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lover of darkness

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superb update
ravi ki maa malika sona jinda hai.
lakin vo baap bete ke bich ki jung me aana nhi chahti.
lakin insano ko is jung se koi hani n pahunche.
iske liye usne varsha jungle ko apni takat se bandh diya.
kaal ko isne ek locket diya jisse vo din me bhi kad skta hai or
sath me usse talwar di jisse ravi ka gussa shant ho jaay.
ravi talwar ko pakdte hi use apni maa ke sath bitaye paal yaad aane laga or uska gussa shant ho gaya.
ravi ka sath dene ke liye. suhana khushi lara or Eliza bhi aa gayi.
ab aage kya hota hai.

:thanks: bhai.. apne update short me likh diya..
 
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Fantastic update daroga sir:perfect:

Malika sona ki entry bi ho gyi tapasya mei leen hai wo pr ravi ki help nhi kr skti
Fir bi malika sona ne ravi ka gussa shant kr diya jung ke liye ye jruri tha
Akhiri baar baat kya krne wale sb :hmm2: fight cancel maat krwa dena:beee:
Ravi ka sath dene khushi suhana eliza or lara aa gyi:)

Baby kat se akhiri baar baat kr rhi iska ye mtlb ki wo ravi ka sath dene jung mein jaane wali:hmm2:



Hadh hai sona ko tapasya mein leen kr diya:cry2:
Main dusri wali sona hi hun yo samose khaati ye wali koi or hogi:beee:

Dekhte aage kya hota

Waiting for next update robin sir
:thanks: sona ji..

malika sona abhi nai ayegi story me , lekin agge unka eham role hoga..

baby or kat emotional batian karegi.. apki trah :hehe:

app samose wali sona hi ho :D tension mat lo :hug:

shukariya bahut pyara or funny rebu tha apka.. :)

agge bhi sath bane rehna sona jii :D
 
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lover of darkness

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Excellent brilliant fantastic good Update

Hamesha ki trha behad shandar soooper lajawab

Oh ab ay GA Maza Jung mai
Na komal ayi Na rema ayi Na baby ayi Na Malika Sona ayi
Kat to fari k 7 h dekhte hain Kia hota h is Jung mai or kis ko khota h Ravi urfff devil

Chalo kaal or us k vampire to hain hi sath mai

Let's see what happend
:thanks: bhai... sath bane rehna bhai.. acha hi likhuga...

shukariya...
 
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update-109


Abh Agge...


"tring tring..." kuch ghantyian bajti rehi , akhir dusri traf se kisi ne phone pic up kar liya , yeh kat thi ,


"hlo.." kat apne jajbato ko control karte hue boli ,


"h..hlo k..kat.." baby apni kampti hui awaz me boli , use samaz nai a reha tha , voh kya bat kare kat se ,


"hmm , baby kaisi ho.." kat behad udas lehje me boli , voh fari ko khana khila rehi thi ,


"m...mm..me ...tt..thik..hh..hu..." baby muskrane ki kossih karte hue boli ,


"dil me dard hai na tumare , abh rona chahti ho , par koi sath nai mil reha , muzse dard bantna chahti ho , baby mane sirf or sirf tumse hi pyar kiya tha , or hamesha karti rahugi , bat kya hai baby , batao na , me hu na tumare sath..." kat behad nam akhon se dard bhari awaz me boli ,


"nai , nai , koi bat nai , acha tum fari ka khyal rakhna hamesha , hamne bahut se pal sath me gujare , me.. me ravi ka sath dene ja rehi hu , jung suru hone wali hai , tum , tum vada karo , fari ka hamesha khyal rakhugi , agar muze kuch ho jaye toh..." baby khud ko ander se mazbot karte hue boli ,


"baby , muze tumara sath chahyie , baby me nai jee sakti tumare bina , vapis lot anna baby , me intzar karugi tumara , tume meri kasam ..." kat behad shidat se rote hue boli ,


