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[lover of darkness]

Jordar update bhai

thanks bhai... shukriya

 

[lover of darkness]

komal aa bhi gyi toh apko jada kuch nahi milega.. komal ki majburi toh aap jante hi ho na..

esi liye toh voh komal ka hi bolti hai

bhai ladkyian bahut chalak hoti hain , yeh unka hi bolti hain , jinko ham fasa nai sakte

mane bhi kaha , baby ya kat ka bolu , toh voh boli "rehne do tume konsi english ati , voh vadeshi ladkyian hain "

sun kar muze mere sarkari school ki yad a gai

 

[lover of darkness]

Mera saath hamesha rahega. Jab bhi waqt milega iss story par aaungi.
Aap samajh sakte hai ki ek tu naye update ka pressure aur dusra pathkon ke review ka jawab me waqt lagta hai.

Lekin jab bhi mouka lagega iss behtreen kahani ko padhungi

ji mam , behad shukriya , app apni kahani par mehnat kariye , vaise konsi story hai apki , app ik writer ho yeh jankar bahut khushi hui ,

writer ko jo mushkilyian ati hai , story agge badane ke liye , unse me wakif hu , shukriya mam

 

[lover of darkness]

friends next update rat ko 9 baje post kar dunga... shukriya

 

[QUASAR]

thanks bhai... bhai ik bat kahu , apka reply sidha dil ko lagta hai , app dusro ki bhavnayion ka ulekh karna , behad achi trah jante ho , or samazte bhi ho ,

apne sahi kaha , anu apni jagah thik hai , uski jagah koi bhi ladki hoti , shyad vahi sochti , or ravi uski hifazat karna chahta hai , lekin unka mamla ajj set ho jayega ,

abh main mudda kat or ravi ka hai , enko ik hone me wakht lagega , enke liye jalad hi kuch sochta ,

sabki jimedari hamar pas hai , unko nehlana , kapde pehnana , unko bolne dena , rone dena , yeh sab mere hain , yeh sab characters me hu , har writer ke characters , voh khud hota hai yeh dialog tha

hmm update main janta hu ki kitna mushkil kaam hai dena. agar apko aage ka plot pta hai kya likhna hai toh 3,4 ghante hi lagte hai.. or agar plot sochne betho toh din nikl jate hai bas uss 10, 15 mint ke maze ke liye.. agar hum 15mint read kar sakte hai toh 2mint jo hamne abhi read kiya uska review de de toh koi badi baat nhi hai.. bas dil ko sakoon milta hai ki aaj ko beth k maine likha vo kis kis ko kaisa laga... khair yeh toh mera manna tha. baki logo ki apni marji....

 

[lover of darkness]

hmm update main janta hu ki kitna mushkil kaam hai dena. agar apko aage ka plot pta hai kya likhna hai toh 3,4 ghante hi lagte hai.. or agar plot sochne betho toh din nikl jate hai bas uss 10, 15 mint ke maze ke liye.. agar hum 15mint read kar sakte hai toh 2mint jo hamne abhi read kiya uska review de de toh koi badi baat nhi hai.. bas dil ko sakoon milta hai ki aaj ko beth k maine likha vo kis kis ko kaisa laga... khair yeh toh mera manna tha. baki logo ki apni marji....

sahi kaha bhai , police job har kam karte hue , bus yahi sochta rehta hu , ajj agge kya likhuga , kya yeh sabko pasand ayega , bus ik pyar or skoon hi milta hai , jab app reply karte ho , like karte ho , meri story bus ik hi karan se etni lambi chali , kyu ki reader kehte gye , abhi end mat karna , likhte raho , shukriya bhai , app samazte ho , es bat ki khushi hai ..

 

[lover of darkness]

update-85

Abh Agge...

ravi beintha gusse me shehar ki traf ja reha tha , usne jo suna tha , usne jo mehsus kiya tha , es bat ne uske pore dil me ik dard sa bhar diya tha , ik aag si laga di thi ,

ravi jaise jaise shehar ki traf badh reha tha , asman me ghor kale badal umad aye the , ik andhera sa pasar gya tha pore shehar me , har traf tez andhyian(hawa) chalne lagi thi , dhul ke kan , hawa me etne phail chuke the , ke logu ko as-pas kuch dikh bhi nai reha tha ,

asman me bijli chamakne lagi thi , uski awaz se pora shehar jaise kamp sa jata tha , yeh devil ki takat thi , devil ko uski icha ke bina dekh pana asambhav tha , namumkin tha ,

"ufff etni tez hawa , yeh achank mosam ko kya hua , pehle toh saf tha , yeh tez hawa toh pora ghar mitti se bhar degi , anu tum jao apne room me , bed par let jao , jaisa mane bola , vaise hi karna..." vadna , ghar ki khidkyian achi trah se lock karti hui boli ,

"maa , maa , voh nai ayega , bahar tufan aya hai , etne tufan me , voh mere liye kyu ayega , nai ayega maa , voh nai ayega..." anu behad rote hue bola ,

"ik or thapad marugi , mane kaha voh nai ayega , chup chap vahi karo , jo mane kaha hai , chalo room me..." vadna behad gusse me anu ka hath pakad use khichte hue uske room me le gai ,

vahi dusri traf...

