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superb update
jung ki shurwat ho chuki hai.
ravi ne kaal ko wapas bhej diya.
taki samay aane par usko bula sake
ravi or uski team murdo ki sena se ladte ladte talne wali thi.
tabhi ravi apne devil wale roop me aa gaya.
or usne sabhi murdo ko adesh dekar wapas jahan se aaya wahi bhej diya.
iceman jab suhana par hamla karne wali thi to
uske bich me rema aa gayi .
kya ravi ke devil wale roop ka adesh rekha manegi
:thanks: bhai.. behad shukriya
 
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update-111


Abh Agge....


Rema beintha gusse me icemon ko ghur rehi thi , jo bahut bada tha uske agge , uske piche suhana khadi thi , jo muskra rehi thi , use khushi thi uski beti uske liye yaha ladne ayi hai ,


"hashhh a gai lal chudail..." khushi apni talwar ka sahara leker niche bethte hue boli ,


ravi bhi muskra diya khushi ki bat sun kar , vahi lara , Eliza or baby bhi ik sath khushi ke pas pahunch chuki thi ,


icemon ne apni neli chamakti akhon se rema ko dekha , or phir apni left hath me pakadi apni badi si barfeli talwar uper ko utha li ,


usne jordar war rema par kiya , rema ke lal jadui baalo ne icemon ki talwar ko bech raste hi rok liya , or uski talwar ko charo traf se jakadte hue , uske hatho ki traf badne lage , icemon thoda ghabra gya ,


"uuuvofffff..." icemon ne tez sans bharte ghurate hue dusre hath se tez neli roshni ik rager light ki trah rema ke jism par mar di , rema ka adha sharir burf me jam gya , or uske baal jo talwar par lipate hue the voh bhi baraf me jam gye ,


tabhi suhana vapis dragon roop me akar icemon ke uper uddte hue , use apne moh se nikalti aag se jalane lagi , icemon ka chehra aag se ghir gya , voh aag ki tapash se piche hatne laga ,


tabhi baby ik dam se udd kar icemon ke piche khadi ho gai , voh icemon ko piche hatne se rokne ka pariyas karne lagi , tab tak rema ke baal khud ba khud aag ki trah garam hoker uski kaid se azad ho chuke the ,


rema ke lal baal abh dhere dhere icemon ki talwar se hote hote uske pore hath ko kande tak apne agosh me jakad chuke the , rema ke baal aag jaise garam hoker icemon ko jalane lage ,


lara bhi agge bad icemon ke sharir par apni talwar se war karne lagi , voh beintha gusse me icemon ki tangu par talwar ke war kiye ja rehi thi ,


khushi bhi aage badh abh icemon ke seene ko , apne hatho se nikalti aag se jalane lagi , bus ravi or Eliza abhi door khade the ,


ika ik ravi ne apni talwar vapis uthayi , or uddte hue icemon ke karib pahunch uske mathe ke bech , safad roshni wale us katav me ander tak ghusa di ,


icemon ka pora sharir ik neli roshni ko sokhne laga , sab abhi bhi us par apne war kar rehe the , par tabhi ik tez dhamake ke sath icemon ka jism fat gya , uska jism ik roshni me bhikar gya ,


us tez dhamake se sab door baraf ke khali median me ja gire , sabki akhen band si ho chuki thi , or voh sab jamen par besudh padhe hue the ,


ravi pet ke bal baraf par leta hua tha , usne behad dard me apni akhen kholi or apne dono hatho ko dabav deker uthne laga , jab ravi uth kar khada hua , uske samne uske jaisa hi ik lal aag se lathpath danav khada tha ,





ravi ne as-pas dekha , door door tak bus baraf ki jamen thi , or uche uche baraf ke pahad nazar a rehe the ,


icemon ke jism se nikalne wali vinashkari urza ne ravi or baki sab ko alag alag kar diya tha , abh unke samne jo dushman anne wale the , voh takat me , dimag me , har trah se unke jaise the ,


enke naye dushman , jo enko abh milne wale the , voh enke hi dusre roop the , abh enko khud se ladna tha , yahi dusra padav tha , shetian ne mayajaal rach diya tha , or sab es mayajaal me fas chuke the ,


vahi dusri traf...


khushi jo pehle se hi jakhmi thi , voh abh or bhi dard me thi , voh behad kamzori me , uth kar apne ghutno ke bal beth gai , khushi as-pas dekhne lagi , par as-pas koi nai tha , voh shetian ke mayajaal me fas chuki thi ,


khushi apni talwar ki nok jamen me gad , uske sahare uth kar khadi ho gai , voh as-pas dekhne lagi , usne apni akhen band ki , par icemon ka sharir fatne ka hi use nazar aya , uske bad , sabhi ke as-pas ik safad roshni phail gai thi ,


"raviiiiii , babyyyy kaha hooo..." khushi jor se chilati hui boli , par uski awaz koi bhi sun nai pa reha tha ,


achank khushi ne dekha , usse kuch door hawa me ik chakar sa bana , or usme se ik ladki chalang lagate hue bahar nikali ,





"tum..." khushi ke hontho se bus etna hi nikala , kyu ki voh ladki tamas roop me bilkul khushi jaisi lag rehi thi , kya yeh tha , khushi ka dushman ,


vahi dusri traf...


rema bhi baraf par giri hui thi , uske lal baal use jagane ki kossih kar rehe the , achank rema ki kali andhere jaisi akhen khuli , or voh uth kar khadi ho gai ,


lekin voh bhi es mayajaal ka hissa thi , voh bhi kaid ho chuki thi , use bhi ladna tha khud se , or khud ko sabit karna tha , yeh dusra padav par karke ,


achank asman se ik tez lal roshni jamen par giri , jab baraf ka uddta gubar shant hua , tab rema chonk gai , kyu ki uske samne bilkul uski hamshakal khadi thi ,





bus farak etna tha , uske baal kale the , lekin rema ke baalo ke jaise voh jinda the , or ik farak yeh tha uski akhen bilkul safad thi , voh behad gusse me rema ko ghur kar dekh rehi thi ,


