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Fantasy Dhadkan ( Fallen love ) { Incest , Suspense , Thrill , Romance , Magic }

Do you like my story...?

  • Yes.... It's beautiful...

    Votes: 231 93.5%
  • Bad work it need improvement...

    Votes: 16 6.5%

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Ne dis jamais que je t'aime
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Superb update...
Thoda Thoda story boosa Gaya hoon bout gap hua update aane tho samajna thoda difficult horaha haii...
Koi baat nhi bhai dobara pdh lo..
Kuch time me sab smjh aa jayega...
And ty so much...

Keep smiling..
 

Naughtyrishabh

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Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Bahut hi mazedaar update jisme kayi jagah ki baten dikhi h.
Kiyara ke sath masti badhia.
Trisha or sonali ki baatcheet intresting.
Dusre grah ki batcheet dilchasp.

Last wala kuchh samajh me hi nahi aaya.
Lekin fir bhi Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar


Update... 62

Previous...



Kuch der aise hi rhne k baad maine use alg kr dekha toh shrm se usne apni aankhen band kr rakhi thi maine aage badh uski naak ko kaat liya..

Usne auccchhh kr ankhen khol di.. oR mujhe hasta paa kr mukko ki barsaat kr di..

Mai.. ( sab ready hai na.. it's show time )

Awaaj... Theek hai... abhi lo...


Ab aage...

Kiyara aabhi mujhe maare jaa rhi thi ki tabhi.. uske kaano me gaane ki awaaj sunai deti h jise sun woh ruk jaati hai....

Song...

Tujhe dekha toh yeh jana sanam....
Pyaar hota hai dewaana sanam...

Ab yha se khan jayen hum...
Teri bahaon me mar jayen hum..

Tujhe dekha toh yeh jaana sanam....

Jaise hi woh yeh gana sunti hai woh apne aas paas dekhne lgti h ki yeh awaaj aa khan se rhi hai... par ass pass dekhte hi woh shock ho jati hai.. qki woh iss samay ek theater mai mojood thi.. ABHI k sath masti krte samay usne dhyaan hi nhi diya ki woh khan phunch chuki h... But jab realize hota hai toh plt kr mujhe dekhti hai..

( Ab yeh toh sab jaante hi honge ki DDLJ pta nhi kitni hi ladkiyon ki fav. Movie hai.. toh sarkaar kiyara ki bhi yeh fav. Movie hai... Ab yeh baat ABHI ko kaise pta chali yeh btane lyk nhi h aap sab smjh gya honge.. BC.. DDLJ isi k chakkr mai ladkiyon k baav badh jate hai . )

Mai bhi iss samay use hairaan dekh muskura rha tha... Mujhe muskurate dekh woh khusi mai uchalti hui meri god mai baith jati hai or mere poore chehre pr apne hothon k footprints bna deti h.. ( BC yha bhi PUBG )

Kher mai use alg krta hoon.. apne pass waali seat pr baitha deta hoon.. woh bhi mere kandhe pr sir rkh kr baith jaati hai.. mai ishara krta hoon or movie shuru ho jaati hai... Kuch der mai secretary pop corn or cold drink dekr chala jata or hum dono movie dekte hue masti krte rhte hai...

Chaliye inko aaram se movie dekh lene dete hai hum dekhte hai humari Trisha madam kya kr rhi hai....

Trisha Sonali is samay college parking mai apni car ki trf jaa rhe hai...

Trisha.. yarrr sonu tu kuch na ... Woh mere se abhi bhi gussa hain.. tu bolegi toh woh maan jayenge..

Sonali... Na mai kyun bich mai aaun.. Jab bahu teko banna hai toh tu hi jhel mai kuch nhi bolne waali...

Trisha... Kr de na madad tu meri pyaari behan nhi hai... ( Yeh dailog toh har ladke ka hai )

Sonali... Na na na.. mai nhi aa rhi...

Trisha... Kutti kamini kuch help hi kr de... Kab se muh fula kr baithe hain woh...

