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Dark Elves ke leader ke marte hi unki force ko Osian City ke experts ne kaafi easily hara diya tha. Wahi Nether Realm se aaye hue experts mein se ek ko Kabir ne yeh news Jade Seal Family ko dene ke liye bhej diya. Isse waha par Jade Seal Family bhi Dark Elves ke headquarter par attack karne ke liye ready thi.

Yeh sab hone ke baad Osian City ko ek bade occasion ke liye ready kiya jaa raha tha. Har jagah par kuch na kuch kaam chal rahe the. Wahi Kabir bhi apne Heavenly Marks Family mein aa gaya tha. Uske aane par sabhi kaafi khush the wahi usse apne family se yeh pata chala ke uski aur Winged Dragon Family ke Patriarch ke daughter ke saath uski marriage fix ho gayi hai. Kabir is baat se kaafi shock tha. Usse kya bole kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha.

Wahi yaha City Lord Mansion mei Maithili ke father aur City Lord, Lord Uday ke saath baithe hue the.

LU-Mein ne suna hai ke aapne bhi apne daughter ki marriage Heavenly Marks Family ke Kabir se fix ki hui hai.

Lord Uday ki is baat par Maithili ke father ne Kabir se milne ke baad Maithili mein jo changes aaye the unhe batana start kiya aur yeh bhi bata diya ke uski daughter Kabir ko kaafi like karti hai. Isliye unhone hi samne se jaake Heavenly Marks Family ke Patriarch se Kabir aur Maithili ke marriage fix ki hui thi.

Is par Lord Uday ke face par ek smile aayi aur unhone Maithili ke father se kaha.

LU-Kabir ne is Osian City mein born ho kar usse new heights par pohocha diya hai. Wahi uske aane se jaise sabhi mein ek unity aa gayi hai. Mein yeh sab kabhi nahi socha tha ke uske Osian City mein aane se yeh bhi kabhi changes aayenge. Wahi aapke daughter ka dil aur meri grand-daughter ka dil dono jo apne bachpan se best friends thi unka dil bhi ek hi person par aa gaya. Isse mein coincident nahi keh sakta hu. Yeh shayad pehle se hi hona tha. Par aaj mein bih yeh keh dena chahta hu ke meri Grand-Daughter Rati aur Kabir iski marriage bhi ussi din hogi jis din aapne apni daughter Maithili aur Kabir ki marriage fix ki hui hai. In dono ko Kabir jaisa saathi aur kahi nahi mil sakta hai.

Lord Uday ki baat par waha par jitney bhi Winged Dragon Family aur Snow Wind Family ke elder the vo sabhi kaafi khush ho gaye. Wahi Lord Uday ne Han aur Hina ki marriage bhi jaldi hi fix kar di thi. Isse yeh dono bhi kaafi khush the.

Jaldi hi yeh news bhi Kabir ko mil gayi. Kabir ko toh jaise shock par shock mil rahe the. Jaha pehle usse apne family se yeh pata chala ke uski aur Maithili ki marriage fix ho gayi hai tabhi usse ek aur shock mila yeh sunkar ke uski aur Rati ki marriage bhi ussi din fix ho gayi hai.

Kabir ko kya kare kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha. Usse toh jaise yeh ek dream hi lag raha tha. Apne past life mei usne apne har ek saathi ko kho diya tha par jab se vo return aaya hai tab se usse vo har ek cheez mil rahi thi jo usse apne past life mein nahi mil paayi.

Yaha Maithili aur Rati ek saath Rati ke courtyard mein ek bench par baith kar kuch soch rahe the. Unhe bhi yeh pata tha ke unki marriage ek hi din par hai par itna sudden yeh sab ho jaayega aur unke families ke elder bhi is sab baat ke liye ek hi saath maan jayenge yeh in dono ne kabhi nahi socha tha.

Par dil toh dono ke hi khush the. Kabir ke sabhi friends usse uske ghar milne aaye the. Sabhi kaafi khush dikh rahe the. Wahi Ravi uske kisi na kisi baat se tease kar raha tha. Par Kabir ke face par bhi ek smile thi.

Jaldi hi Heavenly Marks Family ne ek bade se parade ke saath Snow Wind Family aur Winged Dragon Family ko unki taraf se kaafi saare gifts bhej diye. Sabhi Osian City ke log us parade ko dekh rahe the. Unhe bhi yeh pata chal gaya tha ke Kabir ke saath Snow Wind Family ki Rati jo City Lord ki daughter thi aur Winged Dragon Family ki Maithili jo Winged Dragon Family ke Patriarch ki daughter thi. in dono ka uske saath marriage fix ho gaya hai.

Sabhi kaafi shock ho gaye the kyo ki ek hi waqt par Osian City ke do badi families ne apne daughters ki marriage Kabir se fix kar di thi.

Kuch hi din mein City Lord Manion ke courtyard mein sabhi Osian City ke logo ke samne Kabir, Rati aur Maithili ki engagement ho gayi. Jaha Kabir kaafi khush dikh raha tha wahi Rati aur Maithili itne logo ke samne unhe kaafi sharam si aane lag gayi thi.

Kuch aur din aise hi bit gaye the. Kabir ne Main Affairs Elder ko Heavenly Fate Palteau se laaye hue sabhi Purple Smoke Rocks de diye aur uske saath unhe kaise use karna hai Sabhi protective array’s mein yeh bhi note kar ke de diya tha.

Wahi Nether Realm mein Kabir ke Dark Elves ke leader ko maarne ki news jaise hi Jade Seal Family ko mili waise hi unhone Dark Elves ke headquarter par apne Demigod experts ke saath attack kar diya.

Aise sudden hue attack ke wajah se Dark Elves ke experts unke saath apne full strength ke saath fight nahi kar paaye aur Dark Elves ko Jade Seal Family ne Nether Realm se puri tarah destroy kar diya. Yeh Blackrock City ke liye kaafi badi baat thi.

Jade Seal Family ke strength ko dekh kar Blood Demon Family bhi kaafi shock ho gayi thi. Pehle toh unhe is baat par puri tarah se yakin hi nahi ho raha tha ke Jade Seal Family ne Dark Elves ke clan ko destroy kar diya hai. Par ab jab une bich ke matters kaafi had tak khatam ho gaye the toh Blood Demon Clan ke Patriarch yeh soch rahe the ke vo Jade Seal Family ke saath alliance bana le. Isse unhe bhi kaafi easy ho jaayega aur unke bich ki jo bhi enmity thi vo bhi puri tarah se khatam ho jaayegi.

Jaldi hi yeh baat Jade Seal Family ke Patriarch tak pohoch gayi aur unhone bhi is baremein socha aur paya ke yeh achhi hi baat thi. Isse dono clans ke experts ki aapas mein hone wali fights kam ho sakti thi aur agar kabhi bhi future mein Blackrock City par koi attack karta hai toh vo milkar unse fight kar sakte the.

Kuch hi din baad Blood Demon Clan ke Patriarch aur Jade Seal Family ke Patriarch ne Blood Scroll par apne blood se ek blood pact banaya aur issi ke saath Blackrock City ki sabse powerful alliance ban gayi.

Yeh news bhi jaldi hi Kabir tak pohoch gayi aur jab usse yeh baat pata chali tab usse bhi kaafi achha laga. Ab kuch hi din bache the Kabir aur uske friends ko Nether Realm jana tha entrance exam ke liye. Kabir ab issi baat par soch raha tha ke Draconic Ruins Realm mein kaafi sects aur powerful places hai. Unhe waha par kaafi options ko choose karne ka chance milne wala tha.

Draconic Ruins Ream Kulun Field ka ek small part tha. Waha par kaafi bade bade suzerain the aur waha ke sabse bade school mein se ek tha Martial Market School. Martial Market School ek badi organization ka part thi. Usse Martial Market handle karti thi. Martial Market ko Sage Emperor ne sabhi realms mein bithaya tha taki sabhi economical work ek hi jagah se ho sake aur uska yeh karna sabhi realms ke liye sahi sabit hua. Par jaldi hi ek badi problem bhi aayi Martial Market ke against aur vo thi Black Market. Yeh sabse badi Evil organization thi aur Dark Guild isi ka ek small part thi jisse Black Market is tiny world ko control karna chahti thi.

Kabir ko apne past life ke wajah se is sabke baremein pata tha aur tabhi usne apne haat ko wave kiya. Uske aisa karte hi uske haat mein ek wooden token aaya jispar likha tha Hades Department. Yeh Kulun Field ki sabse badi Assassins ki Organization thi. Inke paas Yellow Realm se lekar Heaven Realm aur uske bhi uppar ke master assassins the. Par Kabir abhi yahi soch raha tha ke Dark Elves ke leader ke paas Hades Department ka token aaya kaha se hoga. Yeh toh clear tha ke Hades Department us Supreme Expert ke banaye hue seal ko break kar ke Nether Realm mein nahi aa sakti thi toh phir ek hi option bachta hai aur vo yeh ke Dark Elves ka leader hi unke paas gaya hoga.

Main World se waha ke log Nether Realm aur Tiny World mein nahi aa sakte the par yaha ke log Main World mein jaa bhi sakte the aur aa bhi sakte the.

Kabir ne ek baar us token ko dekha aur usmein apni genuine qi inject ki. Isse vo is token ke real master ko dekhne ki koshish kar raha tha. Kabir aisa is liye kar raha tha ke agar yeh token Dark Elves ke leader ka hota toh uske marte hi is token ki bhi powder ban jaati par aisa hua nahi iska ek hi meaning tha aur vo yeh ke yeh token kisi aur ne Dark Elves ke leader ko diya hua hai.

