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Bhai us team ka chhota sa hi role hai Jo aage Jake thodi der ke liye hi aayega......
Thriller DIL,DOSTI AND REVENGE (action,thrill, suspense and romance)(Completed)
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UPDATE 5
Vijay ke Ghar jakar mene uska haal chal pochha uski bhi haalat kharab thi. Thodi der baad me Ghar bapis aa gaya or fir isi tarah din gujarne lage or Mujhe fir haal hi me hui ghatnao ke bare me sochne ka mouka bhi mil gaya. Lekin koi lead nhi mili. Fir hamare clg selection ka result bhi aa gaya hum sab ko usme admission mil gaya tha humko sirf clg me Jake apne documents submit karne the. Humne 2 din baad Jane ka Tay kiya. Or fir hum 2 din baad clg Gaye apne documents submit karne ke liye. Baha jakar hamne clg dekha bahut hi khubsurat campus tha fir admission section ki taraf Gaye baha per apne documents submit kiye or hum log canteen me jakar baith Gaye thodi bhook bhi lag rahi thi humko to humne fir samosa order kiya or khane lage. Nasta karke hum log nikal gaye. Ghar pahuch Kar thoda aaram kiya or fir sham ko Vijay ka phone aaya ki chal party karte hai mene bhi haa bol diya sham ko hum teeno pub Gaye or baha per khob party ki dance kiya Vijay ne Mujhe jabardasti beer pila di jisse Mujhe halka halka Nasha hone laga lekin fir bhi me control me tha. Bahi per hame Riya mili Jo Radha ki friend thi usse bato bato me pata Chala ki usne bhi hamare sath hi admission liya hai.hum bahut khus the ki hamare group ek sath hai lekin vo hamare sath jyada time nahi bitati thi pata nahi kyu. Fir hume raat kafi ho gayi thi to mene Vijay se Ghar chale ko kaha to vo maan gaya or hum car se Ghar ke liye nikal Gaye. Hum ja hi rahe the ki hame bahut tez awaj aayi jaise patakha phoota ho Mujhe laga Sayed tyre phat gaya hoga to mene car roki or neeche utar Kar dekha to sab sahi tha. Mene socha koi Sayed patakha hi phota hoga. lekin thodi duri par Mujhe ek saya sa dikha Jo ladkhada ka chal Raha tha or aage jakar vo gir gaya Mujhe laga kuch hua hoga to me or Vijay uski taraf badne lage. Uske pass jakar dekha to vo ek aurat thi. Mene usko hilaya to vo thodi hili. Fir Maine usko palta to usko dekhkar main or Vijay dono chok gaye. Kyuki ye bahi thi Jo hame rajesthan me mili thi.kya naam tha uska ha yaad aaya CHANDRIKA. Mene or Vijay ne unko Sahara diya to mere hath per kuch geela geela lag gaya mene dekha to vo khoon tha mene unko palat Kar dekha to baha goli ka Nissan tha. Mujhe samaj me aa gaya ki inko kisi ne goli Mari hai. Mene unko thoda hosh me laya to vo Mujhe dekhkar pehchan gayi or boli
CHANDRIKA- Surya beta achha hua tum Mujhe mil Gaye me tumse hi Milne aa rahi thi lekin pata nahi unko kaise pata chal gaya or unhone Mujhe goli maar di.
Main- aapko kuch nahi hoga aunty me abhi aapko hospital le chalta hu aap Bach jayengi
CHANDRIKA- beta Mera time aa gaya hai. Me tumhe kuch batana chahti hu Meri baat dhyan se sunna
Main- ha me sun Raha hu aunty aap boliye
CHANDRIKA- beta tumhare maa Papa ka khoon hua tha unke kisi dushman ne tumhare pore pariwar ko Jala Kar maar dala beta.