"kasam nai de sakti kat , me nai janti vaha kya hoga , muze azad kar do , muze mukat kardo , pls kat , muze ravi ki madad karni hi hogi , mane shiv ko vachan diya tha , me akhri sans tak uska sath dungi , me apna vachan nai tod sakti , muze azad kardo kat , apne pyar se mukat kar do , pls..." baby rote hue behad dard bhare shabado me boli ,


"naii , naii , me tume azad nai karugii , tume vapis anna hoga , baby jaoo , or sab khatam karke vapis lot anna , fari ki chinta mat karna , me uske sath hu , tum sab ravi ka sath do , abh or batian nai karugi , bus etna kahugi , jeet kar anna , agar mar gai , toh tumari kat bhi mar jayegi ..." kat ne rote hue etna bola or phone cut kar diya ,


baby ne apne behte asnu saf kiye or uth kar chal padhi , us jung ka hissa banne , jiska anjam use bhi pata nai tha , lekin ik shakash abhi bhi tyar nai tha voh thi rema , kya voh jung ka hissa banti , yeh abhi ik rahasye bana hua tha ,


vahi dusri traf...


ravi tyar tha , uske apne uske sath the , rishto ke bech ulza ravi ajj kismat se jung ladne ja reha tha , dushman takatwar tha , lekin ravi ke pas pyar ki takat thi , ravi or uske chahne wale , ik dusre ke liye mar-mitne ko tyar khade the ,


tabhi ravi agge bada , uske sath kaal or baki sab bhi agge bade , abh bure or ache log ik dusre ke samne the , voh nakabposh aurat abh bhi apna vajood chipaye khadi thi , joker beintha khush tha , kyu ki komal jung ke medain me nai thi , uski mout sirf komal ke hatho hi likhi thi , rekha thodi udas thi ,


"raviii , dekha tumne , mane kaha tha , muze voh map dedo , par tum , tumne jidd ki , dekho abh , kaise hamare shetian devta , tum par , tumare sathyion par , tumare en prithvi ke logu par , apne gusse ka kehar barpate hain , pori prithvi ko ik shamshan me badal denge , lekin ik rasta hai , tum zuk jao , or map hame dedo..." voh nakabposh aurat behad khushnuma andaz me boli ,


"bevkuf aurat , bhul gai , me bhi ik shetian hu , me kisi ke agge zukta nai , or rehi bat map ki , bhul jao , us din bhi kaha tha , ajj phir se keh reha hu , bhul jao us map ko , or dafa ho jao prithvi se..." ravi beintha gusse me lal chamakti akhon se bola ,


"ahahaha , malika yeh nai zukega , abh tabahi hogi , har traf tabahi , or tum , han tum ravii , us tabahi ko rok nai pauge..." joker beintha haste hue bola ,


"tabahi , voh toh hogi badsurat insan , par tumari or tumari us danvi sena ki , tum ik bar narag chalo , me tume vaha tabahi ka matlab bataugi..." khushi behad gusse me boli , uske hathoin ki band muthyian aag ki trah garam hoker tapne lagi ,


"shant , tamas , ham ravi se bat karne aye hain , na ke uske gulamo se ..." nakabposh aurat muskra kar boli ,


"shhhh , tamas hamari gulam nai hai , voh hamara pyar hai , dubara aisa mat bolna , varna yahi tume jala dunga , jung bad me suru hogi.." ravi or agge badh us nakabposh aurat ke chehre ko ghurte hue bola ,


"sun liya badsurat aurat..." khushi behad muskrate hue boli ,


"hashhh , dekho akhri bar puch rehi hu , map hame dedo , varna koi bhi jinda nai bachega..." nakabposh aurat behad gusse me boli ,


"voh map paviter hai , tum us raste par chal nai sakti , tumare liye map ka koi matlab nai , vaha tak koi paviter insan hi pahunch sakta hai , map ko bhul jao kamini aurat.." ravi behad gusse me muskra kar bola ,


