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Abh Agge...

sab ke sab jakhmi the , baby dard se kahrahte hue apne ghutno ke bal beth chuki thi , usne dekha , uska pyar , uska ravi , behad jakhmi , jamen par padha hua tha ,

baby ki akhen gusse se lal ho gai , jab usne dekha , ravi ke pet me ik black jadui tikhe chaku jaise do tukde , jad tak ghuse lal rang me chamak rehe the ,

"aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh naaaiiiiiiiii...." baby apne chehra asman ki traf kar , etna jor se chilai ke , asman garaj utha , bijli chamakne lagi , prithvi kampne lagi , tez tufan uthne lage , sagar ke pani me hahakar mach gai , or uske lehre janleva ho gai ,

baby abh apne sabse vheshi roop me thi , kyu ki abh voh na toh juhi thi , na baby thi , voh pichle janam ki kaviya thi , jo janwar thi ,

pichle janam me bhi suhana ke kehne par yeh , kaviya nam ki vheshi janwar , prince ko marne ayi thi , tab use prince se pyar ho gya , or es janam me usne juhi ke roop me janam liya , abh voh juhi aka kaviya thi ,

baby gusse me chekhti hui uthi , or rema ki traf badne lagi , jo abh apne app ko kafi had tak sambal chuki thi , rema ke lal jadui baal abh phir se jevat ho chuke the , or uske chehre ko chu rehe the ,

rema apne ghutno ke bal bethi thi , tabhi baby ne us par attack kar diya , baby ne tezi se rema ki traf badte hue , use gardan se pakad uper utha liya ,

"tumneeee , mereeee pyarrr kooo marrrr dalaaaa..." baby ne beintha gusse me chekhte hue , rema ki gardan ko kas kar dabana suru kar diya ,

rema ke lal baalo ne baby ki kalai ko jakad liya , or uske hath ko khichne lage , par baby apni pori takat se rema ke gale ko daba rehi thi ,

tabhi baby ne apne ik pair par dabav dala or voh rema ko leker uper uddne lagi , behad uper jane ke bad , baby , rema ki akhon me dekh kar boli ,

"yehhh mereee raviii kee liyeeee bitchhhh..." baby ne etna bola or rema ki gardan ko jakde jamen par girne lagi ,

abh rema sidhi jamen par gir rehi thi , baby uski gardan ko apne hath se jakade , uske uper leti hui thi , dono jamen ki traf behad tez raftar se badh rehi thi , dono ke badan se tez aag nikal rehi thi , kyu ki un dono ki raftar behad tez thi ,

tabhii ik tez dhamaka huaa , vaha as-pas dhul or mitti ka gubar ban gya , jab dhul mitti ka gubar shant hua , tab vaha beintha dardnak mahol ban chuka tha ,

jamen par gehra gadda bana hua tha , rema jamen par besudh padhi hui thi , or baby uske uper leti hui thi , use bhi koi hosh nai tha ,

tabhi komal or khushi us tute hue zopde se rengte hue bahar nikali , voh dono behad jakhmi thi , ik rema ne un sab ki halat behad buri kar di thi , or abhi toh suhana ka anna baki tha ,

komal jamen par rengte rengte apne bhai ke pas pahunchi , or uske chehre ko dekhne lagi , tab tak khushi bhi vaha a chuki thi ,

"raviiiiiii ..." khushi dard bhari chekh marti ravi ke uper gir gai , voh use uthane lagi , uske seene par marne lagi ,

koi kya jane khushi ke dard ko , do janam leker bhi , uska pyar adhura reh gya tha , uske dard ki tulna kisi se karna bevkufi hogi ,

"komallll , uthaooo enkoo , tumari har bat mante hain , enko bolo , uth jaye , me nai jee sakti enke bina...." khushi beintha rote hue boli , lekin komal khamosh thi , uske honth sil gye the , voh bol nai pa rehi thi ,

"reemmaaaaahhh..." khushi behad gusse me chekh uthiii , uski talwar uske hatho me a gaiii , jo behad tez roshni me chamak rehi thi ,

"naii chodugiii tumee remaa..." khushi beintha gusse me akhon se behte asnu saf karti , apni talwar hatho me liye rema ki traf badne lagi ,

abh tak baby , rema ke uper se uth , rengte hue us gadde se bahar a chuki thi , bahar akar voh sidhli leti asman ki traf dekhti , tez tez haf rehi thi ,

rema ko bhi abh hosh anne laga tha , lekin voh abh behad kamzor thi , khushi ne rema par chalang lagate hue , apni tez roshni me chamakti talwar uske seene me utar dali ,

"aahhhhhnnnnnnn..." rema ke moh se ik dard bhari chekh nikali or phir uski akhen band ho gai , khushi apni talwar vaise hi chod , us gadde ke kinare beth chehra zuka rone lagi ,

par kya rema ka ant ho gya tha , koi nai janta tha , rema ko kaise mara ja sakta hai , yeh bus voh aurat janti thi , jisne rema ko pichle janam me mara tha , lekin ik bat thi , rema ne abh tak baby or khushi par koi attack nai kiya tha , kya use sab yad a gya tha ,

komal abh bhi vaise hi bethi hui thi , phir ika ik usne ravi ke pet se voh jadui tikhe tukde nikal liye , tukde nikalte hi khoon ki tez dhar beh nikali , komal yeh dekhte hi chekh uthi ,

"naaiiiiiii , bhyiaaaaaa , bhyiaaaaa ahhhhhhhhhh yaaahhhhhhhhhhh...." komal jor jor se chekhti hui , ravi ke seene par saar rakh rone lagi , uski chekh se khushi or baby bhi kamp sa gai , uski chekh me etna dard tha , jise byan kar pana mushkil hoga ,

"bhyiaaa , apne vada kiya tha , sath jeene ka , phir kyu , kyu , aisa kiya , kyu vada tod diya , aaaaaaaahhh , en bhedyion ke bech akela chod diya , yeh muze mar denge , bhyiaaaa , apko uthna hogaaa , uthooo bhyiaaa , plsss uthhh jaooo..." komal apne bhai ke bejan hontho ko chumte , chuste hue boli , phir ika ik voh apne bhai ke pore chehre ko chumne lagi ,

"bhyiaa , app mere sath sex karna chahte the naa , bhyiaaa me tyar huu , karoo sex mere sathhhh , fuckk meee , fuckk meee , utho naaa , plsss , karooo , kuch toh karooo , me kuwari nai marna chahtii , plsss , areee muzse shadii hi kar looo , kyaa bhigada mane kisi ka , kyuu , muze chain se nai jeene deteee , harr barr , muze hi kyu yeh dard miltaa haiii , kyuu , harr barr mera pyarr adhuraa rehh jataa haiii , bhyiaaaaa , apkoo merii kasammm uthooo , plsss , me hath jodtii huu , uthoo..." komal ne beintha rote hue bola , uske shabado me etna dard tha , etni tanhai thi , me kya likhu , muze kuch samaz nai a reha ,

"bhyiaaa , thik hai app matt uthoo , apko sona hai , so jaoo , me bhi so jati hu , apke pas , ham dono so jate hain , thak gye hain , ham dono bhag bhag kar , lad lad kar , abh chain ki nend so jate hain , bhyiaaa , me apke seene par saar rakh so jati hu , jab bhi utho , muze bhi utha denaa , ummaa..." komal ne apne asnu saf kar muskrate hue apne bhai ke hontho ko chuma or phir , apne bhai ke seene par saar rakh so gai , uske lambe khubsurat baalo ne uska chehra chupa liya ,

lekin tabhi , vaha ik safad dhuaa sa uthaaa , khushi or baby nam akhon se us dhuee ki traf dekhne lagi ,

hasshhh yeh suhana thii , uske sath dyana or joker bhi the , or sath me lara bhi thi , voh charo vaha hui ladai ke parinam dekh rehe the ,

