Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF ANI AUR SAM KO SENIORS FAREWELL PAR EK SALSA PERFORMANCE KE LIYE CHOOSE KARTE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF SANVY DIMPLE KI SIGNUP SHIRT ME THOUGHTS LIKHTA HAI.

AB AAGE:-

CHAPTER 1

(ETIOLOGY OF BEING GALATH)

UPDATE-91

DATE-9TH FEBRUARY



FAREWELL CELEBRATION

PLACE-SIRIUS, BANQUET HALL





WOW YAAR ...DDECOR TTOH EKDUM TTOP NNOTCH HAI...


BANQUET HALL me kadam rakhte hi pure hall ki sajawat dekh kaafi excited dikhne laga tha SONU...

lazer beams lage the chaaron hi edges par jinhe filhal aadha hi jalaya gaya tha...

sparkles har taraf faile hue the aur FAREWELL...ye word bhi 3rd screen ke saath har taraf lagaya gaya tha...

ek taraf 12th students ke baithne ke liye bohot se lounge sofas rakhe hue the aur dusri taraf teachers aur kuch khaas parents jinke bacche aaj perform karne waale the, unke liye lounge chairs rakhe hue the...

wahin 12th ke filhal aadhe students hi abhi tak pahunche the jinka swagat 11th ke students kar rahe the...

non 11th aur 12th students ko chhodkar bas faculty members aur special parents hi allowed the is farewell party me...

par hum three stooges phir bhi aaye the idhar...REASON...

NITS bhai sahab..subah se SONU ko le mere ghar pahunch mera aand pura khaa chuka tha woh aur isiliye hi frustration ke beech bhi apni chutti kharab kar SIRIUS aaya tha mai...

NITS-satya vachan bhai...kamal ka decoration hai... hall ka bhi aur hall me ghumne waaliyon ka bhi...

school ki girls ko normally school uniform me dekhne ki aadat thi hum logon ki...

par aaj aisa nahi tha...yahan moujud sabhi girls civil dress me thi...

waise bhi SIRIUS ki girls pure DEHRADUN me apni hotness ke liye mashoor thi aur aaj toh unke pehnaave ne unki khubsoorati ko kayi guna badha diya tha jispar chaaron taraf behadh tezi se gardan ghum rahi thi NITS ki...

SONU-abbe saale,ssab sseniors hain idhar...aise gghurna bband kkar nahi ttoh fokat mme ppela jaayenge apan...

wwaise bbhi allowed nnahi hain hum iddhar...

chal bbhai,nnkkalte hain...

NITS-abbe kuch nahi hota...rukte hain thodi der...

YAHAN KYA KAR RAHE HO BE TUM LOG...!!!

KAMAL TIWARI tha ye...!!B SECTION ke AJAY TIWARI ka bada bhai...yaad toh hoga hi...(26th update)

ek baar suta chuka hai SANVY se ye...

kuch friends ke saath hum teeno ke saamne khada ho gaya tha KAMAL...

KAMAL-maine pucha yahan kya kare rahe ho tum teeno...!!!

NITS-suna humne par jawab dena zaroori nahi samajhte...

SENIOR 2-kya bola be...
senior se baat karne ki tamiz nahi hai...

AHHH...

taaw me aa NITS ka collar pakadne aage badha tha woh SENIOR par aisa karta woh,usse pehle hi uske wrist ko midway pakad halka ghuma diya tha maine...

MAI-farewell hai...khaas din hai tum sabka...lifetime memory me feed rehne waala hai ye din...

aisa scene feed mat karwa jisse yaad kabhi karna chahega nahi par dimag kabhi bhulne dega nahi...

HEY SANVY...WHAT'S UP BUDDY... ARRE,YE SAB KYA..
!!!

KYUN BE...KYA BAKCHODI KAR RAHE HO YAHAN PAR...!!!???

RIZWAN ASHRAFI...KAMAL ka class mate/don tha ye apne class ka...

ek dafa dusre school students ke beech ghira tha ye jahan maine help ki thi iski...

isiliye kaafi achi banti thi RIZWAN se meri...yahi wajah thi ki haath maine uske class mate ka ghumaua tha par phir bhi sawal usne KAMAL aur uske friends se hi kiya tha...

wahin RIZWAN ko dekh KAMAL hadbada gaya tha...

MAI-kuch nahi bhaiya...ye sab hume tameez sikha rahe the...

RIZWAN-tum saale jhuantuon...har jagah superiority dikhani rehti hai,kyun...???

KAMAL-par bhai,aaj hum seniors ka din hai... juniors are not allowed.... phir bhi ye teeno...

RIZWAN-kisne bana diya be ye rule...!!! juniors bas isiliye nahi aate kyunki they know ki aaj seniors ka din hai... that sit...

aur thodi der pehle mere chote bhai se mile the naa tum log...tab toh objection nahi jatayi thi tum logon ne...phir ab kyun...???

jawab nahi tha unme se kisi ke bhi paas RIZWAN ki baaton ka...

unke facial expressions dekh sir apna shake kiya RIZWAN ne...

is beech us bande ka haath chhod diya tha maine jispar usse lagatar jhatak apne pain ko neutralize kar raha tha woh...

