Incest Halala...jatt di lottery (Completed)

[Busty_kaur]

Har ik di apni apni thinking hundi writer ki sochda likhan lage. Zoya nu kafi saal ho gye simar naal rehnde 5 saal de ta ode 2 munde ne urdu touch oda punjabi family ch reh k khatam ho gya hona. Duji gal zoya jad bhar ayi ta choti bachi si usa ch reh k bache waise vi english toh ghat bolde nahi. Even with parents they like to talk in English. Baki story aa wadia lagi thik aa na ta ignore kar deo. Hahahaha apa apne time pass layi likhi si.

Menu lagda tusi mera comment padhya nahi changi tarah. I said "awesome start... kudos for a different flavour" and last te fer tareef kiti. Meri oh aadat nahi ke sirf nuks hi kadha kise story vich. I know ek writer layi appreciation di ehmiyat hundi aa. Last update was also very good. Keep on writing.

 

[Sunny K]

Very nice story and nice ending

 

[Proud Punjabi]

Menu lagda tusi mera comment padhya nahi changi tarah. I said "awesome start... kudos for a different flavour" and last te fer tareef kiti. Meri oh aadat nahi ke sirf nuks hi kadha kise story vich. I know ek writer layi appreciation di ehmiyat hundi aa. Last update was also very good. Keep on writing.

na na main gussa nahi kita. Dujyea de point of view toh pad k vi kafi kuch pata lagda.

 

[SKELTON]

Veere bhtt sohna update aa

Upr read kita c ik veer ne keha k eh kida ho skda

Veere eh short story aa ess lyi jassi 22 ne point to point likhya

Jive tuc kehne o j oss way nl.likhde ta bhtt long story ho jni c te punjabi section ch long story likhna bht aaukha kyn k long story nu ena reponse ni milda

Te jassi 22 ne ess ch sirf ik riwaaz da zikr kreya k kis trah ik riwaaz nl simr nu faida hoyaa

J nau n saas de rishte bre likhde ta ohde te hi 10 12 update chahide c k kis trah oh eniyn bold hoyiyn

J marriage di gl krde o ss lyi v updates bhtt likhne paine c k kive oh close aaye kive ghre pta lgeya kive sbb manage hoya

So veere story da maza lau

Bki jassi veere bhtt sohna likh rhe o

End jldi krta veere thoda jeha ohna da romance dikha dinde simr n fatima da ta hrr v vdia lgna c

Bki as a readr maza aaya read kr k tuhadi story

J ho ske ta next time koi romantic short story likheyo

Waiting for ur next blast

Ver short story ch mza ni aea. Na character nal jure, na romance , na kuj. Jassi bro long story likho koi hor .

 

[Rajizexy]

good story. Akhar wade likho please

 

[Rajizexy]

Nice start

 

[Ludhianvi]

Very nice story
Waiting for update

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[Panther72]

Tera xforum username dai jassi bro