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Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

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~~INDEX~~

Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "
Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "
Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia "
Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "
Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "
Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "
Finale
Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "

Some Comments for this story :love: (Late Add-on :sigh:)

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।
thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..
सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।
WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai... :bow: :bow: :bow:
Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai... :dazed:

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...
meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai 😍😍😍..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich 🤣🤣🤣..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi 😍😍😍..
Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.
Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it. :applause:
but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone. :angry:
मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।
The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..
Bhatt the phakk is this estory?:redface:
 
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Wo bahut jyada emotional hai..ye aap mugh se bhi behtar jante hai. Mughe biswas hai unhe sahi galat ka ehsaas hoga. Doston me kabhi kabhar kaha-suni ho hi jati hai. Yah bhi Jiwan ka ek hissa hai. Par aage chalkar yahi dosti aur bhi majbut ho jati hai. Aap tension mat kijiye.
Jo sach tha vo batana tha baki samne wale ki marzi bhai :dazed: Main to ata hi kabhi kabar hun
 
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Literally Nainaji it is really sad to see i mean i was literally shocked to see this. You are the one who i personally feel a genuine person. We talked a lot not on stories but do have a little conversation also. I mean you have known me for years and yet i saw such statements towards me without knowing or checking the facts with me. Really disheartened to see, i have no other Mahila pradhan friend bec i do not conversation much with others except you but you made me feel very low today. It does not matter to me if anyone does not comment, if you asked Sanju bhai Or Leon or any other person, really kyun ki mein us moh-maya se uppar uth chuka hun. Mujhe jab samay milta hai main khud kahani likhne ata hu comment ki raahh mein nahi likhta.

Kher jane dijeye, Main apko ek baat clear kar dun jise aap pade na pade mujhe nahi pata lekin sachai jo hai vo sabko pata honi chahie, Jo question apne raise kiya hai apke reviews ka to main apko bata dun. Ye reviews add karna mene tab shuru kiya hai jab aap yahan se chale gaye the isliye bracket mein likha hai (Late Add on :sigh:) Purane jitne review the na hi mene unhe cheda hai na hi unhe hataya hai kyun ki mene purane update ke kisi bhi review ko liya hi nahi. Mene latest update jab mene comeback kiya hai i guess jan mein tabse lene shuru kiye the. To purane delete kaise karunga? Agar apke delete hue hote to sanju bhai ya gyani bhai ya fir nain bhai ke bhi hue hote. Jab mene add karna hi JANUARY 2022 mein shuru kiya hai to pehle ke delete ya edit kaise ho sakte hain?

Kash apne direct mujhse pucha hota maybe mein apko clear kar pata, But regardless you make it a exhibition to everyone with your false statement. I can't do anything in this as this is a virtual world but still you were my favorite nd i don't why you did this, but as i told SANJU ( V. R. ) Bhai ki main ye kaahni aage nahi likh paunga bec of naina jo ab xf se chali gayi hai and ye kahani ane walle hisse mein unko chaunkane wali hai kyun ki unse ek chiz related ayegi but he said ki jo chala jata hai use rok nahi sakte. Aur vo baat aaj samajh ayi hai you are gone for me today. I never expected such thing from you.

But yes one thing, before the end, I am literally glad to see you fit n fine after the accident, I hope u do well in future, cheers :dost:


:bow: :bow: Main apki baat par kuch nahi kahunga kyun ki aap jante ho ki shayad is forum par sabse jada nirasha mene hi dikhai thi Naina ke jane ki not for the reviews but bec of the person. But sometimes, jo galat nahi karta wahi galat kehlata hai. Anyways, Thanks sanju bhai, for clearing it out, rather than unke review jaan kar nahi lena, mene koi bhi purane update ke review liye hi nahi the. Agar liye hote to naina ke sath sabke liye hote. I started added in January 2022 updates, tbhi ke pick kiye the review. Par kher jane dijeye jisko jaisa theek lage. I m just happy she is recovered frm her accident.

Though its a virtual world. She left 5 mnths back and didn't contacted, for me she was gone then with hope but now she does with no hope left :)
Teen din ke andar har update revo mil jaayenge... Night ko....


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Update ~~ 66

" itne police walle to kabhi nahi dekhe mene college mein. Lavanya ki death ke baad bhi nahi dikhe "

" shayad dubara hadsa hua hai isliye college walle risk nahi lena chahte ho " aaruhi ka jawab dete hue shruti ki nazar college ke play area se lekar uske main entrance tak gayi jahan police ki wardi pehne guard dikh rahe the. Subah ke 9 baje the par suraj ki chamak aaj kuch jada hi tez thi. September ka mahina aa chuka tha aur abhi tak garmi jane ka namo-nishan nahi mitta tha. Ek din baarish to agle din chamchamati dhup. Mausam bhi logon ke chehron ki tarah badal raha tha.