RIZWAN-shukr mana chhod diya isne... agar iski satki naa toh ek minute me sabke saamne tumhari seniorgiri tum sabke gaand me ghusa dega ye...

chutiya saale...niklo be...

turant nou do gyaraj ho chuke the KAMAL aur uske saathi jiske baad RIZWAN ghuma hamari taraf...

RIZWAN-saale,samajh nahi aata ki jahan panga hota hai,tu wahan hota hai ya phir jahan bhi tu hota hai,udhar panga...!!!

MAI-aisa kuch nahi nahi hai bhaiya...woh baat mooh tak rakhta toh kuch hota hi nahi...

usne haath badha diya isiliye...

RIZWAN -tune ghuma diya...sahi hai...waise acha hua tu aa gaya... FAREWELL ke baad pata nahi phir kab milenge...

aaja,aaj mere group ke saath FAREWELL enjoy karo teeno...

MAI-arre nahi bhaiya...hum toh aisa hi aa gaye the...kuch plan hai hamara...nikalna padega...

RIZWAN-sure...

MAI-yup...

RIZWAN...

RIZWAN-coming...

piche se RIZWAN ke group se ek bande ne awaaz di thi usse jispar...

RIZWAN-yaar,i have to go...photos kabhi khinchwata nahi mai par agar aaj bhi nahi khinchwaya toh saale suna suna kar jaan le lenge meri...

MAI-leni bhi chahiye...chaliye,aap enjoy kijiye... hum chalte hain...

RIZWAN se baari baari haath milaya SONU aur NITS ne wahin mujhe hug kiya unhone jiske baad hum teeno hall se nikal saamne bane tree shade ki taraf chal pade...

SONU-abbe ttujhe kkya hua...tujhe ttoh ladkiyan dekhni tthi naa...ddekj ttoh li...

NITS-ghanta dekh li...ek katra paani se bhi bhala kabhi pyas bujhta hai kya...!!!

acha khaas RIZWAN bhaiya ne unke saath baithne ka offer diya par nahi...

is loude ko toh TAJ MAHAL kharidne jaana tha naa isiliye mana kar diya...

MAI-abbe jhunjla kyun raha hai...chal, indoor ki taraf chalte hain...

FAREWELL host waali bohot si bandiyan hongi udhar...andar ghusa deta hun tereko...taadte rahiyo...

NITS-lauda nahi jaata mai kahin...

SONU-abbe,!!!bbandiyan taadni hai ttujjhe...llekar toh jaa rraha hai nna yye...pphir kkaahe mana kkar raha ttu...

MAI-kyunki is shahjahan ka tajmahal ye banquet hall hi hai aur iski jeeti jaagti mumtaz bhi issike andar kahin hai...ANI...

meri baat sun ek pal ke liye ghura NITS ne mujhe par phir dusri taraf dekhne laga...

MAI-ussike liye aaya hai naa idhar..usse perform karta dekhne...

DHAMMM...

meri baat puri hote hi ek mukka meri peeth par jama diya tha NITS ne...

NITS-bhosdike jab pata hai toh andar hi rook nahi sakta tha...

MAI-abbe mumtaz teri hai phir mai kyun rukta...tu jaa...

NITS-haan...jaise mera toh andar swagat karenge sab seniors...

MAI-bilkul karenge...woh dekh, tujhe andar le jaane ke liye ek banda bhi bahar gate par chhoda hua hai unhone...

meri baat sun turant piche ghuma NITS aur gate par khade bande ko joki RIZWAN ka ek chela tha, usse dekh pura scene samajh gaya woh...

darasal RIZWAN ke gale lagte waqt uske kaan me kaha tha maine ki thodi der me NITS andar aayega...

koi issue na ho isiliye gate par apne bande ko rakh de jo usne kar diya tha...

NITS-saale, isiliye jaate waqt smile kar rahe the RIZWAN bhaiya...

thanks buddy...tu saccha yaar hai mera... ANJALI beech me naa hoti aur gender issue nahi hota toh mai abhi propose kar dete tereko...

MAI-aur tere ussi proposal waale mooh me mooth deta mai...chal nikal ab...

NITS-tum log nahi aaoge...!!!

SONU-naa... mujhe koi interest nahi...

MAI-aur agar mai gaya toh ANI dekhne se rahi teri taraf...

NITS-louda mera...chalo bye...

MAI-tujhe andaza tha naa ki NITS ANI ke liye aaya hai idhar...

SONU-isssilye hi ttoh rrevison kko bbeech me ccchhod aaya idhar mmai...

canteen cchale...

MAI-chal...

