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Adirshi said:
thoda intro hai uska age ke update me bas isse jyada uske pailwaan baap ne nahi bataya :cry2:
Bahut bahut sukriya bhai :thanks:
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Je main intro ki baat na kare tha sahab :doh: ek aupcharik feeling hoti ... Jab wo college ki ghatna hui first day uske baad ki... How's she reacting ... How's she inside feeling... What she is thinking and most importantly whay she is doing in college... Ye chhota hi sahi thoda parellel uth'ta iss missing ki baaten karing..

Baharhaal ab to dosti ho gayi to ab main pichhli baton ko mitti daling kyoki poori kahani udhar hi hai... Ye to bus main emotion aur feeling ki baat kar raha tha... Jo dekha jaye to bahut jaroori nahi tha... Bus hota to thoda chareter me doobne ka maza aata bus itna hi
 
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Update 32​



Ek din aise hi avinash aur aniket canteen me masti karte baithe the waise bhi dusra koi kaam thodehi hai isko to komal bhagte huye waha canteen me aayi aur khurchi par baithne se pehle hi bolna shuru kar diya

Komal-arey yaar locha ho gaya hai thoda

Tab avinash bola

Avinash-arey gazab, wahi soch raha tha main ke itne din shanti me kaise bite waise bhi shant reh reh ke bore ho gaya tha main, bas locha hone ki der hi bata kya hua

Komal-arey apni suman ki shadi pakki ho gayi hai

Aniket-arey waah! Ye to badhiya news hai! Par locha kya hua isme

Tab usko rokte huye komal boli

Komal-pehle tum dono apne muh band karo beech me mat bolo aur jo main bol rahi hu suno, suman ka love matter uske ghar par pata chal gaya aur fir kya uska baap jaat paat leke baith gaya hai aur do din me jabardasti uski shadi paas ke gaon ke patil ke ladke se fix kar di hai, anya suman ko room me band karke rakha hai aur usse uska phone bhi le leiya hai, suman ne uski dost ke hath se ye baat mujh tak pahuchayi hai

Komal ki baat sunkar aniket ne sar pe hath rakh liya

Aniket-fir apan isme kya kar sakte hai? Ause aise case me ladki ka baap aur bhai bahut maarte hai mere ko anubhav hai iska (yash wale matter me bhai aise maar bhi kha chukka hai ek baar)

Komal-matlab tu kuch nahi karega

Aniket-kammo ab kya uske baap ke gundo se maramari karu ke suman ko bhagau waha se

Komal-par anya kuch to karna padega kyuki suman ne bola hai agar uski jabardast shadi karwayi gayi to wo atmahatya kar legi

Atmahatya ki baat sunkar aniket aur avinash dachak gaye mane chauk gaye aur avinash bola

Avinash-ye to solid locha ho gaya hai, kuch bhi hua to suman apni dost hai, apan nahi karenge to kaun karega

Aniket apna sar khujlate huye bola

Aniket-hmm theek hai bolo kya karna hai fir,

Komal-lagao dimag dekho koi rasta milta hai kya, koi na koi solution to milega hi

Tab aniket avinash se bola

Aniket-avya bsdk soch kuch kya sirf khan eke liye rakha hai kya teko

Avinash-ekdum correct, meko batao tum logo ne kabhi motu patlu cartoon dekha hai kya?

Av aniket khawal gaya

Aniket-kammo ek laat maariyo jara is gadhe ke bacche ko, jab dekho tab kahani sunane baith jata hai, yaha chal kya raha hai isko cartoon yaad aa raha hai

Komal ne bhi gusse se avinash ki taraf dekha to wo baat sambhalte huye bola

Avinash-abey gawaro cartoon isiliye bola ki main bhi wo motu jaisa hu khali pet mere dimag ki batti nahi jalti, to pehle mere pet me kuch dalo aur idea nikalo, vadapav khilao idea lo 😌

Aniket ke canteen wale ko order de di

Aniket-o kaka jo bhi hai khane ka do aur agar nai hai to bhatti ke koyle de do wahi thus dunga iske nadle me

Avinash- :D

Aniket aur komal kya kare soch rahe the aur idhar avinash mast do vadapav kha ke chai pike Dakar dete huye bola

Avinash-aao idhar aao plan suno, mere 1400gms ka dimag yaha hai to apne 800gms ke dimag ko pareshan par karo tum log

Uske baad avinash ne unko pura plan bataya aur uska plan sunke aniket bola

Aniket-kya haramkhor aadmi hai be, plan bata raha hai ke meri supari de raha hai, tere jaise dost ke hote huye dushman ki jarurat hi nahi hai main waise hi barbad ho jaunga

Avinash-theek hai cancle plan, tumlog batao kya karna hai

To komal boli

Komal-nahi nahi yahi plan theek hai, anya jyada se jyada thoda maar khana padega par suman ki jaan bach jayegi

Aniket-arey par idhar apan log hi dimag khapa rahe hai udkar jisko shadi karni hai wo tayar hai kya?