Kabir abhi apni genuine qi us wooden token mein inject kar hi raha tha ke tabhi usmein se ek kaafi small sting nikal kar Kabir ke haat ko lagi aur uske blood ko lekar us token ke andar chali gayi.

Us sting ko feel karte hi Kabir ko ek bada shock laga kyo ki ab usse apne aankho ke samne naamo ki ek list dikhayi de rahi thi aur usmein uska bhi naam last mein aa gaya tha.

Jaise hi Kabir ko uska meaning samjah mein aaya tab usse aur bhi bada shock laga. Kyo ki yeh naamo ki list unki thi jnhe Hades Department future mein marne wala tha aur unke liye apne experts bhejne wala tha.

Kabir ne apne sir ko ek gehri saath saas ke saath naa mei hila diya. Ab jab uska naam bhi lag gaya hai matlab ab uske piche bhi Hades Department ka lagna jadli hi start hone wala tha. Lekin Kabir Kulun Field mein ek jagah janta tha jaha par Hades Department ke experts chah kar bhi nahi aa sakte the aur vo jagah thi Martial Market School. Waise Martial Market School ke Kulun Field mein har gahar branches thi aur vo students bhi ussi tarah se choose kar ke har branches mein bhejte the. Ab agar Kabir ko apni aur uske friends ki safety chahiye hogi toh Martial Market School se achhi aur safe jagah koi aur nahi ho sakti thi.

Kuch din aise hi sab bit gaye the. Aaj Kabir ko Patriarch ne family hall mein bulaya tha. Jab Kabir waha par gaya tab usse waha Patriarch ke saath uske father bhi dikhe aur aaj un dono ke body mein se nikalne wala aura kuch different tha. Aaj dono hi kaafi different lag rahe the. Unke face par expressions bhi kaafi serious se lag rahe the. Kabir chalte hue un dono ke samne aata hai.

Kabir-Kya baat hai Patriarch aapne mujhe yaha par kyo bulaya hai aur Baba aap bhi yaha par hai. Kya kahi kuch hua hai ?

Kabir ke is sawal par Patriarch ne aage aate hue kaha.

Patriarch-Kabir mein janta hu tum kis tarah ke technique ki practice karte ho aur kuch jab vo Gods ka Manifestation hua tha vo bhi tumhare Yellow Realm ke Ultimate Realm mein pohochne ke wajah se hua tha.

Kabir ko Patriarch ke muu se yeh baat sunkar kaafi bada jhatka laga. Usse samajh mein nahi aa raha tha ke uska yeh secret Patriarch ko kaise pata chala. Tabhi Kabir ne Patriarch ke body mein se nikalne wale genuine qi ko feel kiya aur uske face par jo shock ke expressions the vo aur bhi badh gaye. Kyo ki Heavenly Marks Family ke Patriarch Earth Ream mein the. Iska ek hi meaning tha ke Patriarch bhi Kabir ki hi tarah koi main world ki technique ki practice karte hai. Par yeh kaise ho sakta tha. Uski Heavenly Marks Family toh Tiny World se thi aur unhe un techniques ke baremein pata hona mumkin hi nahi tha. Toh aisa kaise ho sakta tha.

Kabir ke face par aane wale expressions ko dekh kar Patriarch aage aaye aur unhone kaha.

Patriarch-Kabir mein sirf yeh hi nahi janta hu ke tum main world ke techniques ki practice karte ho par mein yeh bhi janta hu ke tum ek baar mar kar phir se return aaye hue ho. Lekin tumhe yeh nahi pata hoga ke tum aaye kaha ho kyo aur yeh sab mujhe kaise pata chala hai.

Kabir abhi bhi Patriarch ko dekhe hi jaa raha tha. Par ab Patriarch ke side mein uske father bhi aa gaye aur unhone Kabir se kaha.

“Kabir jis REALITY mein tum mar gaye the waha vo world tumhare marte hi destroy ho gaya tha par tumhare paar Divine Demon Spirit Book thi aur usko tumhari soul ne absorb kar liya aur usne tumhe is REALITY mein bhej diya jaha par Kabir kuch hi der pehle mar gaya tha aur uski body mein phir tumhari soul aa gayi aur ab tum vo Kabir ban gaye ho. Par jante hi is REALITY ke Kabir ki identity kya hai.”

Kabir ne apne sir ko naa mein hilaya. Usse toh jaise aak shock par shock milte jaa rahe the. Kabir ke shocking expressions ko dekh kar uske father ke face par ek smile aayi aur unhone uske sir par haat rakhte hue kaha.

“Kabir ki is REALITY ki identity yeh hai ke vo SACRED BUDDHIST EMPIER ka SACRED CROWN PRINCE hai.”

Kabir ke liye yeh baat kisi blast se kam nahi thi. SACRED CROWN PRINCE yaani is REALITY ka Kabir BUDDHIST EMPEROR ka descendant tha aur uski family bhi unhi ki descendant hai. Par aisa kaise ho sakta tha. Kabir ko kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha. Vo toh bas apne father aur Patriarch ko dekh raha tha. Jaise unse hi in sawalo ke answers chahta ho.

Kabir ke dil ki baat ko samajah kar Patriarch ne apne haat ko wave kiya aur unke haat mein vo Black Ball aaya jo usne Heavenly Marks Family ke treasury mein dekha tha aur jab usne lena chaha tab Patriarch ne usse nahi diya tha. Patriarch ne us Black Ball ko aage karte hue Kabir ki taraf kiya. Kabir ne bhi usse apne haato mein liya aur phir waise hi sawalo walo nazaro se Patriarch aur apne father ko dekhne lag gaya. Is par uske father ne kaha.

“Kabir us black ball mein apni genuine qi inject karo tumhe sab kuch apne aap pata chal jaayega.”

Kabir ne bhi apne father ki baat ko maante hue apne genuine qi ko us black ball mein inject kiya aur suddenly vo black ball se ek light nikalne lag gayi aur vo hawa mein udne lag gaya.

Kabir abhi usse dekh hi raha tha ke…

Boom!

Is aawaz ke saath vo black ball Kabir ke sir par jo uska Sacred Mark tha usemin chala gaya aur uske waha jaate hi usse kuch visions dikhne lag gaye. Kabir aise hi kuch der ke liye is state mein raha aur end mein uski aankho mein se aansu nikalne lag gaye. Jab usse hosh aaya tab vo waise hi aansu wali aankho se apne Father aur Patriarch ko dekhne lag gaya.

Kabir ne father ne uske sir par haat rakha aur usse kaha.

“Kabir tum waha jaa rahe ho jaha se ham apni jaan bacha kar us Sage Emperor se aaye the. TRUE SUN GOD CLAN ka blood tumhare body mein flow ho raha hai par ek baat yaad rakhna chahe jo ho jaaye jab tak zaroori na ho tab tak apni identity kisi ko bhi mat batana ke tum koun ho. Iske aage tum kaafi samajhdar ho, mature ho, tum bhi jaan sakte ho ko tumhari identity waha par open hone se kya kya ho sakta hai aur haa jo bhi tumne us ball mein dekha hai vo hamare family aur clan ke treasuries hai unhe zaroor hasil karna. Isse tumhe Sage Emperor ke saath fight karne mein help milengi.”

Kabir ne kuch nahi kaha sirf apne father ko dekhte hue apne sir ko haa mein hilaya. Aaj usse ek new identity mili thi. SACRED CROWN PRINCE ki par iske saath aane wali musibate bhi kaafi badi thi. Uski ek galti uske family aur friends ko kaafi bade danger situation mein daal sakti hai. Ab Kabir ko aur bhi soch samajh kar kaam karna hoga.

Yeh din bhi aise hi bit gaya aur jab agle din ki morning hui Kabir sabhi ke saath Osian City se nikal gaya. Uske is group mein Maithili, Rati, Varun, Ravi, Riya, Han, Hina, Jeet, Duan yeh sab the aur Sister Yuyan bhi thi.


Us deep forest se travel karte hue jaldi hi Kabir aur uske sabhi friends Nether Realm pohoch gaye. Sabhi chalte hue Blackrock City aa gaye aur waha unhe Luo mil gaya. Kabir ne sabhi ko Luo se introduce karaya aur Luo ne bhi un sabhi ko apne Jade Seal Family house par le gaya. Waha par unhe 2 din ka stay karna tha. Uske baad vo us jagah ke liye nikalne wale the jaha se vo Draconic Ruins Realm mein jaa sakte the. Yeh ek teleportation array se ho sakta tha jo Draconic Ruin Realm ko Nether Realm se connect karta tha. Kabir ne sabhi ko rest karne ke liye keh diya.
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UPDATE 108

Dark Elves ke leader ke marte hi unki force ko Osian City ke experts ne kaafi easily hara diya tha. Wahi Nether Realm se aaye hue experts mein se ek ko Kabir ne yeh news Jade Seal Family ko dene ke liye bhej diya. Isse waha par Jade Seal Family bhi Dark Elves ke headquarter par attack karne ke liye ready thi.

