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Fantasy Hamara Gaon

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Tiwari_baba

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Nice update

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Kamal ki prastuti aapki.
Jayant ke to mano lutiya ho doob gyi.
Dekhe kya kya hota h ??
Prince ka hath sahi ho gya or sab kuchh badhia raha.
Jis tarah us ladke ko daraya kafi mazedaar raha yah scene.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar


Superb update

Awesome update.. Hero action mood me hn... Bhai hero ko update krte jao...
Waiting for next.




Nice update
Thank you friends aapke achhe comnt ke liye
Or sorry late post ke liye
Update raat me hi taiyar tha but post karna bhul gaya so sorry

New update on page no. 72
Thank you bhai
Keep reading n enjoy
 

Tiwari_baba

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# UPSATE 32

Tabhi kuchh aisa hua ki wo teeno sann rah gaye, unke samne koi uppar se kuda or usko dekh ke unki hawa nikal gai.....

AB AAGE...........................

Apne samne mujhe wo bhi upar se kudte hue dekh kar, pahle to sale darr gaye lekin apni sankhya jyada hone ke karan phir chaude ho gaye.

G2L2:- Tuuu sale tu bachega nhi, abe pakdo ise ye wahi hai jisne hame note likha tha or abhi mujje mara bhi.

Uski baat sunke wo sale harkat me aa gaye, pahle to mujhe dekh kar or mera aisa skull face dekh darr gaye the, phir mere taraf bade.

Main:- Hihihihihi aayega sabka number aayega chinta naa karna.

Wo dono mere taraf lapke tezi se lekin main unke hatho me aane se pahle deewar par chadhta kudta fanta waha se nikal gaya, aisa nhi tha ki main unko maar nhi sakta tha lekin mujhe abhi unko marna nhi tha.

Main Pitaji ke pass pahunch Karke bhojan Kiya, Uske pakshat Ham Logon Mein Kuchh Thodi Bahut baten Hui, aur Maine Apne Gaon Mein Baat Kiya, Meri maa Chinta Mein thi ki mujhe kuchh Hua To Nahin, un Logon se baat karke bahut hi Achcha laga aur Unki bhi Chinta Mit Gayi.
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Jayant Singh Jab Thakur ke Haveli per pahuncha to Thakur Apne Haveli mein hi tha, aur apne bhai ke sath baith kar Kisi Baat par Charcha kar raha tha, Jayant Singh Ke Haveli mein ghuste Hi Thakur ke bhai ne usko dekh liya.

Thakur bhai:- Aao aao Jayant Kaise Aana hua kya khabar hai aur kaise ho?

Jayant:- Pranam Thakur Sahab.

Thakur:- Jayant kya chal raha hai aajkal?

Jayant:- Kya Bataun kya chal raha hai, Khabar bahut Buri hai hum sabke liye.

Thakur:- Aisi Kya Baat Ho Gai Jayant? kaun si Buri Khabar Lekar Aaye Ho Tum?

Jayant:- Thakur Sahab maine aaj tak aapse kabhi nhi puchha ki jo bhi ladkiyan ilake se gayab hoti hain jati kaha hain, lekin agar main in sab me fansa to aap log bhi nhi bach paoge?

Thakur bhai:- Tujhe pata hai n tu kisse baat kar raha hai, apni aukat me rah. Thakur:- shant raho narendra, kya baat hui hai jo aisi baate kar raha hai jayant?

Jayant:- Kya aapko pata hai ki kal us Ladki Ki Lash Mili hai, jo abhi abhi Gayab hui thi?

Thakur bhai:- Kya bakwas kar raha hai bhaiya?

Thakur:- Maine tumko bola naa chup raho, han jayant kiske bare me bol raha hai tu?

Jayant:- Wahi ladki thakur sahab jo uthai gai thi 5din pahle, uski lash mili hai, aaj tak itni ladkiyan gayab hui kisi ko kano kaan khabar nhi hui phir ye sab kya hai, aapko pata nhi lekin upar se ilaake me naya inspector aaya hai, maine chhote thakur ko btaya bhi tha.

