RAAZ
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Bhai story se zada aapki yah mohabbat hi to hai jo sab ko aapki story per kheech ke layi hain.
Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)
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MYSTERIOUS HARRY
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LionHeart007
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Both updates are great and the second one is the tone setter for those things which are going to happen in the future for SANVY.
Overall behtreen updates the 2non hi .
isme hume SANVY ka ab tk ka sabse Cruel orr Ruthless avatar dekhne ko mila, or jahan tk mujhe yaad aaraha hai ab tak ki story ka to ye first time tha jab SANVY ne kisi female pr haath uthaaya ho even k SANVY to kabhi kisi female k saamne kuch ultaa seedha bhi nhi bolta.
Sam ne kitna badaa gunaah kiya hai or SANVY ko kitna gussa aaya tha us pr ye to issi baat se clear ho jaata hai k SANVY ne kisi ka lehaaz nhi kiya even k teachers or sabhi parents logon k saamne hi gaaliyon ka be-Daregh istemaal kiya usne.
SANVY ne sabhi sabko hi peeta kya wo Bodyguard hon ya Sam ya phir usmi MAA lekin SANVY ne kisi ka lehaaz naa kiya. SANVY ne to Ranjana Methwes ki bhi naa sunii agr VERONICA shi time pr naa aatiii to maybe aaj SANVY k haathon kuch ghalat ho jaata, waise ghalat to pehle hi ho chukaa hai pr agr VERONICA usse naa rokti to phir kuch bachta bhi nhi.
or aaj first time Anjali k parents usse VERONICA k saath dekh kr khush huwe hain to maybe k ab jald hi inki talkhiyaan bhi khatam ho jain .
Will be waiting for the next update.
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Bilkul vj4u apki story to rollercoaster ride jaisii hi hai or me to bolun ga k us se bhi zeyaada thrilling and exciting hai yrr.
apki story to Marvel walon ki Web series or movie se bhi zeyaad thrilling or complicated hai jinme Marvel ki future movie ka hint diya hota hai like next movie k hero ya villain se related kuch scene ya stuff dikhayaa jaata hai. Unhe guess krna phir bhi bohot easy hota hai pr apki story k hints or scenes se guess krna bohot zeyaada difficult hota hai.
Bohot hi behtreen hain aapki writing skills .
LionHeart007
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Bilkul dost aapne is baat ko note kiya jo k shaayd hi kisi or reader ne kiya ho k aakhir Sam ko aisiii kya chulll machi thi jo usne sabke saamne aisa kiyaa. Mene bhi note kiya tha but time ki kami or net k issue k chalte mention nhi kr paaya or review likhte huwe zehen se nikal gaya pr aapne mentione kiya hai ab reason kya tha ye to sabko hi jaannaa hai k aisa q kiya SAMEER ne.
maybe by mistake aisa ho gaya ho pr chances bohot hi kam hain iske bcz SAMEER koi bacha to hai nhi ya koi No-Sikhiyaa, wo ek trained or one of the best dancer hai to ghalati k chances bohot kam hain. Or phir ek straight on smooth step k beech me jab usse apne haathon ko smoothly slide krte huwe ANJALI k shoulders se slide krte huwe uski Fingers as on hands
tk le kr jaana tha but mid way m uske haad ANJALI k breast pr chale gye or usne squeeze kr diya , ye ghalti nhi hai.
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Ab ye to pta nhi k SANVY k arrest hone m Smriti ka hath hoga ya nhi pr JAINDEN CHOHDARY to laazmi involve hoga bcz Protologue update m padha tha k Police wale n kya bola tha to ye to clear hai JAINDEN ki involvement ka. Ab VERONICA ki death ka exact reason ka idea to nhi lagaaya jaa sakta pr maybe G.O.D reason ho sakta hai uska .
Lover_boy143
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Sahi point pakde ho bro i appreciate thatBilkul dost aapne is baat ko note kiya jo k shaayd hi kisi or reader ne kiya ho k aakhir Sam ko aisiii kya chulll machi thi jo usne sabke saamne aisa kiyaa. Mene bhi note kiya tha but time ki kami or net k issue k chalte mention nhi kr paaya or review likhte huwe zehen se nikal gaya pr aapne mentione kiya hai ab reason kya tha ye to sabko hi jaannaa hai k aisa q kiya SAMEER ne.
maybe by mistake aisa ho gaya ho pr chances bohot hi kam hain iske bcz SAMEER koi bacha to hai nhi ya koi No-Sikhiyaa, wo ek trained or one of the best dancer hai to ghalati k chances bohot kam hain. Or phir ek straight on smooth step k beech me jab usse apne haathon ko smoothly slide krte huwe ANJALI k shoulders se slide krte huwe uski Fingers as on hands
ye sala kuch na kuch utla kerta hi hai is bar to hud ker di koi shak nahi is sare kand me uska bap b shamil hoga aisi ghatiya harket or kon ker sakta last time b to iske bap ne hi plan kia ta or Dimple ko b force kia uske liye bura feel hota hai wo in jesi nahi hai but unluckily uske biological parents inhi logu ko hona ta
She's deserves much much better than that.
Lover_boy143
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Waiting Vj sir.....!
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On this forum? Yes!! without a doubt but there is a lot of better stories outside this forum, in mainstream media, for example star wars, LOTR (considered greatest of all time) Got(novels only) tv series is great till season 6 and in comics, one piece(greatest world building manga/comics) nothing comes close to it in terms of everything, berserk manga(it has greatest villain I've ever read) so yeah VJ bhai certainly is a great writer with amazing thought process and to think we compare him to some of the greatest stories written in the history of mankind says a lot abt his writing abilities.Can't find any words to praise you now!!Simply, the greatest story of the forum currently, don't think I've ever read something as great as this story, in my life.. no novel, no story, no writer can come close!
