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Update 44
Wo aadmi ander aaya aur aniket ki taraf dekh ke hasa aur usse bola
Aadmi- main tera muh sirf aur sirf do minute ke liye kholunga aura b ye teri choice hai ki tu un do minute ka kaise upyog karta hai, ya to un do minute ke khana kha ke apni bhukh thodi mita le ya to mujhse sawal kar le, waise bhi sawal puchke koi fayda nahi hone wala hai kyuki mujhe to waise bhi tere lafde ke bare me nahi pata hai aur jo bhi mujhe pata hai main tujhe nahi batane wala to tere do minute shuru hote hai ab..
Itna bol ke fir us aadmi ne aniket ke muh ka kapda hata diya aur aniket ko bhi uski baat sahi lagi kyuki is samay sawal puchne se jyada kuch khana jaruri tha.. us aadmi ne pav ke tukde karke aniket ko khilaye aur fir us pani ki bottle se ajeeb se taste wala pani bhi use pila diya aur achanak aniket chillane laga, aniket ko laga ki ab yahi sahi mauka hai isse pehle ki ye gunda uska muh band kare kya pata koi chillane ka awaj hi sun le par hua iske bilkul ulta, wo aadmi apni jagah par khada hokar aniket ko dekh ke has raha tha, aniket jab chilla chillakar chak gaya tab wo guard bola
Guard- hoi gaya chilla ke? Dekh le thoda aur chilla le kya pata koi teri madad ko aa jaye, murkh ladke yaha se 10 km tak bas tu aur main hu isiliye ab apna gala faadna band kar
Aniket- agar aisa hai aur yaha koi nahi hai to mera muh kyu banda hua hai?
Guard- hum hokum ke gulam hai jo malik bolega wahi karenge
Aniket- aur ye malik kaun hai tera?
Guard- kyu be bahut chul hai kyat ere me? Sab abhi janega? Pata chal jayega muh band kar apna
Itna bol ke us guard ne aniket ka muh dobara band kar diya, kuch samay baad kisi gadi ke aane ka awaj aaya, aniket ka sara dhyan darwaje ki taraf tha, darwaja khula aur ek ucha lamba aadmi ander aaya, hath me sone ka bracelet aur aankho par goggle, ander aate hi usne guard ko ishara kiya aur guard ne aniket ke muh par ki patti hata di aur wo aadmi bola
Aadmi- acha! To tu hai aniket
Pety me kuch jane ke baa dab aniket ka darr kam ho gaya thaw o bola
Aniket- tum log kya bagair aadmi confirm karte uthate ho kya? Main hi hu aniket aur tum log ho kaun aur kya chal raha hai ye?
Wo aadmi shanti se khurchi par baitha aur gogglr nikal kar bola
Aadmi- mera naam rajeshwar hai, tere se kuch hisab baki tha bas isiliye uthaya hai tujhe..
Aniket- kimat bata mere bapu fek ke marenge tere muh pe..
Aniket ki baat sunkar rajeshwar hasa aur aniket ke paas jakar usne ek jordar thappad mara aniket ko aur bola
Rajeshwar- tu abhi chota baccha hai mere samne aur ha ye bhi sun ke tere baap ke jaise 10 log main apni jeb me leke chalta hu isiliye aainda kuch bhi bolne se pehle dus baar soch lena
Usne fir us guard ko ishara kiya aur guard baahar gaya aur anpe sath ek ladke ko ander lekar aaya aur us ladke ko dekhte hi aniket bola
Aniket- raman tu?? (raman wahi hai jisne komal ko cheda tha aur baad me in sabne uski kutai bhi ki thi )
Ab aniket ko sari kahani dhyan me aa gayi thi aur rajeshwar bola
Rajeshwar- ye mera eklauta beta raman, pehchanta hai na ise
Jispar aniket hasa
Aniket- main kya akkha college janta hai ise to, mawali harkate kar raha tha to college ki ladkiyo ne sandel maar maar ke bhagaya tha ise
Aniket ka is tarah hasna raman ko acha nahi laga aur wo aniket par tut pada aur use maarne laga aur jab maar maar ke thak gaya tab usne aniket ko chhoda, aniket jamin par pada tha aur uske muh se khun nikal raha tha us khun ko thukte huye haste huye aniket bola
Aniket- agar itna hi apni mardangi dikhane ka shauk hai to ek baar mere hath khol ke dekh, fir the batata marte kaise hai na teri gand me jhadi jhusa ke tujhe morn a banaya to mera naam bhi aniket nahi..
