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Adultery Farrar-A revenge story

Luffy

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" Mujhe maf karde mehek mere sanse chalte hue bhi me Kuch nhi Kar pa rha hu kabhi socha nhi tha ki ye din bhi dekhna Hoga ....ahhh mehek meri ankhe band ho rhi hai mujhe nhi pta ki hum jinda bachenge ya nhi par me tumse vada karta hu me agle janam me hum sath Saath jarur rehenge ,, ye kehte hue Rahul mehek ke sine me ludak gya ye dekh mehek bahut jyada gabra gaii vo bar bar Rahul Rahul kehne lgi par Rahul ki or se koi pratituar nhi Aya ... rote rote mehek ki bhi ankhe band ho gai ...Kuch Der bad Vishwa hatash nirash Jha Rahul or mehek the vha aa gya par jab uski najar dono par pdi to Uske hosh ud gye vo kampte hue unke pass chla gya



ABB AGGE......


Vishwa Jo ek majbur Dil Ka insan tha vo bhi Rahul or mehek ko etni buri condition me Dekh apni ankho me Anshu behne se nhi rok paya , Vishwa kampte hatho se dono ki nabj check ki , dono ki sanse abhi bhi chal rhi thi , vo yha Vha dekhne lga use bahar hi Tim char Scorpio khdi dikhai Di Vishwa ne bari Bari dono ko usme betha car tej speed se ghadi ho hospital ki or douda Di karib adhe gante bad vo hospital pahuch gya vha par hospital staff ki help se dono ko Ander le Jaya gya , doctors neckdil insan the esliye usne police Cass ke bare Vishwa se jyada Kuch nhi pucha


Dono ko alag alag operation theatre me le Jaya gya doctors and nurses ki team ne jaldi se dono Ka treatment Karna shuru Kar Diya , dono ki halat bahut critical thi esliye doctor chah Kar bhi Kuch nhi Kar pa rhe the vhi Vishwa Akela pareshan operation theatre / ICU ke bahar ummid ki Kiran jagaye upper vale ko yad Kar rha tha Kuch hi Der me ek doctor bahar aa gya jab Vishwa ki najar us par pdi to vo jaldi Uske pass chla gya

" Doctor shab dono patients ko condition Kaisa unhe jyada Kuch hua to nhi ,, Vishwa ko beshabra hote Dekh doctor Uske kande par hath rakhte hue Bola

" Dekhiye dono Ka halat abhi bhi bahut gambhir bni hui hai khaskar male patient ki famale patient se jyada male patient Ka blood loss bhi jyada hua hai jab tak unhki body me pryapt matra me blood supply na ho to Hume Kuch nhi Kar sakte ,,


" Kitna blood Chahiye doctor shab jitna Chahiye me dene ke liye tyar hu ,,

" Dekho man blood ki hamare pass bhi koi Kami nhi par vo unke liye useful nhi hai , jis blood ki unhe jarurat hai Uske liye humne bahut se hospital me contact Kiya par Kuch nhi hua fir bhi Hume koshish Kar rhe hai , vaise tumhara blood group kya hai ,,

" A negative ,,

" Sorry unhe AB negative blood ki jarurat hai or ye blood group bahut kam logo me paya jata hai ...fir doctor Kuch sochne lga .... Patients Ka tumhare sath kya relations hai ,,

" Ji dono mene friends hai ,,

" Ohhh vo me esliye puch rha tha ki agar tum eski family ko jante ho ya Uske karibi ho to sayad unse sampark Kar blood group match karva sakte ho because aamtour par family me blood group match Kar jate hai ,,


" Thanks doctor shab me abhi enki family se sampark karta hu or ho ske to aap bhi blood Ka intejam kijiyega ,, doctor ne ha gardan hilai fir Vishwa vha se car leke Rahul ke gavv Nikal gya es ummid ki sayad Kuch chamatkar ho Jaye .... Vishwa Kuch vakt bad Rahul ke Ghar pahuch gya Jha par Sushma ke alava koi nhi tha , Sushma es vakt gile kapde khukha rhi thi Vishwa Uske pass chla gya hai ,Sushma apne samne anjan admi ki Dekh boli

" Koun ho beta kisse milna hai ,,

" Maji pranam , me blood bank team se hu or yha poore gavv me blood ki jankari Lene Aaya hu actually Hume yha esliye bheja gya hai ki ek hospital me es shkas ko AB negative blood ki shakt jarurat hai agar unhe Kuch time unki body me blood inject nhi Kiya to sayad unki Jann chli jayegi , vo Hume SAB ke liye esliye important hai because vo anath bacho ke liye trust chalate hai agar unhe Kuch ho gya to anath Bache besahara ho jayenge ,, Sushma Soch me padd gai fir boli

" Es group Ka blood hamare tino mache Ka hai par vo tino yha nhi hai , vo apna blood donate Karne me tanik bhi nhi sochenge aap ek minute rukiye me unhe phone lga Kar bulati hue ,, ye kehkar Sushma Jane lagti hai par piche se Vishwa ke awaj dene ke se Ruk jati hai

" Dekhiye hamare pass time bahut kam hai agar aap Hume apne bacho Ka address De Dogi to me swam unse mil Lunga ,,

" Jo mere do bade ladko Ka to pta nhi par meri choti ladki vo ***** college gaii hai ,,

" Kya me unka name jaan Sakta hu taki unhe dun sku or ha apne dono bde bcho ke mobile number bhi De dijiyega taki mujhe dhundne me asani ho ,, Vishwa me ye esliye kha taki Sushma ko Kuch shak na ho , fir Sushma ne name sahit menek or Rahul ke phone number bhi De diye jinhe lekar Vishwa jaldi se susma ke bateye hue sweety ke college chla gya vha par puchtach Karne ke bad sweety ke room me chla gya Jha par teacher PDA rha tha


" Apme se sweety Singh d/o Kishore kingh koun hai ,, Vishwa ki awaj sunkar sabhi Ka dhyan uski or gya

" Koun ho tum , or sweety se kya kam hai , tameej nhi hai Bina permission class ke Ander chle aye , bahar nikalo or permission leke Ander AAO ,, teacher pure gusse me Bola par Vishwa Uske pass chla gya or Uske pass chla gya


" Sorry sir par mere pass en sabka time nhi hai , inke bhaiya ki tabiyat thodi kharab hai esliye me ese le Jane Aya hu ,, Vishwa ki ye awaj sunte hi sweety vha se apne bag leke Uske pass aa gai sath me Ritu bhi fir Bina Kuch bole Vishwa Ka hath pakadkar apne najuk hatho se khiche hue bahar le aai Puri class mukdarshak bne sab dekhti rhi teacher bhi Kuch nhi Bola fir tino college campus se bahar aa gye

" Kha hai mere bhaiya kya hua unko ,, sweety ke chehre par chinta saf jhalak rhi thi

" Are tum khamkha tention le rhi ho Kuch nhi hua unhe bs minner sa fever hai , bs unhone Tumne Milne ko kha to aa gya ab jaldi chalo ab Jo bhi puchna hai raste me hi puchna ,, Vishwa ki bat se sweety santusht nhi hui fir bhi uski bat mante hue hue Ritu ke sath Scorpio me Beth gyi chintit to Ritu bhi thi par use jahir nhi hone Diya , Vishwa ne Bina vakt gavaye full speed me gadi douda Di Kuch vakt bad tino hospital pahuch gye

Etne bde hospital ko dekhkar sweety or Ritu ko guabrahat hone lgi , ab Vishwa ko bhi maloom chal gya ki sweety ko gumakar Kuch na Kuch to batana hi Hoga

" Dekho sweety mene tumse jhut Bola tha Rahul ko koi fever nhi hai aaj sunhe hi uska chota SA car accident ho gya hai jisse uska thoda blood loss ho gya Uske liye hospital me blood nhi tha jaisa Rahul ko Chahiye tha , Rahul or tumhara blood group hai esliye Rahul ko tumhara blood Chahiye ,, sweety ke to Kann sunn pad gye vo to vhi pathar bann gaii Ritu ki ankho se jhar jhar Anshu behne lge , Vishwa ke hilene se sweety hosh me aaii or Bina Kuch bole teji se hospital ke Ander chli gaii Uske piche piche Vishwa or Ritu dono doud pde

