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Hello Guys, Mein ek new story start karne ja raha hu. Mein Puri koshish karunga ke ye Story aapko achhe se entertain kar paye.

Stroy karne se pahele me kuch baate batana chahunga.

Story ke kuch elements aapko illogical lag sakte hai. Like Kuch esi chije ho Normal Life me possible nahi hai wo aapko story me dekhne ko milegi.

Story ka kisi ki Real life se koi bhi connection nai hai. Ye bas ek imagination pe base ek story hai jiska purpose bas entertain karna hai.

Aur Agar Update ki baat karu to Updates weekly aayege as Mere pass free time kafi kam raheta hai. Par Jab mein free rahunga to puri koshish rahegi ke extra update du Story pe.


Aapke Reviews and Suggestions mere liye kaafi Important hai kyuki aapke reviews and Suggestions se hi Meri writing skills improve hogi aur story me ya writing me agar koi Improvement karna hoga ya galti hogi to uske bare me bhi Mujhe aapke Reviews aur suggestions se hi pata chalega. So If Possible, Plz Try to Give your honest and valuable Reviews and Suggestions.
 

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Introduction

So Story start karne se pahele Mein bas ek chhota sa overview dunga Characters ka. Filhal Jyada kuch detailed info nahi dunga. Jese jese Story aage badhegi vese vese aapko Characters ke bare me sab pata chalta jayega.

So Start karta hu Story ke Main characters se.

Garima (Age - 23 Years)


Ye Ek kaafi Intelligent ladki hai. Aur Intelligent ke sath sath kafi khubsurat bhi. You can say Beauty with Brain. MBA karke filhal ek Badi Company me Job karti hai.


Kush (Age - 21 Years)

Kush kaafi intelligent aur handsome ladka hai. Filhal apne hi shahar me ek college se BBA kar raha hai aur final Year me hai. Study me Topper ke sath sath ye shararat karne me bhi topper hai. Vese kuch student aur Professors ko chhodke sab ka ladla hai clg me.


Esha (Age - 18 Year)


Ek kaafi Cute dikhne wali par Gussa karne wali ladki. Abhi abhi Jis clg me Kush padhta hai wahi BBA me admission liya hai. Padhai me achhi hai.

Vese Kush ko ye bilkul pasand nahi karti. In fact Kush ko dekhna bhi pasand nahi karti. Reason aap ko Jald hi pata chal jayega.

So Ye teeno Ek Bungalow me rahte hai. Aap soch rahe hoge ye teeno hi kyu? To wo is liye ke Inki family me bas ye teen hi log hai. Inke Dad Nishant aur Mom Dipika ki kaafi saalo pahele ek accident me death ho chuki hai. Vese Nishant ki job kafi achhi thi. Khud ke 3 Ghar the. Death ke baad achha khasa paisa bhi mila tha. Vaise Death ke time ye teeno chhote the to tab wo Nishant ke bade bhai yani ke inke chacha ke sath rahte the. Par kuch Time bad ye teeno alag rahene aa gaye the kyon ki unki chachi ka behaviour thik nahi tha unke sath.

Inka bungalow 4BHK hai. Ground floor pe Bada sa hall, lounge, Kitchen, Dining space aur 1 Bedroom hai. 1st Floor pe 3 Bedrooms hai. Teeno 1st floor wale bedrooms ka use karte hai. Inke pas 1 Car, 1 Bike aur 2 Activas hai.

Abhi thoda jaan lete hai inke Chacha ki family ke bare me.


Prashant (Age - 47 Years)


Ye Prashant ke bade bhai hai. Apne City ke MLA hai.


Anjali (Age - 43 Years)


Prashant ki wife. Surprisingly Ye ek social worker hai!

Inhe lagta tha ke Garima, Kush aur Esha ke chalte Inke bachcho ko pyar kam mil raha hai to wo teeno pasand nahi the. Aur inhi ke behaviour ke chalte kuch bade hone ke bad wo teeno Alag rahene chale gaye the.


Rahul (Age - 22 Years)


Prashant aur Anjali ka bada beta.

Baap ke paise aur Maa ke pyar se bigada hua ek ladka. Engineering kari hai Bande ne aur Filhal koi Job nahi hai. Actually ye Job karna hi nahi chahta. Baap ke pas aakhir paise bhi to bahut hai udane ke liye.


Sakshi (Age - 20 Years)


Prashant aur Anjali ki badi Beti.

Ye bhi dikhne me kaafi khubsurat hai par ghamandi hai.
Kush ki classmate hai par Kush se baat bhi nahi karti.


Soniya (Age - 20 Years)


Sakshi ki judwa bahen, Prashant aur Anjali ki chhoti beti. Vese bas kuch hi pal chhoti hai Sakshi se.