" par pata to abhi tak kisi ke bare mein nahi chala na? " aaruhi ne jaise kathor bhasha mein ye shabd kahe. Use bilkul bhi acha nahi lag raha tha ki college ke bache mar rahe hain aur marne walle ka kuch nahi pata yahan tak ki use lag raha tha ki koi dilchaspi hi nahi dikha raha hai. Dono class ki taraf badh rahe the, ground par jada bache nahi the hote bhi kaise. Raton-raat notice nikal diya gaya ki agle adesh tak playground band. Class-room aur library ke alawa college ke students kahin nahi jaa sakte. Wahin hostel ke liye nirdesh saaf the, college se sidha hostel kahin ana jana kuch din ke liye band aur in sabki zimmewari hostel ke warden ki thi. Ye rule sabhi hostel ke liye the chahe vo kisi bhi branch/field ke hostel wasi ho. Bache virodh kar sakte the lekin senior ki maut ki wajah se koi bhi senior virodh mein utra hi nahi aur sabne college ke is rule ko maan liya.

" chal jayega pata bhi.. tu kyun tension le rahi hai. Police apna kaam kar rahi hai "

" Han dekh rahi hun main sab.. Kitna kaam kar rahi hai " aaruhi chalte-chalte ruk gayi " Ek ladka mar gaya to itni security, Lavanya ki maut itni buri tarah se hui uske baad to koi nahi aya tha, uski janch ka kya hua? kuch pata chala? Bata tujhe pata chala? nahi na.. par vo ladka pii kar niche gir gaya uske piche itna sab.. ye.. " aaruhi gusse mein chillai thi, shruti ko laga ki uske emotions trigger ho rahe hain par utne mein ek tisri awaz shruti ke kano mein padi jiski sun kar hi aaruhi chup hui thi.

" abhi to bol dia, dubara mat bol dio Suraj ke bare mein warna " thodi dur khade ladke ke group mein se ek ladka gusse mein chillaya jiski taraf aaruhi aur shruti ki nazar ghumi thi. Jis andaz mein usne kaha tha vo ek dhamki thi aur khuleam vo bhi ladki ko aise dhamkane ke piche vo ladka janta tha ki ladkiyan dar jayegi. Vo abhi bhi gusse mein unhe hi dekh raha tha aur aaruhi shruti use dekh rahi thi. " kya ghur rahi hai .. chal nikal yahan se.. warna aisi dhajiyan udaunga ki kapde pehnne ke baad bhi sharam se mar jayegi.. Sali kutiyan.. senior ko faltu bolti hai.. kya ghur rahi hai abhi tak? Jada bade baap ki auladein ho kya? Oo suno be inse inki branch pata karo zara, class mein jakar inki izat lootte hai tab samajh ayega inhe.. " us ladke ne apne sathiyun se kaha. Ab baat jada aage badh rahi thi, shruti ko gussa aa raha tha bahut jada aa raha tha, par baat khinch kar badana iska samay sahi nahi tha, isliye vo gusse ke is kadwe ghunt ko pee kar kuch bolne wali thi par usne der kar di thi.

" CS - IT , First Year " aaruhi ne turant jawab dia.

" behenchod.. " shruti ne sar pakad liya.

" Itni akad hai tere mein? " vo ladka thoda aage ki taraf badha.

" Han.. akad bhi hai aur pakad bhi.. do kadam aage aur aya to zindagi bhar mutne ke waqt mujhe yaad karega " Aaruhi ki baat sun ek pal vo ladka bhauchka hua aur dusri taraf shruti muh khole use tadne lagi. Use apne dimag aur kaano par vishwas nahi ho raha tha.

" kya boli behenchod.. " ladka apni bezati mehsus karte hi bola.

" behenchod tu haramzade.. tera pura na-mard khandan jise ladkiyun se baat karne ki tameez nahi hai. Aur ab ise jada bola to tujhe aage ane ki jarurat nahi padegi .. maa kasam gote tod dungi tere mein " aaruhi ne ungli dikhate hue gusse mein kaha jise dekh ladke ka halak sukh gaya. Shruti to aaruhi ko hi ghure jaa rahi thi. Aaruhi ke gaal gusse se lal ho chuke the, ankhon mein gussa jaise keel ki tarah nikalta hua dikhai padh raha tha. Aaj se pehle is khubsurat chehre ke piche is gusse ko kabhi nahi dekha tha.

" teri main.. " vo ladka haklata hua bola par itne mein sitti ki awaz ne sabka dhayan us taraf mod dia.

Sitti bajate hue ek halwadar wahan aa khada hua " Kya ho raha hai yahan par? " vo apni awaz bhari karte hue bola taki uske raub se dar jaye. Shruti ko saans ayi, ki ab sab khatam ho jayega bas use is baat ki chinta tha ki Aaruhi ne branch bata diya tha.

" kuch nahi uncle.. hum to bas jaa rahe hain " us ladke ne turant kaha aur do kadam piche mud kar chal diya.

