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Adirshi

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Update 45



Aniket waise hi pada raha, uski aankho se aansu beh rahe the, kya kare yahi use samajh nahi aa raha tha, use khud ki chinta nahi thi use chinta thi komal ki apne maa baap ki, dil aur dimag me kya kare kya na kare isko leke jung chidi huyi thi, dimag keh raha tha ke

“us ladki ke liye tu apni jindagi daav par laga raha hai par tere maa baap ka kya ? unhone tujhe janm diya tujhe paal pos ke itna bada kiya tere sath agar kuch bura ho gaya to unka kya hoga”

Wahi dil keh raha tha ke

“komal ke bina tu kaise jiyega ? aur soch agar in logo ne komal ko kuch kar diya to ? komal ko kuch hone ke khayal se hi tere rongte khade ho rahe hai komal ko agar kuch ho gaya to jina mushkil ho jayega au raise tujhe jinda lash ki taraf dekh kart ere maa baap ko kya mehsus hoga unhe bhi dukh hoga”

Dimag keh raha tha

“to yaha se nikalne ka, bhagne ka rasta khoj”

Dil keh raha tha

“fir komal ka kya ?”

“arey yaha se bhagne ka sidha police station jane ka aur in paagal logo ko police ke hawale karne ka,in dono baap bete ko jail me sadane ka?

“kitne din rahenge jail me, kabhi na kabhi to baahar aayenge aur baahar aane ke baad wo aur khatarnak honge”

“wo baad ka baad me dekhenge pehle yaha se nikalne ka rasta khojna chahiye”

Uske baad aniket ne bahut koshish ki par sari koshishe bekar ho gayi, waha se bhagna to dir wo to apne hath ki rassi bhi nahi khol pa raha tha, wo chhutne ke liye jhatpata raha tha itne me guard waha aaya aur aniket se bola

Guard- kya chal raha hai aniket babu, kyu faltu me apne aap ko takleef de raha hai, ek to ye rassi nahi chhutne wali aur tu kitni hi koshish kar le te tutegi nahi ha isme tere sharir par jakham jarur ho jayegi..

Aniket se sidha sawal kiya

Aniket- mujhe chhodne ki kimat bol, itna paisa milega ki jindagi bhar kamane ki jarurat nahi padegi

Wo guard hasa aur bola

Guard- beta hamara dhandha bhale hi gair kanuni ho par hamare dhande ke bhi kuch usool hai jo ham maante hai, hamare dhandhe me insaan ki jabaan ki kimat hoti hai samjha

Aniket- tujhe nahi lagta ki ye sab galat ho raha hai ?

Guard- wo sab sochna mera kaam nahi hai, aur agar tu yaha se bhagne ki soch raha hai to main tujhe abhi khol deta hu

Itna bol ke us guard ne aniket ke hath khol diye aur bola

Guard- par bhagne se pehle bas ye dekhta ja

Itna bol ke us guard ne apne phone se kisi ko video call kiya aur bola

Guard- kaha hai wo batana jara

Udhar dusri taraf se awaj aaya..

“yahi hai boss, ruko camera ghumake dikhata hu”

Us guard ne apna phone aniket ko dikhaya, aniket ko usme komal dikhayi di, wo mandir me ja rahi thi, fir guard bola

Guard -do log hamehsa komal par najar rakhe huye hai, idhar tu bhaga aur waqha unhone komal ko uthaya, to ab kya socha hai tune..?

Aniket ne apne hath aage kar diye aur guard ne fir se uske hath bandh diye aur waha se chala gaya aur aniket thak ke wahi shant baith gaya

Sabke chehre aniket ki aankho ke saamne ghum rahe the, maa papa avinash aur komal, sabke sath bitaye pal kisi film ki taraf uske aankho ke saamne chal rahe the, reh reh kar use komal ki yaad uski aankho me aasu bhare ja rahi thi, such aniket ke saamne hath jode khada tha par use us such ka anubhav nahi lete aaya iska dukh tha, komal uske saamne thi uske sath thi fir bhi apni bewkufiyo me wo us such ko anubhav na kar saka, hath se ret fisalti hai jaise samay nikal gaya tha aura b hatheli khali thi, fir bhi ek khushi thi ke in sab anmol palo ki uske sath yaade thi jinke sahare use ab apni aage ki jindagi gujarni thi

Kabhi kisi chiz ke bare me jyada na sochne wala aniket, bas apni hi masti me rehne wala aniket ab kahi piche chhut gaya tha, ab jo yaha aniket thaw o har chiz ke bare me sochne wala jimmedari ko samajhne wala aniket tha, ab tak usne jo bhi kiya use sab yaad aa raha tha aur usne man hi man bhagwan se prarthana ki

Aniket- hey mahadev ab sab kuch aapke hath me hai, prabhu kripa kariye marg dikhaiye..

Kuch der baad guard fir se ander aaya aur ab uske hath me ek injection tha, aniket bola

Aniket- ye kya hai

Wo guard hasa aur bola

Guard- waise dekha jaye to ye tere hi kaam ki chiz hai

Aniket-main bilkul ye injection nahi lagwaunga..

