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Fantasy " Girls Hostel "

harshit1890

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~~INDEX~~

Chapter 1 ~~ " Supriya "
Chapter ~~ 2 " The Illusion "
Chapter ~~ 3 " Catatonic Schizophrenia "
Chapter ~~ 4 " A True Face "
Chapter ~~ 5 " The Antiquarian "
Chapter ~~ 6 " The Amazon "
Finale
Chapter 7 : " Book Of Hoax "

Some Comments for this story :love: (Late Add-on :sigh:)

सच में , यह पुरी स्टोरी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ाए जा रही है । कभी लगता है कहानी में सस्पेंस है तो कभी लगता है भ्रम जाल का ताना-बाना बुना हुआ है तो कभी लगता है जैसे कोई रूहानी ताकतें हैं तो कभी लगता है यह सिंपल स्टोरी है जिसमें आरूहि एक गम्भीर बिमारी से पीड़ित है ।

मुझे लगता है इससे बेहतरीन कहानी फिलहाल तो इस फोरम पर नहीं है । और सबसे बड़ी खासियत है आपके लिखने का स्टाइल और अंदाज । आउटस्टैंडिंग हर्षित भाई ।
thoos thoos ke khana khaya aaruhi ne jo ekdam majedar horror type scene tha ..
सही में , हर्षित भाई ! मुझे बहुत ही दया आने लगा है आरूहि पर । अगर किसी हरामखोर की वजह से उसकी हालत ऐसी हुई है तो उसे जहन्नुम का रास्ता जरूर दिखला दिजियेगा ।
WTF!!! Yahi pehla reaction nikalta hai is kahani ko poora padhne ke baad... Halanki pehle bhi maine is kahani ke kuchh 7-8 updates padhe huye the par jab is baar padhna shuru kiya to ek naya sa romanch har beet te update ke saath banta gaya... Bohot hi zyada behatreen tareeke se likhi gayi kahani hai ye, ab jis prakaar ka plot imagine kiya hai lekhak saahab ne uske baad ek nausikhiya bhi likhe to bhi kahani halki nahi ho sakti, aur yahaan jis level ka narration, aur scene specialization hame padhne ko mila hai, wo kaafi hai dikhane ke liye that this is, without a doubt,one of the finest stories available on XF... Chahe wo running stories hon ya fir completed, aur chahe future mein likhi jaane waali kahaniyan, is story ka ek alag hi sthaan bana rehne waala hai forum par... Aur iske liye writer saahab ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi...

Fantasy genre ke saath shuru huyi ye kahani, kab alag - alag genres ke darshan karane lagi padhte waqt katayi pata nahi chala... Horror, Suspense, Thriller, Adventure, Romance and of course Fantasy, aur saath hi mein Erotica ke ansh bhi... Ek story mein is se zyada kis cheez ki apeksha kar sakta hai reader!? Again, one of the best stories I've ever read... Outstanding Stuff harshit1890 bhai... :bow: :bow: :bow:
Kya hi khubsurat kahani likhi hai aapne bhai... I'm just speechless, jitni bhi tareef karunga kam hi hogi... Erotica ka bhi bilkul sahi situation mein use Kiya gaya hai aur sabse important har kirdaar par lekhak ki shaandar pakad bani rahi hai... Har character ka kahani mein hona justify kiya gaya hai, kahin bhi koyi bhi character bina matlab nahi ghus aaya...

Ab dekhna ye hai ke Mehta waali meeting mein kaun kaun shaamil tha aur unka maksad kya tha? Aur Shruti is sab ki sachayi jaan bhi paayegi ya nahi? Aruhi sach mein kisi beemari ka shikaar hai ya kewal naatak kar rahi hai? At last, Ek baar ko apun ko ye bhi laga ke asal mein ye sab jo ho raha hai wo kewal Shruti ki kalpana hai... :dazed:

Outstanding Story & Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Harshit bhai... Kayi horror stories padhi hain maine, joki poori tarah se horror genre par based hain but jis tarah ka scene aap create karte ho, taking into note ye story horror genre par based hai bhi nahi, that's phenomenal...
meghnath naam rakhne ke pichhe ki kahani bhi majedar hai 😍😍😍..
jab me TV nahi dekhta( waise tha nahi nahi ghar par ) tha bachpan me aur bas naam suna karta tha to khudko SHAKTI KAPOOR. kehta tha dosto ke bich 🤣🤣🤣..ye kissa padhke bachpan ki yaade taaza ho gayi 😍😍😍..
Slowly my interest is increasing towards the story full of adventure, fun to read, no doubt you are a great writer, thank you for writing such a beautiful story.
Have to admit, your story completely twists the thinking, sometimes it seems in the mind that it is just a disease and sometimes it seems like something supernatural. Your writing is commendable, even after writing this much there are many questions and there will be many such points which I have missed. In some scenes there was a combination of intensity as well as erotic scenes, which you have shown very well, what should I say now, now the words of praise are over understand my feelings.
harshit1890 Hats Off... enjoyed it. :applause:
but why were you making her nude everytime in front of everyone. :angry:
मुझे नहीं लगता दुनिया में कोई भी ऐसा माई का माल होगा जिसे इस कहानी की पहेली समझ में आ रही हो। गजब का दिमाग हिला रखा है आपने हर्षित भाई।
The whole incident, that Mansion one was written so beautifully that no words are sufficient to describe it! Ismein koyi doraye nahin ki maine aaj tak kisi ko bhi is tarah ka horror likhte nahi dekha hai... Haunted ko read kiya tha maine, kaafi pehle, aur main bilkul daave se keh sakta hoon, that you're the best,when it comes to generating real fear in readers, while they read the story..
Bhatt the phakk is this estory?:redface:
 
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Maine ye padh liya tha shayad.. ya fir nahi :hmm2: padha -padha bhi lag raha par aakhir ke scene bilkul yaad nahi :hmm:
Ya fir shuruat kiya raha hounga aur bich me chhut gaya raha hoga kisi karanvash :D
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Megha aur Supriya ki baate matlab kaano me mishri ghol deti hai... pura mann mithas se bhar jaata hai... inme se koyi ekat bhoot voot to nahi.. :wtfrol: waise dono baraba mil rahi hai logo se.. aur chut chudan bhi kar rahi hai toh mera sawal yahi khariz ho jaata hai...

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Jis tarah ye dono aapas me baat karti hai, inki convo..... full chudakkad Megha ke character ke sath nyay hai ye.... sirf aur sirf..chut aur lund kis baat karti hai Megha.. i wish ki isko barabar mil jaaye jaldi ..waise mammi se naraz kyun hui :hinthint2: ungali karte hue pakad liya tha kya :D
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Behtareen update.... character build up de rahe ho in dono ko itna to khoob bakchodi karne wali hai ye dono shayad... lund-e-lund lengi... Supriya ,seems good... uska character dekhne me maza aayega.. baaki to burchatti warden aur uska helper sonu hee hai...
" there are 2 posibilities if we run this program, first it will provide the syntax error as on line 4 the variable declared as integer and the function which is overloading the variable should be of float value because the output will not support the integer type. Secondly, if we do correct the syantax than the program will compile without any error and provide us the output and the output should be 1.091, no it should be 1.09187 exact " supriya ke bolne ke baad class ke bache hi nahi balki guptaji bhi aise dekh rahe the jaise murgi ki hadi muh se chinn li gayi ho. Supriya hairan thi ki sab usko aise kyun dekh rahe hain usne megha ki taraf dekha jo ankh muh sab khol kar use hi dekh rahi thi.
Itna bhayankar gyaan... :eek:
" uske chehre se jada baal to meri chut mein hai re pagal, chal aja canteen chalte hain kya pata akash wahan mil jaye "
Kya baat hai ... ati uttam... jungle me hee sher ghuste hai
Engineer banne ka usko koi shauk nahi tha lekin maa chahti thi aur vo sirf mauz chahti thi uska manna ye tha ki college mein sirf ek hi chiz honi chahie aur vo ye ki jo karo aisa karo ki agle 40 saal tak use yaad karke gilapan rahe.