Ye sunke mera mind bilkul sunn ho gaya Mujhe pata nahi Kya ho gaya me ekdum se tehar sa gaya Mera dimaag bilkul blank ho gaya or Meri muthhi apne aap bandh gayi. Tabhi Mujhe Vijay na hilaaya to me hosh me aaya mere aankho se apne aap aasu nikalne lage.
Chandrika- beta sambhalo aapne aap ko tumhe abhi bahut kaam karne hai in aasuo ko yu mat behne do inko apna hathiya banana hai tumhe.
Mene apne aasu pochhe or unse pochha
Main- aap ye sab kaise janti hai aap hai kon
Chandrika- beta me tumhari MOSI hu tumhari MAA ki sagi bahen. Or beta jab ye sab hua tab me baha moujood thi Maine hi tumko sab se bachakar Bahar nikala tha lekin tabhi kisi ne hame dekhliya or usne goli Chala di Jo Mujhe lagi or tum mere hath se chhot Gaye jisse tum ek pathar se takra Gaye or tum behosh ho Gaye jab vo karib aaye to hum dono ko mara jaan Kar vo log chale gaye.or itna kehkar vo shant ho gayi or apni ukhdi saso ko sambhalne lagi mene turant hi unko uthaya or gadi ki taraf bhaga or unko peechhe ki seet paer Lita diya or gadi ko bhagane laga hospital ki taraf karib 20 minutes me hum hospital pahuch Gaye mene unko uthaya or stretcher per Lita Kar Ander le gaya or Vijay ko doctar ko bulane ko bol diya thodi der baad ek doctar aaya usne mosi ki navj check ki dill ki dhadkan check ki or fir bolne laga ki sorry aapko aane me Jara si der ho gyi ab ye nahi rahi. The Patient Is No More
Ye sunke me bahi baith ke rone laga to Radha or vijay Mujhe sambhalne lage me poora toot Chuka tha me chup hi nahi ho Raha tha to Radha ne turant hi bua ko call Kar diya or yaha ki haalat ke bare me bataya to unhone kaha ki vo aa rahi hai or phone kaat diya. Thodi der baad bua or fufa bhagte bhagte aaye or bua ne Mujhe gale laga liya Mujhe samjhane lagi ki sab thik ho jayega.bua ke samjhane se or unki baho me Mujhe sukoon Mila to me thodi der me chup ho gaya or bua ne pochha ki ye sab hua kaise to Vijay ne unhe pori Kahani Bata di even rajesthan wali bhi. Bua ne jab suna ki ye aurat chandrika hai to vo usko dekhne lagi or dekh Kar hi pehchan gyi ki yahi chandrika hai Matlab unhone Jo bola wo Sach tha. Ye sochkar bua bhi rone lagi or unko dekhkar Mujhe bhi Rona aa gaya. Or mere sath Radha bhi rone lagi. Thodi der Tak hum rote rahe fir fufa or Vijay ne hame shant karwaya or hame Ghar le aaye. Ghar aakar me bua ki godi me sar rakh Kar so gaya. Subah jab Meri aankhe khuli to pore Ghar me matam chhaya hua tha jise Mujhe fir ek baar raat ki ghatna yaad aa gayi or Meri aankhe fir nam ho gayi tabhi ek ambulance Ghar me aayi or usme se mosi ki lash nikali gayi fir unka antim sanskaar kiya gaya. Maine unko mukhagni di or fir rone laga. Mujhe ye afsos ho Raha tha ki me unko bacha nahi paya or unhone Meri khatir apni jaan de di.fir kuch din Tak Ghar me aisa hi matam chhaya Raha me bhi dhere dhere is se ubarne laga tha or Maine man hi man ye nirnay le liya tha ki mere pariwar ko jisne bhi maara hai unko me pataal se bhi dhoond Kar maar dalunga apne hi hatho se. Lekin Mujhe ye nahi pata tha ki vo log hai kon. Mujhe bua se bhi kuch pochhna tha lekin abhi haalat thik nahi the isliye mene apne REVENGE KO sahi time KE liye apne dil ke andar hi daba diya tha.
