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update-76

Abh Agge...

ravi asman me uddta hua shehar ki traf badh reha tha , tabhi uske samne komal a gai , voh shyad ravi ko rokne ayi thi ,

ravi apne es vheshi roop me shehar jata , toh vaha tabahi mach jati , hazaro begunah log mare jate , kyu ki ravi abh behad gusse me tha , voh sab jala deta , sab tabah kar deta ,

"hunnmmm , mere raste se hat jaooo..." ravi ne apni behad bhari awaz me garajte hue bola , uska jism behad lal ho chuka tha , akhen bhi lal roshni me chamak rehi thi ,

"bhai ruko , vaha mat jao , vaha aam log rehte hain..." komal ne behad shant or naram awaz me bola ,

"voosshhhh (ghurate hue) lara ko mara , abh marko ko narag ki aag me jala dunga , mere raste se hat jaoo , varna..." ravi ne behad gusse me bola , uske hatho me aag nikalne lagi thi ,

"bhai naii , app ko me jane nai dungi..." komal ne thoda nam akhon se bola ,

"muze koi nai rok saktaaa , laraa ki mout ka badla lena hai muze..." ravi agge badta hua bola ,

"toh phir ladu hamse , apko rokne ke liye , ham kisi bhi had tak ja sakti hain..." komal ne abh thoda gusse me bola ,

"tum hame nai rok sakti , hamari behan ho , premika ho , es liye bol rehe hain , raste se hat jaooo...." ravi abh or bhi gusse me ata hua bola ,

"me akeli nai huu..."

tabhi komal ne akhen band ki , ik tez safad roshni charo traf phail gai , etni tez roshni ke ravi ne apni akhan band kar li ,

jab ravi ne kuch der bad akhan kholi , uske samne , baby , khushi , or rema bhi khadi hui thi , abh ravi ko charo se ladna tha ,

"komal , agar ham yaha ravi ko rokege , toh pora jungle jal kar rakh ho jayega..." baby ne thoda preshani me bola ,

"khushi tambomoskoyaaa..." komal ik ajeeb si basha me khushi ki traf dekh boli ,

"samaz gaii..." khushi ne akhen band ki , phir ik andhera sa phail gya , sabki akhon ke agge , jab andhera door hua , tab voh sab ik sunsan si jagah par the ,

us verian sunsan jagah par , sirf jamen thi , jiski mitti kali thi , es anant jamen par , ik bhi pedh nai tha , bilkul sunsan , or halka andhera , charo trah phaila hua tha ,

"bhai abh ruk jao , varna hame apko rokna hoga..." komal ne ravi ke karib jate hue bola ,

"han ravi , komal thik bol rehi hai..." baby bhi komal ka pakash lete hue boli ,

"boosshh (demon groans) , me raza hu tum sab ka , muze rokne ki kossih mat karoo..." ravi tez tez sanse bharta behad bhari awaz me bola ,

"nai ravi , ham tume nai jane dengi , pls tum apna gussa shant karo..." baby , ravi ke karib jate hue boli ,

"naiii , lara ko jinda karna haiii , marko ke khoon se , me uski atma ko hell nai jane dungaa , mere pas wakht kam haiii , hat jaoo , varnaaa..." ravi gusse me chekhta hua bola ,

"naiii , matt jaoo , tumare gusse ne pehle pari log ko khak kar diya , abh tum prithvi ko bhii , naiii , me nai jane dungi tume..." baby ne apne hatho ki muthyian kaste hue bola , aisa karte hi uske hatho me ik agg si nikalne lagi ,

"huuunmmm , me jaugaa , tum sab ko hara kar..." ravi , baby ke karib jaker uski akhon me jakte hue bola ,

"ravii , hosh me ayo..." baby thoda naram padhte hue boli ,

"mee raviiii naiiii huuuuu..." ravi lambi lambi sanse bharta gusse me chekhta hua bola ,

ravi ne baby ki gardan ko apne hath se kas kar pakad liya , ravi me anant shakti thi , usne baby ko gale se pakade uper utha liya , baby ke pair hawa me zulne lage ,

"babyyy..." khushi behad dard bhari awaz me chekhte hue boli ,

khushi ne apni akhen band ki or tez aag ka magic ball ravi par chod diya ,



voh aag ka magic ball tezi se ghumta hua , ravi ke jism se ja takraya ,

lekin khushi ke sath sath sabhi herian reh gye , kyu ki ravi ke jism ne voh pori aag apne ander sama li , ravi ka sharir aag me tapne laga , or behad garam bhi ho gya ,

tabhi rema ne agge badh , apne baalo se ravi ke hath ko jakad liya , rema ke lal jadui baalo ne ravi ke hath ke sath sath uske pore jism ko jakad liya ,

"rema apni pori takat lagao..." komal ne rema ki traf dekhte hue bola ,

komal ki bat sun rema or bhi gusse me a gai , rema ke lal jadui baal ravi ke jism ko kasne lage , ika ik rema ki akhon se tez bijli ke jatke ravi ke jism par padhne lage ,

"ahhhhhh ouuuusshhhh..." ravi ke moh se dard bhari siskayian nikalne lagi , or uske hath ki pakad dheli hone lagi ,

hath ki pakad dheli hote hi , baby ne apne dono hatho se ravi ke hath ko uper ki traf jordar jatka diya ,

baby , ravi ki pakad se azad hote hi , apni gardan pakad ghutno ke bal beth kar , tez tez hafne lagi ,

rema ke do trafa hamle ne ravi ko kamzor kar diya , ravi dhere dhere ghutno ke bal beth gya , or vahi dusri traf khushi , apne hath me demon khanjar liye ravi ki traf badhne lagi ,

"ravii muze maf karna..." khushi ne ravi ke karib akar uski akhon me dekhte hue bola ,

"yeehaaaaaaahhhhhh...." ravi ne apni pori takat laga , behad gusse me chilate hue , apne dono hatho ko jatka diya , rema ke baal jo uske jism par lipte hue the , tut kar , bhikar kar , hawa me uddne lage , rema apne baalo ke tutte hi , jatke se piche ki traf gir gai ,

"aaaahhhhhhh yeehhh loo..." khushi ne behad gusse me chilate hue , demon Khanjar ka war , ravi par karna chaha , par ravi ne uska hath raste me rok diya ,

"tum meri angrakashak ho , meri gulam , devil ki gulam , muzse bhagavt , tume mehngi padhegi tamasss..." ravi ne behad gusse me chila kar bolte hue , khushi ke chehre ko dekhte hue bola ,

