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Ye waala update ab bhi sad kar deta hain. I miss rati aur maithiliUPDATE 169
Chahe Gang kaise bhi dikhe vo tha toh ek Earth Realm master. Palak jhapakte hi vo Zina ke samne aa gaya tha.
Uske haat jo kisi claw ki tarah lag rahe the vo Zina ki taraf badhte hai.
Yeh dekh kar Zina bhi kaafi dar jaati hai aur jaldi se uncanny sword technique ko perform karne lagti hai. Uske is technique ko use karte hi Zina ke samne 8 sword shadows banti hai aur Gang par different direction se attack karti hai.
Zina ke ab tak ke battles ke wajah se jo Chikong Secret Mansion mei hui usse vo Black Realm ke Completion Stage mei breakthrough kar paayi. Lekin uske back par jo injury hui thi uske wajah se apne top speed ko use nahi kar paa rahi thi aur uske techniques mei flaws aane lag gaye the.
"Tumhari sword moves flaws se bhare hue hai. Yeh true power ke against useless hai."
Yeh keh kar Gang ke fingers ko uske Genuine Qi ne cover kar liya aur unhe ek metalic luster aane lag gaya tha.
Boom !
Uske haat ke single move se usne un sabhi sword shadows ko destroy kar diya.
Is sab ke wajah se Zina kaafi shock mei thi tabhi Gang ne apne ek haat se usse waist se pakad liya aur apne dusre haat se uske white robe ko pakad kar khinch diya.
Gang ke aisa karne se uska vo white robe ka kaafi bada part phat kar samne aaya.
Apne body ko expose hota dekh kar jaldi se Zina ne apne haato se us phate hue part ko cover karne lag gayi.
Gang ke haato mei jo Zina ke white robe ka phata hua part tha usse usne smell kiya aur kaafi evil smile ke saath usne kaha.
"Ahhh! Kya khushbu hai."
Is sab se Zina ko kaafi gussa aaya aur usne ussi gusse mei in 3 no par attack kar diya.
God Slayer-The First Style !
Zina ne straight strike ke saath apne sword ko Gang ke heart ki taraf badha di. Vo kisi lightning ki tarah Gang ki taraf badhi thi. Wahi usne abhi jis technique ko use kiya tha vo ek Lower Class ki Spiritual Stage Sword Technique thi.
Zina ko aise gusse mei attack karte dekh kar Gang ke face par jo evil smile thi vo aur badi ho gayi. Usne quickly uske attack ko dodge kiya aur Zina ke neck ke back ko pakad kar uske lips ke jo Meridians the unhe seal kar diya.
Uske baad uske quickly aur 7 Meridians ko seal kar ke Zina ke Genuine Qi ke flow ko bhi block kar diya.
"Ladki hame pata hai tum apne muu mei rakhe poison ko crush kar ke apne aap ko maar sakti ho. Par ab jab tumhari sabhi meridians ko mein ne seal kar diya hai toh tum kaise us poison ko crush karogi ?"
Yeh keh kar Gang kaafi zor se hasne lagta hai. Uski aankho mei lust clearly dikh sakti thi.
Zine ke paas ab koi options nahi bache the. Usse yahi lag raha tha ke usne start mei hi us poison ko crush kar ke apne aap ko maar lena chahiye tha.
Zina ko ab kaafi dar lagne laga tha yeh soch kar ke ab uske saath yeh 3 evil warriors jo karenge vo kisi bhi hell se kaafi zyada hone wala hai.
Kyo ki vo Hades Department se belong karti thi toh usse Black Market ke in evil warriors ke aise moves ke baremein pata tha.
Zina ke aankho ke samne abhi bas Varun ka vo smile karne wala face aa raha tha aur tab ka face jab usne apne true identity ke baremein Varun ko bataya tha. Par Varun ne phir bhi uske saath kisi bhi tarah se bad behavior nahi kiya tha. Varun ne usse tab bas yahi kaha tha ke Kabir uspar agar trust karta hai vo bhi uspar apni aankh ko close rakh kar trust kar sakta hai.