"tum yaha kaise..." rema etna hi bol payi , ke us kale baalo wali ladki ne rema par hamla kar diya ,


vahi dusri traf...


suhana ik banjar jamen par giri hui thi , jo bilkul andhere ki trah kali thi , suhana ne uper ki traf nazar dali , asman bhi pora kala tha , suhana bhi abh mazajaal me kaid thi ,


"ufff pita ji ka mayajaal , ham toh mar gye ajj .." suhana apna matha peet kar boli ,



tabhi uske samne akar koi khada ho gya , yeh koi or nai , uski behan ruhi thi , ya yu kehle , ruhi (komal) ki hamshakal thi ,


"me ruhi se nai lad sakti..." suhana ne piche hatte hue bola , par tabhi ruhi hasne lagi , uski akhen lal roshni me chamak rehi thi ,


vahi dusri traf...


baby bhi akeli , ik ajeeb se mayajaal me kaid ho chuki thi , voh ik behad badi building ka terrace par khadi thi ,


"kaisi ho bitch..." tabhi ik awaz ne baby ka dhyan apni traf khich liya ,


baby ne palat kar dekha , uske samne kat khadi thi , aisa mehsus ho reha tha , baby wakht me bahut piche chali gai thi , voh insani roop me kat ke samakash khadi thi ,


kat ke sath 4-5 admi the , jo shyad uske bodyguard the , baby ke pas abh koi takat nai thi , voh shaktiheen thi , or use rasta dundna tha , es mayajaal se bahar nikalne ka , jo esi building ke kisi darvaje ke piche chipa tha ,


vahi dusri traf....


vahi ik or lara or Eliza ik kabile me fasi hui thi , unke charo or ninja senik the , jinke hatho me unki talware thi , kuch ke hatho me khulhadi jaise hathiyar the ,





"yeh ham kaha a gye..." Eliza apne saar par dono hath rakhti boli ,


"yahi se mane apni training pori ki thi , abh yeh log mere dushman hain , mane enke kanun or nizmo ko toda tha... " lara behad ghambir awaz me boli ,


"lekin ham toh jung ke median me the.." Eliza thoda ghabra kar boli ,


"shhh voh jung jadui thi , shetian ke khilaf , or ham kisi mayajaal me kaid ho chuki hain , es se hame hi bahar nikalna hoga..."


"tumara matlab en sab se lad kar..." Eliza kuch sochte hue boli ,


"mere khyal se han..." lara apni talwar apne hatho me kaste hue boli...


lara pori trah tyar thi , han bus halat thodi jakhmi thi , Eliza thoda ghabra rehi thi ,


vahi dusri traf...


voh nakabposh aurat jung ke medain me , joker or rekha ke sath khadi thi , par vaha abh koi nai tha ,


us nakabposh aurat ne apni akhen band ki , or komal ke mind ko mehsus karne lagi , tain ki usse bat kar sake ,


"komal vahi khadi thi , sab dekh rehi thi apni band akhon se , use pata tha , uska bhai kaha hai , uske dost kahe hain , voh sab janti thi , lekin use vishwas tha , uska bhai or baki sab , har padav par kar lenge , voh sahi salamat es mayajaal se bahar ayege..."


tabhi komal ke saar me thoda dard sa hua , lekin yeh dard behad metha sa tha , dimag me halke halke jatke lag rehe the , or yeh jatke behad anand sa de rehe the komal ko ,


akasar jo log dyan lagate hain , unko positive energy se halke halke bijili jaise jatke lagte rehte hain , lekin yeh kuch or tha jo komal samaz chuki thi ,


komal samaz gai ke kon usse bat karna chahta hai , komal ne apni akhen band kar li , par us aurat se koi bat nai ki , uske pora dhyan apne bhai par tha , voh use hi dekh rehi thi ,


"shhhhhhh , komal muzse bat nai kar rehi , me kuch der or intzar karugi , uske bad malik shetian ki agli sena prithvi par ayegi , ravi or uske bekar sathi , us mayajaal se bahar nai nikal payege..." voh nakabposh aurat thoda gusse me muskrate hue boli ,


"har traf tabahi ka manzir hoga , kyu ki khud se ladna asan nai hota , voh sab khud se ladna chah rehe , par kya voh jinda lot payege..." joker bhi haste hue bola ,


par rekha khamosh thi , uski koi awaz nai nikal rehi thi , kya usme koi badlav ho reha tha , yeh abhi tak ik rahasye bana hua tha....


to be counited...

 

aka3829

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Wah kya gajab ka maya jaal felaya he bhai. Ab sabko apne sabse bade dusman se ladna hoga. Jo ki kisi ka khud se mukabla he to kisii ka kud ke chahne wale se to kisi ka apne ateet se. Ab wo hi jitega jise samne wale ki ya fir khud ki kamjori pata hogi.
Waiting 4 next update
 

Bunny..

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Excellent mindblowing superb fantastic speechless update.....................?
Ab sbke samne unke clone jese danav hai mja aayega ki kese es mayajal se niklte hai.......................?
keep posting....................?
waiting for next update..................?
 

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update-111


Abh Agge....