Dikhne me to same Sakshi ke jaisi par Nature me kaafi alag hai. Jaha Sakshi ko paiso ka aur apni Khubsurati ka ghamand hai wahi Soniya Ek humble ladki hai. Wo logo ki help karne me believe karti hai. Hala ki Soniya Shy bhi kaafi hai.

Inki family ek bade se Bungalow me rahti hai.

So ye ek overview tha characters ka. Aage Story me apko Detail me exact pata chalega in Characters ke bare me.
 

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Introduction

So Story start karne se pahele Mein bas ek chhota sa overview dunga Characters ka. Filhal Jyada kuch detailed info nahi dunga. Jese jese Story aage badhegi vese vese aapko Characters ke bare me sab pata chalta jayega.

So Start karta hu Story ke Main characters se.


Garima (Age - 23 Years)


Ye Ek kaafi Intelligent ladki hai. Aur Intelligent ke sath sath kafi khubsurat bhi. You can say Beauty with Brain. MBA karke filhal ek Badi Company me Job karti hai.


Kush (Age - 21 Years)

Kush kaafi intelligent aur handsome ladka hai. Filhal apne hi shahar me ek college se BBA kar raha hai aur final Year me hai. Study me Topper ke sath sath ye shararat karne me bhi topper hai. Vese kuch student aur Professors ko chhodke sab ka ladla hai clg me.


Esha (Age - 18 Year)


Ek kaafi Cute dikhne wali par Gussa karne wali ladki. Abhi abhi Jis clg me Kush padhta hai wahi BBA me admission liya hai. Padhai me achhi hai.

Vese Kush ko ye bilkul pasand nahi karti. In fact Kush ko dekhna bhi pasand nahi karti. Reason aap ko Jald hi pata chal jayega.

So Ye teeno Ek Bungalow me rahte hai. Aap soch rahe hoge ye teeno hi kyu? To wo is liye ke Inki family me bas ye teen hi log hai. Inke Dad Nishant aur Mom Dipika ki kaafi saalo pahele ek accident me death ho chuki hai. Vese Nishant ki job kafi achhi thi. Khud ke 3 Ghar the. Death ke baad achha khasa paisa bhi mila tha. Vaise Death ke time ye teeno chhote the to tab wo Nishant ke bade bhai yani ke inke chacha ke sath rahte the. Par kuch Time bad ye teeno alag rahene aa gaye the kyon ki unki chachi ka behaviour thik nahi tha unke sath.

Inka bungalow 4BHK hai. Ground floor pe Bada sa hall, lounge, Kitchen, Dining space aur 1 Bedroom hai. 1st Floor pe 3 Bedrooms hai. Teeno 1st floor wale bedrooms ka use karte hai. Inke pas 1 Car, 1 Bike aur 2 Activas hai.

Abhi thoda jaan lete hai inke Chacha ki family ke bare me.



Prashant (Age - 47 Years)


Ye Prashant ke bade bhai hai. Apne City ke MLA hai.


Anjali (Age - 43 Years)


Prashant ki wife. Surprisingly Ye ek social worker hai!

Inhe lagta tha ke Garima, Kush aur Esha ke chalte Inke bachcho ko pyar kam mil raha hai to wo teeno pasand nahi the. Aur inhi ke behaviour ke chalte kuch bade hone ke bad wo teeno Alag rahene chale gaye the.



Rahul (Age - 22 Years)


Prashant aur Anjali ka bada beta.

Baap ke paise aur Maa ke pyar se bigada hua ek ladka. Engineering kari hai Bande ne aur Filhal koi Job nahi hai. Actually ye Job karna hi nahi chahta. Baap ke pas aakhir paise bhi to bahut hai udane ke liye.



Sakshi (Age - 20 Years)


Prashant aur Anjali ki badi Beti.

Ye bhi dikhne me kaafi khubsurat hai par ghamandi hai.
Kush ki classmate hai par Kush se baat bhi nahi karti.



Soniya (Age - 20 Years)


Sakshi ki judwa bahen, Prashant aur Anjali ki chhoti beti. Vese bas kuch hi pal chhoti hai Sakshi se.

Dikhne me to same Sakshi ke jaisi par Nature me kaafi alag hai. Jaha Sakshi ko paiso ka aur apni Khubsurati ka ghamand hai wahi Soniya Ek humble ladki hai. Wo logo ki help karne me believe karti hai. Hala ki Soniya Shy bhi kaafi hai.

Inki family ek bade se Bungalow me rahti hai.

So ye ek overview tha characters ka. Aage Story me apko Detail me exact pata chalega in Characters ke bare me.
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Raat ke 11:50 baj rahe the. Kush apne Room me bed par bethe hue apne laptop pe kuch kam kar raha tha. Tabhi uske Room me Garima aati hai.

Garima : Hey Kush, Kya kar rahe ho?