"thik hai , ham samaz gye , tum jung chahte ho , voh tume mil gai , abh anjam bhukto , tum haar jauge , phir ham tumari komal or tumara ansh , tumari beti , uske jariye map pa lenge , tumari beti ki bali deker ..." voh nakabposh aurat behad khushi me boli ,


"yahhhhhh , meri beti ki bali dogiii tumm..." ravi ne us nakabposh aurat ka gala apne hath me jakadte hue bola ,


tabhi joker ne apni shakti se ik talwar ki rachna ki , or uska jor dar war ravi ke hath par karna chaha , par voh talwar marne hi ja reha tha , ik aag se jalta hua teer uske seene me a laga , jo lara ne chalaya tha ,


rekha vaha se gyab ho gai , par dusre hi pal usne tezi se ravi ko jordar dhaka diya , par rekha herian reh gai , kyu ki ravi jara sa bhi hila nai tha ,


voh us nakabposh aurat ke jism ko jalane ki kossih kar reha tha , uski akhen band thi , voh apne jism ki tapash ko us nakabposh aurat ke ander behj reha tha , tain ki uska andhere se upza vajood jal kar rakh ho jaye ,


"whittteeeeeee walkeerrrssss (white Walkers) ...." rekha jor se chilate hue apni sena ka nam pukarte hue boli , tabhi sabhi ki akhen khuli ki khuli reh gai ,





samne kale parbat par , 4 ghodswar khade the , abhi voh akele dikh rehe the , par kuch hi palu me , dekhte hi dekhte , baraf ki us patli chadar jaisi jamen ko fadte hue , hazaro ki tadad me white walkers (murdo log ) khade ho gye ,





un sab ke jism gale hue the , voh sab ke sab pehle se hi mar chuke the , akhen baraf jaisi jami hui thi , hatho me unke alag alag hathiyar the , chehre bahut byank the unke , kai logu ke sharir gale hue the , hadyian tak dikh rehi thi unki , jaise koi mass tha hi nai ,


"ohh my goddd..." lara thoda sa agge badte hue boli ,


tabhi ravi ki nazar un par gai , uski pakad dheli hote hi , voh aurat vaha se gyab ho gai , sath me joker or rekha bhi ,


"pita jii , kya yahi hai danvi sena..." ravi door khade un murda logu ki traf dekhte hue bola ,


"han ravii , lekin yeh abhi suruat hai , dhere dhere alag alag trah ki sena ayegi , yeh shetian ki pehli sena hai , esko white walkers bolte hain , yeh sab ke sab murda hain..." kaal sabko samazate hue bola ,


"murda , matlab mare hue , toh phir enko marege kaise..." Eliza behad chinta me boli ,


"murda logo ka apna ik itehas reha hai , enki ik khasiyat hai , jo bhi enke hatho mara jata hai , voh enki sena me shamil ho jata hai , utni hi takat ke sath , jitni takat usme jeete wakht thi , enko marne ka ik hi tarika hai , enko aag se jala do , enke jism ko jalate rehna , tabhi yeh marte rehege , aag hi enki kamzori hai , enke ghav se bech kar rehna , varna tum bhi en jaise ban sakte ho..." kaal ne sabki traf dekhte hue bola ,


"thik hai pita jii , ham tyar hain , ham enko jad se mita denge , me etna toh samazta hu , shetian ki yeh sena ajj tak kabhi hari nai hogi , lekin es bar haar jayegi..." ravi ne apna jism devil roop me badalte hue bola , abh uska jism aag ki trah garam tha , or hath me pakadi talwar bhi aag ki trah jalne lagi thi , jaise aag se hi bani ho ,


dhere dhere voh safad murda log agge badne lage , voh charo ghodswar bhi , jo us sena ke senapati the , voh bhi tezi se pahad se niche utar ravi or baki sab ke samne a gye ,