Thakur:-Han to kya ho gaya, jane kitne inspector aaye or gaye kuchh nhi hoga.

Jayant:- Aapko halaat samajh nhi rahe thakur sahab, mamla bahut hi gambhir hai, wah Lash Sidhe Ins. Vijay ke hath Lagi Hai, Jiski vajah se usne mujhe suspend kar diya hai, Ab aap hi ismein Kuchh kar sakte hain.

Thakur bhai:- kya baat kar rahe ho, lash mili magar kaise or kaha se?

Jayant:- Pata nhi lekin khabar hai ki morena ke jangal se ye lash mili hai.

Thakur:-(man me) Shamsa Nath Ne yah Thik Nahin Kiya, us ladki ko Markar Uske Lash aise hi fek di UN Logon Ne.

Jayant:- Thakur Sahab Iske Chakkar Me Ham fans Jaenge, Aakhir Itni sari ladkiyan gayab hui, Aaj Tak lekin koi bhi Wapas Nahin aai yah kaise ho gaya?

Thakur:- Tum chinta naa karo uss inspector ko to hum dekh lenge, or tumhari suspension bhi radd ho jayegi.

Jayant:- Thik hai thakur sahab main chalta hun pranam.

Thakur bhai:- Bhaiya ye baba ne kya kar diya hai isse to ham par bhi musibat aa sakti hai.

Thakur:- Kuchh hath nhi lagega kisi ke jo hona tha so ho gaya, aage ka dekho, uss inspector ka pata karo?

Thakur bhai:- g bhaiya abhi admi bhejta hun.
*************************************

Dusri taraf jab jayant thakur ki haveli me tha, tab vijay ko kisi ka phone aaya.

Vijay:- hello
Phone:- ********

Vijay:- Achha, han thik hai.
Phone:- **********

Vijay:- Tum pata karte raho or unka bhi, kya sambandh usna usse.
Phone:- ************

Vijay:- Han thik hai khabar karte rahna. Phone cut.

Vijay:-(man me) in logo se iske sambhand kuchh samjh nhi aaya kya majra hai, pata karna padega.

Panday andar aata hai to dekhta hai, vijay soch me gum hai to puchhta hai.

Pandey:- Kya baat hai sir kya soch rahe hain?

Vijay:- (mushkura ke) Kuchh nhi pandey ji soch raha tha aake ghar aaj lunch par chalte hai, aap kya kahte hain.

Pandey:-(man me) Han han hamara ghar to hotal hai, jo khna khane jaoge, ye to hamari sali ke pichhe hi bad gaye hain?

Vijay:- Are kya soch rahe ho pandey ji.

Pandey:-(hadbada ke) kuchh nhi sir, han kyo nhi chaliye chalte hain usme kya hai.

Or pandey or vijay thane se nikalte hai, kuchh 15 minute baad thane me do scorpio aa kar ruki or usme se thakur ka bhai or uske kuchh aadmi bahar nikle, thakur ka bhai or uske do khas aadmi thane ke andar gaye or baki sab wahi khade ho gaye, narendra ko dekh ke jo bhi hawaldar the wo sab usko pranam namashte kar rahe the.

Hawaldar:- Chhote thakur aap yaha? Koi kaam tha kya?

Thakur bhai:- Kaam hota to tu karta kya mera kaam sale do kaudi ke hawaldar chal nikal.

Bechara hawaldar waha se muh liye hat gaya, phir koi bhi hawaldar uske samne nhi aaya, SI se jaa kar usne bola.

Thakur bhai:- Kaha hai jo tumhara naya inspector aaya hai, bolo chhote thakur aaye hain.

SI:- Abhi wo yah as nhi hai bahar gaye hain.

Thakur bhai:- Jab wo aaye to kah dena chhote thakur aaye the, or haveli par bulaya hai thakur sahab ne aake mile unse. Samjha.

SI:- Ji thik hai khabar de dunga.

Uske baad narendra apne aadmiyon ke sang waha se chala gaya,

2 ghante baad jab vijay aaya to SI ne usko khabar diya, to usne pandey se puchha.