Yeh sab hone ke baad Osian City ko ek bade occasion ke liye ready kiya jaa raha tha. Har jagah par kuch na kuch kaam chal rahe the. Wahi Kabir bhi apne Heavenly Marks Family mein aa gaya tha. Uske aane par sabhi kaafi khush the wahi usse apne family se yeh pata chala ke uski aur Winged Dragon Family ke Patriarch ke daughter ke saath uski marriage fix ho gayi hai. Kabir is baat se kaafi shock tha. Usse kya bole kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha.

Wahi yaha City Lord Mansion mei Maithili ke father aur City Lord, Lord Uday ke saath baithe hue the.

LU-Mein ne suna hai ke aapne bhi apne daughter ki marriage Heavenly Marks Family ke Kabir se fix ki hui hai.

Lord Uday ki is baat par Maithili ke father ne Kabir se milne ke baad Maithili mein jo changes aaye the unhe batana start kiya aur yeh bhi bata diya ke uski daughter Kabir ko kaafi like karti hai. Isliye unhone hi samne se jaake Heavenly Marks Family ke Patriarch se Kabir aur Maithili ke marriage fix ki hui thi.

Is par Lord Uday ke face par ek smile aayi aur unhone Maithili ke father se kaha.

LU-Kabir ne is Osian City mein born ho kar usse new heights par pohocha diya hai. Wahi uske aane se jaise sabhi mein ek unity aa gayi hai. Mein yeh sab kabhi nahi socha tha ke uske Osian City mein aane se yeh bhi kabhi changes aayenge. Wahi aapke daughter ka dil aur meri grand-daughter ka dil dono jo apne bachpan se best friends thi unka dil bhi ek hi person par aa gaya. Isse mein coincident nahi keh sakta hu. Yeh shayad pehle se hi hona tha. Par aaj mein bih yeh keh dena chahta hu ke meri Grand-Daughter Rati aur Kabir iski marriage bhi ussi din hogi jis din aapne apni daughter Maithili aur Kabir ki marriage fix ki hui hai. In dono ko Kabir jaisa saathi aur kahi nahi mil sakta hai.

Lord Uday ki baat par waha par jitney bhi Winged Dragon Family aur Snow Wind Family ke elder the vo sabhi kaafi khush ho gaye. Wahi Lord Uday ne Han aur Hina ki marriage bhi jaldi hi fix kar di thi. Isse yeh dono bhi kaafi khush the.

Jaldi hi yeh news bhi Kabir ko mil gayi. Kabir ko toh jaise shock par shock mil rahe the. Jaha pehle usse apne family se yeh pata chala ke uski aur Maithili ki marriage fix ho gayi hai tabhi usse ek aur shock mila yeh sunkar ke uski aur Rati ki marriage bhi ussi din fix ho gayi hai.

Kabir ko kya kare kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha. Usse toh jaise yeh ek dream hi lag raha tha. Apne past life mei usne apne har ek saathi ko kho diya tha par jab se vo return aaya hai tab se usse vo har ek cheez mil rahi thi jo usse apne past life mein nahi mil paayi.

Yaha Maithili aur Rati ek saath Rati ke courtyard mein ek bench par baith kar kuch soch rahe the. Unhe bhi yeh pata tha ke unki marriage ek hi din par hai par itna sudden yeh sab ho jaayega aur unke families ke elder bhi is sab baat ke liye ek hi saath maan jayenge yeh in dono ne kabhi nahi socha tha.

Par dil toh dono ke hi khush the. Kabir ke sabhi friends usse uske ghar milne aaye the. Sabhi kaafi khush dikh rahe the. Wahi Ravi uske kisi na kisi baat se tease kar raha tha. Par Kabir ke face par bhi ek smile thi.

Jaldi hi Heavenly Marks Family ne ek bade se parade ke saath Snow Wind Family aur Winged Dragon Family ko unki taraf se kaafi saare gifts bhej diye. Sabhi Osian City ke log us parade ko dekh rahe the. Unhe bhi yeh pata chal gaya tha ke Kabir ke saath Snow Wind Family ki Rati jo City Lord ki daughter thi aur Winged Dragon Family ki Maithili jo Winged Dragon Family ke Patriarch ki daughter thi. in dono ka uske saath marriage fix ho gaya hai.

Sabhi kaafi shock ho gaye the kyo ki ek hi waqt par Osian City ke do badi families ne apne daughters ki marriage Kabir se fix kar di thi.

Kuch hi din mein City Lord Manion ke courtyard mein sabhi Osian City ke logo ke samne Kabir, Rati aur Maithili ki engagement ho gayi. Jaha Kabir kaafi khush dikh raha tha wahi Rati aur Maithili itne logo ke samne unhe kaafi sharam si aane lag gayi thi.

Kuch aur din aise hi bit gaye the. Kabir ne Main Affairs Elder ko Heavenly Fate Palteau se laaye hue sabhi Purple Smoke Rocks de diye aur uske saath unhe kaise use karna hai Sabhi protective array’s mein yeh bhi note kar ke de diya tha.

Wahi Nether Realm mein Kabir ke Dark Elves ke leader ko maarne ki news jaise hi Jade Seal Family ko mili waise hi unhone Dark Elves ke headquarter par apne Demigod experts ke saath attack kar diya.

Aise sudden hue attack ke wajah se Dark Elves ke experts unke saath apne full strength ke saath fight nahi kar paaye aur Dark Elves ko Jade Seal Family ne Nether Realm se puri tarah destroy kar diya. Yeh Blackrock City ke liye kaafi badi baat thi.

Jade Seal Family ke strength ko dekh kar Blood Demon Family bhi kaafi shock ho gayi thi. Pehle toh unhe is baat par puri tarah se yakin hi nahi ho raha tha ke Jade Seal Family ne Dark Elves ke clan ko destroy kar diya hai. Par ab jab une bich ke matters kaafi had tak khatam ho gaye the toh Blood Demon Clan ke Patriarch yeh soch rahe the ke vo Jade Seal Family ke saath alliance bana le. Isse unhe bhi kaafi easy ho jaayega aur unke bich ki jo bhi enmity thi vo bhi puri tarah se khatam ho jaayegi.

Jaldi hi yeh baat Jade Seal Family ke Patriarch tak pohoch gayi aur unhone bhi is baremein socha aur paya ke yeh achhi hi baat thi. Isse dono clans ke experts ki aapas mein hone wali fights kam ho sakti thi aur agar kabhi bhi future mein Blackrock City par koi attack karta hai toh vo milkar unse fight kar sakte the.

Kuch hi din baad Blood Demon Clan ke Patriarch aur Jade Seal Family ke Patriarch ne Blood Scroll par apne blood se ek blood pact banaya aur issi ke saath Blackrock City ki sabse powerful alliance ban gayi.

Yeh news bhi jaldi hi Kabir tak pohoch gayi aur jab usse yeh baat pata chali tab usse bhi kaafi achha laga. Ab kuch hi din bache the Kabir aur uske friends ko Nether Realm jana tha entrance exam ke liye. Kabir ab issi baat par soch raha tha ke Draconic Ruins Realm mein kaafi sects aur powerful places hai. Unhe waha par kaafi options ko choose karne ka chance milne wala tha.

Draconic Ruins Ream Kulun Field ka ek small part tha. Waha par kaafi bade bade suzerain the aur waha ke sabse bade school mein se ek tha Martial Market School. Martial Market School ek badi organization ka part thi. Usse Martial Market handle karti thi. Martial Market ko Sage Emperor ne sabhi realms mein bithaya tha taki sabhi economical work ek hi jagah se ho sake aur uska yeh karna sabhi realms ke liye sahi sabit hua. Par jaldi hi ek badi problem bhi aayi Martial Market ke against aur vo thi Black Market. Yeh sabse badi Evil organization thi aur Dark Guild isi ka ek small part thi jisse Black Market is tiny world ko control karna chahti thi.

Kabir ko apne past life ke wajah se is sabke baremein pata tha aur tabhi usne apne haat ko wave kiya. Uske aisa karte hi uske haat mein ek wooden token aaya jispar likha tha Hades Department. Yeh Kulun Field ki sabse badi Assassins ki Organization thi. Inke paas Yellow Realm se lekar Heaven Realm aur uske bhi uppar ke master assassins the. Par Kabir abhi yahi soch raha tha ke Dark Elves ke leader ke paas Hades Department ka token aaya kaha se hoga. Yeh toh clear tha ke Hades Department us Supreme Expert ke banaye hue seal ko break kar ke Nether Realm mein nahi aa sakti thi toh phir ek hi option bachta hai aur vo yeh ke Dark Elves ka leader hi unke paas gaya hoga.

Main World se waha ke log Nether Realm aur Tiny World mein nahi aa sakte the par yaha ke log Main World mein jaa bhi sakte the aur aa bhi sakte the.

Kabir ne ek baar us token ko dekha aur usmein apni genuine qi inject ki. Isse vo is token ke real master ko dekhne ki koshish kar raha tha. Kabir aisa is liye kar raha tha ke agar yeh token Dark Elves ke leader ka hota toh uske marte hi is token ki bhi powder ban jaati par aisa hua nahi iska ek hi meaning tha aur vo yeh ke yeh token kisi aur ne Dark Elves ke leader ko diya hua hai.

Kabir abhi apni genuine qi us wooden token mein inject kar hi raha tha ke tabhi usmein se ek kaafi small sting nikal kar Kabir ke haat ko lagi aur uske blood ko lekar us token ke andar chali gayi.

Us sting ko feel karte hi Kabir ko ek bada shock laga kyo ki ab usse apne aankho ke samne naamo ki ek list dikhayi de rahi thi aur usmein uska bhi naam last mein aa gaya tha.