Guard-arey maine kaha na ye tere hi kaam ki tere hi fayde ki chiz hai, dekh isme behoshi ki dawa hai, ise lagan eke baad kam se kam 48 ghanto tak tujhe hosh nahi aayega aur hamara fayda ye kit u behosh hoga tab tak container ship par load ho jayega, kisi ko kuch pata nahi chalega, tujhe bhi nahi, fir karib 15 din lagenge tujhe waha pahuchne me, 48 ghanto me tu bharat ki seema se baahar hoga, isiliye 48 ghanto baad jab tujhe hosh aaye to chillane lagna, fir ship ke log tujhe container se baahar nikalenge, ship videshi hai isiliye wo tujhe wapis nahi layenge fir ship ke kisi room me tujhe band karke rakhenge, tu mare na isiliye khane ko dete rahenge, ek baar ship france pahuch gayi to tujhe custom waloko saup denge aur waha se tu sidha jail me

Aniket ko kuch bhi sun raha thaw o ekdum bhayankar tha wo guard fir bola

Guard- aur sabse badi baat, tu mana karne ki haalat me nahi hai, faltu me hath pair hilayega to tujhe hi takleef hogi

Wo guard itna chatur tha ke usne aniket ko bato me uljha kar use injection de diya aur aniket ko pata bhi nahi chala wo bol raha tha

Guard-chinta mat kar videshi jail bharat ki jail se achi hoti hai,aur is injection ka asar jaldi nahi hoga to do ghante me dheere dheere behosh hoga

Jaise jaise samay aage sarak raha tha aniket ko gungi(behoshi) aane lagi thi, saamne jo chal raha tha use sab dikh raha tha awaj sunai de rahe the par sharir ekdum sust ho gaya tha, thodi der baad use container ka awaj aaya, guard uske paas aaya aur kuch bolne laga, uska awaj aniket ke kano par pad raha tha par use kuch samajh nahi aa raha thaw o bas guard ko dekhe ja raha tha

Guard ne uske bande huye hath pair khol diye par aniket ko waha se bhagna to dur apne hath ki ungli hilana bhi mushkil tha, guard ne use uthaya aur container me lejake rakh diya aur uske baad wo container alag alag boxes se bhar diya

Aniket ab puri taraf behosh ho chuka tha aur use container me rakha hai ye usne dekhi huyi aakhir chiz thi, behosh haalat me bhi uski aankho ke saamne use maa papa avi aur komal dikh rahe the, wo usse baat kar rahe the, use ye bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha ke ye uska bhram hai wo bhi unse baat kar raha tha, sharir shant pada tha par man sabke sath tha, ye acha hua tha, is behoshi ki dawai se wo apna sara dard bhul gaya tha

Najane kitne samay baad use hosh aane laga par aankho ke saamne ab bhi chehre ghum rahe the, fir awaj kano par padne lage, usne aankhe kholi par kuch dikhai nahi de raha tha, usne thodi si aankhe kholne ki koshish ki par behoshi hat nahi rahi thi, wo waise hi pada raha, docter suman, sidharth aur bhi teen log the jinke chehre saaf nahi dikh rahe the, aniket ne ache se dekha to rahesh raman aur guard uspar has rahe the, aniket ne firse aankhe mund li aur behosh ho gaya…..
 

DARK WOLFKING

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nice update ..komal ka pichha ho raha hai isliye aniket bhagne ki nahi soch raha..

par ye thoda hosh me aane ke baad suman aur sidharth ka chehra kaise dikh gaya aniket ko 🤔🤔.. kya wo dono bhi mile huye hai raman se ..
ya bas wo behoshi se nikalne ke baad ka chhalawa tha aankho ka ..
 

mashish

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Update 45



Aniket waise hi pada raha, uski aankho se aansu beh rahe the, kya kare yahi use samajh nahi aa raha tha, use khud ki chinta nahi thi use chinta thi komal ki apne maa baap ki, dil aur dimag me kya kare kya na kare isko leke jung chidi huyi thi, dimag keh raha tha ke

“us ladki ke liye tu apni jindagi daav par laga raha hai par tere maa baap ka kya ? unhone tujhe janm diya tujhe paal pos ke itna bada kiya tere sath agar kuch bura ho gaya to unka kya hoga”

Wahi dil keh raha tha ke

“komal ke bina tu kaise jiyega ? aur soch agar in logo ne komal ko kuch kar diya to ? komal ko kuch hone ke khayal se hi tere rongte khade ho rahe hai komal ko agar kuch ho gaya to jina mushkil ho jayega au raise tujhe jinda lash ki taraf dekh kart ere maa baap ko kya mehsus hoga unhe bhi dukh hoga”

Dimag keh raha tha

“to yaha se nikalne ka, bhagne ka rasta khoj”

Dil keh raha tha

“fir komal ka kya ?”

“arey yaha se bhagne ka sidha police station jane ka aur in paagal logo ko police ke hawale karne ka,in dono baap bete ko jail me sadane ka?

“kitne din rahenge jail me, kabhi na kabhi to baahar aayenge aur baahar aane ke baad wo aur khatarnak honge”

“wo baad ka baad me dekhenge pehle yaha se nikalne ka rasta khojna chahiye”

Uske baad aniket ne bahut koshish ki par sari koshishe bekar ho gayi, waha se bhagna to dir wo to apne hath ki rassi bhi nahi khol pa raha tha, wo chhutne ke liye jhatpata raha tha itne me guard waha aaya aur aniket se bola

Guard- kya chal raha hai aniket babu, kyu faltu me apne aap ko takleef de raha hai, ek to ye rassi nahi chhutne wali aur tu kitni hi koshish kar le te tutegi nahi ha isme tere sharir par jakham jarur ho jayegi..

Aniket se sidha sawal kiya

Aniket- mujhe chhodne ki kimat bol, itna paisa milega ki jindagi bhar kamane ki jarurat nahi padegi

Wo guard hasa aur bola

Guard- beta hamara dhandha bhale hi gair kanuni ho par hamare dhande ke bhi kuch usool hai jo ham maante hai, hamare dhandhe me insaan ki jabaan ki kimat hoti hai samjha

Aniket- tujhe nahi lagta ki ye sab galat ho raha hai ?

