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Fantasy GENIUS SYSTEM

AJ321

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Bhai system ke bare me thoda clear kro..sb detail do.. Jese werewolf bhai apni story me di h
1.Story me host aur system ke bich Jada conversation nahi hogy.
2. Hosts points kese gain kare ga ye first update he.( Any surprise, curiosity, shock, and other human emotional reactions caused by the host will be automatically recognized and absorbed by the system. Then, according to their depth, the system will automatically convert them into corresponding points.")
3. Host vah points use kar ke skills card purchase kar sakta hai store se.like Constitution of the King of MerceMercenarie etc.
 
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1.Story me host aur system ke bich Jada conversation nahi hogy.
2. Hosts points kese gain kare ga ye first update he.( Any surprise, curiosity, shock, and other human emotional reactions caused by the host will be automatically recognized and absorbed by the system. Then, according to their depth, the system will automatically convert them into corresponding points.")
3. Host vah points use kar ke skills card purchase kar sakta hai store se.like Constitution of the King of MerceMercenarie etc.
Is hisab se Yadi koi host se chhal kapat ghrina nafrat karta hai to kya uske point kam honge... 🤔
 

AJ321

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Update 5

The Little Beggar Girl


Jaise hi Raj ka daahine pair Dev kei chhati par majbooti se laga.

“Ah.”

Dev ke shareer se ek rangte-kade kar dene valee cheekh nikala, jiska vajan 65 kilogram tha. vah turant peechhe kee or ud gaya jaise ki ek train se takara gaya ho aur chaar ya paanch meter door thos zameen par gir gaya.

Usakee jeebh usake daanton se katee gaye thee, aur usake munh ke kone se khoon bah raha tha. aisa lag raha tha jaise usake internal parts ko phir se rearrange kiya gaya ho, Dev zameen par dard se karaah raha tha.

Sheetal ekadam stan rah gai. uski aankhen chaude ho gayi thee, aur usne Raj ko ek acchamvit vah se dekha. use vishwaas hai nahi ho raha tha ki Raj ne Dev ko chaar ya paanch meter door laat maari thee.

“DING, Congratulations. You’ve earned fifty points!” The system notified.

“Fifty points? How did I get fifty points?”

Raj ne idhar-udhar dekha, lekin main gate par chaar security guard ko paaya, jinhonne yeh bhee dekha tha ki kya hua tha.

chaar security guard teji se unake paas daude.

"Young master Dev!"

Un charo ne, Sheetal ke saath, Dev ko khade hone ke liye sahaara diya.

Dev gusse mein tha. Usain Raj ko ishara kiya aur chillaya, "ise maaro.I want him dead. vah company ke darwaze se ek kadam bhi bahar nahi jana chahiye!”

Chaar security guard ne order follow na karne kee himmat nahin kee. isake alaava, yah khud ko alag dikhaane aur apni takat sabit karne ka avsar tha. kaun nishchit roop se kah sakata hai, shaayad ve achaanak ek chaunkaane valee upalabdhi haasil karane mein saksham honge kyonki unhonne Dev kee or se kisi ko sabak sikhaya tha. halanki unhonne Raj ki takat ko dekha, phir bhee unhonne apanee kamar par latke lohe ke kaale dandon ko kheench liya aur Raj ko marne chal diya.

Raj keval main entrance par najar rakhane vaale security guard se kyon darenge? box ko chode bina, usne apne pairon se laato se prahar kiya. pratyek pair ek ek security guards ki chhati par utara. chaar aavaajen ai cheekh ki aur chaaron security guard Dev kee tarah peechhe kee or phenke gae. yahaan tak ki unake haathon mein lohe kee dandiya bhi zameen par gir gaeen.

Is samay, Dev ka gussa thanda ho chuka tha. usain Raj ko atyadhik daraa vanee drishti se dekha; yah aisa tha jaise usane din ke ujaale mein bhoot dekha ho. jab Raj kee nazar us par padee to vah kaamp utha. turant uske sharir par pasina phoot pada. use vishwaas hai nahi ho raha tha ki Raj aj ke paas itana takat bar aur bhayaanak skill ho sakata hai.

