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Abh Agge...

ravi kuch pal betha reha , takata reha , apni bejan , behosh mohhabat ko , dr.nelam behosh thi , chehra murza sa gya tha , dil ke gehre dard , yeh mayus chehra dikha reha tha ,

ravi ghutno ke bal beth ro hi reha tha , ke khushi bhi vaha pahunch gai , ravi herian sa hua , khushi ko dekhne laga , use nai pata tha , uski khushi , kuch dard , kuch gam or dene ayi hai ,

"raviii , mat ro plss , me bhikar jaugi , agar tum yu rote rehe..." khushi ne bhag kar ravi ka chehra apne pet se lagate , uske baalo ko sehla kar bola ,

"kya karu , kya , voh , voh dekho , yeh bejan jism , kabhi mehakta tha , eske hontho par ik muskan thi , or mane , ik darinde ki trah , enki muskan cheen li , khushi me royu nai toh kya karu , tum , han tum , dr.nelam ko thik karo , use hosh me layo , muze bat karni hai , use ehsas dilana hai , me jinda hu , tu befikar hoker apni jindgi gujar..." ravi dard me beh kar rote hue bola ,

"ravi ik problem ho gai hai , bahar charo traf police hai , tume pakadne aye hai..." khushi nam akhon se boli ,

"shetian ko pinjre me band karne aye hain , khushi agar ajj , mere or dr.nelam ke bech koi aya , toh lashe bisha dunga , unko roko , varna me rokne jata hu..." ravi behad gusse me chekh kar bola , uski bhegi akhon me etna tez gussa tha , ke khushi ka jism bhi kampkapa gya ,

"ravi ham apni takat nai dikha sakte dunia ko , tumne hi yeh bola tha , kuch or sochna hoga..." khushi ne behad nam akhon se bola ,

"thik hai , me bus dr.nelam se miluga , phir police ke hawale ho jauga , lekin esi bech mere pas ik plan hai , pehle tum dr.nelam ko thik karo..." ravi ne khushi ke masom chehre ko takte hue bola ,

"hmm , karti hu.." khushi ne ik bar ravi ki traf dekha , or phir dr.nelam ke pas chali gai , khushi ne apna hath dr.nelam ke mathe par rakha , uske hath se safad roshni nikal kar , dr.nelam ke badan me samane lagi ,

dhere dhere dr.nelam ko hosh anne laga , tab tak khushi uske pas se door ho gai thi , khushi ne room se jate wakht , ravi ke kanu me kuch bola or , bahar jaker rehan ke sath khadi ho gai ,

ravi agge bad dr.nelam ke pas khada ho gya , usne dhere dhere apni akhen khol as-pas dekha , par jaise hi uski nazar ravi par padhi , usne chehra dusri traf mod diya ,

yeh toh hona hi tha , jab apne musibat ke wakht moh mod le , tab dil ka dard , koi byan kar nai sakta , or dr.nelam ka dard , ravi bakhubi samaz reha tha ,

dr.nelam ke jab pati gujar gye , tab unko laga , hai koi , jiske sahare , jiske asare , voh apni kaate bishi jindgi gujar sakti hai , lekin jab ravi nai aya , toh voh bhikar gai , tut gai , naram dil tukde tukde ho gya , or akhir voh bhul gai , muskrana , hasna ,

kabhi kisi ko do shabad pyar ke bol do , voh apka gulam ho jata hai , lekin yaha toh atma ka mail ho chuka tha , dono ki atamyian ik thi , dil ik the ,

me ajj bhi kehta hu , mohhabat karo , toh bin chehra dekhe karo , kyu ki chehro se mohhabat ki kemat nai lagai ja sakti , kai hasen chehre dhoka dete hain , or kuch bina apko dekhe , bina apko mile , apke liye pagal rehte hain , kash ik bar unki khabar mil jaye , agar voh khush hain , toh ham khush hain , yahi haal dr.nelam ka tha , use bus ravi ki chinta thi , jismani prem toh unme kabhi hua hi nai tha ,

"nelam..." ravi akhon me asnu bharte bola , par dr.nelam toh naraz thi , kyu , akhir kyu , ravi ne uska haal na jana , voh kin halato se ladti rehi , kya ravi ka huk nai tha , use sahara dene ka ,

dr.nelam apna chehra dusri traf kiye , akhon me asnu liye leti thi , uski himet nai thi , ke voh ravi se bat kar sake , use mehsus kar sake , apni bahu me bharke ,