" Ye ladke hume ched rahe the inspector uncle " aaruhi ne turant kaha jiske sath do jano ko jada jhatka laga ek shruti ko aur dusra hawaldar ko kyun ki use inspector jo bol dia tha. Shruti man hi man aaruhi ko gali bakne lagi. Aaj is ladki ko kya ho gaya hai? Ye kya mera murder karwane ki sazish mein aisa kar rahi hai taki iska rasta saaf ho jaye, ho sakta hai aisa? Shruti man hi man sochti use pehle vo hawaldar bola.

" Kya baat kar rahi ho beta.. Ye ladka ched raha tha tumhe.. abhi iski kher nahi... " hawaldar to inspector sunte hi chauda ho gaya tha. Usne fauran sitthi bajai " oye ruk.. " usne us ladke ko roka aur uske pas jaa pahuncha jahan uska jhund khada tha. " Kya be.. bachiyun ko chedte ho tum.. " hawaldar ne jaise hi kaha us ladke ne aaruhi ki taraf gusse bhari nighaon se dekha aur aaruhi ne uski izat ko lut liya ho us tarah ki shaitani muskan uski taraf de fainki.

" Chal apna kaam ho gaya.. " aaruhi wahan se chal di.

" han sahi mein kaam tamam ho gaya hai.. " shruti ne use turant kaha par aaruhi ne koi jawab nahi diya. " tune pange liye to liye par unhe ye batane ki jarurat kya thi ki tu kaun se branch ki hai? "

" Kyun? tu darti hai? "

" Darti? tujhe dar nahi lag raha? Vo senior lag rahe the... tu "

" Kuch nahi hoga hath laga kar dikhaye.. hath aur goti aise todungi na ki samajh nahi ayega dard kahan jada ho raha hai.. mutte hue pakad nahi payega fir.. mazak samajh rakha hai.. sports mein thi main bhul gayi kya tu? "

" main kuch bhuli nahi hun par tu bhool gayi hai ki tu kya hai? "

" main kya hun vo mujhe ab tu batayegi.. gussa aa raha hai mujhe bas.. tu mat padh bich mein.. dekh lungi main "

" lagta hai iski dawai ka ulta asar padh raha hai.. " shruti khud se hi boli " par ladh kar karna kya hai baat badegi "

" badne de.. dekh lenge... tu kab se darne lagi "

" main... main thodi dar rahi hun main to tere liye soch rahi hun "

" han to mat soch.. kisne kaha hai meri maa banne ke liye.. Us ladke ne mujhe gali kaise de di.. ma kasam shruti uski belt uske hi lawde par bandh kar use tatte kaat kar ped par taang dungi.. itna gussa aa raha hai mujhe " aaruhi gusse mein til-mila rahi thi jitna aaj tak shruti ne use kabhi dekha nahi tha.

" kahan kahan se idea lati hai tu.. " shruti ki to samajh se parre tha.

" bas man mein aa jata hai.. tu kahan jaa rahi hai " aaruhi ne shruti ko class ki jagah dusri taraf jata mehsus kiya to pucha.

" jo raiyta tune failaya hai uske liye poche ka intezam karne "

" matlab "

" class mein jaa baad mein samjhaungi " shruti ne itna hi kaha aur vo staff room ki taraf badh chali.

Staff room pahunch kar usne andar jhanka, shuruwati kursiyan khali thi, vo andar dakhil hui to kuch tharake lagne ki awaz sunai di kuch teachers wahan maujud the. Unhe dekhte hue aur unki nazron se bachte hue vo sabse ant mein jaa pahunchi jahan use pahunchna tha. Samne Nandini phone use karte hue kursi par baithi hui thi.

" Miss.. " shruti ne bas itna hi kaha aur nandini ne nazar uppar utha kar shruti ko dekhte hi phone table par rakh dia.

" shruti tum idhar? any problem? is aaruhi fine? "

" Yes miss aaruhi ek dum theek hai vo to class gayi hai... thanks to you actually.. "

" no need.. to fir tum yahan kyun? Class mein kyun nahi ho? "

" vo miss kuch seniors ne hume hamari class mein akar hamari izat uchalenge aisa suna tha mene isliye jaldi se apko batane aa gayi " shruti ne fauran mathe par chinta ki lakrein latte hue apni baat kahi.

" what? " nandini fauran apni jagah se khadi ho gayi.

" i don't know miss lekin mene aisa suna to main turant apko batane aa gayi kyun ki aap hi hai jo ye sab ache se handle kar sakti hai "

" ooh god.. tumne kisi aur ko to nahi bataya na abhi? "

" nahi...kyun? "

" HOD ko pata chal gaya to promotion gayi " nandini apna drawer lock karte hue bol padi aur bolne ke baad usne shruti ki taraf dekha to usne koi reaction hi nahi dia.

" chalein Miss, warna... "

" han han chalo.. jaldi.. i don't want this to escalate further " nandini ne apne suit ke uppar odhi chunni theek ki aur table ke piche se bahar nikli. Uske mudte hi shruti bhi mudi par mudte waqt table par padi books bottle aur kuch saman dhadam se niche aa gira jiske shor se shruti aur nandini dono piche mud gayi.