Sweety paglo ki trah sabhi ward me Rahul ko dhundne lgi hospital me jitne bhi log the sabhi Ka dhyan sweety par kendrit ho gai , Vishwa jald se jakar sweety ko pakad liya

" Sant ho jao sweety , Kuch nhi hua Rahul ko vo bilkul thik hai ,, Vishwa me Uske Anshu pahuchate hue kha par sweety me Uske hath ko jhatak Diya

" Kha hai mere bhaiya , please mujhe unke pass le chlo me apke agge hath jodti hu please ,, Vishwa Bina Kuch bole use second floor par le gya Jha par Rahul ko or Jaya gya , fir usne Rahul ke room ki eshara Kiya sweety or Ritu jaldi se vha chali gai Jha par gate lga hua tha jab uski najar ander pdi to mano uski dhadkan Ruk se gaii kyoki Ander Rahul ke muhh par oxygen mask lga hua tha sath hi Uske sharir me koi halchal nhi thi , Ritu ki bhi same halat ho gaii Vishwa bhi unke pass akar dono ko side leke aa gya

" Sweety es wakt Rahul ko tumhari jarurat hai agar tum aise react karogi to sayad Hume use bcha nhi payenge , tum ek Bahadur ladki ho apne aap ko sambhlo bhagvan par vishwash kro vo SAB thik Kar denge ,, ye bat Kar hi the the ki do doctors vha ate dikhe to Vishwa unke pass chla gya


" Dr Shah jaisa apne kha AB negative blood group vale donater ko me use leke aa gya aap jaldi kijiye ,, ye bat Vishwa ne sweety ki or eshara karte hue kha Dr ek bar sweety ko gour se dekhne lga


" Dekhiye hum ek patient ko bachane ke liye dusre insan ki Jann dav par nhi lga sakte , are ek bar eski condition ko dekhiye muskil se Esme 40 kg wait Hoga , patient ko 1 kg blood ki jarurat hai agar humne eska 1 kg blood Nikal liya to eski kaisi condition ho Sakti hai ye sayad aap nhi jante sorry me es ladki Ka blood nhi lag Sakta ,, ye sab bate sweety bde gour se sun rhi thi , doctor ki bat end hote hi sweety doud Kar khidki ke pass jakar Uske uper Chad gaii ye sab Dekh sabki ankhe chodi ho gaii


" Agar Mera blood nhi liya to me abhi yha se kood Kar apni Jann se dungi , mere bhaiya ko Kuch ho gya to me vaise bhi jinda nhi reh paungi , me Uske liye 1kg blood to kya apna hurt Nikal Kar de Sakti , dekhiye me jyada nhi bolungi aap Mera blood le rhe ho ya nhi nhi to me abhi kud jaungi ,, Kisi ki himmat nhi ho rhi ki sweety ke pass Jane ki Ritu to vhi jamm si gaii , jabb doctor ne ha kri tabb jakar sweety vha se uter Kar doctor ke sath chli gai Jha uska blood test hone ke bad 1 kg blood nikala gya gya jisme 750g Rahul ko chadaya gya or 250g mehek ko

( Actual me sweety ko mehek ke bare me pta nhi tha kyoki use dusre ward me admit Kiya gya tha )

Aise hi karib sham ho jati hai par na to Rahul ki halat me Kuch sudhar na hi mehek ki uper se sweety bhi behosh thi udher bahar Ritu ko Vishwa tassli deta rha es douran sabse jyada pareshan tha / thi to vo thi Sushma kyoki Uske Charo ankho ke tare subhe se anki ankho se oujal the Sushma pure din esi intejar me thi ki Charo ab ab aye ki Kuch Der bad aye par Charo me se ek bhi nhi Aya

Uske Mann ajeeb si guabrahat hone lgi usne Rahul or mehek ko phone bhi lagane ko kha par dono ke phone yhi par the , Sushma ki ankho se anayas hi Anshu chalak uthe karib 6 bja rahit bhi apni duty se aa gya jab Sushma me use sari bat batai to Rohit bhi tention me aa gya , ab use bhi samajh me nhi aa rha tha ki vo use dhunde to dhunde kha fir bhi vo Sushma ko Dhiraj Bandha Kar bike leke chla gya ab takriban 7:30 baj gye the to collage bhi band ho gya fir bhi Rohit me college guard se sweety or Ritu ke bare me puch par usne apne hath khde Kar diye , Rohit se chla gya or Jha bhi Uske sampark the vha vha par usne puchtach ki aise hi rat ke 12 back gye edher Sushma Ka ro ro Kar Bura hal ho gya Uske sath koi santvna bandhane vala tak koi nhi tha


Sweety par upervale Kuch jyada hi meherban tha esliye use hosh aa gya par jab use Kuch yad Aya to rone lgi esliye doctor ne use behosh Ka injection dekar sula Diya , Vishwa ke lakh samjhne par Ritu me thoda bahut Khana kyaya , rokar uska bhi Bura HAL ho gya tha esliye use bench par hi nind aa gaii

( Vishwa or Ritu etni tention me the ki unhe ye bhi Bhan nhi hua ki ek bar Ghar bhi phone lga de )

Vhi Rohit thak har Kar vapas aa gya jab Sushma me use Akela Dekha to vhi bifar gai Uske bad kya Hina tha ye mujhe kehne ki jarurat nhi bs yhi kahunga ki dono ma bete jaag Kar rat Kati ESI ummid me ki unki ankho ke star ayenge mere Karan Arjun ayenge


( Well ab thoda time traveling Karke piche chlate hai )

Karib ratri 8 bje Thakur ko Adhiraj Vyom Ka phone Aya jise dekhkar Thakur ke pasine chutt gye ab Marta kya na karta usne Puri himmat jhuta Kar phone pick Kar liya


" Or sunao Thakur kya HAL chal hai ,, udher se Vyom pure Josh me Bola

" Badiya hu Vyom shab ,,

" Abe mene tere nhi balki mere Sher Yani Rahul ke bare me pucha hai Kaisa hai vo or kya gull khila rha hai ajkal ,, Thakur ki pehle kamm fatt rhi thi par ye bar sunkar Puri fatt gai usne apni Jeb se rumal nikalkar apne mathe par se pasina saf Kiya , Thakur Kuch sochne lga

" Abe kya hua muhh me suar Ka lundd fass gya kya , Kuch bol Bhai mene Kuch pucha tumse yu Sant reheke Mera BP ma bda chal laude sari ram kahani suna dall ,, Thakur ek gehri sans leke Bola

" Vyom shab ek buri khabar haii ,,

" Bakkk Jo bhi hai jaldi se bhonkk ,,

" Vo actual me aaj sunhe Harish ne Rahul ko kidnap Karke use mare adde par le gya , apko to pta hi hai ki Rahul me Uske sath kya Kiya usi Ka badla Lene ke liye usne Rahul ko ghayal Kar Diya es hadse me vo khud mara gya , kyoki eski bhanak Rahul ki behen ko lag gaii esliye usne Rahul ko bcha liya or Rahul ko bcha Kar na Jane kha le gaii , es bat ki khabar Hume tab lgi jab me Kisi kam se adde par gya tab hamare admi ne ye sab bataya ,, Vyom to ye sunkar aag Ka gola bann gya


" Thakur Teri ma Ka bhosda burchodina , madarchod Randi ki oulad mene tumhe Rahul ki jimmedari Lund hilane ke liye bhosdivale agar Rahul ko Kuch ho gya ma to Dekh Lena me tumhare pure khandan ko chourahe par paltu kutto se chudvaunga or tere sath me vo karunga jiski Tu sapne me bhi Kalpana nhi Kar Sakta phone rakhhh bhadve ,, Vyom Ka gussa Dekh Thakur thar thar kampne lga vo dhadam se sofe par Beth gya tab Uske pass Nilima aa gaii


" Kya hua ji ,,

" Teri ma chud gaii usi Ka matam MNA rha hu ,,

" Aise kyo bol rhe ho ji ,,

" Aisa nhi bolu to kya Kru , tere samne chinala Kru ya mujra Kru bhag yha se burchodi Varna abhi Gand fadd dunga ,, Nilima bechari muhh latka Kar vha se chli gaii

Vhi Vyom ko ye abhas ho gya ki Rahul ghayal hua hai to definitely sure ho gya ki use aaspass ke hi Kisi hospital me admit Kiya gya , usne jaldi se pta lga liya ki Rahul ko kis hospital me admit Kiya gya hai use shok tab lga jab ye pta chla ki mehek bhi admit hai

( Actual me Vyom es vakt Kolkata me tha to vo us vakt aa nhi Sakta tha fir bhi vo usi vakt vo flight se Jaipur ke liye rwana ho gya sath hi usne india ke top surgeon Doctors ko Rahul jis hospital me bhej Diya with advance medical upkarno ke sath , vhi doctor rat ke karib 2:30 minutes par hospital pahuch Kar Rahul or mehek Ka treatment start Kar Diya )



Back to present ....