"ahhhhhh mera hathhh..." khushi dard me siskar uthi , kyu ki ravi ne uska hath kalai se pakad rakha tha , ravi uske hath ko kalai se pakad kas kar daba reha tha , or khushi ko behad dard ho reha tha ,

"gulam bhagavt nai karte tamas..." ravi ne etna bol , apne dusre hath se ik jordar punch khushi ke pet me jad diya , khushi uddte hue door jamen par ja giri , khushi ke girte hi , vaha ki jamen ander ki traf dhas gai , vaha behad gehra gol ghada ban gya ,

"bhaiii yeh apne acha nai kiyaa..." komal abh gusse me ate hue boli ,

komal ke gusse ne , uske jism me badlav kar diya , uski akhen lal roshni me chamak uthi ,

ring ki takat dono ke pas thi , dono behad takatwar the , kyu dono bhai behan the , apne maa baap se mili shaktyian , or ring se mili shaktyian , dono me ik saman thi ,

"ruhi , mere raste se hat jaoo , tum hamari behan ho..." ravi ne komal ke karib akar bola ,

"bhai jante ho , apko sharap mila hai , app hame chuu nai sakte..." komal ne etna bol , ravi ko apni bahu me kas liya ,

"aaahhhhhhh ssshhhhh naaiiiiiihhh..." ravi ke badan me bijli ke tez jatke lagne lage , paviter bijli ke jatko ne ravi ko kamzor karna suru kar diya ,

dono bhai behan ko ik sharap mila tha , dono kabhi ik nai ho sakte the , abh komal , ruhi thi , or ravi , devil tha ,

"bhaiiii hosh me ayo , apni galti sawikar kar lo , ghar chaloo..." komal ne ravi ke kanu me gusse se bolte hue kaha ,

"naaiiiiiiii..." ravi ne komal ki pakad se azad hone ki kossih karte hue bola ,

"toh bhugto en jatko ko , yeh paviter bijli apko zuka degi , apko kamzor kar degiii , apko zukna hogaaa..." komal ne etna bol , ravi ko or bhi kas liya apni bahu me ,

tabhi asman garaj utha , asman me bijli kadakne lagi , phir voh tez chamakti bijli jamen par ik ke bad ik , girne lagi ,

"bhaiii harr man loo , varnaa..."

"naiiiii...." ravi ne komal ke chehre par apna saar marte hue thoda dard me bola ,

"ahhhh , toh sehan karo phir..." komal abhi bol hi rehi thi , ke ravi bar bar apna saar komal ke chehre par marne laga , komal ki pakad dheli hone lagi ,

"bhaiii ahhhhh rukoo aashhhh..." komal ke chehra chill gya , uska matha fat gya , khoon beh nikala , par tabhi usne voh kiya , jo ravi ne socha bhi nai tha ,

komal ne behad gusse me apne honth , apne bhai ke hontho se mila diye , tabhi asman gusse me garaj utha , asman se bijli or bhi tezi se girne lagi ,

vahi khushi bhi rengte hue us ghade se bahar a chuki thi , rema or baby bhi sambal chuki thi , asman se girti bijli ne unko bhi preshan kar diya tha ,

ika ik rema ne khushi or baby ko apne pas khich , apne baalo se ik shield bana li , tain unko koi nuksan na ho , par jaise hi bijli ka ik tez jatka , rema ke baalo par laga , ik tez dhamake ke sath , tino door ja giri , voh behad jakhmi ho chuki thi ,

vahi komal apne bhai ke hontho ko chus rehi thi , or vahi asman se lagatar bijli gir rehi thi ,

ika ik bijli ka ik tez jatka dono ke jism par a laga , dono dard se chekhte ik dusre se door ja gire ,

abh sabhi jamen par jakhmi lete hue the , komal or ravi jaise hi alag hue , tabhi asman pora saf ho gya , jaise vaha kuch hua hi nai tha ,

ravi ki akhen band thi , tabhi uski band akhon ke samne , lara ka muskrata chehra umad aya , voh behad masom lag rehi thi , phir ravi ne ika ik apni akhen khol li , voh uth kar khada ho gya ,

komal bhi dard se kahrahte hue khadi ho rehi thi , tabhi ravi ne tezi se bhagte hue , komal ke chehre par apne ghutne ka tez war kar diya , komal phir se jamen par gir gai ,

"muze lara ko jinda karna hai , uski atma hell jane ke liye betab ho rehi hai , me uski atma ko mushkil se rok reha hu , or tum sab muze rok rehi ho , yeh jung yahi khatam hui..." ravi etna bol jane laga , tabhi uske kadam vahi tham gye....

ravi ne piche palat niche ki traf dekha , toh komal ne uska pair pakad rakha tha , komal ka chehra khoon se sana hua tha ,

"pyariii behana zuk jaoo..." ravi ne etna bol apne pair ko jatka deker chudva liya , or agge badhne laga , abhi ravi uddne hi wala tha , ke voh kisi ki awaz sun ruk gya ,

ravi ne piche palat dekha , baby , khushi , rema , or komal , behad jakhmi halat me , behad gusse me khadi thi...

"me tumari gulam nai hu bevkuf..." khushi ne aag ugalti akhon se behad gusse me chila kar bola ,

"tum sab , aaaahhhh , me devill huuuuu , or tume devil ke agge zukna hogaaa..." ravi ne gusse me chekhte hue bola ,

"bhai zukna apko hoga..." komal ne apne hontho se behte khoon ko apne hath se saf karte hue bola ,

"voosshhhhh (ghurate hue) , es bar devil tum sabko , jaan se mar degaa , tumari atma ko hell me behj degaaa , mere pas wakht kam haiiii , agar lara ki mout huiii , toh prithvi ko hell banaa dungaa..." ravi ne gusse me chekhte hue apni bhari awaz me bola ,

"bhaiii , abh antim yudh hoga , mout tak , agar prithvi ke masom logu ko bachane ke liye ahhh , hame marna bhi padha , toh hame manzor haiiii , ayoo mar doo apniii ruhiii koo , lelo jaan apni ruhiii kiiii , ayooo devillll..." komal gusse me rote hue chekh kar boli , uske rote hi kuch behad ajeeb hua , jiski kisi ne kalpana bhi nai ki thi...

Dusri traf...

