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UPDATE 1
This is my first story here hope you guys will enjoy it....
Daddddddddddd hum aagaye
Ye kahte hue teen ladkiya Thakur sahab ke Galle lag Gaye
Thakur- kitna intzaar karvaya hai tum logo ne. Main kab se sab tayari kar ke batha hu. Aaj ye haweli fir se jagmaga uthegi
Meri betiya jo sallo Baad vapas aae hai
Ab Kahi nahi Jane dunga main tumhe
Ladki- ab hum jayenge bhi nahi aapko chhod kar. Dekho kitne kamjor ho Gaye ho
Kuch khate Peete ho ki nahi. Bilkul apna Dhyan nahi rakhte. Aage se main dekhti hu kaise apni manmani karoge
Thakur- are beta aate hi datana Suru kar diya
Chalo under chalte hai surprise hai tum sabke liye
Dusri ladki- yehhhh surprise I love surr.....
Vo bechari Etna hi bol paye ki un sabke samne ek aadmi ka kata hua sar aake gira aur uske piche piche ek khoon me Sana hua ladka ya yu kahe darinda chala aa Raha tha
Ye dekh kar un ladkiyo ki to aankhe hi fati ki fati rah Gaye
Vo ladka aaya aur Thakur ke samne najar niche karke khada hogaya
Thakur- pehle ye dekh Liya kar ki samne kon khada hai. Ab meri betiya aagaye hai aur vo yahi rahegi to jitna bhi khoon kharaba hai vo haweli ke bahar aur hai tu har second enke sath rahega . Ek baat yaad rakhna agar meri betiyo ke ek kharoch bhi aae to tera vo haal karunga ki hawan bhi kaap jaenge
Ab ja aur ye jiska bhi sar hai usse bhi leke ja yaha se aur hai Apne halat sudhar kar under aa baat karni hai
Vo ladka apna sar niche hi rakhte hue vaha se chala Gaya
Ladkiya bechari Abhi bhi bahut dari hue thi. Unhe aise dekh kar Thakur sahab
Thakur- are beta Daro mat main hu na
Yaha ka mahool thoda kharab hai
Ladki3- dad vo ladka kon tha?
Thakur- tum sab kitna sawal jawab Karti hu chalo under bhukh bhi lagne lagi hai
Thakur uski baat Ko talte hue unhe under leke jate hai
Sab Jake soffe par bath jate hai aur edar udhar ki baatein karne lagte hai
Fir thodi der Baad
Thakur- tum sabka room bilkul vaisa hi hai jaisa bachpan me tum log chhod kar Gaye thi
Jake fresh holo fir hum sath me khana khaenge aur ha jaldi aana bahut bukh lagi hai beta
Ladki vaha se Chali jati hai aur vo ladka vaha aajata hai
Bina kuch bole apni najar Ko niche karke Thakur ke samne khada ho jata hai
Thakur- aaj se tu bahar ka koe bhi kaam nahi karega
Mujhe har waqt tu meri betiyo ke sath chahiye
Yaha bahut khatra hai aur main unhe bahut pyaar karta hu baki tu samjh ja
Aur unhe khoon kharaba bilkul pasand nahi hai to jitna ho sake Apne dimag par control rakhna
Samajh Gaya
Vo ladka bas ha me gardan hila deta hai
Thakur- ye drugs bhi kaam karde
Teri bhudhi kharab kar rahe hai ye
Ek time tha jab tu kitna layak hua karta tha
Ab dekh kya halat Bana li hai tune
Bas ek baat yaad rakhna mujhe meri betiya khush aur safe chahiye
Tab tak vo teeno ladkiya bhi niche aajati hai aur jab samne us ladke Ko dekhti hai to bas dekhti rah jati hai
Pehle khoon me sane hone ke Karan usse thik se dekh nahi paye thi
Neeli ankhen,bade lambe Baal, muscular sarir aur kale kapde
Kisi Ko bhi apni taraf khich le
Jab Thakur ne unhe dekha to us ladke Ko vaha se Jane Ko Bolte hai
Thakur- chalo jaldi se khana khate hai bahut hi bhukh lagi hai
Ladki3- dad Aisa lagta hai kafi dino se khana hi nahi khaya hai Apne bas humara intzaar kar rahe the
Thakur- ha mere bete khane ka man hi nahi karta tha
Ladki-koe nahi ab hum sari kasar nikal denge khila khila kar
Chalo thoda introduction ho jaye
Thakur- sehar ka mukhiya
Main kaam underworld se juda hua hai
Priya thakur-Sabse badi beti
Shivani thakur-dusre number ki
Nisha thakur- Sabse chhoti
Bachpan me hi sehar chale Gaye the taki khoon kharabe se door rahe par family ka lagav vapas khich laya enhe
Enka nature to story ke sath sath hi pata chalega
Jey- thoda mysterious character hai eske bare me bhi aage pata chalega
Back to story
Nisha-to dad hume city kab gumaoge?