To hum kha the ha yad Aya ..... sushma or Rohit ne Puri rat Jag Kar Kati ESI ummid me ki Rahul Ritu mehek or sweety lout ayenge par ESI intejar me subhe ke Karib 6:30 baj gye the lekin Kisi Ka ATA pta nhi tha ...abhi Sushma ko ek jhapki aai hi thi ki bahar car rukne ke awaj aaii Jise sunkar Sushma jaldi se gate ki or gaii or jab usne gate khola to samne do shaks khde the Jo koi or nhi balki Ajeet or Divakar hi the dono ke chehre par muskurahat thi par jab un dono ki najar Sushma par pdi to ye muskurahat pal Bhar me hwa ho gaii

Kyoki sushma ki ankhe rat Bhar jagne ke Karan lal ho gaii thi rone ke Karan usme halki si sujan bhi aa gaii sath hi Uske gallo par anshuo ke shukhe nishan es bat ke gva the ki Sushma ki kya sthiti hai ....Sushma ko jab ye abhash hua ki samne vale do shaks koun hai to usne jatt se gate band Karke uspar pith tika Kar rone lag gaii vhi bahar Ajeet or Divakar murti bne ye sab hota dekhte rhe unhe es bat Ka ahesas ho gya ki jarur Kuch anhoni hui hai ...Rohit Jo peshab Karne gya tha apni ma ke rone ki awaj sunkar unke pass gya use bhi thoda Ajeet lga apni ma ko yu gate ke sahare pith tika Kar Rona

" Kya hua mom aap yha akar aise hua kya hai yu achanak ,, abhi Rohit age Kuch bolta usse pehle hi darvaja khatkhatane ki awaj aaii Rohit ne Sushma ko samjha bujha Kar side me Karke darvaja khola or samne Ajeet or Divakar ko paya , par Rohit unhe pehchan nhi paya , ab Sushma bhi apne Anshu saf Karke Rohit me pass khadi ho gai


" abb kya Lene aye ho aap , kya yhi dekhne aye na ki hum mar gye ya jinda hai are marmar to hum kabka ki rhe the par aab Puri trah Marr chuke hai tumhare samne ye Jo do Jann dikh rhi hai na ye bs ek murda sharir hai kyoki enki atma enke Ander nhi hai , me ek bhikharin banke apke samne har bar chillati rhi ki Bhai shab meri madad kijiye me akeli hu lachar or bebash hu par app Jaise pathar Dil insan par eska tanik bhi fark nhi PDA , chle jaiye yha se ab apke liye ye darvaja hamesha hamesha ke band ho chuka hai get lost my home mr Ajeet sing and go away ,, Sushma ki bat Ka Ajeet ko jra bhi Bura nhi lga Rohit ko bhi ye ahesas ho gya tha ki samne vala shaks koun hai uska Dil Kiya ki jhuk Kar unke pair chuye par ye na Kar ska


" Apne gunhegar ko maff kardo Sushma manta hu mene Jo Kiya vo mafi ke layak nhi hai par tumhara Dil bahut bda hai , ek bar maf kardo me yha tumhari madad ke liye hamesha hamesha ke liye Aaya hu ,,


" Jiski madam ke liye aye ho ha jiski tumhe madad Karni Chahiye vo to yha hai hi nhi to fir kiski madad karoge bahut Der Kar Di Bhai Sahab , pta nhi mere bche kha honge kaise honge kis halat me honge ,, Ajeet to ye sunkar shok ho gya fir usne Rohit se puch to Rohit ne shortcut me sab bta Diya , fir Ajeet or Divakar dono Ander ane ke liye pair age badaye hi the ki Sushma ne unhe bhi rok rrukne Ka ishara Kiya


" Vhi Ruk jao tum dono meri madad Karne aye ho na to suno jab tak mere Bache mere pass nhi aa jate es Kar me kadam rakhne ki himmat mat Karna ,, ye sunkar Ajeet or Harish ne Apne pair vapas khinch liye


" Thik hai jab tak me hamare bche ko tumhare samne nhi Lata tab tak es chokhat par kadam nhi rakhunga fir Rohit ko sath leke tino vha se Nikal gye , abhi karib 7:00 baj the the to tino sidhe college pahuch gye vha par Kuch staff aa gye the to tino Ander chle gye fir Ajeet ne sabhi teacher ko jitna jaldi ho ske college bulaya or unse sweety ke bare me pucha to ek teacher ne ye bta Diya ki ek ladka Aya tha Jo Uske Bhai ke bimar hone ki bat kehkar dono ke le gya , Ajeet ne Kuch sochkar pass ke hospital ke number ikhatte kiye or Bari Bari sab par phone lga Kar puchtach ki or use safalta bhi hath lag gai fir tino hospital ki or nikal gya




To be countinue........
Awesome update
 

Lonetiger

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waise dono ki aankhein band hone tak jis tarah se baatein kar rahe the wo kaafi hriday vidarak the.... lage ki sach mein yahi ant ho unka lekin acche ke sath har baar bura hi ho to ho nahi sakta na... upor wala chahte the ki ye dono kuch na ho... abhi in dono jindagi mein kayi hanshi khush ke pal aayenge, unhe un palon ko jeena hai...
well..... dono ki haalat kaafi najuk thi... unki haalat dekh vishwa tut jarur gaya tha phir bhi khud ko sambhaalte huye dono ko hospital le aaya... kyunki is waqt sabse jaruri tha wo tha inka ilaz....
So treatment ke dauran blood ki jarurat aan padi... jiske chalte vishwa sweety ko le aaya hospital... kyun dono ke blood group kaafi rare the.....
Wohi ek tarah thakur apne bete ki chah mein ye bhool gaya ki agar Rahul ko kuch hua, aur usme kuch bhi galti thakur hui to khair nahi... kyun vyom ushe chhodne wala nahi...
lekin galti to kar di ab baari thi saza ki...
Vyom ne aisi ki taisi kar di thakur ki...
ab bhi kuch baatein ek raaz hi hai... ki vyom itna vyakul kyun ho gaya Rahul ki haalat ke bare jaan kar ki best se best doctors ke team ko prabandh kar diya Rahul ke treatment ke liye.... jaise uska jigad ka tukda ho Rahul...

dusri taraf ajeet aur divakar ko dekh sushma ko purani baatein yaad aa gayi, reh reh kar dad hua purana gussa ubal maarne laga... aur ant mein barash padi dono par....
lekin yahan pe ek important baat ye ki jo hona tha wo ho gaya... mana ki narajgi aur gussa bhi hai... lekin jo paas hai apne, ushe apna lena chahiye....kya pata kal ko itne dur chale jaaye ki chaah kar bhi mil na paaye... upor pachtawa aur aatmglaani bhi hai dono ko atit mein huye ghatanao ko leke ....

so apne Galtiyo ko sudharne aur Rahul ko madad ke khatir nikal pare dono rohit ke sath... aur ishi bich inhe pata chal gaya ki Rahul aur Mehak kaha hai....
ab jab ye baat saamne aayegi..... ki Rahul aur mehek kis haal mein hai... ye baat jaanke sushma ka haal kya hoga....
agar by chance sushma ko pata chale ki best doctors ke team ki arrangement vyom ne kiya hai tab kya hoga....
kya vyom milne aayega Rahul aur mehek se hospital mein....
agar aaya to sushma ka saamna karna hoga ushe....
itne saal baad sushma aur vyom aamne saamne honge to situations kaise honge...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
Wah NAINA G boht zabardast review dia aur akhir mein SUSHMA aur VYOM k milne ka tadka bhi laga dia haha
 

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" En na ek din sabko marna hi hai , to fir darke kya fayda hai ye afsos jarur rehega ki Marne se pehle me do Jann ko Dekh nhi paunga , kash me unko baho me Marta to thoda sukun jarur milta ,, Rahul ki ankhe muskil se khul or band ho rhi thi , aisa lag rha tha ki vo jism me Jann hi nhi bchi thi ek murde ki trah deewar ke Sahar betha hua tha , Thakur chahkar bhi putr mohh ke Karan Rahul ki sanse hamesha ke liye band nhi Kar par rha tha ....................vhi mehek or vishwa apni manjil ke bahut karib pahunch gye the



ABB AGGE....