Sonali ko uske upr dya aa jati hai...

Sonali.. aacha chal kaan la idhar... ( Uske kaan me kuch der baat krke ) smjh gai..

Trisha... ( Sharma kr ) hmmm ..

Sonali... Aaye haye meri laddo rani dekho toh kaise shrma rhi hai... Yeh shram subh nhi aayi jab apne sasur k samne ABHI se chipki hui...

Trisha... Kamini teri kyu jal rhi hai.. tu bhj toh apni saasu maa / maa k saamne kabhi bhi chipak jaati hai...

Sonali ko jaise hi woh baat yaad aati hai sharma jaati hai..

Trisha.. kya hua sautan ji.. saiyaan ji k sapne dekhne lagi...

Sonali... Kamini rukk aaj tu nhi bachegi...

Aise hi thodi bhut nok jhok k baad dono ghar phuch jaate hain.. jha Trisha aane waale samay k baare mai soch man hi man sharma rhi thi...

Ab chalte hai inse thoda door NEEL planet pr jha iss samay jasn ka mahoul chal rha hai... Quki unke maharaja Shadow kai saalo baad wapas apne desh laut aaye hai...

Shadow ko dekhte hi lakhon ki taadat mai maujood sainik or Neel grh ki janta jai jai kaar lagaye jaa rhi hai... Woh bhi sab ka abhi waadan swikaar krte hue aage badhte jaa rhe....

Chalte chalte woh ek behad khoobsurat ladki ko dekh ruk jate hai or unki aankhon se jhilmill aansun behne lagte hain...

Ki tabhi peeche koi unke kandhe pe hath rakhta hai... Woh plt kr uss skhas ko dekh fafak fafak kr ro padte hai...

..... Bas kr beta jo hona tha woh ho chuka hai... Ab tu aa gya na.. ( acche din bhi jarur aayenge ) sab theek ho jayega...

Shadow... Haan maa tum dekhna jld hi humari sophie humse baat kregi... maine Rakshak ko aakhir kaar dhund hi nikala mai usko jld se jld yha le aaunga... Pyaar se yaa fir talwaar se...

Sophia Mother... ( Kuch chintit hote hue ) mtlv woh yhi aayega humare grh pr..

Shadow... Haan maa tabhi toh hum Sophie ko theek kr payenge.. parantu aap kisi baat ko lekr chintit nazar aa rhi hain.. btayen kya baat hai...

Sophia Mother... Kuch nhi woh bas... Aise hi kher chodo aap bhut door se bharman kr aaye kuch samay vishraam kr lijiye.. hum aapse baadme milte hain..

Shadow... Are maa suniye toh...

Lekin woh bina baat sune hi chali gai... Shadow bhi baad mai baat krne ka soch fir khush hote hue ek baar Sophia ko dekh apne kaksh me chale jaate hai...

Wohi dusri trf ek aurat teji se apne kamre ki or badhi jaa rhi hai.. uske chehre pr khusi or ghabrahat dono hi maujood hai... Lekin jaise hi woh kamre ko kholti hai ek chota sa patthar unke sir ko jaakr lagta hai....

Or unke sir se khoon behne lgta hai... Ki tabhi unhe cheekh sunai deti hai...

Dooorr.... Rhoooo mujhseee.... Mereeee... Paasss mttt... Aanaaa.. warnaaa saaabkkkooo... Maarrr dungggijj... nikllll jaaaoooo yhaaaa seee... Tuummmm khoooniij hoo... Tuuummneee tumnnnnee...

Or rone ki awaaj aane lagti hai.. aurat woh manjar ko dekh do aansun gir kr kamre ko bahar se band kr chalti bni...

Wohi dosri trf mai or kiyara movie dekh waps ghar laut aate hain.. aaj kiyara bhut khush thi... Mai usko ghar drop kr jaise hi ghar phucha kj mere phone ke display pr message alert aaya....

To be continued....
 
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