Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

[harshit1890]

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Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "​

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Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "​

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Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "​

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Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "​

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Finale Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "​

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Some Comments for this story (Late Add-on )

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।

thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..

सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।

WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai...

Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai...

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...

meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai ..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich ..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi ..

Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it.

but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone.

मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।

The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..

Bhatt the phakk is this estory?

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

nice update ...supriya ko raat ko phone aaya par number nahi tha ..uske baal bahut teji se jhad rahe hai ..
kuch to raaz hoga in baato ka ..

megha to tharki hai aur sex ke aag me jal rahi hai ..lagta nahi hai abhi chudai ki hogi uski aakash ne ..
aur itna sex bhara hai ki darwaja bina lagaye hi ungali karne lagi .. aur bich me hi supriya aa gayi aur megha ka maja adhura reh gaya ..

aur ye shor kaisa hai ,lagta hai kuch kaand ho gaya yaa koi ladki ki maut ..

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

nice update ..to warden ko condom mila jaggu ke paas wo bhi chocolate flavour wala ..bechari jaggu us condom ko barabar check bhi nahi kar paayi ..
aur ye warden burchati hai jo sonu ko apni gaand deti hai par sonu ladka hai ya ladki abhi pata nahi ..shayad ladki hi ho ..

tanu aur komal to bahut giri hui ladkiya hai college ki jo nayi ladkiyo ki ragging leti hai aur ashleel sawaal puchhti hai ..

supriya ne jo tanu ke baare me kaha kahi wo sach na ho jaaye ...

 

[Naina]

Jageshwari

jab jagi tabhi savera

 

[harshit1890]

for new thread

Thanks bhai

Photu me jo chhodi chhe uski khubsurti me kahe gaye shree nain11ster ji dwara abhutpurv shabd..

Je kariya kariya tandoor bhatti se nikla sharir
Aur uspe je tere dimond si chamkti ankhiyan
Dekha jo tujhe jana
Hua hai mare ko pyar...

Poster aur thread realese ki badhaeyan..

Shukriya bhai

Baat kuch kare poster dekhkar feeling ki to ...

Ek sham mastani kale Sayon me giraft hui jaye... Dark theme.... Bole to sex violece aur brutality ... Naina SANJU ( V. R. ) Nevil singh DARK WOLFKING kamdev99008

Aap sab ke mai vistrit vichar janna chahunga ki poster dekhkar aap kya feel kar rahe

Brutiality, sex ye sab to mein abhi se nahi keh sakta par is baar kosish yahi rahegi ki sab ek kuch is fantasy mein fit ho jaye

Pahle update ki pratiksha... Ati shighr patan kar dijiye update iss thread par

Posted nain11ster

Yeh bahot buri baat hai.. yaar harshit1890 saheb ne horror story start ki par hume bulaya tak nahi

Maaf kijeye, mere ko bhi malum na tha ki aisa kuch karne wala hun

..nayi kahani ke liye ..

Thanks bhai

Shadi me bade fufi ka role me hai kya madam jo jibh dikha rahi... Kahani padhne ke liye reader ko bulana hoga... He to ghor kalyug hai

Dawat mein bula lo sab aa jayenge yahan nahi ayenge

poster se bhutiya lag rahi hai kahani ..side me do aadmi dikh rahe hai ..aur hostel ke upar baadal mandra rahe hai ..par dekhte hai kahani kaisi hai ..
fantasy me hai isliye kaha ..

Han bhai fantasy mein hai to bahut kuch hone ke chances hai

Thankoo so much for detail analysis... Mere bhi vistrit vichar kuch aise hi the... Nahi likha kyonki aap cnp kar lete to

Aap bade log ho isliye bata dete ho pehle hi...