Jaise hi Kabir ko uska meaning samjah mein aaya tab usse aur bhi bada shock laga. Kyo ki yeh naamo ki list unki thi jnhe Hades Department future mein marne wala tha aur unke liye apne experts bhejne wala tha.

Kabir ne apne sir ko ek gehri saath saas ke saath naa mei hila diya. Ab jab uska naam bhi lag gaya hai matlab ab uske piche bhi Hades Department ka lagna jadli hi start hone wala tha. Lekin Kabir Kulun Field mein ek jagah janta tha jaha par Hades Department ke experts chah kar bhi nahi aa sakte the aur vo jagah thi Martial Market School. Waise Martial Market School ke Kulun Field mein har gahar branches thi aur vo students bhi ussi tarah se choose kar ke har branches mein bhejte the. Ab agar Kabir ko apni aur uske friends ki safety chahiye hogi toh Martial Market School se achhi aur safe jagah koi aur nahi ho sakti thi.

Kuch din aise hi sab bit gaye the. Aaj Kabir ko Patriarch ne family hall mein bulaya tha. Jab Kabir waha par gaya tab usse waha Patriarch ke saath uske father bhi dikhe aur aaj un dono ke body mein se nikalne wala aura kuch different tha. Aaj dono hi kaafi different lag rahe the. Unke face par expressions bhi kaafi serious se lag rahe the. Kabir chalte hue un dono ke samne aata hai.

Kabir-Kya baat hai Patriarch aapne mujhe yaha par kyo bulaya hai aur Baba aap bhi yaha par hai. Kya kahi kuch hua hai ?

Kabir ke is sawal par Patriarch ne aage aate hue kaha.

Patriarch-Kabir mein janta hu tum kis tarah ke technique ki practice karte ho aur kuch jab vo Gods ka Manifestation hua tha vo bhi tumhare Yellow Realm ke Ultimate Realm mein pohochne ke wajah se hua tha.

Kabir ko Patriarch ke muu se yeh baat sunkar kaafi bada jhatka laga. Usse samajh mein nahi aa raha tha ke uska yeh secret Patriarch ko kaise pata chala. Tabhi Kabir ne Patriarch ke body mein se nikalne wale genuine qi ko feel kiya aur uske face par jo shock ke expressions the vo aur bhi badh gaye. Kyo ki Heavenly Marks Family ke Patriarch Earth Ream mein the. Iska ek hi meaning tha ke Patriarch bhi Kabir ki hi tarah koi main world ki technique ki practice karte hai. Par yeh kaise ho sakta tha. Uski Heavenly Marks Family toh Tiny World se thi aur unhe un techniques ke baremein pata hona mumkin hi nahi tha. Toh aisa kaise ho sakta tha.

Kabir ke face par aane wale expressions ko dekh kar Patriarch aage aaye aur unhone kaha.

Patriarch-Kabir mein sirf yeh hi nahi janta hu ke tum main world ke techniques ki practice karte ho par mein yeh bhi janta hu ke tum ek baar mar kar phir se return aaye hue ho. Lekin tumhe yeh nahi pata hoga ke tum aaye kaha ho kyo aur yeh sab mujhe kaise pata chala hai.

Kabir abhi bhi Patriarch ko dekhe hi jaa raha tha. Par ab Patriarch ke side mein uske father bhi aa gaye aur unhone Kabir se kaha.

“Kabir jis REALITY mein tum mar gaye the waha vo world tumhare marte hi destroy ho gaya tha par tumhare paar Divine Demon Spirit Book thi aur usko tumhari soul ne absorb kar liya aur usne tumhe is REALITY mein bhej diya jaha par Kabir kuch hi der pehle mar gaya tha aur uski body mein phir tumhari soul aa gayi aur ab tum vo Kabir ban gaye ho. Par jante hi is REALITY ke Kabir ki identity kya hai.”

Kabir ne apne sir ko naa mein hilaya. Usse toh jaise aak shock par shock milte jaa rahe the. Kabir ke shocking expressions ko dekh kar uske father ke face par ek smile aayi aur unhone uske sir par haat rakhte hue kaha.

“Kabir ki is REALITY ki identity yeh hai ke vo SACRED BUDDHIST EMPIER ka SACRED CROWN PRINCE hai.”

Kabir ke liye yeh baat kisi blast se kam nahi thi. SACRED CROWN PRINCE yaani is REALITY ka Kabir BUDDHIST EMPEROR ka descendant tha aur uski family bhi unhi ki descendant hai. Par aisa kaise ho sakta tha. Kabir ko kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha. Vo toh bas apne father aur Patriarch ko dekh raha tha. Jaise unse hi in sawalo ke answers chahta ho.

Kabir ke dil ki baat ko samajah kar Patriarch ne apne haat ko wave kiya aur unke haat mein vo Black Ball aaya jo usne Heavenly Marks Family ke treasury mein dekha tha aur jab usne lena chaha tab Patriarch ne usse nahi diya tha. Patriarch ne us Black Ball ko aage karte hue Kabir ki taraf kiya. Kabir ne bhi usse apne haato mein liya aur phir waise hi sawalo walo nazaro se Patriarch aur apne father ko dekhne lag gaya. Is par uske father ne kaha.

“Kabir us black ball mein apni genuine qi inject karo tumhe sab kuch apne aap pata chal jaayega.”

Kabir ne bhi apne father ki baat ko maante hue apne genuine qi ko us black ball mein inject kiya aur suddenly vo black ball se ek light nikalne lag gayi aur vo hawa mein udne lag gaya.

Kabir abhi usse dekh hi raha tha ke…

Boom!

Is aawaz ke saath vo black ball Kabir ke sir par jo uska Sacred Mark tha usemin chala gaya aur uske waha jaate hi usse kuch visions dikhne lag gaye. Kabir aise hi kuch der ke liye is state mein raha aur end mein uski aankho mein se aansu nikalne lag gaye. Jab usse hosh aaya tab vo waise hi aansu wali aankho se apne Father aur Patriarch ko dekhne lag gaya.

Kabir ne father ne uske sir par haat rakha aur usse kaha.

“Kabir tum waha jaa rahe ho jaha se ham apni jaan bacha kar us Sage Emperor se aaye the. TRUE SUN GOD CLAN ka blood tumhare body mein flow ho raha hai par ek baat yaad rakhna chahe jo ho jaaye jab tak zaroori na ho tab tak apni identity kisi ko bhi mat batana ke tum koun ho. Iske aage tum kaafi samajhdar ho, mature ho, tum bhi jaan sakte ho ko tumhari identity waha par open hone se kya kya ho sakta hai aur haa jo bhi tumne us ball mein dekha hai vo hamare family aur clan ke treasuries hai unhe zaroor hasil karna. Isse tumhe Sage Emperor ke saath fight karne mein help milengi.”

Kabir ne kuch nahi kaha sirf apne father ko dekhte hue apne sir ko haa mein hilaya. Aaj usse ek new identity mili thi. SACRED CROWN PRINCE ki par iske saath aane wali musibate bhi kaafi badi thi. Uski ek galti uske family aur friends ko kaafi bade danger situation mein daal sakti hai. Ab Kabir ko aur bhi soch samajh kar kaam karna hoga.

Yeh din bhi aise hi bit gaya aur jab agle din ki morning hui Kabir sabhi ke saath Osian City se nikal gaya. Uske is group mein Maithili, Rati, Varun, Ravi, Riya, Han, Hina, Jeet, Duan yeh sab the aur Sister Yuyan bhi thi.


Us deep forest se travel karte hue jaldi hi Kabir aur uske sabhi friends Nether Realm pohoch gaye. Sabhi chalte hue Blackrock City aa gaye aur waha unhe Luo mil gaya. Kabir ne sabhi ko Luo se introduce karaya aur Luo ne bhi un sabhi ko apne Jade Seal Family house par le gaya. Waha par unhe 2 din ka stay karna tha. Uske baad vo us jagah ke liye nikalne wale the jaha se vo Draconic Ruins Realm mein jaa sakte the. Yeh ek teleportation array se ho sakta tha jo Draconic Ruin Realm ko Nether Realm se connect karta tha. Kabir ne sabhi ko rest karne ke liye keh diya.
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UPDATE 108

Dark Elves ke leader ke marte hi unki force ko Osian City ke experts ne kaafi easily hara diya tha. Wahi Nether Realm se aaye hue experts mein se ek ko Kabir ne yeh news Jade Seal Family ko dene ke liye bhej diya. Isse waha par Jade Seal Family bhi Dark Elves ke headquarter par attack karne ke liye ready thi.

Yeh sab hone ke baad Osian City ko ek bade occasion ke liye ready kiya jaa raha tha. Har jagah par kuch na kuch kaam chal rahe the. Wahi Kabir bhi apne Heavenly Marks Family mein aa gaya tha. Uske aane par sabhi kaafi khush the wahi usse apne family se yeh pata chala ke uski aur Winged Dragon Family ke Patriarch ke daughter ke saath uski marriage fix ho gayi hai. Kabir is baat se kaafi shock tha. Usse kya bole kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha.

Wahi yaha City Lord Mansion mei Maithili ke father aur City Lord, Lord Uday ke saath baithe hue the.

LU-Mein ne suna hai ke aapne bhi apne daughter ki marriage Heavenly Marks Family ke Kabir se fix ki hui hai.

