhi achanak bhook lag jaaye.
Vihaan chup chaap line mein khada ho gaya, jaise wait karna uski aadat ho.
Jab uski baari aayi, usne sabse simple khana liya...
“ek bowl meat wali gravy, saath mein thodi salad, ek tukda bread aur ek glass cold drink.”
Kuch bhi khaas nahi…
bas garam aur pet bharne wala khana.
Phir woh apni tray uthakar ek kone wali khaali table par jaa baitha...
shor se thoda door.
Baaki students ki awaazein dheere dheere peeche chali gayi, bas halka sa shor reh gaya jab woh baith gaya.
Pehla chamach lete hi meat wali gravy ka taste zabardast laga....
“aisa ki woh expect bhi nahi kar raha tha, aur use thoda sukoon sa feel hua.”
Sukoon
Chhoti si cheez thi, par itne mahino ke dard ke baad yeh bhi ajeeb sa lag raha tha.
Ab uske paas strong hone ka ek raasta tha.
Ab use aisa feel nahi ho raha tha jaise uske sir par hamesha koi talwar latak rahi ho.
Phir bhi…
mujhe jaldi system points chahiye.
“System points nahi honge ... matlab ekdum se strong hone ka koi mauka nahi.”
Kya power waise hi hoti hai jaise log bolte hain?
Insaan ko andha bana deti hai aur bigaad deti hai?
Mujhe dhyaan rakhna hoga…
kabhi bhi zyada overconfident nahi banna hai.
Vihaan aaraam se dheere dheere khaata raha, paas wali tables se aa rahi halki si awaazon ko bas aise hi sunte hue.
Zyada tar baatein waise bhi itni khaas nahi thi ki unpar dhyaan diya jaaye.
Usne kuch baatein suni....
Agli field assignment ki afwaayein, seniors ke duels ki gossip, aur kaun kiske saath hai uski charcha.
Vihaan ne bread ka ek tukda toda aur use meat wali gravy mein duboya, aadhi band aankhon ke saath…
Uske khayal dheere dheere andar ki taraf mud gaye.
Uske jism mein halka sa dard abhi bhi tha, jo use yaad dila raha tha ki use abhi kitna grow karna baaki hai...
Physicaliy... Maintally....Power
Par usne pehla step le liya tha.
Kisi ne change notice nahi kiya…..
usne socha
Aur uske liye yeh achha hi tha
kyunki zyada tar logon ne toh usse pehle kabhi dhyaan se dekha hi nahi tha.
Agar kisi ne sach mein dhyaan se dekha hota, toh unhe fark zaroor dikhta...
uski height thodi badh gayi thi, aankhon mein ek halki si chamak aa gayi thi jo pehle nahi thi‚
kandhon mein ek tightness thi…
aur saans lene ke tareeke mein chhupa hua confidence.
Par kisi ne notice nahi kiya.
Unka dimaag in chhoti chhoti details ko samajhne se pehle hi ignore kar deta tha.
Aur yeh baat Vihaan ke liye bilkul perfect thi.
Usne apna khana chup chaap finish kiya, aur last tak apna cold drink bhi khatam kar diya.
Abhi use William se deal karna tha.
Kya woh uska saamna karne ke liye ready tha?
Nahi
Par ab woh itna kamzor bhi nahi raha tha ki pehle ki tarah kuch kar hi na paaye.
Academy ke andar bina duel file kiye fights allowed nahi thi…
par William ke paas uski life hell banane ke aur bhi tareeke the.
Woh log bina mana use kiye bhi usse maar sakte the.
Of course, ab Vihaan itna confident ho chuka tha ki pehle ki tarah koi usse easily daba nahi sakta tha.
Khana khatam karne ke baad woh seedha apne dorm (Room) ki taraf nikal gaya.
Mujhe apna plan jaldi shuru karna hoga.
Uska plan simple tha.
Aria uska pehla target hone wali thi.
Us chhoti si ladki ne uske saamne thoda zyada hi bold behave kiya tha…
aur uski charm ability ne already cheezein shuru kar di thi.
Vihaan ne ek kagaz nikala likhne ke liye, aur haath aage badhaya....
jaise hi usne socha, ek chhoti si glass ki bottle uske haath mein aa gayi...
jisme bilkul normal si dikhne wali ink bhari hui thi...
“Mujhe nahi pata iska effect usi raat hoga ya kisi bhi din… System, yeh kaise kaam karta hai?”
[System]
{Host… Yearning Ink ka effect tab start hoga jab target pehli baar so jayega.}
[System]
{Effect repeat karne ke liye—target ka naam dobara likhna zaroori hai, Host.}
[System]
{Host ....ek baat bolu}
Haa bolo
{Host...Aap gussa thye aur mai bich Mai bol padi sry.... }
{Host....mai sirf thodi si masti kar rahi thi ...usa chutiye ke wajah se aap gusaa thye isliye }
It's ohk par aagye se dhyan rakhna ...
{Ohk host ....aagye se dhyan rakhungi ...mood acha ho ya sad tab masti majak karungi mai... aur mai aapke sath hun host hamesha...
Ha baba
{Mere pyare host ....
....
"Sahi baat hai. Ink toh khatam hone se rahi, toh tension ki koi baat hi nahi.
Jab dil chahe, tab use kar sakta hoon."
Usne table se wo quill (pankh wali pen) uthayi aur pehla naam likha.
Friend's wohi like thokne ka aur review rakhne ka kaisa laga chapter batana ....jaisa chahte ho vaise improvement kiya gaya hai....aur bhi suggestion ho toh dedena ka bindhast .....late hua uske liye mafi time lagta thoda sochne mai aise hi Post nahi kar sakta na .... samza karo friend's
Aria.
Aur phir doosra.
Mira.
"Mira ka naam likhna ek risk tha, ye wo achi tarah jaanta tha.
Lekin kal use saamne dekh kar Mira ka reaction kya hoga, ye janne ki utsukta usme kahin zyada thi.
Uska maqsad ye dekhna tha ke is 'effect' ka asar alag alag logon par kaise hota hai.
Agar wo ise kisi aise anjaan insaan par use karta hai
jiska usse koi lena-dena nahi hai, ya kisi aise insaan par jo usse nafrat karta hai
kya tab bhi unke nazariye mein koi badlao ayega?
Aur phir Aria thi....
Uske naam ke saath wo ye dekhna chahta tha
ke jab pehle se koi mulaqat ho, tab ye effect kaisa kaam karta hai.
Aria ke mamle mein, use laga ke kal subah ke mulaqat ki wajah se wo yahi sochegi ke use aisa khwaab aaya.
Aur agar sab kuch plan ke mutabiq raha, toh kal Aria khud chalkar uske paas ayegi."
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