Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)

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vj4u

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Kya solid plan banaya tha Sam ne magar aur kar bhi kya sakta tha kyonki Sanvy se jeet nahi sakta tha aur baap ke saamne izzat bhi bachani thi.

Magar Dimple aur Sam ka relationship was something bigger than atom bomb. Dimple ye baat chupa kar Sanvy ka dil tod daala hai aur ab pata nahi ye judega bhi yaa nahi?

Now with this big reveal that Jayden Chowdhury is father of Sam and Dimple. Magar is raaj se kaafi baatein clear ho gayi hai.

1. Archana aur Smriti ka Veronica se dushmani, reason ek to Veronica khud no. 1 thi upper se shaadi bhi no.1 Saneel se ho gayi to ab dono ko hi life mein Veronica ko maat Deni thi to both choose second best option Jayden.

2. Prologue mein Sanvy ki girftari ke liye inspector ne Jayden ka naam liya tha, ab baap apne bachcho aur biwi ke liye itna to karega hi ki Sanvy ko arrest Kara kar Veronica ko mazboor kiya hoga aur us maara hoga

3. Jayden bhi Sanvy ka shikaar bana hoga jiski wajah se future update mein Dimple ne Sanvy ko ruthless killer bola tha.

Bahut hi shandaar aur dhamakedar update ab isse kam hi aapse ab umeed bhi nahi hai Attitude (1 & 2) jaise story ke writer se jisne pahle hi dimaag ke fuse uda diye the. Kya hi jabardast story thi dono aur uski level ki writing with different zone ki hai ye story bhi. Keep writing.
Thanks brother...yunhi saath bane rahiye
 

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This is the mega update
Kitne points banaye jaaye iske baare mein meri speculation thi ki jaiden, archna smiriti shayad G.O.D se jude ho sakte hai ya phir inme se ek ho bhi sakta hai lekin ye toh ek alag hi dhamka kar diya aapne waakai mein kaafi points clear hote hai aur kaafi swaal bhi hote hai
Points
1. ye ek reason ho sakta hai sanvy ke mom ke death ka reason
2. Sanvy ne isse jyada bhi bura kiya ho competition hi poori apne naam karke ya phir jaiden Chowdhary ka hi record break karke
3.iske baad inki friendship ya sanvy ke mostly love relationship ka kya hoga
Question
1. Dimple ko sanvy ne apne saath rakha q future update mein
2. Kya dimple un cheezon ka missuse nahi kar sakti jisko sanvy ne seekhaya hai usse
Aage ke scenes goosebumps paida Karne waale honge brother...yunhi saath bane rahiye
 

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यदि दुश्मनों की पुरी जन्मकुंडली आपके पास पहले से ही तैयार रखा हुआ है तो जंग जिताने में ज्यादा परेशानी नहीं होती । सनवीर की सफलता का यही राज है । बेशक इस कार्य में कुछ मदद उसकी मां और प्रिंसिपल मैडम की भी रही होगी ।

मुझे अंदाजा हो गया था और अपने रिव्यू के माध्यम से कहा भी था कि समीर चंदर का किडनैप मात्र एक छलावा था जिसका मेन रीजन सनवीर आहार्य का स्पोर्ट्स इवेंट में पार्टिसिपेसन था ।

लेकिन यह नहीं जानता था कि समीर और डिंपल एक ही बाप के संतान थे । ग्रेट पर्सनैल्टी जयदेन चौधरी के संतान ।

दोनों का अपने पिता का नाम राज रखना समझ आता है लेकिन स्कूल में ऐसी क्या बेरूखी जो दोनों ने एक दूसरे के साथ स्ट्रैंजर जैसा विहैव किया ! ऐसी क्या बेरूखी जो क्रिसमस डे के दिन दोनों की मम्मियों ने अजनबी जैसा सलूक किया !

समीर ने जो कुछ भी किया वो समझ में आ रहा है लेकिन डिंपल गर्ल ने ऐसा क्यों किया ? यह जानते हुए भी कि वो सनवीर से प्रेम करने लगी है और सनवीर भी उससे बेइंतहा प्यार करता है ।
समीर का साथ देना प्रि प्लान था या सिर्फ समीर को चैम्प बनाने तक का ही था ?

खैर जो भी हो , गलती का एहसास तो जरूर हो रहा है उन्हें । ऐसा उनके चेहरे के भाव से ही लग रहा है ।

जैसा मैंने अपेक्षा किया था कि जब भी जयदेन चौधरी का आगमन होगा या उनके आने का आगाज होगा , सनसनीखेज और काफी हंगामेदार होगा । और बिल्कुल वैसा ही हुआ ।

जिस तरह जयदेन चौधरी का राज , राज नहीं रहा उसी तरह गाॅड का राज भी राज नहीं रहा । हमारे लियोन भाई ही एक्चुअली PSYCHO READER निकले ।:D

आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग एंड ब्रिलिएंट अपडेट वि जे भाई ।
एक बार फिर से जगमग जगमग करता हुआ अपडेट था यह ।
Dhanyavad bhai... yunhi saath bane rahiye
 

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Fuck :shocking:MR JAIDEN CHOWDHARY
Bc yeh kiya horaha hai kuch samjh nahi aaraha, bhai kiya likha hai tumne mind-blowing sachme maza aagaya

Fantastic update... Bhai.. Ab tak ka sbse..best update.. 💥💥💥

Bhai maa kasm Kay update bro

Super se upr update

Bohat he zabaradast gazab update ek bat saaf ho gai ab
ye koi normal story nhi jisko ham smjh sake ye kahani Kisi behti Nadi si Kabhi shan't lagti hy par hy smandr ki Tarah gehri jiski gehrai me Kai toofan or raaz chupe hy ab to mujhy Lagta hy jaiden Choudhury Ka G.O.D ya sanvy k father ki death se koi taluq hy

abe yaaar gazab h tu pura update m kya hi bolu am speechless great
bow bowing GIF
were not worthy waynes world GIF

Insane update bro

Wow Sam apna dad ok impress karna chata ha race jeet kar pr sanvy ka hota esa nahi kar sakta ab Sam ka baap khud sanvy ka baap sa jeet nahi saka to fr to fr Sam kisa jeet sakta ha ab dikhta ha sanvy or dimple ka reaction ma kya hota ha

Holly.......
Superb update

ghatiya insan aur uski 2 biwiya :laughing:. aaj bahut saare raaz khul gaye .sam aur dimple bhai behan hai .aur in donoka baap ek hi hai jaiden chaudhary .
ab samajh aaya sanvy ka jaiden se dushmani ka reason ..

ab tak ki saari kahani padh li bahut maja aaya

Mast wala 💣 phoda hai bhai superd

Kya khatrnak update diya hai

Beautiful and Excellent update bhai 😊☺️

ओ भाऊ ओ हो
थांबा थांबा तु काय केलस
उरी बाबा ओइटा की भीषोन दारुण
थाक दादा थाक ना ना ओइटा चोलबे ना
ऑए खोतेया तूने की कर दित्ता
धोतीनु फाड़ रुमाल कर दित्ता

हे भगवान

देखो देखो मैं पागल हो गया हूँ
ना जुबान साथ दे रहा है
ना अल्फाज़

इतना तो अंदाजा था हर एक्शन से पहले प्लान बना कर रखने वाला सान्वी यहाँ चुक इसलिए हुआ क्यूंकि किडनैप फेक था
पर
पर
पर
झटका... झटके पे झटका
शॉक शॉक शॉक

अर्चना और स्मृति मौसेरी बहन
सैम और डिम्पल भाई बहन
मौसेरी बहनो की पति एक अलग अलग आइडेंटिटी के साथ
भाई बहन के बाप एक

सानील से हरा हुआ जैदेन चौधरी
वेरोनिका से हारी हुई दो मौसेरी बहनें

खैर और अंदर ना जाना मेरे लिए बेहतर है
हो सकता है मैं GALATH हो जाऊँ पर मुझे लगता है यह जैदेन चौधरी ही गॉड है..

आगे आप रचना कार हो
अंत में अद्भुत चामत्कारिक अति सुंदर

Gurdafad update

Sam ar dimple ki to ma sanvy n chod di ak sath dono ki

I'm not imagine ki jaiden Chaudhary Sam or dimple ka baap hoga
Khatarnak update bro

Awesome update 3

Bhai mere kidnapping wala guess kar liya tha Maine ki Sam ki chaal hogi lekin ye dono ka baap ek ye ni socha Maine.. this was beyond . That's awesome wonderful bro.

Agla update bhai thoda jaldi kar dena.

Ahhhh gajab adbhut akalpneeya hey vj4u bro mind blowing update. Apne likhne me bahut time liya bahut mehnat ki aur bahut bada like mega update diya apne but yakin maniye bahut chota sa laga update wajah sirf aur sirf story jo aisa sama badhi ki pta hi na chala ki kb update khatm hua. Man to tha ki kash puri story hoti. Thank u.
Ek request hai bhai hfte me 2 update de diya kriye agr ho sake to baki apki marzi.

Bhai

Ye kya ho gaya

Mae pura shocked ho gaya

Mujh sae ab raha nae ja raha

Bhai

Ye update kitny words ka h


Too much thrill and full too firey update vj4u bhai aapne toh dimag hi ghuma diya yeh bata kar ki dimple bhi Sanvy ko cheat kar rahi hai aise hal mein toh kisi ka bhi pyaar se bharosa uth jayegaa....

