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Itane kam reviews ke chalte writer ne nischaye kiya he ki is story ko band kar diya jaye. Ek to waise hi is site par adhuri stories ki bharmaar he aur agar koi writer update time se deta he to kayi reader aise he jo sirf waiting ya nice update likha kar sochte he ki unhone apna farz pura kar diya he aur kaiyo ko to update bhi 5000 words ka chahiye hota he. Yaha tak ki is forum ke active mods aur owners bhi review nahi dete kehke ke baad bhi. Badi sharam ki baat he.
 

Rahul

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wonderful update dear maja aa gaya bilkul aisa lag raha jaise live chal raha ho:flowers:
 
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update-17

Abh agge...

seema abh bhi komal ke us locket ko hatho me leker bethi hui thi ,

phir usne soch liya ke pehle kaal se bat karegi or phir hi ravi ko yeh locket pehnayegi ,

"pita ji muze apse bat karni hai , pls a jao.." seema ne akhen band kar li ,

kuch hi der bad room ne andhera sa ho gya , seema ne apni akhen khol dekha , toh kaal uske samne khada tha ,

"pita ji muze apse bahut jaruri bat karni thi.."

"janta hu me , komal ka locket tume mil gya hai , or komal ka voh sapna jo tume abhi kuch der pehle aya tha , voh agg me jal rehi thi.."

"han , par apko sab pata hai.." seema kaal se behad parbhavit hote hue boli ,

"komal ka voh sapna bilkul sach tha.."

"kya , meri komal etni musibat me hai.." seema ne nam akhon se bola ,

"me janta hu , tume ravi se adhik prem komal se hai , mane tumse kaha tha , tume ik din kurbani deni hogi , janti ho voh kurbani kya hogi.." kaal ne seema ki chehre ke bhavo ko padhte hue bola ,

"nai janti hu.."

"abh suno dyan se , jab tum yeh locket ravi ko pehnaogi , tabhi tume voh ring khud apni ungli me pehanni hogi , samaz gai meri beti.." kaal ne behad dard awaz me bola ,

"ohh me tyar hu , par us ring ko me hi kyu pehan sakti hu.."

"ravi ko hamne es liye chuna tha kyu ki uske dil me har kisi ke liye prem tha , koi erkha nai tha , sabse ik jaisa pyar tha , or tumare ander bhi vahi gun mazod hain , tum ravi se pyar karti hi ho , par uski behano se bhi utna hi pyar karti , jab ki tume pata hai , ke unke samband ravi se kaise hain , mane kabhi tumare man me kisi ke liye erkha nai dekhi , na hi jalan ke bhav , or toh or mere kehne matar se hi tumne rema ko apne pati ko sonp diya , tum se bada dil ravi ka bhi nai , es dunia me ravi ke bad tum hi ik ladki ho jo ring ko dharan kar sakti ho.." kaal ne bahut shant awaz me seema ko sab samazate hue bola ,

"jii , me sab samaz gai , ring ko me pehan lungi , yeh kurbani me dungi , lekin es locket ka ravi par kya asar hoga , jo komal ne muze khas sapne me bataya.." seema ne locket ko ghur kar dekhte hue bola ,

"yeh locket komal ne khud banaya tha , apni barso ki mehnat se , komal janti thi ik din use kurbani deni hogi , tabhi usne akhri wakht par yeh locket apne bhai ko pehna diya , es locket me komal ka pyar basa hua hai , abhi ravi komal se nafrat karta hai , par yeh locket use komal ke aseem pyar ka ehsas dilvayega , or toh or , use un dushmano se ladne me madad karega , jo insan nai hain , yahi locket ravi ko komal tak leker jayega , kyu ki komal eski malkin hai , yeh jayda din apni malkin se door nai reh sakta , jab ravi esko pehan lega , yeh ravi ko hathiyar bana kar komal ko vapis layega , bus tume kisi trah ravi se door hona padega , voh wakht kab ayega me tume bata dunga..." kaal etna bol vaha se gyab ho gya ,

seema ko abh sab samaz a chuka tha , ik trah se voh komal se pyar karti thi , jungle me rehte hue dono bahut karib a gai thi ,

par yeh nai tha ke seema ko ravi se pyar nai tha , par komal ki kami use har pal mehsus hoti thi , use lagta tha , ravi or voh , dono komal ke bina adhure hain ,

seema apni sochu me ghum thi , ke kisi ne darvaja khatka diya ,

seema ne uth kar darvaja khola toh rema khushi se uske gale lag gai ,

"kya hua meri beti ko , etni khush kyu hai.." seema ne rema ka matha chumte hue bola ,

"maa , ajj pata hai collage me kya hua " rema ne sab apni maa ko bata diya ,

ik bar toh seema thoda udas ho gai , par phir voh muskrane lagi ,

"umm , muze garav hai meri beti par , use kitna pyar karne wala hamsafar mila hai.."