Life Goal :approve
 

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ravinaa.. " supriya bas itna hi boli ki ravina ne apne honth uske honton par rakh diya aur supriya aage kuch bol na saki. Apne honton par pehli dafa honton ka sparsh pakar vo itna kho gayi ki usne dhayan hi nahi diya ki uska pehla chumban koi uske sapno ka rajkumar ya uska pati nahi balki uski saheli le rahi hai. Agar us samay ravina ke kandhe se towel nahi fisalta aur supriya madhoshi se bahar nahi ati to vo khud bhi nahi janti ki us din aur kya ho jata
:eek: :eek: :eek:.... Hum laundan mar gaye rahe kya writer babu :vangry: :bat: ... Huhhh... Kahani hi likhat rahe ho na ..... Usme to ek chumma ka jugad karwa dete...

Je supriya to pahle se puri kheli kudi hai (lesbian hi sahi.. jitne raaj khule hain) aur tabhi usse Megha ka hath thamna lesbo act Laaga
 

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" canteen mein sab samne aisi batein karti hai ki teri wajah se sab mere bare mein bhi galat sochenge. Ladke hamesha usi nighaon se dekhenge ki ye ladki aise baat karti hai ye to asani se de degi " supriya abhi tak bhadki hui thi.

" ohoo supriya tu bhi ek dum typical girl school mein padne wali ladki ki tarah baat kar rahi hai. Tum logon ne ladkon ko lekar galat soch bana rakhi hai kyun ki zindagi bhar tum ladkiyun ne apas mein hi gutur-guu kari hai, gyan chahie to humse puch " megha ne supriya ka hath pakadte hue kaha.

" han han sara gyan to tere andar hi hai aur ye hath chhod, lesbian nahi hun mein "

" Tu vo chhod aur ye samajh agar koi ladka tera tan yaad karke apna lawda malta hai to isme teri jeet hai aur uski haar puch kaise? "

" puch na kaise? " supriya par zor dalte hue megha boli. Usne uska hath abhi tak nahi chhoda tha jise supriya ne chhudane ki kosish bhi nahi ki thi.

" kaise " supriya jhallai aur ek jagah ruk hi gayi ya use megha ne rok liya tha ye use yaad nahi tha.

" hath se mal kar maar to apne hi bacha rahe hain na to ho gaya na nuksan heheh ehehehe "

" wahiyad, totally wahiyad. Chhod mein jaa rahi hun " supriya jane lagi par megha ne uska hath nahi chhoda.

" kahan jaa rahi hai apne valle ko to tadne de " megha ki nazar ka picha karte hue usne dekha to paya vo use ground ke pas le ayi thi jahan par akash apni team ke sath practice kar raha tha.

" kamini hai tu bhi puri mujhe yahan le ayi pata hi nahi chala "

" haye re supriya, ab to isko apni deni hi padegi bechara itni mehnat jo kar raha hai " megha ki betuki ki excitement dekh supriya man hi man use gali dene lagi. " bhag akash bhag... " megha chillai jiski awaz akash tak pahunch gayi aur usne uski taraf dekh smile pass kar di.

" kab tak khadi rahegi ? " supriya chidte hue boli.

" ruk na do minute khatam hone wala hoga "

" tujhe kaise pata? tujhe soccer ka bhi gyan hai ? "

" mujhe sirf bistar ka gyan hai vahi sikha hai par dekh karlag raha hai khatam hone wala hai, do minute ruk aur cheer karna meri tarah " megha boli " go akash go make a goal "

