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bhai congratulations for 100 update complete...
mast plot h story ka full imagine krke story read hoti h... lekin aap apne suspense ko jaldi clear kr diya karo... ?sabra nhi hota... ?
thanks bhai... bhai suspense abhi clear hote jayege , es part ke end me kuch suspense clear kar dunga.. shukariya apko story pasand ayi... :)
 
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Update-101

abh agge...

Ravi jaise hi vapis aya , voh piche ki traf jamen par gir gya , uska pora sharir jal sa gya tha , rema yeh sab dekh rehi thi , par voh na toh kuch bol rehi thi , na kuch kar rehi thi ,

akhir ravi , suhana se mil aya tha , lekin der bhi hui thi , kyu ki yeh batian use , suhana se tab karni thi , jab voh pari log me tha , abh usne suhana ko sawikar kar liya tha , lekin abh shyad kahi na kahi der ho chuki thi ,

akhir kuch pal beete , or ravi apni shakti se khud ba khud thik ho gya , jo jalne ke nishan the , voh bhar gye , ravi apna saar pakade khada ho gya , kyu ki uska saar thoda dard kar reha tha ,

"app thik ho bhaii , maa ko hosh kab ayega..." rema behad chinta me ravi ke karib akar boli , usne chinta bhari nigahu se seema ki traf dekha ,

"ahhh uff , seema thik ho jayegii..." ravi apne saar ka dard mehsus karte hue bola ,

"lekin hua kya maa ko (thoda gusse me) , maa ik dam se behosh kyu ho gai , agar meri maa ko kuch huaa..." rema gusse me abhi bol hi rehi thi , ke ravi bech me bol padha ,

"kuch nai hua tumari maa ko , voh apne pichle roop me parvartit ho rehi hai , voh suhana ka roop dharan kar rehi hai , pata nai kya hoga , jab use hosh ayega..." ravi behad chinta me seema ke pas bed par bethte hue bola ,

"yeh , yeh , nai ho sakta , kabhi nai ho sakta , suhana ki yaidan bus ring me kaid hain , or ring maa se door hai , yeh nai ho sakta..." rema behad gusse me chila kar boli ,

"vahi toh me soch reha hu , bina ring pehne seema par suhana ki yaidan havi kaise ho rehi hain , shyad us nakabposh kamini aurat ka hath hoga , vahi ayi thi ghar me..." ravi , rema ke chehre ko shak bhari nigahu se dekhte hue bola ,

"unka koi hath nai , bat kuch or hai..." rema apne bhai se nazarian chura kar boli ,

"remaaa , muzse nazarian mat churao , batao voh aurat kon haii , use map se matlab hai , voh kisi bhi had tak ja sakti hai , voh behad kamini aurat hai , me use tabah kar dunga , agar seema ko kuch hua toh..." ravi beintha gusse me uth kar rema ki akhon me akhen dal bola , bepanah gusse me ravi ka roop badalne laga , akhen lal ho gai , or jism devil ka akar le gya ,

"aisa sochna bhi mat , unka app kuch nai bhigad sakte , or rehi bat maa ki , me apni maa ko phir se bacha lungi , vaise bhi es sab me apki galti hai..." rema bhi vaise hi gusse me dhahadte hue boli , uske lal jadui baal charo traf phailne lage ,

"meri galti , tum pagal ho..."

"han , han , apki galti , apne ruhi (komal) ko pyar kiya , suhana ko nakar diya , agar app suhana ko prem karte , toh abh yeh din na dekhne padhte , lekin nai , apko bus ruhi chahyie , abh bhi vahi halat hain , komal , komal karte rehte ho , bus komal se pyar karna hai , apki jidd ham sab ka vinash kar degi..." rema or bhi gusse me ate hue chila kar boli ,

"ohhh , meri jidd nai thi voh , muze prem tha ruhi se , or suhana ne apna prem apne dil me dabaye rakha , muze nai pata tha , voh muze chahti hai..." ravi behad dard bhari awaz me bola ,

"ohh toh app chahte the , suhana apse kehti ke me pyar karti hu apse , ik ladki apse bolti , wtf , yeh es brehmand ka sabse bada joke hai , jo me sun rehi hu , asal bat pata hai kya thi , apki jidd ke agge apko koi dusra dikha hi nai , na kisi ka pyar , na kisi ka dard , na kisi ke asnu , app ruhi ke liye andhe ho chuke the , or ruhi se apko mila bhi kya , pari log se nikal diye gye app , devil ban gye , lekin tab bhi , apko suhana ka prem dikhai na diya , usne shetian ko pita man liya , sirf apko pane ke liye , voh ruhi banne par atur ho gai , sirf apke liye , pora pari log tabah ho gya , jal kar rakh ho gya , es sab ke jimedar app the , par apko es bat ka koi pachtava nai , bus ruhi , ruhi karte rehe , or abh komal , komal kar rehe ho..." rema apne man ke gusse ko shabado ke jariye bahar nikalte hue behad gusse me boli , uski ik ik bat sach thi ,

"tum , tum mere prem ko nai samaz sakti rema..." ravi behad nam akhon se bola ,

"voh prem nai jidd thi , ik jiddi insan sirf vinash ki traf jata hai , use dunia ki tabahi se koi matlab nai hota , use lagta hai , vahi sahi hai , me manti hu , ruhi apki manzil thi , apka prem tha , par use pane ka rasta galat tha , jidd se prem nai pa sakte , pita ji ne apko sahi saza di , apki jidd ne apko devil bana diya , ik badsurat insan..." rema behad rote hue dard bhare shabado me boli ,

"chattaakkk..." ik jordar thapad rema ke chehre par aan padha , jo ravi ne mara tha ,

"dekha , me sahi thi , gussa , bepanah gussa , es gusse ko leker app komal ka prem pauge , kabhi nai , jab tak apke dil me gussa hai , jidd hai , nafrat hai , tab tak app komal ko chu bhi nai sakte , abh ik hi rasta hai bhaii..." rema apne asnu saf karte hue boli ,