Sheetal bhi usee avastha mein thee. use ab lagane laga tha ki Raj aj aur bhee Jada ajanabee ho gaya hai. yah vah Raj nahin tha jise vah pahale jaanti thee.

Jab Raj Dev ki or chala, to Sheetal ne khud ko usake saamane rakh diya aur Raj ko ghabrahat se ghorate hue kaha, "Raj, kya ... tum kya chahte ho?"

Raj ne usko ignore Kia. vah bas muskuraaya aur buree tarah bhayabheet Dev ko dekha. ushne thandi lehje mein kaha, "young master Dev, agar aapke paas karne ke lie kuch nahin hai, to dusre logon ka collar pakadne ke chakkar mein mat padie. yah bahut hi ghatiya harkat hai aapki. maine aapko chetawani dee thee, lekin aapane jaane nahin diya. aapko mujhse ek laat milane par gussa nahi hona chahiye. usakee nigaah Sheetal kee or gayi aur usne muskurate hue kaha, princess ka taj to sab pahanana chahte hain, lekin tum kab tak ise pahan sakti ho? teen months ya half year?😎

Sheetal ke shareer mein siharan daud gaee. Raj ke shabd theek usakee seene par chot kar rahe the.

Haan, halaki vah apanee ichchha anusaar Dev ki premika ban gaee, lekin Sheetal mein security kee thodee see bhee bhaavana nahi thee aur use hamesha lagta tha ki vah kisi bhi samay use chod sakte hai. yah bhi mukhya karan tha ki vah aaj Raj ki talash mein gayi thi. apne dil ki gaharaee mein, vah abhee bhee use apanee back-up plan ke roop mein rakhane kee aasha karati thee, jo use security key bhavana dega.

“Of course, this is just my advice. Feel free to disregard it!”

Itana kahakar Raj bina peechhe dekhe chala gaya.

Sheetal ne achaanak apanee aatma kho dee hai. vah ek bewakoof kee tarah vaheen usee jagah khadee thee. usane socha tha ki Raj se naata todana nishchit roop se sahee kaam tha. lekin jab vah admi vaastav mein muda aur chala gaya, to keval ek cheej jo usane mehsoos kee vah haani udaasee aur akelepan kee anant bhaavana.

Raj ke saath usake chaar saal rahane ka har chhote se chota pal usake dimaag mein ek nirantar dhaar mein ubhar aaya. har drshy saamaany aur sadharan tha, lekin vah unhen jaane nahin de sakatee thee.

Use Raj ke hath ki fried rice ki yaad aatee thee, beemaar hone par usakee dekh bhaal, aur usase bhee jyaada usakee garm chhaatee .... use sveekaar karana padata tha ki usake saath usaka chaar saal ka romantic rishta usake jeevan ka sabase achchha samay tha.

Jaate samay Raj kee peeth ko dekhate hue, usakee eyes dheere-dheere aansuon se dhundhalee ho gaee thee. usakee bhahue sikud gaeen; use laga jaise usane apne life ki ek mahatvapoorn cheez kho dee hai!

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Halchal bharee sadak par chalate hue, Raj ko ek halka apan mehsoos hua jo usane pahale kabhi anubhav nahin kiya tha. thodi der ke lie, vah yah nahin samajha saka ki vah is tarah ke mood mein kyon tha. shaayad yah isalie tha kyonki usane Sheetal ke vaastavik roop ko dekh liya tha, ya aisa isalie ho sakta tha kyonki usane Huahai corporation chhod diya tha?

Thodi hi der mein vah ek departmental store ke samne aaya aur usakee nazar chok ke ek kone par padee.