NITS ke banquet hall me ghuste hi hum dono ne bhi apne kadam canteen ki taraf badha diye the par tabhi banquet hall se bahar nikli music ki awaaz jisse sun rook gaya mai...

MAI-ANI ka performance shuru hone waala hai...

SONU-ttujhe kaise mmaalum...music ttoh bohott der se cchalu hai...

MAI-ab tak lyrics chaalu the...ab instrumental baj raha hai...

ANI ne uske performance ke liye choosen songs ka bataya tha mujhe...

pehla song LA VIDA hai..ussika instrumental baj raha hai abhi...

SONU-ddekhna hai ttujjhe kkya...???

MAI-dekhna hota toh NITS ke saath chala nahi gaya hota kya...???chal canteen...

HEY GUYZZZ...

RASHI thi ye jo NAISHA ke saath saamne se aa rahi thi...

NAISHA-kya yaar SANVY,SONU...aa rahe the toh hume nahi bata sakte the...saath me aa jaate sab...

SONU-aa ttoh gayi...aur kkitna aayegi...!!!

RASHI-very funny... isne saath me kaha waise...by th way,tum dono yahan kaise...???ANI ne tumhe bhi bulaya kya...???

MAI-dono nahi teeno...NITS andar hall me hai...

aur naa,ANI ne hume nahi, humne khudko invite kar liya...ab sawal khatm hue toh jaao andar...ANI ka performance shuru hone waala hai...

NAISHA-really...toh tum dono bhi chalo naa...

MAI-naachne ke naam par teri bestie ke sade expressions nahi dekhne mujhe...tum dono hi jaao...we are in the canteen... performance ke baad aa jaaiyo...

NAISHA-mere se pehle teri bestie hai woh...aur teri taarif waala message deliver kar dungi mai...

chal see yaa...

ek taraf turant hall ki taraf badh gaye the RASHI aur NAISHA aur dusri taraf hum dono canteen ki taraf badh liye the...


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A FEW MINUTES LATER:-





SONU-itna kkharab pperform kiya kya ANJALI aur SAM ne ki in ddono kko bbhaag kar aana ppada...

hahahaha....

DHAKK...

SONU ki baat puri hone se pehle apni chair ek jhatke me piche khiska khada ho chuka tha mai...

reason...

SONU ne sirf RASHI aur NAISHA ko hamari taraf bhaagte hue dekha tha par maine un dono ke facial expressions bhi dekhe the jo kahin se bhi positive nahi the...

wahin mere reaction ko dekh SONU bhi hadbada gaya tha par woh kuch puche,usse pehle hi RASHI aur NAISHA hamare paas aa chuke the aur unke expressions dekh mere reaction ko turant samajh gaya tha woh...

MAI-kya hua...???

NAISHA-SANVY woh ANJALI...

MAI-drama nahi chaiye...ek baar me bol NAISHA...

RASHI-SANVY woh SAM ne ANJALI ko...he touched her hardly...woh bhi sabke saamne...

SONU-touched her hardly...!!!arre salsa kar rahe hain dono... touch toh hard ho hoga naa...aur perform toh sabke saamne hi kar rahe hain naa dono...

RASHI-he squeezed...

MAI-squeezed what...answer damnit...

RASHI-her boobs...

SONU-SSANVY rook bhai...ppuri baat jaan lete hain ppehle...ee ttum dono... ppuri baat bbatao re...

aaj pehli baar mera naam haklaate hue liya tha SONU ne joki laazmi bhi tha...

jo hua tha aur uska jo anjaam mai dene waala tha,uski kalpana jo ho gayi thi usse...

RASHI-arre woh ek back and fro move tha...ANJALI saamne thi aur SAM piche... shoulders se hold kiya hua tha SAM ne usse...

apni ungliyan ko ANI ke hands se lekar uskw fingers tak le jaana tha par mid way SAM changed the sequence...

ANI ke breast par haath chale gaye uske aur....

aage bol nahi paayi RASHI kyunki ab chal nahi doudne laga tha mai aur ye dekh woh teeno bho bhaage mere piche...

NAISHA-araam se SANVY...teachers bhi hain wahan...

DHADHHH...

HALL ka door bas hold kar band kiya hua tha jispar maari thi maine ye laath...

laath padte hi door tezi se khul chuka tha...

andar ka scene abhi se hi halka negetive aur dramatic tha...

saare students dono taraf khade the aur stage par bohot se log khade the...

for starters,SHRAVYA aur SANDEEP UDAASI as in ANI'S parents the wahan...dono hi behadh ghusse me the...

is waqt SANDEEP uncle se thoda aage SMRITI CHANDER khadi thi aur dono ke beech khada tha SMRITI CHANDER ke 6 me se ek bodyguard jisne SANDEEP uncle ko SAM se bhidne se roka hua tha...

same haal NITS ka bhi tha...woh bhi bakte hue ek BODYGUARD ko push karne ki naakam koshish kar raha tha...

