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Abh Agge...

Kat , ravi ka saar apni god me rakhe , zuk kar uske hontho ko chus rehi thi , ufff yeh mohhabat ka , ishq ka , pyar ka , sabse khubsurat drishye tha , dono behad khubsurat lag rehe the ,

kabhi han , kabhi na , dono ka rishta , bus han-na ki nazuk dor se bandha hua tha , jiski rachna hui thi , devil ko marne ke liye , ajj vahi devil ke pyar me , ghutne tek chuki thi , ro rehi thi , do pal ka prem ke liye ,

yahi toh pyar hai , yahi toh ishq hai , voh pyar nai jab kisi ladki ki chaplusi karke , uske jism ko bhogne ki lalsa man me ho , pyar ik tadaf hai , ik udasi , akhon se behte asnu pyar hai , seene me uthta dard pyar hai , rat bhar so na pana pyar hai , or sote hue uska sapna ate , chekh kar uthna pyar hai , pyar par hazaro batian likhi ja sakti hain , par nibhane ke liye ik shabad hai "wafa.." , jo wafadar hai , usi ka pyar sacha hai ,

wafa tum karo , voh kare ya na kare , kehte hai bevafai toh bhagwan bhi karta hai , bin bataye mout deker , ik trafa pyar me bhi behad takat hoti hai , kyu ki es me apko bewafi ka dar nai hota , lekin dard bahut hota hai , jab apka pyar kisi se bat kare ,

pyar khamoshi hai , eski koi juban nai , lekin jab kisi ke jism me ghusta hai , tab sidha uske dil par war karta hai , dil ko gulam bana leta hai , sab rishte-nate , sahi galat , insan bhul jata hai , dunia ke kuch hi khush kismat log honge , jo pyar se jeet paye ho , varna , baki toh dunia bhul jate hain , yeh na toh marne deta hai , or na jeene deta hai ,

eska na koi roop hai , na akar hai , jo hame yeh dikhata hai , vahi eska roop ban jata hai , usi insan se hame pyar karna padhta hai , kyu akhir , kyu , lakho logu me , hame ik se hi pyar hota hai , or hota toh hai , par kabhi mil nai pata , kisi ne sach hi kaha hai...

ke , mane dekha hai mohhabat ko , andhere kamre me ,
par dekh paya dundla dundla , kyu ki ,
meri akhon me beintha asnu the...

kahani likhna asan nai hota , par likhta hu , kyu ki me chahta hu , agar meri likhi bation se , kisi ko pyar ki kadar ho jaye , toh me samazuga , meri lekhni safal ho gai , khair abh agge...

"raviiii , maf kar doo..." kat , ravi ke hontho ko chusna chod , beintha rote hue , uske pore chehre ko chumte hue boli ,

"ahhh , abh skoon mila dil ko , abh mar bhi jau , toh koi gam na hoga , bus dil me beintha khushi hogi , ke dam toda toh , me apni mohhabat ki god me tha..." ravi behad nam akhon se bola ,

"shhhh , tum mar nai sakte , kabhi naii , me , me , tume marne nai dungiii , jab tak mere dil me , tumare liye aseem pyar hai , dunia me koi tume , muzse cheen nai sakta..." kat , ravi ki akhon me zakte hue boli ,

uski akh se nikale asnu , ravi ke chehre par gir rehe the , or jab vahi asnu beh kar , ravi ki akhon me jate , toh ravi ko ik aisa skoon milta , ke use byan kar pana namumkin tha ,

use lagta , use skoon mil gya , dil ki gehrai tak , jaise abh use , koi chinta nai thi , koi dar nai tha , koi dard nai tha , uske har dard ko , kat ke asnu mita rehe the ,

"etna pyar , me dar gya tha , kahi tum..." ravi uth kar ghutno ke bal bethte hue bola ,

"mere pyar ka koi ant nai hai , han , me komal jitna tumse pyar nai kar sakti , voh hazaro salo se , bus tumari rehi hai , sirf tumari , uski har dhadkan me , tumara nam likha hai , etni shidat se , koi kaise kisi ko chah sakta hai , yaha jism ki jarurat hi khatam ho jaye , me tum dono ke pyar ke agge , apna saar zukati hu..." kat behad nam akhon se apna chehra zuka kar boli ,

akhir zuk hi gai kat , us paviter pyar ke agge , ajj phir ravi ke pita haar gye , jis ladki ki rachna kar , voh sochte the , abh ravi or komal kabhi ik nai ho payege , ajj vahi ladki , dono bhai behan ke agge zuk gai thi , usne man liya , ke voh pyar se jeet nai sakti , kyu ki abh use bhi pyar ho gya tha ,

"naiii , yeh mat kaho , apne pyar ki tulna kisi or se mat karo , agar tulna karugi , toh dukh hoga , taklef hogi , tumara dil abh nazuk hai , tum rone lagugi , or me tume rote nai dekh sakta , komal ka pyar apni jagah hai , or tumara apni jagah..." ravi , kat ka chehra dono hatho me pakad uski akhon me akhen dal behad dard bhari awaz me bola , uff sach me kat , us wakht , behad masom lag rehi thi ,