"app zuth bol rehe ho , aisa nai ho sakta..." Eliza ne behad nam akhon se bola ,

"yahi sach hai Elizabeth , me tume dikha sakta hu , apne crystal ball par , yeh dekho..." joker ne behad udas hone ka natak karte hue bola , usne apne magic crystal ball par , lara ke murda sharir ki chavi Eliza ko dikha di ,

"naiiiiiii , laraaaa..." Eliza , lara ke murda sharir ko dekh , ghutno ke bal beth rone lagi , uska ik matar antim dost , abh mar chuka tha , yeh uske liye gehra sadma tha ,

"Eliza tume badla lena hai , ravi se , lara ne apni kurbani di hai , utho Eliza , yeh asnu nai khoon hai , mar do un sab ko , tabahi macha do charo traf , lara ki mout ka badla lo..." joker ne udas Eliza ke man me ik jehar sa gholte hue bola ,

"han , me badla lungi , raviiiii , me barbad kar dungi tume..." Eliza gusse me chila kar boli , or uth kar , apni lab me chali gai ,

voh kuch der bad lab se bahar ayi , uske hath me ik black suitcase tha , usne ik black dress pehan rakhi thi , voh kahi ja rehi thi ,

"kaha ja rehi ho Elizabeth..." joker ne man hi man behad khush hote hue bola ,

"tabahi machane..." Eliza gusse me etna bol , flat se bahar nikal gai , uska pehla nishana , shehar ke aam log the , lekin uske man me kya chal reha tha , yeh toh anne wale wakht me chupa tha...

abh flat me bus marko or joker hi reh gye the , Eliza ke jate hi dono hasne lage ,

"apka dimag behad tez hai , abh Eliza es formule se es shehar me tabahi layegi , voh ravi ko mar degi , phir ham , es dunia par raz karege , mera sadyion purana sapna sakar hoga ... " marko behad hasta hue bola ,

"ahahahaha , marko , mere shetiani dimag hi meri takat hai , me bure kamo ko dusro se anjam dilvata hu , bus ik bar , voh map mere hath lag jaye , phir me hi es dunia ka bhagwan banugaa , ahahaha..." joker apni vheshi hassi haste hue bola....


to be counited.....

Ravi puri trh devil bn gya
Ravi ka gussa uske apno ko nuksan pahuncha rha
Komal bi usko control nhi kr pa rhi
Khushi ko usne gulam bola
Dekhte hai ravi lara ko kaise wapas laayega or eliza ko kaise rokega
By the way Fantastic update sir

 

[Abhi]

Ravi apne devil wale roop me aa gaya.
Khushi baby or rema milkar bhi use rok nhi pa rahi hai.
Komal use rokne ke liye vo kiya jo kabhi ravi sapne me nhi socha.
Usne ravi ko apne hoth se uske hoth jod diya.
Jiske karan dono ke bijli ke jhatke milne lage.
Komal yahan par ravi ke gusse ko shant karne ke liye fari ko la skti thi.
Udher Eliza sahar me kya toofan lane wali hai.

 

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friends next update rat ko 10 baje post karuga... shukriya...

 

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update-77

Abh Agge...

komal ke rote hi asman me badal gir aye , or halki halki barish hone lagi , thodi thodi tez hawa bhi chalne lagi , aisa kyu , aisa es liye , kyu ki komal apne app me hi kudrat thi ,

ravi ka gussa kuch der ke liye shant ho gya , voh apni komal ko rote hue nai dekh sakta tha , par tabhi uski akhon ke samne , lara ka masom chehra , uska muskrata chehra umad aya ,

ravi khud devil tha , bure karam karna uske sehbhav me tha , lekin lara ne burai ko chod , sachai ko apna liya tha ,

uske bure karam , use sachai par chalne nai de rehe the , uski atma hell jane ko bekarar thi , par ravi , use jinda rakhna chahta tha , abhi lara ko jinda rehna tha , uski jarurat thi , ravi ko , es dunia ko ,

"naiiii , tum muze kamzor kar rehi ho , muze jane doo..." ravi phir se gusse me ata hua bola ,

"komal , ravi ko rokne ka koi or rasta sochna hoga , kuch aisa jo ravi ko kamzor kar de..." baby ne komal ke kanu me dhere se bolte hue kaha ,

komal kuch sochne lagi , tabhi use kuch yad aya , lekin yeh kam karega ya nai , komal es duvida me thi ,

"kya hua komal , hai koi rasta..." baby thoda preshani me boli ,

"han ik rasta hai , rema , tum or baby ravi ko roko , or khushi tum meri bat dyan se suno..." phir komal ne khushi ke kan me dhere se sab bata diya , khushi , komal ki bat sun herian reh gai ,

"komal (ghabrate hue) , yeh kya bol rehi ho , voh insan hai , uski jaan ko khatra ho sakta hai..." khushi behad ghabrate hue boli ,

"kuch nai hoga , vahi ravi ko rok sakti hai , jaoo , use leker ayo..." komal ne es bar thoda gusse me bola ,

"thik hai..." khushi etna bol vaha se gyab ho gai ,

ravi ne khushi ko jate hue dekh liya , voh muskrane laga ,



"tamas meri gulam , voh bhag gai , tum tino ko yaha chod kar , tum sab bhi bhag jaoo , varna , marne ke liye tyar ho jaoo..." ravi ne apne devil roop me muskrate hue bola , uski akhen behad lal roshni me chamakne lagi ,

"yaahhhhh..." baby behad gusse me chekhte hue uper ki traf uddi ,

tabhi rema ne apne lal baalo se ravi ko jakad liya , vahi baby ne uddte hue niche ki traf ate hue , ik jordar punch ravi ke moh par jad diya , uski raftar etni tez thi ke uske hath se aag ki lapte nikal rehi thi ,



rema ke baalo ne ravi ke hatho ke kas kar jakad rakha tha , or baby behad gusse me , bar bar , lagatar , ravi ke chehre par punch jad rehi thi ,

"hhhaaannn , haannnnn (hafte hue) , har man loo..." baby , ravi ke chehre par lagatar punch jadte hafte hue boli ,

"etni jaldi..." tabhi ravi ki akhen behad adhik lal roshni me chamak uthi ,

baby hafte hue ik pal ke liye ruki hi thi , ke ravi ki akhon se behad lal light jaisi roshni nikali , jo baby ke chehre par ja padhi ,

"aaahhhhhh aahhhhh mera chehraa..." baby apna jala hua chehra dono hatho me chupaye chekhte hue ghutno ke bal beth gai ,

tabhi ravi ne apne hatho ko jatka diya , rema ke baal phir se tut kar bhikar gye , komal agge badhne ja hi rehi thi , tabhi rema ne use rok diya ,

rema agge badh , apne bhai ke samne khadi ho gai , dono me behad kam fasla tha ,



"bhyiaa app devil ho , lekin me sumon hu , meri takat dekhni hai apko , apko kya lagta hai , koi apko rok nai sakta , toh dekho mera roop..." rema behad gusse me boli ,



tabhi rema ne apni akhen band kar li , uske jism ka akar badalne laga , uska jism behad kala ho gya , voh khud andhera ban gai , lal baal or bhi bade ho gye , etne bade , jaise koi behad bada pedh ho , akhen behad kali ho gai , or dekhte hi dekhte , rema ke seene me ik black hole ban gya ,