Guard- wo sab sochna mera kaam nahi hai, aur agar tu yaha se bhagne ki soch raha hai to main tujhe abhi khol deta hu

Itna bol ke us guard ne aniket ke hath khol diye aur bola

Guard- par bhagne se pehle bas ye dekhta ja

Itna bol ke us guard ne apne phone se kisi ko video call kiya aur bola

Guard- kaha hai wo batana jara

Udhar dusri taraf se awaj aaya..

“yahi hai boss, ruko camera ghumake dikhata hu”

Us guard ne apna phone aniket ko dikhaya, aniket ko usme komal dikhayi di, wo mandir me ja rahi thi, fir guard bola

Guard -do log hamehsa komal par najar rakhe huye hai, idhar tu bhaga aur waqha unhone komal ko uthaya, to ab kya socha hai tune..?

Aniket ne apne hath aage kar diye aur guard ne fir se uske hath bandh diye aur waha se chala gaya aur aniket thak ke wahi shant baith gaya

Sabke chehre aniket ki aankho ke saamne ghum rahe the, maa papa avinash aur komal, sabke sath bitaye pal kisi film ki taraf uske aankho ke saamne chal rahe the, reh reh kar use komal ki yaad uski aankho me aasu bhare ja rahi thi, such aniket ke saamne hath jode khada tha par use us such ka anubhav nahi lete aaya iska dukh tha, komal uske saamne thi uske sath thi fir bhi apni bewkufiyo me wo us such ko anubhav na kar saka, hath se ret fisalti hai jaise samay nikal gaya tha aura b hatheli khali thi, fir bhi ek khushi thi ke in sab anmol palo ki uske sath yaade thi jinke sahare use ab apni aage ki jindagi gujarni thi

Kabhi kisi chiz ke bare me jyada na sochne wala aniket, bas apni hi masti me rehne wala aniket ab kahi piche chhut gaya tha, ab jo yaha aniket thaw o har chiz ke bare me sochne wala jimmedari ko samajhne wala aniket tha, ab tak usne jo bhi kiya use sab yaad aa raha tha aur usne man hi man bhagwan se prarthana ki

Aniket- hey mahadev ab sab kuch aapke hath me hai, prabhu kripa kariye marg dikhaiye..

Kuch der baad guard fir se ander aaya aur ab uske hath me ek injection tha, aniket bola

Aniket- ye kya hai

Wo guard hasa aur bola

Guard- waise dekha jaye to ye tere hi kaam ki chiz hai

Aniket-main bilkul ye injection nahi lagwaunga..

Guard-arey maine kaha na ye tere hi kaam ki tere hi fayde ki chiz hai, dekh isme behoshi ki dawa hai, ise lagan eke baad kam se kam 48 ghanto tak tujhe hosh nahi aayega aur hamara fayda ye kit u behosh hoga tab tak container ship par load ho jayega, kisi ko kuch pata nahi chalega, tujhe bhi nahi, fir karib 15 din lagenge tujhe waha pahuchne me, 48 ghanto me tu bharat ki seema se baahar hoga, isiliye 48 ghanto baad jab tujhe hosh aaye to chillane lagna, fir ship ke log tujhe container se baahar nikalenge, ship videshi hai isiliye wo tujhe wapis nahi layenge fir ship ke kisi room me tujhe band karke rakhenge, tu mare na isiliye khane ko dete rahenge, ek baar ship france pahuch gayi to tujhe custom waloko saup denge aur waha se tu sidha jail me

Aniket ko kuch bhi sun raha thaw o ekdum bhayankar tha wo guard fir bola

Guard- aur sabse badi baat, tu mana karne ki haalat me nahi hai, faltu me hath pair hilayega to tujhe hi takleef hogi

Wo guard itna chatur tha ke usne aniket ko bato me uljha kar use injection de diya aur aniket ko pata bhi nahi chala wo bol raha tha

Guard-chinta mat kar videshi jail bharat ki jail se achi hoti hai,aur is injection ka asar jaldi nahi hoga to do ghante me dheere dheere behosh hoga

Jaise jaise samay aage sarak raha tha aniket ko gungi(behoshi) aane lagi thi, saamne jo chal raha tha use sab dikh raha tha awaj sunai de rahe the par sharir ekdum sust ho gaya tha, thodi der baad use container ka awaj aaya, guard uske paas aaya aur kuch bolne laga, uska awaj aniket ke kano par pad raha tha par use kuch samajh nahi aa raha thaw o bas guard ko dekhe ja raha tha

Guard ne uske bande huye hath pair khol diye par aniket ko waha se bhagna to dur apne hath ki ungli hilana bhi mushkil tha, guard ne use uthaya aur container me lejake rakh diya aur uske baad wo container alag alag boxes se bhar diya

Aniket ab puri taraf behosh ho chuka tha aur use container me rakha hai ye usne dekhi huyi aakhir chiz thi, behosh haalat me bhi uski aankho ke saamne use maa papa avi aur komal dikh rahe the, wo usse baat kar rahe the, use ye bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha ke ye uska bhram hai wo bhi unse baat kar raha tha, sharir shant pada tha par man sabke sath tha, ye acha hua tha, is behoshi ki dawai se wo apna sara dard bhul gaya tha