"areee vahhh , meri betii ne sabkoo hara diyaa , abh mera maksad pora hone se koi nai rok sakta..." suhana beintha khushi me haste hue boli ,

"tabahi , tabahi , har traf tabahi , or esme muze khushi milti hai , me hu pagal shetian joker , ahahahahaa..." joker ne ravi ke murda jism ko dekh behad haste hue bola ,

"abh bol komall , abh karegi muze kaidd , khiiiiikhiiiiiii , abh sachai nai , burai raz karegiii , es dunia par naii , pore brehmand parrrrr..." dyana , komal ke pas bethte hue boli ,

"ahhh yeh sab tumara sapna hi rehega ..." khushi ne behad gusse me chila kar bola ,

"shhhhh , tume lagta hai , tumari yeh ghatiya se talwar , meri beti ko mar degi , bevkuf ladki , use marna etna asan nai , use me bhi nai mar saktiii , voh , voh , hehehe , abhi chand palu bad uth jayegiii..." suhana ne behad khushi me haste hue thoda gusse me chekh kar bola ,

"naiii chodugiii tumee..." baby uth kar gusse me uski traf badi , tabhi suhana ne akhen band kar koi mantra padha ,

baby uski traf badh hi rehi thi ke uska jism jadui lohe ki janjeer me jakada gya , jo aag jaisi garam thi ,

"ahhhhhhhh shhh..." baby dard se chilati jamen par gir gaiii ,

"yahhhhhhh..." khushi ne tezi se chilate suhana par chalang lagai , par suhana ne use gardan se pakad liya , or apne dusre hath ki mutthi ko kas kar band kar liya , uske hath me aag jalne lagi ,

suhana ne ik jordar punch khushi ke pet me jad diya , khushi uddte hue ik pedh se ja takrai , or niche jamen par gir gai , khushi apna pet pakade karah rehi thi ,

"tumm dono bevkuf hoo , malika suhana se jeet pana namumkin haii , suhana ne tume pichle janam me bhi mara tha or es janam me bhi maregiii..." suhana beintha haste hue boli ,

lekin komal abh bhi ravi ke seene par saar rakhe bethi hui thi , usne ik bar bhi apna chehra utha , suhana ko nai dekha tha ,

"malika suhana , dekho komal ki traf , bechari kitna dar gai apse , apna chehra tak utha nai rehi , khiiiiiikhiiiiiiii , lekin eski balii toh chadegi , ham sab ke malik shetian ko..." dyana ne beintha haste hue bola ,

"han dyana , mere pita ji ko eski bali deker , unse milugi , sadyian beet gai , esi chah me , ke kab me apne pita se milugi , unse batian karugi , ajj mera sapna pora hoga , han na komalll , lyo jii , dekho , hamari pyari komal , apne bhai se chipak kar bethi hui hai , are koi esko batao ke , voh mar chuka hai , voh nai uthega...." suhana ne behad khushi me bola ,

lekin komal ne abh bhi apna chehra uper nai uthaya tha , kaisa pyar tha uska , yeh kis trah ki deewangi thi , chot ik ko lagti thi , dard dusre ko hota tha , lekin jo dard komal ko ajj mila tha , kya yeh dard uska pyar bhara dil sehan kar paya tha ,

abh tak rema ko hosh a chuka tha , voh uth kar , apne seene se khushi ki talwar nikal , suhana or baki sab ki traf badh rehi thi ,

jab suhana ko rema ke anne ka ehsas hua , tab usne apna roop seema ke roop me badal liya , or pyar se dekhte hue rema ki traf badne lagi ,

"meri bachiiiii , akhir tumne , rimi or shurti ko , en sabse bacha hi liya..." seema ne rema ka matha chumte hue bola ,

jaise hi seema ke honth rema ke mathe par lage , use ik tez bijli ka jatka laga , voh piche ki traf gir gai , lekin phir voh khud ko sambalte hue uth khadi hui ,

baby khud ko chudvane ki pori kossih kar rehi thi , khushi abh usi pedh se pith tikaye bethi hui thi , abh voh kiske liye ladti , voh khud sadme me thi ,

"laraa , komal ko bandi bana lo..." joker ne lara ki traf dekh kar bola ,

"jiiii malik..." lara chehra zuka kar boli , or komal ki traf badne lagi ,

lara ne apni talwar nikal li thi , kyu ki komal par use vishwas nai tha , kya pata , komal uthte hi us par hamla kar de , lara koi risk nai lena chahti thi ,

lara , komal ke karib pahunch , use awaz dene lagi ..."komalll , uthooo , varnaaa..." lara ne gusse me komal ko kande se pakad piche kiya , tab uski akhen khuli ki khuli reh gai ,

"naiiiii..." lara behad jor se chekh uthi , lara ki chekh sun , suhana , dyana , joker or rema , uske pas a gye , par jo un logu ne dekha , sabko apni akhon par vishwas nai ho reha tha ,

"naiiiii , yehh naii ho saktaaaa..." seema behad gusse me chekh uthi , uski byank chekh sun , sab ander tak kamp gye , bus rema ko chod kar ,

"yeh kaisi pagal ladki haiii , ik pyarr ke liyee yehh sabbb..." dyana bhi komal or ravi ke pyar se pharbavit hote hue boli ,

"ohhh naiii , abh kya hogaaa malikaa..." joker ne behad udas awaz me bola , har bat par , har pal , har lamha , hasne wala joker abh udas tha , lekin hua kya tha ,

jab komal ne sone ki bat ki tab , uske hatho me voh jadui tikhe tukde the , komal ne apne bhai ke seene par apna saar rakha , or dono tukde , badi khamoshi se , apne pet me ghusa liye ,

use dard toh beintha hua , uski band akhon se asnu beh nikale , lekin voh har dard sehti , apne bhai ke seene par saar rakhe , use bahu me bhar kar , usse chipak kar bethi rehi ,
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akhir kuch hi palu me un jadui tukdo ne komal ki sanse cheen li , voh chand palu me hi marne lagi , lekin voh kafi der tak , suhana or baki sab ki batian sunti rehi ,

par use sona tha , apne bhai ke sath , or voh so gai , usne apna vada pora kiya , jiyege toh sath , or marege bhi sath , or ajj uska har dard , har tanhai , khatam ho chuki thi ,

abh na toh use es samaz ka dar tha , na apni maa ka , na hi uski behan suhana ka , abh voh hamesha hamesha ke liye apne bhai ke sath so gai thi ,

jindgi bhar dard sehti rehi , har musibat se ladti rehi , kabhi apni abru bachati rehi , or kabhi apne pyar ke liye balidan deti rehi , par abh ik akhri balidan usne diya tha , or abh voh so chuki thi , ik chain ki nend , use koi nai utha sakta tha , koi bhi naii ,

"naaiiiii , naiiii , tum naii marrr saktiii , meraa maksadd , adhuraa rehh gyaa , kyuuu , harr barr tummm marr jatiii hoo , kyaa haii ess pyarr mee , kyuu , akhirrr kyuuu..." suhana , komal ke pas ghutno ke bal beth rote , chilate hue boli , par abh sab khatam ho chuka thaa , kuch nai bachaa thaa...