"ravii , me ro kyu rehi hu etna , main , main rona nai chahti , par asnu ruk nai rehe , pls muze shant karo , pls ravii , mere asnu nai ruk rehe..." kat behad rote hue boli , sach me uske asnu zarne ki trah beh rehe the , lekin voh khubsurat zarna tha ,

"shhh , akhen band karo , mere pyar ko mehsus karo , behad shidat se , khud ko mehsus karo , tumare asnu ruk jayege..." ravi ne kat ke gore bhege gaalo se behte asnu apni jebh se chatte hue bola ,

"ahhhh , i love you , abh me shant hu , mera pyar mere pas hai , muze skoon mil gya hai , abh muze koi dard nai , abh me thik hu..." kat , behad muskrate hue akhen band kar boli , sach me abh uske asnu tham gye the ,

"dekha ho gya na , meri kat , acha kat , muze fari se milna hai , me chalta hu , tum aram kar lo.." ravi , kat ka matha chum kar bola ,

"thik hai , par sorry , mane tum par shak kiya..." kat ne phir se nam akhon se bola ,

"shhh , bhul jao us bat ko , voh wakht beet gya , tum us bare me mat sochu , hame pyar hai , ik dusre se , beintha pyar , abh kuch der so jao , me ata hu tumare pas..." ravi , kat ke hontho ko chumte hue bola , phir kat bhi muskrane lagi ,

ravi vaha se uth kar sedyian chad , apne room me a gya , usne dekha , fari or baby abhi bhi so rehi thi , lekin tabhi uski nazar balkoni me khadi komal par gai , jo door tak phaile jungle ko nihar rehi thi ,

ravi agge badh uske sath khada ho gya , komal ne ik bar apne bhai ko dekha , par voh phir se jungle ki traf dekhne lagi , ravi bhi khamosh khada reha ,

"shukariya bhyia..." komal ne ravi ko bina dekhe bola ,

"kis bat ke liye..." ravi , komal ke baalo ko dekhta hua bola , jo hawa chalne se uddte hue behad khubsurat lag rehe the ,

"kat man gai , uff muze dar tha kahi..." komal behad ghabrai hui , ravi ke kande par saar rakh boli ,

"ohh komal , voh man gai , mere pyar ne use vishwas dila diya..." ravi ne komal ke kande par hath rakh bola ,

"bhyia , muze dar lag reha hai , kahi kat , ufff , me apke bina jee nai sakti..." komal behad nam akhon se boli ,

"shhh , kuch nai hoga muze , voh pichle janam ki bat thi , tab kat muzse pyar nai karti thi , lekin abh voh muze beintha chahti hai..." ravi ne komal ko apni bahu me bharte hue uske baal sehlate hue bola ,

"bhyia , kya voh devil se bhi pyar karti hai , kat ki fitrat me nai , ke voh devil se pyar kar sake , ufff kat apko bahut chahti hai , voh apse door rehi toh mar jayegii , pata nai pita ji , konsa khel khel rehe hain , voh chahte kya hai hamse..." komal ne behad rote hue bola ,

"me nai janta ke kya anjam hoga hamari mohhabat ka , par komal , me pita ji ke agge kabhi nai zukuga , meri kya galti hai , konsa gunah kiya hai , mane apni behan se pyar hi toh kiya hai , abh kya karu , agar mera dil meri behan ke liye dhadkata hai , me nai jee sakta , apni behan ke bina , etna dard de rehe hai voh muze , ke me apni behan ko pyar tak nai kar sakta , meri jaan lele voh , mar de muze..." ravi beintha dard me nam akhon se bola ,

"nai bhai , aisa mat bolo , me , me , apke bina kya karugi , agar apko kuch hua toh me bhi apni jaan de dungi , naii jee sakti apke bina , pita ji , sun rehe ho app , mar do ham dono ko , jaan lelo hamari , par hame ik hone do , pls pita ji..." komal beintha rote hue chekhte chilate hue boli ,

"shhhiii , meri komal , me hu na , ham koi rasta nikal lenge , us ring ko khatam kar denge , phir pita ji , hame ik hone se kabhi nai rok payege , meri behan , tu , tu mera sath dena , meri pagli behan..." ravi , komal ka rotu chehra apne dono hatho me pakad , uske hontho ko kas kar chumta hua bola ,

"voh amar hai , voh , voh manhos ring amar hai , voh bereham hai , bedard hai , najane usne sadyion tak , kitne masom logu ko mara hai , me , me use nafrat karti hu , ham , bhyia ham , ham kaise marege use , voh toh mar hi nai sakti , bhyia voh meri bali deker rehegi , kyu , kyu , akhir kyu , meri behan suhana muzse etni nafrat karti hai , ik traf pita ji hame ik hone nai de rehe , or ik traf yeh manhos ring..." komal beintha rote hue boli ,

"ik mint , pita ji or ring , kahi yeh sab pita ji ka toh khel nai , han , ufff ahh , ham pehle kyu nai samaz paye , komal pita ji hi shetian hain , unke do roop hain , ik acha or ik bura , or ring unka hi ik ansh hai , matlab , jab suhana tumse nafrat karke , shetian ki pooja kar rehi thi , toh voh , ohh , toh voh pita ji ki pooja kar rehi thi , komal , pita ji es dunia me abh bhi hain , or ham par nazar rakh rehe hain , kisi bhi roop me , kon hoga..." ravi behad sochte hue bola ,