"kya..." ravi nazarian zuka kar bola ,

"suhana ko maf kar do , uski yadion ko mitane ka shyad ik matar rasta yahi hai , abh jab voh aye , tab usse mafi mang lena , or use voh pyar dena , jiske liye voh pari log me tadafti rehi , varna voh bar bar ayegi , har janam me , jab tak use uska prem nai mil jata , uski nafrat ko kam karo , or ring ka nash karo , ham sab sath milkar shetian ko prazit karege , ring ko tabah kar denge , tab seema maa or suhana ik ho jayegii , bus yahi rasta hai..." rema ne apne man me ayi kuch bation ko ravi ke samne rakhte hue bola ,

"tum devil ko zukne ko bol rehi ho , me hell ka prince hu , me nai kar sakta yeh , devil kabhi nai badal sakta , vaise bhi me seema ko pyar de reha hu , vahi toh suhana hai , yeh bat mane suhana ko bata di hai , voh samaz jayegi es bat ko..." phir ravi ne rema ko sari bat bata di , jo kuch der pehle usne suhana se ki thi ,

"hehe , apne suhana se bat ki , matlab kuch bhi , suhana ne marte wakht yeh sharap diya tha , ke voh apka picha kabhi nai chodegi , jab tak voh apka prem or ruhi ka sathan nai pa leti , es brehmand me app hi jiddi nai ho , or bhi jiddi log hain , lekin jidd se hamesha haar milti hai , kabhi kuch parapat nai hota..." rema beintha haste hue boli ,

"chalo mera prem jidd hai toh jidd hi sahi , me komal ko paker rahuga , chahe yeh dunia bhi tabah kyu na ho jaye , devil toh ban chuka hu , es se badtar abh kuch nai hoga..." ravi lal chamakti akhon se muskrate hue bola ,

"app samaz nai rehe ho , apko kuch nai milega , har insan apse door ho jayega , dard me rahuge har pal , koi prem nai karega apse , or es raste par komal bhi nai milegi apko , kyu ki jidd se kuch nai milta kabhi , ik ik karke sab log apka sath chod denge..." rema behad nam akhon se boli ,

"ahahaha , pehle bhi akela tha , dard me tha , koi sath nai tha , log matlabi hote hain , vade tod dete hain , or me , me jisse bhi vada karta hu , akhir tak nibhata hu , esi liye log muze devil kehte hain , kyu ki me alag hu , par mane jo vada kisi ko kar diya , us vade se piche nai palat sakta , abh komal se vada kiya hai , chahe dunia ko jala kar bhi use pana hua toh pa lunga , par khud ko kabhi zukne nai dunga , or voh bhi en bedard insano ke agge , jinki juban ki koi kemat nai..." ravi beintha haste hue bola ,

"ohh matlab yeh dunia bhi tabah ho jayegi , uff bhai abh bhi samaz jao..." rema ne behad prem bhav se ravi ke kande par hath rakhte hue bola ,

"dunia ki bat mat karo , dunia apne matlab ke liye jeeti hai , dusro ko timepass ki cheez samazti hai , log muze kamzor kehte hain , voh khud kitne kamzor hain jindgi me , es bat ka andaza nai unko , ik raz ki bat batau , kabhi bhi apne dil ke raz kisi insan ke agge mat khol dena , kyu ki tume koi samaz nai payega , na tume , na tumare maksad ko , insan rishto me bandhe bahut kamzor se jeev hain , yeh palak japakte hi tumse vada karte hain , phir palak japakte hi us vade ko tod dete hain , phir samne akar tume kehte hain , sorry mane kal hi bata diya tha mane voh vada tod diya hai , ahhhhhhhh lekin me devil hu , devillllllll , me insano jaisa kamzor naii huuuu , me komal ko paker rahugaaa , kisi bhi trah , chahe pori dunia ko tabah hi kyu na karna padheee..." ravi behad dard bhari awaz me beintha gusse me chekh kar bola ,

"yeh , yeh apki ego hai , apka ghamand hai , es trah apko manzil nai milegi bhai , pls khud ko badal lo , pls..." rema behad nam akhon se boli ,

"yeh ego lagti tume , yeh mera ghamand , meri ego nai , yeh mera sehbhav hai , me kisi ke kehne par khud ko badal nai sakta , yeh dunia vado par chalti hai , ik maa apni beti se vada leti hai , ke uski beti apni ijat bacha kar rakhegi , ik beta apne pita se vada karta hai ke voh kabhi badnam nai hoga , ik bhai apni behan se vada karta hai , ke voh uski raksha karega , ik behan apne bhai se vada karti hai ke voh uska man-saman es samaz me banaye rakhegi , ik dost dusre dost se vada karta hai , ke voh uski har bat manega , jo uska dost kahega , lekin enme se ik bhi vada tut jaye , toh uska dard bahut peeda deta hai , beintha gussa ata hai , kai ration tak nend nai ati , bus , bus , rema , main thak chuka hu , logu ki batian sun sun kar , abh or sehan nai hota muzse , me , me ander se tut chuka hu , muze komal ka pyar chahyie , me or kuch nai chahta , me kis par vishwas karu , kis par na karu , log chehre par kuch bolte hain , lekin pith piche kuch karte hain , ufff , ik bat kahu , agar dunia me rehna aisa hai , toh me devil hi thik hu , kam se kam khud me khush toh hu , acha agar samne wala vada tod de , toh muze kya karna chahyie..." ravi behad nam akhon se dard bhare shabado me bola , jane anjane me usne samaz ki karur sachai byan kar di thi ,

"bhai apko bhi usse kiye vade tod dene chahiye , hisab barabar kar do..." rema behad udas lafzu me boli ,