Ye dekh kar dil se Sanvy ke liye dukh ho raha hai.....
:flamethrower::flamethrower::flamethrower::flamethrower:

Vj bhai gand faad update
Ky bolu samjat ny.
Apne shock asa diya ki brain 🧠 aur heart 💓 black out ho gye he
Jabardast update bhai..............
Hum saare reader etne din se update ka wait karte aur baad me update aye aur update asa ho to kya baat he😎😎😎🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻👍🏻

Dil se salaam vj bhai from all of us readers.......

Your dieheart fan
DEVIL 😈 AKKI

what a great update bhai.... Dimag ke sare fuse ud gye bhai.... Aisa kuchh to imagine hee nahi kar sakte the ki aisa bhi kuch hoga..... VJ bhai Aapko sat sat parnam

Superb story

VJ4U bhai gand faad update
Ky bolu samjat ny.
Apne shock asa diya ki brain 🧠 aur heart 💓 black out ho gye he
Jabardast update bhai..............
Hum saare reader etne din se update ka wait karte aur baad me update aye aur update asa ho to kya baat he😎😎😎🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻👍🏻

Dil se salaam vj bhai from all of us readers.......

Your dieheart fan
DEVIL 😈 AKKI

Nice update brother, aaj to bum dhamako ki barsat kar di aapne, suspenses ka khulasa hua but ek chiz rah gayi chalo sam jalan k karan sanvy k khilaf gaya but dimpal kyo gayi??? Kya uska sanvy k liye pyar jhutha tha? Veronica k liye pyar aur apnatva ki bhawna uski jhuthi thi? Ya fir sam aur dimpal bhi apni maa ki tarah hi sanvy aur veronica k khilaf sajish kar rahe he ya sajish ka hissa he apni moms ki taraf se?? Ab to sanvy ko apne Father ki tarah jisne mr jaden choudhary ko haraya vese tournament me sam aur baki sab ko hara kar sabit karna chahiye sath hi study me bhi bataye k he is the best. Because uspe aur uski mom par in madhumakkhiyo k tont ka hamla kayi baar ho chuka he so prove karna to banta he na.

सैम का दिल जलन से काला है ये तो समझ पहले भी आ चुका था पर डिम्पल से ये उम्मीद नहीं थी!!!

बेचारा सनवीर दिल के मामले में फिर से धोखा खा गया!!

खनक के बाद डिम्पल भी ऐसी निकली...!🙁

पर तरस तो मुझे सैम और डिम्पल पर आ रहा है!!
ना अपने बाप को पापा कह सकते हैं ना खुले आम मिल ही सकते हैं...
अक्सर बड़े घर के बच्चे सबको बोलते फिरते हैं- तू जनता है मेरा बाप कौन है!
पर इनके नसीब में तो ये साधारण सी शेखी भी नहीं है !

छुप कर ऐसे जीना!
पक्का से अपने बाप के साथ कोई फ़ोटो भी ना होगी इनके घर में....
पिता का सानिध्य और स्नेह तो दूर की बात है!

और चौधरी साहब तो स्टड निकले यार..
दो बहनों के साथ शादी करी तो हनीमून भी तो साथ ही एक ही बेड पर मनाया होगा 😎
ऐसी जंगली बिल्लियों को एक साथ क़ाबू में करने में मज़ा तो बहुत आया होगा...

जेडन का चरित्र भी स्याह ही प्रतीत होता है...
सनील की मृत्यु का भेद भी इससे जुड़ा लगता है ।

ये तो तय है अपने पिता की परम्परा और मान को क़ायम रखने के लिए ही सैम ने ये घिनौना खेल रचा ..

सैनवी और चौधरी के आमने सामने आने का क्षण आने ही वाला है!
अब आगे ये कहानी कोई भी मोड़ के सकती है...!

आपके उस भविष्य काल के दर्शन करने के बाद ये तो तय है कि हेरोयन डिम्पल ही रहेगी, दूसरी कोई नयी नहीं आएगी। हाँ रिश्तों की डोर कच्ची बहुत हो गयी है अब!

अगले अध्याय का इंतज़ार रहेगा प्रभु...
नतमस्तक

Superb bro 😃😃😃 faad di aajto sabki Khopdi bhai saneel ahryn ka flash back aayega tb sab main point aayenge samne muje aisa lag rha h

Dafukkk!! :iamok:

Jb sanvy jail me tha yhi name use krke use jail me rok rkha tha to GOD or ye ek hi insan toh. Ni or Dimple kitni hi chlak ho apni maa ke age jhuk hi jati hai car me dekha hai hamne toh bs Dimple ka use kiya hoga iski family ne bt ab clear ho gya thoda thoda sanvy ke mom dad ka badla sanvy se liya ja rha hai shyd

Bro standing for you
Pc kaya socha tah kaya nikla mind band ho gaya Read kar ka👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Aaye haaye threesome, yaha sukha pada h aur vaha jaiden 2 ladkiyo se geela pada huwa h ,

Wahh bhai kya hi khulase huwe hai is baar Sam aur dimple ko le ke jo bhi ho rha tha sb pta tha dimple ko ki iske peeche kaun hai mtlb dimple ka pyar sachha nhi tha bs wo shanvi ko distract karna chahti thi ya real love hai shanvi dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
Shanvi ne to Sam ko bina kuch kiye hi race ke layak nhi chora hai aur pura group is baar Sam aur dimple se shyad dur ho jaye dosti me itna bada sadyantra not good
Mujhe lg rha shanvi hi is baar shabhi khelo me hissa lega jarur lena chahiye kyuki dimple hi dekhna chahti hai ki shanvi jeete aur jayeden jo itna bada name ab tak parde ke peeche tha achanak aise hi expose ho gya hai aur jb wo shanvi se milega aur janega ki kiska beta hai tb kya hoga
Mujhe lg rha hai yhi sb choti choti dushmani hi Veronica ke murder me jyda aham role rahega in sab ka ya nhi kah nhi sakte hai
Jo bhi ho itna bada update 8300 word ka wo bhi last me update end hote hote wo bhi chota hi lga

Gajab bhai
I do not expect that
Waah kya shandaar update tha
Aapke mind ko

SALUTE

Awesome update Bhai 😍
Aaag laga dali 🔥🔥🔥🔥

Abhi samjh aya ki ..proposal accept karne baad sanvy ro kyu raha tha veronica ke samne. Kyu ki wo shayad inki identity jaan gaya tha lekin pyaar hai hi aisi chij ko usne ye bhi accpet kar liya. Even he has the idea ki aage kuch hone wala hai.

fuck man yeh dimple aur jaiden wali baat expect na ki thi maine and late padha update chalo half toh predict kiya keh sakte hai xD excellent update

Vj bhai mujhe suru se hi voh dingli pasand nahi thi achha kiya side kardiye aur isiliye voh dingli future me apne sanvy ko marne ka try ki

Superb update bro

This is a damn hell update man, kya hi shocks diye hain ;
1) SAM ka khud ko kidnap krwana
2)SANVY ko sab maloom hona.
3) DIMPLE & SAM are siblings.
4)MR JAINDEN CHOHDARY inko 2non k father.

Mtlb sab kuch dhamaake daar tha yrr but how does SANVY knows everything about them.
But he is damn SANVEER AHARYA
pr shayad SANVY ko sab pehle se nhi maloom tha ya tha bhi but his love for DIMPLE, that's genuine aur it hurts him k agr sirf SAM ne aisa kiya hoto to shayad SANVY ko itna hurt nhi hota but DIMPLE se aisi umeed nhi thi.

Ab dekhte hain aage kya hota hai pr itna to confirm hai jo bhi hoga damaakedaar ✴️ hi hogaa.
Ab to next update ka intezaar bhi nhi hogaa.

Woo woo woo Bhai Kia maraaa hai Sala dimag hi chakraaa gaya



Ese ese kon likhta hai yaaar kon hoo app

Amazing Update

Woh mara papad wale ko. Sanvyne sabki faad kar rakh di.

Ye to sari kahani hi palat gayi.

SANVY ne sabki pol khol di. Ye Jaiden Chowdhary to bahut badi film h. Dekho aage kya hota h.

Waiting for next update

Kia kia socha tha ki SANVAY sam ko bachayega or Dushyant or namit ki band bajayega baji tow sabki lekin lekin kuch alag tareeke se
Veronika ji ne SANVAY se ek khilone ki tarah khela or uske dil ka gubar nikala
Sam n itna bada game khela kitne dino se dhoka deta aa raha h pata nahi or saath NEW GIRL n bhi or fir deti kyon nahi aakhir bhai bahen jo thehre SANVAY sab janta tha shuru se leker aakhir tak isi liye aaj tak jab se mila h Dimple se uska naam nahi lia sirf NEW GIRL hi kaha h lekin sabse imported sawal jab SANVAY in dono k baare m jaanta tha tow inka har jagah saath kyon dia Dimple ko training di apne secret bataye kyon....??
Jaydon Chaudhry jaisa baap waise hi beta beti honge na
Baherhal dekhte h ab aage kia hota h kia ab bhi SANVAY waisa bana rahega ya fir sabke samne champ banke dikhayega woh kia h or agla kadam ab in dono bhai bahen ka kia hota h
Behtareen shaandaar zaberdast
Lajawab update bhai