"yaahhhhh..." ravi gusse me bhagte hue rema ko marne ke liye agge badha , par tabhi rema ke baalo ne , ik band muthi ka akar leker , ravi ke pet me jordar punch jad diya , ravi uddta hua door jaker gir gya ,

rema ke baal yahi nai ruke , voh tezi se uddte hue ravi ke karib pahunche , rema ke lal jadui baalo ne , ravi ko gardan se jakad uper ki traf uchal diya ,

jab ravi uper se niche jamen par girne laga , tabhi rema ke lal jadui baal , jamen par ik chatai ke roop me bish gye , phir dekhte hi dekhte rema ke baal niche bishe hue , ik dam uper ki traf tikhe ho gye , jaise kisi ne jamen par nokile lambe kate bisha diye ho ,

"aaahhhhhh..." ravi ke moh se dardnak chekh nikal gai , kyu ki ravi pith ke bal jamen par gira tha , voh nokile katon jaise baal , ravi ke pore jism ko fadte hue ander tak ghus gye ,

"bhai haar man loo , rema apko mar degi..." komal ne thoda nam akhon se bola ,

ravi ki pith se khoon behne laga , rema ke nokile baal , dhere dhere jawalamukhi ke lave ki trah garam hone lage , dhere dhere voh jalne lage , or ravi ki pith ko ander se jalane lage ,

"aahhhh shhhhh naiiiiiii..." ravi beintha dard me chekhne laga , yeh ik dardnak lamha tha ,

"bhaiii man lo haar..." komal agge badh ravi ke karib jate hue boli ,

"naiiiiii..." ravi dard se kahrahta hua chekh kar bola ,

"toh ladu sumon se , jadugarni ki beti se , hazaro vidyaoin ki malika se , sumon jo pori prithvi ko apne ander nigal sakti hai...." rema or bhi gusse me ate hue boli ,

rema ne apni akhen band ki , toh uske bache hue adhe baal , alag alag janleva hathiyaro me tabdel ho gye ,

rema ke kuch baal behad tezdar talwar me badal gye , kuch baal khulhadi ki trah akar le gye , kuch bade hathode jaise , kuch janleva tikhe teer ban gye , yeh sab aag jaise garam hoker tap rehe the ,

"bhai akhri bar puch rehi hu , haar mante ho ya naiii..." rema ne apne bhai ke pyar me behte hue akhri bar ravi se pucha ,

"naiiiii..." ravi , rema ki akhon me akhen dal dard me kahrahte hue bola ,

"tohh yehh looo..." rema ne apne hathiyaro se less baalo ko ravi ke jism par chod diya ,

rema ke un baalo ne ravi ke pore jism ko fad diya , ravi ki ik dardnak chekh nikali or phir uski akhen band ho gai ,

"bhaiii..." komal behad rote hue boli , tabhi rema ke baal vapis chote akar ke ho gye ,

"komal , yeh mane kya kar diyaa , yeh galat hua hai..." rema behad udas hote hue boli ,

"rema , dunia ko bachane ka yahi akhri rasta tha , tumari koi galti nai..." komal rema ke gale lag nam akhon se boli ,

dono kuch der gale lagi rehi , par jaise hi dono ne ravi par nazar dali , dono herian reh gai , kyu ki ravi vaha nai tha , voh vaha se gyab tha ,

"bhyia kaha gye..." komal behad chinta me boli ,

"yeh asambhav hai , voh khud kahi nai ja sakte , jarur yeh koi chal hai..." rema phir se apne usi roop me ate hue boli ,

"wahhh , wahhh , tumari takat , behad shandar hai , meri pyari behana..." ravi un dono ke piche kuch duri par khada bola ,

dono ne piche palat kar dekha , voh san reh gai , ravi ko dekh kar , ravi ka pora jism jagah jagah se kata hua tha , jism se khoon pani ki trah beh reha tha , kyu ravi me abh bhi kuch insani ansh the ,

voh amar jarur tha , par use jo jakham milte the , unka dard , ravi ko insano jaisa hota tha , uske jakham bharte jarur the , lekin unko bharne me thoda wakht lagta tha , or tab tak ravi ko dard sehan karna padhta ,

yeh ik mayajaal tha , ravi ke pita ka , use mile sharap ka asar tha , komal ke sath bhi yahi hota tha , uske bhi jakham use dard dete the ,

"app jinda ho..." komal behad chinta me boli ,


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"haha (devil laughs) , me jo hu , so hu , lekin jo me hu , voh tum nai ho , or jo tum nai ho , voh me hu , sidha matlab , me amar hu..." ravi behad haste hue bola , uski akhen lal roshni me chamakne lagi ,

"yeh bevkuf kya bola abhi..." rema apne baal khujate boli ,

"ahhh , rema maro ese , chahe yeh ladai sadyion tak chale , lekin bhai , yaha se prithvi par na ja paye , jab tak khushi nai a jati..." komal ne rema ki traf dekh kar bola ,


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rema thoda agge badh gai , uske baalo ne es bar ik aag ugalte dragon ka akar le liya , uske baal dragon ki trah uddte hue ravi ke pas pahunch gye ,

or phir ravi par aag barsani suru kar di , etni jayda aag ke ravi dikhai hi nai de reha tha , lekin tabhi ravi uddta hua , us aag se bahar nikala , uske hath me ik , chamakti hui talwar thi ,

"aahhhhhhh..." ravi ne chekhte hue , rema ke baalo par , talwar ka jordar war kiya , or rema ke baal tut kar bhikar gye ,

"yeh nai ho sakta..." rema thoda herian hoker boli , tabhi uske moh se ..."ahhhhh..." ik dard bhi siski nikali , kyu ki ravi ne voh talwar rema ke pet me ghusa di thi ,

"abh meri barii.." ravi ne muskra kar bola ,

phir ravi ne rema ko gardan se pakad uper utha liya , or uper asman ki traf udd gya , behad uper jane ke bad , ravi ikdam se palat kar niche anne laga , ravi ne rema ki gardan ko apne hath me pakad rakha tha ,