"naiiii , me vade nai todta hu , chahe halat kaise bhi ho jaye , me oru jaisa nai hu , vada todne wale ko kya peeda hoti hai , yeh janta hu me , par me uske diye vade tod du , toh uska dard hazar guna badh jayega , meri dua yahi rehti hai , voh khush rehe , jo muze rula kar gya ho , uski har icha pori ho , jisne muze dil ki gehrayi tak dard diya ho..." ravi beintha dard me bola , lekin voh bol kiske bare me reha tha , akhir kon tha , jisne vada tod kar , use phir se dard diya tha , kon ,

abh rema khamosh thi , uska tez dimag bhi devil ko samaz nai paya tha , use pata tha , komal ka hasin , khubsurat jism , ravi ko apni or akarshit kar reha tha , ravi pagal tha komal ke liye , pichla janam or abh ka janam , yeh bus komal ke liye tha uske bhai ka , lekin kya komal ke jism ka paviter tez uska bhai sehan kar pata , yeh toh anne wale wakht ki bat thi , par han , dunia jarur khatre me padh chuki thi ,

kyu ki jab koi jidd karta hai kisi ko pane ki , tab uske jism se nikalti urza , dunia par parbhav jarur dalti hai , aisa hota aya hai or hota rehega ,


Vahi dusri traf...

khushi ne behad kampte hue , apni akhon ke samne dekha , suhana , ik black dress me uski or badh rehi thi , uske bade bade black pankh the , tabhi us bejan asman me ik andhera sa chane laga ,



suhana ne uper nazarian utha kar dekha , toh kale rang ke panchi asman me hahakar machane lage , jaise voh sadyion se bhuke the , or suhana se chila chila kar khane ki mang kar rehe the ,

suhana unki traf dekh muskrane lagi , or dhere dhere khushi ke pas akar ruk gai , suhana , khushi ki akhon me akhen dal dekh rehi thi , kuch der bad voh boli ,

"tamas , mere bhai ki paltu sevak , umm , hasshhh , kitna skoon hai es khuli hawa me , sans lene me jara si bhi taklef nai hoti , hehe , par tamas janti ho , yeh jagah konsi hai..." suhana , khushi ke sharir ka chakar lagate hue ik dam se uske chehre ke pas apna chehra kar boli ,

"ahhhhh (darkar) mm...muze..jj ..jane dooo..." khushi behad darte hue boli , kyu ki uska sharir shaktiheen tha , voh insan thi , par kyu ,

"hmm , dar lag reha hai , tamas yeh koi jamen nai , na uper koi asman hai , yeh suhana ki yadian hai , yaha suhana bhatak rehi hai , suhana kaid hai yaha , sadyion se , ummmm , dekho na , agar tum kuch palu me etna dar gai ho , me toh apni hi yadion me sadyion se kaid hu , ufff muze seema ka sharir chahyie..." suhana muskrate hue boli ,

"zz...zuth bol rehi ho , ye...yeh mayajaal hai...tt...tumara..." khushi haklate hue boli ,

"ohh hoo , tum insan bhi na , jab tak chamatkar na dekho , tab tak kisi cheez par vishwas nai karte , yeh dekho , meri yadian..." suhana ne muskrate hue apne daye hath ki chutki bajate hue bola ,

suhana ke chutki bajate hi , waha ka masom , vaha ki jamen , sab kuch badal gya , har traf hare bhare pedh , safad badal , chamakta asman , pyare safad panchi , khushi ko aisa mehsus hua , jaise voh kisi jadui dunia me a chuki thi ,



"yy...yeh..kk...kya...hh..hai..." khushi muskrate hue or thoda herian hoker boli ,

"tamas , yeh pari log haiii , meri yadian ka eham hissa , or tumare piche hai , mera pyara khubsurat zarna , dekho piche palat kar..." suhana ne behad rahasmayi muskan ke sath bola ,


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"oh my godd , kitna pyara hai , eska pani toh ik dam saf hai or etna nela , wow , muze bahut pyas lagi hai , me pani pe leti hu..." khushi jo pichle kai ghanto se pyasi thi , bhagte hue pani ke pas gai , or ghutno ke bal beth pani pene lagi ,



khushi pani peker jaise hi uthi , or usne palat kar piche dekha , or piche dekhte hi uski akhon me phir se dar ke badal mandrane lage.....


to be counited....


 
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abh agge...

Ravi jaise hi vapis aya , voh piche ki traf jamen par gir gya , uska pora sharir jal sa gya tha , rema yeh sab dekh rehi thi , par voh na toh kuch bol rehi thi , na kuch kar rehi thi ,

akhir ravi , suhana se mil aya tha , lekin der bhi hui thi , kyu ki yeh batian use , suhana se tab karni thi , jab voh pari log me tha , abh usne suhana ko sawikar kar liya tha , lekin abh shyad kahi na kahi der ho chuki thi ,

akhir kuch pal beete , or ravi apni shakti se khud ba khud thik ho gya , jo jalne ke nishan the , voh bhar gye , ravi apna saar pakade khada ho gya , kyu ki uska saar thoda dard kar reha tha ,

"app thik ho bhaii , maa ko hosh kab ayega..." rema behad chinta me ravi ke karib akar boli , usne chinta bhari nigahu se seema ki traf dekha ,

"ahhh uff , seema thik ho jayegii..." ravi apne saar ka dard mehsus karte hue bola ,

"lekin hua kya maa ko (thoda gusse me) , maa ik dam se behosh kyu ho gai , agar meri maa ko kuch huaa..." rema gusse me abhi bol hi rehi thi , ke ravi bech me bol padha ,

"kuch nai hua tumari maa ko , voh apne pichle roop me parvartit ho rehi hai , voh suhana ka roop dharan kar rehi hai , pata nai kya hoga , jab use hosh ayega..." ravi behad chinta me seema ke pas bed par bethte hue bola ,

"yeh , yeh , nai ho sakta , kabhi nai ho sakta , suhana ki yaidan bus ring me kaid hain , or ring maa se door hai , yeh nai ho sakta..." rema behad gusse me chila kar boli ,

"vahi toh me soch reha hu , bina ring pehne seema par suhana ki yaidan havi kaise ho rehi hain , shyad us nakabposh kamini aurat ka hath hoga , vahi ayi thi ghar me..." ravi , rema ke chehre ko shak bhari nigahu se dekhte hue bola ,

"unka koi hath nai , bat kuch or hai..." rema apne bhai se nazarian chura kar boli ,

"remaaa , muzse nazarian mat churao , batao voh aurat kon haii , use map se matlab hai , voh kisi bhi had tak ja sakti hai , voh behad kamini aurat hai , me use tabah kar dunga , agar seema ko kuch hua toh..." ravi beintha gusse me uth kar rema ki akhon me akhen dal bola , bepanah gusse me ravi ka roop badalne laga , akhen lal ho gai , or jism devil ka akar le gya ,

"aisa sochna bhi mat , unka app kuch nai bhigad sakte , or rehi bat maa ki , me apni maa ko phir se bacha lungi , vaise bhi es sab me apki galti hai..." rema bhi vaise hi gusse me dhahadte hue boli , uske lal jadui baal charo traf phailne lage ,

"meri galti , tum pagal ho..."