Awesome updates

Super update hai bhai

Hiii😊
To kaise hain ap log😂
Kafi time howa active rhe yad nahi parta k last
time kab or kia review kia ta😛
khair ye to 1 alag bat hai main point pe ata hu
Main active nahi rha lakin story ko proper read
karte aya hu chahe jab b update ae der ya saber se
mujhe bilkul b idea nahi ta k kabhi dobara se kisi story ko review
karu ga ye sudden howa bina soche samjhe
or writer babu ne last update kuch aisa diya k bs kia hi
bolu main subah early morning read kera ta bs tab se dimagh me
ye bat ghus gayi thi k is update pe reply to banta hi hai
to bs phir aa ge ider bat karen update ki to 1 dum
speechless ab tak ka sb se one and only best se best wala update
ta bhai mere itna dimagh lai kahan se ho yr
sala uder wo sam shock me ta or ider main double shock me ta
mobile hath me liye k bhai sahab ye kia hai kyu hai kaise ho
gaya dimagh me sawalu train si chal rhi thi or flow to aisa rehta
hai apka k lagta hi nahi k ye bat story ko suit nahi kre gi
disappointment jaisa to kuch feel hi nahi hota bs aisa lagta k shayad hi
is se acha kabhi parha ho such kahu to aisi jadugari dill ko chu leti hai
or bat jab alfazu ki ho or ap jaise likhne wale to bs
kia hi bat ho jati hai😊
damn sam aisa kuch kare ga bilkul b expect nahi kia ta
rivals se mil jana Sanvy ko chotil kerna or pta kia kia nahi khichdi
pakayi usne or hud to tab ho gayi jab Dimple b janti hai sb
dono sis &bro hain ye bat to mind fuse ker deti hai
Akhir aisa kaise ker sakti hai wo how?
kyu possible hai ye dheru sawal hain or jawab ki umeed hai k aney wale updates me kuch khulasa ho
Veronica&Sanvy ka kia hi action dikhaya
well wo jo bat usey samjhana chahti thin smjh hi li londe ne or by
uske bad to kamal hi ho gaya
Dushyant&gang ki ache se thokai hoi Sam kia bola ta
k main explain kru ga aaji lawde ka explain bc
chutiya gand me lele apna explain😂
apna londa pagal thori na hai k sab jante bujhte aisi waisi
koi bat sune New girl bole to Dimple ki halat to kia hi bolu
shiro me jab usko story me introduce kia ta to pehle hi seen
me kisi larke ko peeti thi shayad aisa kuch hi ta
ab aisi bandi jo is tarah k mamlu me sire se hi interested na ho
or phir achanak se Sanvy se pyar?
Kia waqi usey pyar hai ya ye b sam k plan ka 1 part hai
Khanak k time situation itni dramatic bilkul b nahi thi
uski identity chupi to nahi thi sabhi jante te uske bare me nu
bs wo lawde ka baal rohan chutiye ne usey chara bana diya but
shuker hai k wo sara matter Sanvy ne sambhal lia or Khanak wapas JJse apne dostu me aa gayi true friends bole to ab
same cheez dimple or sam ko le ker dekha jai to bat itni choti b nahi
per kuch b idea lagana faltu hoga kyu k writer babu khud hi
ye bata den ge k next kia hone ja rha Sanvy&Dimple me
bohat hi ziada amazing update ta sir
likhte rahiye😊
Good luck🤗
Ajke liye itna hi Once again update is marvelous
keep going❤
:respekt:

Awesome update bhai or bahot bada dhamaka kar diya he aapne is update me shayad is story ka abhi tak ka sabse bada dhamaka kiya he aap ne is update me waiting for next update

Awesome update bhai or bahot bada dhamaka kar diya he aapne is update me shayad is story ka abhi tak ka sabse bada dhamaka kiya he aap ne is update me waiting for next update

Ye kya dhamaka kiya bhai aapne mins ooo bhai kya bolun main is update ke bare mein 🙏🙏🙏tussi great ho kon sa chakki ka aata khate ho...mujhe bhi batana..marvelous update

Hila dala

Bohat hi behtreen update
Jitni tareef ki jaaye
Utni kam hai,
Kaafi intresting turn diya hai story ko
Ye update ne
Ye raaz khulne ke baad lagta nhi hai ki chup baithenge unke pariwar bohat saara action dekhne ko milega lagta hai ab
I hope agla khoobsurat update jaldi se jaldi dekhne ko milega

INTEZAAR RAHE GA BESABRI SE.

Ye hai asli wala VJ4U WALA UPDATE

bhediye to bahut hath pair chalate hai par sher jab shikar karta hai to bas ek panje me baamm game over ho jata like sanveer aaharia

Sahi boli thi veronika ahariya ne ki jaha bhi AHARIA sirname ho waha kabhi hath mat dala karo kyonki hath wapas khichne pe Khali hi milega

Master stroke wala update hai bhai maza aa gaya brilliant


Waiting for the next update bro

शब्द नही है इस अंश के लिए !

Bade dino ke baad reply karne ka moka mila hai wo bhi itna dhasu
Update ki VJ bhai ka hi aaj update lag raha hai kya mind game khela hai dono ne mil ke
VJ4U bro ,😘😘😘

Wah bhai maja aa gaya aesa jabardast update padhke...

Kya hi plan banaya tha Sam ne Sanvy ko chot pahochane aur race me part na lene dene ke liye Princi walo se tak hath milaya jin salo ne use kay baar chot pahochane ki koshish ki...

Par apna Sanvvy bhi to alag hi mitti ka he jo Sam ke plan ke baare me jaan ne ke bad bhi anjaan bana raha...

Aur ye to Dhamaka hi ho gaya ki Sam aur New Girl dono bhai bahen he...

Sam ne dhokha sirf race ke liye hi diya tha ya koi aur bhi karan raha hoga..

Aur kya Dimple apni Maa aur Baap Jaiden Choudhary ka jo Sanvy ki Maa Veronica aur Saneel se college ke samay mili haar ka yaa kisi aur vajah ka badla lene ke liye hi Sanvy ke sath pyaar ka drama kiya aur dhokhe me rakha..

Ab aage Sanvy aur Dimple ek dusre ke sath honge yaa alag ...

Alge Update ki pratiksa me...



VJ..VJ..VJ bhai maza aa gaya is update ko read karke.. sam ka guess toh ho gaya tha mujhe ki woh shayad jayden se connect ho but dimple.. oh bhai dhasu update hai bilkul. Seriously ab dimag mein sirf next scene ka hi thought chal raha hai. Kam se kam 50 alag alag scenarios soch chuka hu mein ab tak but mujhe pata hai woh sab galat hone wale hai. As i know VJ ki soch unlimited hai.. bhai seriously mega update tha yaar bahut time baad dimag achanak boost up ho gaya mera. Keep going man. Love your writing skills.

Kafi shocking update tha bhai bt mujhe laga tha phle se he new girl or Sam me koi to canction h aaj pata chal gya dono bhai bahan h lekin bhai ek baat samjh me nhi aayi kya new girl true love krti h ki vo bhi fake h ab dekhna h reaction kya hoga kaise new girl manayegi tb kya hoga jb apna hero usko avoid krega or vo andar he andr tutegi lekin mujhe lgta h apna hero usko sadmne se bahar nikalega aage jaise aap ki marzi

Kya tha bhai ye me 1 mahine baad Aya tha padhne story bas 3 updates the isliye thoda jhadne wala tha but last update ke last part ne to ekdum se jajbat badal diye
Yahi to hoti hai best writer ki pehchan padhne wala kitna bhi predict kare result to har waqt hatke hi ayega

Waiting for next

Bhai kya kamal ka kand kiya hai
Sala khopri hi hil gaya
Puri story hi chenge kar di jo socha sab khatam
VJ bhai me aage kya kahu aap purush nahi Maha purysh ho 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤪🤪🤪🤪

Ese hi shock diya karo

Fantastic update

Super update Brother👌
waiting for next update ....

Bhai RAAZ toh KAFI khul rahy h

Ab ye toh nahe k COLLEGE time JAIDEN

VERONICA pe crush ya pyar ho

SPORTS ka ab besbri sae intzar h

Q
K

AK Daf phr SANEL ki jagha SANVY


JAIDEN ki jagha SAMEER

Pr sameer ko toh apne aukat pta h

Toh

Sports mae kon maae ka laal SANVY sae panga lae ga

Mjhy ab APRIL ka intzar h

K or kitna

Thrill barhy ga

Woh dushman jo sine pe waar karte hai.
Unse bhi khatarnak hai woh dost jo daga karte hai.

Bahut hi khaas lagate hai Yeh naqaab apne chaheron pe.
Sajakar muskan honthon par, nafrat aur jalan chhupaye rakhte hai.

Maukaparast hote hai, yeh sahi mauke ka intezaar karte hai.
Jahan sabse jyada takleef ho yeh wahin par waar karte hai.

Dosti aur pyaar yeh mahaj khokhle labz hai inke liye.
Kisike sachche jazbaat ki yeh Kahan kadar karte hai.


Mind blowing update VJ bhai eagerly waiting for next
Thanks brothers...be along...
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF SAMRAT WAALON KA SAARA PLAN FAIL HO JAATA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF NITS DIMPLE AUR SAM KE SABHI SECRETS SABKE SAAMNE OPEN KAR DETA HAI.

AB AAGE:-


CHAPTER 1

(ETIOLOGY OF BEING GALATH)


UPDATE-85

DATE-THE DAY CONTINUES


CITY-DEHRADUN

PLACE-SAHASTRADHARA ROAD,DUMPIMG GARAGE






YOU ARE AS GOOD AS SAM... PARTICIPATE KARNA CHAHIYE TUMHE IS BAAR...

DIMPLE-REALLY...!!!MUJHE LAGA THA KI MAZAK KAR RAHE THE TUM...

MAI-MAZAK KAR RAHA THA...!!!NAA...I AM PARTICIPATING...

DIMPLE-YE SUDDEN LIMELIGHT ME AANE KI WAJAH...!!!

MAI-AUR KYA...!!!OR SHOULD I SAY KAUN...MR JAIDEN CHOWDHARY...(update 75)

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ISHQ NA BADALTA HAI,NA ABAAD KARTA HAI AUR NAAHI BARBAAD KARTA HAI...

