Incest Gulam (Completed)

[Siraj Patel]

Brilliant update bhai super duper ekdum jhakaas dhamakedaar mind-blowing,

Bhai aapne desibees par Yeh story ke 38 update post Kiya Hai to yahan par bhi Sabhi purani updates jaldi jaldi post kar ke story ko present mein le aao please.

Keep going
We will wait for next update

 

[Siraj Patel]

bhai pahchan liya aapko
thank you for you advice and support

Bhai Yahan Par bhi desibees Ki Tarah new update matlab present update Ka Intezar rahega.

 

[Fighter]

Mast update bhai

Waiting for next update...

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Bahut bahut badhaiyan kahani shuru karne ke liye.

Do update or dono hi behad jabardast or shandaar bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Aapne ab tk bade hi behtareen dhang se dikhaya h sari baton ko.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjar

 

[Lone survivor]

Wow.. nice start..

Starting hi mysterious krdi.
Ye Jey ka character ajeev lag Raha h upar s story ki theme Jo h us hisab s to ...
Kher , Jey bachpan s yahan aur usne bola ki uske mom dad ni h measn wo shayad Puri duniya m akela h.


Let's see Kya hotah h..

thank you for your support
stay tuned

 

[Lone survivor]

Brilliant update bhai super duper ekdum jhakaas dhamakedaar mind-blowing,

Bhai aapne ******** par Yeh story ke 38 update post Kiya Hai to yahan par bhi Sabhi purani updates jaldi jaldi post kar ke story ko present mein le aao please.

Keep going
We will wait for next update

bhai aaenge updates jaldi jaldi aaenge
aap bas sath bane rahe

 

[Lone survivor]

Bahut bahut badhaiyan kahani shuru karne ke liye.

Do update or dono hi behad jabardast or shandaar bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Aapne ab tk bade hi behtareen dhang se dikhaya h sari baton ko.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjar

thank you for your support
stay tuned

 

[Lone survivor]

Mast update bhai

Waiting for next update...

thank you for your support
stay tuned

 

[Lone survivor]

UPDATE-3

Nisha- dad kal hum gum nahi paye esliye aaj jaenge
Shivani- ha aap jey Ko bol dijiye

Thakur- usko maine kaam se bahar beja hai jaise hi aajaega tab chale Jana aur maine usko samjha diya hai ab thik se behave karega

Nisha- dad vo kal main hi Jada over react kar Gaye thi uski koe galati nahi thi. I'm sorry dad
Thakur- tabhi main soch Raha tha ki vo tumse kaise badtamiji kar Sakta hai

Nisha- vaise mujhse kyu nahi kar Sakta?
Thakur uski baat Ko has kar Taal dete hai

Priya- dad aakhir ye hai kon aur Apne aapko gulam kyu bolta hai
Thakur- long story
Kabhi fursat me bataunga

Nisha- dad vo kab tak aaenge?
Thakur- jaise hi uska kaam ho jaega vaise hi aajaega

Nisha- hum to late ho jaenge na
Aap call kardo na please
Thakur- beta important kaam ke liye Gaya hai

Nisha- aapne to bola tha ki vo sirf humare liye hai I mean humari safety dekhega bas
Thakur- acha baba sorry
Abhi aajane de fir kabhi Kahi nahi bejunga thik hai

Fir sab breakfast karne Lage aur breakfast khatam hote hote jey bhi aagaya

Uske hath me khub Sara khoon Laga hua tha aur ek bada sa beg bhi tha

Priya aur baki sab Ko dekh kar vo beg vahi rakh kar under ki taraf chala Gaya thodi hi der me vapas aaya to hath muh sab dhoye hue the aur beg Thakur ke pass lake rakh diya

Thakur- pyaar se baat karne ke liye beja tha na
Jey- pyaar se baat nahi Hoti aur na log pyaar se mante hai

Thakur- logo me dhasat Falana mera Lakshay nahi hai
Jitna ho sake Shadow me chhup kar kaam karo