Mehek or vishwa chupte hue goudam ke piche aa gya or vha unke pass me ek khidki thi , jab vishwa ne us khadki ke pass jakar Uske Ander jhanka to us room me char panch ladke the jiski juba par Rahul Ka name as rha tha ab vishwa ko ye confirm ho gya ki Rahul ESI goudam me hai , vishwa ne bat mehek ko bhi bta Di ki Rahul yhi hai or sakushal (jhut ) hai ye sunKar mehek ne ek nai urja Ka sanchar ho gya


" Mehek tum us side se jao or me es side se jata hu or ha Josh me apne hosh mat kho dena ye bat apne jehen me rakhna ki agar tumhe Kuch ho gya to hum Rahul ko jinda nhi bcha payenge tumhe khud ki Jaan ki hifajat Karna means Rahul ki jindagi bachana , ab jao mahare pass jyada vakt nhi hai ,, mehek vishwa ko apni taraf se asvasth karva Kar dusri side Nikal gai ..
Mehek deewar ke Sahare sahare age bad rhi rhi thi ki Uske samne do admi aa gye jinhe sayad bahut jor se mutash / peshab lgi thi ...chalte chalte unki najar mehek par pdi par mehek unke dekhne se pehle hi sambhal chuki thi or apne ek hath me chaku leke unme se ek admi ki gardan ko nishana bna Kar fenk Diya , chaku sidha us admi ke gle ke aarpar ho gya dusra admi Kuch karta ya bolta usse pehle hi mehek ne gun se Uske bheje ko uda Diya ( revolver me silencer lga hua tha esliye awaj nhi nikli ) dono vhi bejan hokar jamin par gir pde , mehek jaldi se Nikal Kar ek Piller ke piche chip gaii



Vhi Vishwa ek admi ke piche karib pahunch gya vo admi hath me banduk liye yha Vha najar douda rha tha Vishwa ne piche se uska muhh daboch Kar chaku Uske gardan par chla Diya vo admi jab tak bejaan nhi ho gya tak tak Vishwa ne use nhi choda fir use Aram se leta Kar age bad gya , vo age bda hi tha ki ek gamle se takra gya jisse gamla niche gir gya , Kuch girne ki awaj sunkar do admi Us or aye tab tak Vishwa vhi deewar ke pich chip gya dono admi chalte chalte Vishwa ke bahut karib aa gye Vishwa ko lagne lag gya ki agar usne age se pehel nhi ki to Uske liye ghatak ho Sakta hai esliye Vishwa deewar ke kinare aa gya Jaise hi dono admi Uske pass aye Vishwa ne niche jhuk Kar ek admi ke par par lat mar di jisse vo muhh ke bal fir gya Vishwa ne vakt Jaya na karte hue dusre admi ke sambhle se pehle hi uska sar Puri takat se pakadkar deewar se jor se bhida Diya aisa usne tin char bar Kiya tab tak us admi ne dum Tod Diya deewar sar lagne se lal ho gaii , dusra admi uthta usse pehle hi Vishwa ne apne pair ke panje ko kas Kar apne hath me pakadte hue gutne ko us niche pde admi ki gardan me Tek Diya jisse uss admi ne muhh se khoon ki ulti Kar Di ek bar girne ke bad vo vapas nhi uth ska , Vishwa vha se Nikal gya


Mehek Piller ke piche chipi hui thi par ek admi ki najar us par pad gaii vo bdi savdhani se kadam badate hue Piller ke opposite side aa gya or thodi mehek ke Karib jakar uski gardan par chaku rakh Diya


" Hilna mat Varna gardan dhad se alag Kar dunga , koun ho tum or yha kya Kar rhi ho ,, us admi ke pet me Kuch chubta hua mehsus hua , jab usne niche Dekha to mehek ne Uske pet me revolver point Kar rkhi thi ye Dekh Uske hath se chaku gir gya or usne apne hath upper Kar liye for mehek ne revolver ko Uske sar par point Karne lgi par usse pehle hi us shaks ne mehek ke hath par lat mar di jisse mehek ke hath se gun side me gir gai , ye Dekh vo shaks muskurane lga par mehek gusse se lal ho gai or apni pith par se sword nikar Kar uski gardan par chla Di uski gardan Bali ke bakre ki trah Uske dhad se alag hokar side for gaii


" Kutta khi Ka mujh par hasta hai , has ab hasna ,, mehek gusse se us kte sar ko dekhkar bol rhi thi vo age Kuch bolti usse pehle hi 4--5 admi uski or teji se bde mehek ko bhi eska Bhan ho gya tha mehek Kuch Karti usse pehle unhone mehek par goliya barsani shuru Kar Di par mehek niche ludakti hui apni revolver ko lekar Piller ke piche chip gaii ... Ab vo sabhi mehek ke bahut karib aa gye the mehek ne bahut bariki se sabhi ki position dekhi or ek ke bad revolver ki sari goliya unke sarir ke aarparr Kar Di , sabhi ek ke bad ek jamin par gir pde


Achanak Etna kotuhal Dekh Kar sabhi admi doudakar bahar aa gye , Thakur Harish or Kamal ko bhi Kuch gadbad hone Ka abhash hua to usne Ander se Kuch admiyon ko eska pta lagane bheja , vhi Vishwa bhi chupte chipate mehek ke pass aa gya


" Himmat mat harna mehek , ye Sankhya me bhle hi bahut jyada hai par Hume bhi dimag se enka samna Karna Hoga ,, abhi ye bate Kar hi the the ki 10--15 admi inke karib aa gye , mehek ne bhi apni revolver me magazine Dal Di par Vishwa ne usse revolver lekar dono hath se dhdadhad un admiyon par chla Di sabbi chalni chalni ho gye mehek Ka Dyan bhi use taraf tha par unke piche 7--8 admi teji se aa rhe mehek ki kismat Achi thi ki unke hatho me banduk nhi thi keval chaku chura or hockey stick hi the , mehek bhi ek hath me chaku or dusre hath me sword gumate hue unki or doud pdi ..............sabse age vale admi ne chure se mehek par war Kiya par mehek niche jhuk Kar unke nachte hue agg bad gai or pure gusse se jhkte hue sword dusre admi ke pet ke aarparr Kar Di tisra shaks ne mehek ke pet me chaku marna chahta par mehek thodi kinare hi gai jisse uska Ballance bigad gya or vo niche jhuk gya mehek me time vast na karte hue gutna Uske muhh mar Diya vo Jaise hi sidha hua mehek ne chaku uski gardan par chla Diya vo admi apne dono hath se gardan ko pakadte hue niche gir gya , fir mehek ne kis admi ke pet me sword ghusai thi use nikar Kar pass ate shaks ke pet me gusa Di , ab un sabke Dil me dar Beth gya tha fir bhi vo mehek ko Marne ke liye age bde mehek bhi Puri tyar thi unka samna Karne ke liye in sabhi me mehek ko ger Kar Uske Charo or ghumne lge unme se ek me Jaise hi mehek par hamla Kiya mehek niche jhuk Kar dusre admi ke pair par sword chla Di jisse vo ghutno ke bal niche Beth gya mehek ne gumte hue Puri takat se sword Uske gardan par chla Di jisse uski gardan cucumber ki trah cut Kar alag ho gai mehek ne Der na karte hue dusre admi ke sine par ke ke bad ek chaku se ched Kar diye , unme se ek admi mehek par war Karne hi wala tha ki mehek ne sword se Uske war ko bich me hi rok Diya or dusre hath me moujud chaku uski gardan par chla Diya , piche se mehek par war hone hi wala tha ki mehek ko eska abhash ho gya esliye vo ghutno me bal Beth gai jisse us admi Ka war khali chuk gya par mehek Ka war kha chukne wala tha usne apni gardan upper karte hue us shaks ko Dekh Jo sambhalne ki koshish Kar rha tha par mehek ne Uske pet me chaku mar Diya jisse vo mehek ke uper girne hi vala tha ki mehek side me ho gai or us jagah par sword khdi Kar Di jiska parinam ye hua ki vo admi sidha us sword par ja Gira or sword Uske sine ke aarparr ho gai mehek ne use side me ludkakar sword ko Uske sine se Nikal liya Baki bche admiyon me na to mehek par bar Karne ki himmat hui na hi na bhagne ki matija ye hua ki sab mehek ki sword ko khoon ckha Kar dharashahi ho gye