To be continued.................
Vijay ke Ghar jakar mene uska haal chal pochha uski bhi haalat kharab thi. Thodi der baad me Ghar bapis aa gaya or fir isi tarah din gujarne lage or Mujhe fir haal hi me hui ghatnao ke bare me sochne ka mouka bhi mil gaya. Lekin koi lead nhi mili. Fir hamare clg selection ka result bhi aa gaya hum sab ko usme admission mil gaya tha humko sirf clg me Jake apne documents submit karne the. Humne 2 din baad Jane ka Tay kiya. Or fir hum 2 din baad clg Gaye apne documents submit karne ke liye. Baha jakar hamne clg dekha bahut hi khubsurat campus tha fir admission section ki taraf Gaye baha per apne documents submit kiye or hum log canteen me jakar baith Gaye thodi bhook bhi lag rahi thi humko to humne fir samosa order kiya or khane lage. Nasta karke hum log nikal gaye. Ghar pahuch Kar thoda aaram kiya or fir sham ko Vijay ka phone aaya ki chal party karte hai mene bhi haa bol diya sham ko hum teeno pub Gaye or baha per khob party ki dance kiya Vijay ne Mujhe jabardasti beer pila di jisse Mujhe halka halka Nasha hone laga lekin fir bhi me control me tha. Bahi per hame Riya mili Jo Radha ki friend thi usse bato bato me pata Chala ki usne bhi hamare sath hi admission liya hai.hum bahut khus the ki hamare group ek sath hai lekin vo hamare sath jyada time nahi bitati thi pata nahi kyu. Fir hume raat kafi ho gayi thi to mene Vijay se Ghar chale ko kaha to vo maan gaya or hum car se Ghar ke liye nikal Gaye. Hum ja hi rahe the ki hame bahut tez awaj aayi jaise patakha phoota ho Mujhe laga Sayed tyre phat gaya hoga to mene car roki or neeche utar Kar dekha to sab sahi tha. Mene socha koi Sayed patakha hi phota hoga. lekin thodi duri par Mujhe ek saya sa dikha Jo ladkhada ka chal Raha tha or aage jakar vo gir gaya Mujhe laga kuch hua hoga to me or Vijay uski taraf badne lage. Uske pass jakar dekha to vo ek aurat thi. Mene usko hilaya to vo thodi hili. Fir Maine usko palta to usko dekhkar main or Vijay dono chok gaye. Kyuki ye bahi thi Jo hame rajesthan me mili thi.kya naam tha uska ha yaad aaya CHANDRIKA. Mene or Vijay ne unko Sahara diya to mere hath per kuch geela geela lag gaya mene dekha to vo khoon tha mene unko palat Kar dekha to baha goli ka Nissan tha. Mujhe samaj me aa gaya ki inko kisi ne goli Mari hai. Mene unko thoda hosh me laya to vo Mujhe dekhkar pehchan gayi or boli
CHANDRIKA- Surya beta achha hua tum Mujhe mil Gaye me tumse hi Milne aa rahi thi lekin pata nahi unko kaise pata chal gaya or unhone Mujhe goli maar di.
Main- aapko kuch nahi hoga aunty me abhi aapko hospital le chalta hu aap Bach jayengi
CHANDRIKA- beta Mera time aa gaya hai. Me tumhe kuch batana chahti hu Meri baat dhyan se sunna
Main- ha me sun Raha hu aunty aap boliye
CHANDRIKA- beta tumhare maa Papa ka khoon hua tha unke kisi dushman ne tumhare pore pariwar ko Jala Kar maar dala beta.
Ye sunke mera mind bilkul sunn ho gaya Mujhe pata nahi Kya ho gaya me ekdum se tehar sa gaya Mera dimaag bilkul blank ho gaya or Meri muthhi apne aap bandh gayi. Tabhi Mujhe Vijay na hilaaya to me hosh me aaya mere aankho se apne aap aasu nikalne lage.