"nelam me janta hu , tum naraz ho muzse , par ik bar , bus ik bar kehdo , tumne maf kar diya , me vada karta hu , jindgi bhar tumara sath dunga , tume khush rakhuga , pls nelam , maf kar do ik bar..." ravi , dr.nelam ke pas beth , uske kande par sar rakh beintha rote hue bola ,

"mm..me..kk..kaha..tt..tumse..nn .naraz..hh..hu..." dr.nelam dard me haklate hue boli , yeh dard jismani nai tha , yeh dard ruhani tha , jise koi sacha premi hi samaz pata ,

"nelam , me kyu gya tumse door , kyu nai tha tumare pas , jab , jab tume jarurat thi meri , i love uuu , me abh kabhi nai jauga , tume apne pas , apne dil me rakhuga..." ravi pagalu ki trah dr.nelam ke chehre ko chumte hue bola ,

abh dr.nelam pehle se kafi behter mehsus kar rehi thi , akhon me asnu the , dil me dard tha , jo tanhai ke wakht gujara tha , abh voh beet gya tha ,

"abh toh nai jauge chod kar..." nelam ne akhon me asnu liye behad dhemi awaz me bola ,

"naii , naii , abh naii , nelam , tum rehan ke sath kabile me a jao , me vahi rahuga , mera pariwar vahi hai , abh tum bhi mere pariwar ka hissa ho ..." ravi ne dr.nelam ke kampte gulabi hontho ko chum kar bola ,

"umm , thik hai , me ayugi , ahuu ahuu (khaste hue) ravii mere pati mar gye , me tut gai thi , me unko bahut chahti thi , or tume bhi , mane socha kahi tum bhi..." dr.nelam yeh bolte bolte rone lagi , ravi ne use utha kar apne seene se laga liya , or uske mulam baalo me hath phira kar bola ,

"shhhh , bahut ro liya , me janta hu , tumare pati ki jagah me kabhi nai le sakta , par vada karta hu , tume kabhi dukhi nai hone dunga , jindgi bhar tumara sath dunga , i love uuu..." ravi dil ki gehrai se dard bhare shabado me bola ,

"janti hu (haste hue) , tum kahi nai jaoge abh , acha rehan aya hai..." dr.nelam muskrate hue boli ,

"han , me behjta hu , vada karo , pehle jaisi bankar rahugi , vahi hasti , khilkhilati , meri pyari dr.nelam.." ravi muskrate hue bola toh dr.nelam bhi muskrane lagi ,

phir ravi ne dr.nelam se kuch der batian ki , or use muskrate chod room se bahar rehan or khushi ke pas a gya ,

ravi ne rehan ko ander behj diya , or khud khushi ke pas khada ho gya , abh unko ladna tha , bahar khadi police se , bina takat ka dikhava kiye , jo behad mushkil tha ,

ravi kuch chinta me tha , or khushi bhi , bahar police thi , agar gyab hote toh pori dunia ko ravi ki shakti ka ehsas ho jata ,

"toh suru kare plan..." khushi muskrate hue boli ,

"hmm , unko pehle bolne do , kya chahte hain , hassh , fas gye ajj toh..." ravi bhi muskrate hue bola ,

ravi abhi kuch or bolne hi ja reha tha , ke unki nazar deewar par lage ik LCD tv par gai , jis me ik sansani khej news chal rehi thi ,

"hamare reporters ne dava kiya hai , es shehar ka most wanted muzrim , shehar ke govt hospital me chipa hua hai , shehar ki tamam police use pakadne ke liye ayi hui hai , yeh muzrim ravi nam ik ladka hai , jiske sar thakur kunal ki hatya or uski choti behan khushi thakur ko kidnap karne ka arop laga hai , app hamare sath bane rehyie , jalad hi agge ki news apko milti rehegi..."

tv par a rehi news sun , ravi or khushi ne ik dusre ki traf dekha or phir hasne lage , khushi , ravi ke gale lag gai ,

"yeh plan kam karege , muze dar lag reha hai.." khushi thoda chinta me boli ,

"hmm , meri tamas kabh se darne lagi..." ravi , khushi ki pyari akhon me zak kar bola ,

"jab se prithvi par ayi hu , jayda dar lagta hai..." khushi behad masomyiat se boli ,

"ahhshh , kuch nai hoga , me hu na , vaise bhi enki goliyon ka muz par koi asar nai hoga , abh tum jao.." ravi ne khushi ke gulabi hontho ko chum kar bola ,

"tum..."