Raman fir se aniket ko maarne lapka par rajeshwar ke ishare par guard ne use beech me hi rok liya aur rajeshwar aniket ke paas jate huye bola
Rajeshwar- itni haalat kharab hai fir bhi akad kam nahi huyi hai teri, maan gaye teri himmat ko, teri aankho me mujhe bilkul darr nahi dikh raha hai aur yahi mujhe pasand nahi aaya, dusra koi hota to mafi maangeta to main use hath pair tod ke chhod deta par tere liye maine kuch aur soch rakha hai..
Aniket ne bhi thanka kar kaha
Aniket- maine kuch nahi kiya hai, tumhare ladke ki galti thi aur use uski saja mili hai
Ab tak shant rajeshwar ekdum khawal gaya usne dono hatho se aniket ki gardan pakdi aur daat peeste huye bola
Rajeshwar- tujhe pata nahi hai tune kya kiya hai..us din mera beta sharminda hokar ghar aaya tha aur mahina bhar baahar nahi nikla, uske dimag par asar ho gaya tha aur itne mahine lage hai use theek hone me aur tu bol raha hai tune kuch nahi kiya ? waise to galti us komal ki hai, saja use deni thi par mil gaya tu..
Komal ka naam sunte hi aniket par mano bijli giri ho wo ekdum shock ho gaya aur ab aniket ke chehre par chinta dikhne lagi aur wo samjhate huye bola
Aniket- dekho rajeshwar aap ko samajh nahi aa raha hai ke galti aapke bete kit hi..
Rajeshwar- maantu hu ki usne galti kit hi par tum logo ne use sare college ke saamne ladkiyo se maar khilakar sharminda kiya hai, uske dimag par iska asar hua hau aura b tumko iski saja bhugatni padegi, ab bata saja tu bhugtega ya komal ?
Jispar aniket bagair ek pal gawaye bola
Aniket- tumko jo saja deni hai main bhugatne ko tayar hu, par agar komal ki taraf aankh utha kar bhi dekha to main aankhe nikal lunga tumhari
Rajeshwar hasa
Rajeshwar- main bhi yahi chahta hu, kyuki tujhe saja di to use apne aap saja mil jayegi, aur mujhe use tadapte huye dekhna hai
Itna samay shant baitha hua raman bola
Raman- papa maar dete hai ise bahut ho gayi baat
Jispar rajeshwar samjhate huye bola
Rajeshwar- nahi beta maar diya to saja ka maja nahi aayega, ise to main aisi saja dunga ki ye jinda to rahega par komal se apne pariwar se kabhi mil nahi payega aur wo bhi jindagi bhar tadapte rahenge
Raman- aisa kya karne wale ho aap
Jispar rajeshwar haste huye aniket ki taraf dekh kar bola
Rajeshwar- tu bhi janna chahta hoga aage tera kya hoga to sun, mera import export ka kaam hai aur kal mera maal ship se france jane wala hai, main tujhe ek container me daal dunga france sarkar ke liye tu ghuspaithiya hoga aur wo tere mare tak tujhe jail me rakhenge, mera badla bhi pura hoga aur main pakda bhi nahi jaunga
Ye sun kar aniket ke pairo tale jamin sarak gayi, pair kampne lage aur wo niche baith gaua aur rajeshwar jate jate bola
Rajeshwar- ek baat bhyan me rakhna, agar tune bhagne ki koshish ki to ye haalat komal ki hogi ab choice teri hai tu ya komal..
Uske baad raman rajeshwar aur guard teeno hase aur waha se nikal gaye…..