" sorry miss... pata nahi kaise gir gaye... main .. theek kar deti hun... aap chaliye.. " shruti ne asmanjas bhare bhav se kaha.

" its ok.. tum ise sahi karke aao.. Sumitoj sir ko sath le leti hun.. vo kaam ayenge.. " nandini khud se bolte hue wahan se nikli aur shruti use jatte dekhti rahi. Kuch pal vo waisi hi khadi rahi aur jaise use yakeen ho gaya ki ab vo wapis nahi ane wali. Vo fauran mudi aur table par pada nandini ka phone utha liya.

" lock hai.. passcode mang raha hai.. kya ho sakta hai miss ka passcode.. soch shruti kya ho sakta hai.. miss ke hissab se nahi ek ladki ke hissab se soch tune kya rakha hua hai... mene rakha hua hai apni pehli masturbation wala date to miss ne bhi kuch aisa rakha hoga jaise apne virginity tutne ka date... lekin vo mujhe kaise pata hoga vo koi diary mein thodi likh kar yahan chhodegi.. nahi.. ye nahi rakha hoga unko yaad bhi nahi raha hoga.. ki vo kab chudi rahi hogi aur ab tak kitne baar hi chud gayi hogi.. to fir.. mujhe nahi lagta kuch jada difficult hoga.. birth date.. han ye ho sakta hai.. " kuch sochte hue shruti ne ye maan liya ki birthdate hi hoga passcode vo dalne hi lagi thi " par unka birthdate kya hai? " usne nazar dali to table par I-card pada tha " isme to hoga hi.. " usne I-card uthaya aur usme birthdate dekhne lagi.

" 1984 " usne phone ke passcode mein daal kar enter kiya " wahh shruti.. gazab.. hai tu... " phone unlock hote hi usne whtsapp khola aur screen scroll karke Dr. Alok ke chat box ko khol diya. Ab bari thi kuch message padne ki, dono ke bich khichdi sirf chudam-chudai tak hai ya koi aur bhi khel khela jaa raha hai. Usne chat ko thoda uppar scroll kiya aur us din ki chat par ayi jis din vo aaruhi ko dikhane gaye the jiska message pehle nandini ne kiya hua tha.

' Reached, Patient is arriving. Be on time'

' Ok ' Alok ne reply diya hua tha.


Uske baad ki chat aaruhi ko dekhne ke baad ki thi ' meri penty wahin table ke pas hi farsh par reh gayi. Jald bazi mein pehnna hi bhool gayi. Hata lena.. Warna tumhari wife ne dekh liya to bahut gadbad ho jayegi "

' waoo... '

' don't laugh '

' don't worry, i'll take care of it '

' you better be ' iske baad der raat 2 baje ki chat thi jisme nandini ne message kiya hua tha ' awake? '

' yes '

'alone'

'aise sawal karke mood mat banao'

' penty mili meri? '

' nope'

'what? how is this possible? kahin tumhari wife ne to nahi pakad li?'

' she doesn't come here, usko kaise milegi'

'maid? '

' no.. usko mili hoti to vo mujhe jarur batati'

'how so sure?'

' I know' alok ne iske sath wink wala emoji bheja tha.
'Ye sala tharki maid ki bhi leta hai... Dr nahi lagta mujhe to hawas ka pujari lag raha hai ye.. us din bhi lagta hai mujhe aur urvashi aunty dono ko ankhon se hi chod raha hoga. Shruti khud se bolte hue aage padne lagi.

'strange.. to fir kahan gayi?'

'tum pehen kar bhi ayi thi ' with laugh smily.

'don't be .. i am not in a mood.. i am worried if someone finds out i fuck with you then?'

'then we fuck on regular basis ' laugh smily again.

'shutup.. i want that penty'

'kyun itni pyari hai?'

'nahi.. mujhe bas is baat ko secret rakhna hai. Jala do milne par.. but i want that gone'

'don't worry, mil jayegi to i will do that'
iske baad koi reply nahi diya tha nandini ne aur na hi koi us din baat hui. Penty utha kar galti to nahi kar di, kahin miss ko mujh par hi shaq na ho jayega kyun ki us din main hi gayi thi andar. Par unhe dekh kar laga nahi ki unhe mujh par shaq hai, kya vo koi game khel rahi hai? Ho sakta hai, janti hi kitna hun unke bare mein. Shruti ne scroll karke chat niche ki aur niche ka message padte hi vo thoda shock ho gayi.

'I found your penty and i burned it, now don't worry' message alok ne bheja hua tha nandini ko next day.

'Thank god.. Kahan par thi?'

