Fantasy Dhadkan ( Fallen love ) { Incest , Suspense , Thrill , Romance , Magic }

[Nik c]

Superb update

 

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Boht achi update thi

Ty so much bhai...

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Mast update bhai ab to lagta hai kuch naya soch ke aya ho bahut kuch jud raha hai aur ye ladki kon hai dekhte hai aage

Ty so much bhai...
Soch toh maine pehle se rakha tha...
Bas thodi si dhool jam gai thi jo hta di maine... he he he..

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Awesome update bhai
Ab naye characters kon hai dekhte hai
Keep posting

Agr aap shadow ko nhi pehchana toh update 56 jaakr padhen.. page no. 141..
Usse aap samjh jayenge..
And ty so much...

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Superb writing bhai... excellent writing.. keep posting

Thanks bhai...

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Wow gajab ka update diya he bhai. Dheere 2 hi sahi lekin flow aa raha he. DDLJ ki baat hi mat karo yaar. Isane kayi jodiyan banayi he to kayi jodiya todi bhi he. Ab har ashiq to apni wali ko picture nahi dikha sakta na mall me jake. Ab ye neel garah aur shadow babu kaha se aa gaye . Sophiya ka kya chakkar daal riye ho.
Waiting 4 next update

Bhut bhut shukriya... Bhaiyaaaa...
Syd aap confuse hain... Aapko update 56 padhna chahiye samjh jayenge.. shadow kon.. neel grh or Sophia.. kon hai... Page no. 141.. till then cheers...

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Jldi start kro bhai..
Intjaar rhega aapkaa

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wonderfull update bhaiya ji mera ek sujhaaw hai aap update thoda normal tipe ka likhen matlab writing front jo hai na use simple rakhkhen jaise mere ye comment aapko dikh raha hoga aap chaho to word thode se aur bade kar sakte collar bhi koi use na karen simple jada achcha lagta padhne me bhi asani hoti hai..ab aate hain story ki taraf to bahut badhiya update hai bhai

Thanks Rahul bhai...
For a lovely advice... Bilkull mai aapki baat ko manuga... Mai toh bas fancy dikhne k lie iss front ka use krta tha.. abhi tk koi nhi kha aapne kha toh change kr denge kon si bdi baat hai...

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Superb update

Shukriya bhai...

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[Rahul]

waiting new update bhai