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[lover of darkness]

End story yar kya bat h Bahut acch Likha h ap ne jaldi new update b likh dalo yar

shukriya bhai.. update kal likh na paya , kyu ki kal bahut door dusri city gya tha , par ajj uski bharpayi kar dunga.. shukriya

 

[lover of darkness]

Ravi apne bachpan ko yaad kr ra sach mein usne boht dukh dekhe bachpan mein
Eliza or lara ko waqt ne bura bnaya pr ab wo achhi bn gyi hai
Anu aa rhi ravi se milne i hope uska samna devil se na ho
Fantastic update sir

Rohan ko Rahul bna diya
Rahul sir is story mein bi aa gye ap

thanks dear... ravi ka bura wakht esliye likha , tain ki har insan apne bure wakht ko yad rakhe , apne bure wakht ko kabhi bhulna nai chahyie...

anu ka samna devil se ho na ho , par bevkuf ravi se jarur hoga , jo apni betuki bation se uska dimag chatega..

rahul hero hai es site ka , most active member in xforum , voh kahi bhi ja sakta hai , use sab raste pata hai

 

[lover of darkness]

thanks love bhai.. bus emoji dal diya karo , kuch likhna mat , akdu dost , shukriya..

 

[lover of darkness]

Both hi vadiya update Hy veer

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thanks bhai.. shukriya

 

[lover of darkness]

Bahot shaandaar update dost
Bahot achcha likh rehe h aap
Aise hii likhte rahiye
Agle update ka intizar rehega
Thank you

thanks bhai... me likhta rehuga.. bus app sath dete rehna.. shukriya

 

[lover of darkness]

bus adhe ghante tak update post karta hu friends... shukriya

 

[lover of darkness]

update-83

Abh Agge...

Anu behad dhemi raftar se gadi chala rehi thi , kyu ki yeh ik kacha rasta tha , or behad ghumavdar bhi tha , lekin raste ke dono traf bahut khubsurat nazara tha , as-pas bade bade hare-bhare pedh , pedhu ke niche badi badi jadyian , uff behad dilkash nazara tha ,

anu ke dilkash hontho par ik muskrahat thi , uske naram gulabi honth behad khubsurat dikh rehe the , jab un hontho par halki halki muskan thi ,

anu ne jindgi me bus ik bar sex kiya tha , jab uska pakia ne rape kiya tha , yeh uski jindgi ke sabse manhos pal the , uske dil me kai ichyian thi , ke voh apna pehla sex , usse karegi , jise voh behad chahti hogi ,

yeh kuch ladkyian hi sochti hai , kuch ko esse farak nai padhta , lekin kuch aisi ladkyian bhi hoti hain , jo apna kuwarapan apne pati ke liye bacha kar rakhti hain , anu unhi ladkyion me se ik thi ,

lekin uski icha kabhi pori nai ho saki , jo dard or maza voh apne premi ki bahu me pana chahti thi , voh dard use jabardasti mila ,

rape hone ke bad , anu mansik tor par kamzor ho gai thi , use ajj bhi yad tha , rape hone ke bad jab use 3 din bad hosh aya , voh kitni dari or sehmi hui thi , kisi ka bhi hath lagte , uski ruh tak kamp jati thi ,

par jab use uski maa ne bataya ke ik ladka hamari madad kar reha hai , tab anu ko bahut heriani hui , lekin jab ravi use milne aya tha , tab usne kitni berukhi se ravi se bat ki thi ,

use laga ravi abh nai ayega , kyu jab uski maa ne bataya tha , ke ravi ne 20 lakh rupey diye hain , uske elaaz or uski jindgi ko ik naye sire se suru karne liye ,

anu es shehar se nai gai , chahe use samaz ki buri nazarion ko sehna padha , use bus ravi se milna tha , ravi ko janna tha , kyu ki ravi ne uske pathar dil me , pyar ka phool khila diya tha , us phool ne uske pathar dil ko , apni manmohak khushbu se tod kar chaknachur kar diya tha , uske dil me abh pyar tha , par ravi ke liye ,