'wahin table ke andar ghus gayi thi'

'hmm'

'so fir hum kab mil rahe hain?'
ye akhri message tha iske baad koi reply nahi gaya tha nandini ka. Shruti ka sar chakra gaya tha, vo samajh nahi paa rahi thi ki alok ko penty mili kaise jab vo usne utha li thi? Kya alok ne nandini se juth bola? par kyun? Sach bhi to bol sakta tha? Sala mazra kya hai ye dono ka? Ek minute.. ab in dono par bhrosa karna thoda risky lag raha hai. Isne aaruhi ko ise dikhane ke liye kaha tha to uske bare mein bhi to chat hogi. Shruti ne wapis se scroll karna shuru kiya lekin is dafa uppar ki taraf, vo us din wali chat tak pahunchi jis din aaruhi alok se mili thi, usne uppar scroll kiya par uppar to aaruhi ko lekar koi baat nahi dikhi. Normal message the, How are you? Which city are you in? Congrats, ye sab bakchodi wali chat hai, kaam ki chat kyun nahi hai. Kyun ki chat ab dino tak nahi mahino aur saal tak piche jaa chuki thi, samne date flash ho rahi thi, aaj se theek teen saal pehle ki, 11 September 2009. Congrats kis baat ka? Shruti ko samajh nahi aya ki alok ne nandini ko kis baat ka congrats diya. Usne ek dafa sochne ke baad dhayan hata kar is baat par lagaya ki aaruhi ke piche jo bhi baat hui uska koi text message nahi hai yani ki dono ne jo baat ki vo phone par hi ki hogi. Ab ye pata lagana mushkil hai ki Miss ne aaruhi ki help kyun ki? Aur agar ki to kya koi sazish rachi hai dono ne mil kar isliye text par baat nahi hai? Kyun ki dono ko apne profession ka khatra tha? Ye ek negative side hai aur agar positive sochun to? shruti abhi soch hi rahi thi aur sochte sochte hue vo scroll up kar rahi thi, scroll up karte hue use pata nahi chala tha kab vo ek dum top par aa pahunchi hai. Chat par date thi, 2008 ki par use jada interest use us message par tha jo nandini ki taraf se bheja hua tha.

' Tumhe yaad karke aaj mene do bar ungli ki '

'itna to aaj se pehle kabhi nahi jhadi'

'tumhare liye main ek randi tak ban gayi par tumhe mujhse jada Raman mein interest hai. Par yaad rakhna ek din tum mere piche hi aaoge'


Message jitne ajeeb aur vakye ko rehasmye bana rahe the use jada hairani wali baat ye thi ki Ye teeno message kabhi Alok ko deliever hue hi nahi the. Uspar abhi tak single tick tha. Samajh pana mushkil ki single tick par message reh jana shruti ko ek pal samajh nahi aya ki kaise mumkin hai? Usne kabhi is tarah whtsapp par kuch try nahi kiya tha, isliye vo confuse thi ki aisa kaise ho sakta hai. Sochte hue uski nazar mobile ke time par gayi aur tab use laga ki ye sab karte hue use kareeb 4-5 minute beet chuke hai aur jada time nahi hai uske pas lekin abhi jaise use laga ki ek dafa use aur niche padna chahie kahin kuch miss to nahi kar diya usne. Usne is baar dhayan se scroll down karna shuru kiya pichli baar vo soch mein thi isliye nahi dekha tha par is baar nahi aur is baar jaise use kuch dikha jo vo us dafa dekhna reh gayi thi.

Aaruhi ke milne se theek 8... nahi nahi.. 10-12 din pehle ki baat hai... nahi.. ye baat to us din ki hai jis raat main aaruhi ko lekar us hostel se Miss ke ghar aye the. Usi subah ki hai.. Miss ne message kiya hua tha.

'need help'

'again'

'yes'

'to is baar apna hissab pura kar dena last time ka'

'tum us baat ko aaj tak nahi bhule ho'

'baat bhul gaya par tumhari baat nahi bhula hun jo tumne kahi thi. Ki badle mein kuch bhi de dungi.. '

'tumhe to main pasand hi nahi thi?'

'Waqt ke sath pasand badal jati hai Nandini, You are in or out?'

'What about your wife?'

'She doesn't need to know' wink smily ke sath aage bhi likha hua tha.'If you agree to give me what i want, just call me'


Sala yahan bhi adhuri baat... In dono ki baton ne to dimag hi kharab kar diya hai. Shruti ne time dekha to use laga ki ab aur jada der nahi ruk sakti isliye usne jaldi se whtsapp back kiya aur dubara back karke hatti use pehle uski nazar ek dusri chat par padi jispar padte hi uska man lalcha gaya isliye usne fauran chat box khola par chat padne ka jada time nahi tha isliye usne apne dimag ka istemal karte hue fauran apna phone nikala aur camera on karke chat ki photo click karne lagi, jitni use jarurat lagi usne utni chat ki photo li aur phone lock karke table par rakh diya. Niche gira saman usne fatt se uthaya aur turant staff room se bahar nikal gayi. Staff room se bahar nikal kar thodi dur ayi hi use samne Nandini aur Sumitoj sir khade apas mein baat cheet karte hue dikh gaye. Use pata tha ki kya bahana marna hai parantu use aisa karne ki jaruat hi nahi padi.

" Thanks.. tumne aaj sahi time par information de di. Kuch seniors aye the lekin main aur sumitoj sir sahi time par pahunch gaye aur sab sambhal liya. Anyways, tum class mein jao .. " Nandini ne shruti ko dekhte hi kaha aur Sumitoj sir ke sath wahan se nikal li.

