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Romance Ek Bhool 2 (Completed)

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UPDATE 32

Agar koi ladki tujhe sacche dil se pyar kare to tu bhi toot kar usse pyar kar...Aur agar wo tujhe dhokha de to tu uski ....Khair chhod.

Ye soch Sumit ka nahi balki Ashish ka tha jo abhi usne likh kar Sumit ko fb me message kiya tha.

Ye dekh Sumit thoda mushkurata hai aur fir mobile side me rakhta hai.

Tabhi ek aur message ka notification aata hai.

Agar dil aur dimaag ke bich ladaai ho to uss vakt dil ka sunna...Agar faisla galat bhi ho jaaye to koi shikwa nahi hoga ki tune ye kyu kiya? Ek santushti milega ki tune apne dil ki baat suna.


Ye message padh kar.

Sumit:- (In his mind) Ye nahi sudhrega.

Fir wo bhi message type karta hai.

Sumit:- Abe chu...Ye loveguru banne ki bukhaar kab se lag gaya tujhe.

Ashish:- Jab se mere dost ko loveguru ki jarurat pada.

Sumit:- Tera message padh kar to lag raha hai ki tu mujhe single se mingle karwa kar hi maanega.

Ashish:- Jitna tujhe mai jaanta hun...Tu bhi mingle hona chaahta hai...Bas maan nahi raha hai.

Sumit:- Bhai bas kar...Abb psychologist mat ban.

Ashish:- Loveguru hi thik hun.

Sumit:- Accha thik hai...Sochta hun teri baaton ko.

Ashish:- Aise nahi...Pehle ek glass thanda paani pee kar dimaag ko bhi thanda kar...Aur fir thande dimaag se soch.

Sumit:- Bhaag kamine.

Itna likh kar Sumit net off kar deta hai aur apne soch me kho jaata hai.


At Dinner time.

Sumit aaj aur din ke mukaable thoda dhire se khaa raha tha.

S. Dad:- Pehle to padhai likhai me slow tha...Abb khaane mein bhi...Accha hai.

Apna khaana khatm karne ke baad Sumit ko ghurte hue wo bole.

S. Mom:- Kya aap bhi? Hamesha mere Sumit ke piche pade rehte hai.

S. Dad:- Haan tumhara hi laad pyar ne bigaad rakha hai...Jo itna jiddi aur ghamandi ho gaya hai.

Sumit apne Papa ki baat sun kar sirf muskura raha tha.

S. Dad:- Dekho abhi bhi hans raha hai...Kabhi to jimmedaar banne ki koshish kar.

Sumit abhi bhi muskura raha tha.

S. Dad:- Attitude to dekho saahab ki...Ek shabd nahi nikal rahe hai munh se.

Sumit:- Jawaab du to problem aur naa du to aur bhi jyada problem.

Sumit ka muskuraana jaari tha.

S. Dad:- Tu khud hi ek problem hai.

Itna keh kar Sumit ke Papa waha se chale gaye.

S. Mom:- Unki baat ka buraa mat maan...Wo to aise hi...

Sumit:- Maa...Kabhi Papa se mai naraaj ho sakta hun kya?

Rashmi:- Bhaiya aur aap tabhi se kyu mushkura rahe hai?

Sumit:- Papa ke baare mein soch kar...Jarur aaj kisi se kahasuni ho gaya hoga...Aur saara gussa mujh par nikal gaya.

Rashmi:- Mujhe laga aap Kirti ko dekh mushkura rahe hai.

Ye sunte hi Sumit aur Kirti dono Rashmi ko ghurte hai.

S. Mom:- Tu kuch bhi bakti rehti hai.

Rashmi:- Bhaiya aap dono ke bich kuch chal raha hai kya?

Sumit jo abhi paani pee raha tha...Ye sunte hi jor se usne cheekha.

Sumit:- Mera choice itna low kab se ho gaya?

Ye sunte hi Kirti Sumit ko gusse se ghurne lagti hai.

Rashmi:- Kya matlab?

Sumit:- Tu mujhe waise bhi half mind lagti hai...To teri dost ke baare mein aise hi andaaza laga sakta hun.

Kirti:- Kuch jyada hi judgemental nahi ho rahe hai aap?

Sumit:- Kahi se jalne ki boo aa raha hai.

Kirti bas gusse se Sumit ko ghurti hai...Sumit ke Maa aur behan ki waha hone ki vajah se kuch bol bhi nahi sakti thi.

Sumit:- Waise Rashmi tere iss chhote se dimaag me aise bakwaas idea aaya kaha se?

Kisi ladki ke pyar mein itna taakat nahi hai ki mujhe pata sake.

Kirti:- (In her mind) Baad mein bataati hun...Kitna taakat hai mere pyar mein.

Kirti abhi bhi Sumit ko ghur rahi thi.

Rashmi:- Koi bhi aap dono ko dekhega to yahi kahega.

Sumit:- Haay re jaalim duniya!! Kya jamaana aa gaya hai...Ek ladka aur ladki ki dosti aur saath ghumne aur baat karne par kya iljaam lag rahe hai...

Sumit isse aage kuch bolta usse pehle hi.