Us waqt Zina ka dil kaafi kush tha. Par ab jo uske saath hone wala tha usse vo bilkul bhi sochna nahi chahti thi. Usse bas yahi lag raha tha ke in 3 evil warriors ke usse touch karne se phele yaa toh koi aa kar usse bachaye yaa phir uski death ho jaaye.
Abhi vo yeh sab soch hi rahi thi ke suddenly usse kisi ke chikhne ki aawaz sunayi deti hai.
Boom !
Gang ki body kaafi speed se udte hue jaa kar samne ke stone wall par lag gayi thi. Abhi Gang uske saath kya hua yeh samajhne ki koshish kar hi raha tha ke tabhi uski body half mei split ho gayi.
Zina jisne abhi jine ki hope kho di thi usne apne nazaro ko cave ke entrance ki taraf kiya.
Cave mei jo bhi tha vo clearly kisi ke chal kar unke paas aane ki aawaz sun sakta tha.
Yeh koi aur nahi balki khud Kabir tha jo apne white robe mei tha. Uske aaspas kaafi sharp invisible aura ghum raha tha. Yeh Kabir ka Sword Intent tha aur ussi se Kabir ne Gang ko half mei cut kar diya tha.
Cave mei jo bhi tha vo Kabir ke face ko dekh sakta tha jo stone cold aur emotionless tha.
Kabir kaafi slowly Zina ke saamne aa kar khada hua aur usne Zina ke sabhi seal kiye hue meridians ko open kar diya.
Tabhi Leon hosh mei aata hai aur gusse se Kabir ko dekh kar kehta hai.
"Aye ladke koun ho tum ? Lagta hai tum bhi Martial Market School ke student ho."
Par Kabir ne Leon ko completely ignore kiya aur Zina ko dekh raha tha ke kahi uski koi meridian bach toh nahi open karne se.
Apne aap ko aise ignore hota hua dekh kar Leon gussa ho gaya aur usne apne palm strike se Kabir par attack kar diya.
Leon Kabir ko bilkul bhi underestimate nahi kar raha tha. Usne dekh liya tha ke Kabir sirf apne aura se hi Gang jaise warrior ko half mei split kar sakta hai jo Kabir ke strong warrior hai yeh show karta hai. Leon ne apne body ke Genuine Qi ko completely ek overwhelming palm strike mei transfer kar diya. Ek loud thunderclap ke saath Leon ne apne palm ke center mei se lightning bolt ko release kar diya.
Kabir ne toh uski taraf aa rahe Leon ke attack ko dekha tak nahi aur sirf apne left haat ko wave kiya. Leon ke liye itna hi bas tha. Kisi mosquito ki tarah vo udta hua jaa kar piche ke stone wall ke saath crash ho gaya.
Boom !
Leon kaafi zor se stone wall ke saath crash hua tha. Uske muu se blood tak nikalne lag gaya tha. Us stone wall se Leon ki body kisi paper ki tarah niche ground par gir gayi.
Us stone wall par ek human shape ka print bhi ban gaya tha.
Leon ke muu se abhi bhi blood nikal raha tha. Uski body stone wall ke saath crash hone ke wajah se uske body ke sabhi bones completely break ho gaye the. Agar uske paar Earth Realm ki strong vitality na hoti toh vo kab kar mar gaya hota.
Yun yeh sab apne aankho ke samne hota hua dekh raha tha. Uske face par bhi kaafi shocking expressions the. Apne life ke ab tak ki journey mei vo aise kaafi strong warriors se mila tha aur unke saath battle kar ke usne apni ruthless man hone ki reputation banayi thi. Par aaj Kabir jo itna young tha aur uski strength bhi kisi monster se kam nahi thi usse dekh kar Yun kaafi shock tha aur terrified bhi.
Zina bhi utni hi shock thi jitna Yun tha.
Usne yeh kabhi nahi socha tha ke Kabir itna powerful ho sakta hai jo casually ek Earth Realm master ko apne haat ko single time wave karne se hi udda sakta hai.
Kabir ne palat kar ek pal ke liye Leon ki taraf dekha aur issi situation ka benefit lete hue Yun apne top speed se move hote hue usne Zina ko pakad kar Kabir aur apne bich distance bana diya.
Usne Zina ke haat mei jo Fish Intestine Sword thi usse liya aur uske throat par rakhte hue Kabir se kaha.
