Romance Ek Bhool 2 (Completed)
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UPDATE 100
Phone kyu nahi utha rahe ho tum?
Hospital Canteen mein Sumit ko dekhte hi gusse mein Megha ne pucha.
Pichhle 2 hafte se Sumit yaa to Megha ki phone cut kar raha tha yaa fir Sumit ki mobile switched off hi milta.
Sumit:- Ohh Megha tum.
Fikaa sa jawaab diya Sumit ne.
Megha:- Kuch puccha hai maine tumse?
Sumit:- Thoda busy hun mai filhaal.
Megha:- Accha kis cheej mein busy ho?
Sumit par abb Megha ka gussa badhta hi jaa raha tha.
Chaai ki aakhiri ghunt pee kar.
Sumit:- Abhi ek surgery mein jaa raha hun...Baad mein milta hun.
Megha kuch bolti usse pehle Sumit waha se nikal gaya.
Kuch dur baithi Sanjana bhi pichhle kuch dino ki harkat dekh hairaan thi.
Megha ko bhi Sumit ki iss badlaaw kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha tha...Aaj nahi to kal Sumit ko jawaab dena hi hoga issi soch ke saath wo bhi waha se chali gayi.
At Evening.
Abhi bhi keh raha hun...Galat kar raha hai tu...Bahut galat.
Ek baar fir Ashish ne Sumit ko samjhaane ke liye phone kiya.
Sumit:- Accha kya galat hai?
Ashish:- Tujhe dikhai nahi deta Megha ka pyaar? Aur kya tu Megha se pyaar nahi karta.
Sumit ne ek lambi saans le kar kehna suru kiya.
Sumit:- Karta hun...Bahut pyaar karta hun...Aur issi pyaar ki vajah se usse alag hone jaa raha hun.
Ashish:- Kya kya...Kya matlab?
Sumit:- Agar ek shabd mein kahu to Mai Megha ko deserve nahi karta.
Ashish:- Abe ek shabd ko goli maar...Aur puri vajah bataa...Kyu tu Megha ko deserve nahi karta.
Sumit:- Abb mai wo Sumit nahi raha jo aashiq hua karta tha...Pyaar ke liye kuch bhi karne ko taiyaar ho jaata tha...Aaj wo Sumit hun jo pyaar mai toot chuka hai...Usse khud apne pyaar mai vishwaas nahi raha.
Dard bhari aawaj mein Sumit ne kaha.
Ashish ko bhi lagne laga ki kuch to galat hua hai.
Ashish:- Abb kyu hua tujhe?
Sumit:- Kirti se alag hone ke baad mai kuch iss tarah se toot gaya ki abhi tak jud nahi paaya hun.
Uss judaai ne mujhe andar tak mere vajood ko hilaa ke rakh diya tha.
Sach kehte hai log pyaar mein toot jaane ke baad insaan pehle jaisa nahi rehta.
Normal to ho chuka hun....Lekin kuch aur hi normal...Jo pehle se kaafi alag hai.
Ashish:- Kya baat kar raha hai? Kirti ko to bhulaa chuka hai naa tu? Fir ye sab?
Sumit:- Uski pyaar ko to kab ka bhula chuka hun...Abb to Kirti khud mere paas aa gayi aur kehti hai ki wo bhi mujh se pyaar karti hai...Uski taraf mud kar bhi nahi dekhunga.
Ashish:- Fir pareshani kya hai?
Sumit:- Yahi ki uss incident ne mujhe puri tarah se badal gaya.
Hamesha khud par vishwash tha...Ussi vishwash ke saath sab kuch haasil kiya...Har ek icchaa pura kiya...Apna hi nahi har ek dost ki mushibat dur karta tha.
Kirti naaraaj ho gayi to vishwash tha aaj nahi to kal manaa hi lunga usse.
Lekin vakt ka kadwa sach...Haar gaya iss maamle mein...Kirti ki pyaar to chala hi gaya...Saath mein khud par jo vishwash tha jo abhimaan tha wo sab bhi.
Pal bhar mein sab kuch toot ta hua mehsus hua...Jo har kisi ka pareshani dur karta tha wo khud ka pareshani dur nahi kar saka...Aur pareshaani bhi kya? Pyaar.
Kuch bhi keh...Ek saccha aashiq tha yaar mai...Dil toot gaya...Jaha mere sabhi dost mein pyaar kam hawas jyaada bhara tha...Unn mein mai hi ek tha saccha pyaar karne wala.