Rashmi:- Bhaiya kuch jyada hi overacting kar rahe hai aap.

Fir Sumit munh latkaane ka dikhawa karta hai...Iss par sabhi hanste hai.

Sumit:- Accha...Carry on...Mai jaa raha hun.

Itna keh kar Sumit jaane laga tabhi piche se uski Maa ka aawaj aaya.

S. Mom:- Kabhi kabhi padhaai bhi kar liya kar.

Piche mud kar Sumit apna fono haaath jod kar kehta hai.

Sumit:- Papa chale gaye...Abb aap suru mat ho jaaiye.

Fir Sumit waha se chala jaata hai.

Room mein kuch der bikhra hua saamaan ke saath experiment karne ke baad Sumit ko pyas lagta hai...Bottle khaali tha.

Jab wo paani ke liye niche kitchen mein gaya to waha par abhi bhi uski Maa aur Kirti thhe.

Dono kaam karte hue apne baaton mein hi lagi hui thhi...Sumit ki taraf unka dhyan nahi tha.

S. Mom:- Keh rahi hun na...Mai kar lungi...Tu kyu pareshaan ho rahi hai?

Kirti:- Karne dijiye naa aunty...Accha lag raha hai.

S. Mom:- Abhi padhai likhai ka vakt hai...Kaha tu ye sab cheejon mein padi hai...Jaa jaa kar padhai kar.

Kirti:- Padhaai likhai to hoti rahegi...Ye sab sikhna bhi to jaruri hai.

Fir Sumit ki Maa Kirti ko pyar se sikhaane lagti hai...Aur Kirti bhi acche se sikh rahi thi.

Dono ki baatein sun kar Sumit soch raha tha.

Sumit:- (In his mind) Kitni jald kisi ke saath bhi ghul mil jaati hai Kirti...Aisa lag raha hai jaan pehchaan kuch dino ki nahi balki kayi saalon ki hai...Sahi hai.

Kirti:- Aunty...Pehli baar aayi hun yaha...Lekin aisa lag raha hai jaise mai bhi iss ghar ka hissa hun...Bahut accha lag raha hai aap sabhi ke saath.

S. Mom:- Hume bhi bahut accha lag raha hai...Tere hone se ghat mein chahal pehal bana rehta hai...Vaad mein bhi aati rehna.

Kirti:- Jarur aunty...Abb to vajah bhi mil gaya hai aane ki.

Kirti ne ye baat khud se hi kaha lekin piche khada Sumit bhi iss baat ka matlab acche se samajh raha tha.

Sumit:- (In his mind) Kuch bhi kar sakti hai ye ladki.

Sumit:- Kuch jyada hi maska lagaya jaa raha hai.

Kirti:- Jee nahi...Dil se kahi hui bilkul sacchi baat hai...Lekin jis insaan ke paas dil naa ho wo kya samjhe.

Sumit:- Dil to hai...Lekin uss dil ka kaam khoon ko sharir ki har ek ang tak pahunchaane ka hai...Naa ki faaltu ki baaton par emotional hona.

Fir Sumit paani bhar kar waha se chala gaya.

Kirti:- Kitna badtameez hai na ye?

S. Mom:- (With smile) Nahi badtameez to nahi lekin jo dil me aaye wo bol deta hai...Kuch vakt ke baad khud samajh jaaogi.

Sumit ki Maa ne ye keh to diya lekin wo khud bhi iss baat se anjaan thi ki Kirti Sumit ko kuvh jyada hi samajh chuki hai.


Sumit apne room mein pahunch kar lag gaya apne mission par...Mission Playboy.

Kuch der Shruti aur Preeti se chat karne ke baad usse boring sa lagne laga...Mobile ko side mein rakh kar wo sone ki koshish karne laga.

Lekin neeed itni jaldi aata kaise? Dhire dhire uske dimaag mein Kirti aur uski baatein aane lagi...Kirti ki baatein soch wo muskura raha tha...Abb Kirti mein usse kuch alag najar aane laga tha.

Baaki ladkiyon se alag...Bahut hi special...Pyaar mein pade hue ladke ke dil mein jo feeling apne pyar ke liye aata hai wohi feeling Sumit ko bhi aane laga tha.

Apna mobile utha kar wo mesaage karne lagta hai.

Hello.

Fir usse cancel kar ke likhta hai.

Kya kar rahi ho?

Ye bhi usse pasand nahi aaya...Isse bhi cancel kar ke.

Can we talk?

Send karne se pehle isse bhi cancel kar ke wo kuch likhta hai aur send kar deta hai.

Ye mesaage tha!!

I hope tumhare sabhi concepts clear hai...Agar koi confusion hai to kal puch lena.

Mesaage send hote hi Sumit ne khud ke sir par maara.

Sumit:- (In his mind) Ye mujhe ho kya raha hai...Aur ye bewkuffo jaise message kar diya.

Tabhi Kirti ka message aata hai...Ussi ki tarah khatarnaak.


Kirti:- Haan concepts to clear hai...Mai aap se bahut pyar karti hun aur aap bhi...Confusion bas ye hai ki aap kab mera proposal accept karenge. :D
 

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UPDATE 32

Agar koi ladki tujhe sacche dil se pyar kare to tu bhi toot kar usse pyar kar...Aur agar wo tujhe dhokha de to tu uski ....Khair chhod.