"Agar isse zinda dekhna chahte ho toh is cave se chale jaao."
Kabir-Tum is position mei nahi ho ke tum mujhe terms offer karo.
Kabir yeh keh kar apni jagah par hi ruka raha.
Kabir-Us ladki ko release kar do toh mein tumhe yaha se zinda chodne ke baremei sochunga. Saath hi tumhe khud se apne prison mei chal kar jana hoga nahi toh.
"Tum kaafi achha mazak kar lete ho ladke. Itne hard work kar ke mein us prison se bhaga tha aur phir se wahi chala jau aur vo bhi tum mujhe khud se jaane ke liye keh rahe ho."
Yun ko Kabir ab childish lag raha tha.
Kabir-Tum seriously jine ke liye mil rahe last chance ko aise hi jaane dena chahte ho ?
Kabir ne yeh baat keh kar apne sir ko naa mei hilaya.
Yun ne uske haat mei jo sword thi usse Zina ke throat ke aur paas lekar aa gaya.
"Tumhe kya lagta hai mein isse nahi marunga agar tumne mujhe nahi jaane diya toh ?"
Kabir-Well ab tum yaha se zinda nahi jaane wale ho aur na hi tum us ladki ko maar paoge.
Yeh keh kar Kabir casually Yun ki taraf badhne laga.
Un dono ke bich ka distance dekhte hi dekhte kam hone lag gaya tha.
Kabir ke aankho mei dar na dekh kar Yun bhi gussa ho gaya aur usne Zina ke throat se us sword ko hata kar usse Kabir ki taraf strike kiya.
Uske liye Kabir ek teenager tha par vo itna powerful kaise tha yeh usse samajh mei nahi aa raha tha.
Wahi vo khud Earth Realm ke Mid Stage ka warrior tha. Even agar vo Kabir ko maar nahi paya par vo usse bach kar yaha se jaa toh sakta hai.
Abhi Yun ne jis strike ko Kabir ki taraf kiya tha suddenly usse usne Zina ki taraf kar diya par tabhi usse feel hua ke vo apne body ke ek single part tak ko move nahi kar paa raha hai. Jaise kisi ne uske body ko freeze kar diya ho.
"Yeh....kaise....ho....sakta....hai ?"
Yun sirf apne muu ko ab itna hi open kar sakta tha.
Kabir ne apne Space Domain ke power Spatial Freeze ko use kiya tha.
Is power ko use kar ke Kabir apne Space Domain ke andar ke hawa ko solidify kar ke uske opponent ko dead freeze kar sakta tha.
Agar Kabir ke opponent ka cultivation strong hua toh hi vo is Spatial Freeze apne aap ko free kar sakta tha.
Kyo ki Yun ke paas is tarah ke power ke against kuch nahi tha toh vo Kabir ke Space Domain ke andar completely defenceless tha.
Kabir emotionlessly Yun ki taraf aata hai aur usne samne aa kar khade hote hue usse kehta hai.
Kabir-Tumne sach mei apne last chance ko jaane diya.
Kabir ke aise cold aur emotionless face ko dekh kar Yun ki soul tak dar gayi thi. Apne ab tak ke life journey mei usne aisa kabhi experiance nahi kiya tha.
Kabir apne haat ko Yun ke heart ke upar rakhta hai aur apni Icing Cold Genuine Qi ko uske heart mei flow karne lagta hai.
Kabir ki Genuine Qi itni cold thi ke usne matter of seconds mei Yun ke heart ko icy crystal mei transform kar diya tha. Uske kuch seconds baad hi Yun ke andar jo blood tha vo bhi crystal freeze hua. Dekhte hi dekhte Yun ne saans lena bhi rok diya aur kisi Ice Sculpture ki taraf ban gaya.
Aise bohot kam hi warriors the jo apne opponent ka ek blood drop nikale bina unhe maar sakte the. Specially Kabir ne jis tarah Yun ko mara tha usse dekh kar usse strong warriors bhi uske saath fight karne se dar sakte the. Matter of seconds mei freeze kar dena kaafi horrifying tha.