Rema beintha gusse me icemon ko ghur rehi thi , jo bahut bada tha uske agge , uske piche suhana khadi thi , jo muskra rehi thi , use khushi thi uski beti uske liye yaha ladne ayi hai ,


"hashhh a gai lal chudail..." khushi apni talwar ka sahara leker niche bethte hue boli ,


ravi bhi muskra diya khushi ki bat sun kar , vahi lara , Eliza or baby bhi ik sath khushi ke pas pahunch chuki thi ,


icemon ne apni neli chamakti akhon se rema ko dekha , or phir apni left hath me pakadi apni badi si barfeli talwar uper ko utha li ,


usne jordar war rema par kiya , rema ke lal jadui baalo ne icemon ki talwar ko bech raste hi rok liya , or uski talwar ko charo traf se jakadte hue , uske hatho ki traf badne lage , icemon thoda ghabra gya ,


"uuuvofffff..." icemon ne tez sans bharte ghurate hue dusre hath se tez neli roshni ik rager light ki trah rema ke jism par mar di , rema ka adha sharir burf me jam gya , or uske baal jo talwar par lipate hue the voh bhi baraf me jam gye ,


tabhi suhana vapis dragon roop me akar icemon ke uper uddte hue , use apne moh se nikalti aag se jalane lagi , icemon ka chehra aag se ghir gya , voh aag ki tapash se piche hatne laga ,


tabhi baby ik dam se udd kar icemon ke piche khadi ho gai , voh icemon ko piche hatne se rokne ka pariyas karne lagi , tab tak rema ke baal khud ba khud aag ki trah garam hoker uski kaid se azad ho chuke the ,


rema ke lal baal abh dhere dhere icemon ki talwar se hote hote uske pore hath ko kande tak apne agosh me jakad chuke the , rema ke baal aag jaise garam hoker icemon ko jalane lage ,


lara bhi agge bad icemon ke sharir par apni talwar se war karne lagi , voh beintha gusse me icemon ki tangu par talwar ke war kiye ja rehi thi ,


khushi bhi aage badh abh icemon ke seene ko , apne hatho se nikalti aag se jalane lagi , bus ravi or Eliza abhi door khade the ,


ika ik ravi ne apni talwar vapis uthayi , or uddte hue icemon ke karib pahunch uske mathe ke bech , safad roshni wale us katav me ander tak ghusa di ,


icemon ka pora sharir ik neli roshni ko sokhne laga , sab abhi bhi us par apne war kar rehe the , par tabhi ik tez dhamake ke sath icemon ka jism fat gya , uska jism ik roshni me bhikar gya ,


us tez dhamake se sab door baraf ke khali median me ja gire , sabki akhen band si ho chuki thi , or voh sab jamen par besudh padhe hue the ,


ravi pet ke bal baraf par leta hua tha , usne behad dard me apni akhen kholi or apne dono hatho ko dabav deker uthne laga , jab ravi uth kar khada hua , uske samne uske jaisa hi ik lal aag se lathpath danav khada tha ,





ravi ne as-pas dekha , door door tak bus baraf ki jamen thi , or uche uche baraf ke pahad nazar a rehe the ,


icemon ke jism se nikalne wali vinashkari urza ne ravi or baki sab ko alag alag kar diya tha , abh unke samne jo dushman anne wale the , voh takat me , dimag me , har trah se unke jaise the ,


enke naye dushman , jo enko abh milne wale the , voh enke hi dusre roop the , abh enko khud se ladna tha , yahi dusra padav tha , shetian ne mayajaal rach diya tha , or sab es mayajaal me fas chuke the ,


vahi dusri traf...


khushi jo pehle se hi jakhmi thi , voh abh or bhi dard me thi , voh behad kamzori me , uth kar apne ghutno ke bal beth gai , khushi as-pas dekhne lagi , par as-pas koi nai tha , voh shetian ke mayajaal me fas chuki thi ,


khushi apni talwar ki nok jamen me gad , uske sahare uth kar khadi ho gai , voh as-pas dekhne lagi , usne apni akhen band ki , par icemon ka sharir fatne ka hi use nazar aya , uske bad , sabhi ke as-pas ik safad roshni phail gai thi ,


"raviiiiii , babyyyy kaha hooo..." khushi jor se chilati hui boli , par uski awaz koi bhi sun nai pa reha tha ,


achank khushi ne dekha , usse kuch door hawa me ik chakar sa bana , or usme se ik ladki chalang lagate hue bahar nikali ,





"tum..." khushi ke hontho se bus etna hi nikala , kyu ki voh ladki tamas roop me bilkul khushi jaisi lag rehi thi , kya yeh tha , khushi ka dushman ,


vahi dusri traf...


rema bhi baraf par giri hui thi , uske lal baal use jagane ki kossih kar rehe the , achank rema ki kali andhere jaisi akhen khuli , or voh uth kar khadi ho gai ,


lekin voh bhi es mayajaal ka hissa thi , voh bhi kaid ho chuki thi , use bhi ladna tha khud se , or khud ko sabit karna tha , yeh dusra padav par karke ,


achank asman se ik tez lal roshni jamen par giri , jab baraf ka uddta gubar shant hua , tab rema chonk gai , kyu ki uske samne bilkul uski hamshakal khadi thi ,





bus farak etna tha , uske baal kale the , lekin rema ke baalo ke jaise voh jinda the , or ik farak yeh tha uski akhen bilkul safad thi , voh behad gusse me rema ko ghur kar dekh rehi thi ,


"tum yaha kaise..." rema etna hi bol payi , ke us kale baalo wali ladki ne rema par hamla kar diya ,


vahi dusri traf...


suhana ik banjar jamen par giri hui thi , jo bilkul andhere ki trah kali thi , suhana ne uper ki traf nazar dali , asman bhi pora kala tha , suhana bhi abh mazajaal me kaid thi ,