Lord Uday ki is baat par Maithili ke father ne Kabir se milne ke baad Maithili mein jo changes aaye the unhe batana start kiya aur yeh bhi bata diya ke uski daughter Kabir ko kaafi like karti hai. Isliye unhone hi samne se jaake Heavenly Marks Family ke Patriarch se Kabir aur Maithili ke marriage fix ki hui thi.

Is par Lord Uday ke face par ek smile aayi aur unhone Maithili ke father se kaha.

LU-Kabir ne is Osian City mein born ho kar usse new heights par pohocha diya hai. Wahi uske aane se jaise sabhi mein ek unity aa gayi hai. Mein yeh sab kabhi nahi socha tha ke uske Osian City mein aane se yeh bhi kabhi changes aayenge. Wahi aapke daughter ka dil aur meri grand-daughter ka dil dono jo apne bachpan se best friends thi unka dil bhi ek hi person par aa gaya. Isse mein coincident nahi keh sakta hu. Yeh shayad pehle se hi hona tha. Par aaj mein bih yeh keh dena chahta hu ke meri Grand-Daughter Rati aur Kabir iski marriage bhi ussi din hogi jis din aapne apni daughter Maithili aur Kabir ki marriage fix ki hui hai. In dono ko Kabir jaisa saathi aur kahi nahi mil sakta hai.

Lord Uday ki baat par waha par jitney bhi Winged Dragon Family aur Snow Wind Family ke elder the vo sabhi kaafi khush ho gaye. Wahi Lord Uday ne Han aur Hina ki marriage bhi jaldi hi fix kar di thi. Isse yeh dono bhi kaafi khush the.

Jaldi hi yeh news bhi Kabir ko mil gayi. Kabir ko toh jaise shock par shock mil rahe the. Jaha pehle usse apne family se yeh pata chala ke uski aur Maithili ki marriage fix ho gayi hai tabhi usse ek aur shock mila yeh sunkar ke uski aur Rati ki marriage bhi ussi din fix ho gayi hai.

Kabir ko kya kare kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha. Usse toh jaise yeh ek dream hi lag raha tha. Apne past life mei usne apne har ek saathi ko kho diya tha par jab se vo return aaya hai tab se usse vo har ek cheez mil rahi thi jo usse apne past life mein nahi mil paayi.

Yaha Maithili aur Rati ek saath Rati ke courtyard mein ek bench par baith kar kuch soch rahe the. Unhe bhi yeh pata tha ke unki marriage ek hi din par hai par itna sudden yeh sab ho jaayega aur unke families ke elder bhi is sab baat ke liye ek hi saath maan jayenge yeh in dono ne kabhi nahi socha tha.

Par dil toh dono ke hi khush the. Kabir ke sabhi friends usse uske ghar milne aaye the. Sabhi kaafi khush dikh rahe the. Wahi Ravi uske kisi na kisi baat se tease kar raha tha. Par Kabir ke face par bhi ek smile thi.

Jaldi hi Heavenly Marks Family ne ek bade se parade ke saath Snow Wind Family aur Winged Dragon Family ko unki taraf se kaafi saare gifts bhej diye. Sabhi Osian City ke log us parade ko dekh rahe the. Unhe bhi yeh pata chal gaya tha ke Kabir ke saath Snow Wind Family ki Rati jo City Lord ki daughter thi aur Winged Dragon Family ki Maithili jo Winged Dragon Family ke Patriarch ki daughter thi. in dono ka uske saath marriage fix ho gaya hai.

Sabhi kaafi shock ho gaye the kyo ki ek hi waqt par Osian City ke do badi families ne apne daughters ki marriage Kabir se fix kar di thi.

Kuch hi din mein City Lord Manion ke courtyard mein sabhi Osian City ke logo ke samne Kabir, Rati aur Maithili ki engagement ho gayi. Jaha Kabir kaafi khush dikh raha tha wahi Rati aur Maithili itne logo ke samne unhe kaafi sharam si aane lag gayi thi.

Kuch aur din aise hi bit gaye the. Kabir ne Main Affairs Elder ko Heavenly Fate Palteau se laaye hue sabhi Purple Smoke Rocks de diye aur uske saath unhe kaise use karna hai Sabhi protective array’s mein yeh bhi note kar ke de diya tha.

Wahi Nether Realm mein Kabir ke Dark Elves ke leader ko maarne ki news jaise hi Jade Seal Family ko mili waise hi unhone Dark Elves ke headquarter par apne Demigod experts ke saath attack kar diya.

Aise sudden hue attack ke wajah se Dark Elves ke experts unke saath apne full strength ke saath fight nahi kar paaye aur Dark Elves ko Jade Seal Family ne Nether Realm se puri tarah destroy kar diya. Yeh Blackrock City ke liye kaafi badi baat thi.

Jade Seal Family ke strength ko dekh kar Blood Demon Family bhi kaafi shock ho gayi thi. Pehle toh unhe is baat par puri tarah se yakin hi nahi ho raha tha ke Jade Seal Family ne Dark Elves ke clan ko destroy kar diya hai. Par ab jab une bich ke matters kaafi had tak khatam ho gaye the toh Blood Demon Clan ke Patriarch yeh soch rahe the ke vo Jade Seal Family ke saath alliance bana le. Isse unhe bhi kaafi easy ho jaayega aur unke bich ki jo bhi enmity thi vo bhi puri tarah se khatam ho jaayegi.

Jaldi hi yeh baat Jade Seal Family ke Patriarch tak pohoch gayi aur unhone bhi is baremein socha aur paya ke yeh achhi hi baat thi. Isse dono clans ke experts ki aapas mein hone wali fights kam ho sakti thi aur agar kabhi bhi future mein Blackrock City par koi attack karta hai toh vo milkar unse fight kar sakte the.

Kuch hi din baad Blood Demon Clan ke Patriarch aur Jade Seal Family ke Patriarch ne Blood Scroll par apne blood se ek blood pact banaya aur issi ke saath Blackrock City ki sabse powerful alliance ban gayi.

Yeh news bhi jaldi hi Kabir tak pohoch gayi aur jab usse yeh baat pata chali tab usse bhi kaafi achha laga. Ab kuch hi din bache the Kabir aur uske friends ko Nether Realm jana tha entrance exam ke liye. Kabir ab issi baat par soch raha tha ke Draconic Ruins Realm mein kaafi sects aur powerful places hai. Unhe waha par kaafi options ko choose karne ka chance milne wala tha.

Draconic Ruins Ream Kulun Field ka ek small part tha. Waha par kaafi bade bade suzerain the aur waha ke sabse bade school mein se ek tha Martial Market School. Martial Market School ek badi organization ka part thi. Usse Martial Market handle karti thi. Martial Market ko Sage Emperor ne sabhi realms mein bithaya tha taki sabhi economical work ek hi jagah se ho sake aur uska yeh karna sabhi realms ke liye sahi sabit hua. Par jaldi hi ek badi problem bhi aayi Martial Market ke against aur vo thi Black Market. Yeh sabse badi Evil organization thi aur Dark Guild isi ka ek small part thi jisse Black Market is tiny world ko control karna chahti thi.

Kabir ko apne past life ke wajah se is sabke baremein pata tha aur tabhi usne apne haat ko wave kiya. Uske aisa karte hi uske haat mein ek wooden token aaya jispar likha tha Hades Department. Yeh Kulun Field ki sabse badi Assassins ki Organization thi. Inke paas Yellow Realm se lekar Heaven Realm aur uske bhi uppar ke master assassins the. Par Kabir abhi yahi soch raha tha ke Dark Elves ke leader ke paas Hades Department ka token aaya kaha se hoga. Yeh toh clear tha ke Hades Department us Supreme Expert ke banaye hue seal ko break kar ke Nether Realm mein nahi aa sakti thi toh phir ek hi option bachta hai aur vo yeh ke Dark Elves ka leader hi unke paas gaya hoga.

Main World se waha ke log Nether Realm aur Tiny World mein nahi aa sakte the par yaha ke log Main World mein jaa bhi sakte the aur aa bhi sakte the.

Kabir ne ek baar us token ko dekha aur usmein apni genuine qi inject ki. Isse vo is token ke real master ko dekhne ki koshish kar raha tha. Kabir aisa is liye kar raha tha ke agar yeh token Dark Elves ke leader ka hota toh uske marte hi is token ki bhi powder ban jaati par aisa hua nahi iska ek hi meaning tha aur vo yeh ke yeh token kisi aur ne Dark Elves ke leader ko diya hua hai.

Kabir abhi apni genuine qi us wooden token mein inject kar hi raha tha ke tabhi usmein se ek kaafi small sting nikal kar Kabir ke haat ko lagi aur uske blood ko lekar us token ke andar chali gayi.

Us sting ko feel karte hi Kabir ko ek bada shock laga kyo ki ab usse apne aankho ke samne naamo ki ek list dikhayi de rahi thi aur usmein uska bhi naam last mein aa gaya tha.

Jaise hi Kabir ko uska meaning samjah mein aaya tab usse aur bhi bada shock laga. Kyo ki yeh naamo ki list unki thi jnhe Hades Department future mein marne wala tha aur unke liye apne experts bhejne wala tha.