jab koi ladki kisi ko shidat se chahti hai , tab dunia ke lakho mard bhi us ladke ki purti nai kar pate , or yahi sacha pyar karne wale ladko ke sath hota hai ,

ajj bhi voh kuwari thi , jo hua voh jabardasti hua , usne pyar se sath nai diya , lekin abh voh ravi ke sath apna sapna jeena chahti thi , vahi dard mehsus karna chahti thi , par ravi toh devil tha , shetian tha , or anu use kuch or samaz rehi thi ,

anu man ke bheter yahi sochti agge badh rehi thi , ke use bech raste me ik ladka khada dikhai diya , uski peth anu ki traf thi , lambe lambe kale baal , or black kapde pehne the usne , par sharir behad muscular tha ,

anu ne ik dam gadi roki or khidki khol akhon me asnu liye , bhag kar us ladke se lapit gai , anu ne kas kar ravi ko piche se bahu me bhar liya or rote hue boli ,

"ravii (rote hue) kaha the tum , kitne saal gujar gye , ravii me anu hu , vahii anu..." anu abhi bol hi rehi thi , ke ravi ik dam se piche ghum gya , or muskrate hue bola..

"detective , toh akhir app a hi gai , mere piche piche , ho na ho , detective app muze chahne lagi ho , devil ki list lambi ho rehi hai..." ravi behad muskrate hue bola ,

"tum , ohh , ravii me anu hu , vahi anu jise.." anu abhi bol hi rehi thi ke ravi phir se bech me bol padha ,

"han , han , detective tum vahi anu ho , jiski jaan mane factory me bachai thi , yad aya , voh chodo , abh me tumare sath kam karuga..."

"nai kar sakte , bilkul bhi nai..." anu abh thoda gusse me boli ,

"detective , kyu , muze logu ko saza deni hai..." ravi thoda ghambir hoker bola ,

"ohh , tum badal gye ho , tum , tum , ahhh , tum ravi ho ya naii..." anu gusse me ehder-ohder chalti hui gusss me chila kar boli ,

"detective , rahul ka lo..."

"kya..." anu ruk kar chonk kar boli ,

"sans , rahul ki sans lo..." ravi muskra kar bola ,

"ahhh , voh rahul nai rahat hota hai , bevkuf..." anu gusse me muskra kar boli ,

"detective bevkuf nai , devil , detective me devil hu , or tume shanti se , chahe rahul ka lo , ya rahat ka , par lo , mera matlab sans..." ravi , anu ko akh mar muskrate hue bola ,

"ahhh (chidte hue) , thik hai , me rahat ki sans leti hu , or tum muze bar bar detective keha band karo , me anu hu , anu , jiska pakia ne rape kiya tha (behad rote hue) , tum sunna kyu nai chahte , bolu..." anu behad rote hue jamen par ghutno ke bal bethte hue boli ,

"detective , me janta hu , tum vahi anu ho , par detective , voh anu mar gai , jab uska rape hua tha , detective tum ik nayi anu ho , tumara hospital me naya janam hua tha , me us anu ko nai janta , or agar tum vahi anu ho , toh yaha se dafa ho jao , devil ka wakht barbad karugi , toh devil tume hell behj dega..." ravi pehle ghambir hoker or phir akhir me muskra kar bola ,

"ravii , tum etne ache kyu ho , tum sach me..."

"ahhh , me acha nai hu detective , me devil hu , or chalo koi case solve karte hain , koi naya case aya hai , jo behad khatarnak ho..." ravi uth kar muskrate hue bola ,

"han , ik case aya hai..." anu bhi jamen se uth kar , ravi ki akhon me dekhte hue boli ,

"kiska..."

"tumara.." anu thoda ghambir hoker boli ,

"mera (haste hue) , kya mazak hai detective..."

"ravi yeh mazak nai hai..." phir anu ne ravi ko us din hospital me police ke sath muthbhed , or thakur ka us par lagaya elzam sab bata diya ,

"are detective , thakur ji , muz par aise hi bhadak rehe hain , khushi mere sath hai , lekin voh apni icha se ayi thi , abh voh tamas demon ban chuki hai..."