Kirti ki bhi galti nahi tha...Usse mai pasand nahi tha to nahi tha...Kya kar sakta tha? Lekin mera pyaar to haar gaya na?
Ek nahi 5 break ups...Bhale hi pehle ke 4 pyaar aise hi naam ka tha...Lekin 5 breakups ladki ki taraf se hi hua...Khud mein hi kamjori dikhne laga.
Ek baar insaan ke andar ka abhimaan puri tarah se toot jaata hai to insaan waisa bilkul nahi rehta.
Confidence down to tha hi...Upar se mental aur emotional trauma...Puri tarah se haar gaya yaar.
Wo to Maa, Papa, megha aur tune sambhala...Pata nahi kaise ek zero mein hero dekh liya sabhi ne.
Tum sabhi ki vajah se jindagi ka makshad to mil gaya...Lekin insaan waisa nahi raha...Puri tarike se badal gaya hun.
Abb Ashish ko samajh mein aaya Sumit kitna toot chuka hai.
Ashish:- Tune kaha na...Megha ne tujhe sambhaala hai...Bahut pyaar karti hai yaar wo tujhse...Bas tujhe dikhai nahi deta.
Iss baat par Sumit hansta hai.
Ashish:- Kya hua? Kyu hans raha hai?
Sumit:- Tu kehta hai mujhe nahi pata ki Megha mujhe pasand nahi karti...Megha se bhi pehle se jaanta hu mai ki wo mujhse pyaar karti hai.
Pehli mulaakaat mein wo mujhse attracted thi...Uss vakt mera bhool tha ki maine uske saath galat kiya.
Jab mai usse khudse nafrat karne par majbur kar raha tha to kaha se usse meri acchayi dikh gayi ki wo mujhse pyaar karne lagi.
Tab se le kar wo mujhse pyaar karti hai...Aur pyaar bhi aisa ki har din ke saath badhta hi jaa raha hai...Wo issi intejaar mai hai ki mai kab usse apne dil ki baat bolunga.
Ashish:- Tu bhi usse pyaar karta hai aur wo bhi tujhse pyaar karti hai...Ye baat tu bhi jaanta hai fir pareshaani kya hai? Keh de apni dil ki baat aur jindagi ki safar mein saath aage badh jaa.
Sumit:- Agar ye kar diya to Megha ke saath dhokha hoga.
Ashish:- Abb ye kya keh raha hai?
Sumit:- Wo to mujhse pyaar karti hai...Wo mere liye sabse sahi hai...Lekin mai uske liye nahi.
Ashish:- Tu bhi to usse pyaar karta hai?
Sumit:- Karta hun...Lekin abb wo vishwash nahi raha ki aage bhi pyaar nibha paaunga ya nahi...Wo jo pyaar deserve karti hai...Wo mai nahi de paaya to uske saath anyaay hoga.
Ashish:- Bhai meri samajh mein kuch nahi aa raha hai?
Sumit:- Bahut koshish kiya maine apne dil ki pyaar jagaane ki...Megha se pyaar bhi hai...Lekin wo vishwash nahi hai ki kitna saath nibha paaunga...Abhi bhi khud ko kahi na kahi laachaar hi mehsus karta hun.
Ashish:- Aisa to nahi tha yaar tu?
Sumit:- Bas dikhane ke liye...Mein jitna mast hua karta tha abb wo kahi kho sa gaya hai...Kuch alag hi seriousness aa gaya hai.
Wo to dosto ke saath aur Megha ke saath normal dikhne ke liye aisa masti aur bewkoofi karta hun...Lekin mere andar abhi bhi toofan chal raha hai.
Sach kahu to ek saal pehle tak anti-depressant mein tha...Mental trauma bhi bahut dardnaak hai...Bahut mushkil se ubhra hua hun.
Ashish:- Abb to mujhe bhi dar lag raha hai yaar.
Sumit:- Dar mat...Pyaar ke alawa sabhi cheej mein recovery kar raha hun...Ek aisa dhakka laga hai jisne mujhe andar se tod diya tha...Abhi tak usse utth hi raha hun...Haan bahut hadd tak thik hai abb.
Ashish:- Bas yaar Megha ko jaane mat dena...Baaki sab thik ho jaayega.