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jaise hi ravi or rema , jamen se takraye , ik tez dhamaka hua , vaha ki jamen fat gai , behad gehra ghada ban gya , vaha as-pas mitti ki dhul uddne lagi , jab dhul ke kan vaha se hate , ravi rengte hue ghade se bahar nikal reha tha , or rema jamen par besudh padhi , akhen band kiye , tez tez haf rehi thi ,

ravi ghade se bahar akar , sidha leta , tez tez sanse bhar reha tha , tabhi komal us par japat padhi , komal or ravi phir ik ho gye , bijli ke tez jatke ravi ko lagne lage , or asman se bijli girne lagi ,


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"aahhhh naiiiii..." ravi dard me tadaf utha , lekin tabhi usne komal ko gale se pakad liya , or apne uper se utha , door fenk diya ,

abh akela ravi khada hua tha , rema , baby or komal besudh padhi hui thi , ravi vaha se jane laga , lekin tabhi komal ki awaz use ayi ,

"ahhhh etni jaldi naiii , abhi kisi ka anna baki haiii , khushiii..." komal apni gardan ko pakade hafte hue boli , uske chehre se khoon beh reha tha ,



tabhi ravi ki akhon ke samne ik black hole ban gya , or khushi usme se bahar a gai , lekin khushi akeli nai thi , uske sath kat bhi thi ,

kat ne jaise hi ravi ke byank roop ko dekha , voh chekh padhi ,

"aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh , mummy bhutttttt (dhere se) ..." kat ik jordar chekh marte bahut dhere se yeh bolte hue behosh ho gai , vaise use pata bhi nai tha , voh yaha kaise a gai thi....

to be counited....

 

[Rahul]

huum ladai mahayodhaon ki koi kisi se kam nahi hai kisi baat me sab bahut hi takaatwar hain.badhiya update bhaiya ji

 

[spritemathews]

badhiya update

 

[aka3829]

Bahut hi jaandaar fight scene diya he bhai. To khushi kat ko layi he jabki me fari ko soch ke baitha tha. Khair jo bhi he ye fight wala scene mujhe jyada pasand nahi aya.
Waiting 4 next update

 

[Rizwan]

Both hi vadiya update Hy veer g tareef k liey ilfaz nai hin

update-77

Abh Agge...

komal ke rote hi asman me badal gir aye , or halki halki barish hone lagi , thodi thodi tez hawa bhi chalne lagi , aisa kyu , aisa es liye , kyu ki komal apne app me hi kudrat thi ,

ravi ka gussa kuch der ke liye shant ho gya , voh apni komal ko rote hue nai dekh sakta tha , par tabhi uski akhon ke samne , lara ka masom chehra , uska muskrata chehra umad aya ,

ravi khud devil tha , bure karam karna uske sehbhav me tha , lekin lara ne burai ko chod , sachai ko apna liya tha ,

uske bure karam , use sachai par chalne nai de rehe the , uski atma hell jane ko bekarar thi , par ravi , use jinda rakhna chahta tha , abhi lara ko jinda rehna tha , uski jarurat thi , ravi ko , es dunia ko ,

"naiiii , tum muze kamzor kar rehi ho , muze jane doo..." ravi phir se gusse me ata hua bola ,

"komal , ravi ko rokne ka koi or rasta sochna hoga , kuch aisa jo ravi ko kamzor kar de..." baby ne komal ke kanu me dhere se bolte hue kaha ,

komal kuch sochne lagi , tabhi use kuch yad aya , lekin yeh kam karega ya nai , komal es duvida me thi ,

"kya hua komal , hai koi rasta..." baby thoda preshani me boli ,

"han ik rasta hai , rema , tum or baby ravi ko roko , or khushi tum meri bat dyan se suno..." phir komal ne khushi ke kan me dhere se sab bata diya , khushi , komal ki bat sun herian reh gai ,

"komal (ghabrate hue) , yeh kya bol rehi ho , voh insan hai , uski jaan ko khatra ho sakta hai..." khushi behad ghabrate hue boli ,

"kuch nai hoga , vahi ravi ko rok sakti hai , jaoo , use leker ayo..." komal ne es bar thoda gusse me bola ,

"thik hai..." khushi etna bol vaha se gyab ho gai ,

ravi ne khushi ko jate hue dekh liya , voh muskrane laga ,



"tamas meri gulam , voh bhag gai , tum tino ko yaha chod kar , tum sab bhi bhag jaoo , varna , marne ke liye tyar ho jaoo..." ravi ne apne devil roop me muskrate hue bola , uski akhen behad lal roshni me chamakne lagi ,

"yaahhhhh..." baby behad gusse me chekhte hue uper ki traf uddi ,

tabhi rema ne apne lal baalo se ravi ko jakad liya , vahi baby ne uddte hue niche ki traf ate hue , ik jordar punch ravi ke moh par jad diya , uski raftar etni tez thi ke uske hath se aag ki lapte nikal rehi thi ,



rema ke baalo ne ravi ke hatho ke kas kar jakad rakha tha , or baby behad gusse me , bar bar , lagatar , ravi ke chehre par punch jad rehi thi ,

"hhhaaannn , haannnnn (hafte hue) , har man loo..." baby , ravi ke chehre par lagatar punch jadte hafte hue boli ,

"etni jaldi..." tabhi ravi ki akhen behad adhik lal roshni me chamak uthi ,

baby hafte hue ik pal ke liye ruki hi thi , ke ravi ki akhon se behad lal light jaisi roshni nikali , jo baby ke chehre par ja padhi ,

"aaahhhhhh aahhhhh mera chehraa..." baby apna jala hua chehra dono hatho me chupaye chekhte hue ghutno ke bal beth gai ,

tabhi ravi ne apne hatho ko jatka diya , rema ke baal phir se tut kar bhikar gye , komal agge badhne ja hi rehi thi , tabhi rema ne use rok diya ,

rema agge badh , apne bhai ke samne khadi ho gai , dono me behad kam fasla tha ,



"bhyiaa app devil ho , lekin me sumon hu , meri takat dekhni hai apko , apko kya lagta hai , koi apko rok nai sakta , toh dekho mera roop..." rema behad gusse me boli ,



tabhi rema ne apni akhen band kar li , uske jism ka akar badalne laga , uska jism behad kala ho gya , voh khud andhera ban gai , lal baal or bhi bade ho gye , etne bade , jaise koi behad bada pedh ho , akhen behad kali ho gai , or dekhte hi dekhte , rema ke seene me ik black hole ban gya ,