"bhyia , pita ji shetian nai ho sakte , voh toh pari log ke raza the..." komal apne asnu saf karte hue boli ,

"hamara pyar , han komal , hamare pyar ne , unke dil me nafrat bhardi , voh kisi na kisi trah , hame ik nai hone dena chahte the , es liye pehle pita ji ne , suhana ke man me jehar bhara , apni atmik vidaya se , voh , voh kisi ke bhi man ko control kar sakte hain , pita ji ne hame alag karne ke najane kitne yadjanatar rache , rema bhi unki beti thi , unki apni beti , or suhana bhi , lekin suhana yeh bat nai janti , hame suhana ko es bat ka ehsas karvana hoga , ke voh bekasur thi , pori galti pita ji ki thi..." ravi ne behad gusse me dard bhari awaz me bola ,

"app thik keh rehe ho , pita ji ham par nazar rakh rehe hain , unka pata lagana hoga , shyad voh insani roop me honge , hamari trah..." komal bhi shant hoker boli ,

"or me janta hu voh kon bata sakta hai..." ravi behad muskra kar bola , uski akhen lal roshni me chamak uthi ,

"kon..." komal bhi hadbada kar boli ,

"voh hain , kaal , kaal hi hame pita ji ke bare me bata sakte hain , hamari pichli jindgi , or ring ke bare me bhi , me janta hu kaal ke bina , ham adhure reh jate , vahi hame pori sachai batayege , me ajj rat unse milne jauga..." ravi behad sochte hue bola ,

"kyaa , bhyia abh kya hoga , muze bahut dar lag reha hai..." komal , apne pita ko yad karke , behad darte hue , apne bhai ke gale lagte hue boli ,

"komal , me es ring ki jad ko khatam karuga , matlab pita ji ko , or phir me tumse shadi karuga , abh voh map hi hame , pori sachai batayega , akhir yeh khel hai kya , komal , yeh bahut bada khel hai , or yeh bat kisi ko mat batana , abhi ke liye..." ravi ne komal ko bahu me bharte hue bola ,

"ahhh bhyia muzse pyar karo , meri vasna badhti ja rehi hai , pita ji , muz par havi ho rehe hain , voh kisi or ke sath , ohh me kaise bolu apko , me apni jaan de dungi bhyiaa , muzse or sehan nai hota , pls bhyia kuch karo , kuch toh karo naa..." komal dard me sisakte hue bilakh bilakh kar rote hue boli ,

"naiii , tum meri ho , kuch nai hoga tume , me kuch karta hu , bus control rakho khud par , kuch bhi galat mat karna , hamesha yad rakhna , agar tune apni jaan di , toh me usi pal apni jaan de dunga , hamari jung , pita ji ke khilaf hai , voh chahe jo bhi kar le , par hamse jeet nai sakte , kabhi nai..." ravi , komal ko apni bahu me bhar use kas kar apne gale lagata hua bola ,

"bhyiaa , maa kaha hai , voh bhi jalti hai hamse , sab jalte hain , hamare paviter pyar se , me apke sath kahi bhi chalne ko tyar hu , muze hell le chalo , kam se kam , maa or pita ji ka manhos saya toh nai hoga hamare pyar par , bhyia..." komal bacho ki trah rote hue jidd karte hue boli ,

"komal , shh shant ho jao , tum maa ho , es kudrat ki , voh dekho tumre bache muskra rehe hain , dekho unki traf , unke sath batian karo , khud ko shant karo..." ravi , komal ko jungle ki traf ghumate hue bola , komal jungle ko dekhte hi , shant ho gai , usne akhen band kar li , or muskrane lagi ,

ravi ne ik skoon ki sans li , or piche palat kar dekha , fari uth rehi thi , ravi uske pas jaker bed par beth gya , jab fari ne halke se akhen kholi , toh apne papa ko samne dekh , voh muskrate hue , tezi se uth kar unke gale lag gai...

"meri bachii , uth gaii app , fari ji app bahut sone lagi ho..." ravi , pyar se fari ke gaal chumta hua bola ,

"papa , mumma bhi toh so rehi hai , enko toh bus bahana chahyie sone ka..." fari , baby ki traf dekh muskrate hue boli ,

"sahi bola meri beti ne , tumari mumma kamchor hai..." ravi haste hue bola ,

"kya bola tumne..." baby sote sote ik akh khol kar boli ,

"beti hamne kuch bola kya..." ravi , fari ki traf dekh kar bola ,

"nai papa , ham dono ne kuch nai bola..." fari behad muskra kar boli ,

"huu , tum dono bach kar reho muzse , agar kuch bola , toh dono ko peet dungi..." baby phir se ik akh khol kar boli ,

ravi or fari ne ik dusre ki traf dekha or phir jor se bole..."attaackkk..." dono kud padhe baby par ,

ravi ne baby ki hatho ko pakad liya , or fari , baby ke pet me gudgudi karne lagi , baby behad hasne lagi ,

"ahhh meri bachi sorry , galti ho gai mumma se , maf kar do mumma ko..." baby behad haste hue boli ,

"kis mumma ko maf karu , etne toh darzan me kele nai hote , jitni meri mumma hai..." fari apne mathe par hath marti hui boli ,