Vhi Vishwa ne vapas Dino revolver me magazine Bhar Di or vhi chip gya mehek bhi Uske pass chali gai par tak tak thakar ke jitne bhi admi the sab as gya par ab vo ginti me jyada nhi the , sath hi Thakur Harish or Kamal bhi bahar aa gye or jab unki najar apne mart admiyon par pdi to unke sar par pasine ki bunde saf jhalkane lgi vhi Thakur ke sabhi admiyon ko ye Bhan ho gya ki mehek or Vishwa kha chipe hue hai vhi dono Puri trah that the Vishwa ne revolver vapas mehek ko De Di vo log in par hamla karte esse pehle hi dono sabke samne khde ho gye Vishwa ko to koi janta nhi tha par jab mehek par UN tino ki najar pdi to ankhe fade unhe dekhne lge mehek Ka Pura sharir khoon se bhiga hua tha Uske sunder chehre par Khun ki bunde tapak rhi thi , mehek ki najar Jaise hi um tino par pdi uski ankhe lal ho gai or gusse se usne un par goli chla Di par tino Ander ghus gye



Vishwa or mehek ne sabse pehle unhi ko nishana banaya jiske hath me guns thi unke gun chalne se pehle hi mehek or Vishwa me unhe bhoon Diya , mehek ki gun me goliya khatam ho gai esliye usne gun ko fenk Diya , ab khatra nhi tha to chaku or sword lekar unki or teji se doud pdi fir kya tha Jo bhi samne Aya gajar muli ki trah kata gya abhi mehek me Kuch hi logo ko tha ki mehek ke Kano me Kamal ki awaj pdi , Vishwa padte ladte mehek se dur chla gya to uska dhyan nhi gya


Mehek ki najar Jaise hi us pdi unke hath se sword or chaku chutt Kar niche gir gye or vo bejan hokar apne ghutno par Beth gai or uski ankho se anshuo ki dhara behne lgi uski najar bs ek shaks par kendrit thi Jo koi or nhi balki Rahul hi tha vo khoon se lal tha or ankhe band thi Kamal Uske gireban pakde mehek ki taraf muskurate hue Dekh rha tha sath Thakur or Harish bhi mand mand muskura the the vhi Kamal Rahul ko chod Kar mehek ke pass akar mehek ki sword utha li or sword ko mehek ki gardan par rakh Di par mehek ko to Kuch realise nhi ho rha tha vo to ektak Rahul ko Dekh rhi yhi


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" Hahaha apne Bhai ke sath Marne ke liye Tu bhi aa gaii , par Kuch bhi kho mene tumhare jaisi Bahadur ladki aaj din tak nhi dekhi , par baby tumhe pta Hona Chahiye ke upervale ne tumhe ye khubsurat sharir hum jaiso ke bistar garm Karne ke liye Diya hai ki yu Jhansi ki Rani banne ke liye ,,,, abhi Kamal Kuch or bolta usse pehle hi ek goli chli Jo sidhe Uske hath par lgi jisse Uske hath se talvar chutt gai jab Kamal Harish or Thakur ne goli chalne ki Disha me Dekha to samne Vishwa khda tha , ye Dekhkar sab dar gye Vishwa ne kamal ko nishana banate hue revolver Ka trigger DBA Diya par goli nhi chli sayad usme goliya khatam ho gai thi mouka dekhte hue tino Ander bhag gye Vishwa Rahul ke pass na akar dusri side se tino ko pakadne ke liye dusre raste se Ander chla gya


Rahul ki jab thodi ankh khuli to uski najar sidhi mehek par pdi Jo nirantar ashru bahaye ja rhi uski himmat nhi ho rhi thi ki vo Rahul ke Karib Jaye ......mehek Ka chehra dikhate hi Rahul me Mano jaan aa gai or itne dard hone ke bavjud bhi chehre par muskan vo deewar Ka Sahara Lete hue khda hone ki koshish Kar rha tha par har bar nakam rha par end time Puri takat lga Kar deewar ke Sahare khda ho gya or muskute hue mehek ko dekhne lga ....abhi age Kuch or hote usse pehle hi Ander se Harish hath me chaku liye Rahul ki or bad rha tha mehek ki najar us or chli gai ,
harish Rahul ke Karib ate hi uske pet ki Orr chaku se war Kar Diya


"Aaahhhhh ....ek dardnak awaj fizao me gunj gaii or ye awaj Kisi or ki nhi mehek ki thi kyoki Jaise hi Harish Rahul ko chaku Marne hi vala tha usse pehle hi mehek samne aa gai jiska matija ye hua ki Harish Ka war sidha mehek ke pet me his or vo chaku adha mehek ke pet me ghus gya , jab eska ahesas Rahul ko hua to mano uski dhadkan abhi band ho jayegi , abhi koi bolta usse pehle hi Harish me mehek ke pet se chaku Nikal liya jisse mehek ke muhh se ek or dardnak chikh Nikal gai sath hi Uske pet se khoon ki dhara bhi behne lgi jis par mehek ne apna hath rakh Diya


" Madarchod mujhe pure gavv ke samne badnam Kiya ab me eska badla tum dono ko mar Kar Lunga ,, ye kehkar usne vapas war Kiya par es bar Rahul ne mehek ko due dhakel Diya jisse vo chaku Rahul ke pet me ja lga , ye dekhkar Harish hasne lga , par ye hasi Kuch hi Der ki thi kyoki agle hi par Rahul me uski gardan padkar use uper utha liya Harish chutne ke liye chatpatane lga , Rahul ke hath me jyada takat nhi thi esliye vo niche gir gya or khasne lga par Rahul nhi ruka usne Harish Ka hath pakadkar Puri takat se khinch liya jiska matija ye hua ki Harish Ka ek hath Uske sharir se alag go gya Harish etni jor se chilaya ki aaspass Panchi bhi ud gye , Rahul etne me hi nhi ruka or dusre hath ko bhi khinckar use bhi alag Kar Diya Harish bin Pani machli ki trah tadapne lga ......Rahul ek najar mehek ki or Dekha Jo niche pdi dard se karha rhi thi Rahul se ye Dekh nhi gya or usne apni ankhe band Kar li jab vapas khuli to Puri lal thi ....fir Rahul ne Apne pet se chaku nikar Kar Harish ki gardan ke thoda niche gonp Diya or Pura takat se use khincta hua Harish ki nabhi (navel) tak le Aya Harish Ka Pura Shari chir gya or Kuch hi seconds me uski sanse band ho gai Rahul yhi nhi ruka or pass me hi pda pathar utha Kar Uske sar par latak Diya Harish Ka sar kharbuje ki trah fatt gya tab jakar Rahul ki atma ko Santi Mili


" Rahulll ...mehek ki dardnak awaj sunkar Rahul bdi muskil se Uske pass chla gya or jakar mehek ka sar apni godd me rakh liya , mehek ki aisi halat Dekh Rahul ke Anshu rukne Ka name hi nhi le rhe the vhi mehek ka bhi yhi hal tha

" Kyo aii yha mehek kyo , Dekh kya ho gya hai tujhe , Kitna khoon Nikal rha hai or tujhe Kitna dard ho rha hai , kash ye dekhne se pehle me mar jata ,, Rahul mehek ke galo par hath ferne lga

" Tumhare liye me hajar bar aise jhakm sehene ke liye tyar hu , you know Maine maut ko bahut kareeb se dekha hai Rahul par tumhare liye marna hi meri manzil hai ,,

" Please aisi bate mat kho mehek tumhe Kuch nhi Hoga , hey bhagvan ye Tumne kya Kar Diya ...aaj mere karmo Ka fall tumhe mil rha hai , ab me kya Kru me chahkar bhi Kuch nhi Kar Sakta ...mehek tumhe Kuch nhi Hoga tum thik ho jaogi .....are koi hai hai yha jo Meri mehek ko bcha ske ,, Rahul jor se chilana Chahta rha tha par usme itni himmat nhi thi, vhi mehek ki ankhe bojhil hone lgi