Najane kitne samay baad use hosh aane laga par aankho ke saamne ab bhi chehre ghum rahe the, fir awaj kano par padne lage, usne aankhe kholi par kuch dikhai nahi de raha tha, usne thodi si aankhe kholne ki koshish ki par behoshi hat nahi rahi thi, wo waise hi pada raha, docter suman, sidharth aur bhi teen log the jinke chehre saaf nahi dikh rahe the, aniket ne ache se dekha to rahesh raman aur guard uspar has rahe the, aniket ne firse aankhe mund li aur behosh ho gaya…..
nice update
 

Mr. Nobody

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Update 45



Aniket waise hi pada raha, uski aankho se aansu beh rahe the, kya kare yahi use samajh nahi aa raha tha, use khud ki chinta nahi thi use chinta thi komal ki apne maa baap ki, dil aur dimag me kya kare kya na kare isko leke jung chidi huyi thi, dimag keh raha tha ke

“us ladki ke liye tu apni jindagi daav par laga raha hai par tere maa baap ka kya ? unhone tujhe janm diya tujhe paal pos ke itna bada kiya tere sath agar kuch bura ho gaya to unka kya hoga”

Wahi dil keh raha tha ke

“komal ke bina tu kaise jiyega ? aur soch agar in logo ne komal ko kuch kar diya to ? komal ko kuch hone ke khayal se hi tere rongte khade ho rahe hai komal ko agar kuch ho gaya to jina mushkil ho jayega au raise tujhe jinda lash ki taraf dekh kart ere maa baap ko kya mehsus hoga unhe bhi dukh hoga”

Dimag keh raha tha

“to yaha se nikalne ka, bhagne ka rasta khoj”

Dil keh raha tha

“fir komal ka kya ?”

“arey yaha se bhagne ka sidha police station jane ka aur in paagal logo ko police ke hawale karne ka,in dono baap bete ko jail me sadane ka?

“kitne din rahenge jail me, kabhi na kabhi to baahar aayenge aur baahar aane ke baad wo aur khatarnak honge”

“wo baad ka baad me dekhenge pehle yaha se nikalne ka rasta khojna chahiye”

Uske baad aniket ne bahut koshish ki par sari koshishe bekar ho gayi, waha se bhagna to dir wo to apne hath ki rassi bhi nahi khol pa raha tha, wo chhutne ke liye jhatpata raha tha itne me guard waha aaya aur aniket se bola

Guard- kya chal raha hai aniket babu, kyu faltu me apne aap ko takleef de raha hai, ek to ye rassi nahi chhutne wali aur tu kitni hi koshish kar le te tutegi nahi ha isme tere sharir par jakham jarur ho jayegi..

Aniket se sidha sawal kiya

Aniket- mujhe chhodne ki kimat bol, itna paisa milega ki jindagi bhar kamane ki jarurat nahi padegi

Wo guard hasa aur bola

Guard- beta hamara dhandha bhale hi gair kanuni ho par hamare dhande ke bhi kuch usool hai jo ham maante hai, hamare dhandhe me insaan ki jabaan ki kimat hoti hai samjha

Aniket- tujhe nahi lagta ki ye sab galat ho raha hai ?

Guard- wo sab sochna mera kaam nahi hai, aur agar tu yaha se bhagne ki soch raha hai to main tujhe abhi khol deta hu

Itna bol ke us guard ne aniket ke hath khol diye aur bola

Guard- par bhagne se pehle bas ye dekhta ja

Itna bol ke us guard ne apne phone se kisi ko video call kiya aur bola

Guard- kaha hai wo batana jara

Udhar dusri taraf se awaj aaya..

“yahi hai boss, ruko camera ghumake dikhata hu”

Us guard ne apna phone aniket ko dikhaya, aniket ko usme komal dikhayi di, wo mandir me ja rahi thi, fir guard bola

Guard -do log hamehsa komal par najar rakhe huye hai, idhar tu bhaga aur waqha unhone komal ko uthaya, to ab kya socha hai tune..?

Aniket ne apne hath aage kar diye aur guard ne fir se uske hath bandh diye aur waha se chala gaya aur aniket thak ke wahi shant baith gaya

Sabke chehre aniket ki aankho ke saamne ghum rahe the, maa papa avinash aur komal, sabke sath bitaye pal kisi film ki taraf uske aankho ke saamne chal rahe the, reh reh kar use komal ki yaad uski aankho me aasu bhare ja rahi thi, such aniket ke saamne hath jode khada tha par use us such ka anubhav nahi lete aaya iska dukh tha, komal uske saamne thi uske sath thi fir bhi apni bewkufiyo me wo us such ko anubhav na kar saka, hath se ret fisalti hai jaise samay nikal gaya tha aura b hatheli khali thi, fir bhi ek khushi thi ke in sab anmol palo ki uske sath yaade thi jinke sahare use ab apni aage ki jindagi gujarni thi

Kabhi kisi chiz ke bare me jyada na sochne wala aniket, bas apni hi masti me rehne wala aniket ab kahi piche chhut gaya tha, ab jo yaha aniket thaw o har chiz ke bare me sochne wala jimmedari ko samajhne wala aniket tha, ab tak usne jo bhi kiya use sab yaad aa raha tha aur usne man hi man bhagwan se prarthana ki

Aniket- hey mahadev ab sab kuch aapke hath me hai, prabhu kripa kariye marg dikhaiye..

Kuch der baad guard fir se ander aaya aur ab uske hath me ek injection tha, aniket bola

Aniket- ye kya hai

Wo guard hasa aur bola

Guard- waise dekha jaye to ye tere hi kaam ki chiz hai

Aniket-main bilkul ye injection nahi lagwaunga..