"me ata hu , police ko poora shehar ghum kar..."

"hehe , ok me jati hu , intzar karugi..."

"jaan , me yu gya or yu aya..." ravi muskrate hue bola ,

"bye..." khushi etna bol samaye chakar ko jevat kar kabile me chali gai ,

phir ravi ne kuch der or socha or dr.nelam ke room ke darvaje ke pas pahunch gya , ravi ne rehan ko awaz di , rehan bhi uske pas a gya , uske chehre par chinta ke bhav the , kyu ki usne bhi news sun li thi ,

"han bhyia..."

"rehan , muze apni chinta nai , par tumari hai , tum samazte ho na..."

"han samazta hu , bahar police khadi hai , or apko dar hai , kahi me na fas jau.."

"tume kaise pata chala..."

"voh , mane tv par dekha..."

"acha , kabhi mar khayi hai..."

"kyu..." rehan thoda muskra kar bola ,

"abhi batata hu..." ravi ne etna bola , or rehan ke saar ko piche se pakad , uska matha deewar ke sath jor se mara , rehan ke matha fatne se behad khoon behne laga ,

"ahhhhh , bhyiaa yeh kya..." rehan apne chehre par behte khoon ko apne hath phira dekhte hue bola ,

"abh suno , jab me bhag jau , tab tum police se kehna , ke me tume kidnap karke yaha laya tha , tum jungle se apni saas ko milne a rehe the , unko shak bhi nai hoga ke me tumare sath hu..." ravi apna plan bata muskra kar bola ,

"ahhh bhyia agar voh kabile me gye toh..."

"rehan , vaha khushi apni jadui takat se sab sambal legi , tum es bat ki chinta mat karo , jo mane bola vahi kehna , or darna mat..." ravi etna bol bahar ki traf jane laga ,

lekin ika ik ravi piche palata or rehan ki traf dekhne laga ,

"abh kya bhyiaa..."

"tum behosh nai hue..." ravi ne etna bol ik jordar ghusa rehan ke chehre par jad diya , rehan ka matha phir se deewar par ja takraya , or rehan behosh ho gya...

ravi ne second floor ke end par lagi khidki ko thoda sa khol bahar dekha , 200 se jayda police wale , hathon me hathiyar liye , uska intzar kar rehe the , pora hospital ghir chuka tha , voh sab ik ghutna jamen par tikaye apni bandok ka moh hospital ki traf kiye nishana lagane ke liye tyar bethe the ,

ravi ne hospital ke main gate ke bahar dekha , vaha Commissioner rajesh , DSP shamsher Singh , khade the , phir ik police wala ik jeep ke pas khada hoker loudspeaker me kuch bolne laga ,

"Mr.ravi hamne tume charo traf se gher liya hai , tumara bach kar nikal pana namumkin hai , apne app ko kanun ke hawale kar do , varna ham ander a jayege , ham ik mint tak intzar karege ..." voh police wala behad gusse me bola ,

rajesh ke chehre par thode chinta ke bhav the , jab ki dsp shamsher singh ke chehre par ik muskan thi , yeh muskan thi ravi ke pakade jane ki ,

"hmm , abh toh ladna hi hoga , sab kuch ban liya , kisan ban liya , mazdor ban liya , husband ban liya , premi ban liya , vampire ban liya , don ban liya , or pari log ka prince bhi ban liya , abh wakht hai , devil banne ka , me tyar hu..." ravi khud se hi akhen band kar bola ,

"Mr.ravi , apne app ko kanun ke hawale kar do..." voh police wala abhi bol hi reha tha ke shamsher singh bola ,

"bus bahut hua , attack karo , or use jinda ya murda pakad kar lao.."

apne senior police wale ka order sun koi 50 se jayda police wale hospital ke ander ghus gye , hospital ke ander doctors , or marez sab dare sehme hue the , par police ko kon kuch bol sakta hai , unko bus ravi se matlab tha ,

ravi jaldi se lift ke pas gya , or lift ke bottons ko apni shakti se jam kar diya , abh lift kam nai kar rehi thi , police walo ko mazboran sedyion se anna tha ,

first floor par police walo ne , ik ik room ka chapa chapa chan mara , or phir lift band dekh sedyion se uper jane lage , tab tak ravi tyar khada tha , use bus kisi ki jaan nai leni thi , khud ko bachana tha , koi 50 se jayda police wale sedyian chad uper a rehe the , or sedyion ke ant par ravi unka intzar kar reha tha.....


vahi dusri traf...