Waha ek choti see ladki thee, kareeb saat-aath saal kee. vah logo se bheekh maang rahee thee.

chhote ladki halat thik nahi thee, usake lambe kaale baal itane gande the ki usamen gaanthen padani shuroo ho gaee theen. usake pair aasmaan sthiti mein mude hue the, aur usake pair kee maansapeshiyaan gambheer roop se kamajor ho gaee theen. vah khadee hokar chal nahin sakatee thee; vah keval apane komal haathon par bharosa kar sakatee thee taaki vah dheere-dheere rengate hue aage badh sake jaise ki ek chhoti see seel jaise vah ek toote hue katore ke saath bhik mang rahee thee.

Thodi der ke baad, chhoti ladki rengte hue uske pairon par dheere se katori le aaee. dibbe se takaraate sikkon kee aavaaj sunaee dee.

Raj ne apna sir neeche kar liya, aur us ki nigaah us chhoti ladaki se takara gaee. haalaanki vah gandee thee aur yahan tak ki ek teekhi gandh bhee aa rahi thee, usakee aankhen bilkul spasht aur satark theen, itane chamak dhaar ki ve aakaash ke taaron ke samaan thee.

"kripaya, ek achchha kaam karo aur mujhe kuchh rupaye do!" choti ladki ne kaha.

Raj ne dekha ki vah kafi chotil thi, isalie usane box ko neeche kiya, apanee jeb se 100 ka note nikaala aur katore mein rakh diya.

"Dhanyavaad mister. Lord buddha tumhe aashirvaad denge! chhoti ladki ne pranam kiya aur apne haathon ki hatheliyon jod liya.

Is shehar ke log buddha mein vishwaas karate the, aur choti ladki ki baaton mein kuchh bhi galat nahi tha.

Raj ne socha ki vah bahut tej-tarraar hai, isalie usane 500 ke do not nikale aur us ki jeb mein rakh die. "jaldi se ghar jao aur apne pariwar ke liye kuch swadisht khana lie lao."

Usane vaastav mein mehsoos kiya ki chhoti ladaki dayaneey thee. vah abhee itne chhoti thee lekin use is tarah ka kasht sahana pada Raha tha.

"ghar?"

Choti ladki ka dubala-patala shareer thoda kaampane laga aur usakee chamakili aankhen bejaan ho gaeen. aisa lag raha tha jaise vah apane aap mein budabuda rahee ho, ya shayad vah apanee kahani suna rahee ho, "ab mere paas ghar nahin hai."

usain apanee kam umr ke bawajood ek bade dukh aur akelepan ko prakat kiya. uski aankhe laal ho gaeen, jisse do laal ghere ban gaye.

Raj hairan reh gaya. “har kisi ke paas ghar aur mata-pita hote hain. tumhare paas ghar kyon nahin hai?”

Choti ladaki ne apana sir hilaya aur phir muskuraee, usane bat ko badal diya aur kaha, "aap ek acha insaan hain, dhanyavaad."

uske baad, usane badee mushkil se apane dubale-patale shareer ko hilaya aur reng kar chalee gaee.

Raj ne socha ki yah ladki thodi dils chap hai; usa ki ek kahani thee. yah sochane ke baad, vah chup chaap usako follow Kia ..

Ant mein vah ek gali mein reng kar chalee gaee, jahaan ek badasoorat aur kroor chehare vaala ek admi intajaar kar raha tha.

Use wapas aate dekh admi ne vah chaku apanee jeb mein rakh liya jisase vah khel raha tha aur ladki ke paas gaya. Usain us toote hue katore ko dekha jiska use vah bheekh maangne ke lie karati thee aur turant gusse mein usain chhoti ladki ko ek taraph maaree, "m**chod, tum keval thode se paise la kar de rahee ho? Tum aaj khana nahi chahte hain kyaa? ”

"Tumne bheekh magana band karne ki himmat kee? main aaj tumhe ek sabak sikhaunga!

Vah admi ne ek darabne expression de. usain apanee sleeves ok upper kia aur chhoti ladki baalon ko pakada aur usake poore shareer ko hawa mein utha diya.