"maa , kyu app apna pyar muzse bant rehi ho.." rema ne rote hue bola ,

"ohh ho meri bachi , bat yeh hai ke me tume door nai karna chahti , me teri judai bardasht nai kar paugi , jab tum bimar thi or choti si bachi ban gai thi , tab muze aisa ehsas hota tha , jaise mane tume apne pet se janam diya ho , esi liye mane koi bacha nai liya , kyu ki tu meri beti thi , meri pyari beti , agar tuze dard hota tha , me bahut roti thi , tuze kabhi ik pal ke liye bhi khud se door nai kiya , teri khushi meri khushi hai...." seema ne rema ke chehre ko chumte rote hue bola ,

"ohhh meri maa , meri pyari maa , yahi samaz lo , ke apne muze apne pet se janam diya hai , i love u maa , love u..." rema ne behad rote hue seema ke chehre ko chumte hue bola ,

"bus kar pagli rula diya tumne toh , meri bachi , acha ajj bhyia ne kuch kiya ya nai , kiss -viss kuch.." seema ne bade pyar se pucha ,

"kya maa , muze sharam a rehi hai.." rema ke gore gaal sharam se lal ho gye , voh behad sharma rehi thi ,

"lyo ji , meri jawan beti sharmati bhi hai , hehe , rema meri jaan , meri beti.." seema ne kas kar rema ko apni bahu me bhar liya ,

"acha rema padhai par dyan deti ho ya nai.."

"yuppp , nai mom , pichle kuch dino se dyan nai de payi.."

"acha jii , ajj rat ko mere pas beth kar padhai karna , koi mobile nai , koi bhyia nai , chalo abhi tume khana deti hu , voh tera lafanga kaha hai .." seema ne haste hue pucha ,

"voh bahar honge.." rema ne sharmate hue bola ,

"chalo phir hamare patidev ko khana khilati hain , dono mil kar.." seema ne haste hue bola toh rema sharmane lagi , use samaz nai a reha tha , uski maa ka dil etna bada kaise hai , use apni maa par etna pyar a reha tha , ke uska chehra chum chum kar lal kar deti ,

phir dono bahar ki traf chal padhi ,

vahi dusri or...

ravi jab ghar ke ander aya , tab rimi or shurti sofe par bethi hui thi ,

"are meri dono paryian kya kar rehi hain.." ravi ne rimi or shurti ke bech sofe par bethte hue bola ,

"oh my god , kya hua bhyia apko.."

"pls , pls , rona mat tum dono , me bata deta hu.." phir ravi ne dono ko sab bata diya ,

"bhyia app etne ache kyu ho.." rimi yeh bol ravi ke gale lag gai ,

"are bhai muze bhi jagah dedo thodi si.." shurti ne haste hue bola ,

phir dono kuch der ravi ke gale lagi rehi ,

rimi kuch dino se kuch soch rehi thi , voh kuch sochte hue uthi or apne room me chali gai ,

"ese kya hua .."

"kuch nai , pichle kuch dino se kuch soch rehi hai , batati bhi na muse..." shurti ne kuch preshan hoker bola ,

"hmm , koi bat nai , me bat kar lunga.."

"jii bhai.."

"or meri bewi kaisi hai.."

"seema bhabhi toh room me hongi.."

shurti ki baat sun ravi ne apna matha peet liya ,

"me tumari bat kar reha hu pagli.." ravi ne shurti ke hontho ko chum kar bola ,

"kya bhai , app bhi na.." shurti ne sharmate hue bola ,

"dekho abh muze tum , ehh ji , ohh ji , sunte ho , aise bulaya karo , akhir tum meri patni ho , samaz gai.."

"bhyia bahut sharam a rehi hai muze.." shurti ne apna chehra apne hathion me lete hue bola ,

"are hamse kya sharmana , ham toh tumare pati hain.." ravi ne muskrate hue bola ,

shurti vaha se uth kar jane lagi toh ravi ne uska hath pakad use apne sath bitha liya ,

"jane do na pls.." shurti ne khubsurat labu me muskrate hue bola ,

"me toh yahi puchna chahta tha , hamari suhagrat kab hogi.." ravi ki bat sun shurti ne apna chehra uske seene me chupa liya ,

tabhi seema or rema hasti muskrati hui ghar ke hall me a gai ,

"sunte ho jii , agar app dono ka pyar -vyar ho gya ho toh , a jayie dining table par , me khana laga rehi hu..." seema ne haste hue bola toh rema bhi khilkhila kar hasne lagi ,

shurti toh sharam se pani pani ho gai , voh uthi or apne room me bhag gai ,

ravi bhi muskrate hue utha or dining table par beth gya , rema bhi ravi ke samne bethi thi ,

"kya hua rema , bar bar kyu muskra rehi ho.."