Ye soch Sumit ka nahi balki Ashish ka tha jo abhi usne likh kar Sumit ko fb me message kiya tha.

Ye dekh Sumit thoda mushkurata hai aur fir mobile side me rakhta hai.

Tabhi ek aur message ka notification aata hai.

Agar dil aur dimaag ke bich ladaai ho to uss vakt dil ka sunna...Agar faisla galat bhi ho jaaye to koi shikwa nahi hoga ki tune ye kyu kiya? Ek santushti milega ki tune apne dil ki baat suna.


Ye message padh kar.

Sumit:- (In his mind) Ye nahi sudhrega.

Fir wo bhi message type karta hai.

Sumit:- Abe chu...Ye loveguru banne ki bukhaar kab se lag gaya tujhe.

Ashish:- Jab se mere dost ko loveguru ki jarurat pada.

Sumit:- Tera message padh kar to lag raha hai ki tu mujhe single se mingle karwa kar hi maanega.

Ashish:- Jitna tujhe mai jaanta hun...Tu bhi mingle hona chaahta hai...Bas maan nahi raha hai.

Sumit:- Bhai bas kar...Abb psychologist mat ban.

Ashish:- Loveguru hi thik hun.

Sumit:- Accha thik hai...Sochta hun teri baaton ko.

Ashish:- Aise nahi...Pehle ek glass thanda paani pee kar dimaag ko bhi thanda kar...Aur fir thande dimaag se soch.

Sumit:- Bhaag kamine.

Itna likh kar Sumit net off kar deta hai aur apne soch me kho jaata hai.


At Dinner time.

Sumit aaj aur din ke mukaable thoda dhire se khaa raha tha.

S. Dad:- Pehle to padhai likhai me slow tha...Abb khaane mein bhi...Accha hai.

Apna khaana khatm karne ke baad Sumit ko ghurte hue wo bole.

S. Mom:- Kya aap bhi? Hamesha mere Sumit ke piche pade rehte hai.

S. Dad:- Haan tumhara hi laad pyar ne bigaad rakha hai...Jo itna jiddi aur ghamandi ho gaya hai.

Sumit apne Papa ki baat sun kar sirf muskura raha tha.

S. Dad:- Dekho abhi bhi hans raha hai...Kabhi to jimmedaar banne ki koshish kar.

Sumit abhi bhi muskura raha tha.

S. Dad:- Attitude to dekho saahab ki...Ek shabd nahi nikal rahe hai munh se.

Sumit:- Jawaab du to problem aur naa du to aur bhi jyada problem.

Sumit ka muskuraana jaari tha.

S. Dad:- Tu khud hi ek problem hai.

Itna keh kar Sumit ke Papa waha se chale gaye.

S. Mom:- Unki baat ka buraa mat maan...Wo to aise hi...

Sumit:- Maa...Kabhi Papa se mai naraaj ho sakta hun kya?

Rashmi:- Bhaiya aur aap tabhi se kyu mushkura rahe hai?

Sumit:- Papa ke baare mein soch kar...Jarur aaj kisi se kahasuni ho gaya hoga...Aur saara gussa mujh par nikal gaya.

Rashmi:- Mujhe laga aap Kirti ko dekh mushkura rahe hai.

Ye sunte hi Sumit aur Kirti dono Rashmi ko ghurte hai.

S. Mom:- Tu kuch bhi bakti rehti hai.

Rashmi:- Bhaiya aap dono ke bich kuch chal raha hai kya?

Sumit jo abhi paani pee raha tha...Ye sunte hi jor se usne cheekha.

Sumit:- Mera choice itna low kab se ho gaya?

Ye sunte hi Kirti Sumit ko gusse se ghurne lagti hai.

Rashmi:- Kya matlab?

Sumit:- Tu mujhe waise bhi half mind lagti hai...To teri dost ke baare mein aise hi andaaza laga sakta hun.

Kirti:- Kuch jyada hi judgemental nahi ho rahe hai aap?

Sumit:- Kahi se jalne ki boo aa raha hai.

Kirti bas gusse se Sumit ko ghurti hai...Sumit ke Maa aur behan ki waha hone ki vajah se kuch bol bhi nahi sakti thi.

Sumit:- Waise Rashmi tere iss chhote se dimaag me aise bakwaas idea aaya kaha se?

Kisi ladki ke pyar mein itna taakat nahi hai ki mujhe pata sake.

Kirti:- (In her mind) Baad mein bataati hun...Kitna taakat hai mere pyar mein.

Kirti abhi bhi Sumit ko ghur rahi thi.

Rashmi:- Koi bhi aap dono ko dekhega to yahi kahega.

Sumit:- Haay re jaalim duniya!! Kya jamaana aa gaya hai...Ek ladka aur ladki ki dosti aur saath ghumne aur baat karne par kya iljaam lag rahe hai...

Sumit isse aage kuch bolta usse pehle hi.

Rashmi:- Bhaiya kuch jyada hi overacting kar rahe hai aap.

Fir Sumit munh latkaane ka dikhawa karta hai...Iss par sabhi hanste hai.