"dard ho raha hai .... dard ho raha hai ..."

Usake pair jameen se uth gae, aur dard ne use rula diya.

"kyun ro rahi ho? "

Admi ne use thappad maara.“pow.” usane use phir se maara. ladki ke chehre par ek ke baad ek jordaar tamaache pade, use jara bhi parwah nahin thee.

vah keval dard ko sahan kar sakte thee, apane aap ko rone se bachaane ke lie apane daant pees rahi thee, lekin aansoo chhalak rahe the. usaka chehara sooja hua tha.



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Superb update ab Raj ko us choti ladki ko bachana chahiye us gunde se
 

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Update 5

The Little Beggar Girl


Jaise hi Raj ka daahine pair Dev kei chhati par majbooti se laga.

“Ah.”

Dev ke shareer se ek rangte-kade kar dene valee cheekh nikala, jiska vajan 65 kilogram tha. vah turant peechhe kee or ud gaya jaise ki ek train se takara gaya ho aur chaar ya paanch meter door thos zameen par gir gaya.

Usakee jeebh usake daanton se katee gaye thee, aur usake munh ke kone se khoon bah raha tha. aisa lag raha tha jaise usake internal parts ko phir se rearrange kiya gaya ho, Dev zameen par dard se karaah raha tha.

Sheetal ekadam stan rah gai. uski aankhen chaude ho gayi thee, aur usne Raj ko ek acchamvit vah se dekha. use vishwaas hai nahi ho raha tha ki Raj ne Dev ko chaar ya paanch meter door laat maari thee.

“DING, Congratulations. You’ve earned fifty points!” The system notified.

“Fifty points? How did I get fifty points?”

Raj ne idhar-udhar dekha, lekin main gate par chaar security guard ko paaya, jinhonne yeh bhee dekha tha ki kya hua tha.

chaar security guard teji se unake paas daude.

"Young master Dev!"

Un charo ne, Sheetal ke saath, Dev ko khade hone ke liye sahaara diya.

Dev gusse mein tha. Usain Raj ko ishara kiya aur chillaya, "ise maaro.I want him dead. vah company ke darwaze se ek kadam bhi bahar nahi jana chahiye!”

Chaar security guard ne order follow na karne kee himmat nahin kee. isake alaava, yah khud ko alag dikhaane aur apni takat sabit karne ka avsar tha. kaun nishchit roop se kah sakata hai, shaayad ve achaanak ek chaunkaane valee upalabdhi haasil karane mein saksham honge kyonki unhonne Dev kee or se kisi ko sabak sikhaya tha. halanki unhonne Raj ki takat ko dekha, phir bhee unhonne apanee kamar par latke lohe ke kaale dandon ko kheench liya aur Raj ko marne chal diya.

Raj keval main entrance par najar rakhane vaale security guard se kyon darenge? box ko chode bina, usne apne pairon se laato se prahar kiya. pratyek pair ek ek security guards ki chhati par utara. chaar aavaajen ai cheekh ki aur chaaron security guard Dev kee tarah peechhe kee or phenke gae. yahaan tak ki unake haathon mein lohe kee dandiya bhi zameen par gir gaeen.

Is samay, Dev ka gussa thanda ho chuka tha. usain Raj ko atyadhik daraa vanee drishti se dekha; yah aisa tha jaise usane din ke ujaale mein bhoot dekha ho. jab Raj kee nazar us par padee to vah kaamp utha. turant uske sharir par pasina phoot pada. use vishwaas hai nahi ho raha tha ki Raj aj ke paas itana takat bar aur bhayaanak skill ho sakata hai.

Sheetal bhi usee avastha mein thee. use ab lagane laga tha ki Raj aj aur bhee Jada ajanabee ho gaya hai. yah vah Raj nahin tha jise vah pahale jaanti thee.

Jab Raj Dev ki or chala, to Sheetal ne khud ko usake saamane rakh diya aur Raj ko ghabrahat se ghorate hue kaha, "Raj, kya ... tum kya chahte ho?"