"ahhhh , muze leker chalo uske pas..." anu vapis apni gadi me bethte hue boli ,

"gadi me , detective , tum devil ka mazak bana udda rehi ho , ham udd kar jayege..." ravi muskrate hue bola ,

"chup chap gadi me beth jao , varna ..." anu behad gusse me boli , toh ravi bhi chup chap anu ke sath gadi me beth gya...

phir dono me koi kuch na bola , kabile ka nadi ke uper bana , lakadi ka pul par karte hue anu , ravi ka udas chehra dekh kar boli ,

"ravii , jante ho , ajj meri life ka sabse khushnuma din hai , muze kisi ka khof nai apni life me , par tum muze kis nazar se dekhte ho , esi par meri pori life depend karti hai , muze laga , mera rape hua tha , pata nai tum muze apni life ka hissa samazoge ya nai , ya muze nafrat or gharina ki nazar se dekhoge , par ravii (rote hue) tumne muze galat sabit kar diya , tum devil nai ho , pata nai tum bar bar khud ko devil kyu bol rehe ho , par agar tum jaise insan devil hain , toh , toh ravii , meri har jindgi tum jaise har devil par kurban , i love youu..." anu behad rote hue ghamgeen shabado me boli ,

"voh , voh , detective ghar a gya , bus rok do gadi..." ravi bina kuch kahe gadi se utar anu ka intzar karne laga ,

phir dono ghar ke ander a gye , anu behad udas nazaro se ravi ko bar bar ghur rehi thi , shyad voh ravi se apne swal ka jawab chahti thi , shyad use lagta tha , uski pori jindgi ravi ke jawab par nirbhar karti thi ,

"hloo , kamchoro , bahar ayo , dekho kon aya hai , detective ayi hai , jaladi ayoo..." ravi behad chila kar bola ,

toh sabhi apne apne room se bahar a gye , rimi or shurti , kat or baby , seema , khushi , komal , lara or Eliza bhi , or fari bhi , bus rema bahar nai ayi ,

"toh suno , yeh hain detective anu , meri khas dost , or yeh muzse milne ayi hain , shehar se..." ravi , anu ki akhon me akhen dal muskra kar bola , shyad anu ko uska jawab mil gya tha , lekin voh khush thi ke use ravi ne dost toh bola ,

"yeh yaha kyu ayi hai..." khushi , anu ke karib jaker uske charo traf chakar lagate hue boli ,

"tamas , get back babe , detective yaha tume lene ayi hai , or janti ho , ik funny news bhi layi hai , yeh devil (fari ki traf dekh kar) mera matlab , yeh muze devil samazti hai , ohhh bechari detective..." ravi , fari ki traf dekh muskrate hue bola ,

"naii , mere papa devil nai hain , voh bahut ache hain..." fari behad gusse me chila kar boli ,

"tumari beti (behad udas hoker) , khushi tumare papa bahut preshan hain , unhonu ravi ke khilaf report daraj karai hai , pls tum mere sath chalo..." anu , khushi ke karib jaker boli ,

"sorry anu , me nai ja sakti , han , agar es bevkuf ki bat hoti , toh shyad me jane ka soch leti , par fari ko chod kar , me kahi nai jaugi..." khushi , fari ke pyar me beh kar boli ,

"me bevkuf , khushiii..." ravi , khushi ko dekh chidta hua bola , par baki sab khushi ki bat par hass rehe the ,

"par voh tumare pita hain , tumari maa hai vaha par , tum ik bachi ke liye , apne maa-baap ko chod dogi..."

"acha , yeh batao , shadi hone ke bad ladki kaha rehti hai..." khushi , anu ke samne akar uski akhon me akhen dal boli ,

"apne pati ke sath..."