Chandrika- beta sambhalo aapne aap ko tumhe abhi bahut kaam karne hai in aasuo ko yu mat behne do inko apna hathiya banana hai tumhe.
Mene apne aasu pochhe or unse pochha
Main- aap ye sab kaise janti hai aap hai kon
Chandrika- beta me tumhari MOSI hu tumhari MAA ki sagi bahen. Or beta jab ye sab hua tab me baha moujood thi Maine hi tumko sab se bachakar Bahar nikala tha lekin tabhi kisi ne hame dekhliya or usne goli Chala di Jo Mujhe lagi or tum mere hath se chhot Gaye jisse tum ek pathar se takra Gaye or tum behosh ho Gaye jab vo karib aaye to hum dono ko mara jaan Kar vo log chale gaye.or itna kehkar vo shant ho gayi or apni ukhdi saso ko sambhalne lagi mene turant hi unko uthaya or gadi ki taraf bhaga or unko peechhe ki seet paer Lita diya or gadi ko bhagane laga hospital ki taraf karib 20 minutes me hum hospital pahuch Gaye mene unko uthaya or stretcher per Lita Kar Ander le gaya or Vijay ko doctar ko bulane ko bol diya thodi der baad ek doctar aaya usne mosi ki navj check ki dill ki dhadkan check ki or fir bolne laga ki sorry aapko aane me Jara si der ho gyi ab ye nahi rahi. The Patient Is No More
Ye sunke me bahi baith ke rone laga to Radha or vijay Mujhe sambhalne lage me poora toot Chuka tha me chup hi nahi ho Raha tha to Radha ne turant hi bua ko call Kar diya or yaha ki haalat ke bare me bataya to unhone kaha ki vo aa rahi hai or phone kaat diya. Thodi der baad bua or fufa bhagte bhagte aaye or bua ne Mujhe gale laga liya Mujhe samjhane lagi ki sab thik ho jayega.bua ke samjhane se or unki baho me Mujhe sukoon Mila to me thodi der me chup ho gaya or bua ne pochha ki ye sab hua kaise to Vijay ne unhe pori Kahani Bata di even rajesthan wali bhi. Bua ne jab suna ki ye aurat chandrika hai to vo usko dekhne lagi or dekh Kar hi pehchan gyi ki yahi chandrika hai Matlab unhone Jo bola wo Sach tha. Ye sochkar bua bhi rone lagi or unko dekhkar Mujhe bhi Rona aa gaya. Or mere sath Radha bhi rone lagi. Thodi der Tak hum rote rahe fir fufa or Vijay ne hame shant karwaya or hame Ghar le aaye. Ghar aakar me bua ki godi me sar rakh Kar so gaya. Subah jab Meri aankhe khuli to pore Ghar me matam chhaya hua tha jise Mujhe fir ek baar raat ki ghatna yaad aa gayi or Meri aankhe fir nam ho gayi tabhi ek ambulance Ghar me aayi or usme se mosi ki lash nikali gayi fir unka antim sanskaar kiya gaya. Maine unko mukhagni di or fir rone laga. Mujhe ye afsos ho Raha tha ki me unko bacha nahi paya or unhone Meri khatir apni jaan de di.fir kuch din Tak Ghar me aisa hi matam chhaya Raha me bhi dhere dhere is se ubarne laga tha or Maine man hi man ye nirnay le liya tha ki mere pariwar ko jisne bhi maara hai unko me pataal se bhi dhoond Kar maar dalunga apne hi hatho se. Lekin Mujhe ye nahi pata tha ki vo log hai kon. Mujhe bua se bhi kuch pochhna tha lekin abhi haalat thik nahi the isliye mene apne REVENGE KO sahi time KE liye apne dil ke andar hi daba diya tha.
To be continued.................