Thakur- jab meri gudia ka Maan kare tabhi
Nisha- to abhi chalte hai
Thakur- tum logo Ko aram nahi karna
Nisha- nahi
Hume gumna hai
Hana didi?
Priya aur Shivani bas muskura deti hai unhe pata hai ki Nisha bahut jeedi hai vo vaise bhi nahi manegi
Thakur- thik hai pehle khana kha lo
Thakur ek nokar Ko jey Ko bulane ke liye bejta hai
Priya- dad aap nahi chalogo?
Thakur- beta bhudapa aagaya hai ab Jada mahnat nahi Hoti
Tum log enjoy karo
Shivani- dad mujhe usse dar lagta hai
Thakur- tumhe darne ki kya jarurat hai
Tum Thakur ki beti ho
Aur vo Sabse trusted person hai
Agar jaoge to uske sath otherwise koe Kahi nahi jaega
Nisha- thik hai dad
Hume koe problem nahi hai
Aise hi baat karte karte khana bhi khatam ho Jata hai aur tabhi jey bhi aajata hai
Apni aadat anusar najar niche karke khada hogya
Thakur apna muh saaf karte hue
Unko leke jao aur pura sehar ache se dikha kar Lao
Ek baat yaad rakhna jab vapas aaye to chehre par muskaan honi chahiye
Etna bol kar Thakur vaha se chala jata hai
Ab Bach jate hai teen behane aur jey
Jey kuch soch kar
I'm waiting outside
Aur vaha se nikal jata hai
Piche piche hi vo ladkiya bhi aajati hai
Kasam se kya lag Rahi thi sari ke sari
Matlab boomb bilkul boomb
Sab jaldi jaldi car me bath jate hai
Jey driver sheet par
Uske side me Priya aur Nisha Shivani bich me
Vo log aise hi edar udar ki baatein kar rahe the par jey ke chehre par koe bhav nahi tha
Nisha ne socha thoda eske maje lete hai
Nisha- aap kya karte hai?