Vijay:- Koun hai ye mahasay pandey ji, jo order de kar gaye hain, unke baap le nokri karte hain kya hum sab.

Pandey:- Aisa hi hai sir, thakur iss ilake ka bada aadmi hai, khabar mili hogi aapke aane ki isliye bulaya hoga.

Vijay:- To kya main usse milne uske ghar jau, uske baap ka naukar hun kya, thana sabke liye hai, jise milna hoga khud aayega.

Pandey:- Aisa aap thik samjhe sir.
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Sham ke waqt main or pitaji bazaar me ghum rahe the, bazar me alag alag tarah ke kapde jute, khane pine ki chize thi, jo maine aaj tak kabhi khai hi nhi thi, gurukul me to satvik bhojan hi milta tha.

Sham ke waqt itni bheed or bazaaro ki raunak dekhte hi banta tha, banaras ki chhoti chhoti galiyan or unme kuchh na kuchh khas tarah ki bikti pakwan or saman ki dukane, sab bahut hi sundar tha.

Aaj main pahli baar idhar aaya tha, main pita ji se ek pustakalay ke liye bola tha, jo bahut hi prachin ho, jaha se mujhe mere kaam ki apne liye kuchh kitaben chahiye thi, hum wahi jaa rahe the jo pitaji mujhe dikhane le jaa rahe the, kintu iss waqt wah band ho gaya tha.

Ab jis chiz ke liye aaye the wah to hua nhi isliye hum bazaar me ghum rahe the or tarah tarah ke vyanjan ka maza utha rahe the, jinme se kuchh to main pahli baar hi kha raha tha, phir humne thodi kharidari bhi ki, pitaji ne kaha jab tum gaon jaoge to sabke liye lete jana, mujhe bhi thik laga to sabhi ke liye kapde kharide humne, mujje to koi andaza nhi tha ki koun kitna bada or ab kaisa dikhta hai, isliye sab pitaji hi dekh kar le rahe the.

Uske baad hum bazar me ho bhojan kar ke ghar laute, phir hum baate karte so gaye......

Aa ke liye itna hi dosto.
Thank you.
 

Akil

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Lagta hai thakur and company pitenge ab inspector ke haathon... Aur saath hi shamsanaath se bhi band bajwaayenge yeh log apni
Toh woh chehra chandra ka hi tha jisne un sab ki band bajaayi hui hai
Prince and priti ko bhi lagta hai ab prashikshan milega physical arts ka....
Chandra kis kitaab ke liye aaya tha.....
Ab yeh bhi bata do bhai chandani kia kar rahi hai......
 

Naughtyrishabh

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Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Aage ka intjaar


# UPSATE 32

Tabhi kuchh aisa hua ki wo teeno sann rah gaye, unke samne koi uppar se kuda or usko dekh ke unki hawa nikal gai.....

AB AAGE...........................

Apne samne mujhe wo bhi upar se kudte hue dekh kar, pahle to sale darr gaye lekin apni sankhya jyada hone ke karan phir chaude ho gaye.

G2L2:- Tuuu sale tu bachega nhi, abe pakdo ise ye wahi hai jisne hame note likha tha or abhi mujje mara bhi.

Uski baat sunke wo sale harkat me aa gaye, pahle to mujhe dekh kar or mera aisa skull face dekh darr gaye the, phir mere taraf bade.

Main:- Hihihihihi aayega sabka number aayega chinta naa karna.

Wo dono mere taraf lapke tezi se lekin main unke hatho me aane se pahle deewar par chadhta kudta fanta waha se nikal gaya, aisa nhi tha ki main unko maar nhi sakta tha lekin mujhe abhi unko marna nhi tha.

Main Pitaji ke pass pahunch Karke bhojan Kiya, Uske pakshat Ham Logon Mein Kuchh Thodi Bahut baten Hui, aur Maine Apne Gaon Mein Baat Kiya, Meri maa Chinta Mein thi ki mujhe kuchh Hua To Nahin, un Logon se baat karke bahut hi Achcha laga aur Unki bhi Chinta Mit Gayi.
************************************

Jayant Singh Jab Thakur ke Haveli per pahuncha to Thakur Apne Haveli mein hi tha, aur apne bhai ke sath baith kar Kisi Baat par Charcha kar raha tha, Jayant Singh Ke Haveli mein ghuste Hi Thakur ke bhai ne usko dekh liya.