Priya- dad main bhi soch Rahi hu ki business join karlu
jey- nahiiiiiiii
Jey bahut Jor se bola jisse sun kar teeno behan ek dam dar Gaye par Thakur ne koe react nahi Kiya

Priya- kyu nahi
Jey- because I said that's why nahi

Thakur- tu ja yaha se aur tayar hokar enhe gumane leja
Ye sun kar jey Bina kuch kahe vaha se chala Gaya

Priya- dad ye aise kaise baat kar Sakta hai
Thakur- beta he is like family now aur business me bahut khatra hai esliye mana Kiya hai usne

Priya- to khatare se nipatne ke liye to vo hai nahi to uska fayda hi kya hai
Thakur- tum Abhi nahi samjhoge
Time aane par pata chal jaega
Tum ek kaam kyu nahi Karti Abhi to sehar dekho enjoy karo
Uske Baad sehar me logo ki help ke liye kuch NGO type kuch start kar Dena
Tumhre kaam ki vajah se meri image bhi sahi ho jaegi aur tum humesha se hi dusro ki help bhi karna chahti thi

Priya- ha ye sahi rahega dad
I will think about it
Fir vo sab bhi uth kar tayar hone Chali Gaye aur kuch hi der me teeno behane aur jey car me the

Jey humesha ki tarah shant hi tha
Aur chhup chhap car chala Raha tha
Aaj un sabne bhi usse kuch nahi kaha ki Kahi fir kuch problem na ho jaye

Priya ne pehle hi pata kar Liya tha ki kaha kaha gumna hai esliye Sabse pehle Jane ka plan banaya mandir me

Priya- Sabse pehle mandir le chalo
Suna hai yaha ke mandir bahut famous hai
Jey bas ha me gardan hila deta hai aur kuch hi der me pahuch bhi jate hai

Jey jaise hi car se nikalata hai logo ki bhid jama ho jati hai aur sab Malik Malik bol kar jey Ko parnaam karne Lagate hai
Jey bhi hath jood kar sabko wish karta hai

Ye sab dekh kar teeno behane aur soch me ki ye akhir hai kon aur sab usse Malik Malik kyu bol rahe hai

Jey- aap log jaeye main yaha wait kar Raha hu
Shivani- aap sath nahi chaloge?

Jey- nahi
I'm waiting here
Nisha- aur under Hume kisi ne kuch kar diya to?

Jey- logo ne aap sab Ko mere sath dekh Liya hai koe kuch nahi karega
Aap jaeye
Nisha aur Shivani bechari sada face Bana kar Chali Gaye jisse dekh kar Priya hasne lagi

Vo log jaise hi mandir me gusse unhe Aisa feel hua ki jaise vip treatment mil Raha ho
Log Apne aap unke liye jagah chhod rahe the
Koe unki taraf najar Mila nahi Raha tha
Unhe bahut ajib Laga because unke liye to vo sab normal ladkiya hi thi

Par fir sab kuch ignore karke vo log Pooja karte hai aur parsad leke vapas aajate hai

Nisha- ye lijiye hum aapke liye parsad laye hai
Jey- let's go we are getting late

Nisha- parsad to lelijiye
Jey- main meetha nahi khata
Priya- parsad ke liye mana nahi Kiya karte
Jey ek second ke liye Priya ki taraf dekhta hai aur fir Bina kuch bole parsad leleta hai

Nisha dheere se Priya Ko bolti hai
Priya- di kya jadu kar diya Apne es khadush par aapki baat ek second me Maan li aapne

Priya- Jada dimag mat Chalaya kar
Ab chal aur Bata aage kaha Jana hai
Nisha- vo to main sab pata kar Liya hai par ab soch Rahi hu ki Apne khadush guide se hi puch lete hai

Nisha car me bath kar jey se
Aap Ko jo pasand hai vaha le chaliye ab
Jey bhi Bina kuch bole car chala deta hai aur kuch time Baad pahuch jate hai ek jagah jo sayad sehar se thodi door thi

Par thi bahut khubsurat aur Sabse badi baat ye thi ki bahut Shanti thi
Charo taraf hariyali paas me hi chota sa waterfall