Jey kuch nahi bolta
Nisha- ha aapse hi baat kar Rahi hu
Dad ke sath kab se ho
Jey fir bhi kuch nahi bola
Jisse Nisha thodi chhid Gaye
Nisha- tumhe Sunae nahi deta kya tumhi se baat kar Rahi hu
Ya tumhe pata nahi hai ki jab Malik baat karte hai to kaise reply karte hai
Priya- are gudia rahne de
Usse nahi baat karni to mat karne de
Tu kyu chhid Rahi hai
Nisha- aise kaise rahne du
Vo Naukar hai agar hum kuch puche to usse jawab Dena padega
Jey ne ek jhatke se car Roki aur piche muh karke
Jey- aapne sahi kaha hum Naukar hai esliye jawab Dena to Banta hai
Main Naukar hu to naukaro wale sare kaam karta hu
Main bachpan se unke sath hu
Aur aapke baato ka reply esliye nahi kar Raha ki mujhe ladkiyo se baat karna nahi aata esliye kuch galat na nikal jaye muh se to chhup hu
Aur kuch puchna hai aapko
Nisha- mujhe ghar Jana hai
Shivani-ab kya hogya tujhe
Nisha- mujhe ghar Jana hai esko bolo ki ghar leke chale
Priya ne ishare me jey Ko bola aur usne car ghar ki taraf mod di
Pure raste kisi me koe baat nahi hue
Haweli puchte hi Nisha Sabse pehle car se nikali aur dad dad chhilate hue ghar me gus Gaye
Thakur usse etni jaldi vapas dekh kar
Are bahut jaldi vapas aagaye
Nisha- dad mujhe vo bilkul pasand nahi hai
Mujhe vo bilkul pasand nahi hai
Vo bahut badtamij hai
Tab tak jey aur baki sab bhi aagaye
Thakur gusse me- kon
Nisha ne jey ki taraf Ishara Kiya aur Thakur ne Bina kuch soche samjhe teen chaar khich khich kar Chhate rakh diye jey Ko
Puri haweli me chatak chatak chatak ki awaz gunj uthi
Jey jaise pehle khada rahta hai aaj bhi vaise hi khada tha bas uski naak se khoon nikal Raha tha
Thakur- teri himmat kaise hue meri beti se badtamiji karne ki
Bol
Chatttaaaaakkkkk
Chatttaaaaakkkkk
Chatttaaaaakkkkk
Fir se vohi aawaz gunj Gaye
Maafi mang Abhi ke Abhi maafi maang
Jey ne apni naak se khoon saaf Kiya aur Apne ghutno ke Bal bath kar Nisha ke pair pakad liye
Galati hogaye maaf kar dijiye
Aage se Aisa nahi hoga
Nisha ne fatak se apna pair piche kar liyo vo thoda naraj jarur thi thapad tak thik tha par koe usse bada person uske pair chuke maffi mange ye uske liye bhi Jada tha
Usne aapne pair piche kiye aur bas ek halki si aawaz aae it's okay
Thakur ne jey Ko vaha se Jane Ko bola aur Nisha Ko Apne Galle Laga Liya.....
This is my first story here hope you guys will enjoy it....
Daddddddddddd hum aagaye
Ye kahte hue teen ladkiya Thakur sahab ke Galle lag Gaye
Thakur- kitna intzaar karvaya hai tum logo ne. Main kab se sab tayari kar ke batha hu. Aaj ye haweli fir se jagmaga uthegi
Meri betiya jo sallo Baad vapas aae hai
Ab Kahi nahi Jane dunga main tumhe
Ladki- ab hum jayenge bhi nahi aapko chhod kar. Dekho kitne kamjor ho Gaye ho
Kuch khate Peete ho ki nahi. Bilkul apna Dhyan nahi rakhte. Aage se main dekhti hu kaise apni manmani karoge
Thakur- are beta aate hi datana Suru kar diya
Chalo under chalte hai surprise hai tum sabke liye
Dusri ladki- yehhhh surprise I love surr.....
Vo bechari Etna hi bol paye ki un sabke samne ek aadmi ka kata hua sar aake gira aur uske piche piche ek khoon me Sana hua ladka ya yu kahe darinda chala aa Raha tha
Ye dekh kar un ladkiyo ki to aankhe hi fati ki fati rah Gaye
Vo ladka aaya aur Thakur ke samne najar niche karke khada hogaya
Thakur- pehle ye dekh Liya kar ki samne kon khada hai. Ab meri betiya aagaye hai aur vo yahi rahegi to jitna bhi khoon kharaba hai vo haweli ke bahar aur hai tu har second enke sath rahega . Ek baat yaad rakhna agar meri betiyo ke ek kharoch bhi aae to tera vo haal karunga ki hawan bhi kaap jaenge
Ab ja aur ye jiska bhi sar hai usse bhi leke ja yaha se aur hai Apne halat sudhar kar under aa baat karni hai
Vo ladka apna sar niche hi rakhte hue vaha se chala Gaya
Ladkiya bechari Abhi bhi bahut dari hue thi. Unhe aise dekh kar Thakur sahab
Thakur- are beta Daro mat main hu na
Yaha ka mahool thoda kharab hai
Ladki3- dad vo ladka kon tha?