Sumit:- Kya lagta hai tujhe? Abe ye meri bhi khwahish hai...Megha mere saath rahe hamesha hamesha...Mujhe pyaar kare...Har ek pal har ek mod mein mera saath de
Ussi vajah se uske paas rehta tha...Uske saath ghumta tha...Shayad uski pyaar mein sab kuch bhula kar uska ho jaau...Lekin abhi tak apna uss kamjori hi bhaari pada raha.
Iss vajah se itne vakt tak uske dil mein ek aasha ko jinda rakha...Lekin aur dhokha nahi kar sakta uske saath...Aur kahu bhi to kya? Kuch saal mere liye aur ruk jaao...
Ashish:- Abhi bhi lagta hai yar ki tu galat kar raha hai?
Sumit:- Jaanta hun...Lekin majbur hun.
Ashish:- Kya wo tere bina khush rahegi?
Sumit:- Itni jaldi to nahi...Lekin baad mein jarur rahegi.
Aur agar mere saath rahi...Aur mera wo ghaaw nahi bhara to hamesha ke liye dukhi rahegi.
Ashish:- To kya karega abb tu?
Abb to Ashish bhi haar maan chuka tha.
Sumit:- Kuch nahi...Pichhli baar nafrat paida karne ki koshish ki to pyaar kar baithi...Iss baar kuch nahi karunga.
Agar usse lagega ki abb mujhe uski koi parwah nahi to wo khud mujhse nafrat karegi.
Itna keh kar Sumit ne phone cut kar diya aur Megha ki photo pocket se nikaal kar.
Sumit:- Tumne mujhe sambhalne ki har ek koshish kiya lekin mai sambhal nahi paaya...Dil ka ye ghaaw pata nahi kab bharega...Saath rehne ki iccha ke baawjud saath nahi reh sakta.
I dont deserve you.
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Kaafi emotional aur broken feelings thi sumit ki hope ke jald hi usko sab samjh aajaye.UPDATE 100
Phone kyu nahi utha rahe ho tum?
Hospital Canteen mein Sumit ko dekhte hi gusse mein Megha ne pucha.
Pichhle 2 hafte se Sumit yaa to Megha ki phone cut kar raha tha yaa fir Sumit ki mobile switched off hi milta.
Sumit:- Ohh Megha tum.
Fikaa sa jawaab diya Sumit ne.
Megha:- Kuch puccha hai maine tumse?
Sumit:- Thoda busy hun mai filhaal.
Megha:- Accha kis cheej mein busy ho?
Sumit par abb Megha ka gussa badhta hi jaa raha tha.
Chaai ki aakhiri ghunt pee kar.
Sumit:- Abhi ek surgery mein jaa raha hun...Baad mein milta hun.
Megha kuch bolti usse pehle Sumit waha se nikal gaya.
Kuch dur baithi Sumit bhi pichhle kuch dino ki harkat dekh hairaan thi.
Megha ko bhi Sumit ki iss badlaaw kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha tha...Aaj nahi to kal Sumit ko jawaab dena hi hoga issi soch ke saath wo bhi waha se chali gayi.
At Evening.
Abhi bhi keh raha hun...Galat kar raha hai tu...Bahut galat.
Ek baar fir Ashish ne Sumit ko samjhaane ke liye phone kiya.
Sumit:- Accha kya galat hai?
Ashish:- Tujhe dikhai nahi deta Megha ka pyaar? Aur kya tu Megha se pyaar nahi karta.
Sumit ne ek lambi saans le kar kehna suru kiya.
Sumit:- Karta hun...Bahut pyaar karta hun...Aur issi pyaar ki vajah se usse alag hone jaa raha hun.
Ashish:- Kya kya...Kya matlab?
Sumit:- Agar ek shabd mein kahu to Mai Megha ko deserve nahi karta.
Ashish:- Abe ek shabd ko goli maar...Aur puri vajah bataa...Kyu tu Megha ko deserve nahi karta.
Sumit:- Abb mai wo Sumit nahi raha jo aashiq hua karta tha...Pyaar ke liye kuch bhi karne ko taiyaar ho jaata tha...Aaj wo Sumit hun jo pyaar mai toot chuka hai...Usse khud apne pyaar mai vishwaas nahi raha.
Dard bhari aawaj mein Sumit ne kaha.
Ashish ko bhi lagne laga ki kuch to galat hua hai.
Ashish:- Abb kyu hua tujhe?
Sumit:- Kirti se alag hone ke baad mai kuch iss tarah se toot gaya ki abhi tak jud nahi paaya hun.
