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Thriller DIL,DOSTI AND REVENGE (action,thrill, suspense and romance)(Completed)

Aapko ye story kaisi lag rahi hai jarur bataye.

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Rahul0087@

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Zabardast update diye han aisa lagta ha jaise hero ka andar koi power ha jo sec ma hi sab ko mar gira raha ha dost agar tum is story ko fantsy bnane wale ho to mera pora support hoga tum ko
Sorry Bhai fantasy nahi hai...
Lekin SiFi jaroor hai. .........

Baki aap story me aage padhoge to aapko sab kuch pata chal hi jayega........


And thanks for your support Bhai...
 

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UPDATE 4






Wahi dusri or kuch log ek hotel ke kamre me baithe the. Tabhi ek aadmi unke beech aata hai Jo unka boss lag Raha tha. Hath me ek sigaar liye hue tha or aate hi usne bola

BOSS- kyu jaggu Kya hua aaj ke kaam ka

Jaggu- boss hamare sare aadmi mare Gaye hai.main badi muskil se apni jaan Bach ke aaya hu waha se

Ye sunke boss buri tarah choka or bola

BOSS- sahi sahi batao waha Kya hua tha

Jaggu- boss wo ladka kafi tez hai uski speed unmatched hai. Muskil se 5 second lage usko sabko marne me Mujhe to vo dikh hi nahi Raha tha ki Kya Kar Raha hai vo bus jaha se bhi gujarta ek laas padi milti baha per. Or apne mathe ke paseene ko saaf karte hue wo chup ho gaya.

BOSS- HMMMM to hum sahi aadmi ke peeche hai kyu

Jaggu- boss sahi ka to pata nahi lekin Mujhe lagta hai hum galat aadmi ko chhed rahe hai. Agar uske saamne 100 aadmi bhi khade ho Jaye to bhi usko jyada der nahi lagegi sab ko maarne me.

BOSS-(gusse se) jaggu tujhse jitna bola Jaye utna Kar Mujhe mat sikha ki Kya karna chahiye Kya nahi samjha.

Tabhi baha moujood ek aurat boli ke saant rahiye boss or tu jaggu usko Jo bolna tha tune bola ki nahi ki aise hi bhaag Kar aa gya bol

Jaggu- ha Maine usko vo sab Bata diya Jo AAP logo ne bola tha bolne ke liye.(gusse se) Or tu mujhse Jara tameez se bola Kar nahi to yahi patak Kar Tera rape Kar dunga samjhi.

Fir boss ne un sabko saant karwaya or next plan ke liye unko bola ki main call karunga tab Tak shant raho sab log samjhe. Ab jao yaha se. Fir sab log baha se nikal Gaye or fir boss ne kisi ko call kiya

BOSS- Bigboss hum sahi aadmi ke peeche hai ye bahi hai jiski hame talash hai

BIGBOSS- tumhe pakka pata hai na ye bahi hai

BOSS- ha Bigboss ye bahi hai Maine khud use parkha hai

BIGBOSS- to fir theek hai uske liye tumhe pata hai kise bhejna hai.

BOSS- Mujhe lagta hai uske sath 5,6 logo ko or bhejna chahiye. Vo ladka kafi tez hai.

BIGBOSS- ye sab vo khud dekh lega tum bus usko call karke sari detail Bata do. Ok ab call rakho.

Or fir Bigboss ne call rakh diya or boss fir kisi ko call karne laga

BOSS- suno tumhe abhi dusre mission per Jana hoga ye bahut jaruri hai samjhe

Unknown- per boss ye kaam bhi jaruri hai warna bahut loss ho jayega aapka

BOSS- tum uski fikar mat Karo tum turant jaypur pahucho or baha per tumhe target mil jayega or kaam kaise karna hai tumhe pata hi hai. baki details me tumhe bhejta hu ok ab jaldi niklo

Unknown- thik hai boss jaisa aap kahe me aaj hi jaypur ke liye nikal jata hu ok bye.

Fir boss ne call Kat kiya or usko kuch jaankari bhej di.


(Aap log ab tak to samjh hi Gaye honge ki ye log kis ki baat Kar rahe hai.ji ha ye log Surya ki hi baat Kar rahe hai or Jo jaggu hai vo bahi hai jisne subah Surya per attack karwaya tha.)


Udhar main apni jaan ko vaho me bhar Kar so Raha tha ki mere phone ki awaj se me utha or phone utha Kar dekha ki bua ka call aaya tha .

Main- ha bua Kya ho Raha hai

Bua- kyu re ladki mili to Mujhe bhool gaya 2 din se ek bhi call nahi kiya tune na hi bataya ki Kya hua fir subah ko ha

Main- Kya bua aap bhi are aapko kaise bhool sakta hu ab aap Meri hone Bali sasu ma ho.