" Kamal hai.. bahana jo main marne wali thi hua kuch aisa hi aur yahan to kahani hi sach ho gayi, kabhi kabar lagta hai is kahani ko main hi likh rahi hun... abhi class nahi kone mein ye chat padni jaruri hai" shruti ko jaise hi un chats ki yaad ayi vo fauran sidiyun se niche ki taraf utri. Usne gallery khol kar chat padna shuru hi kiya tha ki tabhi uska phone baj utha.

" isko bhi abhi hi karna tha phone " vishal ka phone dekhte hi vo bol padi " Hello "

" samne dekho " vishal ki baat sun usne samne dekha lekin vo abhi first floor par thi samne use koi nahi dikha.

" hawa mein kya dekhun? "

" i mean niche.. " shruti aage corridor ki taraf ayi aur niche dekha. Vishal niche khada tha.

" Kya hua? "

" niche aao "

" wahin to aa rahi thi, direct nahi bol sakte the itna uppar niche kyun dikhwa rahe ho.. aa rahi hun rakho phone " shruti ne phone cut kiya aur niche aa khadi hui. Dhoop tezz hoti jaa rahi thi, vishal aur shruti dono library ke kone mein baithe the.
 
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" tumhe kaise pata chala ki main uppar hun? "

" miss. nandini se baat kar rahi thi tab dekha tha niche se "

" phone kab theek hua? "

" kal hi karwaya "

" hmm.. Gaggan kaisa hai "

" aaj kal busy hi rehta hai.. facebook par almost.. waise tum Miss nandini ke staff room mein kya karne gayi thi? " vishal ke puchte hi shruti ka chehra fikka padh gaya.

" tu..tumhe kaise pata " usne apna galla saaf kiya.

" main wahin usi floor par tha jab tum andar gayi thi. Tumhe awaz bhi di thi par tumne suni nahi shayad "

" aur tum wahan kya kar rahe the? "

" Subah koi jhagda hua tha tumhara aur aaruhi ka kisi senior ke sath? "

" tumhe ye bhi pata hai? " shruti fir hairan thi.

" Hamare hi hostel ka ladka hai.. suraj ka dost tha.. aisi baat kahan chupti hai.. panga le liya tum dono ne "

" mene nahi aaruhi ne.. pata nahi kya hua tha use... tum use samjha sakte ho.. keh dena ki aaruhi thodi bimar thi aisa kuch koi bhi bahana karke... vo sala.. class tak aa gaya tha ladne ke liye "

" malum hai "

" offcourse tumhe pata hoga... ek minute " shruti jaise chup hui aur use samajh aya " tum isliye floor par the hamare kyun ki tum bhi ladai mein shamil hue the "

" mujhe nahi pata tha ki vo tumhari class mein jaa raha hai jab pata laga to main uppar aya tab tum dikhi, tumhe awaz bhi di lekin tumne nahi suni, tumhare pas ata lekin use pas aaruhi thi isliye mene use hi puch liya aur usne mujhe sab bataya aur tabhi main sab chhod kar niche wapis chala gaya. Tumhe message bhi kiya par tumhara net band tha isliye send nahi hua. Phone isliye nahi kiya kyun ki tum staff-room mein thi.. uske baad to Miss aur sumitoz sir wahan aa gaye aur unhone un sabko class ke bahar hi rok liya. Isliye mene pucha kya tum yahi batane gayi thi unhe? Agar aisa hai to aaruhi ke sath tumne bhi panga le liya hai " vishal ne sidhe lafzon mein keh dia.

" ek minute.. tum mere bf ho ya us ladke ke? " shruti ke kehte hi vishal use ghurne laga " kya ghur rahe ho? "

" kabhi ye baat hui hi nahi ki hum gf/bf hai isliye shocked hun " vishal ki baat sun shruti ko bhi samajh aya ki bf/gf wali baat to kabhi hui hi nahi thi. Vishal man hi man muskura raha tha.

" mere kehne ka matlab hai.. tum kaise ho... mujhe aise kuch kar dia us ladke ne fir? "

" nahi.. nahi.. main aisa nahi hone dunga.. lekin tum bich mein pado hi mat na "

" main kahin nahi padh rahi bich mein.. main to sirf Dr Alok ka number mangne gayi thi unse "

" acha.. ye baat thi..fir to theek hai warna miss nandini ko kisi ne bataya hai aur vo tumne bataya hai ye baat kahin se pata chalti to.. " vishal bolte hue chup hua jaise use kuch yaad aya ho " par tumhare pas to business card tha na unka? " vishal ki baat sunte hi shruti ko pehle khud par gussa aya ki usne vishal ko itni detailing mein sab kuch kyun bata rakha hai. Us din alok ke kamre se nikalte hue usne uska card rakh liya tha.

'Ye ladke inhe sab kaise yaad reh sakta hai...' shruti man hi man boli " Han tha.. par ab nahi hai... kyun ki card kho bhi sakta hai.. understand? " shruti jhanjhante hue boli.