Guard-arey maine kaha na ye tere hi kaam ki tere hi fayde ki chiz hai, dekh isme behoshi ki dawa hai, ise lagan eke baad kam se kam 48 ghanto tak tujhe hosh nahi aayega aur hamara fayda ye kit u behosh hoga tab tak container ship par load ho jayega, kisi ko kuch pata nahi chalega, tujhe bhi nahi, fir karib 15 din lagenge tujhe waha pahuchne me, 48 ghanto me tu bharat ki seema se baahar hoga, isiliye 48 ghanto baad jab tujhe hosh aaye to chillane lagna, fir ship ke log tujhe container se baahar nikalenge, ship videshi hai isiliye wo tujhe wapis nahi layenge fir ship ke kisi room me tujhe band karke rakhenge, tu mare na isiliye khane ko dete rahenge, ek baar ship france pahuch gayi to tujhe custom waloko saup denge aur waha se tu sidha jail me

Aniket ko kuch bhi sun raha thaw o ekdum bhayankar tha wo guard fir bola

Guard- aur sabse badi baat, tu mana karne ki haalat me nahi hai, faltu me hath pair hilayega to tujhe hi takleef hogi

Wo guard itna chatur tha ke usne aniket ko bato me uljha kar use injection de diya aur aniket ko pata bhi nahi chala wo bol raha tha

Guard-chinta mat kar videshi jail bharat ki jail se achi hoti hai,aur is injection ka asar jaldi nahi hoga to do ghante me dheere dheere behosh hoga

Jaise jaise samay aage sarak raha tha aniket ko gungi(behoshi) aane lagi thi, saamne jo chal raha tha use sab dikh raha tha awaj sunai de rahe the par sharir ekdum sust ho gaya tha, thodi der baad use container ka awaj aaya, guard uske paas aaya aur kuch bolne laga, uska awaj aniket ke kano par pad raha tha par use kuch samajh nahi aa raha thaw o bas guard ko dekhe ja raha tha

Guard ne uske bande huye hath pair khol diye par aniket ko waha se bhagna to dur apne hath ki ungli hilana bhi mushkil tha, guard ne use uthaya aur container me lejake rakh diya aur uske baad wo container alag alag boxes se bhar diya

Aniket ab puri taraf behosh ho chuka tha aur use container me rakha hai ye usne dekhi huyi aakhir chiz thi, behosh haalat me bhi uski aankho ke saamne use maa papa avi aur komal dikh rahe the, wo usse baat kar rahe the, use ye bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha ke ye uska bhram hai wo bhi unse baat kar raha tha, sharir shant pada tha par man sabke sath tha, ye acha hua tha, is behoshi ki dawai se wo apna sara dard bhul gaya tha

Najane kitne samay baad use hosh aane laga par aankho ke saamne ab bhi chehre ghum rahe the, fir awaj kano par padne lage, usne aankhe kholi par kuch dikhai nahi de raha tha, usne thodi si aankhe kholne ki koshish ki par behoshi hat nahi rahi thi, wo waise hi pada raha, docter suman, sidharth aur bhi teen log the jinke chehre saaf nahi dikh rahe the, aniket ne ache se dekha to rahesh raman aur guard uspar has rahe the, aniket ne firse aankhe mund li aur behosh ho gaya…..
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Aniket waise hi pada raha, uski aankho se aansu beh rahe the, kya kare yahi use samajh nahi aa raha tha, use khud ki chinta nahi thi use chinta thi komal ki apne maa baap ki, dil aur dimag me kya kare kya na kare isko leke jung chidi huyi thi, dimag keh raha tha ke

“us ladki ke liye tu apni jindagi daav par laga raha hai par tere maa baap ka kya ? unhone tujhe janm diya tujhe paal pos ke itna bada kiya tere sath agar kuch bura ho gaya to unka kya hoga”

Wahi dil keh raha tha ke

“komal ke bina tu kaise jiyega ? aur soch agar in logo ne komal ko kuch kar diya to ? komal ko kuch hone ke khayal se hi tere rongte khade ho rahe hai komal ko agar kuch ho gaya to jina mushkil ho jayega au raise tujhe jinda lash ki taraf dekh kart ere maa baap ko kya mehsus hoga unhe bhi dukh hoga”

Dimag keh raha tha

“to yaha se nikalne ka, bhagne ka rasta khoj”

Dil keh raha tha

“fir komal ka kya ?”

“arey yaha se bhagne ka sidha police station jane ka aur in paagal logo ko police ke hawale karne ka,in dono baap bete ko jail me sadane ka?

“kitne din rahenge jail me, kabhi na kabhi to baahar aayenge aur baahar aane ke baad wo aur khatarnak honge”

“wo baad ka baad me dekhenge pehle yaha se nikalne ka rasta khojna chahiye”

Uske baad aniket ne bahut koshish ki par sari koshishe bekar ho gayi, waha se bhagna to dir wo to apne hath ki rassi bhi nahi khol pa raha tha, wo chhutne ke liye jhatpata raha tha itne me guard waha aaya aur aniket se bola

Guard- kya chal raha hai aniket babu, kyu faltu me apne aap ko takleef de raha hai, ek to ye rassi nahi chhutne wali aur tu kitni hi koshish kar le te tutegi nahi ha isme tere sharir par jakham jarur ho jayegi..

Aniket se sidha sawal kiya

Aniket- mujhe chhodne ki kimat bol, itna paisa milega ki jindagi bhar kamane ki jarurat nahi padegi

Wo guard hasa aur bola

Guard- beta hamara dhandha bhale hi gair kanuni ho par hamare dhande ke bhi kuch usool hai jo ham maante hai, hamare dhandhe me insaan ki jabaan ki kimat hoti hai samjha

Aniket- tujhe nahi lagta ki ye sab galat ho raha hai ?