"malika sambalo khud ko , jo hona tha , voh ho chuka hai..." dyana ne seema ke kande par hath rakh bola ,

"naiii , naiiiii , yeh nai ho saktaaa , komal muzse jayda pyarr kaisee karrr saktiii haiii , pichle janam me bhiii , esnee apneee bhaii kee liyee jaann dediii , or abh phirr vahii sab , me haar gaiiii , me phirrr se haarr gaiiii..." suhana ne beintha rote hue bola ,

burai ke sath hamesha yahi hota hai , abh na toh suhana , apna pyar pa sakti or na apne pita ko mil sakti thi , agar voh ravi or komal ke sath mil kar rehti toh , shyad use uska pyar mil jata , jo use pichle janam me nai mila tha , lekin use pyar pana nai tha , voh pyar cheen lena chahti thi ,

lekin abh ravi , prince nai tha , abh voh insan tha , jiske sath kai jindgyian judi thi , uski 7 behne or kai premikayian , lekin suhana toh bus akele ravi ko chahti thi ,

lekin abh uske ahnkar ne uska sab kuch cheen liya tha , uska premi , uska maksad , or abh shyad , jise voh apni beti kehti thi , voh bhi uske khilaf hone wali thi...


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Ravi ke sath komal ko bi mar diya apne:cry: Mere dono fav characters ka ye haal kiya apne
 

Rahul

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Bhai ek last wala jo update bacha use bhi de do waise saktimaan apna sab chaupat kar leta same rema ne kiya hai kyunki uske baal hi uski aulaad jo sahi salamat hain use aur duniya me kya chahiye:D waise bhi itni superpowers bardast karna sabke bas ki baat nahi hai..waiting final update :dost:
 

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Abh Agge...

rema ne jaise hi maa shabad bola , dyana or seema ik dusre ka chehra dekhne lagi , dyana or rema ki maa , kya aisa tha ,

par aisa hua tha , supat awashta se jagte hi rema ne dyana ko apni maa bola tha , dyana ke hontho par ik muskan doad gai ,

usne socha abh voh rema ka istemal kar sakti hai , apne dushmano ke khilaf , voh ander se beintha khush ho rehi thi , usne muskra kar ik bar seema ki traf dekha , or phir rema ki traf badne lagi ,

"meri bachi , meri beti , kaha thi tu..." dyana thoda udas awaz me bolti hui rema ki traf badhi , tabhi kuch aisa hua , jiski umeed na dyana ko thi or na hi seema ko ,

jaise hi dyana , rema ke karib gai , rema ne gusse se uski traf dekha , or phir uske lambe baalo ne , dyana ki gardan ko jakad liya , or use utha kar , dewar ke sath laga liya ,

"ahhhh beti yeh , yeh , kya kar rehi ho..." dyana ne apne app ko chudvane ki kossih karte hue bola , uske chehre se niche uska pora jism dewar se chipaka hua tha , jaise kisi makadi ne apne shikar ko jal me fas liya ho ,

seema bhi herian reh gai , tabhi usne piche palat kar dekha , room ke samne ki dewar yaha behad andhera tha , vaha se ik aurat bahar ayi ,

yeh vahi aurat thi jo us din suhana se bat kar rehi thi , jab rimi or shurti unko darvaje par kan laga sun rehi thi , lekin yeh aurat thi kon ,

"maaaaaa ..." rema behad udas awaz me uddte hue us aurat ki traf badne lagi ,

us aurat ne ik kala libas pehan rakha tha , uska pora jism jaise ghor andhera se upja hua tha , sharir ka ik bhi ang dikhai nai de reha tha , agar kuch dikh reha tha , toh bus andhera ,

seema us aurat ko dekhte hi zuk kar beth gai , rema ke lambe gusse khor baal shant hoker beth gye , abh voh udd nai rehe the , voh shant the ,

"maaaa , app kaha thi , meri maaa..." rema us aurat ke karib jaker use chukar mehsus karne lagi , uski akhen nam ho gai , kali akhon se kala khoon behne laga ,

"meri bachiiii , ajj tumse mulakat ho hi gaii , kaisi hai meri beti..." us aurat ne rema ko apne gale laga bola , uske hath andhere se bane hue the , uska koi roop nai tha , koi akar nai tha ,

"maaaa me thik hu , muze kisi ko apse milvana hai , yeh , yeh , meri insani maa seema hai , yeh bhi apki trah muze bahut chahti hai , muze bahut pyar karti hai.." rema ne seema ko pyar se dekh kar bola , uske baal bhi seema ko chu kar mehsus karne lage ,

"tum sab shant kyu nai hote , bevkuf kahi ke , shant hoker beth jao , varna , jad se ukhad dungi..." rema ne apne baalo ko dekh gusse se bola ,

rema ke baal ik bar halka sa dar gye , or phir rema ke chehre ko chune lage , rema pyar se unko sehlane lagi or boli..." mere bacheee , maaa dekho , mere bache kitne pyare hain or meri har bat mante hain , ik ache bache ki trah , me en sab ki maa hu , jaise app meri maa ho , hai na maa..." rema ne ik gehri muskan ke sath bola , uski muskan me ik rahasye tha ,

"rema betiii , tumari behno ki jaan khatre me hai , rimi or shurti ki , voh , voh , unko le gai ..." seema ne beintha rote hue bola ,

"kyaaa , huuuuuu , toh apne muze uthaya kyu nai..." rema ne behad gusse me bola , uske baal hawa me charo traf phail kar mandrane lage ,

"han meri bachi , seema thik bol rehi hai , tumara sabse bada dushman , prince sonik or malika ruhi , vapis lot aye hain , jin sab ne , tume bachpan me un andhere junglo me chod diya tha , marne ke liye , beti , tumari masom insani behno ki jindgi danv par lagi hai , jao sabko khatam kar , unko bacha lo..." us nakabposh aurat ne behad gusse bhari awaz me bola ,

"huuuu , huuuuu , kon leker gya , meri behno ko..." rema ne behad gusse me bola , uska gussa jaise jaise badta ja reha tha , vaise vaise uska badan or bhi kala ho reha tha or uske baal agg ki lapto me jalne lage the ,

"tamasss , voh leker gai hai..." dyana jo dewar ke sath chipaki hui thi , voh behad dard me boli ,

"kyaaa , tamasss , voh hamari , ik louti dost thi , voh bhi , us bevkuf prince ke sath mil gai , abh use bhi mere gusse ka samna karna hoga..." rema or bhi gusse me a gai ,

"han beti , tumne pari log me , us tamas ki khatir hi , hamse dushmani ki thi , hamse ladai ki thi , dekho me ajj bhi tume kitna pyar karti hu , me tumari maa hu..." us shetian aurat ne sisakte hue bola ,

"maa app rona mat , pichli bar jo galti muzse hui thi , voh es bar nai hogi , me sabko khatam kar dungi..." etna bol rema vaha se gyab ho gai , or dyana , uske baalo ki kaid se mukat ho gai , rema ke sath hi voh aurat bhi gyab ho gai ,

seema , abh suhana ke roop me a gai , or dyana ke karib akar boli ,

"kaisi lagi meri beti ki takat..." suhana ne haste hue bola ,

"voh behad takatwar hai , lekin voh aurat kon thi..." dyana ne apna gala sehlate hue bola ,

"muze nai pata , bus rema janti hai , uska nam , or use bhi , par kabhi batati nai , or use hamesha maa kehti hai..." suhana ne khud bhi preshan si hoker bola ,

vahi dusri traf....