Komal-arey udhar ko aag lagi hai aura b to wo suman ke liye kuch bhi karne ko tayar hai, meri phone pe baat huyi hai usse aur aur sach to ye hai ki ye sab bate use bhi pata nahi thi

Aniket ne thoda time socha aur fir bola

Aniket-theek hai to fir chalo lagte hai kaam ke jo hoga dekha jayega ab

Uske baad aniket jake docter sidharth se mila aur use pura plan bataya aur siddharth bhi isme tayar ho gaya

Ab decide huye mutabik komal suman ke ghar pahuchi uski shadi ke liye, shadi ka din aa gaya tha aur komal ne sara plan suman ko bataya, plan sun ke suman khushi se uchal padi aur usne komal ko gale laga ke uske galo ko chum liya, komal apna gaal saaf karte huye boli

Komal-oye main lesbo nahi hu ye jo kuch bhi karne ka hai na siddharth ke sath kariyo samjhi..

Par ek bada problem ho gaya, ek ladki bhagte huye suman ke pitaji ke paas pahuch gayi aur boli

Ladki-kaka aapni suman balcony ke kud ke us siddharth ke sath bike par bhag gayi hai, wo highway ke paas wale mandir me shadi karne wale hai ye maine use uski dost ko batate suna aur usne laal rang ka top aur blue jeans pehni hai…

Us ladki ki baat sunkar sharir par bijli gire aise suman ke pitaji stabdh khade the aur fir wo apne ek naukar par garje

S. dad- kashya gadi nikal

Wo teen char logo ko sath lekar gadi se suman ko pakadne nikle, ab ye suman ki kharab kismet ki chauk se turn lete huye wo piche se kisi ko dikh gayi aur usne kapdo se use pehchan liya fir bhi pehchan me na aane ke liye unhone helmet pehna hua tha

“malik wo dekho wo bike par hai wo”

Siddharth bhi puri tayari se aaya tha, usne apne ek dost ke paas se sports bike li thi aur black jacket aur helmet pehan ke dono gadi pe nikal gaye, us mandir tak pahuchne me unhe do ghante lagne wale the

Siddharth ne back view mirror me piche aane wali suman ke pitaji ki gadi dekhi aur apne bike ki speed badha di, suman ke pitaji apne driver ko galiya de rahe the

S dad- gadi bhaga bhadkhau pakad unko

Bichara driver full speed me gadi bhaga raha tha fir bhi wo log dikh nahi rahe the aur malik ki galiya sun ke driver bola

Driver-arey malak wo sport bike hai videshi gadi apan kitna bhi speed lele unko nahi pakad sakte

Uski gadi sach me 120 ki speed pe daud rahi thi aur akhir suman ke pitaji bole

S dad- bhagne de bhagne de jayenge kaha, us mandir me to rukenge hi,main bhi dekhta hu ye shadi kaise hoti hai,milne de ek baar dono ko

Idhar siddharth tufan speed me gadi bhaga raha tha aur wo log uska picha kar rahe the

Udhar avinash ne shadi ki sari tayari kar rakhi thi, pandit, haar do witness sab ready tha bas raah thi dulha dulhan ki aur wo bhagwan se hath jod ke prarthna kar raha tha ke sab sahi ho

Do ghante tak ye pakda pakdayi ka karyakram chala, mandir highway se 500 mtr ander tha aur wo rasta thoda kharab tha to siddharth ko gadi sloe karni padi aur yahi car ke driver ko mauka mila aur usne car aage leke gadi ke saamne khadi karke rasta rok diya

Siddharth ko na chahte huye gadi rokni padi aur gadi rukte hi char naukar aur suman ke pita patapat baahar nikle aur siddharth ki or bhage aur suman darr ke siddharth ke piche chipi

Uska khel khatam ho gaya tha, dono bhi darr ke kamp rahe the aur wo log karib aate hi unhone unke pair pakad liye…..



To Be Continued…..
 
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nain11ster said:
Je main intro ki baat na kare tha sahab :doh: ek aupcharik feeling hoti ... Jab wo college ki ghatna hui first day uske baad ki... How's she reacting ... How's she inside feeling... What she is thinking and most importantly whay she is doing in college... Ye chhota hi sahi thoda parellel uth'ta iss missing ki baaten karing..

Baharhaal ab to dosti ho gayi to ab main pichhli baton ko mitti daling kyoki poori kahani udhar hi hai... Ye to bus main emotion aur feeling ki baat kar raha tha... Jo dekha jaye to bahut jaroori nahi tha... Bus hota to thoda chareter me doobne ka maza aata bus itna hi
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Got the point :good:
:thanks:
 
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