Zina jo ab tak uske samne jo ho raha tha uske shock mei thi vo Kabir ke samne aane se hosh mei aa jaati hai. Back par hue injury ke wajah se uske body mei kuch weakness aa gayi thi is liye jaise Kabir uske samne aaya waise hi vo behosh ho gayi.
Kabir ne usse bich mei hi pakad liya aur niche girne se bacha liya. Usne behosh hone se pehle Kabir ko thanks kaha tha.
Kabir ne Zina ko uthaya aur usse ussi cave ke ek stone bed par rakha aur uske upar apna dusra white robe daal diya.
Jab Zina ko hosh aaya tab usne dekha ke vo ek stone bed par soyi hui hai aur uske upar ek new white robe dala hua hai. Saath hi uski injuries bhi almost heal ho gayi hai.
Usse kuch distance par Kabir apne aankho ko close kar ke apni practice kar raha tha. Usne waha se un 6 dead bodies ko hata diya aur waha par a bas Leon bacha tha jo khud bhi death door par tha.
Kabir ko practice mei dekh kar Zina ne apne phate hue robe ko uske diye hue new robe mei change kar liya.
Jaise hi Zina ne apne robe ko change kiya waise hi Kabir ne apne aankho ko open kiya.
Kabir-Tumhari injuries kaisi hai ab ?
Zina-Thank you tumhari wajah se ab vo normal ho gayi hai.
Kabir-Friends ke bich koi ek dusre ko thanks nahi kehta hai. Ab chalo hame yaha se nikalna hoga.
Yeh keh kar Kabir khade ho kar waha se jaane lagta hai.
Zina bhi uske piche waha se nikalne lagti hai tab usse kuch distance par Leon gira hua dikhta hai. Usse dekhte hi Zina ko vo sab yaad aata jo kuch der pehle Leon ne uske saath kiya tha. Zina ne apne haat ko wave kiya aur uski Fish Intestine Sword udte hue uske haat mei aayi.
Sword Zina ke haat mei aate hi usne ek hi strike mei Leon ke sir ko uske body se alag kar diya.
Kabir yeh sab dekh raha tha aur usse bhi yeh dekh kar achha kaga ke Zina ne khud se Leon ko mara. Isse uska mood bhi kuch fresh ho sakta tha.
Dono hi chal kar us cave se bahar aate hai.
Kabir ne bahar aate hi kaafi serious tone mein Zina se pucha.
Kabir-Kya tumhe pata hai ke kisne Black Market ke evil warriors ko free kar diya hai ?
Is par Zina bhi kaafi serious ho gayi aur usne kaha.
Zina-Black Market ke andar power kaafi complicated matter hai. Is mei Killer organization jaise Hades Department, Kuch Heretics ke Schools, Black Market ke businessmen's se milkar bana hua Chambers of Commerce ( Ek tarah ka group), Prostitute group jismei sabhi female warriors hai aur aisi list aage chali jaati hai. Black Market is world ke dark side ko represent karti hai aur usmei kitne forces hai yeh mein khud bhi list out nahi kar sakti hu. Har organisation Black Market ke member hai. Par Black Market ke member ho kar bhi sabhi independent hai aur ek dusre ke against hai. Waha ki har ek organisations apne apne spies ko Martial Market School mei bhejte hai aur vo apne identities ko strictly confidential rakhte hai. Toh aise mei yeh mujhe bhi nahi pata hai ke kisne Purgatory of Red River ko open kiya hai.
Par Kabir ko yaha par baat hi kuch ajeeb lag rahi thi.
Kabir-Toh phir vo evil warriors ne tumhe aise cave ke andar corner kyo kiya hua tha ?
Zina-Kya tumne Fourth Level Dragon Cave ke baremei suna hai ?
Kabir-Nahi. Vo kounsi jagah hai ?
Zina Kabir ke is answer se kaafi shock ho gayi.
Zina-Kya ? Tum uske baremei kaise nahi jante ho ? Toh tum ek baar bhi Chikong Secret Mansion mei enter karne ke baad Fourth Level Dragon Cave ke andar nahi gaye ?
Kabir ne apne sir ko naa mei hilate hue kaha
Kabir-Nahi mein ne apne aap ko secluded kar liya tha refining ke liye.