"beta , juhi mumma ko maf kar do..." baby pet me hoti gudgudi se preshan hote hue boli , phir fari , baby ki bat sun ruk gai , or ravi ko dekhne lagi ,

"kya hua beti..." ravi thoda sharma kar bola ,

"papa , yeh nayi item kab patai , nam toh acha hai juhi , kya voh bhi meri mumma hai..." fari behad muskrate hue boli ,

fari ki bat sun ravi ne apna matha peet liya , or baby use gusse me dekhne lagi ,

"beta tumari baby mumma ka hi nam juhi hai..." ravi chehra zuka kar bola ,

"ohh , acha , uff me ayi susu karke..." fari ik dam se yeh bol bahar bhag gai ,

ravi or baby ik dusre ki traf dekh hasne lage ,

"baby , dekho na fari ko , jab jungle me mili thi , tab kitni khamosh thi , or ajj , dekho esko , kisi ko bat nai karne deti... " ravi muskrate hue bola ,

"han , par ravi , voh bat meri beti ko kabhi mat bolna , ke voh anath hai (rote hue) , voh hamari beti hai , kya hua mane use janam nai diya , par me uski maa hu , voh meri beti hai , or badi hoker mere jaisi banegi..." baby behad rote hue boli ,

"nai meri jaan , voh ham dono jaisi banegi , akhir me bhi toh tumara bacha hu , baby mumma doodu pilao na , bhuk lagi hai.." ravi , baby ko bed par girakar uske uper chadte hue bola ,

"ouchh kya kar rehe ho , fari a jayegi , hame dekh legi..." baby behad sharmate hue boli ,

"me konsi chori kar reha hu , uski maa ka doodh hi toh pe reha hu , abh pilyao doodh.." ravi , baby ke gol gol mote mammo ko uske top ke uper se chumte chuste hue bola ,

"ouchhhh ahhhh rat ko pila dungi ahhh abh chodo muze..." baby thoda sharmate hue sisak kar boli ,

"acha , thik hai..." ravi ne etna bol baby ke hontho par apne honth rakh diye , dono ik dusre ko hontho ko behad shidat se chusne lage , par unki badkismati , fari vapis a gai ,

"papa..." fari ne apni akhon par hath rakh bola , toh baby or ravi hadbada kar alag ho gye ,

"beta voh , voh..." ravi nazarian zuka bola , or baby ne sharama kar apni akhen band kar li ,

"me samaz gai , ik or fari ki tyari ho rehi hai , par papa , abh muze ik bhai chahyie , jise me bahut pyar karugi..." fari , ravi ki god me bethte hue muskrate hue boli , toh ravi sharma kar muskrane laga , vahi baby toh sharam se pani pani ho gai thi....

"beti , bache aise nai bolte.." ravi muskrate hue bola ,

"papa , me *** saal ki hu , bachi nai hu me , muze bhai chahyie , lekin kis mumma ka bacha mera bhai banega , kon si mumma achi hai..." fari apna ik hath , apne gaal par rakhte sochne lagi ,

"beti , mere pas ik idea hai..." ravi , baby ki traf dekh muskra kar bola ,

"han , batao papa..." fari bhi muskrate hue boli ,

"beti , tum sabhi mumma se puch lu , jo mumma tyar hogi , uska bacha , tumara bhai ban jayega , jao sabse bat karo..." ravi , apni beti ka matha chum kar bola ,

"are han papa , me abhi puchti hu sabse , dekhte hain , konsi mumma tyar hogi , bhai dene ke liye , lekin papa , yeh secret rehega , ham tino ke bech , ok.." fari bed se niche utar kar boli ,

"ji fari ji.." ravi apni hassi rokte hue bola ,

phir fari room se bahar chali gai , ravi or baby ne ik dusre ki traf dekha , or hasne lage...


to be counited....
 
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Naik

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Abh Agge...

Kat , ravi ka saar apni god me rakhe , zuk kar uske hontho ko chus rehi thi , ufff yeh mohhabat ka , ishq ka , pyar ka , sabse khubsurat drishye tha , dono behad khubsurat lag rehe the ,

kabhi han , kabhi na , dono ka rishta , bus han-na ki nazuk dor se bandha hua tha , jiski rachna hui thi , devil ko marne ke liye , ajj vahi devil ke pyar me , ghutne tek chuki thi , ro rehi thi , do pal ka prem ke liye ,

yahi toh pyar hai , yahi toh ishq hai , voh pyar nai jab kisi ladki ki chaplusi karke , uske jism ko bhogne ki lalsa man me ho , pyar ik tadaf hai , ik udasi , akhon se behte asnu pyar hai , seene me uthta dard pyar hai , rat bhar so na pana pyar hai , or sote hue uska sapna ate , chekh kar uthna pyar hai , pyar par hazaro batian likhi ja sakti hain , par nibhane ke liye ik shabad hai "wafa.." , jo wafadar hai , usi ka pyar sacha hai ,

wafa tum karo , voh kare ya na kare , kehte hai bevafai toh bhagwan bhi karta hai , bin bataye mout deker , ik trafa pyar me bhi behad takat hoti hai , kyu ki es me apko bewafi ka dar nai hota , lekin dard bahut hota hai , jab apka pyar kisi se bat kare ,

mane khud 6 saal ik trafa pyar kiya hai , han , abh pyar mil gya hai , lekin eski kimet bahut badi chukai mane , 2 saal hospital ke chakar kate , (me apni real love story par ik short story likhuga , jalad hi , mera liver transplant , or mera pyar muze milna , sab apke sath share karuga , tain ki apko sache pyar ki kadar ho jaye...)