subah ho chuki thi , ravi rat se nai soya tha , kyu ki use ajj ladna tha , rema se , dyana se , or uski jaan seema se ,

voh na toh rema ko mar sakta tha or na hi seema ko , voh en dono me kisi ko bhi khona nai chahta tha , or rat bhar sochne ke bad , use ik rasta mil gya tha , lekin kya tha voh akhri rasta , yeh toh bus ravi janta tha ,

shurti or rimi abhi bhi bachu ki trah usse lipat kar , use bahu me bhar kar so rehi thi , ravi ke seene par , un dono ne ik dusre ka hath pakad rakha tha ,

ravi un dono ki traf dekh muskra hi reha tha , ke room me ik dam se andhera sa phial gya , ravi samaz gya ke kon aya hai ,

ravi bed se uth kar khada ho gya , rimi or shurti nend me thoda kasmasai , or ik dusre se chipak kar so gai , ravi un dono ka apsi pyar dekh muskra diya , or phir uska intzar karne laga ,

"pita jiii , abh a bhi jaoo..." ravi man hi man bola ,

tabhi room me ik saya ban gya or abh kaal vaha khada tha , voh din me kam hi kahi jata tha , par ajj ka din , kai jindgyion ke faisle karne wala tha , kai jindgyian barbad hone wali thi , or kai abad ,

"ravi beta , tum thik toh ho..." kaal ne ravi ke karib akar bola ,

"acha hua pita ji app a gye , mane socha , ajj apse mil lu , bad me pata nai , moka mile ya nai..." ravi ne thoda nam akhon se bola ,

"hmm , esi liye aya hu , kash ke me tumari madad kar sakta , par , yeh tumari ladai hai , lekin han , jab dyana or joker es ladai me ayege , tab me tumara sath dunga..." kaal ne behad shant awaz me bola ,

"jii pita ji , par me na toh rema ko mar sakta hu or na seema ko , koi apno se kaise lad sakta hai , or rema mere dil ke behad karib hai ..." ravi ne thoda udas awaz me bola ,

"ravi , rema es ladai me sabse takatwar hai , tume rema ko marna hi hoga , varna voh tum sabko mar degi , uski takat hi aisi hai ke voh sab bhul chuki hai , abh voh ik maa hai , uske jevat baal uske bache hain..." kaal ne ravi ko samaza kar bola ,

"pita ji agar me uske baalo ko khatam kar du , toh kya pata , rema normal ho jaye , kya pata uske jevat baal hi use shetian banne par mazbor kar rehe ho..." ravi ne ik asha ki kiran dekhte hue bola ,

"hmm , ik maa se uske bache cheen loge , toh uska gussa , etna byank ho jayega , ke es ladai ko voh chand minto me khatam kar degi..." kaal ne ravi ki bat ko galat therate hue bola ,

"toh kya rasta hai , rema ko rokne ka..." ravi abh gusse me bola ,

"koi nai janta , bus ik aurat janti hogi , voh hogi , jisne rema ko pichle janam me dhoke se mar diya tha , jab suhana ne tume mar diya tha , tab rema beintha gussa ho gai thi , usne suhana ke jism ko cheer fad diya tha , lekin es ladai me voh behad jakhmi ho gai thi , tab use bhi kisi ne mar diya tha..." kaal ne behad shant awaz me bola ,

"hmm , par pita ji voh aurat kon thi..."

"muze nai pata , par es jung ke akhir me voh shyad a jaye , ravi jab tum vampire bankar haweli me muzse milne aye the , tab tumne ik vada kiya tha..." kaal ne ravi ko kuch yad dilvate hue bola ,

"han , yad hai , apne muze 1 saal ka wakht diya tha , muze dyana ko khatam karna tha , varna app muze haweli me kaya or shaya ki trah kaid kar lete , par pita ji voh wakht beet chuka hai , abh toh 3 saal hone ko hain... " ravi ne un palu ko yad kar bola ,

"han , janta hu , par 2 saal tum yaha the hi nai , me unko kaise gin sakta hu , or abh tumare samne bus dyana hi nai , suhana or rema bhi khadi hai , tumare kai dushman hain , or ik traf tumara pyar , komal , tumare pas abh 12 ghante bache hain , 1 saal pora hone me , abh me jata hu , ik bat or abh tume kaid se darkar nai ladna hai , abh tume apne pariwar ke liye ladna hai , apni behno ke liye ladna hai , apne pita ko diye vade ko pora karna..." kaal etna bol gyab ho gya ,

ravi ne palat kar dekha rimi or shurti nend se jag rehi thi , tabhi khushi behad ghabrai hui room me ayi , uski sanse behad tez chal rehi thi , aisa lag reha tha jaise voh bhag kar ayi thi ,

"kyaa hua khushi , tum etni ghabrai kyu ho..." ravi ne khushi ke kandu par hath rakh bola ,

"voh , voh , rema a rehi hai , hamse ladne.." khushi ne ghabrate hue bola ,

"kitna wakht hai..."

"bus 5 mint or..."

"khushi , jaldi se rehan or suzi ko sach bata do , or pora kabila khali karvao , jaoo jaldi , me tab tak , rema ko bataion me ulza kar rakhta hu..." ravi etna bol jaldi se room se bahar nikal gya ,

phir khushi bhi jaldi se niche ayi or sabko rema ke anne ki khabar de di , kuch hi wakht bad , rehan or suzi , kabile ke logu ko ikatha kar , vaha se kabile ke piche bani ik pahadi guffa me ghus gye , jiska pehra abh khushi de rehi thi ,

ravi , rehan ke ghar ke bahar , ik pathar par beth , rema ka intzar kar reha tha , tabhi komal uske pas a gai , usne uske kande par hath rakha ,

"komal , dekho ajj jindgi kaha le ayi..." ravi ne bechain sa hoker bola ,

"bhyia jindgi nai , hamara pyar , bhyia vada karu , ham jiyege toh sath , or marege bhi sath..." komal ne nam akhon se bola ,

"vada reha..." ravi ne komal ka hath chum kar bola ,

"bhyiaa , kash ke ham chain ki jindgi gujar sakte , hame kya chahyie kisi se , kuch bhi nai , hame bus ik chota sa ghar chahyie , or do wakht ki roti , par bhagwan voh bhi hame nai de sakta..." komal ne rote hue bola ,

"shhh , rona nai , ajj hamri jindgi ki akhri ladai hai , ajj ro kar nai , hass kar mukabla karna hai , har dard jelna hai , har chot par pyar ki malam lagani hai , tum jao , or jab wakht aye tabhi bahar anna..." ravi ne komal ko apni bahu me bhar uska matha chum kar bola , komal muskrate hue ghar ke ander chali gai ,

ravi phir se us pathar par beth gya , tabhi tez hawa chalne lagi , pedu ke patte hilne lage , panchi uddne lage , janwar chekhne or shor machane lage , khubsurat jungle me hahakar mach gai , kyu ki shetian khud a reha tha ,

ravi man me soch reha tha ..." ajj meri jindgi us mode par a gai , yaha bus akhri rasta ladai hai , huu pita ji se vada kiya ke 1 saal me dyana ko khatam kar dunga , par yeh nai janta tha , ke dyana ke sath sath mere apne mere dushman ban jayege ,

har insan ki jindgi me musebtian ati hain , lekin kuch log musibat me dar jate hain , kuch unka dilo jaan se mukabla karte hain ,

lekin meri musibat , mere apne the , kya me unko mar pata , ik traf meri behan rema thi , or dusri traf meri patni seema , me dono ke bech fas chuka hu , rema ke sath mera rishta etna gehra tha , ke koi shabad nai the byan karne ke liye ,

rema meri jindgi ka voh ehsas tha , jise bus me mehsus kar sakta tha , uske jism ki voh khubsurat mehak , muze khich leti thi apni traf , ham dono ik jaise the , ham dono me pyar tha , gussa tha , dard tha , kyu ki rema meri behan thi , mera adha hissa ,

na use mar sakta hu , or na use , lekin eska ant kya hoga , mane soch liya tha , muze marna hoga , meri mout hi es yudh ka ant hogi , sab mere sath judi thi , agar me mar jata toh sab thik ho jata , kisi ke dil me dushmani na rehti ,

suhana ko bhi chain mil jata or rema ko bhi..." ravi man hi man yeh batian khud se bol reha tha ,

ravi abhi apne man se batian kar hi reha tha , ke rema uske samne a gai , ufff uske lal baal sach me jevat lag rehe the , uski akhen behad kali thi , or jism bhi behad kala , gussa se uski sanse tez chal rehi thi , honth gusse se kamp rehe the , samne uska bhai tha , jise abh voh pehchanti nai thi , kyu ki es khofnak roop me voh apne bhai se kabhi nai mili thi ,