"vahi toh kar rehi hu , apne pati ke pas hi toh rehti hu , or agar , ik bar tumne or muze , vapis jane ka bola , toh me tumara moh tod dungi..." khushi behad gusse me chekh kar boli ,

"ohhh , yeh galti karke toh dekho , me bhi kam nai hu..." anu bhi khushi ke or karib hoker boli ,

"ruko , ruko , shant , anu tume tumara jawab mil gya hai , hai na.." ravi , anu ki akhon me zakta hua bola ,

"han mil gya , par dukh bahut hua , shyad , ohh , me chalti hu..." anu yeh bol jane lagi , par tabhi.."anu ruko , khushi ki bation ka bura mat mano , yeh abhi bhi bachi hai , tum ayo , khana kha kar jana..." seema , anu ke pas akar boli ,

"nai dedi , phir kisi din , abhi muze kam hai.." anu yeh bol ravi ki traf dekh ghar se bahar nikal gai ,

bahar akar anu apni akhon se behte asnu saf karte hue gadi ki khidki khol rehi thi , tabhi ravi bhi uske sath akar beth gya ,

"tum , bahar nikalo ..." anu gadi me beth kar boli ,

"shhh , kuch mat bolu , gadi chalao ..." ravi es bar ghambir hoker bola ,

phir anu bhi kuch na boli , voh gadi driver karti rehi , dono jungle ke bechu bech a gye , tab ravi ne gadi rukva di , ravi gadi se bahar nikal kar khada ho gya , kuch hi palu me anu bhi uske samne akar khadi ho gai , voh kuch pal ravi ka chehra dekhti rehi , or phir rone lagi ,

"anu pls.." ravi ne anu ko shant karne ke liye anu ke kande par hath rakhte hue bola , par anu ne jatak diya ,

"detective pls , shant ho jao , rona band karo.." ravi dil ki gehrai me dard mehsus karta hua bola ,

"muze , muze hath mat lagao ravi , me anu hu , mera rape hua tha , me tumare kabil nai hu , ravi , tumne muze esliye thukra diya , kyu ki mera rape ik gunde ne kiya tha , me virgin nai hu , raviii , me vahi anu hu , voh anu abhi tak jinda hai..." anu ne jor jor se rote hue bola ,

"naiii , naii (behad gusse me gadi ki khidki ke mirror par hath marte hue) , yeh vajah nai hai , anu , muze es bat se farak nai padhta , ke tumara , ohhh , kyu , kyu , bar bar , vahi bat , kyu kar rehi ho , tum , tum mera dil dukha rehi ho , ik hi bat karke , janti ho , agar me dard me duba , toh pora shehar hell me badal jayega..." ravi ne behad nam akhon se bola , uske hath se khoon beh reha tha , gadi ka mirror tut chuka tha ,

"toh kya karan hai , kyu muze apna nai rehe , kyu , tumari shadi ho chuki hai es liye , ya tumare pas ladkyion ki kami nai , han yahi karan hoga , vaha toh bahut sari ladkyian thi , tumara dil behlane ke liye , tumari bhuk shant karne ke liye , toh tum , muz jaisi aam si ladki ko , kyu apne dil me jagah doge..." anu behad rote hue gusse me boli ,

"ahhhhh (gusse me chila kar) , ik or shabad bhi , tumne unke bare me bola , toh me tumari sanse yahi rok dunga , unse apni tulna mat karo , unka pyar alag alag hai , unke mere liye kiye balidan alag alag hain , mane kabhi pyar ke liye tulna nai ki , jo muze jitna pyar karta hai , me utni hi shidat se use pyar karta hu..." ravi behad gusse me chila kar bola , uski akhen lal roshni me chamak uthi , voh toh acha tha , uski pith thi , anu ki traf..

"toh muzse bhi karo , jitna pyar me tumse karti hu , utna muzse bhi karo..."