Thakur- tum sab kitna sawal jawab Karti hu chalo under bhukh bhi lagne lagi hai
Thakur uski baat Ko talte hue unhe under leke jate hai
Sab Jake soffe par bath jate hai aur edar udhar ki baatein karne lagte hai
Fir thodi der Baad
Thakur- tum sabka room bilkul vaisa hi hai jaisa bachpan me tum log chhod kar Gaye thi
Jake fresh holo fir hum sath me khana khaenge aur ha jaldi aana bahut bukh lagi hai beta
Ladki vaha se Chali jati hai aur vo ladka vaha aajata hai
Bina kuch bole apni najar Ko niche karke Thakur ke samne khada ho jata hai
Thakur- aaj se tu bahar ka koe bhi kaam nahi karega
Mujhe har waqt tu meri betiyo ke sath chahiye
Yaha bahut khatra hai aur main unhe bahut pyaar karta hu baki tu samjh ja
Aur unhe khoon kharaba bilkul pasand nahi hai to jitna ho sake Apne dimag par control rakhna
Samajh Gaya
Vo ladka bas ha me gardan hila deta hai
Thakur- ye drugs bhi kaam karde
Teri bhudhi kharab kar rahe hai ye
Ek time tha jab tu kitna layak hua karta tha
Ab dekh kya halat Bana li hai tune
Bas ek baat yaad rakhna mujhe meri betiya khush aur safe chahiye
Tab tak vo teeno ladkiya bhi niche aajati hai aur jab samne us ladke Ko dekhti hai to bas dekhti rah jati hai
Pehle khoon me sane hone ke Karan usse thik se dekh nahi paye thi
Neeli ankhen,bade lambe Baal, muscular sarir aur kale kapde
Kisi Ko bhi apni taraf khich le
Jab Thakur ne unhe dekha to us ladke Ko vaha se Jane Ko Bolte hai
Thakur- chalo jaldi se khana khate hai bahut hi bhukh lagi hai
Ladki3- dad Aisa lagta hai kafi dino se khana hi nahi khaya hai Apne bas humara intzaar kar rahe the
Thakur- ha mere bete khane ka man hi nahi karta tha
Ladki-koe nahi ab hum sari kasar nikal denge khila khila kar
Chalo thoda introduction ho jaye
Thakur- sehar ka mukhiya
Main kaam underworld se juda hua hai
Priya thakur-Sabse badi beti
Shivani thakur-dusre number ki
Nisha thakur- Sabse chhoti
Bachpan me hi sehar chale Gaye the taki khoon kharabe se door rahe par family ka lagav vapas khich laya enhe
Enka nature to story ke sath sath hi pata chalega
Jey- thoda mysterious character hai eske bare me bhi aage pata chalega
Back to story
Nisha-to dad hume city kab gumaoge?
Thakur- jab meri gudia ka Maan kare tabhi
Nisha- to abhi chalte hai
Thakur- tum logo Ko aram nahi karna
Nisha- nahi
Hume gumna hai
Hana didi?
Priya aur Shivani bas muskura deti hai unhe pata hai ki Nisha bahut jeedi hai vo vaise bhi nahi manegi
Thakur- thik hai pehle khana kha lo
Thakur ek nokar Ko jey Ko bulane ke liye bejta hai
Priya- dad aap nahi chalogo?