"ufff pita ji ka mayajaal , ham toh mar gye ajj .." suhana apna matha peet kar boli ,



tabhi uske samne akar koi khada ho gya , yeh koi or nai , uski behan ruhi thi , ya yu kehle , ruhi (komal) ki hamshakal thi ,


"me ruhi se nai lad sakti..." suhana ne piche hatte hue bola , par tabhi ruhi hasne lagi , uski akhen lal roshni me chamak rehi thi ,


vahi dusri traf...


baby bhi akeli , ik ajeeb se mayajaal me kaid ho chuki thi , voh ik behad badi building ka terrace par khadi thi ,


"kaisi ho bitch..." tabhi ik awaz ne baby ka dhyan apni traf khich liya ,


baby ne palat kar dekha , uske samne kat khadi thi , aisa mehsus ho reha tha , baby wakht me bahut piche chali gai thi , voh insani roop me kat ke samakash khadi thi ,


kat ke sath 4-5 admi the , jo shyad uske bodyguard the , baby ke pas abh koi takat nai thi , voh shaktiheen thi , or use rasta dundna tha , es mayajaal se bahar nikalne ka , jo esi building ke kisi darvaje ke piche chipa tha ,


vahi dusri traf....


vahi ik or lara or Eliza ik kabile me fasi hui thi , unke charo or ninja senik the , jinke hatho me unki talware thi , kuch ke hatho me khulhadi jaise hathiyar the ,





"yeh ham kaha a gye..." Eliza apne saar par dono hath rakhti boli ,


"yahi se mane apni training pori ki thi , abh yeh log mere dushman hain , mane enke kanun or nizmo ko toda tha... " lara behad ghambir awaz me boli ,


"lekin ham toh jung ke median me the.." Eliza thoda ghabra kar boli ,


"shhh voh jung jadui thi , shetian ke khilaf , or ham kisi mayajaal me kaid ho chuki hain , es se hame hi bahar nikalna hoga..."


"tumara matlab en sab se lad kar..." Eliza kuch sochte hue boli ,


"mere khyal se han..." lara apni talwar apne hatho me kaste hue boli...


lara pori trah tyar thi , han bus halat thodi jakhmi thi , Eliza thoda ghabra rehi thi ,


vahi dusri traf...


voh nakabposh aurat jung ke medain me , joker or rekha ke sath khadi thi , par vaha abh koi nai tha ,


us nakabposh aurat ne apni akhen band ki , or komal ke mind ko mehsus karne lagi , tain ki usse bat kar sake ,


"komal vahi khadi thi , sab dekh rehi thi apni band akhon se , use pata tha , uska bhai kaha hai , uske dost kahe hain , voh sab janti thi , lekin use vishwas tha , uska bhai or baki sab , har padav par kar lenge , voh sahi salamat es mayajaal se bahar ayege..."


tabhi komal ke saar me thoda dard sa hua , lekin yeh dard behad metha sa tha , dimag me halke halke jatke lag rehe the , or yeh jatke behad anand sa de rehe the komal ko ,


akasar jo log dyan lagate hain , unko positive energy se halke halke bijili jaise jatke lagte rehte hain , lekin yeh kuch or tha jo komal samaz chuki thi ,


komal samaz gai ke kon usse bat karna chahta hai , komal ne apni akhen band kar li , par us aurat se koi bat nai ki , uske pora dhyan apne bhai par tha , voh use hi dekh rehi thi ,


"shhhhhhh , komal muzse bat nai kar rehi , me kuch der or intzar karugi , uske bad malik shetian ki agli sena prithvi par ayegi , ravi or uske bekar sathi , us mayajaal se bahar nai nikal payege..." voh nakabposh aurat thoda gusse me muskrate hue boli ,


"har traf tabahi ka manzir hoga , kyu ki khud se ladna asan nai hota , voh sab khud se ladna chah rehe , par kya voh jinda lot payege..." joker bhi haste hue bola ,


par rekha khamosh thi , uski koi awaz nai nikal rehi thi , kya usme koi badlav ho reha tha , yeh abhi tak ik rahasye bana hua tha....


to be counited...
Both hi vadiya update Hy veer g tareef k liey ilfaz nai hin
 

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update-110

Abh Agge....

ravi or baki sab tyar the , murda sena charo or se dhere dhere agge badne lagi , lekin unko rokna behad jaruri tha ,

"khushi , charo traf jalti aag ka ik chakar bana do , tain ki voh agge na badh paye..." ravi ne chilate hue bola ,



"hmm..." khushi ne etna bola , or hawa me uddte hue murda sena se kuch agge jalti hui aag ka ik gehra bana diya , tain ki unke kadam vahi tham jaye ,

but ravi herian reh gya , kyu ki voh jalte hue bhi agge badh rehe the ,

"enko mout ka koi dar nai..." suhana ne ravi ke chehre ki traf dekhte hue bola ,

"hame bhi nai hai , chalo enke bheter jaker enka khatma karte hain..." ravi ne thoda muskrate hue bola , uski talwar bhi aag me jalne lagi thi ,

"pita ji app jao , mere khyal se yeh pehla padhav hai jung ka , apki jarurat ke wakht apko yad karuga , enko ham dekh lenge..." ravi ne kaal ki traf dekhte hue bola , yeh uska ik eham plan tha , ravi ki bat sun kaal vaha se gyab ho gya ,

ravi or khushi murda sena ki traf bhagne lage , un dono ka takrav murda sena se hua toh , tabahi si mach gai ,

khushi apne hatho se aag ka dariya bahate hue udd kar unko jala rehi thi ,



lara bhi unke piche piche a gai thi , uske pas khas talwar or ik black dhal thi , jisko bhed pana asambhav tha ,

