Bhai thoda aur bada kar dete to update ban jata .....anyway bdiya revo diya brother...Shabdo ke sath khelna aur alg alg bhavnao ko ek update me bahut hi salike se cover krne me tumhara koi jawab hi nhi h brother..once again.undoubtedly fantastic update...
"AHARYAS" na hi PITA nahi MATA aur na hi BETA inme se koi bhi insaan kbhi kisi ke bhi samjh me aana bahut hi mushkil h.. Sab kuchh krke bhi anjaan bne rhna koi inse seekhe..uske bhi aaj 2-2 udaharan aaj firse dekhne ko mile h first veronica. Maa and kishore uncle ki conversation me dusra abhi ghati ghatna me jo sanvy ne archana ke sath kiya aur jiska jikr kbhi nhi hua...bakai hi adbhut insaniyat samete hote h aise log jo khule dil se logo ki madad bhi krte h aur unhe is cheez ka ehsaas tak nhi krate h... Wahi ek baat aur jo sanvy ne dimple se kahi ki agr kisi samajik mudde pr kuchh krne ka dam kham ho to aage badh kr us mudde pr kaarya kro debate krke kuchh sainkdon logo ki wah-wahi lutne ke liye dikhawa nhi. Thats true...ek kadwa sach..ki log srf baatein jyada krte h kaam km.. Bdi bdi baatein krdi pr kaam chhote chhote bhi na kr paaye to fayda kya hua un badi badi baaton ka ..kuchh nhi ..khair ye sab ko chhodte h aate h dimple ke andar jo aaj ki hui ghatnao ke baad halchal machi h us pr...aaj phli baar use realise hua h ki wo jis satisfaction ke pichhe bhaag rhi thi jise har cheez me jeetne ka baad bhi wo prapt nhi kr paa rhi thi wo aaj sanvy ki baaton aur uske kiye karyo ke baad uske samne ujagar hue uske vyaktitva ke ek chhote se hisse matr drashya se use mil gya ... Aaj wo itna to samjh hi gyi ki srf jeetne se hi sab kuchh hasil nhi ho skta aur kabhi kabhi uske liye harna bhi padta h...kadam pichhe bhi lene pdte h..kisi ke sath.hasna bhi pdta h rona bhi pdta h..aise hi bahut si cheezein aur un cheezon ke baad to aatmik sukun milta h wo hi h satisfaction... Srf wo krna jo unki aatma tk ko khussi se bhar de.jise krne ke baad dil me koi malal na rhe ki ye kya kr diya hmne..... At last fantastic update brother... Kaash sanvy ki jagha archana ki madad sam aur baki kr dete to jyada achha lgta..khair koi
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Bhai thoda aur bada kar dete to update ban jata .....anyway bdiya revo diya brother...
Bhai bakiyo se apni tulna mat kijiye ap jitna bada update diye agr eska do guna diye hote tb bhi shayad kam hi lgta. Thank u.thoda aur bada.
bhai 5000 plus words use hue hain.. bohot si kahaniyon ke 2 se zyada updates cover ho jaate hain itne shabdon me..
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For completing 400 pages bhaiदो बेहतरीन दृश्य इस कहानी के जो बार बार आखों के सामने आ जाते हैं,
पहला: पहली दृष्टिकोण कक्षा का जब सानवीर शादी की कसमों के जरिए शादी के रिश्ते का महत्व बताता है।
दूसरा: जब जब सानवीर ने अर्चना को बचाया दूसरी बार, और तथाकथित सभ्य लोगों के उपर से सभ्यता का परदा हटाया।
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पहला: पहली दृष्टिकोण कक्षा का जब सानवीर शादी की कसमों के जरिए शादी के रिश्ते का महत्व बताता है।
दूसरा: जब जब सानवीर ने अर्चना को बचाया दूसरी बार, और तथाकथित सभ्य लोगों के उपर से सभ्यता का परदा हटाया।
आपकी सोच जानकारी सब कुछ बहुत ही उच्च स्तरीय है।
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I buhat hi behtreen update se come back kra apne
jahan update ki shurwat hoi Veronica se jo Sonu k ghar visit pe ti according to Sonu k mom dad k wo bht hi kum un han visit karti hain so unki is shikayat ko dor ker diya aj unho ne wapsi pe kuch gift wagaira diye jis pe unhu ne mana kiya per Chutki ne bari hi masomiyat se apni bat manva li or unhe wo gift lete hi bane
bht hi khobsurat moment ta jis andaz me wo un se bat ker rhi ti
she's so cute
wahin arif ka admi b unhen follow ker rha hai is bat se bakhobi bakhabar hain uski poori detail nikalwa li kuch hi waqt me or finally unhu ne us se milne ki thaan li let's see jb amne samne hu ge to kaisa rhe ga
Dosri or poori mandali visit kari heavens way ka jo khud me apni misal ap hai bht hi khobsurat andaz me us jagah ko dikhaya gaya sabhi ne passand b kiya or khob tareef b kari❤
Sanvy&Dimple ka ye pehla conversation ta jo itna detail me howa is pehle to bs huh han tak baat seemit rahi
Dimple ne us doran bht kuch smjh liya wo jo achieve ker sakta hai wo na karne k bawajod khud se satisfied hai jb k Dimple wo satisfaction kabhi mehsos na ker pai phir chahe jaise b wo ker le
same place me 1 larki ko dikhaya gaya jo apne chote bhai k sath wahan mojoud ti or kuch larke us1 ko lekar baat ker rhe te k wo kaisi hai or jb un k andar ka shehtan ne unki aag ko hawa di to pohacnh ge use pareshan karne