Kabir ne apne sir ko ek gehri saath saas ke saath naa mei hila diya. Ab jab uska naam bhi lag gaya hai matlab ab uske piche bhi Hades Department ka lagna jadli hi start hone wala tha. Lekin Kabir Kulun Field mein ek jagah janta tha jaha par Hades Department ke experts chah kar bhi nahi aa sakte the aur vo jagah thi Martial Market School. Waise Martial Market School ke Kulun Field mein har gahar branches thi aur vo students bhi ussi tarah se choose kar ke har branches mein bhejte the. Ab agar Kabir ko apni aur uske friends ki safety chahiye hogi toh Martial Market School se achhi aur safe jagah koi aur nahi ho sakti thi.

Kuch din aise hi sab bit gaye the. Aaj Kabir ko Patriarch ne family hall mein bulaya tha. Jab Kabir waha par gaya tab usse waha Patriarch ke saath uske father bhi dikhe aur aaj un dono ke body mein se nikalne wala aura kuch different tha. Aaj dono hi kaafi different lag rahe the. Unke face par expressions bhi kaafi serious se lag rahe the. Kabir chalte hue un dono ke samne aata hai.

Kabir-Kya baat hai Patriarch aapne mujhe yaha par kyo bulaya hai aur Baba aap bhi yaha par hai. Kya kahi kuch hua hai ?

Kabir ke is sawal par Patriarch ne aage aate hue kaha.

Patriarch-Kabir mein janta hu tum kis tarah ke technique ki practice karte ho aur kuch jab vo Gods ka Manifestation hua tha vo bhi tumhare Yellow Realm ke Ultimate Realm mein pohochne ke wajah se hua tha.

Kabir ko Patriarch ke muu se yeh baat sunkar kaafi bada jhatka laga. Usse samajh mein nahi aa raha tha ke uska yeh secret Patriarch ko kaise pata chala. Tabhi Kabir ne Patriarch ke body mein se nikalne wale genuine qi ko feel kiya aur uske face par jo shock ke expressions the vo aur bhi badh gaye. Kyo ki Heavenly Marks Family ke Patriarch Earth Ream mein the. Iska ek hi meaning tha ke Patriarch bhi Kabir ki hi tarah koi main world ki technique ki practice karte hai. Par yeh kaise ho sakta tha. Uski Heavenly Marks Family toh Tiny World se thi aur unhe un techniques ke baremein pata hona mumkin hi nahi tha. Toh aisa kaise ho sakta tha.

Kabir ke face par aane wale expressions ko dekh kar Patriarch aage aaye aur unhone kaha.

Patriarch-Kabir mein sirf yeh hi nahi janta hu ke tum main world ke techniques ki practice karte ho par mein yeh bhi janta hu ke tum ek baar mar kar phir se return aaye hue ho. Lekin tumhe yeh nahi pata hoga ke tum aaye kaha ho kyo aur yeh sab mujhe kaise pata chala hai.

Kabir abhi bhi Patriarch ko dekhe hi jaa raha tha. Par ab Patriarch ke side mein uske father bhi aa gaye aur unhone Kabir se kaha.

“Kabir jis REALITY mein tum mar gaye the waha vo world tumhare marte hi destroy ho gaya tha par tumhare paar Divine Demon Spirit Book thi aur usko tumhari soul ne absorb kar liya aur usne tumhe is REALITY mein bhej diya jaha par Kabir kuch hi der pehle mar gaya tha aur uski body mein phir tumhari soul aa gayi aur ab tum vo Kabir ban gaye ho. Par jante hi is REALITY ke Kabir ki identity kya hai.”

Kabir ne apne sir ko naa mein hilaya. Usse toh jaise aak shock par shock milte jaa rahe the. Kabir ke shocking expressions ko dekh kar uske father ke face par ek smile aayi aur unhone uske sir par haat rakhte hue kaha.

“Kabir ki is REALITY ki identity yeh hai ke vo SACRED BUDDHIST EMPIER ka SACRED CROWN PRINCE hai.”

Kabir ke liye yeh baat kisi blast se kam nahi thi. SACRED CROWN PRINCE yaani is REALITY ka Kabir BUDDHIST EMPEROR ka descendant tha aur uski family bhi unhi ki descendant hai. Par aisa kaise ho sakta tha. Kabir ko kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha. Vo toh bas apne father aur Patriarch ko dekh raha tha. Jaise unse hi in sawalo ke answers chahta ho.

Kabir ke dil ki baat ko samajah kar Patriarch ne apne haat ko wave kiya aur unke haat mein vo Black Ball aaya jo usne Heavenly Marks Family ke treasury mein dekha tha aur jab usne lena chaha tab Patriarch ne usse nahi diya tha. Patriarch ne us Black Ball ko aage karte hue Kabir ki taraf kiya. Kabir ne bhi usse apne haato mein liya aur phir waise hi sawalo walo nazaro se Patriarch aur apne father ko dekhne lag gaya. Is par uske father ne kaha.

“Kabir us black ball mein apni genuine qi inject karo tumhe sab kuch apne aap pata chal jaayega.”

Kabir ne bhi apne father ki baat ko maante hue apne genuine qi ko us black ball mein inject kiya aur suddenly vo black ball se ek light nikalne lag gayi aur vo hawa mein udne lag gaya.

Kabir abhi usse dekh hi raha tha ke…

Boom!

Is aawaz ke saath vo black ball Kabir ke sir par jo uska Sacred Mark tha usemin chala gaya aur uske waha jaate hi usse kuch visions dikhne lag gaye. Kabir aise hi kuch der ke liye is state mein raha aur end mein uski aankho mein se aansu nikalne lag gaye. Jab usse hosh aaya tab vo waise hi aansu wali aankho se apne Father aur Patriarch ko dekhne lag gaya.

Kabir ne father ne uske sir par haat rakha aur usse kaha.

“Kabir tum waha jaa rahe ho jaha se ham apni jaan bacha kar us Sage Emperor se aaye the. TRUE SUN GOD CLAN ka blood tumhare body mein flow ho raha hai par ek baat yaad rakhna chahe jo ho jaaye jab tak zaroori na ho tab tak apni identity kisi ko bhi mat batana ke tum koun ho. Iske aage tum kaafi samajhdar ho, mature ho, tum bhi jaan sakte ho ko tumhari identity waha par open hone se kya kya ho sakta hai aur haa jo bhi tumne us ball mein dekha hai vo hamare family aur clan ke treasuries hai unhe zaroor hasil karna. Isse tumhe Sage Emperor ke saath fight karne mein help milengi.”

Kabir ne kuch nahi kaha sirf apne father ko dekhte hue apne sir ko haa mein hilaya. Aaj usse ek new identity mili thi. SACRED CROWN PRINCE ki par iske saath aane wali musibate bhi kaafi badi thi. Uski ek galti uske family aur friends ko kaafi bade danger situation mein daal sakti hai. Ab Kabir ko aur bhi soch samajh kar kaam karna hoga.

Yeh din bhi aise hi bit gaya aur jab agle din ki morning hui Kabir sabhi ke saath Osian City se nikal gaya. Uske is group mein Maithili, Rati, Varun, Ravi, Riya, Han, Hina, Jeet, Duan yeh sab the aur Sister Yuyan bhi thi.

Us deep forest se travel karte hue jaldi hi Kabir aur uske sabhi friends Nether Realm pohoch gaye. Sabhi chalte hue Blackrock City aa gaye aur waha unhe Luo mil gaya. Kabir ne sabhi ko Luo se introduce karaya aur Luo ne bhi un sabhi ko apne Jade Seal Family house par le gaya. Waha par unhe 2 din ka stay karna tha. Uske baad vo us jagah ke liye nikalne wale the jaha se vo Draconic Ruins Realm mein jaa sakte the. Yeh ek teleportation array se ho sakta tha jo Draconic Ruin Realm ko Nether Realm se connect karta tha. Kabir ne sabhi ko rest karne ke liye keh diya.
Fantastic update
 

ragish7357

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bhut shandar update bro..........ek trf jha kabir ki osian city ki 2 sbse haseen sundariyo se sagai ho gyi whi dusri trf use apni real identity mili or ye bhi pta chla ki wo crown prince hone k sath sath true son god ka direct decendent bhi h ............well ab kabir kya hi karega ye to aane wale update me pta chalega .....jbki jha wo ja rha h wha k ek department ne uske khilaf death ki taiyari ki hui h..................
 

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Toh Kabir ko apni pehchan mil hi gayi ki woh kaun hai kya hai aur jo woh hai woh woh kyon hai
Aur Kabir ke baaqi sabhi saathi kis god ke descendants hain specially uski wives....
 
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UPDATE 108

Dark Elves ke leader ke marte hi unki force ko Osian City ke experts ne kaafi easily hara diya tha. Wahi Nether Realm se aaye hue experts mein se ek ko Kabir ne yeh news Jade Seal Family ko dene ke liye bhej diya. Isse waha par Jade Seal Family bhi Dark Elves ke headquarter par attack karne ke liye ready thi.

Yeh sab hone ke baad Osian City ko ek bade occasion ke liye ready kiya jaa raha tha. Har jagah par kuch na kuch kaam chal rahe the. Wahi Kabir bhi apne Heavenly Marks Family mein aa gaya tha. Uske aane par sabhi kaafi khush the wahi usse apne family se yeh pata chala ke uski aur Winged Dragon Family ke Patriarch ke daughter ke saath uski marriage fix ho gayi hai. Kabir is baat se kaafi shock tha. Usse kya bole kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha.

Wahi yaha City Lord Mansion mei Maithili ke father aur City Lord, Lord Uday ke saath baithe hue the.

LU-Mein ne suna hai ke aapne bhi apne daughter ki marriage Heavenly Marks Family ke Kabir se fix ki hui hai.