SANDEEP uncle bhi gaali bakte hue zor laga rahe the par un dono bodyguards ki lambi chowdi personality ke saamne uncle aur NITS ki chal nahi rahi thi...

aaj apne bodyguards saath nahi laaye the uncle jiska bohot ofsos ho raha tha unhe...

wahin dusri taraf SMRITI CHANDER SANDEEP UNCLE ko shaant rehne ke liye bol rahi thi par jo unki beti ke saath sabke saamne hua tha,kaise shaant reh sakta tha koi bhi baap...

bohot se faculty members bhi the jinki trustees ke saamne zor se bolne ki haisiyat aur himmat thi nahi isiliye dheemi awaaz me unhe rookne ke liye bol rahe the...

teesri taraf SAM sir jhukaye khada tha par chowthi taraf thi apni MAA SHRAVYA aunty ke kandhon lar sir chhupaye ro rahi ANI...

par jaise hi hall ka door tezi se open hua,sabke saath uski nazar bhi meri taraf ghumi...

SANVYYYY...

dheemi awaaz me mera naam lene ke beech uski aankhein thodi aur bheeg gayi thi aur ye dekh mera bacha khucha dimagi santulan bhi off ho gaya...

MAI-aeeee...ro kya rahi hai...meri ANI hai tu...maar MADARCHOD ko...

aaj kisi ka lihaaz nahi tha mujhe aur naa kisi ki parwah thi...

aankhein khun si laal ho chuki thi jinki pyaas khun hi bujha sakta tha...

NITS-aa gaya tum sabka baap...kat lo be behen ke loudon warna woh toh kaat dega hi...

RIZWAN-SANVY yaar....

haath upar hua mera aur beech me hi chup ho side ho gaya RIZWAN...

meri aankhon ko dekh dil dhakk sa kar gaya tha uska...

SMRITI-hey you...SANVY...stop...

DHAKKK...DHAKKK..DHAKKK..DHAKKK..DHAKKK...KDAKKKK..KDAKKKK...KDAKKK...KDAKKKK....

aage kuch bol paati SMRITI par tab tak uske pehle bodyguard ke saamne pahunch chuka tha mai...

aur phir shuru hua taandav... mere kandhe par haath rakh mujhe rokna chaha tha us bodyguard ne par tabhi bijli ki tezi se uske haath ko jhatakte hue uske chest par ek block punch maara maine...

punch itna powerful tha ki saansein atakti hui si mehsoos hone lagi thi us bodyguard ko apni par tabhi uska respiration system double speed tak badh gaya tha...

90 kg ka banda tha woh jisse wapas apni taraf kheench kisi rubber doll ki tarah utha diya tha maine...

usse utha piche se aa rahe bodyguard ke upar fekh diya maine...

woh banda aise kuch ke liye taiyar nahi tha... pehle bande ke saath niche gira woh aur is beech mai NITS ko pakde bande ke pass pahunch chuka tha...sidhe uski gotiyon me pehla kick maara maine aur phir ek aur crack foot finger kich uske ghutno par maar diya...

haddi tootne ki halki aur us bande ki gand faad dard bhari awaaz sabke kaano me padi thi...

ek haath se aand aur dusre se moodw pair ko pakad zameen me lotpoth hone laga tha woh banda...

is beech pehle dono bande uth chuke the..piche se mujhe laath maarne ke liye apne apne pair chalaye the dono ne par back flip ke beech naa sirf uski laath dodge kar gaya mai balki saath hi saath mid air mai hi dono ke pair pakad ghum gaya tha mai...

agle hi pal woh dono ladhkhadate hue piche ki taraf gir chuke the aur mai unke pair ke sahare back tilt hokar khada tha aur tabhi...

dono ke ghutno ke ek khaas andaz se jhakta diya tha maine jispar ek baar phir unke ghutno ke haddiyan tootne ki halki aur dard ki tez awaaz pure hall me gunj chuki thi...

te sab chand seconds me hi ho gaya tha jisse paanchwa bodygard jisne uncle ko hold kiya hua tha, recover kar paata,usse pehle hi uska haath maine pakad liya tha...

aur phir...KDAKKK...

uski elbow joint khiska di thi maine...

6TH-hey stop...or else i will kill you...

jahan ek taraf jo hua tha,usse dekh sabhi stunned the...

even ANI ke bhi aankhon ke aansu pure gayab ho chuke the wahin mujhe dhamki dene ke beech apni GLOCK 22 bahar nikaal li thi us bodyguard ne...

MAI-yahan, head shot le...bilkul beech me maar...maar na madarchod...

bandhook pakadne se kuch nahi hota,chalane ke liye gaand me guda hona chahiye...