Kush : Kuch nahi Bas ye kal ek assignment submit karne ki last date hai to wohi bana raha tha bas.

Garima : Achha.. Vese Abhi chal rahe ho na Esh ko Wish karne?


Kush : Nahi Di. I know Mere wish karne se uska pura mood bigad jayega aur Mera Bilkul bhi man nahi hai Uska mood bigadne ka.

Garima : Well, Mujhe Tumhe puchna hi nahi tha. Mujhe bas batana tha ke Tum chal rahe hi Mere sath Esh ko wish karne, Aur I know har bar ki tarah Is bar bhi Tumne Esh ke liye gift leke rakhi hogi. So use bhi sath le lo. Chalo fast, 12 bas bajne hi wale hai.

Fir Kush Apna work save karne ke bad Laptop charging pe laga deta hai. Fir wo almirah se Ek gift nikalta hai.

Garima : Aha, Waise Kya liya Kush tumne?

Kush : Ek Designer Dress.

Garima : Wow.

Kush : I really wish ke kash aaj Esh Meri gift wo accept kare.

Garima (Kush ke hath ko apne hath me lete hue) : Don't worry Kush, Sab jald hi thik ho jayega.

Fir wo dono Esha ke Room ke taraf chalne lagte hai.

Idhar Esha apne Room me Mobile pe chatting me lagi hui thi ke tabhi Garima aur Kush uske room me aa jate hai.

Garima ne apni wrist watch me time dekha to exact 12 baj chuke the. Usne dodkar Esha ke pass ja ke use gale gala liya.

Garima : Happy Birthday Chhoti.

Esha : Aww…Thank You Di. Aap har birthday Pahele wish karte ho Mujhe.

Garima : Ab Meri chhoti ke liye to Meri jaan hazir hai. Ye Wishes to kya!

Fir Dono jab alag hote hai.

Garima use Ek Ring pahenati hai.

Garima : Meri chhoti ke liye ek chhoti si Gift.

Esha : O Wowww…Diamond Ring! Di, Ye to kaafi mehngi hogi. Itna kharcha karne ki kya jarurat thi?

Garima : Jarurat kyun nahi hai chhoti? Aur waise bhi Mere pas ab job hai. Don't worry. Itna to mein afford kar sakti hu araam se.

Esha : Thank You so much Di. Aap duniya ki sab se achhi Sis ho.

Tabhi Esha ki najar Kush pe padti hai.

Kush : Happy Birthday Esh.

Esha : Di, Plz aap ise yaha se bahar jane ko bol do. Aaj Mera birthday hai ye janta hai fir bhi ye aaj bhi mera din kharab karne ke liye mere samne aa gaya.

Garima : Esha, Plz.. Ese behave mat karo. Aaj Tum 18th ki ho gai ho. Plz Be Mature.

Esha : Mein mature hi hu Di. Aur Mein nahi bhul sakti is ke vajah se jo sab hua tha.

Garima : Esha, Tum kab samjogi jo hua tha usme Kush ki koi galti nahi thi.

Esha : Di Mein sab janti hu. Kuch chhupa nahi hai Mujh se. To Aap plz bewajah Iski side mat lo.

Kush : Thik hai Esha. Tum chahti hai to mein yaha se chala jata hu. Par ye Gift to le lo.

Esha : Ji bilkul bhi nahi. Mujhe meri life me nahi tu chahiye aur nahi tumhari di hui koi chij.

Garima : Uski Gift to le lo Ye bade pyar se li hai Kush ne.

Esha : Pyar aur Ye? Ye sab dikhawa hi hai iska. Ye kisi ko pyar nahi kar sakta kabhi bhi. Aur Gift, Ye bas Dusro ki khushiya chhin sakta hai. Kisi ko khushiya de nahi sakta. Aaj bhi Ye Meri khushiya chhin ne ke liye chala aaya. Agar Meri khushiya pasand hoti to ye yahan Mere room me aata hi nahi.

Kush ko Esha ki baate sunke kaafi dukh ho raha tha. Uska Dil bhar aya tha. Aur wo bhari dil se waha se chala jata hai.

Garima bhi usko udasi se wha se jate hue dekh rahi thi. Wahi Kush ke chale jane se Esha khush thi.

Garima : Esha, Tum mature hoke kyu aisa kar rahi ho. Jo kuch hua tha usme Kush ki koi galti nahi thi. Tum ye baat akhir kab samjhogi?

Esha : Di, Dekho Mujhe sab pata hai. Aur Chachi ki sari baato se to nahi par is baat se me bilkul agree hu. Kush ki wajah se hi to sab hua tha us din. Na Ye Icecream ki jid karta, Na Mom Dad iski jid ke chalte Raat ko barish me ise Icecream khilane jate, Na Car ka accident hota, Aur na wo hum se dur jate.