" Aahhh Rahul ye pta nhi tha ki hamara sath yhi tak tha ...aahh mujhe bahut dard ho rha hai Rahul kash hum Kuch pal or sath bita pate ,, Rahul lachar rone ke Siva Kuch nhi Kar pa rha tha , dard to use bhi asehniye ho rha tha ye kehna galat nhi Hoga ki mehek se jyada Rahul ki halat kharab thi par use en sabka abhash nhi ho rha tha

" Mujhe maf karde mehek mere sanse chalte hue bhi me Kuch nhi Kar pa rha hu kabhi socha nhi tha ki ye din bhi dekhna Hoga ....ahhh mehek meri ankhe band ho rhi hai mujhe nhi pta ki hum jinda bachenge ya nhi par me tumse vada karta hu me agle janam me hum sath Saath jarur rehenge ,, ye kehte hue Rahul mehek ke sine me ludak gya ye dekh mehek bahut jyada gabra gaii vo bar bar Rahul Rahul kehne lgi par Rahul ki or se koi pratituar nhi Aya ... rote rote mehek ki bhi ankhe band ho gai ...Kuch Der bad Vishwa hatash nirash Jha Rahul or mehek the vha aa gya par jab uski najar dono par pdi to Uske hosh ud gye vo kampte hue unke pass chla gya





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Wah NAINA G boht zabardast review dia aur akhir mein SUSHMA aur VYOM k milne ka tadka bhi laga dia haha
Ji sukriya..
Btw... aap Khud sochiye ki agar vyom dusman hai... to phir ek dusmani wali wajah, bas ek wajah likh de writer jisse hume yakin ho jaaye....
1) vyom ka yun Rahul ke gharwalo ke liye fikarmand hona...
2) har pal, har lamha, har waqt jitna ho sake suraksha pradan karna...
3) Rahul aur uski family ko koi aankh uthake bhi dekhe to uski aankhein hi noch lena..
4) mehek ko jail hone nahi diya vyom ne...
aare baaki sab to chhodiye abhi haalhi mein dekhiye thakur ka kya gat lagaya vyom ne...
Rahul aur mehek ki haalat ke bare mein jaan ke ek sage baap ki tarah tadap uthna... best doctors ke team ko Rahul treatment mein ke liye laga dena aur jaane kya kya... jaise jameen aasmaan ek kar dega lekin Rahul aur mehek kuch bhi nahi hone dega.....

Ab aap decide kijiye ... ki ye dusmani hai ya phir kisi sage apne wale ka apnapan, pyar aur fikar Rahul & family ke prati ..
 

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" Mujhe maf karde mehek mere sanse chalte hue bhi me Kuch nhi Kar pa rha hu kabhi socha nhi tha ki ye din bhi dekhna Hoga ....ahhh mehek meri ankhe band ho rhi hai mujhe nhi pta ki hum jinda bachenge ya nhi par me tumse vada karta hu me agle janam me hum sath Saath jarur rehenge ,, ye kehte hue Rahul mehek ke sine me ludak gya ye dekh mehek bahut jyada gabra gaii vo bar bar Rahul Rahul kehne lgi par Rahul ki or se koi pratituar nhi Aya ... rote rote mehek ki bhi ankhe band ho gai ...Kuch Der bad Vishwa hatash nirash Jha Rahul or mehek the vha aa gya par jab uski najar dono par pdi to Uske hosh ud gye vo kampte hue unke pass chla gya



ABB AGGE......


Vishwa Jo ek majbur Dil Ka insan tha vo bhi Rahul or mehek ko etni buri condition me Dekh apni ankho me Anshu behne se nhi rok paya , Vishwa kampte hatho se dono ki nabj check ki , dono ki sanse abhi bhi chal rhi thi , vo yha Vha dekhne lga use bahar hi Tim char Scorpio khdi dikhai Di Vishwa ne bari Bari dono ko usme betha car tej speed se ghadi ho hospital ki or douda Di karib adhe gante bad vo hospital pahuch gya vha par hospital staff ki help se dono ko Ander le Jaya gya , doctors neckdil insan the esliye usne police Cass ke bare Vishwa se jyada Kuch nhi pucha


Dono ko alag alag operation theatre me le Jaya gya doctors and nurses ki team ne jaldi se dono Ka treatment Karna shuru Kar Diya , dono ki halat bahut critical thi esliye doctor chah Kar bhi Kuch nhi Kar pa rhe the vhi Vishwa Akela pareshan operation theatre / ICU ke bahar ummid ki Kiran jagaye upper vale ko yad Kar rha tha Kuch hi Der me ek doctor bahar aa gya jab Vishwa ki najar us par pdi to vo jaldi Uske pass chla gya

" Doctor shab dono patients ko condition Kaisa unhe jyada Kuch hua to nhi ,, Vishwa ko beshabra hote Dekh doctor Uske kande par hath rakhte hue Bola

" Dekhiye dono Ka halat abhi bhi bahut gambhir bni hui hai khaskar male patient ki famale patient se jyada male patient Ka blood loss bhi jyada hua hai jab tak unhki body me pryapt matra me blood supply na ho to Hume Kuch nhi Kar sakte ,,


" Kitna blood Chahiye doctor shab jitna Chahiye me dene ke liye tyar hu ,,

" Dekho man blood ki hamare pass bhi koi Kami nhi par vo unke liye useful nhi hai , jis blood ki unhe jarurat hai Uske liye humne bahut se hospital me contact Kiya par Kuch nhi hua fir bhi Hume koshish Kar rhe hai , vaise tumhara blood group kya hai ,,

" A negative ,,

" Sorry unhe AB negative blood ki jarurat hai or ye blood group bahut kam logo me paya jata hai ...fir doctor Kuch sochne lga .... Patients Ka tumhare sath kya relations hai ,,

" Ji dono mene friends hai ,,

" Ohhh vo me esliye puch rha tha ki agar tum eski family ko jante ho ya Uske karibi ho to sayad unse sampark Kar blood group match karva sakte ho because aamtour par family me blood group match Kar jate hai ,,


" Thanks doctor shab me abhi enki family se sampark karta hu or ho ske to aap bhi blood Ka intejam kijiyega ,, doctor ne ha gardan hilai fir Vishwa vha se car leke Rahul ke gavv Nikal gya es ummid ki sayad Kuch chamatkar ho Jaye .... Vishwa Kuch vakt bad Rahul ke Ghar pahuch gya Jha par Sushma ke alava koi nhi tha , Sushma es vakt gile kapde khukha rhi thi Vishwa Uske pass chla gya hai ,Sushma apne samne anjan admi ki Dekh boli

" Koun ho beta kisse milna hai ,,

" Maji pranam , me blood bank team se hu or yha poore gavv me blood ki jankari Lene Aaya hu actually Hume yha esliye bheja gya hai ki ek hospital me es shkas ko AB negative blood ki shakt jarurat hai agar unhe Kuch time unki body me blood inject nhi Kiya to sayad unki Jann chli jayegi , vo Hume SAB ke liye esliye important hai because vo anath bacho ke liye trust chalate hai agar unhe Kuch ho gya to anath Bache besahara ho jayenge ,, Sushma Soch me padd gai fir boli

" Es group Ka blood hamare tino mache Ka hai par vo tino yha nhi hai , vo apna blood donate Karne me tanik bhi nhi sochenge aap ek minute rukiye me unhe phone lga Kar bulati hue ,, ye kehkar Sushma Jane lagti hai par piche se Vishwa ke awaj dene ke se Ruk jati hai

" Dekhiye hamare pass time bahut kam hai agar aap Hume apne bacho Ka address De Dogi to me swam unse mil Lunga ,,

" Jo mere do bade ladko Ka to pta nhi par meri choti ladki vo ***** college gaii hai ,,

" Kya me unka name jaan Sakta hu taki unhe dun sku or ha apne dono bde bcho ke mobile number bhi De dijiyega taki mujhe dhundne me asani ho ,, Vishwa me ye esliye kha taki Sushma ko Kuch shak na ho , fir Sushma ne name sahit menek or Rahul ke phone number bhi De diye jinhe lekar Vishwa jaldi se susma ke bateye hue sweety ke college chla gya vha par puchtach Karne ke bad sweety ke room me chla gya Jha par teacher PDA rha tha