Sumit:- Accha...Carry on...Mai jaa raha hun.

Itna keh kar Sumit jaane laga tabhi piche se uski Maa ka aawaj aaya.

S. Mom:- Kabhi kabhi padhaai bhi kar liya kar.

Piche mud kar Sumit apna fono haaath jod kar kehta hai.

Sumit:- Papa chale gaye...Abb aap suru mat ho jaaiye.

Fir Sumit waha se chala jaata hai.

Room mein kuch der bikhra hua saamaan ke saath experiment karne ke baad Sumit ko pyas lagta hai...Bottle khaali tha.

Jab wo paani ke liye niche kitchen mein gaya to waha par abhi bhi uski Maa aur Kirti thhe.

Dono kaam karte hue apne baaton mein hi lagi hui thhi...Sumit ki taraf unka dhyan nahi tha.

S. Mom:- Keh rahi hun na...Mai kar lungi...Tu kyu pareshaan ho rahi hai?

Kirti:- Karne dijiye naa aunty...Accha lag raha hai.

S. Mom:- Abhi padhai likhai ka vakt hai...Kaha tu ye sab cheejon mein padi hai...Jaa jaa kar padhai kar.

Kirti:- Padhaai likhai to hoti rahegi...Ye sab sikhna bhi to jaruri hai.

Fir Sumit ki Maa Kirti ko pyar se sikhaane lagti hai...Aur Kirti bhi acche se sikh rahi thi.

Dono ki baatein sun kar Sumit soch raha tha.

Sumit:- (In his mind) Kitni jald kisi ke saath bhi ghul mil jaati hai Kirti...Aisa lag raha hai jaan pehchaan kuch dino ki nahi balki kayi saalon ki hai...Sahi hai.

Kirti:- Aunty...Pehli baar aayi hun yaha...Lekin aisa lag raha hai jaise mai bhi iss ghar ka hissa hun...Bahut accha lag raha hai aap sabhi ke saath.

S. Mom:- Hume bhi bahut accha lag raha hai...Tere hone se ghat mein chahal pehal bana rehta hai...Vaad mein bhi aati rehna.

Kirti:- Jarur aunty...Abb to vajah bhi mil gaya hai aane ki.

Kirti ne ye baat khud se hi kaha lekin piche khada Sumit bhi iss baat ka matlab acche se samajh raha tha.

Sumit:- (In his mind) Kuch bhi kar sakti hai ye ladki.

Sumit:- Kuch jyada hi maska lagaya jaa raha hai.

Kirti:- Jee nahi...Dil se kahi hui bilkul sacchi baat hai...Lekin jis insaan ke paas dil naa ho wo kya samjhe.

Sumit:- Dil to hai...Lekin uss dil ka kaam khoon ko sharir ki har ek ang tak pahunchaane ka hai...Naa ki faaltu ki baaton par emotional hona.

Fir Sumit paani bhar kar waha se chala gaya.

Kirti:- Kitna badtameez hai na ye?

S. Mom:- (With smile) Nahi badtameez to nahi lekin jo dil me aaye wo bol deta hai...Kuch vakt ke baad khud samajh jaaogi.

Sumit ki Maa ne ye keh to diya lekin wo khud bhi iss baat se anjaan thi ki Kirti Sumit ko kuvh jyada hi samajh chuki hai.


Sumit apne room mein pahunch kar lag gaya apne mission par...Mission Playboy.

Kuch der Shruti aur Preeti se chat karne ke baad usse boring sa lagne laga...Mobile ko side mein rakh kar wo sone ki koshish karne laga.

Lekin neeed itni jaldi aata kaise? Dhire dhire uske dimaag mein Kirti aur uski baatein aane lagi...Kirti ki baatein soch wo muskura raha tha...Abb Kirti mein usse kuch alag najar aane laga tha.

Baaki ladkiyon se alag...Bahut hi special...Pyaar mein pade hue ladke ke dil mein jo feeling apne pyar ke liye aata hai wohi feeling Sumit ko bhi aane laga tha.

Apna mobile utha kar wo mesaage karne lagta hai.

Hello.

Fir usse cancel kar ke likhta hai.

Kya kar rahi ho?

Ye bhi usse pasand nahi aaya...Isse bhi cancel kar ke.

Can we talk?

Send karne se pehle isse bhi cancel kar ke wo kuch likhta hai aur send kar deta hai.

Ye mesaage tha!!

I hope tumhare sabhi concepts clear hai...Agar koi confusion hai to kal puch lena.

Mesaage send hote hi Sumit ne khud ke sir par maara.

Sumit:- (In his mind) Ye mujhe ho kya raha hai...Aur ye bewkuffo jaise message kar diya.

Tabhi Kirti ka message aata hai...Ussi ki tarah khatarnaak.