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I quit
Yahan ek achi ending ho sakti thi vahan gand mar di sari kahani ki jai ram ji ki
Yahan ek achi ending ho sakti thi vahan gand mar di sari kahani ki jai ram ji ki
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ragish7357
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mashish
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awesome super update
Bullshit man.... What choice he have???? Waiting for next update
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Anni ne college me ek larke ko pela tha ye wahi to nhi ...Update 43
Sab kuch sahi chal raha tha par sab sahi chale ke kismat ko kaha manjur hota hai (aur yaha inki kismet likhne wala apun hai) hame jo chahiye wo hame na mile ye to niyati ka pasandida khel hai aur har love story puri hoti hai aisa bhi nahi hai..
Aniket aur komal ekdusre ke pyaar me puri tarah se dube huye the, komal aur narayanrao ki permission leke aniket yash se milne chala gaya aur uski shadi ki bhi puri planning ki aur yash ki bhi shadi ho gayi usse hi jisse wo pyaar karta tha, samay pankh laga ke ud raha tha aur dekhte hi dekhte din hafte mahine nikal gaye..
Aniket jitna chatur tha utna hi niragas bhi tha, maja masti se paripurn tha, jaise wo kai logo ko pasand tha waise hi wo kayi logo ki aankho me khatak ta bhi tha, aniket ke to apni taraf se aaj tak sabse dosti hi kit hi par kuch mahan log aise bhi the jo use apna dushman maante the aur in sab se aniket puri taraf se bekhabar tha…
Ek din komal ko mil kar wapis aate samay aniket ek nirjan jagah par ruka uska phone baj raha tha aur wo phone uthane ke liye usne gadi roki aur itne me hi achanak uske sar par ek fatka pada aur uski aankho ke saamne andhera cha gaya..
Najane kitne samay baad use hosh aaya, wo ek nirjan room me band tha, uske sar par maar itne jor se laga tha kea b bhi uska sar thanak raha tha par ye sab uske kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ke kya ho raha hai.. uske dono path pair rassio se bandhe huye the aur muh par bhi kapd bandha hua tha, pura hosh aate hi aniket chatpatane laga par use bahut kas ke banda gaya tha, wo apni puri jaan laga ke chillane ki koshish kar raha tha par muh me kapda fasa hone ki wajah se nas ‘uu..uuu’ ki awaj ke alawa koi awaj baahar nahi nikal rahi thi, aniket ne khud ko chudane ki bharpur koshish ki par sab vyarth, wo jitna khud ko chudane ki koshish karta utna wo rassi ki gath aur bhi pakki ho rahi thi, bahut koshish karne ke baad aniket thak gaya aur waise hi jamin par pada raha
Sar par jaha maar laga tha wo hissa to dukh hi raha tha sath hii uska sar ye soch ke jyada dukh raha tha ke ye sab aakhir chal kya raha hai? Kaun kar raha hai ye? Aur kyu kar raha hai? Soch soch ke uska sar fatne ko aaya tha, aniket ke man me ab bahut bure khayal aane lage the, apne sath kuch ho gaya to maa bapu ka kya hoga?, komal ka kya hoga? In bato ke bas khayal se hi aniket ke pasine chutne lage, aniket ab pura ghabra gaya tha aur uski aankho se aansu behne lage the par unhe dekhne ke liye waha koi nahi tha, aisi haalat me bahut samay nikal gaya aura b aniket normal ho gaya tha, usne apne aap ko samjhaya ki ye waqt bhavuk hone ka nahi hai balki paristithi ka saamna karne ka hai…
Aniket ne apne aas paas najar ghumayi, wo ek bhayan andheri room thi, sab taraf dhul ka samrajya pasra hua tha, sab taraf makdi ke jale latak rahe the, diware kali pad chuki thi, sara tuta futa saaman waha idhar udhar pada hua tha, wo ek purana godown ya koi band padi huyi factory thi aisa aniket ko andaja aaya, bhayanak shanti thi waha. Kisi bhi insaan ki koi nishani nahi thi waha beech beech me kabutar aur chmgadar ka awaj aa raha tha