Lord Uday ki is baat par Maithili ke father ne Kabir se milne ke baad Maithili mein jo changes aaye the unhe batana start kiya aur yeh bhi bata diya ke uski daughter Kabir ko kaafi like karti hai. Isliye unhone hi samne se jaake Heavenly Marks Family ke Patriarch se Kabir aur Maithili ke marriage fix ki hui thi.

Is par Lord Uday ke face par ek smile aayi aur unhone Maithili ke father se kaha.

LU-Kabir ne is Osian City mein born ho kar usse new heights par pohocha diya hai. Wahi uske aane se jaise sabhi mein ek unity aa gayi hai. Mein yeh sab kabhi nahi socha tha ke uske Osian City mein aane se yeh bhi kabhi changes aayenge. Wahi aapke daughter ka dil aur meri grand-daughter ka dil dono jo apne bachpan se best friends thi unka dil bhi ek hi person par aa gaya. Isse mein coincident nahi keh sakta hu. Yeh shayad pehle se hi hona tha. Par aaj mein bih yeh keh dena chahta hu ke meri Grand-Daughter Rati aur Kabir iski marriage bhi ussi din hogi jis din aapne apni daughter Maithili aur Kabir ki marriage fix ki hui hai. In dono ko Kabir jaisa saathi aur kahi nahi mil sakta hai.

Lord Uday ki baat par waha par jitney bhi Winged Dragon Family aur Snow Wind Family ke elder the vo sabhi kaafi khush ho gaye. Wahi Lord Uday ne Han aur Hina ki marriage bhi jaldi hi fix kar di thi. Isse yeh dono bhi kaafi khush the.

Jaldi hi yeh news bhi Kabir ko mil gayi. Kabir ko toh jaise shock par shock mil rahe the. Jaha pehle usse apne family se yeh pata chala ke uski aur Maithili ki marriage fix ho gayi hai tabhi usse ek aur shock mila yeh sunkar ke uski aur Rati ki marriage bhi ussi din fix ho gayi hai.

Kabir ko kya kare kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha. Usse toh jaise yeh ek dream hi lag raha tha. Apne past life mei usne apne har ek saathi ko kho diya tha par jab se vo return aaya hai tab se usse vo har ek cheez mil rahi thi jo usse apne past life mein nahi mil paayi.

Yaha Maithili aur Rati ek saath Rati ke courtyard mein ek bench par baith kar kuch soch rahe the. Unhe bhi yeh pata tha ke unki marriage ek hi din par hai par itna sudden yeh sab ho jaayega aur unke families ke elder bhi is sab baat ke liye ek hi saath maan jayenge yeh in dono ne kabhi nahi socha tha.

Par dil toh dono ke hi khush the. Kabir ke sabhi friends usse uske ghar milne aaye the. Sabhi kaafi khush dikh rahe the. Wahi Ravi uske kisi na kisi baat se tease kar raha tha. Par Kabir ke face par bhi ek smile thi.

Jaldi hi Heavenly Marks Family ne ek bade se parade ke saath Snow Wind Family aur Winged Dragon Family ko unki taraf se kaafi saare gifts bhej diye. Sabhi Osian City ke log us parade ko dekh rahe the. Unhe bhi yeh pata chal gaya tha ke Kabir ke saath Snow Wind Family ki Rati jo City Lord ki daughter thi aur Winged Dragon Family ki Maithili jo Winged Dragon Family ke Patriarch ki daughter thi. in dono ka uske saath marriage fix ho gaya hai.

Sabhi kaafi shock ho gaye the kyo ki ek hi waqt par Osian City ke do badi families ne apne daughters ki marriage Kabir se fix kar di thi.

Kuch hi din mein City Lord Manion ke courtyard mein sabhi Osian City ke logo ke samne Kabir, Rati aur Maithili ki engagement ho gayi. Jaha Kabir kaafi khush dikh raha tha wahi Rati aur Maithili itne logo ke samne unhe kaafi sharam si aane lag gayi thi.

Kuch aur din aise hi bit gaye the. Kabir ne Main Affairs Elder ko Heavenly Fate Palteau se laaye hue sabhi Purple Smoke Rocks de diye aur uske saath unhe kaise use karna hai Sabhi protective array’s mein yeh bhi note kar ke de diya tha.

Wahi Nether Realm mein Kabir ke Dark Elves ke leader ko maarne ki news jaise hi Jade Seal Family ko mili waise hi unhone Dark Elves ke headquarter par apne Demigod experts ke saath attack kar diya.

Aise sudden hue attack ke wajah se Dark Elves ke experts unke saath apne full strength ke saath fight nahi kar paaye aur Dark Elves ko Jade Seal Family ne Nether Realm se puri tarah destroy kar diya. Yeh Blackrock City ke liye kaafi badi baat thi.

Jade Seal Family ke strength ko dekh kar Blood Demon Family bhi kaafi shock ho gayi thi. Pehle toh unhe is baat par puri tarah se yakin hi nahi ho raha tha ke Jade Seal Family ne Dark Elves ke clan ko destroy kar diya hai. Par ab jab une bich ke matters kaafi had tak khatam ho gaye the toh Blood Demon Clan ke Patriarch yeh soch rahe the ke vo Jade Seal Family ke saath alliance bana le. Isse unhe bhi kaafi easy ho jaayega aur unke bich ki jo bhi enmity thi vo bhi puri tarah se khatam ho jaayegi.

Jaldi hi yeh baat Jade Seal Family ke Patriarch tak pohoch gayi aur unhone bhi is baremein socha aur paya ke yeh achhi hi baat thi. Isse dono clans ke experts ki aapas mein hone wali fights kam ho sakti thi aur agar kabhi bhi future mein Blackrock City par koi attack karta hai toh vo milkar unse fight kar sakte the.

Kuch hi din baad Blood Demon Clan ke Patriarch aur Jade Seal Family ke Patriarch ne Blood Scroll par apne blood se ek blood pact banaya aur issi ke saath Blackrock City ki sabse powerful alliance ban gayi.

Yeh news bhi jaldi hi Kabir tak pohoch gayi aur jab usse yeh baat pata chali tab usse bhi kaafi achha laga. Ab kuch hi din bache the Kabir aur uske friends ko Nether Realm jana tha entrance exam ke liye. Kabir ab issi baat par soch raha tha ke Draconic Ruins Realm mein kaafi sects aur powerful places hai. Unhe waha par kaafi options ko choose karne ka chance milne wala tha.

Draconic Ruins Ream Kulun Field ka ek small part tha. Waha par kaafi bade bade suzerain the aur waha ke sabse bade school mein se ek tha Martial Market School. Martial Market School ek badi organization ka part thi. Usse Martial Market handle karti thi. Martial Market ko Sage Emperor ne sabhi realms mein bithaya tha taki sabhi economical work ek hi jagah se ho sake aur uska yeh karna sabhi realms ke liye sahi sabit hua. Par jaldi hi ek badi problem bhi aayi Martial Market ke against aur vo thi Black Market. Yeh sabse badi Evil organization thi aur Dark Guild isi ka ek small part thi jisse Black Market is tiny world ko control karna chahti thi.

Kabir ko apne past life ke wajah se is sabke baremein pata tha aur tabhi usne apne haat ko wave kiya. Uske aisa karte hi uske haat mein ek wooden token aaya jispar likha tha Hades Department. Yeh Kulun Field ki sabse badi Assassins ki Organization thi. Inke paas Yellow Realm se lekar Heaven Realm aur uske bhi uppar ke master assassins the. Par Kabir abhi yahi soch raha tha ke Dark Elves ke leader ke paas Hades Department ka token aaya kaha se hoga. Yeh toh clear tha ke Hades Department us Supreme Expert ke banaye hue seal ko break kar ke Nether Realm mein nahi aa sakti thi toh phir ek hi option bachta hai aur vo yeh ke Dark Elves ka leader hi unke paas gaya hoga.

Main World se waha ke log Nether Realm aur Tiny World mein nahi aa sakte the par yaha ke log Main World mein jaa bhi sakte the aur aa bhi sakte the.

Kabir ne ek baar us token ko dekha aur usmein apni genuine qi inject ki. Isse vo is token ke real master ko dekhne ki koshish kar raha tha. Kabir aisa is liye kar raha tha ke agar yeh token Dark Elves ke leader ka hota toh uske marte hi is token ki bhi powder ban jaati par aisa hua nahi iska ek hi meaning tha aur vo yeh ke yeh token kisi aur ne Dark Elves ke leader ko diya hua hai.

Kabir abhi apni genuine qi us wooden token mein inject kar hi raha tha ke tabhi usmein se ek kaafi small sting nikal kar Kabir ke haat ko lagi aur uske blood ko lekar us token ke andar chali gayi.

Us sting ko feel karte hi Kabir ko ek bada shock laga kyo ki ab usse apne aankho ke samne naamo ki ek list dikhayi de rahi thi aur usmein uska bhi naam last mein aa gaya tha.

Jaise hi Kabir ko uska meaning samjah mein aaya tab usse aur bhi bada shock laga. Kyo ki yeh naamo ki list unki thi jnhe Hades Department future mein marne wala tha aur unke liye apne experts bhejne wala tha.