pyar khamoshi hai , eski koi juban nai , lekin jab kisi ke jism me ghusta hai , tab sidha uske dil par war karta hai , dil ko gulam bana leta hai , sab rishte-nate , sahi galat , insan bhul jata hai , dunia ke kuch hi khush kismat log honge , jo pyar se jeet paye ho , varna , baki toh dunia bhul jate hain , yeh na toh marne deta hai , or na jeene deta hai ,

eska na koi roop hai , na akar hai , jo hame yeh dikhata hai , vahi eska roop ban jata hai , usi insan se hame pyar karna padhta hai , kyu akhir , kyu , lakho logu me , hame ik se hi pyar hota hai , or hota toh hai , par kabhi mil nai pata , kisi ne sach hi kaha hai...

ke , mane dekha hai mohhabat ko , andhere kamre me ,
par dekh paya dundla dundla , kyu ki ,
meri akhon me beintha asnu the...

kahani likhna asan nai hota , par likhta hu , kyu ki me chahta hu , agar meri likhi bation se , kisi ko pyar ki kadar ho jaye , toh me samazuga , meri lekhni safal ho gai , khair abh agge...

"raviiii , maf kar doo..." kat , ravi ke hontho ko chusna chod , beintha rote hue , uske pore chehre ko chumte hue boli ,

"ahhh , abh skoon mila dil ko , abh mar bhi jau , toh koi gam na hoga , bus dil me beintha khushi hogi , ke dam toda toh , me apni mohhabat ki god me tha..." ravi behad nam akhon se bola ,

"shhhh , tum mar nai sakte , kabhi naii , me , me , tume marne nai dungiii , jab tak mere dil me , tumare liye aseem pyar hai , dunia me koi tume , muzse cheen nai sakta..." kat , ravi ki akhon me zakte hue boli ,

uski akh se nikale asnu , ravi ke chehre par gir rehe the , or jab vahi asnu beh kar , ravi ki akhon me jate , toh ravi ko ik aisa skoon milta , ke use byan kar pana namumkin tha ,

use lagta , use skoon mil gya , dil ki gehrai tak , jaise abh use , koi chinta nai thi , koi dar nai tha , koi dard nai tha , uske har dard ko , kat ke asnu mita rehe the ,

"etna pyar , me dar gya tha , kahi tum..." ravi uth kar ghutno ke bal bethte hue bola ,

"mere pyar ka koi ant nai hai , han , me komal jitna tumse pyar nai kar sakti , voh hazaro salo se , bus tumari rehi hai , sirf tumari , uski har dhadkan me , tumara nam likha hai , etni shidat se , koi kaise kisi ko chah sakta hai , yaha jism ki jarurat hi khatam ho jaye , me tum dono ke pyar ke agge , apna saar zukati hu..." kat behad nam akhon se apna chehra zuka kar boli ,

akhir zuk hi gai kat , us paviter pyar ke agge , ajj phir ravi ke pita haar gye , jis ladki ki rachna kar , voh sochte the , abh ravi or komal kabhi ik nai ho payege , ajj vahi ladki , dono bhai behan ke agge zuk gai thi , usne man liya , ke voh pyar se jeet nai sakti , kyu ki abh use bhi pyar ho gya tha ,

"naiii , yeh mat kaho , apne pyar ki tulna kisi or se mat karo , agar tulna karugi , toh dukh hoga , taklef hogi , tumara dil abh nazuk hai , tum rone lagugi , or me tume rote nai dekh sakta , komal ka pyar apni jagah hai , or tumara apni jagah..." ravi , kat ka chehra dono hatho me pakad uski akhon me akhen dal behad dard bhari awaz me bola , uff sach me kat , us wakht , behad masom lag rehi thi ,

"ravii , me ro kyu rehi hu etna , main , main rona nai chahti , par asnu ruk nai rehe , pls muze shant karo , pls ravii , mere asnu nai ruk rehe..." kat behad rote hue boli , sach me uske asnu zarne ki trah beh rehe the , lekin voh khubsurat zarna tha ,

"shhh , akhen band karo , mere pyar ko mehsus karo , behad shidat se , khud ko mehsus karo , tumare asnu ruk jayege..." ravi ne kat ke gore bhege gaalo se behte asnu apni jebh se chatte hue bola ,

"ahhhh , i love you , abh me shant hu , mera pyar mere pas hai , muze skoon mil gya hai , abh muze koi dard nai , abh me thik hu..." kat , behad muskrate hue akhen band kar boli , sach me abh uske asnu tham gye the ,

"dekha ho gya na , meri kat , acha kat , muze fari se milna hai , me chalta hu , tum aram kar lo.." ravi , kat ka matha chum kar bola ,

"thik hai , par sorry , mane tum par shak kiya..." kat ne phir se nam akhon se bola ,