Nisha aur baki sab ye dekh kar hi bahut khush ho Gaye

Shivani- acha to ab samjh aaya yaha koe aata nahi hai esliye aapko pasand hai
Par kitni pyaari jagah hai hai na didi

Priya- ha bahut shant aur Sundar jagah hai
Thank you jey
Vo bahut pyaar se bolti hai

Jey Bina kuch bole pas ke hi ek pathar par Jake bath jata hai aur Apne hi khayalon me Kahi kho sa jata hai

Baki sab vahi enjoy karne lagte hai
Tabhi kuch ladke sayad bahar se aaye the gumne vaha aajate hai aur teen Sundar Sundar ladkiyo Ko dekh kar maje karne ki sochte hai

Vo sehar ke to the nahi nahi to jey Ko dekh kar kisi ki Aisa sochne ki himmat bhi nahi hoti par sayad kharab kismat

Ladka- oye dekh samne Jannat
Kya ladkiya hai bhai
Chal thodi Masti karte hai
Ladka2- chhod na be kyu Bina matlab ke tang gusani aur tune Suna nahi kya es sehar ke bare me
Ladka3- abe lodu teri har Baar kyu gand faat jati hai
Ek hi to ladka hai unke sath aur hum char aur kisi Ko pata chalne se pehle hi hum yaha se nikal lenge
Ladka4- chalo to kaam Suru kar dete hai

Vo sare ladke Kamini smile ke sath Priya ke paas Jane Lage kyuki Sabse khatarnaak figure ushi ka tha aur jharne me bhigne ki vajah se aur Jada katilana lag Raha tha

Par sayad nisha ne unhe aata hua dekh Liya aur apni behano Ko bhi Bata diya

Ladka- kya hua meri Jaan etni shant kaise ho Gaye Abhi to khub Jor Jor se has Rahi thi
Par ek baat to hai tum teeno ka figure Kamaal ka hai
Peene me bahuuutttt.....
Uski aawaz uske muh me hi rah Gaye aur kisi ne uski gardan piche se pakad kar hawa me utha di jisse dekh kar baki ladke buri tarah dar Gaye

Par fir bhi ek ne himmat karke
Ladka2- dekh Jaan pyaari hai to yaha se chala ja nahi to teri kya halat hogi ye tu soch bhi nahi Sakta

Jey ne pehle ladke Ko door fek kar dusre ke paas aaya aur apni pent se ek bada sa chaku bhi nikal Liya

Jey- main tumhe ek mokka deta hu(jey Apne hath Ko chaku se katate hue bolta hai)
Yaha se chale jao Varna tumhre khandhan me chhote bache se lekar bade buddhe tak kisi ki bhi lash Ko kandha dene wala koe nahi milega( jey ne apna hath kafi kaat Liya tha jisse khub khoon Baah Raha tha)

Ab sala ye dekh kar kis ki nahi fategi jab koe aadmi Apne aapko Etna nuksaan pahucha Sakta hai to dusro ki kya halat karega vaise ye ek torcher technic hai
Khud Ko nuksaan pahuchate dekh samne wale ki bahut gandi faat jati hai

Yaha bhi vahi hua aur vo ladke vaha se aise Gayab hue jaise flash ki power aagaye ho unme

Priya bhagte hue jey ke paas aae
Priya- ye kya Kiya aapne
Koe khud ke sath bhi Aisa karta hai kya Bhala
Agar marna tha to unko marna chahiye tha na

Jey- vo Abhi bache hai seh nahi pate
They deserve a second chance
Aap chinta mat kariye kisi Ko kuch fark nahi padta mere liye
Aur etni chhoti chhot se vaise bhi mere kuch nahi hone wala
Aap Jake enjoy karo
Fir aage bhi Jana hai

Priya- nahi Hume ab ghar Jana hai
Aur jey ke hath par Lage khoon Ko saaf karne lagi
Jey usse apna hath chhuda kar
Ek gulam ke liye Etna nahi karte
Aap jaeye