"hmm , mane tume us kaid se mukat kiya hai , janti ho kyu , kyu ki , tume un sab se badla lena hai , mar do sabko , tum kitni vheshi ho , dikha do sabko , tum kya ho , jaoo , unki jindgi me musibatian paida karo , muze voh map chahyie , kisi bhi kemat par , apne bhai ko maro , behan ko maro , chahe kuch bhi karo , muze mera map laker dooo..." us rahasmayi aurat ne behad gusse me chekhte hue bola ,

rekha uski batian sunti rehi or phir achank vaha se gyab ho gaiii....


to be counited....

nice update...... dr. neelam bhi man geya......or ravi aab police se ladne ke liye ready hai.....dekhte hai ravi devil banke kaise bachata hai khud ko.....or wo aurat rekha ko bhi apni taraf kar liya hai.....mujhe lagta hai rekha ko marne or sheitan banane me ravi ke maa ya ye kaho wo aurat ki hath hai......dekhte hai rekha kya karta hai...apne bhai or behen ko marega ya nhi......or khushi kabile me kaise sab ko bachati hai.......
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Rohit1988

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bhai alcohol bad for health , but meri jindgi es trah ulaz sa gai hai... kuch samaz nai ata... bus chehre par muskan liye app logo ka samna hota hai.. or log out hote hi.. vahi jindgi...


Dear Bhai,

Bhai ji ek baat kahu ham bhi aapke hai aap hamse aapne dukh bant sakte ho agar aap hame aapna samjhe to
Vese sabke jindagi me Gam or khushi hoti hsi kuch kam to kuch jayeda bass unka daat ke mukabla karna chahiye bhai
Meri god se prathna hai aapke gam door kare
Or khudhiyo se aapke maan ko bhar de
 
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Wah kya jabardast update diya he. Ravi aur neelam ki mulakat bahut hi emotional thi. Aapne kaha tha ki khushi use aur dard dene aayi he wo nahi samjha. Rehan bechara pot gya. Plan kya he ravi ka. Kya priya fir se ayegi.
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Prince Charlee

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Superb update. Khushi ne Dr.Neelum ko theek kar hi diya hai aur Ravi bhi police walo se ladne ke liye tayar hai. Dekhte hai Ravi kaise nikalta hai yah se aur yah Rekha ab kya karnebwali hai.
Lekin in sab me woh pujari jis ko Ravi ne milne jana tha woh kaha hai.
 
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update-67

Abh Agge...

ravi kuch pal betha reha , takata reha , apni bejan , behosh mohhabat ko , dr.nelam behosh thi , chehra murza sa gya tha , dil ke gehre dard , yeh mayus chehra dikha reha tha ,

ravi ghutno ke bal beth ro hi reha tha , ke khushi bhi vaha pahunch gai , ravi herian sa hua , khushi ko dekhne laga , use nai pata tha , uski khushi , kuch dard , kuch gam or dene ayi hai ,

"raviii , mat ro plss , me bhikar jaugi , agar tum yu rote rehe..." khushi ne bhag kar ravi ka chehra apne pet se lagate , uske baalo ko sehla kar bola ,

"kya karu , kya , voh , voh dekho , yeh bejan jism , kabhi mehakta tha , eske hontho par ik muskan thi , or mane , ik darinde ki trah , enki muskan cheen li , khushi me royu nai toh kya karu , tum , han tum , dr.nelam ko thik karo , use hosh me layo , muze bat karni hai , use ehsas dilana hai , me jinda hu , tu befikar hoker apni jindgi gujar..." ravi dard me beh kar rote hue bola ,

"ravi ik problem ho gai hai , bahar charo traf police hai , tume pakadne aye hai..." khushi nam akhon se boli ,

"shetian ko pinjre me band karne aye hain , khushi agar ajj , mere or dr.nelam ke bech koi aya , toh lashe bisha dunga , unko roko , varna me rokne jata hu..." ravi behad gusse me chekh kar bola , uski bhegi akhon me etna tez gussa tha , ke khushi ka jism bhi kampkapa gya ,

"ravi ham apni takat nai dikha sakte dunia ko , tumne hi yeh bola tha , kuch or sochna hoga..." khushi ne behad nam akhon se bola ,