"shhh , bhul jao us bat ko , voh wakht beet gya , tum us bare me mat sochu , hame pyar hai , ik dusre se , beintha pyar , abh kuch der so jao , me ata hu tumare pas..." ravi , kat ke hontho ko chumte hue bola , phir kat bhi muskrane lagi ,

ravi vaha se uth kar sedyian chad , apne room me a gya , usne dekha , fari or baby abhi bhi so rehi thi , lekin tabhi uski nazar balkoni me khadi komal par gai , jo door tak phaile jungle ko nihar rehi thi ,

ravi agge badh uske sath khada ho gya , komal ne ik bar apne bhai ko dekha , par voh phir se jungle ki traf dekhne lagi , ravi bhi khamosh khada reha ,

"shukariya bhyia..." komal ne ravi ko bina dekhe bola ,

"kis bat ke liye..." ravi , komal ke baalo ko dekhta hua bola , jo hawa chalne se uddte hue behad khubsurat lag rehe the ,

"kat man gai , uff muze dar tha kahi..." komal behad ghabrai hui , ravi ke kande par saar rakh boli ,

"ohh komal , voh man gai , mere pyar ne use vishwas dila diya..." ravi ne komal ke kande par hath rakh bola ,

"bhyia , muze dar lag reha hai , kahi kat , ufff , me apke bina jee nai sakti..." komal behad nam akhon se boli ,

"shhh , kuch nai hoga muze , voh pichle janam ki bat thi , tab kat muzse pyar nai karti thi , lekin abh voh muze beintha chahti hai..." ravi ne komal ko apni bahu me bharte hue uske baal sehlate hue bola ,

"bhyia , kya voh devil se bhi pyar karti hai , kat ki fitrat me nai , ke voh devil se pyar kar sake , ufff kat apko bahut chahti hai , voh apse door rehi toh mar jayegii , pata nai pita ji , konsa khel khel rehe hain , voh chahte kya hai hamse..." komal ne behad rote hue bola ,

"me nai janta ke kya anjam hoga hamari mohhabat ka , par komal , me pita ji ke agge kabhi nai zukuga , meri kya galti hai , konsa gunah kiya hai , mane apni behan se pyar hi toh kiya hai , abh kya karu , agar mera dil meri behan ke liye dhadkata hai , me nai jee sakta , apni behan ke bina , etna dard de rehe hai voh muze , ke me apni behan ko pyar tak nai kar sakta , meri jaan lele voh , mar de muze..." ravi beintha dard me nam akhon se bola ,

"nai bhai , aisa mat bolo , me , me , apke bina kya karugi , agar apko kuch hua toh me bhi apni jaan de dungi , naii jee sakti apke bina , pita ji , sun rehe ho app , mar do ham dono ko , jaan lelo hamari , par hame ik hone do , pls pita ji..." komal beintha rote hue chekhte chilate hue boli ,

"shhhiii , meri komal , me hu na , ham koi rasta nikal lenge , us ring ko khatam kar denge , phir pita ji , hame ik hone se kabhi nai rok payege , meri behan , tu , tu mera sath dena , meri pagli behan..." ravi , komal ka rotu chehra apne dono hatho me pakad , uske hontho ko kas kar chumta hua bola ,

"voh amar hai , voh , voh manhos ring amar hai , voh bereham hai , bedard hai , najane usne sadyion tak , kitne masom logu ko mara hai , me , me use nafrat karti hu , ham , bhyia ham , ham kaise marege use , voh toh mar hi nai sakti , bhyia voh meri bali deker rehegi , kyu , kyu , akhir kyu , meri behan suhana muzse etni nafrat karti hai , ik traf pita ji hame ik hone nai de rehe , or ik traf yeh manhos ring..." komal beintha rote hue boli ,

"ik mint , pita ji or ring , kahi yeh sab pita ji ka toh khel nai , han , ufff ahh , ham pehle kyu nai samaz paye , komal pita ji hi shetian hain , unke do roop hain , ik acha or ik bura , or ring unka hi ik ansh hai , matlab , jab suhana tumse nafrat karke , shetian ki pooja kar rehi thi , toh voh , ohh , toh voh pita ji ki pooja kar rehi thi , komal , pita ji es dunia me abh bhi hain , or ham par nazar rakh rehe hain , kisi bhi roop me , kon hoga..." ravi behad sochte hue bola ,

"bhyia , pita ji shetian nai ho sakte , voh toh pari log ke raza the..." komal apne asnu saf karte hue boli ,

"hamara pyar , han komal , hamare pyar ne , unke dil me nafrat bhardi , voh kisi na kisi trah , hame ik nai hone dena chahte the , es liye pehle pita ji ne , suhana ke man me jehar bhara , apni atmik vidaya se , voh , voh kisi ke bhi man ko control kar sakte hain , pita ji ne hame alag karne ke najane kitne yadjanatar rache , rema bhi unki beti thi , unki apni beti , or suhana bhi , lekin suhana yeh bat nai janti , hame suhana ko es bat ka ehsas karvana hoga , ke voh bekasur thi , pori galti pita ji ki thi..." ravi ne behad gusse me dard bhari awaz me bola ,

"app thik keh rehe ho , pita ji ham par nazar rakh rehe hain , unka pata lagana hoga , shyad voh insani roop me honge , hamari trah..." komal bhi shant hoker boli ,

"or me janta hu voh kon bata sakta hai..." ravi behad muskra kar bola , uski akhen lal roshni me chamak uthi ,