Hmm sach bolo to mujhe pehle sa hi shak tha ka us aurat ka hero ka sath koi gehra rishta ha ab pta chal wo mosi ha hero ki ab daikhna ha age kya hota ha
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UPDATE 6
Main kafi din Tak apni hi socho me hum Raha lekin koi rasta Mujhe nahi mil Raha tha or na hi Mujhe kuch samaj aa Raha tha ki aakhir Kya karu ki Mujhe kuch lead mile. Me fir se rajesthan Jane ki soch Raha tha. Mujhe lag Raha tha ki ho na ho ye sab bahi se suru hua hai isliye Mujhe kuch to baha per jarur milega. Lekin me aise hi bina bataye nahi ja sakta tha or na hi bua Mujhe Jane deti. Is liye me kuch or plan Kar Raha tha. Tabhi Meri Nazar news paper par padi usme ek artical chhapa hua tha usko mene ne utha Kar padna suru kiya vo ek bank robbery case per bassed tha jisme likha tha ki is pore case ko solve karne me ik detective ne madad ki thi uski jyada jaankari nahi di thi. Usko police walo ne secrate rakha tha mujhe kuch idea aaya Maine uska pata lagane ka Socha mene paper me us police wale ka naam dekha or usse Milne ke liye Ghar se nikal gaya me siidha us police inspecter A.P. VERMA se Mila uske station me
New character
A.P. VERMA - ye ek police officer hai kafi imandaar age 25 hight 5"11 kafi achhi personality hai.
Maine station me jakar inspecter ke bare me pochha to ik hawaldaar ne Mujhe uska cabin dikha diya Maine darwaje ke pass jakar knock kiya to andar se awaj aayi come in . Main andar gaya to usne mujhe dekha or baithne KE liye kaha.
A.P.- Kaho Mr. Kya kaam hai. Kuch report likhani hai Kya.
Main- nahi sir Mujhe koi report nahi likhani hai bus Mujhe us detective ka pata chahiye hai Mujhe usse kuch kaam hai
A.P.- sorry friend me isme koi help nhi Kar sakta uski identity secrate rakhi gyi hai me uska pata nahi de sakta tumko
Main- please sir Meri help kariye Mujhe usse milna bahut jaruri hai ek case Dena hai use
A.P.- lekin me kese maan lu ki tumko usko koi case Dena hai tum uske koi dusman bhi to ho sakte ho you.
MAIN- WHAT do u mean me aapko koi criminal lagta hu Kya.
A.P.- HA ho bhi sakte ho Kya pata.
MAIN- DEKHIYe sir main koi criminal nhi hu ek sarif khandaan ka ladka hu mere fufa ji ke sath rehta hu unka naam aapne Sayed suna ho unka naam hai Mahendra Singh.
A.P.- NAHI Maine nahi suna or agar suna bhi hoga to bhi nahi de sakta sorry
Mujhe laga ye mujhko aise pata nhi dega isliye Maine fir aapna phone nikala or kisi ko phone kiya
MAIN- HA uncle kaise hai aap me Surya bol Raha hu
Other- ha Surya me to thik hu tum batao aaj Mujhe kaise yaad kiya
Main- ha uncle Mujhe aapse thoda kaam tha isiliye Maine aapko call kiya tha
Other- ha bolo Surya sab thik to hai na any problem.
Main- no uncle everything is alright but sir Mujhe ek aadmi ki detail chahiye thi jiske liye me aapke inspecter A.P. sir ke pass aaya tha lekin vo Mujhe koi criminal samaj Kar Meri insult Kar rahe hai please do something please.
Other- unko call do
Main- ok uncle .
Maine fir phone ko us inspecter ki taraf badaya or kaha ki aapse baat karna chahte hai to usne mujhse phone le ke baat Karne laga
A.P.- hello kon bol Raha hai
Other- me commissioner of police bol Raha hu
Ap turant khada ho gaya or kaha.jai hind sir
Commissioner- ye me Kya sun Raha hu a.p. tum usko criminal bol rahe ho
A.p.- no sir darashal ye jiska pata maang rahe hai vo sir detective hai jisnne vo haal hi me robbery case ko solve kiya tha me to bus cross check Kar Raha tha ki koi gadbad to nhi hai
Commissioner- ok Jo bhi ho usko sorry bolo or usko jiska bhi pata chahiye dedo and aage kabhi bhi agar ye tumse koi bhi kaisi bhi help manage to tum Mana nahi karoge understand.