Uss judaai ne mujhe andar tak mere vajood ko hilaa ke rakh diya tha.
Sach kehte hai log pyaar mein toot jaane ke baad insaan pehle jaisa nahi rehta.
Normal to ho chuka hun....Lekin kuch aur hi normal...Jo pehle se kaafi alag hai.
Ashish:- Kya baat kar raha hai? Kirti ko to bhulaa chuka hai naa tu? Fir ye sab?
Sumit:- Uski pyaar ko to kab ka bhula chuka hun...Abb to Kirti khud mere paas aa gayi aur kehti hai ki wo bhi mujh se pyaar karti hai...Uski taraf mud kar bhi nahi dekhunga.
Ashish:- Fir pareshani kya hai?
Sumit:- Yahi ki uss incident ne mujhe puri tarah se badal gaya.
Hamesha khud par vishwash tha...Ussi vishwash ke saath sab kuch haasil kiya...Har ek icchaa pura kiya...Apna hi nahi har ek dost ki mushibat dur karta tha.
Kirti naaraaj ho gayi to vishwash tha aaj nahi to kal manaa hi lunga usse.
Lekin vakt ka kadwa sach...Haar gaya iss maamle mein...Kirti ki pyaar to chala hi gaya...Saath mein khud par jo vishwash tha jo abhimaan tha wo sab bhi.
Pal bhar mein sab kuch toot ta hua mehsus hua...Jo har kisi ka pareshani dur karta tha wo khud ka pareshani dur nahi kar saka...Aur pareshaani bhi kya? Pyaar.
Kuch bhi keh...Ek saccha aashiq tha yaar mai...Dil toot gaya...Jaha mere sabhi dost mein pyaar kam hawas jyaada bhara tha...Unn mein mai hi ek tha saccha pyaar karne wala.
Kirti ki bhi galti nahi tha...Usse mai pasand nahi tha to nahi tha...Kya kar sakta tha? Lekin mera pyaar to haar gaya na?
Ek nahi 5 break ups...Bhale hi pehle ke 4 pyaar aise hi naam ka tha...Lekin 5 breakups ladki ki taraf se hi hua...Khud mein hi kamjori dikhne laga.
Ek baar insaan ke andar ka abhimaan puri tarah se toot jaata hai to insaan waisa bilkul nahi rehta.
Confidence down to tha hi...Upar se mental aur emotional trauma...Puri tarah se haar gaya yaar.
Wo to Maa, Papa, megha aur tune sambhala...Pata nahi kaise ek zero mein hero dekh liya sabhi ne.
Tum sabhi ki vajah se jindagi ka makshad to mil gaya...Lekin insaan waisa nahi raha...Puri tarike se badal gaya hun.
Abb Ashish ko samajh mein aaya Sumit kitna toot chuka hai.
Ashish:- Tune kaha na...Megha ne tujhe sambhaala hai...Bahut pyaar karti hai yaar wo tujhse...Bas tujhe dikhai nahi deta.
Iss baat par Sumit hansta hai.
Ashish:- Kya hua? Kyu hans raha hai?
Sumit:- Tu kehta hai mujhe nahi pata ki Megha mujhe pasand nahi karti...Megha se bhi pehle se jaanta hu mai ki wo mujhse pyaar karti hai.
Pehli mulaakaat mein wo mujhse attracted thi...Uss vakt mera bhool tha ki maine uske saath galat kiya.
Jab mai usse khudse nafrat karne par majbur kar raha tha to kaha se usse meri acchayi dikh gayi ki wo mujhse pyaar karne lagi.
Tab se le kar wo mujhse pyaar karti hai...Aur pyaar bhi aisa ki har din ke saath badhta hi jaa raha hai...Wo issi intejaar mai hai ki mai kab usse apne dil ki baat bolunga.
Ashish:- Tu bhi usse pyaar karta hai aur wo bhi tujhse pyaar karti hai...Ye baat tu bhi jaanta hai fir pareshaani kya hai? Keh de apni dil ki baat aur jindagi ki safar mein saath aage badh jaa.
Sumit:- Agar ye kar diya to Megha ke saath dhokha hoga.
Ashish:- Abb ye kya keh raha hai?
Sumit:- Wo to mujhse pyaar karti hai...Wo mere liye sabse sahi hai...Lekin mai uske liye nahi.