DHAKKK...

us bandook ki nali apne head ke beech laga khada hua mai aur ye dekh us bodyguard ki gandiya fath gayi thi...

halki si kaampi thi uski ungliyan aur aisa hote hi maara maine ek uppar punch uske mid wrist portion par...

hatheli uski puri numb padh gayi thi aur gun upar hawa me ucchal chuki thi...

aur tabhi maano bijli kaundhi us bodyguard par...

back to back tez punches ki bouchar kar di thi maine uspar jiska natija ye nikla ki 2 second lage the gun ko neeche aane me aur in do seconds me 16 baar naak,gaal aur mouth area me punches khaa chuka tha woh bodyguard...

THADDD...AAHHHH....

gun neeche aate hi pakda maine usse aur agle hi pal de maara us bodyguard ke sir par...

mooh toh khun se san hi chuka tha..sir faththe hi apne hi khoon se nahane laga tha woh bodyguard...


RIZWAN-kyun...???bhidna hai ab SANVY se...

KAMAL aur uske doston se kahi thi ye baat RIZWAN ne jisparm mere ruthless avtaar ko dekh bas mushkil se apna apna thook hi gatak paaye the woh sab...

DHADHHH DHADDDHHH...DHADHHHH...DHADHHHH....DHADHHHH...

wahan ua BODYGUARD ki haalath dekh sab shocked ho hi rahe the ki tabhi padi sabke kaano meek nayi awaaz...

ye mere punches the jo lagatar SAM ke mooh par padh rahe the...

SMRITI-hey...chhod mere bete ko...

UGGHHHH...

mujhe apne bete se alag karne aage badhi thi SMRITI par tabhi ghuma mai aur agle hi pal gala daba neeche floor par patak k
diya tha maine unhe...

saans lena bhi mushkil hone laga tha aunty ka aur ye dekh abki baar ANI, uske parents, aur mere sabhi dost bhi hadbada gaye the...

NITS-abbe pagal ho gaya hai kya...chhod...

aunty ko mujhse chhudane ke liye NITS ke saath baaki sab bhi aage badh rahe the par tabhi sir utha ghura maine un sabko aur itna kaafi tha...

mere face ko dekh apni aatma ki hadh tak dar gaye the woh sab...

jis SANVY ko jaante the woh sab,gayab tha is waqt.. uski jagah ek aise shaitan ki jhalak dikhi thi un sabko mere face par jiske raaste aur maksad ke beech aane ki galti kar GALATH nahi ho sakte the woh sab...

par MAA par beetegi toh beta
saamne aayega hi...

SAM-hey leave my mom...

DHAKK...

MAI-bilkul chhod dunga par ek sharth hai meri...!!!teri MAA ke bhi toh boobs hain naa...un boobs ko nichod inki saree nikaal pura nanga kar pure school me ghumaunga mai...

phir chhod dunga... chalega naa tereko...bol naa, chalega naa tereko...

mere gale ko piche se dobach mujhe uthane ki koshish karne laga tha SAM par tabhi khudko ek tez forward push kiya maine jisse SAM ka face thoda side se saamne ki taraf aa gaya aur bas...

apne free hand se uski gardan daboch aage ki taraf itni zor se kheencha maine ki pura rotate hota hue apni MAA ke just saamne ki taraf ulat position me gira woh...

and in the very next moment...

uska gala bhi daboch chuka tha mai...wahin meri baat sun SAM me saath baaki sab shocked bhi the aur dare hue bhi...

joki laazmi bhi tha...un sabka SANVY ab kisi unknown identity ke piche gayab jo ho chuka tha...

SAM aur uski MAA,dono ke hi chehre ab laal padne lage the aur unki aankhein reh reh kar palatnw lagi thi...apni aakhri atki saanson ko le rahe the woh dono par tabhi...


STOP IT SANVEER...STOP IT RIGHT NOW...

MAI-make me stop...i dare you...make...me...stop...

PRINCI thi ye jo news milte hi bhaagi thi idhar...mujhe rokne mere kareeb aa hi gayi thi woh par tabhi ek jhatke me utha mera face unki taraf jisse dekh unke badhte kadam aur haath rook gaye the...

lambi saanson ke beech apne reedh ki haddi me uthi thandak ko shaant kiya unhone aur...


PRINCI-stop it SANVY...tumhe VERONICA ki kasam...

MAI-AHHHHHHHHHHH........

un dono ke gale ko chhod PRINCI ke theek saamne fraction of a second me pahucha tha mai...

thartharate chehre ke saath unhe dekh chillaya tha mai jispar andar se toh puri hil gayi thi woh par saamne se khudko shaant rakh khadi hui thi woh...

ANJALI-please SANVY...shaant ho jaa...

bohot der baad ye jaani pehchaani awaaz suni thi maine jispar ghuma mai ANI ke taraf...

chehra pura aansuon se bhiga hua tha uska aur ye dekh uski taraf badha mai par tabhi...

ANI aur uske parents ke saath saath mere saare friends bhi dar ke maare do kadam piche ho gaye...

aur ye laazmi bhi tha...jis bande ko kuch seconds pehle tak dekha tha un sabne,woh banda kar koi khunkhaar aur bekaaboo jaanwar zyada lag raha tha...

un sabko yun darta dekh mai bhi rook gaya aur khudko puri tarah shaant karne ke liye apni aankhein band kar li maine...