"kon..." komal bhi hadbada kar boli ,

"voh hain , kaal , kaal hi hame pita ji ke bare me bata sakte hain , hamari pichli jindgi , or ring ke bare me bhi , me janta hu kaal ke bina , ham adhure reh jate , vahi hame pori sachai batayege , me ajj rat unse milne jauga..." ravi behad sochte hue bola ,

"kyaa , bhyia abh kya hoga , muze bahut dar lag reha hai..." komal , apne pita ko yad karke , behad darte hue , apne bhai ke gale lagte hue boli ,

"komal , me es ring ki jad ko khatam karuga , matlab pita ji ko , or phir me tumse shadi karuga , abh voh map hi hame , pori sachai batayega , akhir yeh khel hai kya , komal , yeh bahut bada khel hai , or yeh bat kisi ko mat batana , abhi ke liye..." ravi ne komal ko bahu me bharte hue bola ,

"ahhh bhyia muzse pyar karo , meri vasna badhti ja rehi hai , pita ji , muz par havi ho rehe hain , voh kisi or ke sath , ohh me kaise bolu apko , me apni jaan de dungi bhyiaa , muzse or sehan nai hota , pls bhyia kuch karo , kuch toh karo naa..." komal dard me sisakte hue bilakh bilakh kar rote hue boli ,

"naiii , tum meri ho , kuch nai hoga tume , me kuch karta hu , bus control rakho khud par , kuch bhi galat mat karna , hamesha yad rakhna , agar tune apni jaan di , toh me usi pal apni jaan de dunga , hamari jung , pita ji ke khilaf hai , voh chahe jo bhi kar le , par hamse jeet nai sakte , kabhi nai..." ravi , komal ko apni bahu me bhar use kas kar apne gale lagata hua bola ,

"bhyiaa , maa kaha hai , voh bhi jalti hai hamse , sab jalte hain , hamare paviter pyar se , me apke sath kahi bhi chalne ko tyar hu , muze hell le chalo , kam se kam , maa or pita ji ka manhos saya toh nai hoga hamare pyar par , bhyia..." komal bacho ki trah rote hue jidd karte hue boli ,

"komal , shh shant ho jao , tum maa ho , es kudrat ki , voh dekho tumre bache muskra rehe hain , dekho unki traf , unke sath batian karo , khud ko shant karo..." ravi , komal ko jungle ki traf ghumate hue bola , komal jungle ko dekhte hi , shant ho gai , usne akhen band kar li , or muskrane lagi ,

ravi ne ik skoon ki sans li , or piche palat kar dekha , fari uth rehi thi , ravi uske pas jaker bed par beth gya , jab fari ne halke se akhen kholi , toh apne papa ko samne dekh , voh muskrate hue , tezi se uth kar unke gale lag gai...

"meri bachii , uth gaii app , fari ji app bahut sone lagi ho..." ravi , pyar se fari ke gaal chumta hua bola ,

"papa , mumma bhi toh so rehi hai , enko toh bus bahana chahyie sone ka..." fari , baby ki traf dekh muskrate hue boli ,

"sahi bola meri beti ne , tumari mumma kamchor hai..." ravi haste hue bola ,

"kya bola tumne..." baby sote sote ik akh khol kar boli ,

"beti hamne kuch bola kya..." ravi , fari ki traf dekh kar bola ,

"nai papa , ham dono ne kuch nai bola..." fari behad muskra kar boli ,

"huu , tum dono bach kar reho muzse , agar kuch bola , toh dono ko peet dungi..." baby phir se ik akh khol kar boli ,

ravi or fari ne ik dusre ki traf dekha or phir jor se bole..."attaackkk..." dono kud padhe baby par ,

ravi ne baby ki hatho ko pakad liya , or fari , baby ke pet me gudgudi karne lagi , baby behad hasne lagi ,

"ahhh meri bachi sorry , galti ho gai mumma se , maf kar do mumma ko..." baby behad haste hue boli ,

"kis mumma ko maf karu , etne toh darzan me kele nai hote , jitni meri mumma hai..." fari apne mathe par hath marti hui boli ,

"beta , juhi mumma ko maf kar do..." baby pet me hoti gudgudi se preshan hote hue boli , phir fari , baby ki bat sun ruk gai , or ravi ko dekhne lagi ,

"kya hua beti..." ravi thoda sharma kar bola ,

"papa , yeh nayi item kab patai , nam toh acha hai juhi , kya voh bhi meri mumma hai..." fari behad muskrate hue boli ,

fari ki bat sun ravi ne apna matha peet liya , or baby use gusse me dekhne lagi ,

"beta tumari baby mumma ka hi nam juhi hai..." ravi chehra zuka kar bola ,

"ohh , acha , uff me ayi susu karke..." fari ik dam se yeh bol bahar bhag gai ,

ravi or baby ik dusre ki traf dekh hasne lage ,

"baby , dekho na fari ko , jab jungle me mili thi , tab kitni khamosh thi , or ajj , dekho esko , kisi ko bat nai karne deti... " ravi muskrate hue bola ,

"han , par ravi , voh bat meri beti ko kabhi mat bolna , ke voh anath hai (rote hue) , voh hamari beti hai , kya hua mane use janam nai diya , par me uski maa hu , voh meri beti hai , or badi hoker mere jaisi banegi..." baby behad rote hue boli ,