Ye sunke bua khush ho gayi or bolne lagi ki

Bua- Kya tune Sach me uska praposal accept Kar liya

Main- ha bua kahi na kahi me bhi usse pyar karta hu or jab aapne apni sehmati de di to fir na kehne ka to sawaal hi nahi uthta to Maine apni Radha ko ha bol diya

Bua- hay jug jug jiyo mere laal ohhh sorry mere jamai raja..

Ye sunke main or bua dono ko hasi aa gayi. Fir thodi der or baat karne ke baad unhone Radha se baat ki or fir call Kat Kar hum log fresh ho Kar neeche aaye or nikal Gaye pink city ghumne ke liye. Raat ko bapis aa Kar hum sabne dinner kiya or so gaye.

Fir 15 dino Tak hum poora rajesthan ghoomte rahe or baha per koi bhi panga nahi hua or hum log bapis Jane ki tayyari karne lage kyuki 2 din baad hamara result aane wala tha. To humne UDAYPUR phone karke Kaka ko Bata diya ki hum yahi se bapis ja rahe hai or AAP kisi ko bhej Kar gadi ko bapis bula Lena. Kaka ne bhi ok bol diya or hum log bapis Mumbai ke liye udd gye via aeroplane. Ghar aake sabse mile or Jo Jo shopping ki thi sab KE liye bo unko de di. Bua Mujhe or Radha ko hamesha chhedti rehti thi jisse me bua se chhupa chhupa fir Raha tha. Fir aakhir kaar hamare result ka din bhi aa hi gaya or as usual mene school me top kiya or Radha or Vijay bhi top ten rank me aa Gaye the. Hamari jindgi filhaal achhi chal rahi thi. Subah subah Radha Mujhe good morning kiss karti jiski ab Mujhe aadat si ho gayi thi. Fir ek din fufa ne hamare aage ki padai ke bare me poocha ki Kya karna chahte ho to Maine bol diya B.SC COMPUTER karna chahta hu or mere jaise Radha ne bhi same course chuna kyuki vo mere pass rehna chahti thi hamesha. Or Vijay ne bhi computer hi chuna kyuki vo ladkiyo ko line marna chahta tha usne SOCHA ki agar mathematics liya or usme ladkiya nahi hui to vo Kya karega isiliye. To fir fufa ne hame kaha ki jis bhi college me admission Lena ho Mujhe Bata Dena me karwa dunga or bese bhi tum log topper ho to sabhi collage bale yahi chahenge ke tum log unke hi clg me admission lo. Or fir bhi koi problem aaye to Mujhe Bata Dena ok. Or ye kehke bo chale Gaye or hum clg select karne lage.or hame top ka clg mil bhi gaya R.K.GANDHI COLLAGE. Or hamne bahi clg select Kar liya ki usi me admission lenge. Fir humne do din baad online counsil me Jake apna apna form submit karwa diya or humne keval r.k.gandhi clg hi dala uska result 15 din baad aana tha to hum sab free Hoke ghumne lage. Aise ek din me or Vijay shaam ko tafri Kar rahe the ki Vijay mujhse bola ki yaar kyu na me karate classes join karlu kabhi agar self defense ki jarurat padi to kaam aayega. Mujhe uska idea bahut pasand aaya or mene kaha ki Radha ko bhi join karwa do. To bola ki sahi hai. Fir uske baad mene online check kiya to Mujhe 2 ,3 achhe school mil Gaye Jo behtreen martial arts ke school the to humne decide kiya ki hum Kal subah jayenge school ko dekhne ke liye or pasand aaya to join Kar lenge. Fir me Vijay ko bye bol Kar Ghar ki or nikal aaya apni bike per. Ghar pahuch Kar Maine ye idea bua or Radha ko bataya to Radha to kafi exited thi lekin bua nahi maan rahi thi tabhi fufa bhi aa Gaye or unhone jab Mera idea suna to unhone poora support kiya. Fir unhone bua se kaha ki self defense sikhne me Kya jata hai Kam se Kam kabhi agar ham na ho or hamari bitiya kisi musibat me pad Jaye to Kam se Kam bo apna bachav to Kar payegi. Or bua bhi fir thode na nukur ke baad maan gayi. Or humne subah academy Jane ki baat kaahi to vo maan Gaye or fir humne sath me dinner kiya or apne apne room me chale Gaye sone lekin sone se pehle Radha Mujhe apni good night kiss bhi de gyi or chali gayi. Subah me utha apna workout kiya or fir fresh Hoke neeche aaya nasta kiya or fir me or Radha nikal Gaye academy ke liye lekin raste me ek sunsaan jagah rok Kar Maine Radha se kaha ki sweetie aaj ka good morning to reh hi gaya. to bo Mujhe peeth per maarne lagi or kehne lagi ki yaha beech road per apni morning karoge. To mene kaha ki yaha karne me Kya burai hai Delhi aas pas koi bhi nahi hai. to usne turant Mujhe ek chhota sa kiss kiya or kaha ki baki ka raat me Kar Lena to mene bhi fir usko kuch nahi kaha or hum log sidhe Vijay ke Ghar chal pade, jaha vo hamara wait Kar Raha tha. Fir usne apni bike uthai or fir hum chal pade ek academy ki taraf jiska naam tha "RANA ACADMY FOR SELF DEFENSE" fir hum uske Ander Gaye jaha kafi bacche the hamari hi age ke or hum se CHHOTI age ke bhi. Fir humne kisi se pochha ki ye Rana ji kaha milege to usne ek office ki taraf ishara Kar diya. Fir hum us office ki taraf gye or humne nok kiya to Ander se Rana ki awaj aayi