"a gai tum , me tumara hi intzar kar reha tha , uff kya jindgi hai meri , jiske sath jindgi ki suruat ki , ajj voh muze pehchanti bhi nai , esse bada dukh kya hoga , es se achi mout hai , hmm , par mar bhi toh nai sakta , akhir tumse pyar hi etna hai , acha meri akhri khuwahish sunogi , bus rona mat , mere marne ke bad , rema pichle janam me chahe tumse na mil paya , par es janam me mane tumse beintha pyar kiya , tumse pyar kar , tume mehsus kiya , tume har khushi di , apne dil ki malika bana kar rakha , rema tum meri ho , me janta hu , tum muze mar dogi , par vada reha , jab bhi mout ayi , tumari bahu me ayegi..." ravi us pathar se utha or bolta hua rema ke karib akar ruk gya ,

rema apna chehra thoda teda kar use dekhne lagi , voh etne pyar se ravi ko dekh rehi thi , ke koi shabad nai dikhane ko , behad masom lag rehi thi voh , behad pyari , rema ke aise pyar se dekhne se , uska jism insani roop me anne laga , uske baal ravi ke chehre ko mehsus karne lage , tabhi rema ke saar me tez dard utha ...

"maa ajj bhyia ka khana me leker jaugi , ouchhhh dhere bhyia dard ho reha hai , bhyia yeh bat kisi ko batana mat , kya hua behna kahi dard toh nai ho reha , bhyia mat jao shehar , me nai jee sakti apke bina..."

rema ko ika ik gaon me bitaye pal yad anne lage , uske hontho par ik muskan doad gai , par tabhi uske baal uske chehre ke samne a gye , uske chehre ko dekhne lage , aisa lag reha tha voh usse kuch bat kar rehe the ,

"rema , yad karo..." ravi ne or bhi rema ke karib jaker bola ,

rema ka saar tez dard se fata ja reha tha , voh beintha gusse me chekh uthi , uski chekh sun pora jungle kamp utha , komal ghar me behthi kamp si gai , khushi pehra dete hue kampne lagi , kabile ke log bhi dar gye , rimi or shurti ik dusre se chipak gai ,

"remaa..." ravi abhi etna hi bola tha ke rema ne tezi se agge badh ravi ke seene par dono hatho se dhaka jad diya , usme etni takat thi ke ravi piche ki traf uddta hua , rehan ke ghar se takra gya ,

ghar ki lakadi ki dewar tut kar bhikar gai , ravi ghar ke hall me jaker gira , komal vahi bethi thi , voh behad gusse me bahar ki traf bhagi , khushi bhi vaha pahunch chuki thi , kuch der bad ravi bhi vaha a gya ,

abh rema ke samne komal , ravi or khushi khade the , lekin kya voh tino bhi rema ko rok pate ya koi or bhi ata vaha par...

vahi dusri traf..

kat ghar me ehder ohder ghum rehi thi , usne ik galti ki , or sab barbad sa ho gya , voh galti thi ravi ko baby se door karne ki ,

do saal gujar chuke the , or ravi us din ke bad kabhi vapis nai aya tha , or baby voh ik janwar ban chuki thi , pyar shabad se use abh ghin ati thi , nafrat si ho gai thi , mahino tak ghar se gyab rehti , en do saalo me baby mushkil se matar 6 mahine ghar rehi thi ,

us din ravi ke jane ke bad jab locket ne baby ki pori jindgi jaan li , tab uske balidan dekh , use apni pori takat sonp di , pata nai kya tha baby me , ke komal ka locket use chahne laga tha , apni pori takat use deker amar sa kar diya ,

kyu ki voh locket malika ruhi ki amanat thi , behad rahasmayi takato se bhara tha , anant kali shaktiyion se bana tha voh , dunia ke bade se bade jadu ka tod tha ,

lekin locket ne baby ke dil me ravi ke liye pyar or bada diya tha , or baby ka man abh ravi ko milne ke liye tadaf utha ,

suru suru me voh normal thi , kat se behad pyar karti thi , use ravi ka bar bar puchti rehti , or kat use kuch bata na pati , voh kya kehti , ke uske karan hi ravi nai a reha ,

hafte beet gye , mahine gujar gye , par ravi nai aya , baby ne pori takat laga li , par ravi kaha hai voh na jan payi , kyu ki ravi us wakht andhkar log me tha khushi ke sath , or baby use dekh nai pa rehi thi ,

akhir har roz , har pal , har lamha , jab baby , kat ke samne ravi ka nam japti rehi , tab kat ko khud se haar man kar baby ko sach batana padha , baby ko sach sun kar kat par beintha gussa aya , par usne kat ko kuch nai kaha , bus tut gai , bhikar gai , atma udas ho gai , chanchal man , ravi , ravi chilata reha , par voh kuch na kar payi ,

akhir ik din rema se use pata chala ke ravi , khushi ko leker kahi bhag gya hai , tab usne ravi ko bevafa samaz liya , tuta dil pathar ban gya , asun sukh kar tezab ban gye , or baby ne apne shandar jism ko hamesha hamesha ke liye kale libas me dhak liya , voh es par sirf ravi ka huk samazti thi ,

kat ne baby ko bahut samazaya , par baby es kadar tut gai ke vapis sambal na payi , lekin usne sachai ka rasta kabhi nai choda , voh burai se ladti rehi , joker se ladti rehi , logu ko bachati rehi , par es sab me voh khud ko bhul gai ,

ik din use mehsus ho gya ke ravi vapis a chuka hai , voh use dekhne bhi gai , pedu ke piche chup kar , ravi ko niharti rehi , akhir pyar tha uska , lekin kya voh ajj bhi yahi thi , jab rema jaisa khukar shetian ravi ke samne khada tha , kya voh ajj ati , apne ravi ke liye , eska jawab anne wale wakht me chupa tha...


to be counited....[Note- esko kehte hain suspense... voh aurat kon thi , jo rema ki maa thi... Love1994 app kisi ko mat batana...or friends 4rth part esi trah magical hoga.. samaz lena ke 3rd part ka hi second part hoga... matlab es magical world ka ant 4rth part me hoga... ]

Noice update toh dyana nahi koi aur hai rema ki maa pichle janam ki idhar ravi rema se marna chahta hai lekin jab rema komal ya kisi ko aur pe hamla karegi tab ravi kya karega:waiting:
 

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Abh Agge...

ravi , komal or khushi apni behan , apni dushman , rema ke samne khade the , jo behad gusse me unki traf dekh rehi thi ,



"komal , khushi , tum dono apni pori jaan laga rema par attack karo , me moka dekh kar us par apni pori takat jok dunga , ready..." ravi ne dono ki traf dekh kar bola ,