"kat , kat , akhen kholo , kya hua..." yeh baby thi , jo kat ka saar apni jangu par rakhe sehla rehi thi ,

"lekin kat ko hua kya..." komal thoda preshani me boli..."or bhyia kaha hain.."

"han , ravi kaha hai , ohh muze lagta hai , kat ne ravi ka devil face dekh liya , lekin fari ke yaha rehte , ravi kabhi devil roop nai le sakta..." baby bhi behad preshani me rote hue boli ,

"kya bakbak kiye ja rehi ho , door hato , me apni jaan ko abhi hosh me lati hu..." khushi , baby ke rotu chehre ko dekh muskrate hue boli , or phir khushi ne kat ke mathe par hath rakha , khushi ke hath se kuch kirane nikali , or kat ke saar me sama gai ,

par tabhi khushi ko kuch ehsas hua , usne apni band akhon se kuch dekha , khushi ik dam se kat se door ho gai , voh behad ghabrai hui thi , usne kabhi socha bhi nai tha , kat vahi hai ,

khushi ik dam se uth kar room se bahar chali gai , baby bhi herian si ho gai , lekin use kat ki chinta tha ,

"ravii , tum yaha kya kar rehe ho , es pahad par kyu ate ho bar bar , yeh pahad toh asman ko cheerta hua uper hi uthta ja reha hai..." kat , ravi ke kande par hath rakh boli ,

"yahi toh devil ka ghar hai , yeh mera singhasan hai , yaha se me pore hell par nazar rakhta hu..." ravi vaise hi kat ki traf pith kiye hue bola ,

"ufff , tum phir se suru ho gye , hell , devil , me tang a chuki hu tumse , tum , tum , devil nai ho..." kat ne behad nam akhon se bola ,

"ahahaha , me hi hu devil..." ravi beintha hasta hua , ik dam se kat ki traf palat gya , ravi ka chehra abh badal chuka tha , behad badsurat , behad byank , akhan lal rang me chamakne lagi ,



"naiiiii..." kat jor se chekhti hui , pahad se girne lagi , niche dehakti hui aag thi , jab kat us aag se lathpath jamen se takrayi , tabhi voh chekhti hui uth bethi ,

"naiiiiii raviiii..." kat ik dardnak chekh marte uth kar beth gai , uski sanse tez chal rehi thi , pora badan pasine se bhara hua tha , honth kamp rehe the , voh behad dari or sehmi hui thi ,

"kat , kat , me baby , meri bahu me ayo kat..." baby bebad nam akhon se boli ,

"baby , voh , voh , me , voh , babyy , rr..ravii..." kat behad dar se kampte hue baby ke gale lag gai ,

"shhhh , shant ho jaoo , me hu na , sab bhul jao , meri bahu me simat jao meri jaan..." baby , kat ka matha chumte hue boli ,

phir kat ne kas kar baby ko bahu me bhar liya , uska jism abhi bhi kamp reha tha , kyu ki usne jo dekha tha , voh sach me behad byank tha ,

vahi dusri traf...

ravi akhir anu ke ghar pahunch hi gya , shehar me etna tez tufan tha , ke kuch dikhai bhi nai padh reha tha , hawa me samaye mitti or dhul ke kanu ne , pore shehar ke logu ko andha kar diya tha ,

ravi niche jamen par utarte hi normal ho gya , usne anu ke ghar ka darvaja khatkata diya , kuch hi palu me vadna ne darvaja khola , uski akhon me asnu the , bahar abh masom shant ho gya tha , abh aisa lag hi nai reha tha , ke kuch der pehle shehar me tufan aya tha ,

"ravii..." vadna rote hue boli ,

"jii , anu kaha hai , kaisi hai abh..." ravi ne behad dard bhari awaz me bola or ghar ke ander ghus gya ,