BAS WAJOOD KI JO ASLIYAT ANDAR DABI HOTI HAI,USSE AZAAD KARTA HAI...(update 76)

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SAHI KE LIYE MUJHSE ZYADA KOI SAHI NAHI PAR GALATH KE LIYE MUJHSA GALATH BHI DUJA KOI NAHI (update-78)

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JUNOON-E-PREM ATTI BUDDHI JEEVON KO BHI MURKH BANANE ME SAKSHAM HOTA HAI"...

HE NEVER LEAVES AND BACKSTABS HIS FRIENDS"...PERIOD...(update 79)

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alag alag moukon par mere mooh se nikle ye words ya phir mere baare me kahe gaye ye saare aur aise hi bohot se shabd abhi gunj rahe the NEW GIRL ke dimag me...

jab se PRINCI ne annual sports ko interschool level meet me badal diya tha aur maine sports meet me participate karne ki baat kahi thi,tabse hi SAM kisi bhi tarah mujhe aisa karne se rokne ki koshish me lag chuka tha...

najaane kitne hi parpanch kiye usne...is beech mere ravvaiye ko bhi usual se hatke feel karna shuru kiye tha NEW GIRL ne par kyunki tab mai uska B.F ban chuka tha isiliye woh slight attitude diversion normal hi laga tha usse...

lekin ab jab saare patte khul chuke the,samajh aane laga tha usse ki mera koi bhi diversion normal nahi tha...

unka game shuru hone se pehle hi open ho chuka tha mere aage...

par kitna pehle...SAM ki planning but more importantly,uske aur NEW GIRL ka rishta,kabse jaanta tha mai is RAAZ ko...

aur more se zyada most importantly,un dono ke ek baap ke baare me kaise pata chala mujhe...

sawal ye is waqt NEW GIRL aur SAM ke dimag me zaroor tha par jahan ek taraf NEW GIRL thi jo pahad si bhaari glaani ke beech dabe hone ki wajah se sir jhukaye khadi thi wahin dusri taraf tha SAM jiski itni zyada fat rakhi thi ki mooh kholne ki himmat bhi naa bachi thi usme...

par sawal sirf un dono ke dimag me toh chal raha tha nahi...

mere mooh se nikle aakhri shabd ko sun garage me moujud mere sabhi doston ka dimag band aur mooh khul chuka tha...

woh sabhi kabhi mujhe dekhte toh kabhi saamne sir jhukaye khade NEW GIRL aur SAM ko jinki chuppi is baat ka saboot thi ki mera revelation sach tha...

mere revelation ke baad lagbhagh 5 minutes guzar chuke the par is beech koi kuch bola nahi tha aur ye laazmi bhi tha...

ab baat hi itni badi thi ki usse hazam karne me waqt toh lagna hi tha...


NITS-JJAIDEN CCHOWDHARY...THE JAIDEN CHOWDHARY...THE FUCK....REALLY...JAIDEN CHOWDHARY...!!!


slow tone me start kar SONU ki tarah haklate hue finally JAIDEN CHOWDHARY bolte bolte chilla hi utha tha NITS...


RASHI-how...how do you know it...!!!???

ANJALI-yaa...in dono ki khamoshi tumhari baat ka truth reveal kar rahi hai...

but how do you know it...???kyunki itna bada secret jo as per your words only, puri duniye se chhupa kar rakha hai in dono ne...

in dono ne kya,apne real husband ka naam cover karne ke liye inki moms tak ne fake husband ko show kiya hua tha...

and considering the persona of both there moms,its a damn big thing to hide...

pure Uttarakhand me naam hai SAM ki mom ka aur DIMPLE ki mom toh world famous hai...

aise me itna bada secret lagatar salaon se carry karna, it's not a piece of cake...

but you knew it...how...???

bas ek NEW GIRL ka sir hi neeche tha baaki ANI ke sawal par sabke curiosity se bhare chehre mere upar tik chuke the...

SAM ka bhi...


MAI-sawal jitna pechida lagta hai,kayi baar jawab utna hi asaan nikalta hai...is case me bhi aisa hi hua hai...

SAB-matlab...!!!

MAI-last year jab I.Q hunt competition ke liye delhi gaya tha tu,ARCHANA BATRA as in teri step mom ke yahan hi ruka tha naa...

SAM-tujhe,tujhe kaise pata...???

kaafi surprise ho gaya tha SAM...


MAI-tune hi toh dikhaya tha...

SONU-ddikhaya ttha..abbe,kkya bol rraha hai ttu...???

MAI-jis din competition tha iska,us din tera birthday bhi tha...

remember...!!!

SONU-haan...wish kkarne ke lliye vvideo call kiya tha isne...us ttime ttum sab bhi toh tthe...

MAI-yup... competition ko sirf ek ghanta bacha tha jiske baad kaafi time tak occupied ho jaane waale tha SAM...

waise free hokar shaam ko bhi tujhe wish kar sakta tha par hum sabse ek saath baat karna chahta tha ye isiliye final preps ke beech hamare assembly time se just pehle,he called...

and at that very moment,apne BACKGROUND ko self expose kar diya tha isne...

SAM-SHIT...


BACKGROUND ko thoda zor dekar bola tha mai jispar baaki sab toh confused hi rahe par SAM ki aankhein ek pal ke liye sochne waale andaz me choti hui par phir turant badi hoti chali gayi...

failure smile face par laate hue sir par haath maar liya tha usne...


MAI-us din mobile hang karne ke baad jab palta tha tu toh competition ki hadbadi ke beech agar ek baar bhi rook saamne dekh leta toh mere saath game khelne ka sochta bhi nahi...

RASHI-dude...tere jitne intelligent nahi hai hum... sidhe sidhe shabdon me fill us in...

MAI-yaad hai baaton ke beech jahan ye khada tha,wahan BACKGROUNDS me walls par lage nakkaishiyon aur paintings ki taarif ki thi maine...(UPDATE-27)

RAJAT-yaa,i remember...

EKPREET-me too...


un nakkaishiyon aur paintings ki hi tarah room me alag alag jagahon par 3 wall photos lagi thi...do medium size aur ek 4/3 ki badi photo aur kyunki baat karte hue SAM carelessly room me ghum raha tha,i caught the sight of all those pics....

medium size photos me se ek me ye dono the...dusre me inke saath ARCHANA BATRA thi aur third big photo inki hidden family photo thi....

jisme ye dono,inki moms aur inke dad MR JAIDEN CHOWDHARY the...

surprise hua tha mai par phir jaane diya...


NITS-bhains ki poonch...tere saamne tabse open tha iska background aur naa isse ya hume bataya tak nahi tune...

MAI-dost jo tha ye...woh kahani jo har kisi se chhupa rakhi thi isne,uspar sawal kar isse humiliate kaise karta mai...

RASHI-par yaar SANVY...agar us din SAM alert rehta toh tu woh pics kabhi dekh nahi paata...

aise me jo bhi ye plan kar raha tha,he would have succeeded in that ...

MAI-i doubt that... tasviren chehre dikhati hain,un chehron ke beech waale rishten toh bayan nahi karti...

agar us din maine woh pics nahi bhi dekhi hoti tab bhi der saver hi sahi,in dono ke beech ka rishta toh kamsekam mujhe pata lagna hi tha...


KHANAK-kaise...???

MAI-genetic inheritance...

1-inside edge of eyes...

2-cheek bones...

3-nose tip...

4-philtrum...

NAISHA-hain...!!!ab ye kya hai...???

MAI-the four pillars of genetic inheritance...


in dono ke chehre bhale hi ek dusre se kaafi alag hain,all thanks to there different mom's but kyunki in dono ke dad ek hain,the most important parts of there faces jinse same genetic inheritance ka secret open hota hai,woh exactly same hain...khud dekh lo...


apna mobile jisme is waqt pics art khula hua tha,usse saamne kar diya tha maine...

is waqt teen pics line me dikh rahi thi screen par jiske ek part me SAM ka chehra,dusre bhaag me NEW GIRL ka face aur third me unke dad MR JAIDEN CHOWDHARY ka straight angle clear face dikh raha tha...

saath hi saath teeno hi faces ke beech features ke upar lines kheenchte hue wahin words use kiye the maine jo abhi abhi kahe the...

aur wakayi...chehra bhale hi ek dusre se kaafi alag tha SAM,DIMPLE aur unke baap ka par teeno ke hi aankhon ke inside edges,cheek bones,nose tip aur philtrum bilkul same the...


MAI-teen logon ke beech in chaaron facial features me se ek,do aur agar teen chizen bhi ek si hon tab bhi coincidence maana jaa sakta hai par agar chaaron features resemble karen,that means...

RASHI-they are genetically connected...

MAI-yup and that to very closely...


yahan mai apni theory prove karne me laga hua tha aur wahan baaki sab mere phone par point out kiye facial features ko dekhne ke baad ab aankhein faade mujhe dekhne lag gaye the...


KHANAK-you are...!!!kya bolun tumhe SANVY...???kya kya dekh lete ho tum...!!!

NITS-sach me be...teri aankhein hain ya phir koi microscopic device...

itne deep aur unrecognizable chizon ko bhi detect kar leta hai tu...

MAI-chiz nahi log...aur jab log apne hone ka dhong rachayen toh chaalak banana laazmi hai...


meri baat sun ek baar pleading eyes se dekha mujhe SAM ne par DIMPLE ki nazar ab bhi neeche hi thi...