Guard- wo sab sochna mera kaam nahi hai, aur agar tu yaha se bhagne ki soch raha hai to main tujhe abhi khol deta hu

Itna bol ke us guard ne aniket ke hath khol diye aur bola

Guard- par bhagne se pehle bas ye dekhta ja

Itna bol ke us guard ne apne phone se kisi ko video call kiya aur bola

Guard- kaha hai wo batana jara

Udhar dusri taraf se awaj aaya..

“yahi hai boss, ruko camera ghumake dikhata hu”

Us guard ne apna phone aniket ko dikhaya, aniket ko usme komal dikhayi di, wo mandir me ja rahi thi, fir guard bola

Guard -do log hamehsa komal par najar rakhe huye hai, idhar tu bhaga aur waqha unhone komal ko uthaya, to ab kya socha hai tune..?

Aniket ne apne hath aage kar diye aur guard ne fir se uske hath bandh diye aur waha se chala gaya aur aniket thak ke wahi shant baith gaya

Sabke chehre aniket ki aankho ke saamne ghum rahe the, maa papa avinash aur komal, sabke sath bitaye pal kisi film ki taraf uske aankho ke saamne chal rahe the, reh reh kar use komal ki yaad uski aankho me aasu bhare ja rahi thi, such aniket ke saamne hath jode khada tha par use us such ka anubhav nahi lete aaya iska dukh tha, komal uske saamne thi uske sath thi fir bhi apni bewkufiyo me wo us such ko anubhav na kar saka, hath se ret fisalti hai jaise samay nikal gaya tha aura b hatheli khali thi, fir bhi ek khushi thi ke in sab anmol palo ki uske sath yaade thi jinke sahare use ab apni aage ki jindagi gujarni thi

Kabhi kisi chiz ke bare me jyada na sochne wala aniket, bas apni hi masti me rehne wala aniket ab kahi piche chhut gaya tha, ab jo yaha aniket thaw o har chiz ke bare me sochne wala jimmedari ko samajhne wala aniket tha, ab tak usne jo bhi kiya use sab yaad aa raha tha aur usne man hi man bhagwan se prarthana ki

Aniket- hey mahadev ab sab kuch aapke hath me hai, prabhu kripa kariye marg dikhaiye..

Kuch der baad guard fir se ander aaya aur ab uske hath me ek injection tha, aniket bola

Aniket- ye kya hai

Wo guard hasa aur bola

Guard- waise dekha jaye to ye tere hi kaam ki chiz hai

Aniket-main bilkul ye injection nahi lagwaunga..

Guard-arey maine kaha na ye tere hi kaam ki tere hi fayde ki chiz hai, dekh isme behoshi ki dawa hai, ise lagan eke baad kam se kam 48 ghanto tak tujhe hosh nahi aayega aur hamara fayda ye kit u behosh hoga tab tak container ship par load ho jayega, kisi ko kuch pata nahi chalega, tujhe bhi nahi, fir karib 15 din lagenge tujhe waha pahuchne me, 48 ghanto me tu bharat ki seema se baahar hoga, isiliye 48 ghanto baad jab tujhe hosh aaye to chillane lagna, fir ship ke log tujhe container se baahar nikalenge, ship videshi hai isiliye wo tujhe wapis nahi layenge fir ship ke kisi room me tujhe band karke rakhenge, tu mare na isiliye khane ko dete rahenge, ek baar ship france pahuch gayi to tujhe custom waloko saup denge aur waha se tu sidha jail me

Aniket ko kuch bhi sun raha thaw o ekdum bhayankar tha wo guard fir bola

Guard- aur sabse badi baat, tu mana karne ki haalat me nahi hai, faltu me hath pair hilayega to tujhe hi takleef hogi

Wo guard itna chatur tha ke usne aniket ko bato me uljha kar use injection de diya aur aniket ko pata bhi nahi chala wo bol raha tha

Guard-chinta mat kar videshi jail bharat ki jail se achi hoti hai,aur is injection ka asar jaldi nahi hoga to do ghante me dheere dheere behosh hoga

Jaise jaise samay aage sarak raha tha aniket ko gungi(behoshi) aane lagi thi, saamne jo chal raha tha use sab dikh raha tha awaj sunai de rahe the par sharir ekdum sust ho gaya tha, thodi der baad use container ka awaj aaya, guard uske paas aaya aur kuch bolne laga, uska awaj aniket ke kano par pad raha tha par use kuch samajh nahi aa raha thaw o bas guard ko dekhe ja raha tha

Guard ne uske bande huye hath pair khol diye par aniket ko waha se bhagna to dur apne hath ki ungli hilana bhi mushkil tha, guard ne use uthaya aur container me lejake rakh diya aur uske baad wo container alag alag boxes se bhar diya

Aniket ab puri taraf behosh ho chuka tha aur use container me rakha hai ye usne dekhi huyi aakhir chiz thi, behosh haalat me bhi uski aankho ke saamne use maa papa avi aur komal dikh rahe the, wo usse baat kar rahe the, use ye bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha ke ye uska bhram hai wo bhi unse baat kar raha tha, sharir shant pada tha par man sabke sath tha, ye acha hua tha, is behoshi ki dawai se wo apna sara dard bhul gaya tha