Esha ki ankho me anshu aa jate hai. G
arima ki ankh me bhi anshu aa gaye the.

Garima (Ankho me anshuo ke sath): Wo sab bas ek ittefaq tha Esha.

Esha : Nahi Di. Bilkul nahi. Aur plz Aap Mujh se ab is bare me baat mat karo.

Garima : Esha, Chhota tha wo. Chhote bachche to galti karte hai.

Esha : Haan, Par unke wajah se unke parents ki Jaan nahi jati. Esi Jid nahi karte na.

Garima : Mein kitni baar batau wo bas ek ittefaq tha. Kush ne kuch jaan bujh ke to nahi kiya tha na kuch.

Esha : Mein wo sab kuch jan na nahi chahti. Mujhe bas itna pata hai Ke Aaj hamare Mom Dad bas uske jid ke chalte Hamare sath nahi Hai. I wish ke Us din Mom Dad ki jagah Ye mar jata.

Garima (Gusse se) : Enough Esha. Aaj Tumne apni Limit cross kar di. Aage se Meine esa kuch suna to…

Esha : Ye insan kyun hai Meri life me. Pahle Mere Mom Dad ko chhin liya. Ab uske wajah se aap bhi mere khilaf ho rahe ho.

Garima : Mein tumhare khilaf nahi hu. Par Tum Hummare bhai ke liye esa kese soch sakti ho Esh.

Esha : Wo Mera bhai nahi hai Di.

Garima : Meri baat mano Chhoti. Wo sab me Kush ka koi fault nahi hai.

Esha : Sorry Di. Par Mein aapki ye baat kabhi bhi nahi maan sakti. Aur Kya ab Mein so sakti hu? Mujhe nind aa rahi hai.

Garima : Thik hai Chhoti. Good Night, Sleep well.

Fir Garima Esha ke room se bahar aa jati hai. Wo sidha Kush ke Room me jati hai to Kush waha nahi tha. To Wo sidha terrace pe jaane lagti hai. Use pata tha Kush ki aadat. Jab wo Upset ho jata to terrace pe jake Asamn ko dekh kar khud ko shant karta tha.

Terrace pe jake Garima dekhti hai to Kush Asman ki aur dehkar kuch soche ja raha tha.

Garima : Kya soch rahe ho?

Kush : Esh ki baato ko. Di You know, Mujhe bhi kabhi kabhi lagta hai ke Esh sach hi to kehti hai. Wo sab Meri wajah se to hua tha. Na Mein jid karta, Na Mein aur Mom-Dad barish me Nikalte, Na accident hota aur na Hummare Mom Dad hum ko chhod ke jate. I wish ke us din Mom Dad ki jagah Mein mar jata.

Garina Kush ki baat sunke ek thappad laga deti hai.

Garima : Kush… Shut up. I can't believe ke Tum aisa soch rahe ho. Wo sab bas ek coincidence tha aur kuch nahi. Khud ko us sab ka reason mat bana do. Aur aage se esi baat boli to Mein kabhi Tum se baat nahi karungi. Samjhe?

Kush : I'm sorry Di, Mene unjane me aapko bhi hurt kar diya. Aage se esa nahi hoga. I Promise.

Garima : Kush, Mein samajh sakti hu Tumhari situation. Par Tumhe sab handle karna hi hoga.

Kush : Di, Kya Esh aur Mere bich duriya kabhi khatam hogi bhi ya nahi?

Garima : Haan. I'm sure Ye Esha ke mind pe jo Darkness chhayi hui hai na Wo ek din khatam ho jayegi. Us din Sab thik ho jayega. Mein ye karke rahungi Kush, Wada hai Mera ye.

Kush : Kab aayega wo Din Di?

Garima : Jald hi Kush. Trust Me. Mein sab thik kar dungi. Vaise Kush, Aaj Esh ka 18th Birthday hai.

Kush : I know Di.

Gairma : Ab Usko bhi dhire dhire sab batana padega Hume.

Kush : I know Di. Aur Mujhe bharosa hai ke Aap Ye kaam bakhubi kar loge.

Gairma : Aur Aaj Jaldi Ghar aa jana, Birthday Party me sab aane wale hai.

Kush : Soch raha hu ke aaj kahin bahar reh lu. Mein nahi chahta ke aaj Esh Mere wajah se pareshan ho fir se.

Garima : Ji nahi. Tum aisa kuch nahi karoge. Duriyan jyada bana lene se Duriya kese mitegi. In fact aaj Tum jaldi ghar aaoge. Okay?

Kush : Aap ko lagta hai Mein aapki baat ko mana kar sakta hu?

Garima : Ye hui na baat. Chalo ab So jao. Kal jaldi uth na bhi hai.

Fir dono Ek dusre ko hug karte hai aur Good Night wish karke apne apne Room me sone ke liye chale jate hai.
 
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