MAI-waise dhong se yaad aaya...kaam toh friendship ke naam se bhi badha sakte the tum dono...

phir plan me ye love angle waale dhong ko daalne ki zaroorat kya thi...!!!

DIMPLE-dhong nahi tha woh... maano,mat maano but i bloody love you...

SAM-haan SANVY...i swear to GOD...she really loves you...


pehli baar utha tha sir DIMPLE ka...

aansuon se bhare uske face par izhaar ki sachayi saaf dekh sakta tha mai par is sach ka waqt khud kharab kiya tha usne...

wahin SAM ki baat sun ek khilli waali smile sabhi ke face par naach uthi thi...

us hasi ko sun SAM ka face toh ek baar phir se neeche ho gaya tha par DIMPLE ki aankhein ab bhi meri aankhon par jami hui thi...

MAI-phir bhi DIMPLE...???

DIMPLE....

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TUM MUJHE NEW GIRL KYUN BULAATE HO...???AB TOH NAA MAI IS SCHOOL KE LIYE NAYI HUN AUR NAAHI TUMHARE LIYE...

MAI-MERE JAZBAAT KE LIYE TOH HO...TUM WOH PEHLI GIRL KO JISNE SANVEER AHARYA KE DIL ME EK NEW FEELING KO PAIDA KIYA...

WOH EHSAAS JO SOCHA NAHI THA MAINE KI KABHI FEEL KAR PAAUNGA MAI...

ISILIYE NEW GIRL...(update 80)

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mere DIMPLE bolte hi NEW GIRL word ke mere use karne ka reason gunj utha tha uske dimag me...

aaj pehli baar usse uske naam se bulaya tha maine...

matlab samajh uski sookh chali aankhein ek baar phirse bhar uthi thi...

MAI-kyun kiya...???

tumhari MOM ka favourite SAM hai, isiliye...???


surprised reaction turant aaya tha DIMPLE aur SAM ke dono ke faces par...


DIMPLE -tumhe kaise...???

MAI-tumhe kya lagta hai, tumhari aur SAM ki mom ka cristmas eve par mere ghar aana ittafaq tha...

it was my plan...dono sautano ko aamne saamne laana chahta tha mai...

mujhe bataya tha ANI ne ki uski aur SAM ki mom us din meeting ke liye kahin saath jaane waali thi isiliye maine isse apni mon ko mere ghar se hote hue jaane ke liye force karne ko kaha tha...

i knew ki unke saath SAM ki mom bhi zaroor aayegi mere ghar...

aur jab ye ghar par nahi thi tab mai pahuncha tha iske ghar...

iski mom ko apne ghar invite karne ke liye which she happily agreed to...

aur jab woh ghar aayin toh unki nazar sabse pehle SAM par hi gayi thi...

dekha toh unhone phir apni beti ko bhi tha par SAM ko dekhkar jo khushi unke face par aayi thi,uski baat hi aur thi...

waise notice toh is difference ko tumne bhi kiya tha...pal bhar ke liye murjha jo gaya tha tumhara face...


sach thi meri baat jispar kuch kaha nahi DIMPLE ne par pain jo uski aankhon me aaya tha,uske baad usse kuch kehne ki zaroorat bhi nahi thi...


MAI-kamaal hai...sagi mom woh tumhari hai par preference SAM ko...iska toh ek hi reason ho sakta hai...tumhare dad...

tum dono me unka preference SAM hai right...!!!unki hi wajah se tumhari mom bhi isse hi priority deti hai...

aur yahi wajah hai tumhara iske plan me iska saath dene ka...to please your parents...


DIMPLE aur SAM ke beech ek baar phir chhaayi khamoshi ne saaf kar diya tha ki sahi tha mai...

par mere is revelation ko sun mere saare dost ek baar phirse hairan reh gaye the...


RASHI-matlab inke parents ko inke plan ke baare me maalum tha and they were ok with it...!!!

MAI-ye kahani toh mujhe bhi jaanani hai...

toh bhai behen me se kaun batayega...???


saare patte toh khul hi chuke the...aur zyada humiliate hone ke liye kuch bacha toh tha nahi isiliye kandhe chuka ek lambi saans chhodi SAM ne aur...


SAM-ye sab last year shuru hua...tabhi jab mai i.q hunt competition ke liye delhi gaya tha...

rare occasion tha woh kyunki mai,DINGLI,mom as in ARCHANA mom,aur dad, chaaron hi ek saath the wahan...

competition ke baad jab ghar louta mai toh dad ke saath baitha...

competition jeet chuka tha mai isiliye dad congratulated me...

then he asked me about my friends aur jaise hi tera naam liya maine toh he started asking specifically about you...

he was very keen,tere baare me jaanane ke liye...i guess reason tum sabko pata hi hai...

SANVY'S father...the only man to beat my father...woh jaanana chahte the ki kya MR SANEEL AHARYA ka beta bhi unki tarah hi champion hai...

dad se mai kuch chhupata nahi isiliye tere talent ke baare me unhe sab sach bata diya maine...

and as i said...DINGLI was there... pehle ye jaankar ki dad ko kisi ne haraya tha,iska interested hamare convo me jaaga...

then tere baare me unka specifically puchna aur phir mere mooh se joki SIRIUS ka champ hai,ye admit karna ki you the best,iski tere liye curiousity badhne lagi...

aur ye curiousity tab extreme hui jab isse pata chala ki itna talent hone ke baawjud tu school me ek average student bankar rehta hai...

kisi ka aisa ATTITUDE pehle kabhi dekha kya,suna bhi nahi tha isne...

tujhse milne se pehle hi she was drawn into you...us pure din ye bas teri hi baatein karti rahi... tere saare kaarname sun yakin hi nahi ho raha tha isse ki koi aisa bhi ho sakta hai...

aur isiliye she decided ki next year,she is gonna join SIRIUS...

anyways,mere wapas yahan aane se pehle dad ne bataya mujhe ki next year woh mere school aa rahe hain,for the 100th anniversary aur unki khwahish hai ki mai hi champ banu...

easy tha mere liye jab tak tune ye decide nahi kiya ki you are gonna participate this year...

dad ko phone par batayi thi maine ye baat...i said ki shayad is baar champ ka tag naa mile mujhe as SANVY is participating...

par tab tak ye competition bohot huge ho chuka tha...

national level position stake par tha jo kabhi mere dad ne bhi aise hi ek competition me achieve kiya tha...

isiliye he said ki by hook or by crook,i have to win this competition...

same chiz ARCHI MOM ne bhi kahi thi...

aur unhone hi DINGLI se kaha tha to help me...kisi bhi tarah tujhe competition se back down karne ke liye ye saath de mera....

trust me SANVY, pehli baar me mana kar diya tha isne...but her mom kept forcing her...dad ne bhi same demand ki...

jab retaliate karne ki koshish ki isne toh even phone par isse baat karna bhi chhod diya tha unhone...

isiliye just for our parents sake,she agreed...

NITS-chi,chi,chi,chi,chi...saala ek aadmi jisse DEHRADUN ke har school ka student apna role model maanta hai...

jisne apne mukaam ki chhap sirf desh me hi nahi balki videsh me bhi chhodi hui hai...

dusri taraf ek aisi aurat jisse hamare desh ke leading industrialists me se ek bola jaata hai...

professionally idols for our society,our country par personal level par itni down market ghatiya soch...

baap se nahi jeet paaye toh apne bete se uske bete ko hara khudko bada banayenge hum...

ghanta...abbe champ baad me banana, pehle sahi insaan to ban jaa re...

SONU-aur ek bbaat bbata bbe...mmom ddad ttere GALATH the,ye ttoh ppata hi hoga nna tujhko...

ye ssab ggame kkhelne ke lliye ttere zzzamir ne tujhe dhikkara nnahi...


SAM ki baat sun NITS aur SONU ke saath baaki sab bhi jhunjla se gaye the...

ghussail bhari nazaron se dono hi usse dekh rahe the...


SAM-SANVY,mujhe maaf mat kar...mai deserve bhi nahi karta par please yaar...forgive DINGLI...

family pressure me aakar usne ye sab kiya...but she really loves you...

MAI-kis level ki moti buddhi hai be teri...tu mujhe convince kar raha hai..!!!

sachayi mujhe abhi abhi pata chali hai kya...???

tum dono game isiliye khel paa rahe the kyunki mai khelne de raha tha...

ye mujhe dhoka nahi de rahi thi...mai isse dene de raha tha...

teri toh baat hi chhod...jis din mere khilaaf tune plotting shuru ki thi,matter karna band ho gaya tha tu mujhe...

par ye,the so called love of my life,saari sachayi jaanane ke baawjud mai iske saamne chup sirf isiliye tha kyunki mai dekh raha tha ki iske dil me tu aur teri family ka ganda pyar kab tak mere saaf pyar par haavi rehta hai...

saala aakhir tak haavi hi reh gaya...


DIMPLE ko ek gehri nazar se dekh ek lambi saans chhod wapas palat gaya mai...

aur mujhe jaata dekh baaki sab bhi palatne lage the...


DIMPLE-SSSANVY...pplease....mmmai ye sab...


gala rundhne ki wajah se awaaz atak gayi thi DIMPLE ki par uska sisakna sun mai rook chuka tha...

itni der me apni galti ke liye aankhon se toh kayi baar maafi maang chuki thi woh par mooh khol ye pehli baar tha jab adhure shabdon ke saath plead kiya tha DIMPLE ne...


SAM-DINGLI...

CHATAKKKHHH...