" mujhe room change karana hi padega " supriya majburi mein wahan khadi rahi aur dekhte dekhte use soccer mein interest ane laga. School time jo sports hote the usme use ek sport mein badha interest tha aur vo thi kushti. Uska school sports ko lekar khaskar ki kushti ko lekar kafi famous tha aur supriya bhi team ek khas member hua karti thi. Shuruwati dino mein use is sport mein koi dilchaspi nahi thi lekin uski ek saheli 'Ravina' usko pasand tha aur uski wajah se usne bhi team mein shamil hone ke liye practice shuru ki thi aur fir pata hi nahi chala kab use is khel se pyar ho gaya. Kushti khelne mein jitna stamina chahie tha utni hi takat ki jarurat thi isliye vo ravina ke sath school khatam hone ke baad practice kiya karti thi. Ravina uski bahut close firends ho gayi thi, itni close ho gayi thi ki uski maa ke alawa sirf ravina hi thi jisne uske badan ko bina kisi kapde ke dekha tha. Vo kissa aaj bhi yaad tha supriya ko jise yaad karke vo abhi bhi sharma jati thi. Supriya, ravina ke sath practice ke baad changing room mein baithi ravina ke bathroom se bahar ane ka intezar kar rahi thi taki vo andar jakar change kar sake lekin agle hi pal jab bathroom ka darwaja khula aur usne ravina ko bahar atte dekha to hairani mein vo palke bhi nahi jhapka saki.

" aise kya dekh rahi hai? Kabhi khud ko aine mein nahi dekha kya? " ravina ne muskurate hue apne badan par pani ki bundein towel se saaf karte hue kaha. Usne kewal penty pehen rakhi thi aur uppar se nivastra avasta mein hi bahar nikal ayi thi. Supriya ne apni chatiyun ke alawa pehli baar kisi ladki ki chatiyun ko dekh rahi thi vo bhi apni sabse achi saheli ki. " tu baithi sochti rahegi ya kapde utar kar badli karegi, tujhe bataya tha na mujhe jaldi jana hai, supriya? " ravina ne awaz lagai tab supriya hosh mein ayi.

" kya soch rahi hai kabse? " ravina ne fir pucha.

" nahi kuch nahi " supriya bol kar bathroom mein jane lagi to ravina ne uska hath pakad kar piche moda to uska balance bigad gaya aur vo uske badan se chipak gayi. Dono ke sharir ke bich mein jada duri nahi thi, agar supriya ne kapde nahi pehen rakhe hote to uski chatiyan ravina ki chatiyun se mel kar gayi hoti. Honth itne kareeb the ki ravina aram se supriya ke honton ko chum sakti thi. Supriya ke dil ki dhadkan itni tez ho gayi thi ki use samajh hi nahi aaya ki ye kya ho raha hai. Usne sirf suna tha ki ladki-ladki bhi apas mein sharirk sambhand banati hai lekin kaise, usne kabhi ye janne ki ichukta zahir nahi ki thi. Uske liye 'sex' sirf ladka ladki ke bich hi ho sakta tha. Par girls school mein padne ke baad usne aksar aisi batein suni thi ki us class ki ladki ka rishta kisi dusri class ki ladki ke bich hai, itna tak suna tha ki kisi ne do ladkiyun ko apas mein kiss karte dekha hai. Ye sab ek ghap-chap jaisi batein thi jo ladkiyun ke bich hoti thi aur vo usi mein maze le liya karte the. Par aaj itne kareeb vo bhi ek ladki ke jiske badan par kapda tak nahi hai, ye abhas karte hue hi supriya ko apne niche kuch mehsus hua jaise kisi ne koyle ki thal uski tangon ke bich mein rakh di ho aur uski garmi uppar tak chadh rahi ho.

" ravinaa.. " supriya bas itna hi boli ki ravina ne apne honth uske honton par rakh diya aur supriya aage kuch bol na saki. Apne honton par pehli dafa honton ka sparsh pakar vo itna kho gayi ki usne dhayan hi nahi diya ki uska pehla chumban koi uske sapno ka rajkumar ya uska pati nahi balki uski saheli le rahi hai. Agar us samay ravina ke kandhe se towel nahi fisalta aur supriya madhoshi se bahar nahi ati to vo khud bhi nahi janti ki us din aur kya ho jata. Us din ke baad supriya ne ravina ke sath kabhi extra practice nahi ki, dono ke bich baat-cheet kam ho gayi thi. Ravina ne kosish ki par supriya us din se bahar nahi nikal payi thi aur jab nikalne ki kosish ki to ravina ke sath hue hadse ne use sadme mein la khada kiya. Ravina ki maut ka asar supriya par kafi mahino tak raha jiske baad usne sirf team hi nahi balki kushti ke khel ko hi chhod diya tha.