Kirti:- Haan concepts to clear hai...Mai aap se bahut pyar karti hun aur aap bhi...Confusion bas ye hai ki aap kab mera proposal accept karenge.:D
Bdiya update bhai ji
 

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Kirti:- Haan concepts to clear hai...Mai aap se bahut pyar karti hun aur aap bhi...Confusion bas ye hai ki aap kab mera proposal accept karenge.:D
:lol1: ye sumit ki soch se bhi aage ka reply
 

Mbindas

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Aur hamara confusion ye h ki aap kab updates ka flow sahi se banaenge. Bhai ese story chalti h to fir maza nahi aata h bhale hi aap har 2 din baad update dijiye par ek flow me chalaiye to achchha lagega.
Wese update mast hai.
:yourock:
 

syed arshad

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UPDATE 31

To kya socha aapne?

Raaste mein chalte hue Kirti ne pucha.

Sumit:- Socha to bahut kuch hai...Shaam mein cricket khelna hai...Waapas aa kar Papa ki daant sunna hai...Phir raat mein khaana khane ke baad movie dekhte hue soo jaana hai.

Kirti:- Mai mere baare mein puch rahi hun.

Gussa ka dikhaawa karte hue Kirti boli.

Sumit:- Mujhe kya pata tumne kya socha hai? Mai straight forward jarur hun lekin mind reader utna accha nahi hun.

Sumit ne hanste hue kaha...Wo jaanta tha Kirti ka reaction kya hone wala hai.

Kirti:- Straight forward nahi buddhu hai aap...Kuch samajhte hi nahi?

Kirti iss baar sach mein munh fulaate hue boli.

Sumit:- To tum hi samjhaa do.

Kirti:- Mai pucch rahi thi ki aapne mere baare mein kya socha...Matlab mere pyar ke baare mein?

Sumit:- Ye kya pyar pyar laga rakha hai...Pyar baccho ki cheej thodi naa hai.

Kirti:- Mai bacchi nahi hun...Aur aapka chehre ka daadhi munch dekh aap bhi bacche nahi lag rahe hai.

Sumit ne kuch pal Kirti ko dekha aur fir chup chaap aage chalne laga.

Kirti:- Aise ignore karne se aap bach nahi jaayenge.

Sumit:- Accha bataata hun...Buraa to nahi maanogi.

Kirti:- Bura kyu maanungi...Aap bataiye.

Thoda sharmaate hue aur besabri ke saath Kirti boli...Sumit ki munh se apna taarif sunne ki shayad kuch jyada hi jaldi tha.

Sumit:- Tum...Bahut acchi ho...Acchi baatein karti ho...Sabke saath hansi khushi rehti ho...Padhaai likhaai mein bhi kaafi tej ho...Dikhne mein bhi khubsurat ho.

Thodai padhai likhaai karo aur doctor woctor bano...Iss pyar mein kya rakha hai?

Ye jawaab sunte hi Kirti gusse ka dikhaawa karte hue Sumit ko maarne lagti hai aur Sumit bachne ke liye idhar udhar bhaagta rehta hai.

Sumit:- Tumne ye bataya nahi ki hum kaha jaa rahe hai?

Kirti:- Aapne bhi to mere sawaal ka jawaab nahi diya.

Iss jawaab par Sumit ne ek najar fir Kirti ko dekha aur sochne laga.

Sumit:- (In his mind) Kaafi tej hai ye ladki.

Kirti:- Lekin aapki tarah jyada tadpaane ki aadat nahi hai mujhe...Ye raha humara manjil.

Kirti ne ungli dikhaate hue kaha.

Thodi dur par ek mandir tha.

Sumit:- Ye tum...

Hairaani mein Sumit kuch bol bhi nahi paa raha tha.

Kirti:- Ye mat kehna ki aap naastik hai?

Sumit:- Aastik hi hun...Lekin hairaani ho raha hai ki tum mujhe mandir kyu laayi ho.

Pyar ka ehsaas dilaane wali thi naa...To socha kahi park le chalti, kisi pub jo mai jaata nahi...Yaa fir koi romantic place.

Kirti:- Dusro ko copy karne wali socha hai kya? Aap ki tarah hi unpredictable hun...Dekhte jaaiye kaise aap ko apne pyar ka ehsaas dilaati hun.

Kirti ne ek aankh dabaa kar kaha...Aur aage badh gayi.

Sumit:- Vajah to bataao.

Kirti:- Baad mein.

Sumit:- Chalo thik hai...Intejaar kar lete hai.

Waise bhi bahut dino baad Bhole Nath ki darshan hone wala hai.

Dono mandir ke andar chale jaate hai.

Sumit aankhein band kar.

Sumit:- Abhi tak life mein kisi cheej ki kami mehsus nahi hua hai aur naa hi koi khaas mushibat...Ye to nahi maangunga ki kabhi mushibat aaye hi naa...Agar aaye bhi to itna taakat jarur dijiye ki mushibat ka saamna kar paau.

Sumit ne apne man mein kaha aur aankh khol liya. Kirti ko dekha to wo abhi bhi haath jode band aankho mein kuch badbada rahi thi.

Fir Sumit waha se nikal kar gate ki taraf gaya.

Bas wohi khada ho kar Kirti ka intejaar karne laga.

Kirti ko dekhne mein wo kab itna kho gaya ki usko ye ehsaas bhi tab hua jab kisi ka thokar piche se laga...Ye ehsaas hote hi Sumit soch me pad gaya ki kahi uska Kirti ke liye attraction badh to nahi gaya...Lekin agle hi pal usne ye soch ko jhatak diya.