For new story harshit1890 sahab

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Thanks nainaji

Aur yeh sab sirf aur sirf us tharki imli ki wajah se ho raha hai

toh yeh hai girls hostel
waise kaafi khubsurat hai.. aur sath hi amazing bhi...
Bas intezaar hai toh bhoot bhootni ki joh hevaniyat ka ek naya level dikhaye hum sabhi ko pet fad antriya nikal de kirdaaro ka

Han thodi ajeeb si bani hai poster mein par kuch kuch aisa hi mano ki vo aisi hi hai Are bhoot voot na hai isme kuch bhi

aur haan is story me na malini, bablu kaka aur manju bhoot bhootni hone chahiye.. jaise kisi college group ke kaaran (directly ya indirectly) woh tino maare gaye.. ab yeh log gaon ghumne aaye toh woh tino bhoot bhootni inlogo se badla le woh bhi khaufnaak tarike se.. pet pad antriya nikal de.. Aisi bhayanak
aur haan chaahe toh isme us tharki vikrant ko savior bana sakte hai.. jiski band baja de malini, manju aur bablu kaka ke aatmaye
aur haan isme meera bhi as a bhootni bana dijiye.. par chorni type ki bhootni hona chahiye.....
khauf ka aisa mahol banaye ki ruh tak kaanp jaaye, reedh ki haddi tak kap kapi cha jaaye..

Kosish rahegi, kuch personal experiences bhi share ki jayegi kahani mein

Congrats hariya bhai
Fantasy horror

Thanks gyani bhai horror se jada hostel ke maze lena

 

[Vikram Bhosle]

SuperB

 

[Naina]

are harsu ji jaldi jaldi do tin bhoot,bhootni, pishas, chudail joh bhi mile bajar le aaiye is story pe.. aur kuch toh dar ka mahol bane

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" tumne kya socha tha bra mein condom chupaogi warden ko malum nahi chalega, Shailja naam hai mera har chiz ki khabar rakhti hun "

" par warden condom rakhna koi jurm to nahi hai? " jis ladki ko warden ne pakda tha vo boli.

" Tu mujhe kanun samjhayegi, aaj condom kal launda layegi mere hostel mein. Tera ek hafte tak hostel se nikalna band "

" lekin college ? "

" college ki chinta tujhe is condom ko latte hue nahi hui "

" warden lekin "

" agli baar mujhe ye dikha aur sirf tere pas hi nahi kisi ke pas bhi to pure mahine kisi ko hostel se nikalne nahi dungi, chalo sab jao yahan se " warden chillate hue apne kamre ki taraf badh gayi.

Great... Warden ho toh aisi

" ek number ki madarchodni warden hai "

" iska pati ise chodta nahi hai kya? jo condom dekh kar itna bhadak gayi "

" aisi aurat ka pati hoga lagta hai, ek number ki randi hai sali, sahi kehte hain ise hostel wale, jaisi gand wesi rand " apas mein ladkiyan baat kar rahi aur jab tak supriya megha niche aye bheed chatt chuki thi.

hey harshit1890 saheb in ladkiyon ko sadbuddhi de.

" kya ho raha tha yahan ? " megha ne char ladkiyun ki taraf dekhte hue pucha jinme se ek vo bhi thi jiska condom warden le gayi thi.

" kuch nahi wahi warden iska condom le gayi aur ye bhi kaha ki agar koi condom laya to 1 mahine tak use hostel se bahar nikalne nahi degi "

" condom kyun? aur tu condom ka kya kar rahi thi jaggu ? " jaggu ka asli naam Jageshwari Chautala Singh tha. Isne jab sab ke samne apna intro diya tha to hostel ki ladkiyun ne iski gand hi maar li thi iske naam ko lekar isliye isne apna naam jaggu kar diya. Thi ye punjaban aur us wajah se behad sundar bhi lekin akal kam hone ki wajah se ek bhi ladka ise do din se jada baat nahi kar pata tha. Megha aur supriya ke batch ki hi thi isliye megha ise janti thi aur supriya bas utna hi jitna megha ne bataya tha.