Ashish:- Tu bhi to usse pyaar karta hai?
Sumit:- Karta hun...Lekin abb wo vishwash nahi raha ki aage bhi pyaar nibha paaunga ya nahi...Wo jo pyaar deserve karti hai...Wo mai nahi de paaya to uske saath anyaay hoga.
Ashish:- Bhai meri samajh mein kuch nahi aa raha hai?
Sumit:- Bahut koshish kiya maine apne dil ki pyaar jagaane ki...Megha se pyaar bhi hai...Lekin wo vishwash nahi hai ki kitna saath nibha paaunga...Abhi bhi khud ko kahi na kahi laachaar hi mehsus karta hun.
Ashish:- Aisa to nahi tha yaar tu?
Sumit:- Bas dikhane ke liye...Mein jitna mast hua karta tha abb wo kahi kho sa gaya hai...Kuch alag hi seriousness aa gaya hai.
Wo to dosto ke saath aur Megha ke saath normal dikhne ke liye aisa masti aur bewkoofi karta hun...Lekin mere andar abhi bhi toofan chal raha hai.
Sach kahu to ek saal pehle tak anti-depressant mein tha...Mental trauma bhi bahut dardnaak hai...Bahut mushkil se ubhra hua hun.
Ashish:- Abb to mujhe bhi dar lag raha hai yaar.
Sumit:- Dar mat...Pyaar ke alawa sabhi cheej mein recovery kar raha hun...Ek aisa dhakka laga hai jisne mujhe andar se tod diya tha...Abhi tak usse utth hi raha hun...Haan bahut hadd tak thik hai abb.
Ashish:- Bas yaar Megha ko jaane mat dena...Baaki sab thik ho jaayega.
Sumit:- Kya lagta hai tujhe? Abe ye meri bhi khwahish hai...Megha mere saath rahe hamesha hamesha...Mujhe pyaar kare...Har ek pal har ek mod mein mera saath de
Ussi vajah se uske paas rehta tha...Uske saath ghumta tha...Shayad uski pyaar mein sab kuch bhula kar uska ho jaau...Lekin abhi tak apna uss kamjori hi bhaari pada raha.
Iss vajah se itne vakt tak uske dil mein ek aasha ko jinda rakha...Lekin aur dhokha nahi kar sakta uske saath...Aur kahu bhi to kya? Kuch saal mere liye aur ruk jaao...
Ashish:- Abhi bhi lagta hai yar ki tu galat kar raha hai?
Sumit:- Jaanta hun...Lekin majbur hun.
Ashish:- Kya wo tere bina khush rahegi?
Sumit:- Itni jaldi to nahi...Lekin baad mein jarur rahegi.
Aur agar mere saath rahi...Aur mera wo ghaaw nahi bhara to hamesha ke liye dukhi rahegi.
Ashish:- To kya karega abb tu?
Abb to Ashish bhi haar maan chuka tha.
Sumit:- Kuch nahi...Pichhli baar nafrat paida karne ki koshish ki to pyaar kar baithi...Iss baar kuch nahi karunga.
Agar usse lagega ki abb mujhe uski koi parwah nahi to wo khud mujhse nafrat karegi.
Itna keh kar Sumit ne phone cut kar diya aur Megha ki photo pocket se nikaal kar.
Sumit:- Tumne mujhe sambhalne ki har ek koshish kiya lekin mai sambhal nahi paaya...Dil ka ye ghaaw pata nahi kab bharega...Saath rehne ki iccha ke baawjud saath nahi reh sakta.
I dont deserve you.
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Story ke pichle kuch updates khinch gaye hai...Irregularity ki vajah se...Abhi story climax ki taraf jaa raha hai...Bas issi ka base taiyar ho raha hai....Story thoda aur baaki hai...Sumit ki ye baaton ki vajah bhi jald pata chal jaatega.बहुत बढ़िया महोदय।।
मेघा और सुमित की बातचीत कुछ ज्यादा ही फिल्मी और बकवास प्रकार की हो जाती है कभी कभी। वैसे भी अब कहानी को खत्म कर देना चाहिए। कुछ ज्यादा ही लंबा खिंच रही है कहानी ऊपर से सुमित की बकवास और नॉनसेंस बातें भी पकाने लगी हैं अब।।
वो उसी बात पर हमेशा इनकार करता है जो वो सोचता रहता है। ऊपर से बहाने भी ऐसे की दिमाग खराब हो जाए।।
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