"ji bhyia , han ravi ready..." komal or khushi ik sath boli ,

"attack..." ravi ne chila kar bola ,

rema bhi tyar thi , usne apne lambe jadui lal baalo ko or bhi bada kar liya , abh uske baal behad lambe ho chuke the , or uske jism ke as-pas phail chuke the ,



komal or khushi ne dono traf se rema ko gher liya , komal or khushi ne ik dusre ki traf dekha or rema ko marne doadi ,



khushi bhagte bhagte apne angrakashak ke roop me a gai , uska jism abh beintha chamak reha tha , uske sunehre vastar abh voh dharan kar chuki thi , uske hatho me uski chamakti talwar thi ,



komal ke bhi pankh nikal chuke the , voh bhi bhagte bhagte uddne lagi , komal ke hath me bhi uska astar a chuka tha , jo ik badi si khulhadi jaisa tha ,

rema ke baal abh behad lambe the , or uske pore jism ko cover kar rehe the ,

komal or khushi dono ne ik sath rema par war kiya , pehle khushi ne rema ki gardan par war kiya , par rema ke jadui baalo ne uske talwar wale hath ko kalai se jakad liya ,

abh khushi apni kalai rema ke baalo se chudvane lagi , lekin uski har kossih asafal sabit ho rehi thi ,

dusri traf komal ne bhi rema ki gardan par var kiya , par rema ke baalo ne rema ke jism ko chupa liya , rema ka jism abh jara sa bhi dikhai nai de reha tha ,

"yeehhh ahhhhh..." komal ne uddte uddte rema par chalang lagai , usne us chamakti jadui khulhadi ka war rema ki gardan par kiya ,

par khulhadi sidha rema ke baalo se takrai , "bummmmmmm..." ik tez dhamaka hua , komal ki khulhadi ke tez war ne rema ke baalo ko kat diya tha , or esi se tez dhamaka hua tha ,

komal dhamaka hote hi door jaker gir gai , abh khushi bachi thi , khushi ne apne dusre hath se ik chamakti bijli utpan ki , or voh bijli rema ke un baalo par chod di , jo uski kalai se lipte hue the ,

bijli ke lagatar tez jatko ne rema ke baalo ko mazbor kar diya ke voh khushi ki kalai ko chod de , jaise hi khushi ki kalai chuti ,

"ahhhhhhhhhhh ..." khushi ne jor se chekhte hue talwar ka jordar war rema ke saar par kiya ,

"tannnnnnnnnmmmmm..." ik tez kampan si doad gai , khushi ki talwar or uske jism me , use aisa mehsus hua , jaise usne kisi lohe ki cheez par apni talwar chalai ho ,

"eeehhhnnnnnnaaaaaaa..." rema jor se chekh uthi , rema ki chekh se uske baalo ne uska jism chod , khushi ke pore jism ko jakad liya ,

khushi ka pora jism abh un baalo ki kaid me a chuka tha ,

"yahhhhhhhhhhhh..." tabhi ravi ne ik tez hawa ka magic ball rema par chod diya ,


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rema ke baal uddne lage , rema us hawa se ghiri khushi ko or bhi jakadne lagi ,

tabhi komal ne apni khulhadi se rema ko marna chaha , par rema ne uska hath raste me hi rok liya , or uske hath se khulhadi cheen , uske pet me jor dar kick jad di ,

komal thoda piche hui , tabhi rema ne apne dusre hath se ik tez roshni ka magic ball chod diya , voh magic ball komal ke jism se takra gya , kyu ki komal abhi sambal nai payi thi ,


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"bummmmmmmm..." ik tez dhamake ke sath komal uddti hui kabile ke ik ghar se ja takrai , voh ghar bhi komal ke uper gir gya , komal us ghar ke malbe ke niche dab gai ,

"komallllll..." ravi gusse se chilata hua rema ki traf bada , bhagte bhagte , uske hath me uski talwar or dhal a gai , uska badan bijli ki roshni me chamakne laga ,


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khushi abh behosh si ho gai thi , rema ke baalo ne uski sans band si kar di thi ,

tabhi khushi ne apni pori takat ik jut kar li , uska jism aag me jalne laga , tabhi khushi ne aag me jalte hue , apne dono hatho ko tez jatka diya ,

rema ke lal baal jalte hue tut gye , khushi baalo ki kaid se azad hote hi jamen par gir gai , rema uski traf dekh pati , tabhi ravi ne us par hamla kar diya ,

ravi ne talwar ka jordar war rema par kiya , par rema ne komal ki cheeni khulhadi se uska war rok diya ,

"remmaa hoshh me ayooo..." ravi ne chila kar bola , or apni dhal ko rema ke chehre par jad diya , dhal ke uper lohe ke tikhe tirkon se bane hue the ,

"ahhhhhhiinnnnnnnnn...." rema dard se thoda chilai , phir ravi dhal ke war karta gya ,

"huuu huuu huuu..." ravi tez tez sanse bharta rema ke chehre par dhal marta gya , tabhi rema ke baalo ne ravi ka dhal wala hath jakad liya ,

ravi ne apna moh khola or aag ki lapte apne moh se chodni suru kar di , rema ke baal jalne lage , or sath me ravi ka hath bhi ,

jaise hi rema ke baalo ne uska hath choda , ravi ke hath se voh dhal bhi chut kar niche gir gai ,

ravi ne piche hoker apni talwar khich li , abh tak khushi thoda sambal chuki tha , voh ghutno par khadi hui , usne ravi ko ladte dekha , or phir pori takat se , apne hatho se aag ke kai magic ball rema par chodne lagi ,



ik ke bad ik aag ke gole rema ke badan se takrane lage , rema apne ik hath ko chehre ke agge lijakar un aag ke golo se bachne lagi ,



"yahhhhhhhhhhh yehh lee..." ravi ne tezi se bhagte hue voh talwar rema ke pet me ghusa di , jadui talwar rema ke pet ko cheerti hui adhi ander ghus gai ,

"aaaiinnnnnnnnnnnnn...." rema ik chekh marti jamen par gir gai , uske baal bhi jaise mar sa gye ,

"remaaaa , ahhhhhh , yeh mane kya kar diyaaa , apni jaan ko marr diya..." ravi ghutno ke bal beth rote hue khud se hi chila kar bola ,

khushi bhi abh dhere dhere ravi ke karib ayi or uske kande par hath rakh use honsla dene lagi , kyu ki abhi jung ki suruat thi ,

komal bhi us ghar ke malbe se rengte hue bahar a chuki thi , komal ka locket uske pas nai tha , voh behad kamzor thi locket ke bina ,

komal bhi ravi ke pas akar uske gale lag rone lagi , use bhi dukh tha rema ki mout ka , par kya sach me rema mar chuki thi ,

"komal , rema mar gai..." ravi ne use bahu me kaste hue nam akhon se bola ,

"bhyiaaaa..." abhi komal ne etna hi bola tha ke uske gale me ik jadui hunter a fasa , jo black rang ka tha or aag me jal reha tha ,

ravi ne akh utha samne dekha toh rema khadi thi , pet me talwar vaise hi ghusi hui thi , ravi ne khushi ki traf dekha ,

"ahhhuuu ahhuuu..." komal khasti hui sisak rehi thi , hunter se uski sanse thamti ja rehi thi ,

tabhi khushi ne apni talwar ke war se us hunter ko kat diya , komal azad hote hi piche ki traf gir gai , voh apna gala dono hatho me pakade karah rehi thi ,

"ravi tum komal ko sambalo , me rokti hu ese..." khushi etna bola rema ki traf badne lagi ,



ravi , komal ko god me utha kar , rehan ke us tute ghar ke pas a gya , ravi ne komal ko darvaje ke pas betha diya , or uske hontho ko chum liya ,

ravi ne piche palat kar dekha , khushi ehder ohder uddte hue rema par aag ke gole barsa rehi thi , ravi vapis komal ki traf dekhne laga ,

"ahhh bhyiaa k..kaise ..rr..roke..ee..esko..." komal ne apna gala pakade hakla kar bola , use abh bhi apne gale me behad dard ho reha tha ,