"han , han , apki galti , apne ruhi (komal) ko pyar kiya , suhana ko nakar diya , agar app suhana ko prem karte , toh abh yeh din na dekhne padhte , lekin nai , apko bus ruhi chahyie , abh bhi vahi halat hain , komal , komal karte rehte ho , bus komal se pyar karna hai , apki jidd ham sab ka vinash kar degi..." rema or bhi gusse me ate hue chila kar boli ,

"ohhh , meri jidd nai thi voh , muze prem tha ruhi se , or suhana ne apna prem apne dil me dabaye rakha , muze nai pata tha , voh muze chahti hai..." ravi behad dard bhari awaz me bola ,

"ohh toh app chahte the , suhana apse kehti ke me pyar karti hu apse , ik ladki apse bolti , wtf , yeh es brehmand ka sabse bada joke hai , jo me sun rehi hu , asal bat pata hai kya thi , apki jidd ke agge apko koi dusra dikha hi nai , na kisi ka pyar , na kisi ka dard , na kisi ke asnu , app ruhi ke liye andhe ho chuke the , or ruhi se apko mila bhi kya , pari log se nikal diye gye app , devil ban gye , lekin tab bhi , apko suhana ka prem dikhai na diya , usne shetian ko pita man liya , sirf apko pane ke liye , voh ruhi banne par atur ho gai , sirf apke liye , pora pari log tabah ho gya , jal kar rakh ho gya , es sab ke jimedar app the , par apko es bat ka koi pachtava nai , bus ruhi , ruhi karte rehe , or abh komal , komal kar rehe ho..." rema apne man ke gusse ko shabado ke jariye bahar nikalte hue behad gusse me boli , uski ik ik bat sach thi ,

"tum , tum mere prem ko nai samaz sakti rema..." ravi behad nam akhon se bola ,

"voh prem nai jidd thi , ik jiddi insan sirf vinash ki traf jata hai , use dunia ki tabahi se koi matlab nai hota , use lagta hai , vahi sahi hai , me manti hu , ruhi apki manzil thi , apka prem tha , par use pane ka rasta galat tha , jidd se prem nai pa sakte , pita ji ne apko sahi saza di , apki jidd ne apko devil bana diya , ik badsurat insan..." rema behad rote hue dard bhare shabado me boli ,

"chattaakkk..." ik jordar thapad rema ke chehre par aan padha , jo ravi ne mara tha ,

"dekha , me sahi thi , gussa , bepanah gussa , es gusse ko leker app komal ka prem pauge , kabhi nai , jab tak apke dil me gussa hai , jidd hai , nafrat hai , tab tak app komal ko chu bhi nai sakte , abh ik hi rasta hai bhaii..." rema apne asnu saf karte hue boli ,

"kya..." ravi nazarian zuka kar bola ,

"suhana ko maf kar do , uski yadion ko mitane ka shyad ik matar rasta yahi hai , abh jab voh aye , tab usse mafi mang lena , or use voh pyar dena , jiske liye voh pari log me tadafti rehi , varna voh bar bar ayegi , har janam me , jab tak use uska prem nai mil jata , uski nafrat ko kam karo , or ring ka nash karo , ham sab sath milkar shetian ko prazit karege , ring ko tabah kar denge , tab seema maa or suhana ik ho jayegii , bus yahi rasta hai..." rema ne apne man me ayi kuch bation ko ravi ke samne rakhte hue bola ,

"tum devil ko zukne ko bol rehi ho , me hell ka prince hu , me nai kar sakta yeh , devil kabhi nai badal sakta , vaise bhi me seema ko pyar de reha hu , vahi toh suhana hai , yeh bat mane suhana ko bata di hai , voh samaz jayegi es bat ko..." phir ravi ne rema ko sari bat bata di , jo kuch der pehle usne suhana se ki thi ,

"hehe , apne suhana se bat ki , matlab kuch bhi , suhana ne marte wakht yeh sharap diya tha , ke voh apka picha kabhi nai chodegi , jab tak voh apka prem or ruhi ka sathan nai pa leti , es brehmand me app hi jiddi nai ho , or bhi jiddi log hain , lekin jidd se hamesha haar milti hai , kabhi kuch parapat nai hota..." rema beintha haste hue boli ,

"chalo mera prem jidd hai toh jidd hi sahi , me komal ko paker rahuga , chahe yeh dunia bhi tabah kyu na ho jaye , devil toh ban chuka hu , es se badtar abh kuch nai hoga..." ravi lal chamakti akhon se muskrate hue bola ,

"app samaz nai rehe ho , apko kuch nai milega , har insan apse door ho jayega , dard me rahuge har pal , koi prem nai karega apse , or es raste par komal bhi nai milegi apko , kyu ki jidd se kuch nai milta kabhi , ik ik karke sab log apka sath chod denge..." rema behad nam akhon se boli ,

"ahahaha , pehle bhi akela tha , dard me tha , koi sath nai tha , log matlabi hote hain , vade tod dete hain , or me , me jisse bhi vada karta hu , akhir tak nibhata hu , esi liye log muze devil kehte hain , kyu ki me alag hu , par mane jo vada kisi ko kar diya , us vade se piche nai palat sakta , abh komal se vada kiya hai , chahe dunia ko jala kar bhi use pana hua toh pa lunga , par khud ko kabhi zukne nai dunga , or voh bhi en bedard insano ke agge , jinki juban ki koi kemat nai..." ravi beintha haste hue bola ,

"ohh matlab yeh dunia bhi tabah ho jayegi , uff bhai abh bhi samaz jao..." rema ne behad prem bhav se ravi ke kande par hath rakhte hue bola ,

