Romance Ek Anokhi Jodi

[The Professor]

Hello Xforum ki janta!
Mai ek nayi kahani likhne jaa raha hun...ye meri pehli story hai..isse pehle maine kabhi koi kahani nahi likhi hai....maine xforum ke members se advice leke yaha pe kahani start krne ka socha hai....I hope ki aapko meri kahani pasand aaye...aap aapne reviews niche comment kar sakte hai..ki aapko ye kahani kaisi lagi...ye story short se medium range ki hogi...ye meri pehli koshish hai isiliye jyada lambi kahani likhne ka prayas nahi karne vala...meri kahani Hinglish mai hogi....and ye kahani fictional hai...agar isme se koi incident real life se match krta ho then vo bas ek conincidence assume kar sakte ho..is kahani ka udeshya kisike feelings ko hurt karna nahi hai....to ab bina koi der karte hue...kahani shuru karte hai!

 

[The Professor]

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[The Professor]

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Akelapan..ek aisi feeling..jo aapko andar se tabah kar deti hai....insaan life mai kuch bhi zhel sakta hai..lekin akelapan zhelna shayad hi kiske baas ki baat hogi..aur insaan sabse jyada akela tab mehsoos krta hai...jab uske gharwale..uske maa-baap bhi uska saath nahi dete...uske saath nahi hote....yehi akelapan mai bhi zhel raha tha..mai bhi mehsoos kr rha tha...

Aur is akelepan..is situation ka jimmedar mai khud tha...jo bhi hua..jaise bhi hua..sab meri ek galati ki vajah se..tab mujhe pata nahi tha ki ..ek galat kadam uthane se mere life mai uska kitna jyada impact hoga....lekin aaj..jab mai apne kiye pe sharminda hun..mujhe apne galti ka ehsaas ho chuka hai..mere haath mai afsos krne ke alawa aur koi option nahi bacha hai...

Wo kehte hai na...ek baar samay haath se nikaal jaye fir aap chahe jo bhi karlo...vo vapas nahi aata....

Mera naam Anvay hai....mai ek sadharan ladka hun dikhane mai average kad kathi ka...jaise har 10 maise 8 purush dikhte hai....usi tarah samanya...rang gora tha.....25 ka ho chuka tha....six pack abs to nahi the...kyuki mai kabhi gym gaya hi nahi..lekin body thodi fit thi...

Mai bed se uth ke baith gaya....is waqt subah ke 6 baj rahe the..mujhe to vaise bhi nind nahi ane wali thi...mai apne bed se utha...aur khidke ke pas jake khada hogaya...maine khidki ke parde hataye....bahar baarish ho rhi thi......jyada roshni bhi nahi thi..ghane badalo ki vajah se...mai firse apne soch mai dubb gaya....


Kuch saalo pehle mere paas sab kuch tha..lekin..mujhe us baat ki kadar nahi thi..mai jan na paya ki mere pass jo sab tha vohi asli sona tha....vahi zindagi thi.....agar tab usse pehchan leta..to na mai aaj itna akela hota..na mere maa baap mujhse dur hote...aur na hi vo mujhe aise chod kar chali jati....

 

[Siraj Patel]

FOR STARTING NEW STORY


HOPE THIS STORY WILL TOUCH OUR HEARTS ​

 

[The Professor]

FOR STARTING NEW STORY


HOPE THIS STORY WILL TOUCH OUR HEARTS ​

Thankyou brother...i will try my best ki ye kahani sabke dil ko chue

 

[Akki ❸❸❸]

for new story

 

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Akelapan..ek aisi feeling..jo aapko andar se tabah kar deti hai....insaan life mai kuch bhi zhel sakta hai..lekin akelapan zhelna shayad hi kiske baas ki baat hogi..aur insaan sabse jyada akela tab mehsoos krta hai...jab uske gharwale..uske maa-baap bhi uska saath nahi dete...uske saath nahi hote....yehi akelapan mai bhi zhel raha tha..mai bhi mehsoos kr rha tha...

Aur is akelepan..is situation ka jimmedar mai khud tha...jo bhi hua..jaise bhi hua..sab meri ek galati ki vajah se..tab mujhe pata nahi tha ki ..ek galat kadam uthane se mere life mai uska kitna jyada impact hoga....lekin aaj..jab mai apne kiye pe sharminda hun..mujhe apne galti ka ehsaas ho chuka hai..mere haath mai afsos krne ke alawa aur koi option nahi bacha hai...

Wo kehte hai na...ek baar samay haath se nikaal jaye fir aap chahe jo bhi karlo...vo vapas nahi aata....

Mera naam Anvay hai....mai ek sadharan ladka hun dikhane mai average kad kathi ka...jaise har 10 maise 8 purush dikhte hai....usi tarah samanya...rang gora tha.....25 ka ho chuka tha....six pack abs to nahi the...kyuki mai kabhi gym gaya hi nahi..lekin body thodi fit thi...

Mai bed se uth ke baith gaya....is waqt subah ke 6 baj rahe the..mujhe to vaise bhi nind nahi ane wali thi...mai apne bed se utha...aur khidke ke pas jake khada hogaya...maine khidki ke parde hataye....bahar baarish ho rhi thi......jyada roshni bhi nahi thi..ghane badalo ki vajah se...mai firse apne soch mai dubb gaya....


Kuch saalo pehle mere paas sab kuch tha..lekin..mujhe us baat ki kadar nahi thi..mai jan na paya ki mere pass jo sab tha vohi asli sona the...vahi zindagi thi.....agar tab usse pehchan leta..to na mai aaj itna akela hota..na mere maa baap mujhse dur hote...aur na hi vo mujhe aise chod kar chali jati....

Nice start men

 

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