SMRITI-you...tu jaanta nahi kispar haath daala hai tune...i swear, chhodungi nahi tujhe mai you bloody...

PRINCI-not another word warna i will throw you out of my school...

thoda theek lagte hi mujhe bakne lagi thi SMRITI par PRINCI ki baat sun hairan reh gayi woh...

SMRITI-do you have any idea to whom yo are talking to...SMRITI CHANDER hun mai aur is school ke jahan tum sirf ek maamuli job kar rahi ho,uski on of the trustee hun mai...

PRINCI-exactly...one of the trustee...aur mai sole PRINCIPAL hun is school ki...

and let me remind you..ye job maine paison ke liye nahi li... apni marzi se li hai warna tumhari ya kisi aur trustee ki itni haisiyat nahi jo mujhe salary de sake...

jitna tumhara net worth hai utni mujhe meri likhi books aur researchers se milne waali royalty hai...

phir bhi agar itni hi maamuli lagti hai tumhe meri job toh use your trustee power...

scratch me out...lao meri jagah koi aur... mai bhi toh dekhun ki kaun hai aisa jo RANJANA MATTHEWS ki jagah lene ki himmat aur hunar rakhta hai...

boli nahi dahadi thi PRINCI jinki baat me itni zyada sachayi thi ki ab us matter par bolne ke liye kuch bacha hi nahi tha SMRITI ke paas...

SMRITI-maine toh suna tha ki tum bohot transpire ho...isne jo kiya,uske baad isse school se resticate karne ke bajaye words mujhpar twist kar rahi ho...

PRINCI-aap sabka farewell celebration indoor stadium me shift kiya jaa raha hai... jaaiye wahan... quick...

neeche khade sabhi seniors ko order diya tha PRINCI ne jiska asar double speed se hua tha...

ek minute se kam time me pura hall khaali ho chuka tha...

aisa hote hi PRINCI wapas ghumi SMRITI ki taraf aur...

PRINCI-word twist...!!!sahi boli par woh kya hai naa ki mai saamne waale se ussi ki zubaan me baat karne me yakin rakhti hun...

aur haan,i am transpire warna ab tak jo tumahare bete ne kiya uske liye iske haathon me iska restication letter hota with black review...

aur pata hona chahiye tumhe ki RANJANA MATTHEWS ke haathon se likhi review ko is duniya ka har educational institution maanta hai...

so,SAMEER ke haathon me restication letter hota aur tumpar legal action liya jaa chuka hota...

kyunki school ke bylaws bhul gayi ho tum jiske according kisi bhi parent ke bodyguards school premises me toh enter kar sakte hain par school ke kisi bhi building ke andar kadam nahi rakh sakte...

aur tumhare bodyguards ne toh naa sirf is hall me enter kiya balki is school ke student par pehle se haath uthaya...

haath kya,unme se ek ne toh SANVEER AHARYA par gun tak point kiya tha...

donot say no kyunki ye hall c.c.t.v se lais hai...ussi scene ko dekhne ka baad hi mai yahan aayi hun...

so now you tell me,lun legal action...

RANJANA ki baaton ne SMRITI ko khoon ke ghoont peene par majboor kar diya tha...

ghusse se woh meri peeth ko dekh apne nathuno ko fula rahi thi...

halka mere kareeb aayi woh par zyada nahi...jo roop maine dikhaya tha,uska dar abhi bhi uske man me tha...

SMRITI-this isn't over boy... GALATH panga le liya hai tumne...

bohot jald tumhe tumhari aukaad dikhaungi mai...

SMRITI...


SMRITI ki baat par RANJANA kuch bolti,usse pehle hi is nayi awaaz joki main door se aayi thi,usse sun sabka face udhar ghum gaya...

aur jo shakshiyat wahan khadi thi,usse dekh SMRITI ka facial expression ho badal chuka tha...

MAA...

itni see me pehli baar meri aankhein khuli thi aur MAA ko saamne dekh mera ashaant man bilkul shaant hone laga tha...

par MAA shaant nahi thi..
chehre par krodh liye woh badhi hamari taraf aur ye dekh jahan ek taraf SMRITI ko apne college ke time waali SMRITI yaad aane lagi jiske aage sir hamesha jhuka hi rehta tha uska aur piche hatne lagi woh wahin dusri taraf RANJANA MATTHEWS jaisi lady jinka vyaktitv kisi pahad jaisa tha aur jinhone mere reaction ko c.c.t.v ke through dekh hi MAA ko yahan bulaya tha,woh bhi ab MAA ko saamne se dekh nervous dikhne lagi thi...

khair, chalte hue stage me chadh ek baar mere sir par haath fer meri puri negetiveness kheenchne ke baad ANI ko apne seene se laga liya MAA ne...

wahin MAA ke seene se lagte hi ANI ki saari maansik pareshani bhi chhu mantar hone lagi thi...

aur SHRAVYA,SANDEEP...as in ANI ke parents...aaj pehli baar tha jab apni beti ko khudse zyada mere MAA ke kareeb dekh unhe bura nahi balki acha feel ho raha tha...