"yeh charo kon hai pita ji.." ravi un 4 ghodswaro ki traf dekhte hue bola ,


"yeh es sena ki kaman sambalte hain , yeh adhe murda hain or adhe baraf se bane shetian , enke ander kai shaktyian hain , baraf hi enki takat hai , yeh ajj tak ik bhi jung me nai haare hain , es liye ense pori savdhani se ladai karna..." kaal ne behad shidat se un charo ko dekhte hue bola ,


"jii pita jii , tum sab bhi sun lo , hame pori savdhani se ik jut hoker ladna hai , koi jaladbazi nai karega , sab ki sab , ik sath rehkar , ik dusre ki madad karte hue hi ladugi , samaz gai .." ravi ne khushi , lara or Eliza ki traf dekhte hue bola ,


"jaise tum kaho ravii..." khushi behad adda se boli ,


baki dono ne bhi apna saar han me hila diya ,


ravi or baki sab tyar the , tabhi dekhte hi dekhte sab ke sab murda log kahi baraf ke tez tufan me kho gye , unke agge badne se baraf ki andhi uthne lagi thi , jaise tez hawa anne se dhul ke kan uddne lagte hain , voh kuch palu ke liye alop sa ho gye ,





par jaise hi voh baraf ki patle dhul ke kan saf hue , ravi or baki sab un murda logu ke bech ghir chuke the , unsab ne ik chakarvyu ki rachna ki thi , yeh bahut purani yudh neti thi , jiska upyog voh sab abh kar rehe the ,





ravi or baki sab unke bech gir chuke the , tabhi ik tez dhadane ki awaz sunai di , ravi or baki sab chonk sa gye ,


ik behad byank sa shetian unke samne khada tha , jiski hight bahut jayda thi , lekin yeh tha kon ,





"pita jii yeh kon haii..." ravi us shetian ko ghurte hue bola ,


"yeh icemon hai , es sena ka raza , eska jism pora ka pora ik behad shaktishali kavach se dhaka hua hai , yeh baraf ka devta kehlata hai , eski talwar me anant shaktyian hain , esko marna namumkin hai , agar marna hai toh eske mathe ke bechu bech jo chota sa ched dikh reha hai , safad barfeli roshni ka , usme apni aag se jalti talwar ghusa dena , tabhi yeh marega varna nai..." kaal , icemon ke bare me batate hue bola , kaal sadyion se jevat tha , use sab pata tha , hazaro salo se en shetiano ki har sena ke bare me janta tha , voh dunia ka ik matar vampire tha , jisne shetian ko apni akhon se dekha tha ,


"jii pita ji , yudh ki suruat karte hain , ajj pita ji ko hara kar , me yeh sabit karuga , ke me apni behan se bahut pyar karta hu , uske liye kisi se bhi lad sakta hu , shetian se bhi ..." ravi , komal ko yad karte hue bola ,


"me tumare sath hu bevkuf , ajj ham sab mar bhi gye , toh agle janam me phir se ik sath honge..." khushi , ravi ki akhon me akhen dal boli ,


"ham bhi apke sath hai prince hai..." suhana apne asli roop me ate hue boli , usne apni har shakti ko jagrit kar liya tha , akhir voh andhere ki devi thi ,


"ham bhi ravii..." lara or Eliza ik sath boli ,


"mere chahne walo , ham sab jeeye toh ik sath , abh marege bhi ik sath , ham sab sath hain , bus yahi kafi hai mere liye..." ravi un sabke gale lagte hua bola ,


tabhi asman se ik tez aag jaisi cheez unke pas akar giri , ik behad bada ghada ban gya us baraf me , ravi or baki sab ke hontho par ik muskan doad gai , kyu ki yeh baby thi ,


"kambakhto muze bhul gye , me bhi marne ko tyar bethi hu..." baby , ravi ke karib akar uski akhon me dekhte hue boli ,


"juhii , phir se ..." ravi , baby ko gale lagate hue bola ,


"wife husband me jagde hote rehte hain , lekin ik wife apne husband ka sath nai chod deti , ham dono sath me marege..." baby , ravi ke hontho ko chuste hue behad nam akhon se boli..


tabhi us sena ne ravi par hamla karna chaha , voh agge badne lage , matlab jung suru ho chuki thi ,


vahi dusri traf...