Raj ne usko ignore Kia. vah bas muskuraaya aur buree tarah bhayabheet Dev ko dekha. ushne thandi lehje mein kaha, "young master Dev, agar aapke paas karne ke lie kuch nahin hai, to dusre logon ka collar pakadne ke chakkar mein mat padie. yah bahut hi ghatiya harkat hai aapki. maine aapko chetawani dee thee, lekin aapane jaane nahin diya. aapko mujhse ek laat milane par gussa nahi hona chahiye. usakee nigaah Sheetal kee or gayi aur usne muskurate hue kaha, princess ka taj to sab pahanana chahte hain, lekin tum kab tak ise pahan sakti ho? teen months ya half year?😎

Sheetal ke shareer mein siharan daud gaee. Raj ke shabd theek usakee seene par chot kar rahe the.

Haan, halaki vah apanee ichchha anusaar Dev ki premika ban gaee, lekin Sheetal mein security kee thodee see bhee bhaavana nahi thee aur use hamesha lagta tha ki vah kisi bhi samay use chod sakte hai. yah bhi mukhya karan tha ki vah aaj Raj ki talash mein gayi thi. apne dil ki gaharaee mein, vah abhee bhee use apanee back-up plan ke roop mein rakhane kee aasha karati thee, jo use security key bhavana dega.

“Of course, this is just my advice. Feel free to disregard it!”

Itana kahakar Raj bina peechhe dekhe chala gaya.

Sheetal ne achaanak apanee aatma kho dee hai. vah ek bewakoof kee tarah vaheen usee jagah khadee thee. usane socha tha ki Raj se naata todana nishchit roop se sahee kaam tha. lekin jab vah admi vaastav mein muda aur chala gaya, to keval ek cheej jo usane mehsoos kee vah haani udaasee aur akelepan kee anant bhaavana.

Raj ke saath usake chaar saal rahane ka har chhote se chota pal usake dimaag mein ek nirantar dhaar mein ubhar aaya. har drshy saamaany aur sadharan tha, lekin vah unhen jaane nahin de sakatee thee.

Use Raj ke hath ki fried rice ki yaad aatee thee, beemaar hone par usakee dekh bhaal, aur usase bhee jyaada usakee garm chhaatee .... use sveekaar karana padata tha ki usake saath usaka chaar saal ka romantic rishta usake jeevan ka sabase achchha samay tha.

Jaate samay Raj kee peeth ko dekhate hue, usakee eyes dheere-dheere aansuon se dhundhalee ho gaee thee. usakee bhahue sikud gaeen; use laga jaise usane apne life ki ek mahatvapoorn cheez kho dee hai!

***********************

Halchal bharee sadak par chalate hue, Raj ko ek halka apan mehsoos hua jo usane pahale kabhi anubhav nahin kiya tha. thodi der ke lie, vah yah nahin samajha saka ki vah is tarah ke mood mein kyon tha. shaayad yah isalie tha kyonki usane Sheetal ke vaastavik roop ko dekh liya tha, ya aisa isalie ho sakta tha kyonki usane Huahai corporation chhod diya tha?

Thodi hi der mein vah ek departmental store ke samne aaya aur usakee nazar chok ke ek kone par padee.

Waha ek choti see ladki thee, kareeb saat-aath saal kee. vah logo se bheekh maang rahee thee.

chhote ladki halat thik nahi thee, usake lambe kaale baal itane gande the ki usamen gaanthen padani shuroo ho gaee theen. usake pair aasmaan sthiti mein mude hue the, aur usake pair kee maansapeshiyaan gambheer roop se kamajor ho gaee theen. vah khadee hokar chal nahin sakatee thee; vah keval apane komal haathon par bharosa kar sakatee thee taaki vah dheere-dheere rengate hue aage badh sake jaise ki ek chhoti see seel jaise vah ek toote hue katore ke saath bhik mang rahee thee.