"thik hai , me bus dr.nelam se miluga , phir police ke hawale ho jauga , lekin esi bech mere pas ik plan hai , pehle tum dr.nelam ko thik karo..." ravi ne khushi ke masom chehre ko takte hue bola ,

"hmm , karti hu.." khushi ne ik bar ravi ki traf dekha , or phir dr.nelam ke pas chali gai , khushi ne apna hath dr.nelam ke mathe par rakha , uske hath se safad roshni nikal kar , dr.nelam ke badan me samane lagi ,

dhere dhere dr.nelam ko hosh anne laga , tab tak khushi uske pas se door ho gai thi , khushi ne room se jate wakht , ravi ke kanu me kuch bola or , bahar jaker rehan ke sath khadi ho gai ,

ravi agge bad dr.nelam ke pas khada ho gya , usne dhere dhere apni akhen khol as-pas dekha , par jaise hi uski nazar ravi par padhi , usne chehra dusri traf mod diya ,

yeh toh hona hi tha , jab apne musibat ke wakht moh mod le , tab dil ka dard , koi byan kar nai sakta , or dr.nelam ka dard , ravi bakhubi samaz reha tha ,

dr.nelam ke jab pati gujar gye , tab unko laga , hai koi , jiske sahare , jiske asare , voh apni kaate bishi jindgi gujar sakti hai , lekin jab ravi nai aya , toh voh bhikar gai , tut gai , naram dil tukde tukde ho gya , or akhir voh bhul gai , muskrana , hasna ,

kabhi kisi ko do shabad pyar ke bol do , voh apka gulam ho jata hai , lekin yaha toh atma ka mail ho chuka tha , dono ki atamyian ik thi , dil ik the ,

me ajj bhi kehta hu , mohhabat karo , toh bin chehra dekhe karo , kyu ki chehro se mohhabat ki kemat nai lagai ja sakti , kai hasen chehre dhoka dete hain , or kuch bina apko dekhe , bina apko mile , apke liye pagal rehte hain , kash ik bar unki khabar mil jaye , agar voh khush hain , toh ham khush hain , yahi haal dr.nelam ka tha , use bus ravi ki chinta thi , jismani prem toh unme kabhi hua hi nai tha ,

"nelam..." ravi akhon me asnu bharte bola , par dr.nelam toh naraz thi , kyu , akhir kyu , ravi ne uska haal na jana , voh kin halato se ladti rehi , kya ravi ka huk nai tha , use sahara dene ka ,

dr.nelam apna chehra dusri traf kiye , akhon me asnu liye leti thi , uski himet nai thi , ke voh ravi se bat kar sake , use mehsus kar sake , apni bahu me bharke ,

"nelam me janta hu , tum naraz ho muzse , par ik bar , bus ik bar kehdo , tumne maf kar diya , me vada karta hu , jindgi bhar tumara sath dunga , tume khush rakhuga , pls nelam , maf kar do ik bar..." ravi , dr.nelam ke pas beth , uske kande par sar rakh beintha rote hue bola ,

"mm..me..kk..kaha..tt..tumse..nn .naraz..hh..hu..." dr.nelam dard me haklate hue boli , yeh dard jismani nai tha , yeh dard ruhani tha , jise koi sacha premi hi samaz pata ,

"nelam , me kyu gya tumse door , kyu nai tha tumare pas , jab , jab tume jarurat thi meri , i love uuu , me abh kabhi nai jauga , tume apne pas , apne dil me rakhuga..." ravi pagalu ki trah dr.nelam ke chehre ko chumte hue bola ,

abh dr.nelam pehle se kafi behter mehsus kar rehi thi , akhon me asnu the , dil me dard tha , jo tanhai ke wakht gujara tha , abh voh beet gya tha ,

"abh toh nai jauge chod kar..." nelam ne akhon me asnu liye behad dhemi awaz me bola ,

"naii , naii , abh naii , nelam , tum rehan ke sath kabile me a jao , me vahi rahuga , mera pariwar vahi hai , abh tum bhi mere pariwar ka hissa ho ..." ravi ne dr.nelam ke kampte gulabi hontho ko chum kar bola ,

"umm , thik hai , me ayugi , ahuu ahuu (khaste hue) ravii mere pati mar gye , me tut gai thi , me unko bahut chahti thi , or tume bhi , mane socha kahi tum bhi..." dr.nelam yeh bolte bolte rone lagi , ravi ne use utha kar apne seene se laga liya , or uske mulam baalo me hath phira kar bola ,