A.p - yes sir me abhi de deta hu
Ye keh Kar usne mujhe phone bapis diya fir Maine commissioner uncle ko thank you kaha or phone kaat diya.
Main- ab to koi problem nahi hai na sir aapko Mujhe uska pata batane me.
A.P.- no koi problem nahi hai àap pehle Bata dete ki aap commissioner ko jaante hai to me aapko pehle hi Bata deta aapko.
Main- me ye nhi karna chahta tha isiliye nahi bataya lekin aapne koi Chara hi nhi choda isliye karna pada.
Fir usne mujhe uska pata diya Maine unko thank you kaha and unse handsake karke Chala aaya bahar.fir main uske pate ki taraf Jane laga Jo yaha se thodi doori per tha baha pahuch Kar Maine uski agency ka bord dekha or fir uske office ki taraf jane laga. Baha Maine reception per pocha ki raj sir milege Kya. to usne kaha ki ha andar hai Main fir uske cabin ki taraf gaya or knock kiya. Andar se bahi come in ki awaj aayi me andar gaya. Usne mujhe dekhkar baithne ko kaha main baitha.
New character
Rajkumar.- ye ek private detective hai bahut hi sharp and handsome. Age 24 hight 6" isne Kai unsuljhe cases ko bahut hi Kam samaye me solve kiya hai
Main-.hello Raj sir Mujhe aapki madad chahiye hai
Raj- ok Kya madad Kar sakta hu me aapki
Main- darashal me aapko ek case dene aaya hu or me chahta hu ki aap usme Meri thodi madad Kare
Raj- Matlab me samjha nhi AAP hai kon pehle ye bataye
Main- Mera naam Surya Pratap Singh hai me yahi Mumbai me rehta hu lekin kuch dino se mere sath kuch ajib si ghatnaye ho rahi hai main unko suljhana chahta hu lekin family pressure ki bajah se me abhi kuch nahi Kar pa Raha hu isliye main chahta hu ki aap ye case ki sari guthhi suljhaye or Mujhe bataye.
Raj- ok aap mujhe suru se batao ki Kya ho Raha hai aap ke sath.
Fir Maine haal hi me hui ghatnao ko usko bataya ki or unse kaha ki aap pata lagaye kon hai inke pechhe.
Raj- hmmm.dekhiy Surya ji main aapki madad karunga kyuki Mujhe bhi abhi Tak aisa koi case nahi Mila jisme itna challenge ho isliye me aapki madad karunga.
Main-.thankyou Raj sir bus aapko poori secrately ye sab karna hoga kisi ko Kano kan khabar nahi honi chahiye ki aap mere liye kaam Kar rahe hai
Raj- don't worry aapko sikayat ka mouka nhi dunga. Or AAP Mujhe ye sir kehna band keejiye aisa lagta hai ki me koi Buddha hu.
Main- or AAP bhi Mujhe ye aap AAP kehna band keejiye. Call me Surya.
Ok fir main usse thodi der aise hi bate karta Raha or fir usko Bay bol Kar nikal gaya. Me Ghar pahucha to bua haal me hi baithi thi mujhse pochhne lagi ki main kaha gya tha. Maine kaha ki yahi ghumne gya tha thodi der unke sath baitha or fir oper aa gaya jaha Meri jaan mere kamre me hi baithi thi or Mera intjaar Kar rahi thi. Maine usko dekhkar hi usko apni baho me utha liya or ussko kiss karne laga. Thodi der baad humne kiss toda or bad per baith gaye.
To be continued..................