"tum nai ja rehi..." suhana ne Eliza ko dekhte hue bola ,



"ja rehi hu , mane khas weapon suit design kiya hai..." Eliza ne apni kalai par bandhi ik choti si belt par ik green button dabaya toh , uske body par ik suite upaz padha , uska suite bulletproof tha , or usme alag alag trah ke weapons chipe hue the ,

"alvida suhana..." eliza etna bol uddte hue khushi ke pas pahunch gai , or dono hatho se dhada dhad aag ke gole us murda sena par barsane lagi , suhana abhi intzar kar rehi thi , tain ki voh thak na jaye , abhi sab garamjoshi se lad rehe the , baby ko bhi usne rok rakha tha , yeh uski yudh neti thi ,


ravi talwar ke war karta murda logo ke hath pair , gardan , katte hue agge badh reha tha , use bhale lag rehe the , talwar ke ghav lag rehe the , kuch teer bhi uski pith par lage hue the , lekin voh apni hi dhun me un seniko ko cheerte hue bahar khade ghodswaro tak pahunchne ki kossih kar reha tha ,

khushi , ravi ke uper uddte hue piche se war karne wale dushmano ko jala rehi thi , murda sena kamzor si dikh rehi thi enki ik jut takat ke agge , lekin tabhi ik aag se lathpath uddta hua teer khushi ke kande par aan laga ,

"ahhhh..." khushi ne teer chalane wale ki traf dekha , voh vahi ghodswar tha , es sena ka senapati ,

"teri toh..." khushi teer khich kar nikalte hue behad gusse me boli , or udd kar un charo ke agge khadi ho gai , khushi ke piche abh jung chal rehi thi , murda sena ki cheekhe gunj rehi thi , mahol behad garam sa ho chuka tha ,

suhana or baby ke samne jo sena thi , voh abh unke kafi karib a chuki thi , baby bilkul tyar khadi thi , komal ke us jadui locket ki pori takat uske vash me thi , urza ka tez sanchar uski body ki rag rag me doad reha tha ,

"suhana hamla karo..." baby agge badne lagi , par tabhi suhana ne use rok liya ,

"par kyu..." baby prashan bhari nigahu se boli ,

suhana ik dam se ghutno ke bal beth gai , usne akhen band kar li , or kuch hi palu me , voh ik dragon ka roop dharan kar chuki thi , suhana ko vardan tha , voh kisi bhi jeev ka roop dharan kar sakti thi ,

apne dragon roop me suhana ne baby ko apne uper betha liya , suhana uper ki traf udan bharne lagi , suhana uddte hue murda sena par apne moh se tez aag ki bushar karne lagi ,



uske dragon roop se voh behad khatarnak ho chuki thi , uske dahadne se , uske moh se aag ka dariya sa bahar nikal reha tha , murda sena abh teero se suhana par war karne lagi , par baby unke chalaye teero ko uddte hue talwar se rokne lagi ,

lara apni mazbot dhal se unki talwaro ke waro ko rokti hui , unke jismo ko cheerti hui agge badh rehi thi , or Eliza uske duara giraye murda logu ko aag ke golo se jalate ja rehi thi ,

jung pore shabab par thi , ravi abh murda sena ko apni jadui talwar se katta hua , unke bechu bech pahunch chuka tha , use kuch hosh nai tha , voh bus hosh kho kar talwar ke war kiye ja reha tha ,

vahi ik or...

"kamine ghode par hi rehega ya niche akar ladega bhi..." khushi apne jakhmi kande par hath rakhe boli ,

voh charo ghodswar ik dusre ki traf dekh kar muskraye or phir unme se ik niche utar aya ,

khushi ne apni akhen band ki or uske dono hatho me ik jalti hui magic ball thi , khushi ne voh us par chod di ,



voh aag ki magic ball ghumti ghumti uske karib pahunch us ghodswar se takra gai , magic ball lagte hi voh thoda piche ki traf hat gya , uske barfile seene me ik ghada sa ban gya ,

par khushi ki akhen khuli ki khuli reh gai , jab usne dekha , uska jala hua hissa vapis baraf ki parat se dhak gya ,

"bevkuf..." voh apne seene par hath pherta hua bola ,

khushi ne apni kamar se lipti apni talwar nikali or bhagte hue us ghodswar ko marne doadi , par jaise hi khushi uske karib anne wali thi , ghode par bethe uske dusre sathi ne , baraf se bana ik or teer chala diya , jo khushi ki dhayi jang par laga , or khushi niche gir gai , or uski talwar uske hatho se choot usse kuch door ja giri ,

"bahadar ladki , tum marne ke bad , meri sena ka hissa banugi..." etna bolte hue usne apni baraf jaisi safad talwar nikali , or khushi par war kiya , khushi ne apni akhen band karli ,

par kuch palu bad jab khushi ne akhen kholi , toh use lagne wali talwar ravi hath se pakad kar khada hua tha ,

ghode par bethe admi ne teer chalana chaha , par ravi ne dhaye hath se apni talwar uski traf fenk di , aag se jalti talwar uske seene me ghus kar ar-par ho gai , voh ghode par betha hi jal kar rakh ho gya , sath me uska murda ghoda bhi ,

"bemisal devil..." voh barfile adma bola , or usne ravi ke pet par ik kick jad di , jaise hi ravi piche ki traf gira , uski talwar ravi ke hath se choot gai ,