Kabir ne apne sir ko ek gehri saath saas ke saath naa mei hila diya. Ab jab uska naam bhi lag gaya hai matlab ab uske piche bhi Hades Department ka lagna jadli hi start hone wala tha. Lekin Kabir Kulun Field mein ek jagah janta tha jaha par Hades Department ke experts chah kar bhi nahi aa sakte the aur vo jagah thi Martial Market School. Waise Martial Market School ke Kulun Field mein har gahar branches thi aur vo students bhi ussi tarah se choose kar ke har branches mein bhejte the. Ab agar Kabir ko apni aur uske friends ki safety chahiye hogi toh Martial Market School se achhi aur safe jagah koi aur nahi ho sakti thi.

Kuch din aise hi sab bit gaye the. Aaj Kabir ko Patriarch ne family hall mein bulaya tha. Jab Kabir waha par gaya tab usse waha Patriarch ke saath uske father bhi dikhe aur aaj un dono ke body mein se nikalne wala aura kuch different tha. Aaj dono hi kaafi different lag rahe the. Unke face par expressions bhi kaafi serious se lag rahe the. Kabir chalte hue un dono ke samne aata hai.

Kabir-Kya baat hai Patriarch aapne mujhe yaha par kyo bulaya hai aur Baba aap bhi yaha par hai. Kya kahi kuch hua hai ?

Kabir ke is sawal par Patriarch ne aage aate hue kaha.

Patriarch-Kabir mein janta hu tum kis tarah ke technique ki practice karte ho aur kuch jab vo Gods ka Manifestation hua tha vo bhi tumhare Yellow Realm ke Ultimate Realm mein pohochne ke wajah se hua tha.

Kabir ko Patriarch ke muu se yeh baat sunkar kaafi bada jhatka laga. Usse samajh mein nahi aa raha tha ke uska yeh secret Patriarch ko kaise pata chala. Tabhi Kabir ne Patriarch ke body mein se nikalne wale genuine qi ko feel kiya aur uske face par jo shock ke expressions the vo aur bhi badh gaye. Kyo ki Heavenly Marks Family ke Patriarch Earth Ream mein the. Iska ek hi meaning tha ke Patriarch bhi Kabir ki hi tarah koi main world ki technique ki practice karte hai. Par yeh kaise ho sakta tha. Uski Heavenly Marks Family toh Tiny World se thi aur unhe un techniques ke baremein pata hona mumkin hi nahi tha. Toh aisa kaise ho sakta tha.

Kabir ke face par aane wale expressions ko dekh kar Patriarch aage aaye aur unhone kaha.

Patriarch-Kabir mein sirf yeh hi nahi janta hu ke tum main world ke techniques ki practice karte ho par mein yeh bhi janta hu ke tum ek baar mar kar phir se return aaye hue ho. Lekin tumhe yeh nahi pata hoga ke tum aaye kaha ho kyo aur yeh sab mujhe kaise pata chala hai.

Kabir abhi bhi Patriarch ko dekhe hi jaa raha tha. Par ab Patriarch ke side mein uske father bhi aa gaye aur unhone Kabir se kaha.

“Kabir jis REALITY mein tum mar gaye the waha vo world tumhare marte hi destroy ho gaya tha par tumhare paar Divine Demon Spirit Book thi aur usko tumhari soul ne absorb kar liya aur usne tumhe is REALITY mein bhej diya jaha par Kabir kuch hi der pehle mar gaya tha aur uski body mein phir tumhari soul aa gayi aur ab tum vo Kabir ban gaye ho. Par jante hi is REALITY ke Kabir ki identity kya hai.”

Kabir ne apne sir ko naa mein hilaya. Usse toh jaise aak shock par shock milte jaa rahe the. Kabir ke shocking expressions ko dekh kar uske father ke face par ek smile aayi aur unhone uske sir par haat rakhte hue kaha.

“Kabir ki is REALITY ki identity yeh hai ke vo SACRED BUDDHIST EMPIER ka SACRED CROWN PRINCE hai.”

Kabir ke liye yeh baat kisi blast se kam nahi thi. SACRED CROWN PRINCE yaani is REALITY ka Kabir BUDDHIST EMPEROR ka descendant tha aur uski family bhi unhi ki descendant hai. Par aisa kaise ho sakta tha. Kabir ko kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha. Vo toh bas apne father aur Patriarch ko dekh raha tha. Jaise unse hi in sawalo ke answers chahta ho.

Kabir ke dil ki baat ko samajah kar Patriarch ne apne haat ko wave kiya aur unke haat mein vo Black Ball aaya jo usne Heavenly Marks Family ke treasury mein dekha tha aur jab usne lena chaha tab Patriarch ne usse nahi diya tha. Patriarch ne us Black Ball ko aage karte hue Kabir ki taraf kiya. Kabir ne bhi usse apne haato mein liya aur phir waise hi sawalo walo nazaro se Patriarch aur apne father ko dekhne lag gaya. Is par uske father ne kaha.

“Kabir us black ball mein apni genuine qi inject karo tumhe sab kuch apne aap pata chal jaayega.”

Kabir ne bhi apne father ki baat ko maante hue apne genuine qi ko us black ball mein inject kiya aur suddenly vo black ball se ek light nikalne lag gayi aur vo hawa mein udne lag gaya.

Kabir abhi usse dekh hi raha tha ke…

Boom!

Is aawaz ke saath vo black ball Kabir ke sir par jo uska Sacred Mark tha usemin chala gaya aur uske waha jaate hi usse kuch visions dikhne lag gaye. Kabir aise hi kuch der ke liye is state mein raha aur end mein uski aankho mein se aansu nikalne lag gaye. Jab usse hosh aaya tab vo waise hi aansu wali aankho se apne Father aur Patriarch ko dekhne lag gaya.

Kabir ne father ne uske sir par haat rakha aur usse kaha.

“Kabir tum waha jaa rahe ho jaha se ham apni jaan bacha kar us Sage Emperor se aaye the. TRUE SUN GOD CLAN ka blood tumhare body mein flow ho raha hai par ek baat yaad rakhna chahe jo ho jaaye jab tak zaroori na ho tab tak apni identity kisi ko bhi mat batana ke tum koun ho. Iske aage tum kaafi samajhdar ho, mature ho, tum bhi jaan sakte ho ko tumhari identity waha par open hone se kya kya ho sakta hai aur haa jo bhi tumne us ball mein dekha hai vo hamare family aur clan ke treasuries hai unhe zaroor hasil karna. Isse tumhe Sage Emperor ke saath fight karne mein help milengi.”

Kabir ne kuch nahi kaha sirf apne father ko dekhte hue apne sir ko haa mein hilaya. Aaj usse ek new identity mili thi. SACRED CROWN PRINCE ki par iske saath aane wali musibate bhi kaafi badi thi. Uski ek galti uske family aur friends ko kaafi bade danger situation mein daal sakti hai. Ab Kabir ko aur bhi soch samajh kar kaam karna hoga.

Yeh din bhi aise hi bit gaya aur jab agle din ki morning hui Kabir sabhi ke saath Osian City se nikal gaya. Uske is group mein Maithili, Rati, Varun, Ravi, Riya, Han, Hina, Jeet, Duan yeh sab the aur Sister Yuyan bhi thi.

Us deep forest se travel karte hue jaldi hi Kabir aur uske sabhi friends Nether Realm pohoch gaye. Sabhi chalte hue Blackrock City aa gaye aur waha unhe Luo mil gaya. Kabir ne sabhi ko Luo se introduce karaya aur Luo ne bhi un sabhi ko apne Jade Seal Family house par le gaya. Waha par unhe 2 din ka stay karna tha. Uske baad vo us jagah ke liye nikalne wale the jaha se vo Draconic Ruins Realm mein jaa sakte the. Yeh ek teleportation array se ho sakta tha jo Draconic Ruin Realm ko Nether Realm se connect karta tha. Kabir ne sabhi ko rest karne ke liye keh diya.



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Kya itna bara secret itni asani se khulna chahiye tha
Kya story thori fast nahi ho gai
Sorry ro bura laga to but mujhe lagta hai ye secret bahut asani se khul gya jo maja nahi aaya
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apka jo detail me story likhne ka tarika hai va lajabab hai use hi continue karo story ko fast mat karo bhai
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Wah kabir , mithaili , rati ki sagai ho gyi wah ab sb clear h dono k bich or unki family k bich

Kabir ka plan super hi hota h yaha usne inko khatam kiya waha wo attack ke k khatam kr diye ab rasta clear ho chuka h

Ab kabir or usk dosto k action ka time suru ho raha h



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jay bhai pahle to bahut time baad cmnt karne ke liye mafi chahta hu
Or story ki baat kare to Bus yahi kahenge ke kya baat kare बेहतरीन बेहतरीन or bahut बेहतरीन or खूबसूरत
story ka koi javab nahi jaise chal rahi hai vaise hi bahut achhi hai
bus aise hi Aap update dete rahe isse ziada or kuch nahi......
or ek Request hai
lekin sirf Request hai agar Apko behtar lage to jo bhi main ya long time chalne wale story ke कैरेक्टर hai unka naam thoda indian रखने ki कोशिश करे bhai बस yahi request hai
jaise Kabeer, Varun, Ravi, Maithli, Ravi, Uday, Neeraj, Sheela, ye padhke yaad ho jate hai chap jate hai dimag me
or Duan, yuyan, yuvan, Leo, ye sab naam bhi acche hai lekin hindi wale naam ho jaye to baat hi Alag hai
bhai yahi choti si Request hai
Baki story Apki or vj bhai ki in do story se behtar Aajtak koi or nahi lagi mujhe abhi tak
 
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