Thakur bhai:- Aao aao Jayant Kaise Aana hua kya khabar hai aur kaise ho?

Jayant:- Pranam Thakur Sahab.

Thakur:- Jayant kya chal raha hai aajkal?

Jayant:- Kya Bataun kya chal raha hai, Khabar bahut Buri hai hum sabke liye.

Thakur:- Aisi Kya Baat Ho Gai Jayant? kaun si Buri Khabar Lekar Aaye Ho Tum?

Jayant:- Thakur Sahab maine aaj tak aapse kabhi nhi puchha ki jo bhi ladkiyan ilake se gayab hoti hain jati kaha hain, lekin agar main in sab me fansa to aap log bhi nhi bach paoge?

Thakur bhai:- Tujhe pata hai n tu kisse baat kar raha hai, apni aukat me rah. Thakur:- shant raho narendra, kya baat hui hai jo aisi baate kar raha hai jayant?

Jayant:- Kya aapko pata hai ki kal us Ladki Ki Lash Mili hai, jo abhi abhi Gayab hui thi?

Thakur bhai:- Kya bakwas kar raha hai bhaiya?

Thakur:- Maine tumko bola naa chup raho, han jayant kiske bare me bol raha hai tu?

Jayant:- Wahi ladki thakur sahab jo uthai gai thi 5din pahle, uski lash mili hai, aaj tak itni ladkiyan gayab hui kisi ko kano kaan khabar nhi hui phir ye sab kya hai, aapko pata nhi lekin upar se ilaake me naya inspector aaya hai, maine chhote thakur ko btaya bhi tha.

Thakur:-Han to kya ho gaya, jane kitne inspector aaye or gaye kuchh nhi hoga.

Jayant:- Aapko halaat samajh nhi rahe thakur sahab, mamla bahut hi gambhir hai, wah Lash Sidhe Ins. Vijay ke hath Lagi Hai, Jiski vajah se usne mujhe suspend kar diya hai, Ab aap hi ismein Kuchh kar sakte hain.

Thakur bhai:- kya baat kar rahe ho, lash mili magar kaise or kaha se?

Jayant:- Pata nhi lekin khabar hai ki morena ke jangal se ye lash mili hai.

Thakur:-(man me) Shamsa Nath Ne yah Thik Nahin Kiya, us ladki ko Markar Uske Lash aise hi fek di UN Logon Ne.

Jayant:- Thakur Sahab Iske Chakkar Me Ham fans Jaenge, Aakhir Itni sari ladkiyan gayab hui, Aaj Tak lekin koi bhi Wapas Nahin aai yah kaise ho gaya?

Thakur:- Tum chinta naa karo uss inspector ko to hum dekh lenge, or tumhari suspension bhi radd ho jayegi.

Jayant:- Thik hai thakur sahab main chalta hun pranam.

Thakur bhai:- Bhaiya ye baba ne kya kar diya hai isse to ham par bhi musibat aa sakti hai.

Thakur:- Kuchh hath nhi lagega kisi ke jo hona tha so ho gaya, aage ka dekho, uss inspector ka pata karo?

Thakur bhai:- g bhaiya abhi admi bhejta hun.
*************************************

Dusri taraf jab jayant thakur ki haveli me tha, tab vijay ko kisi ka phone aaya.

Vijay:- hello
Phone:- ********

Vijay:- Achha, han thik hai.
Phone:- **********

Vijay:- Tum pata karte raho or unka bhi, kya sambandh usna usse.
Phone:- ************

Vijay:- Han thik hai khabar karte rahna. Phone cut.

Vijay:-(man me) in logo se iske sambhand kuchh samjh nhi aaya kya majra hai, pata karna padega.