Aniket shanti se hare k awaj sunne ki koshish kar raha tha, uske dhyan me aa gaya tha ke use jaha rakha gaya hai uske paas hi kahi samundar tha, wo sochne laga ke uske gaon ke paas to kahi bhi samundar nahi hai samundar to uske gaon se 120km dur hai, aniket ko ashcharya hua ke wo waha pahucha kaise aur use pata bhi nahi chala, sharir par ke kapde dekh ke lag raha tha ke wo kuch ghante nahi balki kayi dino se behosh tha, wo waise hi pade pade sochne laga ki akhir hua kya hoga
Kuch samay baad use bhuk lagi to usne idhar udhar najar ghumayi to uske dhyan me aaya ke waha ek table par ek plate me ek pav rakha hua hai aur ek pani ki bottle aur ek straw bhi hai
Udhar ghar par aniket raat bhar aaya nahi tha to ghar walo ne koi tension nahi liya tha kyuki iska is tarah raat bhar gayab rehna gharwalo ke liye kuch naya nahi tha par jab aniket ka phone nahi lag raha tha to komal ne ghar phone kiya to gharwalo ko chinta hone lagi, aniket ka kahi koi pata nahi lag raha tha, kaushalya aur komal ro ke behal the aur akhir me avinash aur narayanrao police me complaint likhane gaye, har jagah aniket ko dhundha lekin kisi ko kuch pata nahi tha kisi ne use nahi dekha tha, uski aakhri mulakat komal se huyi thi par uske baad use kisi ne nahi dekha tha, yash se bhi puch ke dekha gaya par use bhi aniket ke bare me kuch pata nahi tha, aur usme kehar yani aniket ki bike bajar me ek jagah par mili par uska kahi pata nahi chal raha tha
Idhar aniket ko bhuk lagi thi aur khane ko jo rakha tha wo thoda dur tha, wo jaise taise renge huye sarakte huye is khane ki plate tak pahuch to gaya tha par khayega kaise muh par to kapda bandha hua tha, ab wo kuch nahi kar sakta tha wo waise hi jamin par pada raha,
Aniket sochne laga ki kisi ne use kidnap kiya hai aur ab uske pita se paise ki demand karenge, use yakin tha ke uske pitaji use jarur chhuda lenge….
Akkha din aise hi nikal gaya, sham ko aniket ko kisi baat karne ka awaj sunai diya koi to kisi par gussa kar raha tha
“arey murkh aadmi, tujhe kaha tha sirf behosh karna aur tune ye kya kar diya? Wo mar gaya hai ke jinda hai hai wo?
“nahi malik jinda hai wo saas chal rahi hai uski”
“arey par aise maarte hai kya ?”
“malik jyada jor se maarta to uska sar fat jata na, fir bhi maine use dawa laga di hai aur uska khun aana bhi band ho gaya hai”
“aisa kya ? fir do din ho gaye hai use ab tak hosh kyu nahi aaya use”
“malik aaj subah hi hosh aaya hai use”
“kaise, hamme se koi bhi dinbhar aaj yaha nahi tha fir tune kab dekha ?”
“abhi aane ke baad dekha, wo sarakte sarakte huye pani ke paas gaya tha aur mujhe batao malik aapko badla hi lena hai to hath pair tod dalo ya fir sidha khatam kar do use yaha kyu rakha hai”
“meri to icha hai use maar daalne ki par usse pehle use pata chalna chahiye ki use kyu aur kisne mara hai, papa ne warning di hai ki jab tak wo khud yaha nahi aate tab tak koi kuch nahi karega aur teko pata hai jo bhi unki baat nahi manta uska haal iske jaisa hi hota hai”
“malik tab tak wo jinda rehna chahiye na”
“bandh ke rakha hai aise kaise marega”
“malik bhukha hai wo, khayega kaise muh me to kapda thusa hua hai”
“ha ye bhi hai, ek kaam kar uske khane tak muh khol de uska aur jarurat pade to tu khila de par hath mat kholna, bahut danger hai wo”
Fir wo aadmi aniket ko khana khilane ke liye ander aaya….
To Be Continued….