" yar megha condom ka ad dekha kal chochlate flavor vala to socha kharid kar dekhti hun ki iska flavour hota kithe hai " jaggu ki baat sun supriya megha aur megha use ghurne lagi " par warden le gayi ab pata nahi vo kya karegi "

" koi baat nahi main tujhe lakar dungi, stawberry wala, tu chhod warden ko vaise bhi tujhe to pata hai na ki vo "

" burchatti hai aur sonu ko apni gand deti hai "

" correct " megha ne jaggu ke chehre par muskan laa di thi. Vo use thank you bol aur condom lane ka yaad dila kar wahan se chali gayi. Supriya ne uski taraf dekha mano keh rahi ho ki kya chal raha hai ye sab?

bichari jaggu kitni bholi aur masoom hai.. in hostel waliyo ke sang rahkar thodi muhfat ho gayi hai..

" padai ke alawa tujhe sab karna hai "

" tabhi to hostel aye hai meri jaan varna padai to ghar se bhi ho jati hai. Lekin jo karam kand hostel mein hote hain unka to maza hi alag hota hai "

" tune warden ki warning nahi suni? agar usne tujhe pakad liya to "

" condom hi hai vo aise jagah ghusaungi jahan koi nahi dhund payega "

" kahan? "

" jahan lawda ghusta hai meri jaan "

" haramzadi hai tu, main jaa rahi hun, tu aa rahi hai na? "

baakiyo ka to pata nahi lekin haan in tharki ladki logis ki maharani maha tharki jarur hai yeh megha
Iski harkate dekh bablu kaka aur chorni meera bhi sharma jaaye

" han bas ati hun tu canteen mein kuch order karke rakhio " megha vapis apne room ki taraf chal di aur supriya college ki taraf. Girls hostel se nikalte hi ek lamba corridor tha jiske us paar boys hostel tha aur college ke andar jane ka rasta unka usi taraf se tha. Boys hostel ke kisi bhi ladke ko is taraf se college mein dakhil hone ki permission nahi thi jiski wajah kuch saal pehle hua ek kand tha jiske bare mein supriya ko abhi tak malum nahi hua tha. Par fir bhi kai baar ladke apni mehbubaon se milne ke liye hostel ki piche wali deewar fank liya karte the jisme madad unki mehbubyaein hi karti thi.

Kand..? Kya kisiko jaan se maar diya tha wahan pe?

Supriya ne hostel ko piche chhoda aur vo college ke premises mein pahunch gayi. College ke premisis ke bheetar pahunchte hi uski nazar entrance gate par padi jahan kuch ladkiyan khadi thi jinhe dekhte hi vo samajh gayi ki vo charon ladkiyan wahi hai jinse vo pehle din takrai thi. Supriya ko waise to der ho rahi thi lekin vo wahin khadi rahi aur us taraf dekhti rahi, phir unhi ki taraf chalte hue ek kone mein jaa khadi hui jahan se chehre saaf ho gaye aur unki awazein bhi. " Tanu " supriya uska chehra kaise bhool sakti thi, college ke final year mein thi aur pehle din yahi use takrai thi.

" naam kya bataya tha tune apna? "

" ji veena "

" vagina ye kaisa naam hua bhala? " tanu ne mazak udaya aur charon ek sath hasne lagi. Samne khadi do ladkiyun ne nazre jhuka rakhi thi, vo behad ghabra rahi thi.

" tere maa baap ko vagina se itna pyar tha ki unhone naam usi par rakh diya "

" ji vag..vagina nahi veena " veena ne ghabrate hue jawab diya.

" acha chal naam mein kya rakha hai, vagina tu ye bata tere chuchiyun ka size kya hai, dekhne mein to ache lag rahe hain "

" ji vo vo " veena ne apne sath khadi ladki ki taraf dekha jo nazar jhukaye khadi thi jise abhi tak ek bhi sawal nahi kiya gaya tha abhi tak sarre hamle usi par ho rahe the.

" tu uski fikar mat kar uska bhi number ayega, tu apna bata chal " samne se awaz sun veena ne ek pal rahat ki sans li.