"nai meri jaan , voh ham dono jaisi banegi , akhir me bhi toh tumara bacha hu , baby mumma doodu pilao na , bhuk lagi hai.." ravi , baby ko bed par girakar uske uper chadte hue bola ,

"ouchh kya kar rehe ho , fari a jayegi , hame dekh legi..." baby behad sharmate hue boli ,

"me konsi chori kar reha hu , uski maa ka doodh hi toh pe reha hu , abh pilyao doodh.." ravi , baby ke gol gol mote mammo ko uske top ke uper se chumte chuste hue bola ,

"ouchhhh ahhhh rat ko pila dungi ahhh abh chodo muze..." baby thoda sharmate hue sisak kar boli ,

"acha , thik hai..." ravi ne etna bol baby ke hontho par apne honth rakh diye , dono ik dusre ko hontho ko behad shidat se chusne lage , par unki badkismati , fari vapis a gai ,

"papa..." fari ne apni akhon par hath rakh bola , toh baby or ravi hadbada kar alag ho gye ,

"beta voh , voh..." ravi nazarian zuka bola , or baby ne sharama kar apni akhen band kar li ,

"me samaz gai , ik or fari ki tyari ho rehi hai , par papa , abh muze ik bhai chahyie , jise me bahut pyar karugi..." fari , ravi ki god me bethte hue muskrate hue boli , toh ravi sharma kar muskrane laga , vahi baby toh sharam se pani pani ho gai thi....

"beti , bache aise nai bolte.." ravi muskrate hue bola ,

"papa , me 12 saal ki hu , bachi nai hu me , muze bhai chahyie , lekin kis mumma ka bacha mera bhai banega , kon si mumma achi hai..." fari apna ik hath , apne gaal par rakhte sochne lagi ,

"beti , mere pas ik idea hai..." ravi , baby ki traf dekh muskra kar bola ,

"han , batao papa..." fari bhi muskrate hue boli ,

"beti , tum sabhi mumma se puch lu , jo mumma tyar hogi , uska bacha , tumara bhai ban jayega , jao sabse bat karo..." ravi , apni beti ka matha chum kar bola ,

"are han papa , me abhi puchti hu sabse , dekhte hain , konsi mumma tyar hogi , bhai dene ke liye , lekin papa , yeh secret rehega , ham tino ke bech , ok.." fari bed se niche utar kar boli ,

"ji fari ji.." ravi apni hassi rokte hue bola ,

phir fari room se bahar chali gai , ravi or baby ne ik dusre ki traf dekha , or hasne lage...


to be counited....
Wioooooooo kia dasonnn update DIA Hy veer g :yourock: :yourock: :yourock: :yourock: :yourock: :10: :10: :10: :10: :10:
 

Sona

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Fantastic update sir
Kat or ravi ka scene emotional tha:cry2:
Komal or ravi ke papa shaitan hai:shocked:
Fari boht cute hai:angel1:

etne toh darzan me kele nai hote , jitni meri mumma hai..."

papa , yeh nayi item kab patai , nam toh acha hai juhi


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Fari ab sbko preshaan kregi sbse puchhke konsi mummy bhai degi usko:hehe:


yahi toh pyar hai , yahi toh ishq hai , voh pyar nai jab kisi ladki ki chaplusi karke , uske jism ko bhogne ki lalsa man me ho , pyar ik tadaf hai , ik udasi , akhon se behte asnu pyar hai , seene me uthta dard pyar hai , rat bhar so na pana pyar hai , or sote hue uska sapna ate , chekh kar uthna pyar hai , pyar par hazaro batian likhi ja sakti hain , par nibhane ke liye ik shabad hai "wafa.." , jo wafadar hai , usi ka pyar sacha hai ,
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Rahul

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shaandar update bhai ket ko pyar ho gawa ravi se komal jitna na sahi par jitna hai bahut hai..pitaji tang ada rahe pyar me ye sasur saitaan budhde bhi to nahi hote hajaron lakhon salon se kundli mare baitha hai wo pyar ko milne na de raha hai..fari liye kya kahun uski sararaten bahut sukun deti hai bhai..kulmilakar awesome update
 

aka3829

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Wah gajab ka update diya he bhai. Pehle kat aur ravi ke beech ki bato ne emotional kiya. Lekin jab komal aur ravi ne apna prem dikhaya to ankho ke ashuon ne to jaise sayad behte jharno se sharat laga rakhi thi ki dekhe kaun jyada apno par kurbaan hota he. Fir ayi apani fari rani jisane behte hue jharno ko ek hasi ka maoram dryshya dekar chehre par muskurahat la di. Aur fir uska sabse ye puchane jana ki kaun si mumma use uska bhai degi. Kasam se agle update ke pehle scene hi hasa 2 kar pet me dard karne wala he.
Waiting 4 next update
 

Prince Charlee

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Superb update. Aaj ke update me ek naya dhamakakar diya hai kya wakai me Shetan aur Pari lok ke raja ek hi hai aur kya Ravi Suhana ko samjha kar apne pita ke khilaf kar pata hai ya nahi.
Ravi aur Kat ki love story bhi bohat intresting hoti jaa rahi hai.
Aur last Fari ka part bohat intresting tha dekhte hai ab Fari kis mammy ko tayar karti hai bhai ke liye.
 
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