Thodi der ke baad, chhoti ladki rengte hue uske pairon par dheere se katori le aaee. dibbe se takaraate sikkon kee aavaaj sunaee dee.

Raj ne apna sir neeche kar liya, aur us ki nigaah us chhoti ladaki se takara gaee. haalaanki vah gandee thee aur yahan tak ki ek teekhi gandh bhee aa rahi thee, usakee aankhen bilkul spasht aur satark theen, itane chamak dhaar ki ve aakaash ke taaron ke samaan thee.

"kripaya, ek achchha kaam karo aur mujhe kuchh rupaye do!" choti ladki ne kaha.

Raj ne dekha ki vah kafi chotil thi, isalie usane box ko neeche kiya, apanee jeb se 100 ka note nikaala aur katore mein rakh diya.

"Dhanyavaad mister. Lord buddha tumhe aashirvaad denge! chhoti ladki ne pranam kiya aur apne haathon ki hatheliyon jod liya.

Is shehar ke log buddha mein vishwaas karate the, aur choti ladki ki baaton mein kuchh bhi galat nahi tha.

Raj ne socha ki vah bahut tej-tarraar hai, isalie usane 500 ke do not nikale aur us ki jeb mein rakh die. "jaldi se ghar jao aur apne pariwar ke liye kuch swadisht khana lie lao."

Usane vaastav mein mehsoos kiya ki chhoti ladaki dayaneey thee. vah abhee itne chhoti thee lekin use is tarah ka kasht sahana pada Raha tha.

"ghar?"

Choti ladki ka dubala-patala shareer thoda kaampane laga aur usakee chamakili aankhen bejaan ho gaeen. aisa lag raha tha jaise vah apane aap mein budabuda rahee ho, ya shayad vah apanee kahani suna rahee ho, "ab mere paas ghar nahin hai."

usain apanee kam umr ke bawajood ek bade dukh aur akelepan ko prakat kiya. uski aankhe laal ho gaeen, jisse do laal ghere ban gaye.

Raj hairan reh gaya. “har kisi ke paas ghar aur mata-pita hote hain. tumhare paas ghar kyon nahin hai?”

Choti ladaki ne apana sir hilaya aur phir muskuraee, usane bat ko badal diya aur kaha, "aap ek acha insaan hain, dhanyavaad."

uske baad, usane badee mushkil se apane dubale-patale shareer ko hilaya aur reng kar chalee gaee.

Raj ne socha ki yah ladki thodi dils chap hai; usa ki ek kahani thee. yah sochane ke baad, vah chup chaap usako follow Kia ..

Ant mein vah ek gali mein reng kar chalee gaee, jahaan ek badasoorat aur kroor chehare vaala ek admi intajaar kar raha tha.

Use wapas aate dekh admi ne vah chaku apanee jeb mein rakh liya jisase vah khel raha tha aur ladki ke paas gaya. Usain us toote hue katore ko dekha jiska use vah bheekh maangne ke lie karati thee aur turant gusse mein usain chhoti ladki ko ek taraph maaree, "m**chod, tum keval thode se paise la kar de rahee ho? Tum aaj khana nahi chahte hain kyaa? ”

"Tumne bheekh magana band karne ki himmat kee? main aaj tumhe ek sabak sikhaunga!

Vah admi ne ek darabne expression de. usain apanee sleeves ok upper kia aur chhoti ladki baalon ko pakada aur usake poore shareer ko hawa mein utha diya.

"dard ho raha hai .... dard ho raha hai ..."

Usake pair jameen se uth gae, aur dard ne use rula diya.

"kyun ro rahi ho? "

Admi ne use thappad maara.“pow.” usane use phir se maara. ladki ke chehre par ek ke baad ek jordaar tamaache pade, use jara bhi parwah nahin thee.

vah keval dard ko sahan kar sakte thee, apane aap ko rone se bachaane ke lie apane daant pees rahi thee, lekin aansoo chhalak rahe the. usaka chehara sooja hua tha.



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Awesome update bhai
 
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