"nai ji , aisi toh koi bat nai..." rema ne sharmate hue bola ,

ravi ka moh khula ka khula reh gya rema ki bat sun kar ,

tabhi seema khana leker a gai ,

"kya hua jii , etna moh kyu khol rakha hai , khana la rehi thi me , app bhi na.." seema ne haste hue bola toh rema bhi hasne lagi ,

"maa app khana khila do na muze.." rema ne muskrate hue bola ,

"muze bhi khilao.." ravi ne rema ko akh marte hue bola ,

"abh tum dono ko aise kaise khila du , ravi tum yaha rema ke sath akar beth jao.." seema ne muskrate hue bola ,

ravi uth kar rema ke sath beth gya , phir seema dono ko pyar se khana khilane lagi , ravi or rema dono khush ho gye ,

khane ke bad , rema , seema ke pas kitchen me chali gai , or ravi sofe par beth gya ,

tabhi use kuch yad aya ,

"seema me baby se milne ja reha hu.."

"han ja ayo.." seema kitchen me se hi boli ,

ravi muskrate hue baby ke ghar ki traf chal padha ,

tabhi use fari ki yad a gai , usne raste se kuch chocolates kharid li , phir voh baby ki ghar ke samne pahunch gya ,

ravi ne door bell bajai toh katlyn ne darvaja khol diya ,

ik bar toh katlyn ravi ko dekh hadbada gai , kyu ki bar bar baby ki batian uske man me tufan macha rehi thi ,

katlyn muskrate hue ik traf ho gai , or ravi ghar ke ander ghus gya...

katlyn bhi muskrati hui ravi ke piche piche ander a gai ,

ravi ne samne dekha toh uska dil khushi se zum utha ,

hota bhi kyu na , fari ajj school dress me bethi hui thi , voh thodi dari dari si thi ,

baby use ache se tyar kar rehi thi ,

katlyn bhi ravi ke pas akar khadi ho gai ,

"kat , baby toh real ki maa ban gai hai.."

"ravi me bhi maa ban chuki hu , fari ham dono ki beti hai.."

ravi kat ki bat sun herian sa ho gya ,

jaise hi baby ki nazar ravi par gai , usne ishare se use apne pas bula liya ,

ravi bhi baby or fari ke sath sofe par beth gya ,

"fari , papa ko hello bolo.."

"hlo papa.." fari ne bahut masomyiat se bola ,

"fari tume pata hai , tumari mumma kitni khubsurat hai , par yeh sara pyar tumko hi karti hai , muze toh karti hi nai.." ravi ne bura sa moh bana kar bola ,

ravi ki bat sun fari or kat hasne lagi ,

"acha fari yeh dekho me tumare liye chocolate laya hu.."

"ravi etni sari , eske dant kharab ho jayege.."

"nai honge mumma , papa , love u.." fari ne ravi ke gaal ko chum liya ,

phir katlyn , fari ko apne sath bahar le gai , kyu ki school bus a chuki thi , katlyn ne bade pyar se fari ke gaalo ko chum kar use bus me bitha diya , or ik ladki se uski dosti bhi karva di ,

phir katlyn vapis ghar ke ander a gai , usne mehsus kiya tha , bus driver use kha jane ki nazarion se ghur reha tha ,

par katlyn sabhi mardo ki fitrat ko janti thi , yeh uski jindgi me bahut bar ho chuka tha , lekin use ravi ki nazarion me apne liye ik saman sa dikhta tha , uski nazarion me hawas nai thi , voh muskrati hui ghar ke ander a gai ,

usne dekha baby or ravi room ke ander hain , voh darvaje ke pas jaker unki batian sunne lagi...

to be counited ...
 

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Boht khoob yar lagta ha ab bazi palatne wali ha sema ko ab boht dard takleef sehni hogi mujhe lagta ha aisa or us locket ma kon kon si powers han?
 
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Nice update yah kya bhai pehle komal ko Ravi se dur kar diya aur ab Sema ko bhi Ravi se dur hona padega aur pata nahi kon kon si musibtain usko jhelni pade gin. Purane character bhi ab wapas Ravi ki zindagi me arahe hai lekin jin se woh sab se zayad pyar karta tha Komal aur Sema unko Ravi se dur jana pad raha hai.
 
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Bahut hi umda update diya he bhai. Komal ke baad seema ka character jyada powerful dikh raha he. Seema ko locket bhi mil gya aur kaal se kuch hitayde bhi mil gayi. Seema ko sabse dur rehna padega ye dukh ki baat he. Rimi aur shruti ke sath masti achhi lagi. Lagta he ravi ki ag og sunog wali baat seema aur reema ne sun li tabhi usaki tang khich rahe he. Kat ki nazar sayad kuch 2 badal rahi he ravi ke prati. Aur baby ne to wada kiya he ki kat ka band ravi se bajwa kar rahegi. Lagta he agle update me kat ka band bajega aur humen 3 some dekhne ko milega.
Waiting 4 next update
 

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Mega update posted...

Doston.. Ek last time is hope me update post kiya hai... ki shayad aap achhe review do..

Ab aage story badhe ya nahi ye aap upar hai..
Bahut achcha likh rahe ho bhaiya ji aur story ko aage to bhadhana hi hai aapko kyonki itne log jude hain aapse..aaj ka update bhi awesome hai:flowers:
 
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