"shhhh , bahut ro liya , me janta hu , tumare pati ki jagah me kabhi nai le sakta , par vada karta hu , tume kabhi dukhi nai hone dunga , jindgi bhar tumara sath dunga , i love uuu..." ravi dil ki gehrai se dard bhare shabado me bola ,

"janti hu (haste hue) , tum kahi nai jaoge abh , acha rehan aya hai..." dr.nelam muskrate hue boli ,

"han , me behjta hu , vada karo , pehle jaisi bankar rahugi , vahi hasti , khilkhilati , meri pyari dr.nelam.." ravi muskrate hue bola toh dr.nelam bhi muskrane lagi ,

phir ravi ne dr.nelam se kuch der batian ki , or use muskrate chod room se bahar rehan or khushi ke pas a gya ,

ravi ne rehan ko ander behj diya , or khud khushi ke pas khada ho gya , abh unko ladna tha , bahar khadi police se , bina takat ka dikhava kiye , jo behad mushkil tha ,

ravi kuch chinta me tha , or khushi bhi , bahar police thi , agar gyab hote toh pori dunia ko ravi ki shakti ka ehsas ho jata ,

"toh suru kare plan..." khushi muskrate hue boli ,

"hmm , unko pehle bolne do , kya chahte hain , hassh , fas gye ajj toh..." ravi bhi muskrate hue bola ,

ravi abhi kuch or bolne hi ja reha tha , ke unki nazar deewar par lage ik LCD tv par gai , jis me ik sansani khej news chal rehi thi ,

"hamare reporters ne dava kiya hai , es shehar ka most wanted muzrim , shehar ke govt hospital me chipa hua hai , shehar ki tamam police use pakadne ke liye ayi hui hai , yeh muzrim ravi nam ik ladka hai , jiske sar thakur kunal ki hatya or uski choti behan khushi thakur ko kidnap karne ka arop laga hai , app hamare sath bane rehyie , jalad hi agge ki news apko milti rehegi..."

tv par a rehi news sun , ravi or khushi ne ik dusre ki traf dekha or phir hasne lage , khushi , ravi ke gale lag gai ,

"yeh plan kam karege , muze dar lag reha hai.." khushi thoda chinta me boli ,

"hmm , meri tamas kabh se darne lagi..." ravi , khushi ki pyari akhon me zak kar bola ,

"jab se prithvi par ayi hu , jayda dar lagta hai..." khushi behad masomyiat se boli ,

"ahhshh , kuch nai hoga , me hu na , vaise bhi enki goliyon ka muz par koi asar nai hoga , abh tum jao.." ravi ne khushi ke gulabi hontho ko chum kar bola ,

"tum..."

"me ata hu , police ko poora shehar ghum kar..."

"hehe , ok me jati hu , intzar karugi..."

"jaan , me yu gya or yu aya..." ravi muskrate hue bola ,

"bye..." khushi etna bol samaye chakar ko jevat kar kabile me chali gai ,

phir ravi ne kuch der or socha or dr.nelam ke room ke darvaje ke pas pahunch gya , ravi ne rehan ko awaz di , rehan bhi uske pas a gya , uske chehre par chinta ke bhav the , kyu ki usne bhi news sun li thi ,

"han bhyia..."

"rehan , muze apni chinta nai , par tumari hai , tum samazte ho na..."

"han samazta hu , bahar police khadi hai , or apko dar hai , kahi me na fas jau.."

"tume kaise pata chala..."

"voh , mane tv par dekha..."

"acha , kabhi mar khayi hai..."

"kyu..." rehan thoda muskra kar bola ,

"abhi batata hu..." ravi ne etna bola , or rehan ke saar ko piche se pakad , uska matha deewar ke sath jor se mara , rehan ke matha fatne se behad khoon behne laga ,

"ahhhhh , bhyiaa yeh kya..." rehan apne chehre par behte khoon ko apne hath phira dekhte hue bola ,

"abh suno , jab me bhag jau , tab tum police se kehna , ke me tume kidnap karke yaha laya tha , tum jungle se apni saas ko milne a rehe the , unko shak bhi nai hoga ke me tumare sath hu..." ravi apna plan bata muskra kar bola ,

"ahhh bhyia agar voh kabile me gye toh..."