Sumit chaahe kitna bhi inkaar kar de lekin wo khud apne ehsaas se anjaan tha...Aaj ghar se nikla bhi to ye soch kar ki wo apne dost ke saath baahar ghumne jaa raha hai jiske saath usse baatein karna accha lagta hai, time spend karna accha lagta hai.

Lekin saath mein apne dil me aa rahe khayal ko bhi dabaa raha tha ki ye bas ek attraction hai.

Sumit fir Kirti ko dekhne laga...Koi jaldbaazi bhi nahi tha ki kab Kirti ka praathna khatm ho...Wo to bas usse dekhe jaa raha tha.

Jab Kirti ka praathna khatm hua aur wo waapas aane lagi tabhi achanak se uski do dost uske paas aa gayi.

Kuch der teeno ek dusre se baat karti rahi...Sumit ko abji bhi koi jaldbaazi nahi tha...Usse Kirti ka hansta hua ye chehra dekhne mein accha lag raha tha.

Fir teeno waapas aane lagi...Logon ke bheed mein dono ne Sumit ko notice hi nahi kiya...Aur gate ke paas Kirti se vidaa le kar dono chali gayi.

Sumit:- Kaun thi wo dono?

Kirti:- Meri dost...Megha aur Neha...Ek hi college mein padhte hai hum.

Sumit:- Mujhe introduce kyu nahi karwaya?

Kirti:- Kyu karwaau? Abhi aap mere hue bhi nahi aur aap chaahte hai mai unhe aap se introduce karwaau...Kahi unn dono ne aap ko pata liya to? Megha to thik hai...Mujhe Neha par koi bharosha nahi hai.

Sumit:- Kuch jyada hi soch rahi ho.

Kirti:- To aap ne khud hi kyu introduce nahi kiya?

Sumit:- Kuch self respect kuch personality hai mera bhi...Kisi anjaan logo ke saamne jaa kar kahu.

Hello, I am Sumit...What about you? Can we be friends?

Kitna cheap lagega.

Sumit ka expression delh Kirti bhi hasne lagi.

Kirti:- Aap unn dono mein itna interest kyu le rahe hai?

Sumit:- Nahi to.

Hairaani ke saath Sumit ne kaha.

Kirti:- Haan aise hi...Mere alawa aur kisi par aap ka interest nahi hona chahiye?

Kirti ne hukum diya.

Sumit:- Mera to tum mein bhi interest nahi hai.

Kirti:- Bahut maarungi.

Kirti ne aankh dikhaate hue kaha to Sumit ne bhi darne ki acting kiya.

Fir dono saath mein waapas chalne lage.

Sumit:- Tumne mandir mein kya praarthna kiya?

Kirti:- Yahi ki aap ke dimaag mein thoda akal aaye aur dil mein pyar bhar aaye.

Jawaab mein Sumit muskuraya aur fir.

Sumit:- Ye wish karne mein itna jyada vakt to nahi lagta.

Kirti:- Aur bhi bahut kuch maanga.

Sumit:- Sunne ke liye bahut vakt hai mere paas...Aaram se sunaao.

Kirti:- Ji bilkul nahi...Jis tarah se aap dil mein bahut kuch dabaa kar baithe hai waise hi mai bhi dil ki baatein dil mein dabaana sikh rahi hun.

Aapki hi student hun...Pehli mulaakat bhi ek teacher aur student ke roop mein hua tha.

Itna keh kar Kirti aage nikal gayi.

Sumit:- (In his mind) Mere hi takkar ki hai...Kabhi kabhi mere paas hi shabd kam pad jaate hai jawaab ke liye.

Sumit bhi fir teji se Kirti ke paas pahunch gaya.

Kirti:- Ek badlaaw aap mein maine laa hi diya.

Sumit:- (Hairaani se) Kya?

Kirti:- Jab se aap mere saath hai mobile ko ek baar bhi haath nahi lagaya...Warna har baar kuch na kuch chalate rehte the thodi thodi der mein.

Accha hai ki abb aap mobile se jyada mujhe sunte hai...Meri baaton ko.

Ye sunte hi Sumit ka hairaani aur badh gaya...Kirti ne sach hi kaha tha...Ek baar bhi Sumit ne aaj mobile ko haath nahi lagaya...Aur naa hi usse iss par koi dhyan raha.

Naa hi Shruti aur Preeti yaad rahi aur naa hi unki chat.

Kya sach mein uske andar ka playboy par lover bhari pad raha hai?

Yahi soch ke saath wo aage badh raha tha.

Dono raaste mein aise hi aage chal rahe thhe ki kisi ka najar dono par padta hai...Jo dono ko gusse ke saath ghur raha tha.

Nice Update Atul Bhai

Ab Yeh Ghusse Se Ghoorne Wali Nazrein Kiski Hai....Kahin Preeti Ya Shruti Mein Se Koi Na Ho.....Shayad Sumit Ko Dheere-Dheere Pyar Ka Ehsaas Ho Raha Hai....
 

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Agar koi ladki tujhe sacche dil se pyar kare to tu bhi toot kar usse pyar kar...Aur agar wo tujhe dhokha de to tu uski ....Khair chhod.