Panday andar aata hai to dekhta hai, vijay soch me gum hai to puchhta hai.

Pandey:- Kya baat hai sir kya soch rahe hain?

Vijay:- (mushkura ke) Kuchh nhi pandey ji soch raha tha aake ghar aaj lunch par chalte hai, aap kya kahte hain.

Pandey:-(man me) Han han hamara ghar to hotal hai, jo khna khane jaoge, ye to hamari sali ke pichhe hi bad gaye hain?

Vijay:- Are kya soch rahe ho pandey ji.

Pandey:-(hadbada ke) kuchh nhi sir, han kyo nhi chaliye chalte hain usme kya hai.

Or pandey or vijay thane se nikalte hai, kuchh 15 minute baad thane me do scorpio aa kar ruki or usme se thakur ka bhai or uske kuchh aadmi bahar nikle, thakur ka bhai or uske do khas aadmi thane ke andar gaye or baki sab wahi khade ho gaye, narendra ko dekh ke jo bhi hawaldar the wo sab usko pranam namashte kar rahe the.

Hawaldar:- Chhote thakur aap yaha? Koi kaam tha kya?

Thakur bhai:- Kaam hota to tu karta kya mera kaam sale do kaudi ke hawaldar chal nikal.

Bechara hawaldar waha se muh liye hat gaya, phir koi bhi hawaldar uske samne nhi aaya, SI se jaa kar usne bola.

Thakur bhai:- Kaha hai jo tumhara naya inspector aaya hai, bolo chhote thakur aaye hain.

SI:- Abhi wo yah as nhi hai bahar gaye hain.

Thakur bhai:- Jab wo aaye to kah dena chhote thakur aaye the, or haveli par bulaya hai thakur sahab ne aake mile unse. Samjha.

SI:- Ji thik hai khabar de dunga.

Uske baad narendra apne aadmiyon ke sang waha se chala gaya,

2 ghante baad jab vijay aaya to SI ne usko khabar diya, to usne pandey se puchha.

Vijay:- Koun hai ye mahasay pandey ji, jo order de kar gaye hain, unke baap le nokri karte hain kya hum sab.

Pandey:- Aisa hi hai sir, thakur iss ilake ka bada aadmi hai, khabar mili hogi aapke aane ki isliye bulaya hoga.

Vijay:- To kya main usse milne uske ghar jau, uske baap ka naukar hun kya, thana sabke liye hai, jise milna hoga khud aayega.

Pandey:- Aisa aap thik samjhe sir.
*************************************
Sham ke waqt main or pitaji bazaar me ghum rahe the, bazar me alag alag tarah ke kapde jute, khane pine ki chize thi, jo maine aaj tak kabhi khai hi nhi thi, gurukul me to satvik bhojan hi milta tha.

Sham ke waqt itni bheed or bazaaro ki raunak dekhte hi banta tha, banaras ki chhoti chhoti galiyan or unme kuchh na kuchh khas tarah ki bikti pakwan or saman ki dukane, sab bahut hi sundar tha.

Aaj main pahli baar idhar aaya tha, main pita ji se ek pustakalay ke liye bola tha, jo bahut hi prachin ho, jaha se mujhe mere kaam ki apne liye kuchh kitaben chahiye thi, hum wahi jaa rahe the jo pitaji mujhe dikhane le jaa rahe the, kintu iss waqt wah band ho gaya tha.

Ab jis chiz ke liye aaye the wah to hua nhi isliye hum bazaar me ghum rahe the or tarah tarah ke vyanjan ka maza utha rahe the, jinme se kuchh to main pahli baar hi kha raha tha, phir humne thodi kharidari bhi ki, pitaji ne kaha jab tum gaon jaoge to sabke liye lete jana, mujhe bhi thik laga to sabhi ke liye kapde kharide humne, mujje to koi andaza nhi tha ki koun kitna bada or ab kaisa dikhta hai, isliye sab pitaji hi dekh kar le rahe the.

Uske baad hum bazar me ho bhojan kar ke ghar laute, phir hum baate karte so gaye......

Aa ke liye itna hi dosto.
Thank you.
 
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