"rehan , vaha khushi apni jadui takat se sab sambal legi , tum es bat ki chinta mat karo , jo mane bola vahi kehna , or darna mat..." ravi etna bol bahar ki traf jane laga ,

lekin ika ik ravi piche palata or rehan ki traf dekhne laga ,

"abh kya bhyiaa..."

"tum behosh nai hue..." ravi ne etna bol ik jordar ghusa rehan ke chehre par jad diya , rehan ka matha phir se deewar par ja takraya , or rehan behosh ho gya...

ravi ne second floor ke end par lagi khidki ko thoda sa khol bahar dekha , 200 se jayda police wale , hathon me hathiyar liye , uska intzar kar rehe the , pora hospital ghir chuka tha , voh sab ik ghutna jamen par tikaye apni bandok ka moh hospital ki traf kiye nishana lagane ke liye tyar bethe the ,

ravi ne hospital ke main gate ke bahar dekha , vaha Commissioner rajesh , DSP shamsher Singh , khade the , phir ik police wala ik jeep ke pas khada hoker loudspeaker me kuch bolne laga ,

"Mr.ravi hamne tume charo traf se gher liya hai , tumara bach kar nikal pana namumkin hai , apne app ko kanun ke hawale kar do , varna ham ander a jayege , ham ik mint tak intzar karege ..." voh police wala behad gusse me bola ,

rajesh ke chehre par thode chinta ke bhav the , jab ki dsp shamsher singh ke chehre par ik muskan thi , yeh muskan thi ravi ke pakade jane ki ,

"hmm , abh toh ladna hi hoga , sab kuch ban liya , kisan ban liya , mazdor ban liya , husband ban liya , premi ban liya , vampire ban liya , don ban liya , or pari log ka prince bhi ban liya , abh wakht hai , devil banne ka , me tyar hu..." ravi khud se hi akhen band kar bola ,

"Mr.ravi , apne app ko kanun ke hawale kar do..." voh police wala abhi bol hi reha tha ke shamsher singh bola ,

"bus bahut hua , attack karo , or use jinda ya murda pakad kar lao.."

apne senior police wale ka order sun koi 50 se jayda police wale hospital ke ander ghus gye , hospital ke ander doctors , or marez sab dare sehme hue the , par police ko kon kuch bol sakta hai , unko bus ravi se matlab tha ,

ravi jaldi se lift ke pas gya , or lift ke bottons ko apni shakti se jam kar diya , abh lift kam nai kar rehi thi , police walo ko mazboran sedyion se anna tha ,

first floor par police walo ne , ik ik room ka chapa chapa chan mara , or phir lift band dekh sedyion se uper jane lage , tab tak ravi tyar khada tha , use bus kisi ki jaan nai leni thi , khud ko bachana tha , koi 50 se jayda police wale sedyian chad uper a rehe the , or sedyion ke ant par ravi unka intzar kar reha tha.....


vahi dusri traf...

"hmm , mane tume us kaid se mukat kiya hai , janti ho kyu , kyu ki , tume un sab se badla lena hai , mar do sabko , tum kitni vheshi ho , dikha do sabko , tum kya ho , jaoo , unki jindgi me musibatian paida karo , muze voh map chahyie , kisi bhi kemat par , apne bhai ko maro , behan ko maro , chahe kuch bhi karo , muze mera map laker dooo..." us rahasmayi aurat ne behad gusse me chekhte hue bola ,

rekha uski batian sunti rehi or phir achank vaha se gyab ho gaiii....


to be counited....

Nice update
Dr. Neelam thik ho gyi
Pr rehan bechare ko muft mein maar khani padhi
Dekhte hai ravi kaise khud ko bachata police se
Rekha ki firse entry ho gyi story mein
Waiting for next
 
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janu2016

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Bhot khub..
To ab lagbhag sara majra samjh m aa gaya h :D
Per main bataunga nahi :shhhh:

Quoki jo maza padhne m hain wo bekar ki baaton m nahi :D
:applause:
:10:
 
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Naik

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Superb update brother
Ab dekhna h yeh rekha kia kerti h
Aur ravi kaise nikalta h inn police walon k chungal se
Aise hii likhte rahiye
Thank you
 
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Abhi

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Superb update
Akhir kar ravi ne neelam ka mana liya.
Rehan bechra bekar me pit gaya.
Ravi ab devil wale roop se police se kaise bachta hai.
Rekha ko us mystery lady ne ajaad kar di.
Ab vo aage kya karti hai.
 
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