Zina Kabir ke is baat se aur bhi shock ho gayi. Jo bhi Chikong Secret Mansion mei aaya tha vo pagalo ki tarah har tarah ke treasure ko dhund raha tha aur wahi Kabir ne apne aap ko refining ke liye secluded kar liya tha.
Agar indoor practice hi karni thi toh yaha Chikong Secret Mansion mei aana hi kyu tha ?
Zina ne apne sir ko naa mei hilaya aur usse ek Varun ki kahi hui baat yaad aayi ke Kabir apne sabhi friends ke saath kaafi innocently behave karta hai.
Zina-The Fourth Level Dragon Cave kabhi Four-Winged Earth Dragon ka nest hua karti thi. Saath mei vo ek major battlefield bhi thi humans aur savage beast ke saath hue war mei. Us jagah par kaafi saare treasures piche chode gaye hai. Is liye jis bhi student ne Chikong Secret Mansion mei entry li vo sabse phele wahi gaya hai. Taaki usse waha par chode gaye treasures mil sake.
Kabir-Toh ab tak kitno ko treasures mile hai ?
Zina ne apne sir ko naa mei hilate hue kaha.
Zina-Yeh itna bhi easy nahi hai ke waha gaye aur treasures mil gaye. The Four-Winged Earth Dragon savage beast mei Saint Realm mei tha. Toh uske marne ke thousands of years ke baad bhi waha par uski chodi hui kaafi strong Spiritual Qi hai aur uske wajah se countless underground powerful monsters ki birth hui hai. Is liye cave ke andar koi nahi jaa sakta hai. Sabhi us cave ke boundary par hi treasures ko dhundte hai.
Kabir ne yeh sunkar ek gehri saans chodi aur usne Zina se kaha.
Kabir-Tum sabhi over ambitious ho. Waha par Saints ke chode hue treasures ko paana obviously hard hoga. Tum sabhi aisi jagaho par pehle kyo nahi gaye jaha par kisi Half-Saint ki death hui ho. Waha par tumhe zarur koi na koi treasure mil sakta tha.
Zina-Sach mei ?
Zina ne phir apne storage ring mei se 3 Three Leaf Holy Clovers ko bahar nikala aur unhe Kabir ko dikhate hue kaha.
Zina-Yeh Three Leaf Holy Clovers mujhe Fourth Level Dragon Cave ke boundary par mile hai. Tumhe aise treasures aur kahi nahi mil sakte hai...Wait ! Tumhare paas itne saare Three Leaf Holy Clover kaha se aa gaye.
Jab Zina Kabir ko Three Leaf Holy Clover dikha rahi thi tab Kabir ne bhi apne jade box ko open kar ke usse 98 Three Leaf Holy Clover dikha diye.
Us jade box mei se un Three Leaf Holy Clover se emit hone wala medicinal fragrance nikalne lag gaya tha.
Zina ka muu hi khula ka khula reh gaya jab usne us box ko dekha. Usne ek gehri saans li aur us box ko dekhte hue Kabir se pucha.
Zina-Tumne itne saare Three Leaf Holy Clover kaha se collect kiye ?
Kabir ne Zina ke face ke expressions ko dekha aur smile kar ke us box ko close kiya aur kaha.
Kabir-Pura Chikong Secret Mansion treasures se bhara hua hai. Yeh tum sirf Fourth Level Dragon Cave ke paas hi nahi paa sakti ho.
Kabir ko aise uske upar smile karte dekh Zina ne apne face par palat diya. Par kuch der sochne ke baad usne ek palm size vessel ko nikal kar apne haato mei liya.
Yeh ek small dagger ki tarah dikh raha tha par yeh slightly different tha. Us par ajeeb si lines ko carve kiya gaya tha jo usse kaafi wired bana raha tha.
Zina-Mujhe yeh 8th-Level Genuine Martial Arm Fourth Level Dragon Cave ke boundary par mila hai. Is par 59 inscriptions carve kiye gaye hai. Yun issi ke liye mere piche pada tha.
Yeh keh kar ek baar Zina ne ek gehri saans li aur phir aage kaha.
Zina-Lekin mujhe yeh kis baat ke liye use kiya jata hai yeh nahi pata chal paa raha hai. Yeh kisi bhi tarah se koi Genuine Martial Arm jo attack aur defence ke liye use hota ho waise kuch bhi nahi dikh raha hai.