" understood.. " vishal mimyate hue bola. " to? " vishal ne nazre utha kar pucha.

" to kya? " shruti ka lehza abhi bhi waisa hi tha.

" ma.....matlab.. number... mila.. "

" han.. mil gaya.. aur kuch? aur kuch janna hai.. main kab susu gayi? kitna susu kiya.. kitna nahai.. kaun se sabun se nahai.. ye sab janna hai? " shruti ke is harkat ko dekh vishal ka halak hi sukh gaya.

" sorry samajh gaya.. " vo apni jagah se uthne laga par shruti ne turant uska hath pakad kar niche khinch kar baitha dia.

" kyun uth rahe ho? "

" jaa raha tha "

" kyun ? "

" vo tum aise chillai to laga ki ishara de rahi ho ki main jaaun "

" chup chaap baithe raho.. aur ab meri baat dhayan se suno " abhi shruti itni hi boli ki samne kisi ko khada pakar halka sa muskura di. Vishal ne bhi uski nazron ka picha kiya samne Rachna ki behen aur college ki librarian Ruhani khadi thi.

" Library hai jante ho na tum dono? "

" ji.. " shruti ne jawab dia.

" Awaz niche karke baat karo " Vo itna bol kar jane lagi ki fir se mud kar unki taraf dekhne lagi " Exam to khatam ho chuke to tum dono library mein kya kar rahe ho? class nahi leni? Kaun se branch ke ho? " ek ke baad ek sawal ke aage dono sust padh gaye kya bole ek minute to sochne mein hi laga dia.

" Research Project par kaam kar rahe hain " shruti boli.

" Acha.. Kaun se year ke ho? "

" 3rd year.. Mam.. " shruti ne fir jawab dia.

" aur.. " itna hi boli ki Ruhani ka phone bajne laga. " Han Rachna.. to de de.. keh rahi hun de de.. awaz nahi aa rahi kya... " ruhani thoda unchi awaz mein boli to shruti aur vishal usko ghurne lage kyun ki isi baat ko lekar vo unhe lecture dene ayi thi. Ruhani jhempte hue dhime awaz mein bolti hui ' awaz nahi aa rahi..' wahan se chali gayi.

" bacha liya rachna ne.. "

" seriously? " shruti ne apna phone vishal ki taraf ghumaya to vishal ko shruti ki intelligence dekh hairani jada hui. Usne rachna ko message kar rakha tha 'call your sister aur koi bahana bana jaldi'

" tumne phone use kar liya aur pata bhi nahi chala "

" talented aise hi nahi kehti khud ko main.. Ab tumse jo jaruri baat karni thi vo suno "

" kaun si jaruri baat? "

" yaad hai suraj ke marne ke agle din meeting hui thi "

" han.. hui thi "

" mujhe us meeting ke bare mein janna hai "

" shruti tum fir se wahi keh rahi hun.. meeting ke bare mein kaise janogi.. sirf teachers hod's director ko pata hai aur unse puchne jayenge na to pata nahi kya hoga "

" tum ek to puri baat suna karo pehle.. "

" ok... sunao "

" meeting mein police ne kuch report share ki hogi.. mujhe vo chahie.. "

" kaisi report? "

" death report "

" par kyun? "

" kyun mat pucho abhi.. mujhe bas vo chahie kaise doge ye batao "

" main kaise de sakta hun.. tumhe pata hai vo meeitng director office mein hui thi.. aur agar koi report police ne share ki hogi na to wo wahin hogi us office ke andar.. aisi baatein wahin chupi hoti hai "

" exactly.. isliye sirf suraj ki hi report nahi balki wahan aur bhi kai aisi reports hogi.. vishal mujhe vo sab chahie.. "

" nahi nahi.. nahi.. keh do ki tum mazak kar rahi ho " vishal ne hanste hue kaha.

" filmi dialog mat maro bahut bure dikh rahe ho... ye mazak nahi hai.. mujhe sach mein chahie "

" kahan se dun main? "

" mujhe nahi pata.. par itna pata hai ki koi to hoga jo is hera pheri ko karwa sakta hai jab sala yahan is library mein books ki koi hera pheri karta hai aur vo bhi kufia raste mein to kuch bhi ho sakta hai " shruti ne fusfusate hue apni baat kahi.

" vo director ka office hai shruti.. wahan koi kuch nahi kar sakta.. vo book wala koi senior shararti hai.. pakda bhi gaya to use kya saza milegi kuch nahi.. vo book hi to deta hai.. par ye chori hai.. tumhe bataya tha mene is waqt haalat kaise hai.. hum bahut bura fasenge.. "

" nahi fasenege.. "

" kaise nahi fasenege... maan lo agar koi hoga bhi aisa banda to use khojenge kaise? batao.. kisi se jakar puchenge ki bhai tu director ke office mein gochi kar sakta hai? bolo.. " vishal ki baat shruti ko ek dum sahi jami, ye risk bada hi tagda tha. " This is too risky.. tumhe ye idea drop karna padega.. " Shruti ka man nahi maan raha tha par vishal ki baat sahi thi. Direct pucha aur director ko pata chal gaya to itna bura anjam hoga jiske bare mein soch kar bhi ruh kaamp uthe. Lekin jankari to chahie hi.. par kaise mile? shruti soch rahi thi ki vishal ki baat ne uska dhayan toda.