"shhhh , muze abh voh karna hoga , jo me nai karna chahta tha , muze rema ke karib jana hoga , tabhi use yad ayega , jab voh muze mehsus karegi , tabhi use sab yad ayega .." ravi ne komal ke masom chehre ko dekh kar bola ,

"kyaa , ohh nai bhyia , aisa mat karo... " komal nam akhon se boli ,

"or koi rasta nai , yeh ham sabko mar degi , apna khyal rakhna meri jaan...." ravi ne komal ko apne gale laga bola ,

"par bhyia use abh bhi sab yad na aya toh..." komal ko behad chinta thi apne bhai ki ,

"hmm , muze vishwas hai , use sab yad a jayega..." ravi ne uth kar chalte hue bola ,

ravi , abh rema ki traf badh reha tha , khushi aag ke gole lagtar rema par barsa rehi thi , tabhi rema ne preshan hoker apne baalo ki dhal bana li ,

abh khushi ki traf se fenki gai aag , rema ke baalo se takra rehi thi , jiska koi bhi asar rema par nai ho reha tha ,

khushi ne bhi preshan hoker apni pori takat se ik behad bada aag ka magic ball bana liya , jo uski hight se bhi bada tha ,

"ahhhhh yeh lee..." khushi ne voh aag ka behad bada magic ball rema par choda par rema ne apne ballo ko piche khich apne seene me ik black hole bana liya ,

voh aag ka gola rema ke seene me sama gya , khushi herian si reh gai , tabhi rema ne hunter ka jordar war khushi par kiya ,

hunter sidha khushi ke chehre par laga ..."aaaaaieeeeeeeeiiiiiiiii maaa..." khushi dard se chekhti hui jamen par gir gai ,

ravi ne palat kar komal ki traf dekha , jo rote hue usko dekh rehi thi , ravi ne muskra kar komal ki tarf dekha or rema ke pas jane laga , abh tak rema ne apne pet se talwar nikal ik traf fenk di thi ,

rema use dekh rehi thi , rema ke baal use rokne ke liye agge bade , par ravi ne apne jism ko aag me dhal liya ,

rema ke baal uske badan ko jakad lete , phir jal jate , phir jakad lete , phir jal jate , rema na jane kyu ravi par attack nai kar rehi thi ,

jaise hi ravi , rema ke behad karib aya , usne palak japakte hi rema ko apni bahu me bhar liya ,

rema uski pakad se chutne ki kossih karne lagi , par ravi ne use kas kar apni bahu me jakad rakha tha , rema ke lambe baalo ne ravi ko charo traf se gher liya ,

rema ke baal badne lage , voh etne badte gye , ke ravi or voh khud un baalo me kahi chup sa gai ,

"bhyiaaaa..." komal ladkhadte hue uthi or chekhte hue ravi or rema ki traf bhagi , uski akhon se asnu beh rehe the ,

"raviiiiii , naiiii..." khushi bhi uth kar ravi ko bachane ke liye bhagi , lekin shyad abh der ho chuki thi ,

kyu ki rema ke baal har beet rehe pal ke sath or bhi badh rehe the , abh ik room me pori trah sama jaye , etne badh chuke the ,

ravi un baalo ke ander rema ke gale laga hua tha , rema ke hath me ik kale rang ka chaku numa ik lamba tukda tha ,

"remaa , meri behan ahhhhhh shhh..." ravi abhi rema ke kanu ke pas etna hi bola tha ke voh jadui tukda , ravi ki kamar ke pas uske pet me ghus chuka tha ,

"remaaa aahhhhh yadd karooo shhhh ..." ravi ne use or bhi kas kar apni bahu me bharte hue bola ,

rema ke dono hatho me abh khanjar jaise tekhe tukdo the , voh ravi ke pet me dono traf se marti gai , voh un tukdo ko ravi ke pet me marti , phir nikal leti ,

"remaaahhh..." ravi ki akhen abh band si hone lagi thi , ravi ke pet se khoon pani ki trah beh reha tha , rema ke dono hatho me kanjar jaise tukde the , jo bar bar uske pet me ghus rehe the ,

"bhyiaaaa , chodo bhyiaa ko..." komal ne apni khulhadi utha rema ke baalo ko katna suru kar diya , jo abh gol hoker football jaisa roop le chuke the ,

rema abh apne sabse vheshi roop me thi , komal jitna khulhadi se uske baal katti , voh baal tut kar phir se jud jate ,

dusri traf khushi bhi aag ke gole rema ke baalo par barsa rehi thi , par jaise hi rema ke baal jalte , voh vapis jinda hoker apas me jud jate ,

komal or khushi thak chuki thi , par rema ke baalo ke mayajaal ko tod nai pa rehi thi , voh har man chuki thi , voh dono ro rehi thi ,

"bhyiaaa , kyu kiya yeh , apko roka tha mane , shetian kabhi nai pigal sakta..." komal etna bol ghutno ke bal beth rone lagi ,

"huuu huuuu , prince sonik , marrrrr dungiiii tumeeeehhh..." rema ne apni vheshi awaz me bola , uski akhen or bhi kali ho gai , uske baalo ne ravi ki gardan ko kas kar jakad liya , voh ravi ki sanse rok kar use marne par tuli thi ,

"rrr...eee..maaaaaa..." ravi behad mushkil se etna hi bol paya , uski akhen band ho gai ,

"huuuu , huuuuuuu , eskeee badddd teriiii komallllll orrrr uskeee baddddd khushiiii , or uskeee baddddd seemaaaa hhuuuuu.." rema , ravi ke kanu ke pas apne honth kar boli , rema ke baalo ne ravi ki gardan chod di ,

ravi agge ki traf rema ke uper gir gya , uska chera rema ke kande par tha , uski akhen band thi , tabhi usne ik dam se akhen kholi or rema ko apni bahu me jakad uske kanu me bola ,

"r...rr...remaaa....mm...meri....ss....se...xxy...ree...maahhhh...." etna bolte hi ravi ki akhen band ho gai , uske jism ne haar man li ,

rema en shabado ko sunte hi kahi kho si gai , kuch anchahi yadian uski akhon ke samne ghumne lagi , uski or uske bhai ki yadian , lekin abh behad der ho chuki thi ,

kya yeh ravi ka ant tha , ya abh bhi koi chamatkar reh gya tha , lekin abhi koi tha , jo nai aya tha , kon tha voh , yad nai a reha , voh thi baby , han , abh uske ravi ki jaan ko khatra ho , or baby na aye , aisa kabhi nai ho sakta , lekin ajj usne der kar di thi ,

ravi bus abh bejan sa rema ke kande par saar rakhe , chian ki nend so reha tha , usne vada kiya tha , jab bhi mout ayi , tumari bahu me ayegi , or yahi hua tha , kyu ki behad khoon beh chuka tha , par tabhi ik tez dhamaka hua ,



khushi or komal behad door , kabile ke zopdo par ja giri , or voh zopdu ke malbe ke niche dab gai , abh ravi jamen par padha hua tha ,

rema ke baal tut kar bhikar chuke the , or hawa me udd rehe the , abh uske baal behad chote the , jaise aam ladkyion ke hote hain ,

rema door jamen par giri hui thi , yaha voh pehle khadi thi , vaha ik gehra ghadda ban chuka tha , lekin vaha hua kya tha ,

jab rema , ravi ko marne ko utavali thi , tabhi baby vaha a gai , abh har pal ravi par nazar rakhne wali uski mohhbat , uski juhi , use kaise marne deti ,



baby ne locket ki pori takat apne hath me ikjut kar , rema ke baal jo football jaisa roop liye hue the , uddte hue un baalo par ik superman punch mara tha , esi karan yeh bamb jaisa byank dhamaka hua tha ,

baby bhi door jamen par giri haf rehi thi , sab ke sab jakhmi gire hue the , lekin rema ne ravi ko bola tha , ke voh seema ko bhi mar degi , eska matlab , saf tha ke rema , us nakabposh aurat jise apni maa kehti thi , usi ke kehne par yeh sab kar rehi thi ,

akhir rema ki maa ko kya chahyie tha , matlab saf tha , ik rahasmayi cheez , jiska nam tha RING...

to be counited....