"abh marne ko tyar ho ja..." voh barfila admi ravi par talwar ka war karne laga , par tabhi ravi ki talwar udd kar uske hath me a gai , usne jordar war kiya par ravi ne apni talwar se use rok liya ,

voh bar bar talwar ke war karta gya , par ravi ne sidhe lete hue dono hatho se talwar pakade , uske har war ko rok kar namak karta reha ,



tabhi khushi ne himet juta kar apne hatho se tez aag ki bushar kar di , voh aag sidhi us barfile admi ke chehre par lagi , voh thoda piche ko hua , utne wakht me ravi ne uth kar uski gardan dhad se alag kar di , or khushi ne uske jism ko jala diya ,

"hashhh , anjar-panzar thik hain..." khushi baraf ki jamen par lette hue boli ,

"lag toh reha hai , baki dono kaha gye..." ravi bhi khushi ke pas akar bola ,

"apne logu ke bech , tain ki mehfuz rehe..." khushi , ravi ke hath ka sahara leker uthte hue boli ,

"ham bhi chale apne logu ke bech.." ravi , khushi ko akh marte hue bola ,

"neki or puch puch..." khushi muskrate hue boli , or voh phir dono us jung me ghus kar un murda logu ke saar katne lage , yaha lara or Eliza abhi bhi dat kar lad rehi thi ,

"Eliza aisi jung ladai tumne kabhi..." lara niche zuk kar ik murde ke pet ke ander talwar ghusate hue boli ,

"nana , kabhi naii , mere weapons khatam hone wale hain , or suite ki charging bhi ..." eliza dhad dhad ak47 rifle jaise golyian chalate hue boli ,

"ahhh kitne percent reh gai..." lara ik mudre ke saar uske dhad se alag karte hue boli ,

"12% , abh mushkil se 10-20 mint or tik paugi..." Eliza muskrate hue boli ,

"ahhhh ..." lara ki halki si chekh nikal gai , kyu ki tez chaku uski kamar ke hisse ko kat gya tha ,

"lara..." Eliza uddte hue niche ko hui or lara ka hath pakad use uper utha , usi jagah lot ayi , yaha se un sab ne suruat ki thi , vaha kuch der voh dono surakshit thi , kyu ki unke as-pas abhi bhi khushi duara jalai gai aag ik gol chakar me jal rehi thi ,

"tum thik ho..." Eliza ne lara ki kamar ke ghav ko dekhte hue bola , yaha se abh khoon beh reha tha ,

"ahh me thik hu..." lara mushkil se khade hote hue boli ,

vahi dusri or suhana ik dragon ke roop me uddate hue murda sena ko jala rehi thi , par voh khatam nai ho rehe the , jitne ko voh jala deti , usse jayda baraf ki jamen se voh or nikal ate ,

abh baby ko bhi lagne laga tha , yeh murda sena se niche utar kar hi ladna hoga , voh bhi abh jamen par utar chuki thi ,

uske pas bijli or aag dono ki beshumar takat thi , baby ne asman ki traf udd kar ruk gai , uske jism se bijilyian nikalne lagi ,



baby un chamakti bijilyion ko un murda logo par fenkne lagi , har koi lad reha tha , sirf or sirf pyar or sath rehne ke liye ,

kai ghanto tak sab ladte rehe , hazaro ki tadad me murda log mar chuke the , unke adh jale sharir baraf par padhe hue the ,

lara or eliza thak chuki thi , Eliza ke suite ki charging khatam ho chuki thi , abh voh lara ke sath jamen par lad rehi thi , dono buri trah thaki hui thi , sharir khoon or pasine se bheega hua tha ,

vahi khushi abh jakhmi halat me ravi ke sath ladti ja rehi thi , uski halat bhi abh buri thi ,

lekin abh ik or khatra un sab par badh chuka tha , icemon unki traf khud badh reha tha , suhana ne dragon roop se use dekha , toh voh us traf udd gai , tain ki use rok sake ,

ravi abh samaz gya tha , voh es trah jung nai jeet sakte , voh khushi ke pas gya or bola ,

"muze gussa dilao khushi ..." ravi murda logu se ladta hua khushi ki traf dekh kar bola ,

"ahhh naii , tum khud ko control nai kar pauge , sab tabah ho jayega..." khushi behad dard bhari halat me boli ,

"khushi sabki traf dekho , baby ko dekho kitni jakhmi hai , lara or Eliza ko dekho , khud ko dekho , abh wakht a gya hai khushi..." ravi , khushi ki akhon me dekhte hue bola ,

"thik haii , lekin vapis lot anna..." khushi ne apne ik ungli ravi ke mathe ke bechu bech rakh di , or kuch mantra padhne lagi , ravi ne malika sona ki di talwar niche gira di ,

ravi yadion me kho gya , uske jism ka tez abh badhne laga , komal se bepanah mohhabat , use mili har saza , apni behan ki tadaf , uska rona , uska har dard bardasht karna , ik ik lamha , ik ik pal , ravi ki akhon ke agge a gya , apne pita ke chehre ko yad karte hi , ravi ka gussa satve asman tak pahunch gya , voh insani roop ka tyag kar abh ik lal rakshas ban chuka tha ,

"vofffff voffffffff..." ravi ki tez ghurahat sun sabhi murde ladte hue use dekhne lage ,

ravi abh devil tha , voh hell ka raza tha , or sabhi murda jeev uske gulam the , marne ke bad har jeev ki atma hell me jati hai , par yeh sab murda log shap se jude the ,

baby , lara or Eliza , ravi ke devil roop ko dekhne lagi , ravi jab pehle gusse me ata tha , tab bus voh ik lal danav ban jata tha , par abh voh hell ke devil roop me tha , uske lal pankh es bat ka saboot the ,