Kabir ne ek pal ke liye us 8th-Level Genuine Martial Arm ko dekha aur ek smile ke saath usne Zina se kaha.
Kabir-Mein iske badle kuch exchange karna chahunga.
Zina jo ab tak us Genuine Martial Arm ko dekh rahi thi usne sir utha kar Kabir ko shock se dekhne lag gayi.
Kabir ne apne jade box ko nikala aur kaha.
Kabir-Mein iske liye 20 Three Leaf Holy Clover dene ke liye ready hu.
Zina ko kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ke Kabir ko yeh ajeeb Genuine Martial Arm kyo chahiye. Iske liye vo 20 Three Leaf Holy Clover bhi dene ke liye ready ho gaya.
20 Three Leaf Holy Clover usse Earth Realm ke Initial Stage se Mid Stage tak breakthrough karne ke liye kaafi the jo uske liye kaafi short period mei ho sakta tha.
Yeh ajeeb sa Genuine Martial Arm waise bhi uske liye kisi kaam ka nahi tha toh yeh deal uske liye kaafi achhi thi.
20 Three Leaf Holy Clover ko Black Market mei 10,000 Spiritual Crystals ke liye sell kiya jaa sakta tha jo hundreds of thousands silver coins ke equal the.
Par Zina ne jaldi nahi ki aur usne kuch der socha aur phir Kabir se kaha.
Zina-30
Kabir-Done !
Kabir ne kuch bhi soche bina 30 Three Leaf Holy Clovers ko jade box mei se nikaal kar unhe Zina ke haato mei diya aur usse vo ajeeb sa Genuine Martial Arm le liya.
Kabir kaafi carefully is 8th-Level Genuine Martial Arm ko dekh raha tha. Uske baad Kabir ne us Genuine Martial Arm mei apne Genuine Qi ko transfer kiya aur us Genuine Martial Arm se nikalne wale scent ko feel karne lag gaya.
Yeh pehli baar tha ke Zina ne Kabir ko aise kisi Genuine Martial Arm ko treat karte dekha tha. Usse suddenly laga ke usne kuch kaafi important cheez ko kho diya hai.
Zina-Kabir kya tumne iske realm use ke baremei pata hai ?
Kabir apne sir ko haan mei hilaya aur kaha.
Kabir-Yeh dragon horn se refine ki hui key hai. Par ismei sabse zyada notice karne wali baat yeh hai ke ismei se Dragon Qi nikal rahi hai. Is liye yeh ek Saint Realm ke dragon horn ko cut kar ke refine ki gayi hai. Pure Omen Ridge mei sirf Four-Winged Earth Dragon hi ek Saint Level Savage Beast tha.
Zina-Toh tum yeh kehna chahte ho ke yeh dragon horn Four-Winged Earth Dragon ka hai ?
Zina ne yeh sawal apne khunsurat aankho ko bada karte hue pucha. Usse lag raha tha ke vo Genuine Martial Arm Kabir ke haato se cheen le.
Vo ek Saint Dragon ka dragon horn tha. Usse Black Market mei sky high price ke saath sell kiya jaa sakta tha.
Zina ne apne hosh ko sambhala aur Kabir ko dekhte hue kaha.
Zina-Kabir mujhe nahi pata tha tum itne shameless person ho. Varun tumhare baremei mujhe kitni achhi baate batata hai. Itne precious cheez milne ke baad tumne mujhe sirf 30 Three Leaf Holy Clover offer kiye ?
Kabir ne bhi smile kar ke Zina se kaha.
Kabir-Zina business aise hi kiya jata hai. Yeh consensual hai. Waise zyada mat socho yeh dragon key ek certain door ki key hai. Agar mujhe vo door mil jata hai toh mein tumhe aur baki sabhi ko zaroor waha lekar jaunga. Zaroor waha par Four-Winged Earth Dragon ke treasures honge.
"KABIR, tum dono aise chup kar kya baate kar rahe ho ?"
Kabir aur Zina ke kuch distance se unhe ek soft aawaz sunayi di.