" Apme se sweety Singh d/o Kishore kingh koun hai ,, Vishwa ki awaj sunkar sabhi Ka dhyan uski or gya

" Koun ho tum , or sweety se kya kam hai , tameej nhi hai Bina permission class ke Ander chle aye , bahar nikalo or permission leke Ander AAO ,, teacher pure gusse me Bola par Vishwa Uske pass chla gya or Uske pass chla gya


" Sorry sir par mere pass en sabka time nhi hai , inke bhaiya ki tabiyat thodi kharab hai esliye me ese le Jane Aya hu ,, Vishwa ki ye awaj sunte hi sweety vha se apne bag leke Uske pass aa gai sath me Ritu bhi fir Bina Kuch bole Vishwa Ka hath pakadkar apne najuk hatho se khiche hue bahar le aai Puri class mukdarshak bne sab dekhti rhi teacher bhi Kuch nhi Bola fir tino college campus se bahar aa gye

" Kha hai mere bhaiya kya hua unko ,, sweety ke chehre par chinta saf jhalak rhi thi

" Are tum khamkha tention le rhi ho Kuch nhi hua unhe bs minner sa fever hai , bs unhone Tumne Milne ko kha to aa gya ab jaldi chalo ab Jo bhi puchna hai raste me hi puchna ,, Vishwa ki bat se sweety santusht nhi hui fir bhi uski bat mante hue hue Ritu ke sath Scorpio me Beth gyi chintit to Ritu bhi thi par use jahir nhi hone Diya , Vishwa ne Bina vakt gavaye full speed me gadi douda Di Kuch vakt bad tino hospital pahuch gye

Etne bde hospital ko dekhkar sweety or Ritu ko guabrahat hone lgi , ab Vishwa ko bhi maloom chal gya ki sweety ko gumakar Kuch na Kuch to batana hi Hoga

" Dekho sweety mene tumse jhut Bola tha Rahul ko koi fever nhi hai aaj sunhe hi uska chota SA car accident ho gya hai jisse uska thoda blood loss ho gya Uske liye hospital me blood nhi tha jaisa Rahul ko Chahiye tha , Rahul or tumhara blood group hai esliye Rahul ko tumhara blood Chahiye ,, sweety ke to Kann sunn pad gye vo to vhi pathar bann gaii Ritu ki ankho se jhar jhar Anshu behne lge , Vishwa ke hilene se sweety hosh me aaii or Bina Kuch bole teji se hospital ke Ander chli gaii Uske piche piche Vishwa or Ritu dono doud pde

Sweety paglo ki trah sabhi ward me Rahul ko dhundne lgi hospital me jitne bhi log the sabhi Ka dhyan sweety par kendrit ho gai , Vishwa jald se jakar sweety ko pakad liya

" Sant ho jao sweety , Kuch nhi hua Rahul ko vo bilkul thik hai ,, Vishwa me Uske Anshu pahuchate hue kha par sweety me Uske hath ko jhatak Diya

" Kha hai mere bhaiya , please mujhe unke pass le chlo me apke agge hath jodti hu please ,, Vishwa Bina Kuch bole use second floor par le gya Jha par Rahul ko or Jaya gya , fir usne Rahul ke room ki eshara Kiya sweety or Ritu jaldi se vha chali gai Jha par gate lga hua tha jab uski najar ander pdi to mano uski dhadkan Ruk se gaii kyoki Ander Rahul ke muhh par oxygen mask lga hua tha sath hi Uske sharir me koi halchal nhi thi , Ritu ki bhi same halat ho gaii Vishwa bhi unke pass akar dono ko side leke aa gya

" Sweety es wakt Rahul ko tumhari jarurat hai agar tum aise react karogi to sayad Hume use bcha nhi payenge , tum ek Bahadur ladki ho apne aap ko sambhlo bhagvan par vishwash kro vo SAB thik Kar denge ,, ye bat Kar hi the the ki do doctors vha ate dikhe to Vishwa unke pass chla gya


" Dr Shah jaisa apne kha AB negative blood group vale donater ko me use leke aa gya aap jaldi kijiye ,, ye bat Vishwa ne sweety ki or eshara karte hue kha Dr ek bar sweety ko gour se dekhne lga


" Dekhiye hum ek patient ko bachane ke liye dusre insan ki Jann dav par nhi lga sakte , are ek bar eski condition ko dekhiye muskil se Esme 40 kg wait Hoga , patient ko 1 kg blood ki jarurat hai agar humne eska 1 kg blood Nikal liya to eski kaisi condition ho Sakti hai ye sayad aap nhi jante sorry me es ladki Ka blood nhi lag Sakta ,, ye sab bate sweety bde gour se sun rhi thi , doctor ki bat end hote hi sweety doud Kar khidki ke pass jakar Uske uper Chad gaii ye sab Dekh sabki ankhe chodi ho gaii


" Agar Mera blood nhi liya to me abhi yha se kood Kar apni Jann se dungi , mere bhaiya ko Kuch ho gya to me vaise bhi jinda nhi reh paungi , me Uske liye 1kg blood to kya apna hurt Nikal Kar de Sakti , dekhiye me jyada nhi bolungi aap Mera blood le rhe ho ya nhi nhi to me abhi kud jaungi ,, Kisi ki himmat nhi ho rhi ki sweety ke pass Jane ki Ritu to vhi jamm si gaii , jabb doctor ne ha kri tabb jakar sweety vha se uter Kar doctor ke sath chli gai Jha uska blood test hone ke bad 1 kg blood nikala gya gya jisme 750g Rahul ko chadaya gya or 250g mehek ko

( Actual me sweety ko mehek ke bare me pta nhi tha kyoki use dusre ward me admit Kiya gya tha )

Aise hi karib sham ho jati hai par na to Rahul ki halat me Kuch sudhar na hi mehek ki uper se sweety bhi behosh thi udher bahar Ritu ko Vishwa tassli deta rha es douran sabse jyada pareshan tha / thi to vo thi Sushma kyoki Uske Charo ankho ke tare subhe se anki ankho se oujal the Sushma pure din esi intejar me thi ki Charo ab ab aye ki Kuch Der bad aye par Charo me se ek bhi nhi Aya

Uske Mann ajeeb si guabrahat hone lgi usne Rahul or mehek ko phone bhi lagane ko kha par dono ke phone yhi par the , Sushma ki ankho se anayas hi Anshu chalak uthe karib 6 bja rahit bhi apni duty se aa gya jab Sushma me use sari bat batai to Rohit bhi tention me aa gya , ab use bhi samajh me nhi aa rha tha ki vo use dhunde to dhunde kha fir bhi vo Sushma ko Dhiraj Bandha Kar bike leke chla gya ab takriban 7:30 baj gye the to collage bhi band ho gya fir bhi Rohit me college guard se sweety or Ritu ke bare me puch par usne apne hath khde Kar diye , Rohit se chla gya or Jha bhi Uske sampark the vha vha par usne puchtach ki aise hi rat ke 12 back gye edher Sushma Ka ro ro Kar Bura hal ho gya Uske sath koi santvna bandhane vala tak koi nhi tha


Sweety par upervale Kuch jyada hi meherban tha esliye use hosh aa gya par jab use Kuch yad Aya to rone lgi esliye doctor ne use behosh Ka injection dekar sula Diya , Vishwa ke lakh samjhne par Ritu me thoda bahut Khana kyaya , rokar uska bhi Bura HAL ho gya tha esliye use bench par hi nind aa gaii

( Vishwa or Ritu etni tention me the ki unhe ye bhi Bhan nhi hua ki ek bar Ghar bhi phone lga de )

Vhi Rohit thak har Kar vapas aa gya jab Sushma me use Akela Dekha to vhi bifar gai Uske bad kya Hina tha ye mujhe kehne ki jarurat nhi bs yhi kahunga ki dono ma bete jaag Kar rat Kati ESI ummid me ki unki ankho ke star ayenge mere Karan Arjun ayenge


( Well ab thoda time traveling Karke piche chlate hai )

Karib ratri 8 bje Thakur ko Adhiraj Vyom Ka phone Aya jise dekhkar Thakur ke pasine chutt gye ab Marta kya na karta usne Puri himmat jhuta Kar phone pick Kar liya