Najane kitne samay baad use hosh aane laga par aankho ke saamne ab bhi chehre ghum rahe the, fir awaj kano par padne lage, usne aankhe kholi par kuch dikhai nahi de raha tha, usne thodi si aankhe kholne ki koshish ki par behoshi hat nahi rahi thi, wo waise hi pada raha, docter suman, sidharth aur bhi teen log the jinke chehre saaf nahi dikh rahe the, aniket ne ache se dekha to rahesh raman aur guard uspar has rahe the, aniket ne firse aankhe mund li aur behosh ho gaya…..
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कोमल का आशिक कहें या कालेज का लफंगा ! पर है निहायत ही घटिया इंसान रमन । और उससे भी घटिया उसका बाप रामेश्वर है । जैसा बाप वैसा बेटा ।
ये लोग उसे स्मगल करके फ्रांस भेजना चाहते हैं ताकि वो वहां के जेल में आजीवन सड़ता रहे । इससे बढ़िया तो खाड़ी देशों में भेज देते ड्रग्स पैडलर का आरोपी बनाकर । या पाकिस्तान ही भेज देते । फ्रांस से हमारा रिश्ता बहुत ही बढ़िया है । वहां वो कुछेक महीनों से ज्यादा जेल में बंद नहीं रहता ।

पर , मुझे विश्वास था अनिकेत के फ्रैंड सर्किल पर । उसके दोस्त के ऊपर । उसने शुरुआत से ही उसके लिए ताड़नहार का काम किया है । और शायद इस बार भी उसने वही काम किया ।
पर हुआ क्या था वो तो राइटर साहब ही जानते होंगे ।

बहुत ही बेहतरीन अपडेट आदि भाई ।
 

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:slap: aise kaise quit ruko jara sabar karo ye jaruri hai samjho baat ko abhi sab saaf hoga
Bol to diya bro i quit yeh story main padh hi nahi paunga ab ghin aa rahi hai mujhe gusse mein main apna hi phone tod lunga

Maaf karo jai raam ji ko age koi story start karo agar main padhu to bata dena ki story ki gand marne wale ho ya nahi taaki main vahi padhna chorh du

Yeh jo abhi update diya hai woh bhi na padhne wala main mere paas pehle hi bure dino ke chalte tuta futa phone hai ab jo hai usko bhi gawana nahi chahta main🙏
 

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Update 21



To aniket ne apne dil ki baat shravni ko bata di thi aur shravni ne bhi uska proposal accept kar liya tha, ab halanki ye pyaar tha ya sirf attraction ye dono me se koi nah jaanta tha aur abhi is baat se koi fark bhi nahi padta tha, dono filhaal kafi jyada khush the…

Agle din jab komal college pahuchi to aniket abhi college nahi aaya tha aur jab komal canteen me pahuchi to avinash pehle se hi waha maujood tha matlab jo hamesha time par aane wala banda tha wo aaj gayab tha aur late aane wala samay se pehle hi pahuch gaya tha… komal avinash ke paas jakar baith gayi

Komal-kya avi set aaj akele hi anya kidhhar hai?

Avinash-malum nahi, hoga shravni ke sath ya uske sath gaya hoga kahi..

Aaj avinash ka mood thoda off tha

Komal-kya hua avi aur aisi utri huyi shakal leke kyu baitha hai… bhains bhag gayi kya teri jo itni sadi shakal bana rakhi hai..?

Par avinash ne koi jawab nahi diya

Komal-kya hua avi tabiyat theek nahi hai kya, kuch to bol?

Avinash-kya bolu komal, meko khud samajh nahi aa raha hai ke main khush hu ya dukhi..

Komal-ab aisa kya ho gaya hai?

Avinash-tu jaanti hai komal aisa kya hua hai

Komal-bas samajh gayi main aura b is bare me kuch mat bolna, aura b ye sochna band karo

Avinash- itna easy hota hai kya apni soch ko rokna…

Avinash ki is baat ka jawab komal ke paas nahi tha..

Avinash-meko samajh nahi aa raha hai ke main kya karu… apne baal mitra ko uska pyaar mil gaya hai isiliye khush hou ya meri hi aankhon ke saamne mere dost ka pyaar usse dur ho raha hai aur isme na to main kuch kar sakta hu na bol sakta hu ye soch ke dukhi hou… kuch bhi kar lo ye khayal dimag se ja hi nahi rahe.. aur ye sab kam tha to tune usme mujhe kasme aur de di.. apan pehle jaise the sahi the yaar ye bematlab ka pyaar ka lafda mol le liya.. aura b main teko kaise samjhau ke wo gadhe anya ke liye tu hi sahi hai wo pujarin nahi suit hogi anya ko..wo do alag alag disha ke do tok hai aur ye baa two paagal anya ko kaise samajh nahi aa rahi..

Komal-avi arey mujhe bhi kaha ye sab pata tha.. kal pehli baar maine in bhavnao ko samjha hai.. agar mujhe pehle pata hota to main itna kuch karti hi nahi. Wo kehte hai na jo chiz hamare paas hai uski kimat ham tab tak nahi jaan sakte jab tak ho hamse dur nahi ho jati..mere sath bhi wahi hua hai… jab pyaar samajhna chahiye tha nahi samjha aur jab samjha tab der ho chuki thi… aur do alag alag swabhav ke log ek nahi ho sakte ye kaha likha hai…

Avinash-kammo tu khali ek baar bol teko anya chahiye, main tumhari Jodi banane ke liye jo nahi wo karunga…

Komal-murkho jaisi baat kar avi, pyaar adhikar ka nahi samarpan ka naam hai,pyaar me adhikar nahi jataya jata samarpan kiya jata hai, kaisa hai na, aajtak pyaar pe bare me bas kitabo me padha tha logo se suna tha par pyaar ko samajhne ke liye pyaar karna padta hai..