"yaahhhhh..." ravi gusse me bhagte hue rema ko marne ke liye agge badha , par tabhi rema ke baalo ne , ik band muthi ka akar leker , ravi ke pet me jordar punch jad diya , ravi uddta hua door jaker gir gya ,

rema ke baal yahi nai ruke , voh tezi se uddte hue ravi ke karib pahunche , rema ke lal jadui baalo ne , ravi ko gardan se jakad uper ki traf uchal diya ,

jab ravi uper se niche jamen par girne laga , tabhi rema ke lal jadui baal , jamen par ik chatai ke roop me bish gye , phir dekhte hi dekhte rema ke baal niche bishe hue , ik dam uper ki traf tikhe ho gye , jaise kisi ne jamen par nokile lambe kate bisha diye ho ,

"aaahhhhhh..." ravi ke moh se dardnak chekh nikal gai , kyu ki ravi pith ke bal jamen par gira tha , voh nokile katon jaise baal , ravi ke pore jism ko fadte hue ander tak ghus gye ,

"bhai haar man loo , rema apko mar degi..." komal ne thoda nam akhon se bola ,

ravi ki pith se khoon behne laga , rema ke nokile baal , dhere dhere jawalamukhi ke lave ki trah garam hone lage , dhere dhere voh jalne lage , or ravi ki pith ko ander se jalane lage ,

"aahhhh shhhhh naiiiiiii..." ravi beintha dard me chekhne laga , yeh ik dardnak lamha tha ,

"bhaiii man lo haar..." komal agge badh ravi ke karib jate hue boli ,

"naiiiiii..." ravi dard se kahrahta hua chekh kar bola ,

"toh ladu sumon se , jadugarni ki beti se , hazaro vidyaoin ki malika se , sumon jo pori prithvi ko apne ander nigal sakti hai...." rema or bhi gusse me ate hue boli ,

rema ne apni akhen band ki , toh uske bache hue adhe baal , alag alag janleva hathiyaro me tabdel ho gye ,

rema ke kuch baal behad tezdar talwar me badal gye , kuch baal khulhadi ki trah akar le gye , kuch bade hathode jaise , kuch janleva tikhe teer ban gye , yeh sab aag jaise garam hoker tap rehe the ,

"bhai akhri bar puch rehi hu , haar mante ho ya naiii..." rema ne apne bhai ke pyar me behte hue akhri bar ravi se pucha ,

"naiiiii..." ravi , rema ki akhon me akhen dal dard me kahrahte hue bola ,

"tohh yehh looo..." rema ne apne hathiyaro se less baalo ko ravi ke jism par chod diya ,

rema ke un baalo ne ravi ke pore jism ko fad diya , ravi ki ik dardnak chekh nikali or phir uski akhen band ho gai ,

"bhaiii..." komal behad rote hue boli , tabhi rema ke baal vapis chote akar ke ho gye ,

"komal , yeh mane kya kar diyaa , yeh galat hua hai..." rema behad udas hote hue boli ,

"rema , dunia ko bachane ka yahi akhri rasta tha , tumari koi galti nai..." komal rema ke gale lag nam akhon se boli ,

dono kuch der gale lagi rehi , par jaise hi dono ne ravi par nazar dali , dono herian reh gai , kyu ki ravi vaha nai tha , voh vaha se gyab tha ,

"bhyia kaha gye..." komal behad chinta me boli ,

"yeh asambhav hai , voh khud kahi nai ja sakte , jarur yeh koi chal hai..." rema phir se apne usi roop me ate hue boli ,

"wahhh , wahhh , tumari takat , behad shandar hai , meri pyari behana..." ravi un dono ke piche kuch duri par khada bola ,

dono ne piche palat kar dekha , voh san reh gai , ravi ko dekh kar , ravi ka pora jism jagah jagah se kata hua tha , jism se khoon pani ki trah beh reha tha , kyu ravi me abh bhi kuch insani ansh the ,

voh amar jarur tha , par use jo jakham milte the , unka dard , ravi ko insano jaisa hota tha , uske jakham bharte jarur the , lekin unko bharne me thoda wakht lagta tha , or tab tak ravi ko dard sehan karna padhta ,

yeh ik mayajaal tha , ravi ke pita ka , use mile sharap ka asar tha , komal ke sath bhi yahi hota tha , uske bhi jakham use dard dete the ,

"app jinda ho..." komal behad chinta me boli ,


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"haha (devil laughs) , me jo hu , so hu , lekin jo me hu , voh tum nai ho , or jo tum nai ho , voh me hu , sidha matlab , me amar hu..." ravi behad haste hue bola , uski akhen lal roshni me chamakne lagi ,

"yeh bevkuf kya bola abhi..." rema apne baal khujate boli ,

"ahhh , rema maro ese , chahe yeh ladai sadyion tak chale , lekin bhai , yaha se prithvi par na ja paye , jab tak khushi nai a jati..." komal ne rema ki traf dekh kar bola ,


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rema thoda agge badh gai , uske baalo ne es bar ik aag ugalte dragon ka akar le liya , uske baal dragon ki trah uddte hue ravi ke pas pahunch gye ,

or phir ravi par aag barsani suru kar di , etni jayda aag ke ravi dikhai hi nai de reha tha , lekin tabhi ravi uddta hua , us aag se bahar nikala , uske hath me ik , chamakti hui talwar thi ,

"aahhhhhhh..." ravi ne chekhte hue , rema ke baalo par , talwar ka jordar war kiya , or rema ke baal tut kar bhikar gye ,

"yeh nai ho sakta..." rema thoda herian hoker boli , tabhi uske moh se ..."ahhhhh..." ik dard bhi siski nikali , kyu ki ravi ne voh talwar rema ke pet me ghusa di thi ,

"abh meri barii.." ravi ne muskra kar bola ,

phir ravi ne rema ko gardan se pakad uper utha liya , or uper asman ki traf udd gya , behad uper jane ke bad , ravi ikdam se palat kar niche anne laga , ravi ne rema ki gardan ko apne hath me pakad rakha tha ,


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jaise hi ravi or rema , jamen se takraye , ik tez dhamaka hua , vaha ki jamen fat gai , behad gehra ghada ban gya , vaha as-pas mitti ki dhul uddne lagi , jab dhul ke kan vaha se hate , ravi rengte hue ghade se bahar nikal reha tha , or rema jamen par besudh padhi , akhen band kiye , tez tez haf rehi thi ,

ravi ghade se bahar akar , sidha leta , tez tez sanse bhar reha tha , tabhi komal us par japat padhi , komal or ravi phir ik ho gye , bijli ke tez jatke ravi ko lagne lage , or asman se bijli girne lagi ,


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"aahhhh naiiiii..." ravi dard me tadaf utha , lekin tabhi usne komal ko gale se pakad liya , or apne uper se utha , door fenk diya ,

abh akela ravi khada hua tha , rema , baby or komal besudh padhi hui thi , ravi vaha se jane laga , lekin tabhi komal ki awaz use ayi ,

"ahhhh etni jaldi naiii , abhi kisi ka anna baki haiii , khushiii..." komal apni gardan ko pakade hafte hue boli , uske chehre se khoon beh reha tha ,



tabhi ravi ki akhon ke samne ik black hole ban gya , or khushi usme se bahar a gai , lekin khushi akeli nai thi , uske sath kat bhi thi ,

kat ne jaise hi ravi ke byank roop ko dekha , voh chekh padhi ,

"aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh , mummy bhutttttt (dhere se) ..." kat ik jordar chekh marte bahut dhere se yeh bolte hue behosh ho gai , vaise use pata bhi nai tha , voh yaha kaise a gai thi....

to be counited....