"ravi , usne nend ki goliyan kha li , pata nai kyu , jab gai thi , tab khush thi , or ghar akar apne room me ghus gai or rone lagi , voh tumara nam le rehi thi bar bar , toh mane tume bula liya ..." vadna ne zuth bolte hue kaha ,

"ohh pagal ladki , kyu kiya usne , acha vadna ji , doctor ko bulaya apne .." ravi , anu ki behad chinta karte hue bola ,

"han , doctor ne kaha , voh thik ho jayegi , abhi so rehi hai , tum dekh ayo use , me tumare liye kuch lati hu..." vadna behad nam akhon se yeh bol kitchen ki or chali gai ,

ravi jaldi se anu ke room ki traf chala gya , ravi ne room ke ander jaker dekha , anu bed par sidhi soyi thi , uski akhen band thi ,

ravi agge badta hua , anu ke pas hi beth gya , or uske masom chehre ko dekhne laga , usne zuk kar anu ka matha chum liya ,

"abh skoon mil gya , kyu , akhir kyu , yeh sab kyu kiya , me karta hu tumse pyar , bahut pyar karta hu , jab tumne kaha ke tum muzse pyar karti ho , bus tabhi se me bhi karne laga , hasshh , anu , me darta hu , agar tume kuch ho gya , toh me yeh boz nai utha pauga , anu , me tumse bahut pyar karta hu , i love you..." ravi ne behad nam akhon se bola , or zuk kar anu ke hontho ko chum liya ,

anu soyi nai thi , voh bus natak kar rehi thi , lekin abhi bhi usne akhen nai kholi thi , voh or sunna chahti thi , uska dil keh reha tha , ravi ajj sab batian bol de , koi bat dil me chupa kar na rakhe ,

"anu , ik bat kahuga , tum bahut jiddi ho , etni jidd achi nai hoti , tumne muzse kaha tha , ke tumara , uff , tumara rape hua hai , es liye me tume pasand nai karta , nai anu , voh sab zuth hai , tumare man ka veham hai , me tumare sath hu anu , jindgi bhar tumara sath dunga , bus phir kabhi voh rape wali bat mat bolna , use bhul jao , or vaise bhi , us pakia ko mane mar diya hai , uske hell me pakode tale ja rehe hain , han agar tum khana chahti ho , toh mere sath hell chalo..." ravi nam akhon se muskra kar bola , toh anu ke hontho par ik muskan phail gai , voh muskrane lagi , or ravi samaz gya ke anu soyi hui nai hai ,

"umm , meri anu , anu ik bat kahu , ohh vaise bhi tum so rehi ho , phir bhi keh deta hu , tumara figure bahut mast hai , abh jalad se jalad tyar ho jao , bahut jalad tumare kapde utar kar , me tume..." ravi abhi bol hi reha tha ke anu ne ik dam se akhen khol li , use behad sharm a rehi thi , usne karvat badal apna chehra takyie me chupa liya ,

tabhi ravi ko kisi ke anne ki ahaht hui , ravi ne dekha vadna ayi thi , voh ravi ke liye juice bana kar layi thi ,

"thanks vadna ji..." ravi muskra kar bola ,

"are , thanks kis bat ke liye , apne hamari kitni madad ki , agar app na hote , pata nai ham dono ka kya hota..." vadna apne asnu saf karte hue boli ,

"uff vadna ji , mane us din bhi apse kaha tha , me yeh apne liye kar reha hu , na ke anu ke liye , lekin abh muze lagta hai , yeh sab mane anu ke liye kiya , apki beti bahut jiddi hai..." ravi juice peta hua anu ki traf dekh muskrate hue bola ,

"jiddi , are yeh toh jiddi logu ki malika hai , acha app anu ka khyal rakhna , me bazar se kuch saman le ayu..." vadna muskra kar yeh boli or vaha se chali gai , vaise voh ravi or anu ko akele wakht dena chahti thi , usne jate jate room ka darvaja band kar diya ,

ravi bhi apne jute utar anu ke sath let gya , anu abhi bhi takyie me chehra chupaye , dono ki batian sun rehi thi ,

ravi ne anu ki traf karvat leker uski kamar par apna hath rakh diya , or usse chipak kar let gya , anu sehar sa gai , uska jism kamp sa utha , uski sanse tez tez chalne lagi ,

"anu , me janta hu , tum soyi nai hu , uff tumari gand kitni moti hai , lekin tumari kamar bahut patli , aisa kyu anu , yar me gaon ka kisan admi hu , me aise hi bat karta hu , acha apni chut toh dikhao muze..." ravi ne anu ke gadraye chutado ke bech apna khada lund sata kar , dhere dhere dhake jadte hue pucha ,