Ye soch Sumit ka nahi balki Ashish ka tha jo abhi usne likh kar Sumit ko fb me message kiya tha.

Ye dekh Sumit thoda mushkurata hai aur fir mobile side me rakhta hai.

Tabhi ek aur message ka notification aata hai.

Agar dil aur dimaag ke bich ladaai ho to uss vakt dil ka sunna...Agar faisla galat bhi ho jaaye to koi shikwa nahi hoga ki tune ye kyu kiya? Ek santushti milega ki tune apne dil ki baat suna.


Ye message padh kar.

Sumit:- (In his mind) Ye nahi sudhrega.

Fir wo bhi message type karta hai.

Sumit:- Abe chu...Ye loveguru banne ki bukhaar kab se lag gaya tujhe.

Ashish:- Jab se mere dost ko loveguru ki jarurat pada.

Sumit:- Tera message padh kar to lag raha hai ki tu mujhe single se mingle karwa kar hi maanega.

Ashish:- Jitna tujhe mai jaanta hun...Tu bhi mingle hona chaahta hai...Bas maan nahi raha hai.

Sumit:- Bhai bas kar...Abb psychologist mat ban.

Ashish:- Loveguru hi thik hun.

Sumit:- Accha thik hai...Sochta hun teri baaton ko.

Ashish:- Aise nahi...Pehle ek glass thanda paani pee kar dimaag ko bhi thanda kar...Aur fir thande dimaag se soch.

Sumit:- Bhaag kamine.

Itna likh kar Sumit net off kar deta hai aur apne soch me kho jaata hai.


At Dinner time.

Sumit aaj aur din ke mukaable thoda dhire se khaa raha tha.

S. Dad:- Pehle to padhai likhai me slow tha...Abb khaane mein bhi...Accha hai.

Apna khaana khatm karne ke baad Sumit ko ghurte hue wo bole.

S. Mom:- Kya aap bhi? Hamesha mere Sumit ke piche pade rehte hai.

S. Dad:- Haan tumhara hi laad pyar ne bigaad rakha hai...Jo itna jiddi aur ghamandi ho gaya hai.

Sumit apne Papa ki baat sun kar sirf muskura raha tha.

S. Dad:- Dekho abhi bhi hans raha hai...Kabhi to jimmedaar banne ki koshish kar.

Sumit abhi bhi muskura raha tha.

S. Dad:- Attitude to dekho saahab ki...Ek shabd nahi nikal rahe hai munh se.

Sumit:- Jawaab du to problem aur naa du to aur bhi jyada problem.

Sumit ka muskuraana jaari tha.

S. Dad:- Tu khud hi ek problem hai.

Itna keh kar Sumit ke Papa waha se chale gaye.

S. Mom:- Unki baat ka buraa mat maan...Wo to aise hi...

Sumit:- Maa...Kabhi Papa se mai naraaj ho sakta hun kya?

Rashmi:- Bhaiya aur aap tabhi se kyu mushkura rahe hai?

Sumit:- Papa ke baare mein soch kar...Jarur aaj kisi se kahasuni ho gaya hoga...Aur saara gussa mujh par nikal gaya.

Rashmi:- Mujhe laga aap Kirti ko dekh mushkura rahe hai.

Ye sunte hi Sumit aur Kirti dono Rashmi ko ghurte hai.

S. Mom:- Tu kuch bhi bakti rehti hai.

Rashmi:- Bhaiya aap dono ke bich kuch chal raha hai kya?

Sumit jo abhi paani pee raha tha...Ye sunte hi jor se usne cheekha.

Sumit:- Mera choice itna low kab se ho gaya?

Ye sunte hi Kirti Sumit ko gusse se ghurne lagti hai.

Rashmi:- Kya matlab?

Sumit:- Tu mujhe waise bhi half mind lagti hai...To teri dost ke baare mein aise hi andaaza laga sakta hun.

Kirti:- Kuch jyada hi judgemental nahi ho rahe hai aap?

Sumit:- Kahi se jalne ki boo aa raha hai.

Kirti bas gusse se Sumit ko ghurti hai...Sumit ke Maa aur behan ki waha hone ki vajah se kuch bol bhi nahi sakti thi.

Sumit:- Waise Rashmi tere iss chhote se dimaag me aise bakwaas idea aaya kaha se?

Kisi ladki ke pyar mein itna taakat nahi hai ki mujhe pata sake.

Kirti:- (In her mind) Baad mein bataati hun...Kitna taakat hai mere pyar mein.

Kirti abhi bhi Sumit ko ghur rahi thi.

Rashmi:- Koi bhi aap dono ko dekhega to yahi kahega.

Sumit:- Haay re jaalim duniya!! Kya jamaana aa gaya hai...Ek ladka aur ladki ki dosti aur saath ghumne aur baat karne par kya iljaam lag rahe hai...

Sumit isse aage kuch bolta usse pehle hi.

Rashmi:- Bhaiya kuch jyada hi overacting kar rahe hai aap.

Fir Sumit munh latkaane ka dikhawa karta hai...Iss par sabhi hanste hai.

Sumit:- Accha...Carry on...Mai jaa raha hun.