MAA-baccho,ghar jaao..
turant...

NITS,SONU,RASHI aur NAISHA se kahi thi ye baat MAA ne aur jis tarah boli thi, turant stage se utar hall se nikal gaye the woh sab...

aisa hote hi ANI ko saath lagaye hue hi SMRITI ki taraf ghumi MAA...

MAA-mere bete ko uski aukaad dikhayegi tu...dikha...

SMRITI-VERONICA tu...

MAA-shhhh...

talaab ki macchliyan kitni hi badi kyun naa ho jaaye,samandar ke sharks se bhida nahi karti...

aakhri baar samjha rahi hun tujhe...




mai woh sab kar sakti hun,jisse karne ka maine kiya DAAVA HO...


haath paani me daal, tab nahi jab beh raha LAAVA HO...

kathni aur karni ke fark ko samajh aur bol chaahe jitna le magar...

kuch bhi aisa mat kar guzarna jiske baad karne ke liye sirf PACHTAAVA HO...









AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI...





AAPKA APNA V...J...
Both updates are great and the second one is the tone setter for those things which are going to happen in the future for SANVY.

Overall behtreen updates the 2non hi .

isme hume SANVY ka ab tk ka sabse Cruel orr Ruthless avatar dekhne ko mila, or jahan tk mujhe yaad aaraha hai ab tak ki story ka to ye first time tha jab SANVY ne kisi female pr haath uthaaya ho even k SANVY to kabhi kisi female k saamne kuch ultaa seedha bhi nhi bolta.


Sam ne kitna badaa gunaah kiya hai or SANVY ko kitna gussa aaya tha us pr ye to issi baat se clear ho jaata hai k SANVY ne kisi ka lehaaz nhi kiya even k teachers or sabhi parents logon k saamne hi gaaliyon ka be-Daregh istemaal kiya usne.


SANVY ne sabhi sabko hi peeta kya wo Bodyguard hon ya Sam ya phir usmi MAA lekin SANVY ne kisi ka lehaaz naa kiya. SANVY ne to Ranjana Methwes ki bhi naa sunii agr VERONICA shi time pr naa aatiii to maybe aaj SANVY k haathon kuch ghalat ho jaata, waise ghalat to pehle hi ho chukaa hai pr agr VERONICA usse naa rokti to phir kuch bachta bhi nhi.



or aaj first time Anjali k parents usse VERONICA k saath dekh kr khush huwe hain to maybe k ab jald hi inki talkhiyaan bhi khatam ho jain .

Will be waiting for the next update.
 

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Thanks for the beautiful review brother...

For your points, firstly, haven't thought about my past stories while lining up this story.. it's just a sere coincidence that in all my written stories,the parents and love angles journey are matching with each other...

but about the negetive part,yaa..
For me it's the core for any thrilling story...

I like to up my game every time i write a negetive character...

but this story is a bit different...not just from my old stories but also from any story of this forum and even from some good thriller novels...

I say this because of the content which lies behind the curtain and which will actually start to unfold the real story...

A hint...yes, SANVEER is the protogonist but there are characters about whom you all will read from the second chapter onwards...those characters will be as intriguing as SANVEER...

Both positive and negetive...

Trust me on this... prediction is not going to be easy for this story...its gonna be a roller coaster ride...just enjoy it...

And for the spelling mistakes,yes i am aware of it... actually, after the 65th update,Because of time shortage,i have been casual about the recheck procedure...

But it will get better...

Again thanks for your beautiful review...

Be along...
Bilkul vj4u apki story to rollercoaster ride jaisii hi hai or me to bolun ga k us se bhi zeyaada thrilling and exciting hai yrr.

apki story to Marvel walon ki Web series or movie se bhi zeyaad thrilling or complicated hai jinme Marvel ki future movie ka hint diya hota hai like next movie k hero ya villain se related kuch scene ya stuff dikhayaa jaata hai. Unhe guess krna phir bhi bohot easy hota hai pr apki story k hints or scenes se guess krna bohot zeyaada difficult hota hai.

Bohot hi behtreen hain aapki writing skills .