Par vo aawaz soft hone ke baad bhi kisi thunder se kam nahi thi. Usne jaise underground ke atmosphere ko hi shake kar diya tha.
Jaise hi kuch pal bit gaye ek graceful shadow mei transform ho kar Shreya unke samne aa kar ruk gayi.
Uske piche piche Dina, Rati, Maithili aur Yuyan bhi aa gayi thi.
Rati aur Maithili ko safe dekh kar Kabir ko kaafi achha lag raha tha. Saath hi Kabir yeh bhi notice kar sakta tha ke Rati aur Maithili ne Earth Realm mei breakthrough kar liya hai.
Rati aur Maithili Kabir ke samne aa kar rukti hai aur Kabir ko dekhne lagti hai.
Kabir-Tum dono thik ho ?
"Haan !"
Rati aur Maithili ne yeh ek saath kaha tha.
Abhi Kabir aage kuch kehne hi jaa raha tha ke suddenly Chikong Secret Mansion ka atmosphere hi jaise change ho gaya. Waha par jo Heaven and Earth Spiritual Qi thi vo bhi violently shake hone lag gayi thi.
Kabir abhi is ho rahi situation ko samajhne ki koshish hi kar raha tha ke tabhi waha par ek kaafi bright light flash hoti hai. Vo light itni bright thi ke pura Chikong Secret Mansion us light ke wajah se jaise bright ho gaya tha.
Kabir aur baki sabhi ne uske wajah se apne aankho ko close kiya.
Jaise hi sabhi ki aankhe close hui waise hi 2 light arrows Kabir ke paas se guzar gaye.
Kabir ne unhe feel toh kiya tha par light ke wajah se usne apne aankho ko open nahi kiya tha.
Kuch der baad vo light waha se chali gayi aur sabhi ne slowly apni aankho ko open kiya.
Kabir ne bhi apne aankho ko slowly open kiya. Jab usne apne samne dekha toh uske samne usse Rati aur Maithili kahi nahi dikh rahi thi. Par tabhi uski nazar niche ground par gayi aur uski aankhe khuli ki khuli reh gayi. Uska jaise dil hi baith gaya tha uske samne jo nazara tha usse dekh kar.
Niche Rati aur Maithili ke heart mei ek light arrows lage hue the aur un dono ki nazar bas Kabir ko dekh rahi thi.
Jab baki sabhi ki nazar Rati aur Maithili par gayi toh vo sabhi bhi pehle shock ho gaye aur phri jaldi se unke paas aa kar niche baith gaye.
Shreya Maithili ke saatha ur Dina Rati ke saath thi aur unke heart mei se vo light arrows ko nikalne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Par vo light arrows jaise unhe apne aap ko touch bhi nahi karne de rahe the.
Kabir chal kar Rati aur Maithili ke bich aa ke khada hota hai aur suddenly apne ghutno par baith jata hai.
Kabir ne dono ke haato ko apne haato mei liya. Uske aankho se aansu nikalne lag gaye the.
"NAHI.....NAHI.....NAHI.....TUM DONO MUJHE AISE CHOD KAR NAHI JAA SAKTI HO. TUM DONO JAANTI HO NA AGAR TUM MEI SE EK MERA DIL HAI TOH DUSRA USKI DHADKAN HAI. NAHI.....PLEASE NAHI.....MEIN PHELE TUM DONO KO EK BAAR KHO CHUKA HU AB NAHI KHONA CHAHTA HU."
Kabir yeh sab kehte hue roye jaa raha tha.
Wahi Shreya, Dina, Zina aur Yuyan har vo koshish kar rahe the Rati aur Maithili ke heart mei se vo light arrows nikalne ke liye par sab kuch fail ho raha tha.
Tabhi Rati aur Maithili ke muu se blood aane lagta hai.
Dono ne ek baar ek dusre ko dekha aur phir mushkil se smile karte hue Kabir se kaha.
Rati-Kabir shayad hamara saath hi yaha tak tha. Ham apne fate ke aage kuch nahi kar sakte hai.