 

[Prince Charlee]

update-77

Abh Agge...

komal ke rote hi asman me badal gir aye , or halki halki barish hone lagi , thodi thodi tez hawa bhi chalne lagi , aisa kyu , aisa es liye , kyu ki komal apne app me hi kudrat thi ,

ravi ka gussa kuch der ke liye shant ho gya , voh apni komal ko rote hue nai dekh sakta tha , par tabhi uski akhon ke samne , lara ka masom chehra , uska muskrata chehra umad aya ,

ravi khud devil tha , bure karam karna uske sehbhav me tha , lekin lara ne burai ko chod , sachai ko apna liya tha ,

uske bure karam , use sachai par chalne nai de rehe the , uski atma hell jane ko bekarar thi , par ravi , use jinda rakhna chahta tha , abhi lara ko jinda rehna tha , uski jarurat thi , ravi ko , es dunia ko ,

"naiiii , tum muze kamzor kar rehi ho , muze jane doo..." ravi phir se gusse me ata hua bola ,

"komal , ravi ko rokne ka koi or rasta sochna hoga , kuch aisa jo ravi ko kamzor kar de..." baby ne komal ke kanu me dhere se bolte hue kaha ,

komal kuch sochne lagi , tabhi use kuch yad aya , lekin yeh kam karega ya nai , komal es duvida me thi ,

"kya hua komal , hai koi rasta..." baby thoda preshani me boli ,

"han ik rasta hai , rema , tum or baby ravi ko roko , or khushi tum meri bat dyan se suno..." phir komal ne khushi ke kan me dhere se sab bata diya , khushi , komal ki bat sun herian reh gai ,

"komal (ghabrate hue) , yeh kya bol rehi ho , voh insan hai , uski jaan ko khatra ho sakta hai..." khushi behad ghabrate hue boli ,

"kuch nai hoga , vahi ravi ko rok sakti hai , jaoo , use leker ayo..." komal ne es bar thoda gusse me bola ,

"thik hai..." khushi etna bol vaha se gyab ho gai ,

ravi ne khushi ko jate hue dekh liya , voh muskrane laga ,



"tamas meri gulam , voh bhag gai , tum tino ko yaha chod kar , tum sab bhi bhag jaoo , varna , marne ke liye tyar ho jaoo..." ravi ne apne devil roop me muskrate hue bola , uski akhen behad lal roshni me chamakne lagi ,

"yaahhhhh..." baby behad gusse me chekhte hue uper ki traf uddi ,

tabhi rema ne apne lal baalo se ravi ko jakad liya , vahi baby ne uddte hue niche ki traf ate hue , ik jordar punch ravi ke moh par jad diya , uski raftar etni tez thi ke uske hath se aag ki lapte nikal rehi thi ,



rema ke baalo ne ravi ke hatho ke kas kar jakad rakha tha , or baby behad gusse me , bar bar , lagatar , ravi ke chehre par punch jad rehi thi ,

"hhhaaannn , haannnnn (hafte hue) , har man loo..." baby , ravi ke chehre par lagatar punch jadte hafte hue boli ,

"etni jaldi..." tabhi ravi ki akhen behad adhik lal roshni me chamak uthi ,

baby hafte hue ik pal ke liye ruki hi thi , ke ravi ki akhon se behad lal light jaisi roshni nikali , jo baby ke chehre par ja padhi ,

"aaahhhhhh aahhhhh mera chehraa..." baby apna jala hua chehra dono hatho me chupaye chekhte hue ghutno ke bal beth gai ,

tabhi ravi ne apne hatho ko jatka diya , rema ke baal phir se tut kar bhikar gye , komal agge badhne ja hi rehi thi , tabhi rema ne use rok diya ,

rema agge badh , apne bhai ke samne khadi ho gai , dono me behad kam fasla tha ,



"bhyiaa app devil ho , lekin me sumon hu , meri takat dekhni hai apko , apko kya lagta hai , koi apko rok nai sakta , toh dekho mera roop..." rema behad gusse me boli ,



tabhi rema ne apni akhen band kar li , uske jism ka akar badalne laga , uska jism behad kala ho gya , voh khud andhera ban gai , lal baal or bhi bade ho gye , etne bade , jaise koi behad bada pedh ho , akhen behad kali ho gai , or dekhte hi dekhte , rema ke seene me ik black hole ban gya ,



"yaahhhhh..." ravi gusse me bhagte hue rema ko marne ke liye agge badha , par tabhi rema ke baalo ne , ik band muthi ka akar leker , ravi ke pet me jordar punch jad diya , ravi uddta hua door jaker gir gya ,

rema ke baal yahi nai ruke , voh tezi se uddte hue ravi ke karib pahunche , rema ke lal jadui baalo ne , ravi ko gardan se jakad uper ki traf uchal diya ,

jab ravi uper se niche jamen par girne laga , tabhi rema ke lal jadui baal , jamen par ik chatai ke roop me bish gye , phir dekhte hi dekhte rema ke baal niche bishe hue , ik dam uper ki traf tikhe ho gye , jaise kisi ne jamen par nokile lambe kate bisha diye ho ,

"aaahhhhhh..." ravi ke moh se dardnak chekh nikal gai , kyu ki ravi pith ke bal jamen par gira tha , voh nokile katon jaise baal , ravi ke pore jism ko fadte hue ander tak ghus gye ,

"bhai haar man loo , rema apko mar degi..." komal ne thoda nam akhon se bola ,

ravi ki pith se khoon behne laga , rema ke nokile baal , dhere dhere jawalamukhi ke lave ki trah garam hone lage , dhere dhere voh jalne lage , or ravi ki pith ko ander se jalane lage ,