" didi vo.. "

" didi? main teri didi lagti hun sali chutiya hai kya? tujhe malum nahi ki seniors ko kya bolte hain ? "

" sorry vo galti se nikal gaya "

" galti se mera nikal gaya na peshab to wahi pila dungi, chal bata jaldi apni chuchiyun ka size bata ? "

" 32 B " usne fatafat se jawab diya.

" are wah dekh rahi hai komal iski jawani, pakka kai laundo se dabwati aa rahi hogi, chut masalti hai apni? bata-bata sharma mat " koni marte hue vo veena se boli.

" ji nahi.. "

" jhuth bolti hai apne senior se jhuth bolti hai, komal ise shift ke baad apne kamre mein lekar aa, zara dekhe ye jhooth bol rahi hai ya nahi, abhi tu jaa vagina shift ke baad milio "

" main sach bol rahi hun " veena ke sine par pasina tha jo fisalta hua uske top mein se andar ghus raha tha.

" vo tu nahi main bataungi chal bhag " veena ghabrate hue jane lagi aur uske sath jo ladki thi vo bhi lekin Tanu ne use rok liya " tu kahan jaa rahi hai? tujhe bola hai abhi jane ko? "

" lagta hai lesbian hai dono ek dusre mein ungli karne ka man ho gaya hoga " komal bol kar hasne lagi.

" lesbian hai tu? " tanu ke puchne par vo sar na mein hilane lagi " jaise gardan hila rahi hai waise lawda hilaya hai kabhi? "

Supriya ise jada dekhti use pehle vo wahan se hatt gayi ye in logon ka aksar ka kaam tha, abhi ek mahina bhi nahi hua naya batch chalu hue aur ye roz khadi ho jati hai nayi ladkiyun ki marne mein. Badi hi jaleel hai ye tanu maa kasam mera bas chalta na to isko hostel ke gate ke aage nanga karke tangti aur ek danda iske niche se dal kar muh se nikal deti aur fir puchti kaisa laga vagina mein lawda? Main bhi kya soch rahi hun, ye sab megha ka asar hai.

Kitna khoon sawar hai is haaraman tanu ke dimag pe.. kitni gandi gandi gaaliya de rahi hai...
waise inki bhi kya dosh.. jab ek din Veena aur woh ladki bhi seniors banegi woh bhi wohin karegi jo abhi tanu kar rahi hai....
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Khair.. ab intezaar hai toh bas horror thrill ki
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skill harshit sahab

 

[Naina]

" ek number ki madarchodni warden hai "

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Congratulations for new story bhai.

मुझे पता था कि कलाकार और साहित्यकार बहुत दिनों तक चुपचाप खामोश नहीं रहने वाले हैं ।
लग तो यही रहा है कि ये स्टोरी भी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाएगी ।

 

[Naina]

aisi aurat ka pati hoga lagta hai, ek number ki randi hai sali, sahi kehte hain ise hostel wale, jaisi gand wesi rand " apas mein ladkiyan baat kar rahi

matlab yeh log character certificates bhi banati hai kya

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Baat kuch kare poster dekhkar feeling ki to ...

Ek sham mastani kale Sayon me giraft hui jaye... Dark theme.... Bole to sex violece aur brutality ... Naina SANJU ( V. R. ) Nevil singh DARK WOLFKING kamdev99008

Aap sab ke mai vistrit vichar janna chahunga ki poster dekhkar aap kya feel kar rahe

सिम्पल है नैन भाई !
तस्वीर देख कर ही लग रहा है कि ये हर्षित भाई स्टाइल जैसा ही स्टोरी है ।
गर्ल्स हॉस्टल.... लड़कियाें का कालेज.... कुछ सहेलियां तो कुछ एक दूसरे की दुश्मन.... कुछ उनके मेल फ्रेंड...और हास्टल के उपर काले बादल... मतलब सभी की मौत ( हर्षित भाई का स्टाइल ) ।
और लड़कियों की एक अनोखी सेक्सुअल लाइफ ।
बाकी तो हर्षित भाई ही कहेंगे ।