"ahhhh siiiii..." anu sisak padhi , lund ki chuban ko apne mote garaye chutado ke bech paker ,

phir ravi ne anu ki gand par hath rakha , or uski tight lore ke uper se hi , uske chutado ko dabane laga , anu ke naram chutado ka mass ravi ke hath me bharta chala gya , anu ke jism me ik metha sa dard doad gya ,

"ouuchhh ahh ravii..." anu sisakte hue etna boli or palat kar ravi ke gale lag gai , uski sanse bulit train ki raftar jaise tez tez chal rehi thi ,

"anu tumare chutad etne mote kaise hue , batao na umm , kitni khubsurat ho tum , akhen kholu na meri jaan..." ravi ne anu ke dono gadraye chutado ko kas kar masalte hue bola ,

phir ravi ne anu ke gulabi rasile hontho par apni ungli phirai , uff behad naram honth , ravi ke ungli se piste chale gye ,

ravi ne tezi se apne honth anu ke hontho par rakh diye , ravi dhere dhere anu ke nichle honth ko danto me daba daba kar chusne laga , anu ke badan me ik mithe se dard ki lehar doad gai , usne band akhon se , ravi ke baal sehlate hue , uska sath dena suru kar diya ,

dono ke honth apas me ulazte chale gye , ladte chale gye , ravi bech bech me anu ke sharabti hontho ko chuste hue , apni jebh uske moh me ghusane lagata , par anu apna moh nai khol rehi thi , ravi ne anu ke ik gubare jaise phule hue doodh ko kas kar masal diya ,

"ouchhhhh.." anu dard se sisak padhi , par jaise hi usne apna moh khola , ravi ki jebh uske moh me ander tak ghus gai , anu man hi man ravi ki es chal par muskra padhi ,

phir ravi apni jebh ko anu ke moh me ehder ohder ghumate hue uske hontho ko behad kas kar chusne laga , etni tez chusai se anu ke gulabi hontho me jalan si hone lagi , lekin use maza bhi beintha a reha tha ,

karib 10 mint tak dono ik dusre ke hontho ko pagalu ki trah chuste rehe , phir dono tez tez hafne lage , anu ki akhen abhi bhi band thi , uske mote mote chuche , tezi se uper niche hote hue , ravi ke lund ko bekabu kar rehe the ,

ravi ne sehan na kar pate hue , anu ko ik dam se utha kar betha diya , anu ne madhoshi me apni akhen jara si kholi , or phir sharma kar apni akhen band kar li ,

ravi ne anu ki tshirt ko kamar se uper utha , uske gale me se bahar nikal diya , uff anu ke doodh jaise safad gore chuche , abh ik kali bra me adhe dhake hue nazar anne lage ,

ravi ne deri na karte hue anu ki bra bhi khich kar fad di ..."ouchhhhh maa..." anu thoda dard me sisak uthi , par usne ravi ko roka nai ,

"anu.."

"huu..." anu sharma kar boli ,

"haye anu , etne mote mote aam kaha se layi tum , uff agar muze pehle hi dikha deti , kab ka tumare aamo ka ras nichod leta..." ravi anu ke do bade bade chuchu ko ghurta hua bola , jinke gulabi niple dono chuchu ki golai par kehar dha rehe the ,

"muze nai pata..."

"acha , anu tume chod du , tumari chut me apna lund ghusa kar , bahut maza ayega , bolu na..." ravi , anu ki akhon me zakta hua bola ,

anu ikdamse sharmagaiorboli."dhatttt,muzenaipata" anune apni akhonparhathrakhliya.

ravi ne anu ko kas kar apne badan se chipka liya , or uske hontho ko chumne laga.

anu bhi khub chudasi ho gai thi , uski tight chut ki fanke khub geeli ho chuki thi , voh bhi madhosh hoker ravi ke hontho ko kas kas kar chusne lagi ,

anu ke hontho ko bedardi se chuste chuste ravi ne apne hatho ko uske pake hue aamo par rakh diya , uff anu ke dono doodh etne thos the , jaise kisi aurat ki jangu ka mass ho , ravi dono kase hue chuchu ko dabane laga ,

jab ravi ko dhere dhere se maza na aya , toh ravi dono doodh kas kar , pakad kar , khich khich kar , dabane laga , jab jab ravi anu ke chuchu ko kas kar dabata , tab tab uske gulabi niple or bhi tan jate , ufff ravi maze ki dunia me udd reha tha , dono niple bhi aise the , jaise kisi safad pahad ka shikar ho ,

