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Thriller DIL,DOSTI AND REVENGE (action,thrill, suspense and romance)(Completed)

Aapko ye story kaisi lag rahi hai jarur bataye.

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Rahul0087@

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Hello friends sabhi SE prerna leke ek story ko shuru kiya hai. I hope ki aap sab ko Meri story pasand aaye.

Ye story Mene kuch stories se inspire ho KE likhi hai. Lekin isme sare tadke Mene khud hi lagaye hai. Aap sab ko jarur pasand aayenge.
And agar aapko kahi bhi lage ki story me kuch or bhi ho sakta hai to Mujhe apne keemti sujhab jarur de. Me AAP sab KE COMMENT ka intjaar karunga.

And me Naya hu to aap sab apna sath mere sath banaye rakhe. Isse Mujhe story ko aage badane me bahut madad milegi.

So that's all........


Mera pehla update 5 baje Tak aayega........



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UPDATE 1


DIL, DOSTI, AND REVENGE



Hello friends main aap sab KE samne ek story le ke aaya hu is story me aapko romance, friendship,thrill, suspense. Sab kuch milega to aaiye suru karte hai is journey ko bus aap apna sath banaye rahe………..


UPDATE 1




Ye Kahani hai Surya ki Jo dosto ka dost hai or dusmano ka dusman hai.



INTRODUCTION



SURYA PRATAP SINGH- apna hero hai bahut hi shant swabhab hai. Or harami bhi kafi hai. Achhe achho ki pent utar de. agar koi chhed de to usko bhagwan hi bachye usse. age 19 hight 6" bady bhi achhi hai rang gora hai


JAY PRATAP SINGH- ye apne Surya ke PITA hai or inke bare me detail me Kahani ke aage pata chalega filhaal ke liye ye ek business man hai


PAYAL PRATAP SINGH- ye apne hero ki MAA hai or same inke bare me bhi aage pata chalega


(NOTE - Surya ke MAA PITA ki death ho CHUKI hai lagbhag 11 Saal PEHLE )


GARIMA SINGH- ye apne hero ki bua hai inhi ne Surya ko pala hai inke bhaiya bhabhi ki death ke baad ye Surya ki ekloti ristedar bachi hai. age 35 ek housewife hai inki kebal ek beti hai


MAHENDRA SINGH- ye Surya ke fufa ji hai GARIMA ke pati ye bhi Surya ko bahut pyar karte hai inhone hamesha use apna beta hi Mana hai ye ek businessman hai or kafi rich hai. Age 40


RADHA SINGH- ye Surya ki bua ki ladki hai ise Ghar me sabhi bahut pyar karte hai ye sabhi ki jaan hai khaskar Surya ki or kafi cute bhi hai. Age 18


VIJAY- ye Surya ka bachpan ka dost hai or ek bahut hi bafadar dost lekin kafi joshila hai baat baat per Josh me aa jata hai. Age 19 hai hight 5"10 handsome hai or iske pita nahi hai iski MAA ne hi isko paal posh Kar bada kiya hai


KANCHAN SHARMA- ye Vijay ki MAA hai age 36 apne bete se bahut pyar karti hai pati ki mout ke baad inhone insurance ke pese se ek beautiparlour khola or aaj ki tarikh me inke parlour ki 4 branch hai sehar me jisse inki sari jarurat pori ho jati hai ye Surya ke pariwar ke kafi close hai.


Kahani me or bhi kirdar aayenge jinka samay per intro deta rahunga.


Abhi abhi hamare 12th ke exam khatam hue the to hamari chhutiya chal rahi thi Ghar me bhi time nhi kat Raha tha to Socha kahi ghumne Chala Jaye.maine is bare me baat Karne ka Socha sab se to me neeche aaya jaha bua or Radha sofe per baithe hue the me bhi bua ke pass baith gya or unse kehne laga

Main- bua bahot bor ho Raha hu kyu na kahi ghumne Chala Jaye Kya bolti ho

Bua- are beta ye to achhi baat hai bese bhi tum logo ki chhutiya chal rahi hai jaha bhi Jana hai ghoom aao