Avinash-aur pyaar karke kya fayda agar ham jisse pyaar karte hai use hi ye baat na bata paye

Komal-sacche pyaar ko shabdo ki jarurat nahi hoti, mujhe bhi kaha aniket ne kuch kaha hai fir bhi main wo bhavnaye samajh gayi na

Avinash-par anya to nahi samjha na, aur use na tu batayegi aur na mujhe batane de rahi hai, fir kya fayda hai aise pyaar ka.. aur suppose kal ko un dono ki shadi ho gayi fir? Fir tumhare pyaar ka kya?

Komal-wo to hai hi aur hamesha kayam rahega..

Avinash-apne samajh ke baahar hai ye concept

Komal-avi tujhe pata hai Krishna ne kisse shadi kit hi?

Avinash-ab uska yaha kya sambandh hai?

Komal-pyaar se to hai

Avinash-pata nahi maine ye sab itna padha nahi hai maybe radha…

Komal-nahi, Krishna ki shadi rukmani se huyi thi.. par radha wo kayam Krishna se prem karti rahi aur ye usi pyaar ki kimat hai ki aaj bhi ham Krishna ko radha ke sath pujte hai radhakrishna ke rup me..

Avinash-fir mujhe batao jab itna hi pyaar tha to Krishna ne radha se shadi kyu nahi ki?

Komal-uski ek bahut sunder kahani hai, suno, ek bar radha aur Krishna sath baithe the aur Krishna to swayam bhagwan the bolte huye Krishna bol gaye ki radha tum kahibhi jao tumhe kewal main hi milunga main hi dikhunga, is srishti me aisi koi jagah nahi hai jaha main nahi hu, Krishna ki baat sunkar radha ki aankho me asu aa gaye, Krishna ne pucha ki kya hua tab radha ne kaha ke hey Krishna! Ek aisi jagah hai jaha tum nahi ho, radha ki baat sunkar krishnako ashcharya hua, laga ki ye to kadapi shakya nahi hai, sab jagah to wo khud parmeshwar virajman hai fir aisi kaundi jagah hai jaha main nahi hu, Krishna soch me pad gaye..

Komal kahani suna rahi thi aur avi mantramugdha hokar sun raha tha aur fir jab komal ne pause liya tab avi ne utsukta se pucha

Avinash-fir radha ne kya kaha

Komal-krishna ne jab pucha ke aisi kaunsi jagah hai jaha main nahi hu to radha ne fiki muskan ke sath kaha ki hey Krishna, mera naseeb ye aisi ekmatra jagah hai jaha aap nahi ho…

Avinash-badhiya…

Aur bilkul radha ki taraf komal bhi fiki muskan ke sath boli

Komal-ise kehte hai prem, isiliye kabhi Krishna ke sath rukmini ka naam nahi liya jata radha ka liya jata hai…isiliye keh rahi hu in bato ko dimag se nikal de anya mere naseeb me nahi hai

Avinash-gazab kammo, kaha se sikha hai tune ye sab

Komal-main library aise hi kitabe nahi padhti.. tune kabhi padha hota to pata hota

Avinash-acha! Aisa hai kya..theek hai to fir tujhe kya lagta hai tu akelehi kitabe padhti hai hamto bewkuf hai… to dekh maine ye pauranik kathaye kabhi nahi padhi par jo padha hai uske hisab se main tere sawal ka jawab deta hu sun,

Komal-arey waah, khushi huyi jaan ke ki tum bhi padhte ho

Avinash-ek famous Marathi writer hai V.P kale (व.पू. काले) unki likhihuyi ek line hai, hamara jo prem hota hai na use kabhi bandh ke nahi rakhna chahiye, use free chhod do jise chahte ho apne dil ki baat keh do, agar tumhara pyaar saccha hai to wo tumhare paas jarur aayega aur jo na aaye to samajh lena ke wo tumhare prem ke layak hi nahi…

Komal-badhiya… to matlab agar anya na aaya to wohi layak nahi hai hai na

Kafi samay baad dono ke chehre pe muskan aayi thi

Komal-avi yaha na har insaan apne chehre pe mukhota leke chalta hai, asal chera kisi ko najar hi nahi aata, ab hamari hi baat le lo, hum dono ko kitabe padhna pasand hai par aaj tak hame ye baat pata nahi thi, tumhe dikhi wo asli komal aur bakiyo ko kammo to ab main is komal ko jara ghar chhod aati hu taki wo kisi ko dikhe na aur fir aayegi kammo aur aage ka aage dekhenge

Avinash- done…tere se koi nahi jeet sakta

Avinash komal kea age jath jodte huye bola aur komal ka chehra badal gaya aur wo wapis se apne purine andaj me aate huye boli

Komal-ek aur baat avya, dobara agar komal ko dekhne ki koshoish ki na to ye tera hath hai na ise tod ke dusre hath me pakda dungi samjha

Avinash-hao, samajh gaya kammo bhai, ab bahut paka diya hai tune cha lab mash cutting chai piya

Komal-teko pina hai tu bula main kyu pilau be, aur meko class me jana hai tu baith yaha chai pite huye aur ladkiya tadte huye main chalti hu..

Avinash ke sir pe tapli maarte huye komal nikal gayi aur avi uski or dekhte huye man me bola


Avinash-kya ladki hai yaar, bahut kuch sikha gayi aaya, bhagwan khayal rakhna iska…..
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