"aahhhh shhhhh naiiiiiii..." ravi beintha dard me chekhne laga , yeh ik dardnak lamha tha ,

"bhaiii man lo haar..." komal agge badh ravi ke karib jate hue boli ,

"naiiiiii..." ravi dard se kahrahta hua chekh kar bola ,

"toh ladu sumon se , jadugarni ki beti se , hazaro vidyaoin ki malika se , sumon jo pori prithvi ko apne ander nigal sakti hai...." rema or bhi gusse me ate hue boli ,

rema ne apni akhen band ki , toh uske bache hue adhe baal , alag alag janleva hathiyaro me tabdel ho gye ,

rema ke kuch baal behad tezdar talwar me badal gye , kuch baal khulhadi ki trah akar le gye , kuch bade hathode jaise , kuch janleva tikhe teer ban gye , yeh sab aag jaise garam hoker tap rehe the ,

"bhai akhri bar puch rehi hu , haar mante ho ya naiii..." rema ne apne bhai ke pyar me behte hue akhri bar ravi se pucha ,

"naiiiii..." ravi , rema ki akhon me akhen dal dard me kahrahte hue bola ,

"tohh yehh looo..." rema ne apne hathiyaro se less baalo ko ravi ke jism par chod diya ,

rema ke un baalo ne ravi ke pore jism ko fad diya , ravi ki ik dardnak chekh nikali or phir uski akhen band ho gai ,

"bhaiii..." komal behad rote hue boli , tabhi rema ke baal vapis chote akar ke ho gye ,

"komal , yeh mane kya kar diyaa , yeh galat hua hai..." rema behad udas hote hue boli ,

"rema , dunia ko bachane ka yahi akhri rasta tha , tumari koi galti nai..." komal rema ke gale lag nam akhon se boli ,

dono kuch der gale lagi rehi , par jaise hi dono ne ravi par nazar dali , dono herian reh gai , kyu ki ravi vaha nai tha , voh vaha se gyab tha ,

"bhyia kaha gye..." komal behad chinta me boli ,

"yeh asambhav hai , voh khud kahi nai ja sakte , jarur yeh koi chal hai..." rema phir se apne usi roop me ate hue boli ,

"wahhh , wahhh , tumari takat , behad shandar hai , meri pyari behana..." ravi un dono ke piche kuch duri par khada bola ,

dono ne piche palat kar dekha , voh san reh gai , ravi ko dekh kar , ravi ka pora jism jagah jagah se kata hua tha , jism se khoon pani ki trah beh reha tha , kyu ravi me abh bhi kuch insani ansh the ,

voh amar jarur tha , par use jo jakham milte the , unka dard , ravi ko insano jaisa hota tha , uske jakham bharte jarur the , lekin unko bharne me thoda wakht lagta tha , or tab tak ravi ko dard sehan karna padhta ,

yeh ik mayajaal tha , ravi ke pita ka , use mile sharap ka asar tha , komal ke sath bhi yahi hota tha , uske bhi jakham use dard dete the ,

"app jinda ho..." komal behad chinta me boli ,


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"haha (devil laughs) , me jo hu , so hu , lekin jo me hu , voh tum nai ho , or jo tum nai ho , voh me hu , sidha matlab , me amar hu..." ravi behad haste hue bola , uski akhen lal roshni me chamakne lagi ,

"yeh bevkuf kya bola abhi..." rema apne baal khujate boli ,

"ahhh , rema maro ese , chahe yeh ladai sadyion tak chale , lekin bhai , yaha se prithvi par na ja paye , jab tak khushi nai a jati..." komal ne rema ki traf dekh kar bola ,


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rema thoda agge badh gai , uske baalo ne es bar ik aag ugalte dragon ka akar le liya , uske baal dragon ki trah uddte hue ravi ke pas pahunch gye ,

or phir ravi par aag barsani suru kar di , etni jayda aag ke ravi dikhai hi nai de reha tha , lekin tabhi ravi uddta hua , us aag se bahar nikala , uske hath me ik , chamakti hui talwar thi ,

"aahhhhhhh..." ravi ne chekhte hue , rema ke baalo par , talwar ka jordar war kiya , or rema ke baal tut kar bhikar gye ,

"yeh nai ho sakta..." rema thoda herian hoker boli , tabhi uske moh se ..."ahhhhh..." ik dard bhi siski nikali , kyu ki ravi ne voh talwar rema ke pet me ghusa di thi ,

"abh meri barii.." ravi ne muskra kar bola ,

phir ravi ne rema ko gardan se pakad uper utha liya , or uper asman ki traf udd gya , behad uper jane ke bad , ravi ikdam se palat kar niche anne laga , ravi ne rema ki gardan ko apne hath me pakad rakha tha ,


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jaise hi ravi or rema , jamen se takraye , ik tez dhamaka hua , vaha ki jamen fat gai , behad gehra ghada ban gya , vaha as-pas mitti ki dhul uddne lagi , jab dhul ke kan vaha se hate , ravi rengte hue ghade se bahar nikal reha tha , or rema jamen par besudh padhi , akhen band kiye , tez tez haf rehi thi ,

ravi ghade se bahar akar , sidha leta , tez tez sanse bhar reha tha , tabhi komal us par japat padhi , komal or ravi phir ik ho gye , bijli ke tez jatke ravi ko lagne lage , or asman se bijli girne lagi ,


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"aahhhh naiiiii..." ravi dard me tadaf utha , lekin tabhi usne komal ko gale se pakad liya , or apne uper se utha , door fenk diya ,

abh akela ravi khada hua tha , rema , baby or komal besudh padhi hui thi , ravi vaha se jane laga , lekin tabhi komal ki awaz use ayi ,

"ahhhh etni jaldi naiii , abhi kisi ka anna baki haiii , khushiii..." komal apni gardan ko pakade hafte hue boli , uske chehre se khoon beh reha tha ,



tabhi ravi ki akhon ke samne ik black hole ban gya , or khushi usme se bahar a gai , lekin khushi akeli nai thi , uske sath kat bhi thi ,

kat ne jaise hi ravi ke byank roop ko dekha , voh chekh padhi ,

"aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh , mummy bhutttttt (dhere se) ..." kat ik jordar chekh marte bahut dhere se yeh bolte hue behosh ho gai , vaise use pata bhi nai tha , voh yaha kaise a gai thi....

to be counited....

Great update bhai dekhte hai Komal ki chal kamyab hoti hai ya nahi lekin abhi to kat khud behosh hai.

 

[Raj Singh]

Nice update