Main kafi din Tak apni hi socho me hum Raha lekin koi rasta Mujhe nahi mil Raha tha or na hi Mujhe kuch samaj aa Raha tha ki aakhir Kya karu ki Mujhe kuch lead mile. Me fir se rajesthan Jane ki soch Raha tha. Mujhe lag Raha tha ki ho na ho ye sab bahi se suru hua hai isliye Mujhe kuch to baha per jarur milega. Lekin me aise hi bina bataye nahi ja sakta tha or na hi bua Mujhe Jane deti. Is liye me kuch or plan Kar Raha tha. Tabhi Meri Nazar news paper par padi usme ek artical chhapa hua tha usko mene ne utha Kar padna suru kiya vo ek bank robbery case per bassed tha jisme likha tha ki is pore case ko solve karne me ik detective ne madad ki thi uski jyada jaankari nahi di thi. Usko police walo ne secrate rakha tha mujhe kuch idea aaya Maine uska pata lagane ka Socha mene paper me us police wale ka naam dekha or usse Milne ke liye Ghar se nikal gaya me siidha us police inspecter A.P. VERMA se Mila uske station me
New character
A.P. VERMA - ye ek police officer hai kafi imandaar age 25 hight 5"11 kafi achhi personality hai.
Maine station me jakar inspecter ke bare me pochha to ik hawaldaar ne Mujhe uska cabin dikha diya Maine darwaje ke pass jakar knock kiya to andar se awaj aayi come in . Main andar gaya to usne mujhe dekha or baithne KE liye kaha.
A.P.- Kaho Mr. Kya kaam hai. Kuch report likhani hai Kya.
Main- nahi sir Mujhe koi report nahi likhani hai bus Mujhe us detective ka pata chahiye hai Mujhe usse kuch kaam hai
A.P.- sorry friend me isme koi help nhi Kar sakta uski identity secrate rakhi gyi hai me uska pata nahi de sakta tumko
Main- please sir Meri help kariye Mujhe usse milna bahut jaruri hai ek case Dena hai use
A.P.- lekin me kese maan lu ki tumko usko koi case Dena hai tum uske koi dusman bhi to ho sakte ho you.
MAIN- WHAT do u mean me aapko koi criminal lagta hu Kya.
A.P.- HA ho bhi sakte ho Kya pata.
MAIN- DEKHIYe sir main koi criminal nhi hu ek sarif khandaan ka ladka hu mere fufa ji ke sath rehta hu unka naam aapne Sayed suna ho unka naam hai Mahendra Singh.
A.P.- NAHI Maine nahi suna or agar suna bhi hoga to bhi nahi de sakta sorry
Mujhe laga ye mujhko aise pata nhi dega isliye Maine fir aapna phone nikala or kisi ko phone kiya
MAIN- HA uncle kaise hai aap me Surya bol Raha hu
Other- ha Surya me to thik hu tum batao aaj Mujhe kaise yaad kiya
Main- ha uncle Mujhe aapse thoda kaam tha isiliye Maine aapko call kiya tha
Other- ha bolo Surya sab thik to hai na any problem.
Main- no uncle everything is alright but sir Mujhe ek aadmi ki detail chahiye thi jiske liye me aapke inspecter A.P. sir ke pass aaya tha lekin vo Mujhe koi criminal samaj Kar Meri insult Kar rahe hai please do something please.
Other- unko call do
Main- ok uncle .
Maine fir phone ko us inspecter ki taraf badaya or kaha ki aapse baat karna chahte hai to usne mujhse phone le ke baat Karne laga
A.P.- hello kon bol Raha hai
Other- me commissioner of police bol Raha hu
Ap turant khada ho gaya or kaha.jai hind sir
Commissioner- ye me Kya sun Raha hu a.p. tum usko criminal bol rahe ho
A.p.- no sir darashal ye jiska pata maang rahe hai vo sir detective hai jisnne vo haal hi me robbery case ko solve kiya tha me to bus cross check Kar Raha tha ki koi gadbad to nhi hai
Commissioner- ok Jo bhi ho usko sorry bolo or usko jiska bhi pata chahiye dedo and aage kabhi bhi agar ye tumse koi bhi kaisi bhi help manage to tum Mana nahi karoge understand.