Itna keh kar Sumit jaane laga tabhi piche se uski Maa ka aawaj aaya.

S. Mom:- Kabhi kabhi padhaai bhi kar liya kar.

Piche mud kar Sumit apna fono haaath jod kar kehta hai.

Sumit:- Papa chale gaye...Abb aap suru mat ho jaaiye.

Fir Sumit waha se chala jaata hai.

Room mein kuch der bikhra hua saamaan ke saath experiment karne ke baad Sumit ko pyas lagta hai...Bottle khaali tha.

Jab wo paani ke liye niche kitchen mein gaya to waha par abhi bhi uski Maa aur Kirti thhe.

Dono kaam karte hue apne baaton mein hi lagi hui thhi...Sumit ki taraf unka dhyan nahi tha.

S. Mom:- Keh rahi hun na...Mai kar lungi...Tu kyu pareshaan ho rahi hai?

Kirti:- Karne dijiye naa aunty...Accha lag raha hai.

S. Mom:- Abhi padhai likhai ka vakt hai...Kaha tu ye sab cheejon mein padi hai...Jaa jaa kar padhai kar.

Kirti:- Padhaai likhai to hoti rahegi...Ye sab sikhna bhi to jaruri hai.

Fir Sumit ki Maa Kirti ko pyar se sikhaane lagti hai...Aur Kirti bhi acche se sikh rahi thi.

Dono ki baatein sun kar Sumit soch raha tha.

Sumit:- (In his mind) Kitni jald kisi ke saath bhi ghul mil jaati hai Kirti...Aisa lag raha hai jaan pehchaan kuch dino ki nahi balki kayi saalon ki hai...Sahi hai.

Kirti:- Aunty...Pehli baar aayi hun yaha...Lekin aisa lag raha hai jaise mai bhi iss ghar ka hissa hun...Bahut accha lag raha hai aap sabhi ke saath.

S. Mom:- Hume bhi bahut accha lag raha hai...Tere hone se ghat mein chahal pehal bana rehta hai...Vaad mein bhi aati rehna.

Kirti:- Jarur aunty...Abb to vajah bhi mil gaya hai aane ki.

Kirti ne ye baat khud se hi kaha lekin piche khada Sumit bhi iss baat ka matlab acche se samajh raha tha.

Sumit:- (In his mind) Kuch bhi kar sakti hai ye ladki.

Sumit:- Kuch jyada hi maska lagaya jaa raha hai.

Kirti:- Jee nahi...Dil se kahi hui bilkul sacchi baat hai...Lekin jis insaan ke paas dil naa ho wo kya samjhe.

Sumit:- Dil to hai...Lekin uss dil ka kaam khoon ko sharir ki har ek ang tak pahunchaane ka hai...Naa ki faaltu ki baaton par emotional hona.

Fir Sumit paani bhar kar waha se chala gaya.

Kirti:- Kitna badtameez hai na ye?

S. Mom:- (With smile) Nahi badtameez to nahi lekin jo dil me aaye wo bol deta hai...Kuch vakt ke baad khud samajh jaaogi.

Sumit ki Maa ne ye keh to diya lekin wo khud bhi iss baat se anjaan thi ki Kirti Sumit ko kuvh jyada hi samajh chuki hai.


Sumit apne room mein pahunch kar lag gaya apne mission par...Mission Playboy.

Kuch der Shruti aur Preeti se chat karne ke baad usse boring sa lagne laga...Mobile ko side mein rakh kar wo sone ki koshish karne laga.

Lekin neeed itni jaldi aata kaise? Dhire dhire uske dimaag mein Kirti aur uski baatein aane lagi...Kirti ki baatein soch wo muskura raha tha...Abb Kirti mein usse kuch alag najar aane laga tha.

Baaki ladkiyon se alag...Bahut hi special...Pyaar mein pade hue ladke ke dil mein jo feeling apne pyar ke liye aata hai wohi feeling Sumit ko bhi aane laga tha.

Apna mobile utha kar wo mesaage karne lagta hai.

Hello.

Fir usse cancel kar ke likhta hai.

Kya kar rahi ho?

Ye bhi usse pasand nahi aaya...Isse bhi cancel kar ke.

Can we talk?

Send karne se pehle isse bhi cancel kar ke wo kuch likhta hai aur send kar deta hai.

Ye mesaage tha!!

I hope tumhare sabhi concepts clear hai...Agar koi confusion hai to kal puch lena.

Mesaage send hote hi Sumit ne khud ke sir par maara.

Sumit:- (In his mind) Ye mujhe ho kya raha hai...Aur ye bewkuffo jaise message kar diya.

Tabhi Kirti ka message aata hai...Ussi ki tarah khatarnaak.


Kirti:- Haan concepts to clear hai...Mai aap se bahut pyar karti hun aur aap bhi...Confusion bas ye hai ki aap kab mera proposal accept karenge.:D

Yahan Tak To Kriti Kaafi Confident Thi....
Achanak
Aisa Kya Hua Ke Wo Sumit Ka Naam Tak Lena Nahi Chahti....Khair....Yeh To Aage Pata Chal Hi Jayega...Agle Update Ka Besabri Se Intezar Rahega Atul Bhai
 
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