" Book se yaad aya.. tumne us book ko pada jo tumhe us rehasmaye bande ne di thi? " Shruti ne vishal ki baat ka koi jawab nahi diya, uske dimag mein filal us report ko kaise hassil kare vo chal raha tha.

Jitni jada chauksi college mein thi utni hi hostel ke aas paas bhi thi. Security kafi tight thi, ab ye sab kuch din sirf dikhane ke liye tha ya hakikat ab ye aage hi malum chalne wala tha. Sabhi parents ka pressure tha aur kuch parents ka jada tha. Ameer hai isliye.. aur ammero ki sunni padti hai. College mein bache safe hai is baat ki chinta har kisi ko hoti hai. Aaruhi ki mummy ko bhi thi jo abhi use baat kar rahi thi. Raat ke 10 baj rahe the, shruti use hi dekh rahi thi. Dekhte-dekhte use jo baat yaad ayi ki aaruhi ne teen naam liye the jise vo apna dost manti thi, Raveena, Megha, Kalpana. Raveena vo jo aaj se 5-6 saal pehle hostel ke bathroom mein mari, Megha .. Ek unknown fiction character jis naam se vo mujhe kabhi kabhi bulati hai aur Kalpana.. real world ki padosan.. Teeno hi alag-alag zone ke log hai.. par aisa kyun chunna hai isne? Sochte hue shruti ne whtsapp khola aur Aaruhi Mom walle chat box ko khola jisme abhi tak itni hi baat hui thi ki aaruhi kaisi hai aur uski daily report kaisi hai jo vo aaruhi se nahi puch sakti thi.

" Apko Raveena ke bare mein kuch mila? Ya fir aaruhi ke kisi friend se uske bare mein koi information? " shruti ne message send kar dia. Reply baad mein ana tha. Usne phone side mein rakha aur ankhein band kar li. Aaruhi aur uske ird-gird jo bhi ghum raha tha vo kisi chiz se juda hua hai? Kya vakai mein vo possesed hai? Agar hai to ye kis tarah ka possession hai? Gaggan sahi keh raha hai? Ye possession waisa hi hai jaisa book mein likha hai? Main kyun himmat nahi jutta paa rahi hun us book ko padne ki? Kya hoga us book mein jise padne se main ghabra rahi hun? Sawalon ke is dher mein kab uski ankh lag gayi use malum nahi chala.

Agli subah mausam garmi se raha bhara tha, badal chaye hue the aur halki baarish ho rahi thi. Takreeban 7 baje ke kareeb hostel ki ladkiyan uthni shuru ho hi jati hai. Unme se hi ek ladki apne room se angdaiyan lete hue balcony mein ayi. Balcony baarish ki wajah se gilli thi. Bunda bandi baarish thi lekin theek uppar ped ke chalte vo choti bundein moti ban kar uske sharir par gir rahi thi. Usne apna hath aage kiya aur jaise hi forearm par ek thandi moti bund girti to vo thoda chehak padti. Aisa karte hue use bada acha lag raha tha jise karte hue usne socha ki kuch der aise hi khadi rahe aur usi ke chalte uski nazar apne se bayein taraf balcony ki mundair par padi. Jab se vo bahar nikli thi uska dhayan hi nahi gaya tha us taraf. Wahan khade reh kar use laga ki jaise kisi janwar ne potty kar rakhi hai par vo waisi lag bhi nahi rahi thi, isliye jigasya purvak janne ke liye vo thoda sa us taraf gayi. Par use tabhi bhi samajh nahi aaya to vo aur kareeb gayi aur dur se hi dekhne lagi.

" kya ajeeb si chiz hai.. par... " itne mein use apne sar par kuch girta mehsus hua, pani ki moti bund hoti to samajh jati lekin ye vo nahi thi isliye usne fauran apna hath sar par rakha aur us chiz ko utha kar jaise hi hatheli ankhon ke samne ki ek pal laga use samjhne mein par jaise hi vo samjhi vo chiki aur chikte hue usne use hath se niche gira diya. Niche girate hi usne apna sar uppar kiya aur tabhi uske chehre par baki ka hissa bhi aa gira jiske girte hi vo zoron se cheekh padi. Cheekh ki wajah se uska chehra kampte hue hilne laga tha uski wajah se vo lund fisalta hua niche farsh par jaa gira jiska ek andkosh us mundair par pada tha aur dusra usne abhi sar se utha kar wahin bagal mein fenka tha. Jaise hi ankhon ke uppar se lund hata ped se latke insan ko dekh uski cheekh dougni badh gayi jo purre hostel mein gunj uthi.
 
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