Coming. To hum Ander Gaye jaha ek 28-30 Saal ka aadmi baitha hua tha. hamne use wish kiya or fir usne hame baithne ko bola or fir


Rana- kahiye baccho kaise aana hua

Main- sir darashal mere dosto ko yaha per martial arts ki classes join karni hai. Sir inko itna pakka Kar dijiye ki ye kaisi bhi situation ko sambhal paye.

Rana- tumhe nahi join karna

Main- sir me pehle se hi sakchham hu apni or apne pariwar ki suraksha ke liye. Main bus mere dosto ko bhi saksham banana chahta hu ki kabhi Meri gair hajiri me ye log apni suraksha Kar sake.

Rana- well agar tumhe aisa lagta hai to achhi baat hai or baki inlogo ki chinta mat Karo me inhe bilkul lohe ka bana dunga inhe koi touch bhi nahi Kar payega.lekin inhe ye promise karna hoga ki iska istemaal ye log keval apni suraksha or duaro ki madad ke liye hi karenge na ki bebajah kisi ko pareshan karne ke liye.

Ye bate sunkar Vijay or Radha turant hi bol pade ek sath

JI SIR HUM WADA KARTE HAI.

RANA- WELL to fir ye form bhar do or Kal se subha 6 am yaha per aa Jana tumhari training suru Kar dunga

Fir Vijay or Radha ne apne form submit kiye or fees bagera dekar hum log mall ki taraf nikal Gaye kuch shopping or ghumne ke liye

Baha pahuch Kar humne thodi shopping ki or fir bahi lunch kiya or fir Ghar ki taraf nikal gaye. Fir vo din bhi aise hi nikal gaya. Raat me dinner karke hum log sone chale Gaye lekin Radha mere kamre me aa gyi kehne lagi mujhe aap ke sath Sona hai. To mene kaha me bhi kab se soch Raha ki tum mujh per bilkul dhyan nahi de rahi ho. To bo naraz hokar boli ki main to pura dhyan deti ho AAP hi yaha baha ghoom te rehte ho. Or ye bol Kar vo Jane lagi to mene usko pakad Kar bilkul mujh se sata liya or ek lamba kiss karne laga usko thodi der baad jab hamari saas tutne lagi to mene usko alag kiya or usko sorry bola or kaha ki main to mazak Kar Raha tha tum kaha serious le rahi ho.to bo maan gayi or mujhko hug karne lagi or hum hug karke so Gaye. Subah Meri aadat ke anusaar me 5 baje uth gaya or Radha ko bhi utha diya. Thodi na nukur ke baad vo uth gayi to mene usko ek kiss karne laga thodi der baad mene kiss toda or usko fresh hone ka bola to chali gayi or mene fir vijay ko call kiya to vo bhi uth gaya tha mene usko bola Radha ko apne sath leke Jana to vo maan gaya. Or fir me fresh hone ke liye Chala gaya. Thodi der baad me fresh hone ke baad neeche aaya to Radha bhi neeche aa gyi thi or kafi exited thi ACADMY Jane ke liye.fir thodi der baad Vijay bhi aa gaya or vo Radha ko leke Chala gaya or me bhi apna workout karne ke liye Chala gaya. Karib 8 baje me naha dho Kar me neeche aaya nasta kiya thodi der baad Radha bhi aa gayi Jo kafi thaki hui lag rahi thi bua or mene usko baithaya. Or puchha ki kaisa Raha aaj ka din to vo boli ki haalat kharab Kar di us sir ne. To mene kaha ki dard to hoga hi beauty classes thodi hai karate classes hai Chalo ab jaldi fresh ho jao me nasta lekar room me aata hu fir tum aaj aaram karna.vo ok bol Kar uth gayi lekin badi muskil se chal pa rahi thi to mene usko Sahara diya or usko room me chhod Kar me neeche aaya or bua ne nasta ready kiya fir me uske kamre me gaya nasta le ke. thodi der baad bo bathroom se Bahar aayi or usko apne hatho se nasta karwaya or usko aaram karne ka bol Kar me fir Vijay ke Ghar nikal gaya usko dekhne ke liye…….
 
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