"dunia ki bat mat karo , dunia apne matlab ke liye jeeti hai , dusro ko timepass ki cheez samazti hai , log muze kamzor kehte hain , voh khud kitne kamzor hain jindgi me , es bat ka andaza nai unko , ik raz ki bat batau , kabhi bhi apne dil ke raz kisi insan ke agge mat khol dena , kyu ki tume koi samaz nai payega , na tume , na tumare maksad ko , insan rishto me bandhe bahut kamzor se jeev hain , yeh palak japakte hi tumse vada karte hain , phir palak japakte hi us vade ko tod dete hain , phir samne akar tume kehte hain , sorry mane kal hi bata diya tha mane voh vada tod diya hai , ahhhhhhhh lekin me devil hu , devillllllll , me insano jaisa kamzor naii huuuu , me komal ko paker rahugaaa , kisi bhi trah , chahe pori dunia ko tabah hi kyu na karna padheee..." ravi behad dard bhari awaz me beintha gusse me chekh kar bola ,

"yeh , yeh apki ego hai , apka ghamand hai , es trah apko manzil nai milegi bhai , pls khud ko badal lo , pls..." rema behad nam akhon se boli ,

"yeh ego lagti tume , yeh mera ghamand , meri ego nai , yeh mera sehbhav hai , me kisi ke kehne par khud ko badal nai sakta , yeh dunia vado par chalti hai , ik maa apni beti se vada leti hai , ke uski beti apni ijat bacha kar rakhegi , ik beta apne pita se vada karta hai ke voh kabhi badnam nai hoga , ik bhai apni behan se vada karta hai , ke voh uski raksha karega , ik behan apne bhai se vada karti hai ke voh uska man-saman es samaz me banaye rakhegi , ik dost dusre dost se vada karta hai , ke voh uski har bat manega , jo uska dost kahega , lekin enme se ik bhi vada tut jaye , toh uska dard bahut peeda deta hai , beintha gussa ata hai , kai ration tak nend nai ati , bus , bus , rema , main thak chuka hu , logu ki batian sun sun kar , abh or sehan nai hota muzse , me , me ander se tut chuka hu , muze komal ka pyar chahyie , me or kuch nai chahta , me kis par vishwas karu , kis par na karu , log chehre par kuch bolte hain , lekin pith piche kuch karte hain , ufff , ik bat kahu , agar dunia me rehna aisa hai , toh me devil hi thik hu , kam se kam khud me khush toh hu , acha agar samne wala vada tod de , toh muze kya karna chahyie..." ravi behad nam akhon se dard bhare shabado me bola , jane anjane me usne samaz ki karur sachai byan kar di thi ,

"bhai apko bhi usse kiye vade tod dene chahiye , hisab barabar kar do..." rema behad udas lafzu me boli ,

"naiiii , me vade nai todta hu , chahe halat kaise bhi ho jaye , me oru jaisa nai hu , vada todne wale ko kya peeda hoti hai , yeh janta hu me , par me uske diye vade tod du , toh uska dard hazar guna badh jayega , meri dua yahi rehti hai , voh khush rehe , jo muze rula kar gya ho , uski har icha pori ho , jisne muze dil ki gehrayi tak dard diya ho..." ravi beintha dard me bola , lekin voh bol kiske bare me reha tha , akhir kon tha , jisne vada tod kar , use phir se dard diya tha , kon ,

abh rema khamosh thi , uska tez dimag bhi devil ko samaz nai paya tha , use pata tha , komal ka hasin , khubsurat jism , ravi ko apni or akarshit kar reha tha , ravi pagal tha komal ke liye , pichla janam or abh ka janam , yeh bus komal ke liye tha uske bhai ka , lekin kya komal ke jism ka paviter tez uska bhai sehan kar pata , yeh toh anne wale wakht ki bat thi , par han , dunia jarur khatre me padh chuki thi ,

kyu ki jab koi jidd karta hai kisi ko pane ki , tab uske jism se nikalti urza , dunia par parbhav jarur dalti hai , aisa hota aya hai or hota rehega ,


Vahi dusri traf...

khushi ne behad kampte hue , apni akhon ke samne dekha , suhana , ik black dress me uski or badh rehi thi , uske bade bade black pankh the , tabhi us bejan asman me ik andhera sa chane laga ,



suhana ne uper nazarian utha kar dekha , toh kale rang ke panchi asman me hahakar machane lage , jaise voh sadyion se bhuke the , or suhana se chila chila kar khane ki mang kar rehe the ,

suhana unki traf dekh muskrane lagi , or dhere dhere khushi ke pas akar ruk gai , suhana , khushi ki akhon me akhen dal dekh rehi thi , kuch der bad voh boli ,

"tamas , mere bhai ki paltu sevak , umm , hasshhh , kitna skoon hai es khuli hawa me , sans lene me jara si bhi taklef nai hoti , hehe , par tamas janti ho , yeh jagah konsi hai..." suhana , khushi ke sharir ka chakar lagate hue ik dam se uske chehre ke pas apna chehra kar boli ,

"ahhhhh (darkar) mm...muze..jj ..jane dooo..." khushi behad darte hue boli , kyu ki uska sharir shaktiheen tha , voh insan thi , par kyu ,

"hmm , dar lag reha hai , tamas yeh koi jamen nai , na uper koi asman hai , yeh suhana ki yadian hai , yaha suhana bhatak rehi hai , suhana kaid hai yaha , sadyion se , ummmm , dekho na , agar tum kuch palu me etna dar gai ho , me toh apni hi yadion me sadyion se kaid hu , ufff muze seema ka sharir chahyie..." suhana muskrate hue boli ,

"zz...zuth bol rehi ho , ye...yeh mayajaal hai...tt...tumara..." khushi haklate hue boli ,

"ohh hoo , tum insan bhi na , jab tak chamatkar na dekho , tab tak kisi cheez par vishwas nai karte , yeh dekho , meri yadian..." suhana ne muskrate hue apne daye hath ki chutki bajate hue bola ,

suhana ke chutki bajate hi , waha ka masom , vaha ki jamen , sab kuch badal gya , har traf hare bhare pedh , safad badal , chamakta asman , pyare safad panchi , khushi ko aisa mehsus hua , jaise voh kisi jadui dunia me a chuki thi ,