DIMPLE ko kandhe se pakad housla dena chahta tha SAM par iske touch karte hi tezi se ghuma DIMPLE ka haath aur agle hi pal ek gaadha panja chhap chuka tha SAM ke face par...

ye scene dekh mere saath saath ruke baaki sab bhi thode shocked ho gaye the...

par un sabko jaane ka ishara kiya maine jispar sabhi garage se nikal gaye...

wahin mai pahuncha wapas DIMPLE ke saamne jo bhari aankhon ke beech bhi bina palke jhapkaye mujhe dekh rahi thi...


MAI-mai ye sab kya...???

DIMPLE-mai ye sab hamesha ke liye tumse chhupa kar nahi rakhne waali thi...saara sach...i would have told you...

MAI-i believe you...bas ek sawal ka honestly jawab dogi...!!!

DIMPLE-anything...

MAI-kab...???kab batane waali thi tum mujhe... race se pehle ya race ke baad...

matlab successfully mujhe dhoka dene se pehle ya uske baad...


mere sawal ka jawab zaroor tha DIMPLE ke paas par woh jawab pleasent toh tha nahi...

labh hilkar hi reh gaye the uske aur ye dekh...


MAI-jawab mil gaya mujhe...aur tu...ek baat bata be...kuch dino pehle kahi meri baat ki" i will participate",yaad reh gayi tujhe par barson pehle kiya gaya mera vaada kaise bhool gaya tu...!!!???

"SIRIUS KE SCHOOL DIVISION KA CHAMP TU HI RAHEGA"...

meri baat sun mera usse ye barso pehle kiya gaya vaada ghum sa gaya tha SAM ke dimag me...


MAI-itne saalon ki dosti me kamsekam ye toh pata hona hi chahiye tha tujhe ki SANVY apne promises kabhi nahi todta...

SAM-mujhe maaf kar de yaar...dad ki baat sun bohot zyada nervous ho gaya tha mai...

unke saamne kaise bhi jeetna hai,iske alawa aur kuch yaad hi nahi raha tha mujhe...

MAI-toh ek baar sidhe sidhe bol deta...teri nervousness wahin khatm kar deta mai...

pehle bhi toh kayi baar tere har raaste se khud ko hataya hai naa maine... phir is baar kyun nahi haththa...!!!


meri baat sun sir sharmindagi se jhuk chuka tha SAM ka par ab faayda hi kya tha...!!!jo karna tha, kar chuka tha woh...


MAI-well,itne saare bad news ke baad i also have a good news for you...

ab tak toh samajh aa hi gaya hoga tujhe ki meri sports meet me participate karne waali baat fake thi...

just wanted to bring out your true colour which i just did...

isiliye my promise still stands...har saal ki tarah is saal bhi SIRIUS school division ka champ tu hi banega...

duniya ke saamne, tomorrow you will make your father proud...

all the best...


dono ko dekh smile karte hue wapas palath aage badh gaya mai...

jaise jaise door hote chale jaa raha tha mai,DIMPLE ke face par ek tez bechaini saaf dikhti chali jaa rahi thi...


DIMPLE-SANVY...


garage ke front door tak pahuncha hi tha mai ki mera naam zor se pukaar meri taraf doud gayi DIMPLE...


DIMPLE-maine jo kiya hai,mai jaanti hun woh maafi ke layak nahi hai...but i am sorry...

kal ke race me participate karo SANVY...haan ye sach hai ki mom dad ke liye mai apne bhai ka saath de rahi thi...

par ek sach ye bhi hai ki i have always wanted the world to see the real you...

the born champ that you are... race SANVY aur agar mujhse kabhi bhi mohobbat ki hai tumne toh win it ..

MAI-see now that's the thing...tumse mohobbat ki thi isiliye hi toh race nahi karni mujhe...


meri baat ko sun sawal dikhne laga tha NEW GIRL ke face par jispar uske theek saamne khada hua mai aur...


MAI-




aisa toh ho nahi sakta naa ki SANVY apni baat se MUKAR JAAYEGA...


tera dhoka tere pyaar par bhaari hai,par dil mera koi halka patta nahi jo toot kar BHIKAR JAAYEGA...

lekin pyaar toh tha hi jiska karz chadha hua hai mujhpar magar...

tere khawish-e-talab,tere bhai ki jeet se ab woh UDHAAR bhi UTAR JAAYEGA...









AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI...






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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF SAMRAT WAALON KA SAARA PLAN FAIL HO JAATA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF NITS DIMPLE AUR SAM KE SABHI SECRETS SABKE SAAMNE OPEN KAR DETA HAI.

AB AAGE:-


CHAPTER 1

(ETIOLOGY OF BEING GALATH)


UPDATE-85

DATE-THE DAY CONTINUES


CITY-DEHRADUN

PLACE-SAHASTRADHARA ROAD,DUMPIMG GARAGE






YOU ARE AS GOOD AS SAM... PARTICIPATE KARNA CHAHIYE TUMHE IS BAAR...

DIMPLE-REALLY...!!!MUJHE LAGA THA KI MAZAK KAR RAHE THE TUM...

MAI-MAZAK KAR RAHA THA...!!!NAA...I AM PARTICIPATING...

DIMPLE-YE SUDDEN LIMELIGHT ME AANE KI WAJAH...!!!

MAI-AUR KYA...!!!OR SHOULD I SAY KAUN...MR JAIDEN CHOWDHARY...(update 75)

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ISHQ NA BADALTA HAI,NA ABAAD KARTA HAI AUR NAAHI BARBAAD KARTA HAI...

BAS WAJOOD KI JO ASLIYAT ANDAR DABI HOTI HAI,USSE AZAAD KARTA HAI...(update 76)

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SAHI KE LIYE MUJHSE ZYADA KOI SAHI NAHI PAR GALATH KE LIYE MUJHSA GALATH BHI DUJA KOI NAHI (update-78)

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JUNOON-E-PREM ATTI BUDDHI JEEVON KO BHI MURKH BANANE ME SAKSHAM HOTA HAI"...

HE NEVER LEAVES AND BACKSTABS HIS FRIENDS"...PERIOD...(update 79)

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alag alag moukon par mere mooh se nikle ye words ya phir mere baare me kahe gaye ye saare aur aise hi bohot se shabd abhi gunj rahe the NEW GIRL ke dimag me...

jab se PRINCI ne annual sports ko interschool level meet me badal diya tha aur maine sports meet me participate karne ki baat kahi thi,tabse hi SAM kisi bhi tarah mujhe aisa karne se rokne ki koshish me lag chuka tha...

najaane kitne hi parpanch kiye usne...is beech mere ravvaiye ko bhi usual se hatke feel karna shuru kiye tha NEW GIRL ne par kyunki tab mai uska B.F ban chuka tha isiliye woh slight attitude diversion normal hi laga tha usse...

lekin ab jab saare patte khul chuke the,samajh aane laga tha usse ki mera koi bhi diversion normal nahi tha...

unka game shuru hone se pehle hi open ho chuka tha mere aage...

par kitna pehle...SAM ki planning but more importantly,uske aur NEW GIRL ka rishta,kabse jaanta tha mai is RAAZ ko...

aur more se zyada most importantly,un dono ke ek baap ke baare me kaise pata chala mujhe...

sawal ye is waqt NEW GIRL aur SAM ke dimag me zaroor tha par jahan ek taraf NEW GIRL thi jo pahad si bhaari glaani ke beech dabe hone ki wajah se sir jhukaye khadi thi wahin dusri taraf tha SAM jiski itni zyada fat rakhi thi ki mooh kholne ki himmat bhi naa bachi thi usme...

par sawal sirf un dono ke dimag me toh chal raha tha nahi...

mere mooh se nikle aakhri shabd ko sun garage me moujud mere sabhi doston ka dimag band aur mooh khul chuka tha...

woh sabhi kabhi mujhe dekhte toh kabhi saamne sir jhukaye khade NEW GIRL aur SAM ko jinki chuppi is baat ka saboot thi ki mera revelation sach tha...

mere revelation ke baad lagbhagh 5 minutes guzar chuke the par is beech koi kuch bola nahi tha aur ye laazmi bhi tha...

ab baat hi itni badi thi ki usse hazam karne me waqt toh lagna hi tha...


NITS-JJAIDEN CCHOWDHARY...THE JAIDEN CHOWDHARY...THE FUCK....REALLY...JAIDEN CHOWDHARY...!!!


slow tone me start kar SONU ki tarah haklate hue finally JAIDEN CHOWDHARY bolte bolte chilla hi utha tha NITS...


RASHI-how...how do you know it...!!!???

ANJALI-yaa...in dono ki khamoshi tumhari baat ka truth reveal kar rahi hai...

but how do you know it...???kyunki itna bada secret jo as per your words only, puri duniye se chhupa kar rakha hai in dono ne...

in dono ne kya,apne real husband ka naam cover karne ke liye inki moms tak ne fake husband ko show kiya hua tha...

and considering the persona of both there moms,its a damn big thing to hide...

pure Uttarakhand me naam hai SAM ki mom ka aur DIMPLE ki mom toh world famous hai...

aise me itna bada secret lagatar salaon se carry karna, it's not a piece of cake...

but you knew it...how...???

bas ek NEW GIRL ka sir hi neeche tha baaki ANI ke sawal par sabke curiosity se bhare chehre mere upar tik chuke the...

SAM ka bhi...


MAI-sawal jitna pechida lagta hai,kayi baar jawab utna hi asaan nikalta hai...is case me bhi aisa hi hua hai...

SAB-matlab...!!!

MAI-last year jab I.Q hunt competition ke liye delhi gaya tha tu,ARCHANA BATRA as in teri step mom ke yahan hi ruka tha naa...

SAM-tujhe,tujhe kaise pata...???

kaafi surprise ho gaya tha SAM...