Thakur- beta bhudapa aagaya hai ab Jada mahnat nahi Hoti
Tum log enjoy karo
Shivani- dad mujhe usse dar lagta hai
Thakur- tumhe darne ki kya jarurat hai
Tum Thakur ki beti ho
Aur vo Sabse trusted person hai
Agar jaoge to uske sath otherwise koe Kahi nahi jaega
Nisha- thik hai dad
Hume koe problem nahi hai
Aise hi baat karte karte khana bhi khatam ho Jata hai aur tabhi jey bhi aajata hai
Apni aadat anusar najar niche karke khada hogya
Thakur apna muh saaf karte hue
Unko leke jao aur pura sehar ache se dikha kar Lao
Ek baat yaad rakhna jab vapas aaye to chehre par muskaan honi chahiye
Etna bol kar Thakur vaha se chala jata hai
Ab Bach jate hai teen behane aur jey
Jey kuch soch kar
I'm waiting outside
Aur vaha se nikal jata hai
Piche piche hi vo ladkiya bhi aajati hai
Kasam se kya lag Rahi thi sari ke sari
Matlab boomb bilkul boomb
Sab jaldi jaldi car me bath jate hai
Jey driver sheet par
Uske side me Priya aur Nisha Shivani bich me
Vo log aise hi edar udar ki baatein kar rahe the par jey ke chehre par koe bhav nahi tha
Nisha ne socha thoda eske maje lete hai
Nisha- aap kya karte hai?
Jey kuch nahi bolta
Nisha- ha aapse hi baat kar Rahi hu
Dad ke sath kab se ho
Jey fir bhi kuch nahi bola
Jisse Nisha thodi chhid Gaye
Nisha- tumhe Sunae nahi deta kya tumhi se baat kar Rahi hu
Ya tumhe pata nahi hai ki jab Malik baat karte hai to kaise reply karte hai
Priya- are gudia rahne de
Usse nahi baat karni to mat karne de
Tu kyu chhid Rahi hai
Nisha- aise kaise rahne du
Vo Naukar hai agar hum kuch puche to usse jawab Dena padega
Jey ne ek jhatke se car Roki aur piche muh karke
Jey- aapne sahi kaha hum Naukar hai esliye jawab Dena to Banta hai
Main Naukar hu to naukaro wale sare kaam karta hu
Main bachpan se unke sath hu
Aur aapke baato ka reply esliye nahi kar Raha ki mujhe ladkiyo se baat karna nahi aata esliye kuch galat na nikal jaye muh se to chhup hu
Aur kuch puchna hai aapko
Nisha- mujhe ghar Jana hai
Shivani-ab kya hogya tujhe
Nisha- mujhe ghar Jana hai esko bolo ki ghar leke chale
Priya ne ishare me jey Ko bola aur usne car ghar ki taraf mod di
Pure raste kisi me koe baat nahi hue
Haweli puchte hi Nisha Sabse pehle car se nikali aur dad dad chhilate hue ghar me gus Gaye
Thakur usse etni jaldi vapas dekh kar
Are bahut jaldi vapas aagaye
Nisha- dad mujhe vo bilkul pasand nahi hai
Mujhe vo bilkul pasand nahi hai
Vo bahut badtamij hai
Tab tak jey aur baki sab bhi aagaye
Thakur gusse me- kon
Nisha ne jey ki taraf Ishara Kiya aur Thakur ne Bina kuch soche samjhe teen chaar khich khich kar Chhate rakh diye jey Ko
Puri haweli me chatak chatak chatak ki awaz gunj uthi
Jey jaise pehle khada rahta hai aaj bhi vaise hi khada tha bas uski naak se khoon nikal Raha tha
Thakur- teri himmat kaise hue meri beti se badtamiji karne ki
Bol
Chatttaaaaakkkkk
Chatttaaaaakkkkk
Chatttaaaaakkkkk
Fir se vohi aawaz gunj Gaye
Maafi mang Abhi ke Abhi maafi maang
Jey ne apni naak se khoon saaf Kiya aur Apne ghutno ke Bal bath kar Nisha ke pair pakad liye
Galati hogaye maaf kar dijiye
Aage se Aisa nahi hoga
Nisha ne fatak se apna pair piche kar liyo vo thoda naraj jarur thi thapad tak thik tha par koe usse bada person uske pair chuke maffi mange ye uske liye bhi Jada tha
Usne aapne pair piche kiye aur bas ek halki si aawaz aae it's okay
Thakur ne jey Ko vaha se Jane Ko bola aur Nisha Ko Apne Galle Laga Liya.....