"yy...yeh..kk...kya...hh..hai..." khushi muskrate hue or thoda herian hoker boli ,

"tamas , yeh pari log haiii , meri yadian ka eham hissa , or tumare piche hai , mera pyara khubsurat zarna , dekho piche palat kar..." suhana ne behad rahasmayi muskan ke sath bola ,


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"oh my godd , kitna pyara hai , eska pani toh ik dam saf hai or etna nela , wow , muze bahut pyas lagi hai , me pani pe leti hu..." khushi jo pichle kai ghanto se pyasi thi , bhagte hue pani ke pas gai , or ghutno ke bal beth pani pene lagi ,



khushi pani peker jaise hi uthi , or usne palat kar piche dekha , or piche dekhte hi uski akhon me phir se dar ke badal mandrane lage.....


to be counited....

[Special Note :- Friends pehle toh mafi chahta hu , deri se anne ke liye , kisi dost se vada kiya tha kuch din pehle , chahe health thik ho ya nai , me story restart karuga , finally m come back , so abh yeh part thoda short karke esko ik month me complete kar dunga... :)

mane usse kai vade kiye hain , bus mera sharir sath de , me vade nibhane ke liye , kisi bhi had tak ja sakta hu..

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Great update bhai
Rema ka dimag bhi tez chl rha h
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Yha khushi suhana ke jaal me dasti ja rhi h
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abh agge...

Ravi jaise hi vapis aya , voh piche ki traf jamen par gir gya , uska pora sharir jal sa gya tha , rema yeh sab dekh rehi thi , par voh na toh kuch bol rehi thi , na kuch kar rehi thi ,

akhir ravi , suhana se mil aya tha , lekin der bhi hui thi , kyu ki yeh batian use , suhana se tab karni thi , jab voh pari log me tha , abh usne suhana ko sawikar kar liya tha , lekin abh shyad kahi na kahi der ho chuki thi ,

akhir kuch pal beete , or ravi apni shakti se khud ba khud thik ho gya , jo jalne ke nishan the , voh bhar gye , ravi apna saar pakade khada ho gya , kyu ki uska saar thoda dard kar reha tha ,

"app thik ho bhaii , maa ko hosh kab ayega..." rema behad chinta me ravi ke karib akar boli , usne chinta bhari nigahu se seema ki traf dekha ,

"ahhh uff , seema thik ho jayegii..." ravi apne saar ka dard mehsus karte hue bola ,

"lekin hua kya maa ko (thoda gusse me) , maa ik dam se behosh kyu ho gai , agar meri maa ko kuch huaa..." rema gusse me abhi bol hi rehi thi , ke ravi bech me bol padha ,

"kuch nai hua tumari maa ko , voh apne pichle roop me parvartit ho rehi hai , voh suhana ka roop dharan kar rehi hai , pata nai kya hoga , jab use hosh ayega..." ravi behad chinta me seema ke pas bed par bethte hue bola ,

"yeh , yeh , nai ho sakta , kabhi nai ho sakta , suhana ki yaidan bus ring me kaid hain , or ring maa se door hai , yeh nai ho sakta..." rema behad gusse me chila kar boli ,

"vahi toh me soch reha hu , bina ring pehne seema par suhana ki yaidan havi kaise ho rehi hain , shyad us nakabposh kamini aurat ka hath hoga , vahi ayi thi ghar me..." ravi , rema ke chehre ko shak bhari nigahu se dekhte hue bola ,

"unka koi hath nai , bat kuch or hai..." rema apne bhai se nazarian chura kar boli ,

"remaaa , muzse nazarian mat churao , batao voh aurat kon haii , use map se matlab hai , voh kisi bhi had tak ja sakti hai , voh behad kamini aurat hai , me use tabah kar dunga , agar seema ko kuch hua toh..." ravi beintha gusse me uth kar rema ki akhon me akhen dal bola , bepanah gusse me ravi ka roop badalne laga , akhen lal ho gai , or jism devil ka akar le gya ,

"aisa sochna bhi mat , unka app kuch nai bhigad sakte , or rehi bat maa ki , me apni maa ko phir se bacha lungi , vaise bhi es sab me apki galti hai..." rema bhi vaise hi gusse me dhahadte hue boli , uske lal jadui baal charo traf phailne lage ,

"meri galti , tum pagal ho..."

"han , han , apki galti , apne ruhi (komal) ko pyar kiya , suhana ko nakar diya , agar app suhana ko prem karte , toh abh yeh din na dekhne padhte , lekin nai , apko bus ruhi chahyie , abh bhi vahi halat hain , komal , komal karte rehte ho , bus komal se pyar karna hai , apki jidd ham sab ka vinash kar degi..." rema or bhi gusse me ate hue chila kar boli ,

"ohhh , meri jidd nai thi voh , muze prem tha ruhi se , or suhana ne apna prem apne dil me dabaye rakha , muze nai pata tha , voh muze chahti hai..." ravi behad dard bhari awaz me bola ,

"ohh toh app chahte the , suhana apse kehti ke me pyar karti hu apse , ik ladki apse bolti , wtf , yeh es brehmand ka sabse bada joke hai , jo me sun rehi hu , asal bat pata hai kya thi , apki jidd ke agge apko koi dusra dikha hi nai , na kisi ka pyar , na kisi ka dard , na kisi ke asnu , app ruhi ke liye andhe ho chuke the , or ruhi se apko mila bhi kya , pari log se nikal diye gye app , devil ban gye , lekin tab bhi , apko suhana ka prem dikhai na diya , usne shetian ko pita man liya , sirf apko pane ke liye , voh ruhi banne par atur ho gai , sirf apke liye , pora pari log tabah ho gya , jal kar rakh ho gya , es sab ke jimedar app the , par apko es bat ka koi pachtava nai , bus ruhi , ruhi karte rehe , or abh komal , komal kar rehe ho..." rema apne man ke gusse ko shabado ke jariye bahar nikalte hue behad gusse me boli , uski ik ik bat sach thi ,