MAI-tune hi toh dikhaya tha...

SONU-ddikhaya ttha..abbe,kkya bol rraha hai ttu...???

MAI-jis din competition tha iska,us din tera birthday bhi tha...

remember...!!!

SONU-haan...wish kkarne ke lliye vvideo call kiya tha isne...us ttime ttum sab bhi toh tthe...

MAI-yup... competition ko sirf ek ghanta bacha tha jiske baad kaafi time tak occupied ho jaane waale tha SAM...

waise free hokar shaam ko bhi tujhe wish kar sakta tha par hum sabse ek saath baat karna chahta tha ye isiliye final preps ke beech hamare assembly time se just pehle,he called...

and at that very moment,apne BACKGROUND ko self expose kar diya tha isne...

SAM-SHIT...


BACKGROUND ko thoda zor dekar bola tha mai jispar baaki sab toh confused hi rahe par SAM ki aankhein ek pal ke liye sochne waale andaz me choti hui par phir turant badi hoti chali gayi...

failure smile face par laate hue sir par haath maar liya tha usne...


MAI-us din mobile hang karne ke baad jab palta tha tu toh competition ki hadbadi ke beech agar ek baar bhi rook saamne dekh leta toh mere saath game khelne ka sochta bhi nahi...

RASHI-dude...tere jitne intelligent nahi hai hum... sidhe sidhe shabdon me fill us in...

MAI-yaad hai baaton ke beech jahan ye khada tha,wahan BACKGROUNDS me walls par lage nakkaishiyon aur paintings ki taarif ki thi maine...(UPDATE-27)

RAJAT-yaa,i remember...

EKPREET-me too...


un nakkaishiyon aur paintings ki hi tarah room me alag alag jagahon par 3 wall photos lagi thi...do medium size aur ek 4/3 ki badi photo aur kyunki baat karte hue SAM carelessly room me ghum raha tha,i caught the sight of all those pics....

medium size photos me se ek me ye dono the...dusre me inke saath ARCHANA BATRA thi aur third big photo inki hidden family photo thi....

jisme ye dono,inki moms aur inke dad MR JAIDEN CHOWDHARY the...

surprise hua tha mai par phir jaane diya...


NITS-bhains ki poonch...tere saamne tabse open tha iska background aur naa isse ya hume bataya tak nahi tune...

MAI-dost jo tha ye...woh kahani jo har kisi se chhupa rakhi thi isne,uspar sawal kar isse humiliate kaise karta mai...

RASHI-par yaar SANVY...agar us din SAM alert rehta toh tu woh pics kabhi dekh nahi paata...

aise me jo bhi ye plan kar raha tha,he would have succeeded in that ...

MAI-i doubt that... tasviren chehre dikhati hain,un chehron ke beech waale rishten toh bayan nahi karti...

agar us din maine woh pics nahi bhi dekhi hoti tab bhi der saver hi sahi,in dono ke beech ka rishta toh kamsekam mujhe pata lagna hi tha...


KHANAK-kaise...???

MAI-genetic inheritance...

1-inside edge of eyes...

2-cheek bones...

3-nose tip...

4-philtrum...

NAISHA-hain...!!!ab ye kya hai...???

MAI-the four pillars of genetic inheritance...


in dono ke chehre bhale hi ek dusre se kaafi alag hain,all thanks to there different mom's but kyunki in dono ke dad ek hain,the most important parts of there faces jinse same genetic inheritance ka secret open hota hai,woh exactly same hain...khud dekh lo...


apna mobile jisme is waqt pics art khula hua tha,usse saamne kar diya tha maine...

is waqt teen pics line me dikh rahi thi screen par jiske ek part me SAM ka chehra,dusre bhaag me NEW GIRL ka face aur third me unke dad MR JAIDEN CHOWDHARY ka straight angle clear face dikh raha tha...

saath hi saath teeno hi faces ke beech features ke upar lines kheenchte hue wahin words use kiye the maine jo abhi abhi kahe the...

aur wakayi...chehra bhale hi ek dusre se kaafi alag tha SAM,DIMPLE aur unke baap ka par teeno ke hi aankhon ke inside edges,cheek bones,nose tip aur philtrum bilkul same the...


MAI-teen logon ke beech in chaaron facial features me se ek,do aur agar teen chizen bhi ek si hon tab bhi coincidence maana jaa sakta hai par agar chaaron features resemble karen,that means...

RASHI-they are genetically connected...

MAI-yup and that to very closely...


yahan mai apni theory prove karne me laga hua tha aur wahan baaki sab mere phone par point out kiye facial features ko dekhne ke baad ab aankhein faade mujhe dekhne lag gaye the...


KHANAK-you are...!!!kya bolun tumhe SANVY...???kya kya dekh lete ho tum...!!!

NITS-sach me be...teri aankhein hain ya phir koi microscopic device...

itne deep aur unrecognizable chizon ko bhi detect kar leta hai tu...

MAI-chiz nahi log...aur jab log apne hone ka dhong rachayen toh chaalak banana laazmi hai...


meri baat sun ek baar pleading eyes se dekha mujhe SAM ne par DIMPLE ki nazar ab bhi neeche hi thi...


MAI-waise dhong se yaad aaya...kaam toh friendship ke naam se bhi badha sakte the tum dono...

phir plan me ye love angle waale dhong ko daalne ki zaroorat kya thi...!!!

DIMPLE-dhong nahi tha woh... maano,mat maano but i bloody love you...

SAM-haan SANVY...i swear to GOD...she really loves you...


pehli baar utha tha sir DIMPLE ka...

aansuon se bhare uske face par izhaar ki sachayi saaf dekh sakta tha mai par is sach ka waqt khud kharab kiya tha usne...

wahin SAM ki baat sun ek khilli waali smile sabhi ke face par naach uthi thi...

us hasi ko sun SAM ka face toh ek baar phir se neeche ho gaya tha par DIMPLE ki aankhein ab bhi meri aankhon par jami hui thi...

MAI-phir bhi DIMPLE...???

DIMPLE....

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TUM MUJHE NEW GIRL KYUN BULAATE HO...???AB TOH NAA MAI IS SCHOOL KE LIYE NAYI HUN AUR NAAHI TUMHARE LIYE...

MAI-MERE JAZBAAT KE LIYE TOH HO...TUM WOH PEHLI GIRL KO JISNE SANVEER AHARYA KE DIL ME EK NEW FEELING KO PAIDA KIYA...

WOH EHSAAS JO SOCHA NAHI THA MAINE KI KABHI FEEL KAR PAAUNGA MAI...

ISILIYE NEW GIRL...(update 80)

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mere DIMPLE bolte hi NEW GIRL word ke mere use karne ka reason gunj utha tha uske dimag me...

aaj pehli baar usse uske naam se bulaya tha maine...

matlab samajh uski sookh chali aankhein ek baar phirse bhar uthi thi...

MAI-kyun kiya...???

tumhari MOM ka favourite SAM hai, isiliye...???


surprised reaction turant aaya tha DIMPLE aur SAM ke dono ke faces par...


DIMPLE -tumhe kaise...???

MAI-tumhe kya lagta hai, tumhari aur SAM ki mom ka cristmas eve par mere ghar aana ittafaq tha...

it was my plan...dono sautano ko aamne saamne laana chahta tha mai...

mujhe bataya tha ANI ne ki uski aur SAM ki mom us din meeting ke liye kahin saath jaane waali thi isiliye maine isse apni mon ko mere ghar se hote hue jaane ke liye force karne ko kaha tha...

i knew ki unke saath SAM ki mom bhi zaroor aayegi mere ghar...

aur jab ye ghar par nahi thi tab mai pahuncha tha iske ghar...

iski mom ko apne ghar invite karne ke liye which she happily agreed to...

aur jab woh ghar aayin toh unki nazar sabse pehle SAM par hi gayi thi...

dekha toh unhone phir apni beti ko bhi tha par SAM ko dekhkar jo khushi unke face par aayi thi,uski baat hi aur thi...

waise notice toh is difference ko tumne bhi kiya tha...pal bhar ke liye murjha jo gaya tha tumhara face...


sach thi meri baat jispar kuch kaha nahi DIMPLE ne par pain jo uski aankhon me aaya tha,uske baad usse kuch kehne ki zaroorat bhi nahi thi...


MAI-kamaal hai...sagi mom woh tumhari hai par preference SAM ko...iska toh ek hi reason ho sakta hai...tumhare dad...

tum dono me unka preference SAM hai right...!!!unki hi wajah se tumhari mom bhi isse hi priority deti hai...

aur yahi wajah hai tumhara iske plan me iska saath dene ka...to please your parents...


DIMPLE aur SAM ke beech ek baar phir chhaayi khamoshi ne saaf kar diya tha ki sahi tha mai...

par mere is revelation ko sun mere saare dost ek baar phirse hairan reh gaye the...


RASHI-matlab inke parents ko inke plan ke baare me maalum tha and they were ok with it...!!!

MAI-ye kahani toh mujhe bhi jaanani hai...

toh bhai behen me se kaun batayega...???


saare patte toh khul hi chuke the...aur zyada humiliate hone ke liye kuch bacha toh tha nahi isiliye kandhe chuka ek lambi saans chhodi SAM ne aur...


SAM-ye sab last year shuru hua...tabhi jab mai i.q hunt competition ke liye delhi gaya tha...

rare occasion tha woh kyunki mai,DINGLI,mom as in ARCHANA mom,aur dad, chaaron hi ek saath the wahan...

competition ke baad jab ghar louta mai toh dad ke saath baitha...

competition jeet chuka tha mai isiliye dad congratulated me...

then he asked me about my friends aur jaise hi tera naam liya maine toh he started asking specifically about you...

he was very keen,tere baare me jaanane ke liye...i guess reason tum sabko pata hi hai...