A.p - yes sir me abhi de deta hu
Ye keh Kar usne mujhe phone bapis diya fir Maine commissioner uncle ko thank you kaha or phone kaat diya.
Main- ab to koi problem nahi hai na sir aapko Mujhe uska pata batane me.
A.P.- no koi problem nahi hai àap pehle Bata dete ki aap commissioner ko jaante hai to me aapko pehle hi Bata deta aapko.
Main- me ye nhi karna chahta tha isiliye nahi bataya lekin aapne koi Chara hi nhi choda isliye karna pada.
Fir usne mujhe uska pata diya Maine unko thank you kaha and unse handsake karke Chala aaya bahar.fir main uske pate ki taraf Jane laga Jo yaha se thodi doori per tha baha pahuch Kar Maine uski agency ka bord dekha or fir uske office ki taraf jane laga. Baha Maine reception per pocha ki raj sir milege Kya. to usne kaha ki ha andar hai Main fir uske cabin ki taraf gaya or knock kiya. Andar se bahi come in ki awaj aayi me andar gaya. Usne mujhe dekhkar baithne ko kaha main baitha.
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Rajkumar.- ye ek private detective hai bahut hi sharp and handsome. Age 24 hight 6" isne Kai unsuljhe cases ko bahut hi Kam samaye me solve kiya hai
Main-.hello Raj sir Mujhe aapki madad chahiye hai
Raj- ok Kya madad Kar sakta hu me aapki
Main- darashal me aapko ek case dene aaya hu or me chahta hu ki aap usme Meri thodi madad Kare
Raj- Matlab me samjha nhi AAP hai kon pehle ye bataye
Main- Mera naam Surya Pratap Singh hai me yahi Mumbai me rehta hu lekin kuch dino se mere sath kuch ajib si ghatnaye ho rahi hai main unko suljhana chahta hu lekin family pressure ki bajah se me abhi kuch nahi Kar pa Raha hu isliye main chahta hu ki aap ye case ki sari guthhi suljhaye or Mujhe bataye.
Raj- ok aap mujhe suru se batao ki Kya ho Raha hai aap ke sath.
Fir Maine haal hi me hui ghatnao ko usko bataya ki or unse kaha ki aap pata lagaye kon hai inke pechhe.
Raj- hmmm.dekhiy Surya ji main aapki madad karunga kyuki Mujhe bhi abhi Tak aisa koi case nahi Mila jisme itna challenge ho isliye me aapki madad karunga.
Main-.thankyou Raj sir bus aapko poori secrately ye sab karna hoga kisi ko Kano kan khabar nahi honi chahiye ki aap mere liye kaam Kar rahe hai
Raj- don't worry aapko sikayat ka mouka nhi dunga. Or AAP Mujhe ye sir kehna band keejiye aisa lagta hai ki me koi Buddha hu.
Main- or AAP bhi Mujhe ye aap AAP kehna band keejiye. Call me Surya.
Ok fir main usse thodi der aise hi bate karta Raha or fir usko Bay bol Kar nikal gaya. Me Ghar pahucha to bua haal me hi baithi thi mujhse pochhne lagi ki main kaha gya tha. Maine kaha ki yahi ghumne gya tha thodi der unke sath baitha or fir oper aa gaya jaha Meri jaan mere kamre me hi baithi thi or Mera intjaar Kar rahi thi. Maine usko dekhkar hi usko apni baho me utha liya or ussko kiss karne laga. Thodi der baad humne kiss toda or bad per baith gaye.
To be continued..................
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Thanks for your support Bhai......Awesome update.
Next update de diya hai........
Hmm mujhe lagta ha ab is detective raj ki mout pakki ha