"tum , tum mere prem ko nai samaz sakti rema..." ravi behad nam akhon se bola ,

"voh prem nai jidd thi , ik jiddi insan sirf vinash ki traf jata hai , use dunia ki tabahi se koi matlab nai hota , use lagta hai , vahi sahi hai , me manti hu , ruhi apki manzil thi , apka prem tha , par use pane ka rasta galat tha , jidd se prem nai pa sakte , pita ji ne apko sahi saza di , apki jidd ne apko devil bana diya , ik badsurat insan..." rema behad rote hue dard bhare shabado me boli ,

"chattaakkk..." ik jordar thapad rema ke chehre par aan padha , jo ravi ne mara tha ,

"dekha , me sahi thi , gussa , bepanah gussa , es gusse ko leker app komal ka prem pauge , kabhi nai , jab tak apke dil me gussa hai , jidd hai , nafrat hai , tab tak app komal ko chu bhi nai sakte , abh ik hi rasta hai bhaii..." rema apne asnu saf karte hue boli ,

"kya..." ravi nazarian zuka kar bola ,

"suhana ko maf kar do , uski yadion ko mitane ka shyad ik matar rasta yahi hai , abh jab voh aye , tab usse mafi mang lena , or use voh pyar dena , jiske liye voh pari log me tadafti rehi , varna voh bar bar ayegi , har janam me , jab tak use uska prem nai mil jata , uski nafrat ko kam karo , or ring ka nash karo , ham sab sath milkar shetian ko prazit karege , ring ko tabah kar denge , tab seema maa or suhana ik ho jayegii , bus yahi rasta hai..." rema ne apne man me ayi kuch bation ko ravi ke samne rakhte hue bola ,

"tum devil ko zukne ko bol rehi ho , me hell ka prince hu , me nai kar sakta yeh , devil kabhi nai badal sakta , vaise bhi me seema ko pyar de reha hu , vahi toh suhana hai , yeh bat mane suhana ko bata di hai , voh samaz jayegi es bat ko..." phir ravi ne rema ko sari bat bata di , jo kuch der pehle usne suhana se ki thi ,

"hehe , apne suhana se bat ki , matlab kuch bhi , suhana ne marte wakht yeh sharap diya tha , ke voh apka picha kabhi nai chodegi , jab tak voh apka prem or ruhi ka sathan nai pa leti , es brehmand me app hi jiddi nai ho , or bhi jiddi log hain , lekin jidd se hamesha haar milti hai , kabhi kuch parapat nai hota..." rema beintha haste hue boli ,

"chalo mera prem jidd hai toh jidd hi sahi , me komal ko paker rahuga , chahe yeh dunia bhi tabah kyu na ho jaye , devil toh ban chuka hu , es se badtar abh kuch nai hoga..." ravi lal chamakti akhon se muskrate hue bola ,

"app samaz nai rehe ho , apko kuch nai milega , har insan apse door ho jayega , dard me rahuge har pal , koi prem nai karega apse , or es raste par komal bhi nai milegi apko , kyu ki jidd se kuch nai milta kabhi , ik ik karke sab log apka sath chod denge..." rema behad nam akhon se boli ,

"ahahaha , pehle bhi akela tha , dard me tha , koi sath nai tha , log matlabi hote hain , vade tod dete hain , or me , me jisse bhi vada karta hu , akhir tak nibhata hu , esi liye log muze devil kehte hain , kyu ki me alag hu , par mane jo vada kisi ko kar diya , us vade se piche nai palat sakta , abh komal se vada kiya hai , chahe dunia ko jala kar bhi use pana hua toh pa lunga , par khud ko kabhi zukne nai dunga , or voh bhi en bedard insano ke agge , jinki juban ki koi kemat nai..." ravi beintha haste hue bola ,

"ohh matlab yeh dunia bhi tabah ho jayegi , uff bhai abh bhi samaz jao..." rema ne behad prem bhav se ravi ke kande par hath rakhte hue bola ,

"dunia ki bat mat karo , dunia apne matlab ke liye jeeti hai , dusro ko timepass ki cheez samazti hai , log muze kamzor kehte hain , voh khud kitne kamzor hain jindgi me , es bat ka andaza nai unko , ik raz ki bat batau , kabhi bhi apne dil ke raz kisi insan ke agge mat khol dena , kyu ki tume koi samaz nai payega , na tume , na tumare maksad ko , insan rishto me bandhe bahut kamzor se jeev hain , yeh palak japakte hi tumse vada karte hain , phir palak japakte hi us vade ko tod dete hain , phir samne akar tume kehte hain , sorry mane kal hi bata diya tha mane voh vada tod diya hai , ahhhhhhhh lekin me devil hu , devillllllll , me insano jaisa kamzor naii huuuu , me komal ko paker rahugaaa , kisi bhi trah , chahe pori dunia ko tabah hi kyu na karna padheee..." ravi behad dard bhari awaz me beintha gusse me chekh kar bola ,

"yeh , yeh apki ego hai , apka ghamand hai , es trah apko manzil nai milegi bhai , pls khud ko badal lo , pls..." rema behad nam akhon se boli ,

"yeh ego lagti tume , yeh mera ghamand , meri ego nai , yeh mera sehbhav hai , me kisi ke kehne par khud ko badal nai sakta , yeh dunia vado par chalti hai , ik maa apni beti se vada leti hai , ke uski beti apni ijat bacha kar rakhegi , ik beta apne pita se vada karta hai ke voh kabhi badnam nai hoga , ik bhai apni behan se vada karta hai , ke voh uski raksha karega , ik behan apne bhai se vada karti hai ke voh uska man-saman es samaz me banaye rakhegi , ik dost dusre dost se vada karta hai , ke voh uski har bat manega , jo uska dost kahega , lekin enme se ik bhi vada tut jaye , toh uska dard bahut peeda deta hai , beintha gussa ata hai , kai ration tak nend nai ati , bus , bus , rema , main thak chuka hu , logu ki batian sun sun kar , abh or sehan nai hota muzse , me , me ander se tut chuka hu , muze komal ka pyar chahyie , me or kuch nai chahta , me kis par vishwas karu , kis par na karu , log chehre par kuch bolte hain , lekin pith piche kuch karte hain , ufff , ik bat kahu , agar dunia me rehna aisa hai , toh me devil hi thik hu , kam se kam khud me khush toh hu , acha agar samne wala vada tod de , toh muze kya karna chahyie..." ravi behad nam akhon se dard bhare shabado me bola , jane anjane me usne samaz ki karur sachai byan kar di thi ,