" hi " akash ne megha ke baad supriya ko bhi helo kaha tab usne bhi jawab mein hi kaha. Akash pasine se bhiga hua tha aur uske pasine ki bundon ko dekh megha ne supriya ka hath kas kar pakad rakha tha jiske dard ko mehsus kar hi uski soch tuti thi.

" lagta hai practice kafi achi rahi " supriya ne akash se pucha.

" han next week game hai to practice ki jarurat hai. Next week tak we are on track i guess "

" you need to play forward. You will do well " supriya ki baat sun akash use ghurne laga.

" you know soccer? " akash ne hairani mein pucha.

" maybe " supriya ke chehre par confusion thi jise dekh akash bhi confuse tha " megha chal hostel " supriya ne use khinchte hue kaha.

" megha i thought we are going to someplace " megha ko le jatta dekh akash turant bol utha. Megha to jaise isi chiz ka intezar tha, usne fauran supriya ka hath chhod diya.

" yes absoultely " megha utsahit hote hue boli. Usne supriya ko ek pal mein bedhakal kar diya. " supriya tu akele chali jayegi? " supriya ne megha ka sath chhoda aur vo hostel ki taraf badh gayi. Abhi hostel ke raste tak vo ayi hi thi ki use yaad aya ki subah tanu ne class ke baad un dono ladkiyun ko bulaya tha. Har koi janta tha ki tanu ka ada college ke piche ek purana store room bana hua tha jiska istemal salon se nahi hua tha. Kamre ka rasta ek taraf se girls hostel ki taraf jata tha. Wahi rasta pakad supriya us kamre ki taraf badh chali.
Supriya Megha... Megha supriya ... Aur ant me ye Aakash... Chali bhai sab apne apne kaam par gaye... Hum aage ke panne palat lete hain ...

Dekhte hain aage kya raaj khulta hai... Iss pure update ka aakarshan waise Raveena hi thi... Ek scene ke liye hi aayi par kafi strong upsthiti jahir kar gayi
 

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Everyone wether a male or a female enjoys lesbian sex as a story. Supriya aur Megha ke bech lesbo sex ki jhalak toh mil hee chuki thi.. Matlab mujhe laga ki aisa ho sakta hai dono ke beech aur idhar naa chahte hue bhi Megha ke hath pakadne par supi darling ne ye baate hamare bheje me thok di... Waise Megha ko yadi Supriya bolegi toh Megha turant taiyar ho jayegi.. Dildo lekar... 😁😁
Par main maza flashback me tha.. Jab Ravina ka jikra hua.. Shuru me toh laga ki kuch past hoga dono ka.. Ekat ur aise hee jordar scene dekhne ko milenge.. Par fir do line baad hee Ravin nar gayi..:sadcry:.
Khel-Vel to khel leti hai supriya... Kushti karti thi pahle.. Coding wala bhi knowledge hai aur ab toh Aakash ko foootball ka bhi gyaan de de rahi hai... Ye laundi kuch thik nahi lag rahi... Khair apne ko kya... Megha shayad chud ke aaye Aakash se.. Ya fir chus kr.. Fantasy angle jald leke aane ka bhai
" haye re supriya, ab to isko apni deni hi padegi bechara itni mehnat jo kar raha hai " megha ki betuki ki excitement dekh supriya man hi man use gali dene lagi. " bhag akash bhag... " megha chillai jiski awaz akash tak pahunch gayi aur usne uski taraf dekh smile pass kar di.
:lol
 
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