"vofffff voofffff (tez ghurate hue) saaabbbb logggggg zukkkkk jaoooooooo , apneeee razaaaaa keeee aggggeeeee..." ravi behad bhari awaz me tez gehrai sanse bharte ghurate hue bola ,

hell ke devil ke bolte hi sab murda log ghutno ke bal jamen par beth gye , baby , lara or Eliza ik dusre ka chehra dekhne lagi , suhana bhi dragon roop se vapis insani roop me akar jamen par khadi , ravi ki traf dekhne lagi ,

"vooffffff yehhhh sathannn tumaraaa naiiii haiiii , gharrrrrr lotttttt jaoooo (gooo tooo homeeee)..." ravi ne tez tez ghurate hue behad bhari awaz me bola , sab murda log jamen par gir kar khak ho gye ,

icemon door khada , devil ko dekhta reha , uski samast sena nasaht ho chuki thi , nakabposh aurat or joker bhi chonk sa gye the ,

door vansha jungle me apne ghar ki balkoni me khadi komal muskra rehi thi , shyad use anne wale wakht ka ehsas tha ,

icemon agge badne laga tain ki suhana par hamla kar sake , par tabhi uske samne rema a gaiiii...


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Kia baat h bahi very interesting amazing update

So Abhi to yudh ki shorwat h Murda sena khtam ho gayi devil raja k khena pe ab dekhte hain Kia ho GA

Suhana ko bchane a gayi h rema yehhhhh

Kia komal bhi ay gi
 

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Abh Agge....


Rema beintha gusse me icemon ko ghur rehi thi , jo bahut bada tha uske agge , uske piche suhana khadi thi , jo muskra rehi thi , use khushi thi uski beti uske liye yaha ladne ayi hai ,


"hashhh a gai lal chudail..." khushi apni talwar ka sahara leker niche bethte hue boli ,


ravi bhi muskra diya khushi ki bat sun kar , vahi lara , Eliza or baby bhi ik sath khushi ke pas pahunch chuki thi ,


icemon ne apni neli chamakti akhon se rema ko dekha , or phir apni left hath me pakadi apni badi si barfeli talwar uper ko utha li ,


usne jordar war rema par kiya , rema ke lal jadui baalo ne icemon ki talwar ko bech raste hi rok liya , or uski talwar ko charo traf se jakadte hue , uske hatho ki traf badne lage , icemon thoda ghabra gya ,


"uuuvofffff..." icemon ne tez sans bharte ghurate hue dusre hath se tez neli roshni ik rager light ki trah rema ke jism par mar di , rema ka adha sharir burf me jam gya , or uske baal jo talwar par lipate hue the voh bhi baraf me jam gye ,


tabhi suhana vapis dragon roop me akar icemon ke uper uddte hue , use apne moh se nikalti aag se jalane lagi , icemon ka chehra aag se ghir gya , voh aag ki tapash se piche hatne laga ,


tabhi baby ik dam se udd kar icemon ke piche khadi ho gai , voh icemon ko piche hatne se rokne ka pariyas karne lagi , tab tak rema ke baal khud ba khud aag ki trah garam hoker uski kaid se azad ho chuke the ,


rema ke lal baal abh dhere dhere icemon ki talwar se hote hote uske pore hath ko kande tak apne agosh me jakad chuke the , rema ke baal aag jaise garam hoker icemon ko jalane lage ,


lara bhi agge bad icemon ke sharir par apni talwar se war karne lagi , voh beintha gusse me icemon ki tangu par talwar ke war kiye ja rehi thi ,


khushi bhi aage badh abh icemon ke seene ko , apne hatho se nikalti aag se jalane lagi , bus ravi or Eliza abhi door khade the ,


ika ik ravi ne apni talwar vapis uthayi , or uddte hue icemon ke karib pahunch uske mathe ke bech , safad roshni wale us katav me ander tak ghusa di ,


icemon ka pora sharir ik neli roshni ko sokhne laga , sab abhi bhi us par apne war kar rehe the , par tabhi ik tez dhamake ke sath icemon ka jism fat gya , uska jism ik roshni me bhikar gya ,


us tez dhamake se sab door baraf ke khali median me ja gire , sabki akhen band si ho chuki thi , or voh sab jamen par besudh padhe hue the ,


ravi pet ke bal baraf par leta hua tha , usne behad dard me apni akhen kholi or apne dono hatho ko dabav deker uthne laga , jab ravi uth kar khada hua , uske samne uske jaisa hi ik lal aag se lathpath danav khada tha ,





ravi ne as-pas dekha , door door tak bus baraf ki jamen thi , or uche uche baraf ke pahad nazar a rehe the ,


icemon ke jism se nikalne wali vinashkari urza ne ravi or baki sab ko alag alag kar diya tha , abh unke samne jo dushman anne wale the , voh takat me , dimag me , har trah se unke jaise the ,


enke naye dushman , jo enko abh milne wale the , voh enke hi dusre roop the , abh enko khud se ladna tha , yahi dusra padav tha , shetian ne mayajaal rach diya tha , or sab es mayajaal me fas chuke the ,


vahi dusri traf...


khushi jo pehle se hi jakhmi thi , voh abh or bhi dard me thi , voh behad kamzori me , uth kar apne ghutno ke bal beth gai , khushi as-pas dekhne lagi , par as-pas koi nai tha , voh shetian ke mayajaal me fas chuki thi ,


khushi apni talwar ki nok jamen me gad , uske sahare uth kar khadi ho gai , voh as-pas dekhne lagi , usne apni akhen band ki , par icemon ka sharir fatne ka hi use nazar aya , uske bad , sabhi ke as-pas ik safad roshni phail gai thi ,


"raviiiiii , babyyyy kaha hooo..." khushi jor se chilati hui boli , par uski awaz koi bhi sun nai pa reha tha ,


achank khushi ne dekha , usse kuch door hawa me ik chakar sa bana , or usme se ik ladki chalang lagate hue bahar nikali ,