"thapp thappp..." koi tez tez darvaja khatkhata reha tha , akhir darvaja khula or voh dono ik dusre ke samne thi ,


"komal tum..." rema behad udas awaz me boli ,


"dedi app gai nai vaha..." komal agge bad bed par bethte hue boli , rema ne koi jawab na diya , bus chehra zuka liya ,


"me kuch puch rehi hu apse..." es bar komal thoda gusse me boli ,


"voh , voh , maa , tum , tum sab janti ho..." rema behad dard bhari awaz me boli ,


"me janti hu , or me samazti hu apke man ki halat bhi , par dedi , voh galat raste par hain , han manti hu , voh nai chahti , me or bhyia kabhi ik ho jaye , par map pana , ik map ke liye jung ladna , yeh bat toh galat hui na , dedi ajj apki priksha hai..." komal behad nam akhon se boli ,


"maa ke khilaf kaise ladu me , komal muzse nai hoga..." rema behad nam akhon se boli ,


"dedi , app bhyia se kitna pyar karti ho , agar unko kuch ho gya toh kya app yeh boz dil par utha paugi , jinda reh paugi , dedi app dar rehi ho , apke hatho apki maa na mari jaye , par vaha apki maa toh nai , or bhi darinde hain vaha , jinse bhyia ki raksha kar sakti ho app , pls dedii , jao , ladu sabse , pls.." komal hath jodte hue ro kar boli ,


"hasshhh , me janti hu , lekin voh mere bina lad sakte hain , me nai lad sakti komal , voh maa hai meri , me , me nai lad sakti komal.." rema behad nam akhon se boli ,


"remaa , sabse pehle tume hi bhyia ka pyar mila tha , tum bahut khush naseeb ho , jo pyar me sadyion se na pa saki , voh pyar tume khud ba khud mil gya , us pyar ka karaz utaro rema , jao madad karo bhyia ki.." komal ne rema ka hath apne hathon me lete hue bola ,


"komal , me faisla nai kar pa rehii.." rema es bar rote hue boli ,


"dedi , jaldi fasila karlo , kahi bad me sab khatam na ho jaye , hamara pariwar khatam ho gya , toh kiske pas rahugi , han janti hu app jinda rahugi , par voh jindgi hell jaisi hogii , maa abhi galat raste par hai , jidd hai , ghamand hai , na zukne ka ehnkar hai unme , app unko prazit karke , yeh ehsas dilao , voh achi ban jaye , yeh app hi kar sakti ho , agar bhyia ne unko mar diya toh..." komal ne ik gehri chal chalte hue bola ,


"naii , maa ko marna nai hai , me jaugii jung me ..." rema etna bol vaha se gyab ho gai , abh voh jung ka hissa thi , par kis traf....


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Fabulous update.
To kya ye nakabposh aurat inki maa hai. Wo kaise kaun si maa hai ye yaha wali ya pari lok ki.
Ab ye sare gale murde kya haal karenga Ravi & party ka.
Aakhir baby to aa gai or Komal Rima ko bhi bhej diya hai lekin mujhe lagta hai ki Rima abhi to Ravi k taraf se ladegi lekin jab faisle ki ladai hogi to wo us taraf se Ravi ko rokne k liye na aa jai.
Rekha bhi sayad kabhi Ravi k sath aa jai.
Sab se pahle to us jokar ka tiya pancha karna tha.
Fale ne rekha k sath bahut bura kiya hai.
Agle update ka intjar rahega bhai.
Bada majedar hone wala hai ye ladai to.
Qki is bar Ravi k sath uski badi bahan or choti bahan (pari lok wali) dono us k sath hai.
 
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