"yeh pyar nai , jidd hai tumari , jal jaugi , tumara vajood mit jayega , es mass ke jism ko mat dekho , eske ander shetian betha hai , me devil hu anu , tum ik insan ho..." ravi behad ghambir hoker dard bhare shabado me bola ,

"phir se bahana , huu (haste hue) , tum dunia ke ikloute ladke ho , jo khud ko devil bata kar , mera purpose thukra rehe ho , sidha sidha yeh kyu nai bolte , ke tume bus vahi ladki chahyie , jo pori life bus tumse pyar karti rehe , or tum dusro ke agge , uske balidan ke kisse sunate raho , tum devil ho ya nai , me nai janti , lekin tumne meri soch galat kardi , me manti thi kuch mard ache hote hain , par , chodo en bation ko , abh mera tumse koi rishta nai..." anu behad ghambir hoker rote hue boli ,

"anu..." ravi behad nam akhon se bola ,

"anu (haste hue) , yeh nam nai hai ravi , yeh ik kalank hai , jo mere sath jud chuka hai , kiske sath rape hua , anu ke sath , mere sath nai hua , anu ke sath hua , hamdardi kise mili , anu ko , muze nai , tumne 20 lakh rupey kise diye , anu ko , muze nai , or abh , tum kise thukra rehe ho anu ko..." anu phir se rote hue boli ,

"tum samazti kyu nai anu , me devil hu , mere dushman tume mar denge , yeh sab ladkyian amar hain , esliye me befikar hu , par tum , tum insan ho , tum mar jaugi..." ravi es bar rote hue bola ,

"toh marne do muze , vaise bhi me jinda kaha hu , me usi din mar gai thi , jab pori rat mera rape hota reha , han , jinda rehne ki vajah tum the , abh voh bhi nai rehi , agar tumare sath do pal ka pyar paker me mar bhi jau , tab bhi muze koi dhuk nai hoga..." anu yeh bol vaha se jane lagi , tabhi gadi me bethne se pehle voh apni akhon se behte asnu saf kar boli ,

"ravi 24 ghante ka wakht deti hu , achi trah soch lena , ghabrao mat , anu jaan nai degi , kyu ki espar mera koi huk nai hai , yeh jindgi tumne kharid li hai , pore 20 lakh rupey me , ravii , me apne dil ke darvaje hamesha hamesha ke liye band kar dongi , or pori jindgi tanhayi me gujarugi , yeh vada hai tumse..." anu yeh bol muskrate hue gadi me beth vaha se chali gai , ravi pathar bana vahi khada reha ,

uff , ravi duvida me fas chuka tha , anu ik insan thi , voh devil tha , anu ke sath prem karne ka parinam kya hoga , voh achi trah se janta tha , or yeh parinam tha anu ki mout....


to be counited....

 

[Rahul]

wonderfull update bhai anu ko ravi se sachcha pyar ho gaya hai aur sari zindgi tapashya karne se behtar hai kuch pal pyar ke ji le fir to maut aani hi hai ek din aur ravi uski security ke liye hai na

 

[QUASAR]

Update-81
Awesome Update Sir Ji...
Fari kya batane wali abhi tak toh meko pata na chala..
Yeh Suzi ka sharmana jada ho gaya hai.. sharma toh vo tab se hi rahi jab usne Ravi or Seema ko pyar krte dekh liya tha. Dekha ya nhi kuch clear nhi hai, pr muje toh yhi lgta...
Dr.nelam ke sath acha romance chl rha tha, mera bhi mood ban rha tha par Suzi ne bula liya. Chalo koi na abhi jagha bhi sahi nhi thi or waqt bhi...
nakabposh aurat or Joker kya sanyantr rachne wale dekhte hai...
Hmm toh akhir Rajesh ne Annu ko Ravi ka case sonp diya.. par yeh Annu kon thi? main thora bhul gya hu sir ji. Anu shyd wahi hai na jinse baby ki dost ko marne k ilzaam mein Ravi ko jail beja tha...

Baki ke 2 Updates read karke reply karta hu Sir ji... thora busy tha toh aa na paya apki story pe...

 

[Abhi]

Superb update
Anu ko ravi se pyar ho gaya hai.
Ravi use samjhkar thak gaya .
Lakin vo nhi man rahi hai.
Is duniya me sabhi ko apna pyar nhi milta.
Uske liye tadapna hota hai.
Ab dekhna hai ki anu kya karti hai apna pyar apne ke liye
Ravi uska pyar kaise accept karta hai