thanks to Sanvy bacha liya use
or last me wo larki apni ap beeti us k dosto ko bata rahi ti ye part bht sad ta us bechari ne bht tuff time dekha or phir kuch aise faisle lene pare jo uski rooh tak ko chalni ker ge
Archana ne bht saha apni izzat masomiyat sb ganwa diya us larki ne
phir shayad uper wale us pe rahem aa hi gaya or Sanvy ne apni mom ko uski help karne bejh diya jahan her taraf se na hi sunane ko mili wahi umeed ki 1 kiran ban ker Veronica pohanchi un tak
Archana k bht israr karne pe pta chala k ye sb un k bete ki wajah se hi mumkin ho saka
or sath hi ye wada b liya wo ye bat kabhi b Sanvy ko nhi bolegi k uski mom ne use sb bata diya
bat khatam hone pe wo apne raste ho li lakin Sanvy k liye us k dill me jo izat ti wo or b barh gayi
apni mandali b exit ki taraf ho li lakin Dimple k dill me pehli martaba ghanti bajh uthi is se pehle Sanvy ka ye pehlu kabhi dekh hi nhi payi wo
kuch anokhe ehsas or jazbat k sang apne dill me uthati umangu ne zinadagi ka ek or pehlu us k andar bhar diya jis ehsas se pehle wo anjan ti jo kabhi is se pehle kabhi mehsos na kiya us ne❤
Last me Veronica ji k bare itna hi bolu ga k un ka nature bht hi khobsurat dikhaya gaya hai
Sonu k dad ki b help kari wo Archana or in jaise or kitne hu ge jinki help kari hu gi waqi in ki jitni b tareef ki jai wo kum hai
apki writing hamesha hi dill ko chu jati hai update k bare jitna b bol lu lakin nahi words k mamle me mai helpless hu
Update was marvelous Shandar or lajawab❤
keep going☺
Best of luck for upcoming updates
And one thing thanku so much for such a beautiful update❤
jahan update ki shurwat hoi Veronica se jo Sonu k ghar visit pe ti according to Sonu k mom dad k wo bht hi kum un han visit karti hain so unki is shikayat ko dor ker diya aj unho ne wapsi pe kuch gift wagaira diye jis pe unhu ne mana kiya per Chutki ne bari hi masomiyat se apni bat manva li or unhe wo gift lete hi bane
bht hi khobsurat moment ta jis andaz me wo un se bat ker rhi ti
she's so cute
wahin arif ka admi b unhen follow ker rha hai is bat se bakhobi bakhabar hain uski poori detail nikalwa li kuch hi waqt me or finally unhu ne us se milne ki thaan li let's see jb amne samne hu ge to kaisa rhe ga
Dosri or poori mandali visit kari heavens way ka jo khud me apni misal ap hai bht hi khobsurat andaz me us jagah ko dikhaya gaya sabhi ne passand b kiya or khob tareef b kari❤
Sanvy&Dimple ka ye pehla conversation ta jo itna detail me howa is pehle to bs huh han tak baat seemit rahi
Dimple ne us doran bht kuch smjh liya wo jo achieve ker sakta hai wo na karne k bawajod khud se satisfied hai jb k Dimple wo satisfaction kabhi mehsos na ker pai phir chahe jaise b wo ker le
same place me 1 larki ko dikhaya gaya jo apne chote bhai k sath wahan mojoud ti or kuch larke us1 ko lekar baat ker rhe te k wo kaisi hai or jb un k andar ka shehtan ne unki aag ko hawa di to pohacnh ge use pareshan karne
thanks to Sanvy bacha liya use
or last me wo larki apni ap beeti us k dosto ko bata rahi ti ye part bht sad ta us bechari ne bht tuff time dekha or phir kuch aise faisle lene pare jo uski rooh tak ko chalni ker ge
Archana ne bht saha apni izzat masomiyat sb ganwa diya us larki ne
phir shayad uper wale us pe rahem aa hi gaya or Sanvy ne apni mom ko uski help karne bejh diya jahan her taraf se na hi sunane ko mili wahi umeed ki 1 kiran ban ker Veronica pohanchi un tak
Archana k bht israr karne pe pta chala k ye sb un k bete ki wajah se hi mumkin ho saka
or sath hi ye wada b liya wo ye bat kabhi b Sanvy ko nhi bolegi k uski mom ne use sb bata diya
bat khatam hone pe wo apne raste ho li lakin Sanvy k liye us k dill me jo izat ti wo or b barh gayi
apni mandali b exit ki taraf ho li lakin Dimple k dill me pehli martaba ghanti bajh uthi is se pehle Sanvy ka ye pehlu kabhi dekh hi nhi payi wo
kuch anokhe ehsas or jazbat k sang apne dill me uthati umangu ne zinadagi ka ek or pehlu us k andar bhar diya jis ehsas se pehle wo anjan ti jo kabhi is se pehle kabhi mehsos na kiya us ne❤
Last me Veronica ji k bare itna hi bolu ga k un ka nature bht hi khobsurat dikhaya gaya hai
Sonu k dad ki b help kari wo Archana or in jaise or kitne hu ge jinki help kari hu gi waqi in ki jitni b tareef ki jai wo kum hai
apki writing hamesha hi dill ko chu jati hai update k bare jitna b bol lu lakin nahi words k mamle me mai helpless hu
Update was marvelous Shandar or lajawab❤
keep going☺
Best of luck for upcoming updates
And one thing thanku so much for such a beautiful update❤
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