Maithili-Haan ! Kabir mujhe bhi ab aisa lagta hai. Mein ne aur Rati ne jo tumhare saath pal bitaye hai vo hamari ab tak ki zindagi ke liye kaafi the. Agar is world mei phir se janam lene ki baat sach hai toh ham dono phir se tumhari hi hona chahenge. Par shayad vo is life mei possible nahi hai. Toh please hame aise aansuo ke saath mat bhejo.
Kabir-Mein ne kaha na tum dono mujhe chod kar nahi jaa rahi ho bassss.
Kabir ne Rati aur Maithili ke haato ko tightly pakada aur rone lag gaya tha.
Tabhi Rati ne mushkil se kaha.
Rati-Kabir hamari taraf dekho. Ham tumhari aankho ko apne aankhri saans ke saath dekhna chahte hai. PLEASE !
Kabir ne apne aansuo se bhari aankho se Rati aur Maithili ko dekha. Rati aur Maithili ne ek baar ek dusre ko aur phir Kabir ki aankho ko dekha aur apni aankhri saans li.
Kabir ko Rati aur Maithili ke haato mei kisi bhi tarah ki movement feel nahi ho rahi thi. Usse unke haat kuch heavy lagne lage the. Kabir ka dil hi jaise ruk gaya tha yeh dekh kar. Wahi Shreya, Dina, Zina aur Yuyan ke aankho mei bhi aansu aa gaye the.
Suddenly Kabir khada hota hai aur upar ki taraf dekh kar zor se chillata hai.
"SAGE EMPERORRRRRR!
Kabir ke aisa karte hi jaise pura ka pura Chikong Secret Mansion kaafi zor se hil gaya tha. Kabir ki aawaz kisi thunderstorm ki tarah Chikong Secret Mansion mei gunjh rahi thi.
Abhi kuch pal hi hue the Kabir ke chillane ke baad tabhi sabhi ko phir se Chikong Secret Mansion ka atmosphere heavy feel hone lag gaya tha.
Sabhi jo bhi ho raha tha usse samajhna chahte the par tabhi unhe kuch sunayi deta hai.
"KABIR !"
Kabir apna naam sunkar palat jata hai aur samne dekhta hai.
Waha par ek dark fog se shadow form hone lagti hai. Jaise hi vo dark fog ki shadow completely form hoti hai waise hi pura Omen Rideg aur uske saath pura Kulun World shake ho gaya tha.
Jitney bhi Heaven Realm aur usse powerful warriors the sabhi ko ek hi waqt par internal injuries hui aur unke muu se blood nikalne lag gaya tha.
Yaha Martial Market School mei bhi yahi halat thi. Sirf Western Campus ke Headmaster jo bhi apne indoor practice mei the unpar hi is sab ka koi effect nahi hua tha. Baki Western Campus ke jitney bhi Heaven Realm elders the unhe injuries ho gayi thi.
Yaha Kabir ke haato mei uski Abyss Ancient Sword aa gayi thi aur uska Sword Intent bhi completely release ho gaya tha.
Tabhi us dark fog mei se aawaz aati hai.
"KABIR AAKHIR KAAR HAM MIL HI GAYE. PAR IS BAAR YEH LAST HOGA. IS BAAR YAA TOH TUM BACHOGE. YAA PHIR MEI. TAB TAK KE LIYE YEH MERI TARAF SE EK GIFT HAI HAMARI PEHLI MUALKAAT KA AUR TUMHARE LIYE EK AUR WAJAH HAI MUJHE MARNE KE LIYE. ISSE WASTE MAT KARNA. HAHAHAHA !"
Yeh kehte hi vo dark fog se form hui shadow waha se gayab ho gayi aur phir se Chikong Secret Mansion ka atmosphere normal ho gaya.
Jab Sage Emperor ki shadow waha se chali gayi tab Kabir ke haato se uski Abyss Ancient Sword niche gir gayi aur ek baar phir se usne upar dekhte hue zor se kaha.
"SAGE EMPEROR. AB CHAHE TUM KAHI BHI JAAO MEIN TUMHE KHATAM KAR KE RAHUNGA. IS BAAR SACH MEIN YAA TOH MEIN RAHUNGA YAA PHIR TUM. MEIN IS AAKANKSHA UNIVERSE SE TUMHARA WAJOOD HI MITA DUNGA. SOON RAHE HO SAGE EMPERORRRR !"
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