" Or sunao Thakur kya HAL chal hai ,, udher se Vyom pure Josh me Bola

" Badiya hu Vyom shab ,,

" Abe mene tere nhi balki mere Sher Yani Rahul ke bare me pucha hai Kaisa hai vo or kya gull khila rha hai ajkal ,, Thakur ki pehle kamm fatt rhi thi par ye bar sunkar Puri fatt gai usne apni Jeb se rumal nikalkar apne mathe par se pasina saf Kiya , Thakur Kuch sochne lga

" Abe kya hua muhh me suar Ka lundd fass gya kya , Kuch bol Bhai mene Kuch pucha tumse yu Sant reheke Mera BP ma bda chal laude sari ram kahani suna dall ,, Thakur ek gehri sans leke Bola

" Vyom shab ek buri khabar haii ,,

" Bakkk Jo bhi hai jaldi se bhonkk ,,

" Vo actual me aaj sunhe Harish ne Rahul ko kidnap Karke use mare adde par le gya , apko to pta hi hai ki Rahul me Uske sath kya Kiya usi Ka badla Lene ke liye usne Rahul ko ghayal Kar Diya es hadse me vo khud mara gya , kyoki eski bhanak Rahul ki behen ko lag gaii esliye usne Rahul ko bcha liya or Rahul ko bcha Kar na Jane kha le gaii , es bat ki khabar Hume tab lgi jab me Kisi kam se adde par gya tab hamare admi ne ye sab bataya ,, Vyom to ye sunkar aag Ka gola bann gya


" Thakur Teri ma Ka bhosda burchodina , madarchod Randi ki oulad mene tumhe Rahul ki jimmedari Lund hilane ke liye bhosdivale agar Rahul ko Kuch ho gya ma to Dekh Lena me tumhare pure khandan ko chourahe par paltu kutto se chudvaunga or tere sath me vo karunga jiski Tu sapne me bhi Kalpana nhi Kar Sakta phone rakhhh bhadve ,, Vyom Ka gussa Dekh Thakur thar thar kampne lga vo dhadam se sofe par Beth gya tab Uske pass Nilima aa gaii


" Kya hua ji ,,

" Teri ma chud gaii usi Ka matam MNA rha hu ,,

" Aise kyo bol rhe ho ji ,,

" Aisa nhi bolu to kya Kru , tere samne chinala Kru ya mujra Kru bhag yha se burchodi Varna abhi Gand fadd dunga ,, Nilima bechari muhh latka Kar vha se chli gaii

Vhi Vyom ko ye abhas ho gya ki Rahul ghayal hua hai to definitely sure ho gya ki use aaspass ke hi Kisi hospital me admit Kiya gya , usne jaldi se pta lga liya ki Rahul ko kis hospital me admit Kiya gya hai use shok tab lga jab ye pta chla ki mehek bhi admit hai

( Actual me Vyom es vakt Kolkata me tha to vo us vakt aa nhi Sakta tha fir bhi vo usi vakt vo flight se Jaipur ke liye rwana ho gya sath hi usne india ke top surgeon Doctors ko Rahul jis hospital me bhej Diya with advance medical upkarno ke sath , vhi doctor rat ke karib 2:30 minutes par hospital pahuch Kar Rahul or mehek Ka treatment start Kar Diya )



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To hum kha the ha yad Aya ..... sushma or Rohit ne Puri rat Jag Kar Kati ESI ummid me ki Rahul Ritu mehek or sweety lout ayenge par ESI intejar me subhe ke Karib 6:30 baj gye the lekin Kisi Ka ATA pta nhi tha ...abhi Sushma ko ek jhapki aai hi thi ki bahar car rukne ke awaj aaii Jise sunkar Sushma jaldi se gate ki or gaii or jab usne gate khola to samne do shaks khde the Jo koi or nhi balki Ajeet or Divakar hi the dono ke chehre par muskurahat thi par jab un dono ki najar Sushma par pdi to ye muskurahat pal Bhar me hwa ho gaii

Kyoki sushma ki ankhe rat Bhar jagne ke Karan lal ho gaii thi rone ke Karan usme halki si sujan bhi aa gaii sath hi Uske gallo par anshuo ke shukhe nishan es bat ke gva the ki Sushma ki kya sthiti hai ....Sushma ko jab ye abhash hua ki samne vale do shaks koun hai to usne jatt se gate band Karke uspar pith tika Kar rone lag gaii vhi bahar Ajeet or Divakar murti bne ye sab hota dekhte rhe unhe es bat Ka ahesas ho gya ki jarur Kuch anhoni hui hai ...Rohit Jo peshab Karne gya tha apni ma ke rone ki awaj sunkar unke pass gya use bhi thoda Ajeet lga apni ma ko yu gate ke sahare pith tika Kar Rona

" Kya hua mom aap yha akar aise hua kya hai yu achanak ,, abhi Rohit age Kuch bolta usse pehle hi darvaja khatkhatane ki awaj aaii Rohit ne Sushma ko samjha bujha Kar side me Karke darvaja khola or samne Ajeet or Divakar ko paya , par Rohit unhe pehchan nhi paya , ab Sushma bhi apne Anshu saf Karke Rohit me pass khadi ho gai


" abb kya Lene aye ho aap , kya yhi dekhne aye na ki hum mar gye ya jinda hai are marmar to hum kabka ki rhe the par aab Puri trah Marr chuke hai tumhare samne ye Jo do Jann dikh rhi hai na ye bs ek murda sharir hai kyoki enki atma enke Ander nhi hai , me ek bhikharin banke apke samne har bar chillati rhi ki Bhai shab meri madad kijiye me akeli hu lachar or bebash hu par app Jaise pathar Dil insan par eska tanik bhi fark nhi PDA , chle jaiye yha se ab apke liye ye darvaja hamesha hamesha ke band ho chuka hai get lost my home mr Ajeet sing and go away ,, Sushma ki bat Ka Ajeet ko jra bhi Bura nhi lga Rohit ko bhi ye ahesas ho gya tha ki samne vala shaks koun hai uska Dil Kiya ki jhuk Kar unke pair chuye par ye na Kar ska


" Apne gunhegar ko maff kardo Sushma manta hu mene Jo Kiya vo mafi ke layak nhi hai par tumhara Dil bahut bda hai , ek bar maf kardo me yha tumhari madad ke liye hamesha hamesha ke liye Aaya hu ,,


" Jiski madam ke liye aye ho ha jiski tumhe madad Karni Chahiye vo to yha hai hi nhi to fir kiski madad karoge bahut Der Kar Di Bhai Sahab , pta nhi mere bche kha honge kaise honge kis halat me honge ,, Ajeet to ye sunkar shok ho gya fir usne Rohit se puch to Rohit ne shortcut me sab bta Diya , fir Ajeet or Divakar dono Ander ane ke liye pair age badaye hi the ki Sushma ne unhe bhi rok rrukne Ka ishara Kiya


" Vhi Ruk jao tum dono meri madad Karne aye ho na to suno jab tak mere Bache mere pass nhi aa jate es Kar me kadam rakhne ki himmat mat Karna ,, ye sunkar Ajeet or Harish ne Apne pair vapas khinch liye


" Thik hai jab tak me hamare bche ko tumhare samne nhi Lata tab tak es chokhat par kadam nhi rakhunga fir Rohit ko sath leke tino vha se Nikal gye , abhi karib 7:00 baj the the to tino sidhe college pahuch gye vha par Kuch staff aa gye the to tino Ander chle gye fir Ajeet ne sabhi teacher ko jitna jaldi ho ske college bulaya or unse sweety ke bare me pucha to ek teacher ne ye bta Diya ki ek ladka Aya tha Jo Uske Bhai ke bimar hone ki bat kehkar dono ke le gya , Ajeet ne Kuch sochkar pass ke hospital ke number ikhatte kiye or Bari Bari sab par phone lga Kar puchtach ki or use safalta bhi hath lag gai fir tino hospital ki or nikal gya




To be countinue........
Nice update bhai waiting for next update
 

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My grandma condition is very critical... she has been admitted to ICU tonight... In this condition, I will not be able to give an update at the moment... As soon as everything becomes normal, then updates will keep coming as before... keep patient till then Guyz
 
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