SANVY'S father...the only man to beat my father...woh jaanana chahte the ki kya MR SANEEL AHARYA ka beta bhi unki tarah hi champion hai...

dad se mai kuch chhupata nahi isiliye tere talent ke baare me unhe sab sach bata diya maine...

and as i said...DINGLI was there... pehle ye jaankar ki dad ko kisi ne haraya tha,iska interested hamare convo me jaaga...

then tere baare me unka specifically puchna aur phir mere mooh se joki SIRIUS ka champ hai,ye admit karna ki you the best,iski tere liye curiousity badhne lagi...

aur ye curiousity tab extreme hui jab isse pata chala ki itna talent hone ke baawjud tu school me ek average student bankar rehta hai...

kisi ka aisa ATTITUDE pehle kabhi dekha kya,suna bhi nahi tha isne...

tujhse milne se pehle hi she was drawn into you...us pure din ye bas teri hi baatein karti rahi... tere saare kaarname sun yakin hi nahi ho raha tha isse ki koi aisa bhi ho sakta hai...

aur isiliye she decided ki next year,she is gonna join SIRIUS...

anyways,mere wapas yahan aane se pehle dad ne bataya mujhe ki next year woh mere school aa rahe hain,for the 100th anniversary aur unki khwahish hai ki mai hi champ banu...

easy tha mere liye jab tak tune ye decide nahi kiya ki you are gonna participate this year...

dad ko phone par batayi thi maine ye baat...i said ki shayad is baar champ ka tag naa mile mujhe as SANVY is participating...

par tab tak ye competition bohot huge ho chuka tha...

national level position stake par tha jo kabhi mere dad ne bhi aise hi ek competition me achieve kiya tha...

isiliye he said ki by hook or by crook,i have to win this competition...

same chiz ARCHI MOM ne bhi kahi thi...

aur unhone hi DINGLI se kaha tha to help me...kisi bhi tarah tujhe competition se back down karne ke liye ye saath de mera....

trust me SANVY, pehli baar me mana kar diya tha isne...but her mom kept forcing her...dad ne bhi same demand ki...

jab retaliate karne ki koshish ki isne toh even phone par isse baat karna bhi chhod diya tha unhone...

isiliye just for our parents sake,she agreed...

NITS-chi,chi,chi,chi,chi...saala ek aadmi jisse DEHRADUN ke har school ka student apna role model maanta hai...

jisne apne mukaam ki chhap sirf desh me hi nahi balki videsh me bhi chhodi hui hai...

dusri taraf ek aisi aurat jisse hamare desh ke leading industrialists me se ek bola jaata hai...

professionally idols for our society,our country par personal level par itni down market ghatiya soch...

baap se nahi jeet paaye toh apne bete se uske bete ko hara khudko bada banayenge hum...

ghanta...abbe champ baad me banana, pehle sahi insaan to ban jaa re...

SONU-aur ek bbaat bbata bbe...mmom ddad ttere GALATH the,ye ttoh ppata hi hoga nna tujhko...

ye ssab ggame kkhelne ke lliye ttere zzzamir ne tujhe dhikkara nnahi...


SAM ki baat sun NITS aur SONU ke saath baaki sab bhi jhunjla se gaye the...

ghussail bhari nazaron se dono hi usse dekh rahe the...


SAM-SANVY,mujhe maaf mat kar...mai deserve bhi nahi karta par please yaar...forgive DINGLI...

family pressure me aakar usne ye sab kiya...but she really loves you...

MAI-kis level ki moti buddhi hai be teri...tu mujhe convince kar raha hai..!!!

sachayi mujhe abhi abhi pata chali hai kya...???

tum dono game isiliye khel paa rahe the kyunki mai khelne de raha tha...

ye mujhe dhoka nahi de rahi thi...mai isse dene de raha tha...

teri toh baat hi chhod...jis din mere khilaaf tune plotting shuru ki thi,matter karna band ho gaya tha tu mujhe...

par ye,the so called love of my life,saari sachayi jaanane ke baawjud mai iske saamne chup sirf isiliye tha kyunki mai dekh raha tha ki iske dil me tu aur teri family ka ganda pyar kab tak mere saaf pyar par haavi rehta hai...

saala aakhir tak haavi hi reh gaya...


DIMPLE ko ek gehri nazar se dekh ek lambi saans chhod wapas palat gaya mai...

aur mujhe jaata dekh baaki sab bhi palatne lage the...


DIMPLE-SSSANVY...pplease....mmmai ye sab...


gala rundhne ki wajah se awaaz atak gayi thi DIMPLE ki par uska sisakna sun mai rook chuka tha...

itni der me apni galti ke liye aankhon se toh kayi baar maafi maang chuki thi woh par mooh khol ye pehli baar tha jab adhure shabdon ke saath plead kiya tha DIMPLE ne...


SAM-DINGLI...

CHATAKKKHHH...


DIMPLE ko kandhe se pakad housla dena chahta tha SAM par iske touch karte hi tezi se ghuma DIMPLE ka haath aur agle hi pal ek gaadha panja chhap chuka tha SAM ke face par...

ye scene dekh mere saath saath ruke baaki sab bhi thode shocked ho gaye the...

par un sabko jaane ka ishara kiya maine jispar sabhi garage se nikal gaye...

wahin mai pahuncha wapas DIMPLE ke saamne jo bhari aankhon ke beech bhi bina palke jhapkaye mujhe dekh rahi thi...


MAI-mai ye sab kya...???

DIMPLE-mai ye sab hamesha ke liye tumse chhupa kar nahi rakhne waali thi...saara sach...i would have told you...

MAI-i believe you...bas ek sawal ka honestly jawab dogi...!!!

DIMPLE-anything...

MAI-kab...???kab batane waali thi tum mujhe... race se pehle ya race ke baad...

matlab successfully mujhe dhoka dene se pehle ya uske baad...


mere sawal ka jawab zaroor tha DIMPLE ke paas par woh jawab pleasent toh tha nahi...

labh hilkar hi reh gaye the uske aur ye dekh...


MAI-jawab mil gaya mujhe...aur tu...ek baat bata be...kuch dino pehle kahi meri baat ki" i will participate",yaad reh gayi tujhe par barson pehle kiya gaya mera vaada kaise bhool gaya tu...!!!???

"SIRIUS KE SCHOOL DIVISION KA CHAMP TU HI RAHEGA"...

meri baat sun mera usse ye barso pehle kiya gaya vaada ghum sa gaya tha SAM ke dimag me...


MAI-itne saalon ki dosti me kamsekam ye toh pata hona hi chahiye tha tujhe ki SANVY apne promises kabhi nahi todta...

SAM-mujhe maaf kar de yaar...dad ki baat sun bohot zyada nervous ho gaya tha mai...

unke saamne kaise bhi jeetna hai,iske alawa aur kuch yaad hi nahi raha tha mujhe...

MAI-toh ek baar sidhe sidhe bol deta...teri nervousness wahin khatm kar deta mai...

pehle bhi toh kayi baar tere har raaste se khud ko hataya hai naa maine... phir is baar kyun nahi haththa...!!!


meri baat sun sir sharmindagi se jhuk chuka tha SAM ka par ab faayda hi kya tha...!!!jo karna tha, kar chuka tha woh...


MAI-well,itne saare bad news ke baad i also have a good news for you...

ab tak toh samajh aa hi gaya hoga tujhe ki meri sports meet me participate karne waali baat fake thi...

just wanted to bring out your true colour which i just did...

isiliye my promise still stands...har saal ki tarah is saal bhi SIRIUS school division ka champ tu hi banega...

duniya ke saamne, tomorrow you will make your father proud...

all the best...


dono ko dekh smile karte hue wapas palath aage badh gaya mai...

jaise jaise door hote chale jaa raha tha mai,DIMPLE ke face par ek tez bechaini saaf dikhti chali jaa rahi thi...


DIMPLE-SANVY...


garage ke front door tak pahuncha hi tha mai ki mera naam zor se pukaar meri taraf doud gayi DIMPLE...


DIMPLE-maine jo kiya hai,mai jaanti hun woh maafi ke layak nahi hai...but i am sorry...

kal ke race me participate karo SANVY...haan ye sach hai ki mom dad ke liye mai apne bhai ka saath de rahi thi...

par ek sach ye bhi hai ki i have always wanted the world to see the real you...

the born champ that you are... race SANVY aur agar mujhse kabhi bhi mohobbat ki hai tumne toh win it ..

MAI-see now that's the thing...tumse mohobbat ki thi isiliye hi toh race nahi karni mujhe...


meri baat ko sun sawal dikhne laga tha NEW GIRL ke face par jispar uske theek saamne khada hua mai aur...


MAI-




aisa toh ho nahi sakta naa ki SANVY apni baat se MUKAR JAAYEGA...


tera dhoka tere pyaar par bhaari hai,par dil mera koi halka patta nahi jo toot kar BHIKAR JAAYEGA...

lekin pyaar toh tha hi jiska karz chadha hua hai mujhpar magar...


tere khawish-e-talab,tere bhai ki jeet se ab woh UDHAAR bhi UTAR JAAYEGA...









AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI...






AAPKA APNA V...J...
Saari haqeeqat samne aa gayi ab mafne mangne se kia faida woh ek kahawat h
AB PACHTAWE SE HOWAT KA
JAB CHIDYA CHUG GAYI KHAIT

itna hone k baad bhi SANVAY race nahi daud rarahaahi bahot h tum dono bhai bahen ko maafi dene k liye
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