Priya gusse me
Par ek bhai ke liye to kar Sakti hu na
Agar mera koe bhai hota to aaj vo bhi tumhre jeetna bada ho Chuka hota
Kya tum mere bhai nahi ban sakte
Nisha aur Shivani ke sath
Nahi didi bhai nahi
Aapke bhai honge to humare bhai bhi ho jaenge please bhai nahi
Fir ek dam se Bolte Bolte Ruk Gaye jey ke samne hi yeah sab bol Gaye

Jey ne Priya ke hath se kapda Liya aur khud hi Apne hath par bandhane lag Gaya aur fir Jake car me bath Gaya
Uske piche piche hi baki sab bhi aagaye

Priya ka mood khafi kharab hogya tha esliye usne bola ki ghar chalo
Baki sab bhi chhup hi rahe aur jey ne car sidhe ghar ki taraf mod di

Thakur hall me bhi batha hua tha aur sabko aaj firse jaldi dekh kar jey par bhadak Gaya

Thakur- aaj tune fir kuch Kiya kya
Aaj to teri chamdi alag kar dunga main
Nisha- dad unhone kuch nahi Kiya
Vo fir Nisha Thakur Ko sab Bata deti hai

Thakur gusse me jey Ko fir se teen char thapad jhad deta hai
Thakur- tune unhe jeenda kyu Jane diya
Mujhe sabke sarir ke chhote chhote tukde chahiye samjh Gaya tu
Chhote chhote tukde

Priya- dad I don't want any bloodshed
They deserve a second chance aur aap baat baat par esse kyu marte rahte ho
Mana ki aapke liye kaam karta hai par aapko respect se baat karni chahiye
Ye kabhi aapki najaro me dekh kar baat tak nahi karta aur ek aap ho

Thakur- beta Abhi tumne bola ki puri baat Jaan Leni chahiye to tumhe bhi bolne se pehle puri baat Jaan Leni chahiye
Ye kuch nahi bolta eska reason ye nahi hai ki mere liye kaam karta hai eska bahut bada reason hai
Esne khud apni respect khoye hai

Jey ki taraf dekhte hue
Tu ja aur Kahi Nashe karke pad jana
Kyuki vohi kaam tujhse dhang se hota hai hai na
Jaaaaaaaa
Thakur chhilaya
Jey humesha ki tarah Bina kuch bole vaha se chala Gaya

Shivani- dad to Hume Bata hi dijiye na ki kya reason hai eska
Aaj ke time me koe etni bejati nahi sehata
Dad- time aane par sab pata chal jaega

Nisha- nahi Hume Abhi janana hai
Priya- ha Hume Abhi janana hai

Thakur- Abhi ke liye bas Etna Jaan lo ki vo ek Insaan nahi shatan hai
Usse khoon ki pyaas hai
Maine jeetni kosis ki sehar me khoon kharaba Kam karne ki usne utna hi Jada khoon bhaya

Tum sab ke mujhe chhod Jane ke Baad main buri tarah se toot Gaya tha aur Kasam leli thi ki sehar Ko jitna maila maine Kiya hai usse saaf bhi main hi karunga
Par fir ek din shatan ka roop leke ye aagaya aur Etna khoon bhahaya Etna khoon ki sehar ki sadke aaj bhi laal hai

Usse dusro Ko Dard dekar Khushi milti hai vo us Dard aur usse Milne wali Khushi ke liye hi Jinda hai

Priya- par log to usse pujte hai(mandir wala scene)
Thakur- log puja ushi ki karte hai jisse unhe dar lagta hai
Ye Janta bholi hai
Koe ek Jaan bacha leta hai usse hi apna sab kuch Maan leti hai par unhe ye nahi pata ki usse pehle kitni jaane Gaye hai

Mujhe nahi pata ki aaj esne un ladko Ko jinda kyu Jane diya kyuki maaf karna eski fidraat me nahi
Ye vo monster hai jisse maine banaya hai aur ab main hi bhugat Raha hu.....

 

[Nakul]

Read all the updates
Nicely written
Awesome work brother