"tum..." khushi ke hontho se bus etna hi nikala , kyu ki voh ladki tamas roop me bilkul khushi jaisi lag rehi thi , kya yeh tha , khushi ka dushman ,


vahi dusri traf...


rema bhi baraf par giri hui thi , uske lal baal use jagane ki kossih kar rehe the , achank rema ki kali andhere jaisi akhen khuli , or voh uth kar khadi ho gai ,


lekin voh bhi es mayajaal ka hissa thi , voh bhi kaid ho chuki thi , use bhi ladna tha khud se , or khud ko sabit karna tha , yeh dusra padav par karke ,


achank asman se ik tez lal roshni jamen par giri , jab baraf ka uddta gubar shant hua , tab rema chonk gai , kyu ki uske samne bilkul uski hamshakal khadi thi ,





bus farak etna tha , uske baal kale the , lekin rema ke baalo ke jaise voh jinda the , or ik farak yeh tha uski akhen bilkul safad thi , voh behad gusse me rema ko ghur kar dekh rehi thi ,


"tum yaha kaise..." rema etna hi bol payi , ke us kale baalo wali ladki ne rema par hamla kar diya ,


vahi dusri traf...


suhana ik banjar jamen par giri hui thi , jo bilkul andhere ki trah kali thi , suhana ne uper ki traf nazar dali , asman bhi pora kala tha , suhana bhi abh mazajaal me kaid thi ,


"ufff pita ji ka mayajaal , ham toh mar gye ajj .." suhana apna matha peet kar boli ,



tabhi uske samne akar koi khada ho gya , yeh koi or nai , uski behan ruhi thi , ya yu kehle , ruhi (komal) ki hamshakal thi ,


"me ruhi se nai lad sakti..." suhana ne piche hatte hue bola , par tabhi ruhi hasne lagi , uski akhen lal roshni me chamak rehi thi ,


vahi dusri traf...


baby bhi akeli , ik ajeeb se mayajaal me kaid ho chuki thi , voh ik behad badi building ka terrace par khadi thi ,


"kaisi ho bitch..." tabhi ik awaz ne baby ka dhyan apni traf khich liya ,


baby ne palat kar dekha , uske samne kat khadi thi , aisa mehsus ho reha tha , baby wakht me bahut piche chali gai thi , voh insani roop me kat ke samakash khadi thi ,


kat ke sath 4-5 admi the , jo shyad uske bodyguard the , baby ke pas abh koi takat nai thi , voh shaktiheen thi , or use rasta dundna tha , es mayajaal se bahar nikalne ka , jo esi building ke kisi darvaje ke piche chipa tha ,


vahi dusri traf....


vahi ik or lara or Eliza ik kabile me fasi hui thi , unke charo or ninja senik the , jinke hatho me unki talware thi , kuch ke hatho me khulhadi jaise hathiyar the ,





"yeh ham kaha a gye..." Eliza apne saar par dono hath rakhti boli ,


"yahi se mane apni training pori ki thi , abh yeh log mere dushman hain , mane enke kanun or nizmo ko toda tha... " lara behad ghambir awaz me boli ,


"lekin ham toh jung ke median me the.." Eliza thoda ghabra kar boli ,


"shhh voh jung jadui thi , shetian ke khilaf , or ham kisi mayajaal me kaid ho chuki hain , es se hame hi bahar nikalna hoga..."


"tumara matlab en sab se lad kar..." Eliza kuch sochte hue boli ,


"mere khyal se han..." lara apni talwar apne hatho me kaste hue boli...


lara pori trah tyar thi , han bus halat thodi jakhmi thi , Eliza thoda ghabra rehi thi ,


vahi dusri traf...


voh nakabposh aurat jung ke medain me , joker or rekha ke sath khadi thi , par vaha abh koi nai tha ,


us nakabposh aurat ne apni akhen band ki , or komal ke mind ko mehsus karne lagi , tain ki usse bat kar sake ,


"komal vahi khadi thi , sab dekh rehi thi apni band akhon se , use pata tha , uska bhai kaha hai , uske dost kahe hain , voh sab janti thi , lekin use vishwas tha , uska bhai or baki sab , har padav par kar lenge , voh sahi salamat es mayajaal se bahar ayege..."


tabhi komal ke saar me thoda dard sa hua , lekin yeh dard behad metha sa tha , dimag me halke halke jatke lag rehe the , or yeh jatke behad anand sa de rehe the komal ko ,


akasar jo log dyan lagate hain , unko positive energy se halke halke bijili jaise jatke lagte rehte hain , lekin yeh kuch or tha jo komal samaz chuki thi ,


komal samaz gai ke kon usse bat karna chahta hai , komal ne apni akhen band kar li , par us aurat se koi bat nai ki , uske pora dhyan apne bhai par tha , voh use hi dekh rehi thi ,


"shhhhhhh , komal muzse bat nai kar rehi , me kuch der or intzar karugi , uske bad malik shetian ki agli sena prithvi par ayegi , ravi or uske bekar sathi , us mayajaal se bahar nai nikal payege..." voh nakabposh aurat thoda gusse me muskrate hue boli ,


"har traf tabahi ka manzir hoga , kyu ki khud se ladna asan nai hota , voh sab khud se ladna chah rehe , par kya voh jinda lot payege..." joker bhi haste hue bola ,


par rekha khamosh thi , uski koi awaz nai nikal rehi thi , kya usme koi badlav ho reha tha , yeh abhi tak ik rahasye bana hua tha....


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Excellent brilliant fantastic good update

Hamesha ki trha behad shandar soooper lajawab

Ab ye khud apne ap se larain gy very nice Kia khoob chal chali h sheatan ne
 
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