"ohhhhhh shhhhhaahhhhh..." anu ne akhen band kar sisakate hue kaha.

ravi ne anu ko bed par lita diya , or uske pahad jaise safad doodh ke tane hue nipple ko moh me bhar liya , or use kas kar chuste hue , dusre doodh ko gol gol hath ghuma kar masalne laga ,

dusri traf anu apni pani chodti chut ko ravi ke lund par niche se kamar hila hila kar khub ghisne lagi , esse uski chut or bhi geeli hoker use tang karne lagi ,

"ahhh ahhh sssssiiiiiiiiiii ahhhh raviii shh..." anu lagatar siskyian bhar rehi thi , par sharam ke mare yeh bol nai rehi thi , ke muze chodo , meri chut fad do ,

dusri traf ravi bhi anu ke pake hue mote aam ke gulabi niple ko danto se halke halke katne laga ,

"aahhhssiiiiiiiiahhhasssiiiiiiiiraviiiiii" anu ke moh se ghuti ghuti siskyian nikal rehi thi , ravi ne anu ke mote mote doodh ko chus chus kar , masal masal kar lal kar diya tha.

anu abh khub chudasi ho chuki thi , uski chut me ajeeb si khujlahat paida ho rehi thi.ravi ne kuch der anu ke mote mote mammo ka raspan karne ke bad , usne anu ka chehra dono hatho me pakad kar uske hontho ka ras chusna suru kar diya , ravi abh bahut kas kas kar anu ke naram hontho ko chus reha tha , jis karan anu ke hontho me mitha mitha dard ho reha tha. kuch der anu ke hontho ko kas kar chusne ke bad ravi uske masom chehre ko dekh bola ,

"anu..."

"huu.."

"me tume bahut chahta hu , or tume kabhi akela nai choduga , kya me tumare sath sex kar sakta hu..." ravi ne anu ke gulabi hontho ko chum kar pucha ,

"muze nai pata..." anu behad sharma kar boli ,

"toh rehne deta hu..." ravi udas hoker bola ,

"ravi , mera sapna tha , me sex ka pehla dard apne premi se pani chahti thi..." anu behad nam akhon se boli ,

"janta hu , me yeh janta tha..."

"par kaise..." anu behad herian hoker boli ,

"kyu ki , me devil hu , ajj tum devil se pyar karugi , or devil tume sex ke alag alag sukh dega , devil ko bus sex hi toh karna ata hai , toh anu , abh devil ke sath maze ki dunia ki sair karo.." ravi muskrate hue anu ke chusai se thoda suze hontho ko chus kar bola....

vahi dusri traf....

"ufff , meri kat , meri jaan , kya hua mera bacha huu , bolo..." baby , kat ke shant hote hi , uske pore chehre ko chumte hue boli ,

"baby , voh , voh , ravii , han , ravii , baby , voh devil haii , mm...mane ..dd...dekha , voh , voh , devil haii , muze , muze , shetian se pyar hua , naiii , naiii , yeh kyu hua mere sath..." kat beintha rote hue boli...

baby or sab herian the , voh samaz nai pa rehi thi , voh kya bole , jis bat ka use dar tha , vahi hua , lekin abh use , kat ke man me , phir se ravi ke pyar ka phool khilana tha , voh kuch soch rehi thi , es musibat ka koi dusra hal...

to be counited....

 

[aka3829]

thanks bhai... bhai apki dili icha jarur pori hogi.. bus sahi wakht anne do.. yeh kahani batane ka maksad bus etna hai... enko ik dusre ki jindgi ka ehsas ho.. abhi toh lara or Eliza , kat or baby , apni apni kahani sunayegi... maya ne kya salah di , muze bhi sunai nai di , voh kya hai na , amtul ji , voh behad dhere dhere batian kar rehe the... shukriya

Bhai kya baat naraj ho kya jo aaj amtul ji bola he. Aapke muh se to bhai hi jachda he.

 

[aka3829]

wah bhai kya sandaar update diya he. Ravi ka yu devil bankar shahar me anu ke pass jana. Fir uska anu ke sath romance karna uff kya varnan kiya he jaise sab kuch ankho ke samne chal raha ho. Kat ka behos ho jana aur fir baby ka use pyaar dena. Lekin ye khusi ko kat ke sir par haat rakhte hi kya dikhayi diya jisase wo yun ghabra kar kamre se hi bahar chali gayi. Ye raz bhi jaldi hi khol dena. Dusara ravi aur anu ka milan agle update me pura dikha dena.
Waiting 4 next update

 

[spritemathews]

Very well written update bro.