"bhai apko bhi usse kiye vade tod dene chahiye , hisab barabar kar do..." rema behad udas lafzu me boli ,

"naiiii , me vade nai todta hu , chahe halat kaise bhi ho jaye , me oru jaisa nai hu , vada todne wale ko kya peeda hoti hai , yeh janta hu me , par me uske diye vade tod du , toh uska dard hazar guna badh jayega , meri dua yahi rehti hai , voh khush rehe , jo muze rula kar gya ho , uski har icha pori ho , jisne muze dil ki gehrayi tak dard diya ho..." ravi beintha dard me bola , lekin voh bol kiske bare me reha tha , akhir kon tha , jisne vada tod kar , use phir se dard diya tha , kon ,

abh rema khamosh thi , uska tez dimag bhi devil ko samaz nai paya tha , use pata tha , komal ka hasin , khubsurat jism , ravi ko apni or akarshit kar reha tha , ravi pagal tha komal ke liye , pichla janam or abh ka janam , yeh bus komal ke liye tha uske bhai ka , lekin kya komal ke jism ka paviter tez uska bhai sehan kar pata , yeh toh anne wale wakht ki bat thi , par han , dunia jarur khatre me padh chuki thi ,

kyu ki jab koi jidd karta hai kisi ko pane ki , tab uske jism se nikalti urza , dunia par parbhav jarur dalti hai , aisa hota aya hai or hota rehega ,


Vahi dusri traf...

khushi ne behad kampte hue , apni akhon ke samne dekha , suhana , ik black dress me uski or badh rehi thi , uske bade bade black pankh the , tabhi us bejan asman me ik andhera sa chane laga ,



suhana ne uper nazarian utha kar dekha , toh kale rang ke panchi asman me hahakar machane lage , jaise voh sadyion se bhuke the , or suhana se chila chila kar khane ki mang kar rehe the ,

suhana unki traf dekh muskrane lagi , or dhere dhere khushi ke pas akar ruk gai , suhana , khushi ki akhon me akhen dal dekh rehi thi , kuch der bad voh boli ,

"tamas , mere bhai ki paltu sevak , umm , hasshhh , kitna skoon hai es khuli hawa me , sans lene me jara si bhi taklef nai hoti , hehe , par tamas janti ho , yeh jagah konsi hai..." suhana , khushi ke sharir ka chakar lagate hue ik dam se uske chehre ke pas apna chehra kar boli ,

"ahhhhh (darkar) mm...muze..jj ..jane dooo..." khushi behad darte hue boli , kyu ki uska sharir shaktiheen tha , voh insan thi , par kyu ,

"hmm , dar lag reha hai , tamas yeh koi jamen nai , na uper koi asman hai , yeh suhana ki yadian hai , yaha suhana bhatak rehi hai , suhana kaid hai yaha , sadyion se , ummmm , dekho na , agar tum kuch palu me etna dar gai ho , me toh apni hi yadion me sadyion se kaid hu , ufff muze seema ka sharir chahyie..." suhana muskrate hue boli ,

"zz...zuth bol rehi ho , ye...yeh mayajaal hai...tt...tumara..." khushi haklate hue boli ,

"ohh hoo , tum insan bhi na , jab tak chamatkar na dekho , tab tak kisi cheez par vishwas nai karte , yeh dekho , meri yadian..." suhana ne muskrate hue apne daye hath ki chutki bajate hue bola ,

suhana ke chutki bajate hi , waha ka masom , vaha ki jamen , sab kuch badal gya , har traf hare bhare pedh , safad badal , chamakta asman , pyare safad panchi , khushi ko aisa mehsus hua , jaise voh kisi jadui dunia me a chuki thi ,



"yy...yeh..kk...kya...hh..hai..." khushi muskrate hue or thoda herian hoker boli ,

"tamas , yeh pari log haiii , meri yadian ka eham hissa , or tumare piche hai , mera pyara khubsurat zarna , dekho piche palat kar..." suhana ne behad rahasmayi muskan ke sath bola ,


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"oh my godd , kitna pyara hai , eska pani toh ik dam saf hai or etna nela , wow , muze bahut pyas lagi hai , me pani pe leti hu..." khushi jo pichle kai ghanto se pyasi thi , bhagte hue pani ke pas gai , or ghutno ke bal beth pani pene lagi ,



khushi pani peker jaise hi uthi , or usne palat kar piche dekha , or piche dekhte hi uski akhon me phir se dar ke badal mandrane lage.....


to be counited....

[Special Note :- Friends pehle toh mafi chahta hu , deri se anne ke liye , kisi dost se vada kiya tha kuch din pehle , chahe health thik ho ya nai , me story restart karuga , finally m come back , so abh yeh part thoda short karke esko ik month me complete kar dunga... :)

mane usse kai vade kiye hain , bus mera sharir sath de , me vade nibhane ke liye , kisi bhi had tak ja sakta hu..

abh yeh app logu par nirbhar karta hai , agar replys ache aye toh update bhi dunga , lekin agar replys kam aye , toh update bhi der se dunga.. lekin daily check jarur karte rehna ... shukariya... ]
Bhai gajab ka update diya he. Lekin ravi ka badalta rup samajh e nahi aaya. Wo kiske wade ke tutane ki baat kar raha tha. Reema pehle gussa hoti he fir ravi ko samjhane lagti he. Us nakabpos aurat ki baat ati he to najare churane lagti he. Bahut jyada confused hu. Reema to komal se pyaar karti he fir use ravi aur usake pyaar se kya piroblem he. Aur bhai ab khushi bahut dur reh li use wapas le aao. Ye to yaad he mujhe ki khushi seema ke mathe par hat lagate he gayab hui thi. To kya wakai me wo suhana ke yado me kaid ho gayi he.
Waiting 4 next update
 
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