Main- bua aap nahi chalegi Kya hamare sath

Bua- beta me tum jawàan logo ke beech Kya karungi tum hi log ghoom aao

Main- Kya bua aap kab se buddhi ho gyi abhi bhi aap kaiyyo ko ghayal kardo apni aadao se

Bua- hahaha hat badmass mere sath masti karta hai

Main- Kya bua Chalo na hamare sath

Bua- beta main chali gyi to tumhare fufa ka khayal kon rakhega

Isi beech Radha bol padi

Radha- Kya MAA Papa koi bachche thodi hai Jo unka khayal rakhna padega aapko chaliye na hamare sath

Main- ha bua chaliye na ab to is chhipkali ne bhi bol diya hai ab to chaliye

Radha ko jab Meri baat samajh me aayi to bo Mujhe takiye se maarne lagi or boli

Radha- Kya Mujhe chhipkali bola tumhe to me chhodugi nhi kaha jata hai Bach ke yaha aao

Main- are Radha main to majak Kar Raha tha please Mujhe chhod de are bua Mujhe bachao na aap kyu udhar baithi has rahi ho

Bua- tune hi use chheda hai tu hi jaan Kya karna hai me tum dono ke beech nahi aane wali

Radha- are MAA aap jao ise to me chhodugi nahi Mujhe chhipkali bolte ho

Main- are Radha maaf Kar or jaldi se decide Kar ki hame kaha Jana hai taki sav tyyariya ho sake

Radha- thik hai iss baar aapko me maaf kardeti hu lekin aage agar aapne Mujhe kuch bhi Ulta sidha bola na to aap dekhlena me aapka Kya haal karti hu.

Main- ok Meri MAA bus Kar ab

Fir Radha sochne lagi ki kaha jaya Jaye hamne bua ko kafi manaya ki aap bhi Chalo lekin vo nahi mani.fir Maine kuch soch kar kaha ki kyu na rajesthan chale tour per. Mera idea Radha ko bhi kafi achha laga.lekin mene jab bua ki taraf dekha to vo kafi tension me aa gyi thi rajesthan ka naam sunke to Maine unse poocha

Main- bua Kya hua aap kuch tension me lag rahi ho sab thik to Haina

Bua- ha beta sab thik hai me to bus yahi soch rahi thi ki tumhare fufa abhi Tak nhi aaye hai dekhna raat ke 9 bajne ko aaye hai nahi unka koi phone aaya hai na hi vo abhi Tak aaye hai

Main- to Kya hua bua kuch kaam me fas Gaye honge aa jayenge. Or aap bhi to call laga sakti ho na unko

Abhi me unko kuch Bolta utne doorbell baji or Radha ne gate khola to fufa aaye the

Fufa- are Bhai Kya ho Raha hai Kya baat chal rahi hai

Radha- kuch nahi Papa aap ki hi baat ho rahi hai ki aap abhi Tak kyu nahi aaye hai

Fufa- are vo me Jara kaam me fas gaya tha isiliye late ho gya

Fir bua uthkar gai or sabke liye dinner lagaya or meine dinner per fufa se bhi permission le li ghumne Jane ki unhone bhi ha keh diya lekin thodi der ke liye bo bhi tension me aa gye the rajesthan ka naam sunke. Mujhe kuch gadbad to lag rahi thi lekin Maine jahir nahi hone diye or fir humne dinner kiya or dinner ke baad me apne kamre me aake Vijay ko call lagya or usne phone uthakar hi

Vijay- sale kutte aa gyi Meri yaad sale 3 din se kaha tha na call kiya na Milne aaya bol kaha tha

Main- abe sale me to Ghar per hi tha tu pata nahi kha gol ho gya tha na mujhse Milne ka time hi nahi hai Tere pass

Vijay-are me to us preety ke chakkar Kat Raha hu Sali do din se idhar se udhar ghuma rahi hai ek kiss Tak na diya usne

Ye sunke Mujhe bahut hasi aayi or jor jor se hasne laga

Jisse vo or chid gaya Orr kehne laga vijay- Abe sale tu has mat vaerna Tera muh tod dunga me

Main- abe ja be ek ladki to patayi nahi jati Tere se or tu Mera muh todega. Chal ye sab chhod or apna saman pack karle