 

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Vj bhai yeh nahi samajh aaya ki aakhir Sameer ne aisa kyon kiya aur aisi jagah pe jahan khud uski maa bhi maujud thi.
Kya woh sanvy ko uksana chahta tha Ani ko is tarah sabke samne sarminda kar ke ya koi aur hi twist hai isme bhi. Ab yahan yeh bhi samajh nahi aa raha ki Sameer jyada hi smart hai ya bahot hi bada bewakoof kyonki sirious ke rules to use bhi pata hi hongey ki uske sath kya ho sakta hai. Ya fir jaiden chaudhari ka beta hone ka ghamand ki wo kuchh bhi kar sakta hai uska koi kuchh bigad nahi sakta.
Bilkul dost aapne is baat ko note kiya jo k shaayd hi kisi or reader ne kiya ho k aakhir Sam ko aisiii kya chulll machi thi jo usne sabke saamne aisa kiyaa. Mene bhi note kiya tha but time ki kami or net k issue k chalte mention nhi kr paaya or review likhte huwe zehen se nikal gaya pr aapne mentione kiya hai ab reason kya tha ye to sabko hi jaannaa hai k aisa q kiya SAMEER ne.
maybe by mistake aisa ho gaya ho pr chances bohot hi kam hain iske bcz SAMEER koi bacha to hai nhi ya koi No-Sikhiyaa, wo ek trained or one of the best dancer hai to ghalati k chances bohot kam hain. Or phir ek straight on smooth step k beech me jab usse apne haathon ko smoothly slide krte huwe ANJALI k shoulders se slide krte huwe uski Fingers as on hands ✋ tk le kr jaana tha but mid way m uske haad ANJALI k breast pr chale gye or usne squeeze kr diya , ye ghalti nhi hai.
 

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Jiska aap e prologue me bola thaa shayad ab ant ki shuruvat ho gayi magar woh arambh hoga SANVY ke safar ka magar ek cheez miss lagi is pure kaand me aur woh hain DIMPLE ka es sence se gayab hona shayad yahi wajah Dimple aur SANVY ka karan banegi jis ka apane 2nd Prologue me darshaya thaa. Ab lagta hai Smriti hi usi police wale se complain kar ke SANVY ko jail karayegi ya phir Sam ka najayaz baap kudega phir beech me aur apni taqat dikhayega aur yahi reason Bane shayad Veronica ki death ka.
Jaha tak mujhay lagta hain shayad SAM ne intentionally salsa ke liye apna nad Ani ka naam diya hoga aur SANVY ko trigger karne ke liye yah harkat Kari ho apne baap ke kehne per. Taki SANVY kuch GHALAT kar sakey aur usko moqa Miley coz uske jaisay champion ke liye draw bhi haar hoti hai aur woh haar bardasht nahi kar sakta. Dekhtey hai aapke dimagh me kiya chal raha hai .
Ab ye to pta nhi k SANVY k arrest hone m Smriti ka hath hoga ya nhi pr JAINDEN CHOHDARY to laazmi involve hoga bcz Protologue update m padha tha k Police wale n kya bola tha to ye to clear hai JAINDEN ki involvement ka. Ab VERONICA ki death ka exact reason ka idea to nhi lagaaya jaa sakta pr maybe G.O.D reason ho sakta hai uska .
 

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Bilkul dost aapne is baat ko note kiya jo k shaayd hi kisi or reader ne kiya ho k aakhir Sam ko aisiii kya chulll machi thi jo usne sabke saamne aisa kiyaa. Mene bhi note kiya tha but time ki kami or net k issue k chalte mention nhi kr paaya or review likhte huwe zehen se nikal gaya pr aapne mentione kiya hai ab reason kya tha ye to sabko hi jaannaa hai k aisa q kiya SAMEER ne.
maybe by mistake aisa ho gaya ho pr chances bohot hi kam hain iske bcz SAMEER koi bacha to hai nhi ya koi No-Sikhiyaa, wo ek trained or one of the best dancer hai to ghalati k chances bohot kam hain. Or phir ek straight on smooth step k beech me jab usse apne haathon ko smoothly slide krte huwe ANJALI k shoulders se slide krte huwe uski Fingers as on hands ✋ tk le kr jaana tha but mid way m uske haad ANJALI k breast pr chale gye or usne squeeze kr diya , ye ghalti nhi hai.
Sahi point pakde ho bro i appreciate that
ye sala kuch na kuch utla kerta hi hai is bar to hud ker di koi shak nahi is sare kand me uska bap b shamil hoga aisi ghatiya harket or kon ker sakta last time b to iske bap ne hi plan kia ta or Dimple ko b force kia uske liye bura feel hota hai wo in jesi nahi hai but unluckily uske biological parents inhi logu ko hona ta
She's deserves much much better than that.
 

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Can't find any words to praise you now!!:bow: Simply, the greatest story of the forum currently, don't think I've ever read something as great as this story, in my life.. no novel, no story, no writer can come close! :love3:
On this forum? Yes!! without a doubt but there is a lot of better stories outside this forum, in mainstream media, for example star wars, LOTR (considered greatest of all time) Got(novels only) tv series is great till season 6 and in comics, one piece(greatest world building manga/comics) nothing comes close to it in terms of everything, berserk manga(it has greatest villain I've ever read) so yeah VJ bhai certainly is a great writer with amazing thought process and to think we compare him to some of the greatest stories written in the history of mankind says a lot abt his writing abilities.
 
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