Vijay- kyu kaha Jana hai

Main- are Kal rajesthan chal rahe hai hum teeno ghoom fir Kar aayenge badiya tu bahi par koi ladki dekh Lena apne liye

Vijay- are wah yaar tune to Dil khus Kar diya ye bol Kar chal thik hai Kal milte hai fir ok bye

Main- ok bye Kal milte hai


Uske baad me packing Kar ke so gaya…. Subah uth Kar fresh hua exercise ki or naha dho kar niche aaya. Nasta Karne ke baad fufa me poocha ki sari tayyari ho gyi Jane ki to Maine kaha

Main- bus Kar hi Raha hu or Maine laptop khol Kar flight book ki or fir hotel dekhne laga to

fufa ne tok Kar Mujhe ek address diya or kaha ki ye apna hi Ghar hai yaha hi ruk Jana tum log or baha Ghar per gadi bhi hai to tum log usi se ghoom Lena jaha bhi Jana ho or Mujhe ek credit card bhi diya ki kuch Lena ho to Lena

Maine unko thank you kaha or fir me or Radha ready hokar sab ko bye bolkar Vijay ke Ghar ki or nikal gye use pic Karne ke liye. Baha me aunty se Mila or fir hum 3 no nikal gye airport ki taraf baha se flight pakad Kar hum pahuch gye sidhe UDAYPUR. Baha hame bahr hi ek aadmi Mila Jo board per hamara naam likhe hue tha, usne bataya ki hame receive Karne ke liye Aya hai fufa ne use call karke bataya tha ki hum aa rahe hai. Fir ham uske sath chal pade fufa ki Ghar ke taraf. Baha jakar hamne dekha ki ye Ghar nahi ye to ek bahut bada bungalow hai hum uske Ander gye or apna apna room set Karne lage tabhi Radha mere kamre me aayi or kehne lagi ki Mujhe aapke sath isi kamre me rehna hai to mene bhi jyada kuch nahi kaha or use ok keh diya jisse vo khus ho gyi or mere gale lag Kar mere gaal per ek kiss Kar diya. Fir hum neeche aaye or lunch kiya fir sham ko ghumne ka program banaya ki kaha Jana hai. Sham Tak hum free the to Vijay to apne kamre me Chala gaya sone ke liye or Radha bhi thaki thi to vo bhi chali gyi sone ke liye me bahi baith Kar Ghar ko dekhne laga ki thodi der baad Mujhe Ghar ke care taker dikhe jinhe mene rok Kar unse baat Karne laga

Main- or Kaka kaiso ho

Kaka- badiya hai Malik

Main- are Kaka ye Malik balik mat boliye achcha nhi lagta hai aap beta hi boliye

Kaka- thik hai beta

Main- or Kaka ab kabse he yaha per

Kaka-beta 20 salo se apke pariwar ke sath hu

Ye sunke me bura choka

Main- per Kaka meine to aapko aaj se pehle kabhi nahi dekha hai

Kaka- are beta aap yaha aate hi nahi hai to Kya dekhenge

Or ye kehke Kaka bahut tension me aa gye ki ye Kya nikal gaya unke muh se lekin baat ko badlte hue are beta ye kaha ki baat le Kar baith gye tum bhi or bataye kaha kaha ghumne Jana hai taki me driver ko Bata du vo aapko ghuma layega

Mujhe samaj me aa Raha tha ki Kaka mujhse kuch chupa rahe hai lekin abhi batana nhi chahte hai isiliye Maine bhi kuch jyada davav na banate hue unse kaha ki aap chinta mat kariye Kaka hum khud hi ghumne chale jayenge aapko kisi ko bhi takleef dene ki jarurat nahi hai fir Kaka thik hai bol Kar chale Gaye or me bhi aaram Karne ke liye apne room me aa gaya jaha dekha to Radha so rahi thi or bahut hi pyari lag rahi thi me bhi uske bagal me let gaya thodi der baad vo mujhse lipat Kar so gayi or me bhi

Sham ko hum log uthe fresh hokar niche aaye or car lekar ghoomne nikal Gaye. hamne thodi bahut shopping ki or mahel bagera ghoome to hame kafi raat ho gayi thi hum log aise hi faltu batein karte karte laut rahe the ki achanak………….


To be continued.............
 
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