Bc twists pe twists rema seema ko bhi marne ke liye taiyaar hai uss nakabposh aurat ke liye lekin woh hai kon aur usse ring se kya karna jab uske pas rema hai kya ring me rema se jyada powers hai :hmm:
 
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Update 240 was very emotional bro
As I said Ravi will make a sacrifice(nowadays it's becomeing common so this time I won't get sentimental)
Now he is gone so is komal
Now villains are confused + very desperate
Whom to fight with!!!!!!!!
Looks like next part Ravi and komal will born again
Or Khushi who have the power of time will bring back them
But pls bro this time make Ravi stronger and face him to the main villain just one on one,nobody else even komal( to avange every bit of his pain.)
Should have a great battle
It will be a epic moment
Waiting for last moment
Last thing bro where is kaal
I thought he was the strongest character in the series but he just get into his den not coming out even his son-daughter killing each other( what kind of father???)
Or he have some other plans to do!!!
 

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Abh Agge...

sab ke sab jakhmi the , baby dard se kahrahte hue apne ghutno ke bal beth chuki thi , usne dekha , uska pyar , uska ravi , behad jakhmi , jamen par padha hua tha ,

baby ki akhen gusse se lal ho gai , jab usne dekha , ravi ke pet me ik black jadui tikhe chaku jaise do tukde , jad tak ghuse lal rang me chamak rehe the ,

"aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh naaaiiiiiiiii...." baby apne chehra asman ki traf kar , etna jor se chilai ke , asman garaj utha , bijli chamakne lagi , prithvi kampne lagi , tez tufan uthne lage , sagar ke pani me hahakar mach gai , or uske lehre janleva ho gai ,

baby abh apne sabse vheshi roop me thi , kyu ki abh voh na toh juhi thi , na baby thi , voh pichle janam ki kaviya thi , jo janwar thi ,

pichle janam me bhi suhana ke kehne par yeh , kaviya nam ki vheshi janwar , prince ko marne ayi thi , tab use prince se pyar ho gya , or es janam me usne juhi ke roop me janam liya , abh voh juhi aka kaviya thi ,

baby gusse me chekhti hui uthi , or rema ki traf badne lagi , jo abh apne app ko kafi had tak sambal chuki thi , rema ke lal jadui baal abh phir se jevat ho chuke the , or uske chehre ko chu rehe the ,

rema apne ghutno ke bal bethi thi , tabhi baby ne us par attack kar diya , baby ne tezi se rema ki traf badte hue , use gardan se pakad uper utha liya ,

"tumneeee , mereeee pyarrr kooo marrrr dalaaaa..." baby ne beintha gusse me chekhte hue , rema ki gardan ko kas kar dabana suru kar diya ,

rema ke lal baalo ne baby ki kalai ko jakad liya , or uske hath ko khichne lage , par baby apni pori takat se rema ke gale ko daba rehi thi ,

tabhi baby ne apne ik pair par dabav dala or voh rema ko leker uper uddne lagi , behad uper jane ke bad , baby , rema ki akhon me dekh kar boli ,

"yehhh mereee raviii kee liyeeee bitchhhh..." baby ne etna bola or rema ki gardan ko jakde jamen par girne lagi ,

abh rema sidhi jamen par gir rehi thi , baby uski gardan ko apne hath se jakade , uske uper leti hui thi , dono jamen ki traf behad tez raftar se badh rehi thi , dono ke badan se tez aag nikal rehi thi , kyu ki un dono ki raftar behad tez thi ,

tabhii ik tez dhamaka huaa , vaha as-pas dhul or mitti ka gubar ban gya , jab dhul mitti ka gubar shant hua , tab vaha beintha dardnak mahol ban chuka tha ,

jamen par gehra gadda bana hua tha , rema jamen par besudh padhi hui thi , or baby uske uper leti hui thi , use bhi koi hosh nai tha ,

tabhi komal or khushi us tute hue zopde se rengte hue bahar nikali , voh dono behad jakhmi thi , ik rema ne un sab ki halat behad buri kar di thi , or abhi toh suhana ka anna baki tha ,

komal jamen par rengte rengte apne bhai ke pas pahunchi , or uske chehre ko dekhne lagi , tab tak khushi bhi vaha a chuki thi ,

"raviiiiiii ..." khushi dard bhari chekh marti ravi ke uper gir gai , voh use uthane lagi , uske seene par marne lagi ,

koi kya jane khushi ke dard ko , do janam leker bhi , uska pyar adhura reh gya tha , uske dard ki tulna kisi se karna bevkufi hogi ,

"komallll , uthaooo enkoo , tumari har bat mante hain , enko bolo , uth jaye , me nai jee sakti enke bina...." khushi beintha rote hue boli , lekin komal khamosh thi , uske honth sil gye the , voh bol nai pa rehi thi ,

"reemmaaaaahhh..." khushi behad gusse me chekh uthiii , uski talwar uske hatho me a gaiii , jo behad tez roshni me chamak rehi thi ,

"naii chodugiii tumee remaa..." khushi beintha gusse me akhon se behte asnu saf karti , apni talwar hatho me liye rema ki traf badne lagi ,

abh tak baby , rema ke uper se uth , rengte hue us gadde se bahar a chuki thi , bahar akar voh sidhli leti asman ki traf dekhti , tez tez haf rehi thi ,

rema ko bhi abh hosh anne laga tha , lekin voh abh behad kamzor thi , khushi ne rema par chalang lagate hue , apni tez roshni me chamakti talwar uske seene me utar dali ,

"aahhhhhnnnnnnn..." rema ke moh se ik dard bhari chekh nikali or phir uski akhen band ho gai , khushi apni talwar vaise hi chod , us gadde ke kinare beth chehra zuka rone lagi ,

par kya rema ka ant ho gya tha , koi nai janta tha , rema ko kaise mara ja sakta hai , yeh bus voh aurat janti thi , jisne rema ko pichle janam me mara tha , lekin ik bat thi , rema ne abh tak baby or khushi par koi attack nai kiya tha , kya use sab yad a gya tha ,

komal abh bhi vaise hi bethi hui thi , phir ika ik usne ravi ke pet se voh jadui tikhe tukde nikal liye , tukde nikalte hi khoon ki tez dhar beh nikali , komal yeh dekhte hi chekh uthi ,

"naaiiiiiii , bhyiaaaaaa , bhyiaaaaa ahhhhhhhhhh yaaahhhhhhhhhhh...." komal jor jor se chekhti hui , ravi ke seene par saar rakh rone lagi , uski chekh se khushi or baby bhi kamp sa gai , uski chekh me etna dard tha , jise byan kar pana mushkil hoga ,

"bhyiaaa , apne vada kiya tha , sath jeene ka , phir kyu , kyu , aisa kiya , kyu vada tod diya , aaaaaaaahhh , en bhedyion ke bech akela chod diya , yeh muze mar denge , bhyiaaaa , apko uthna hogaaa , uthooo bhyiaaa , plsss uthhh jaooo..." komal apne bhai ke bejan hontho ko chumte , chuste hue boli , phir ika ik voh apne bhai ke pore chehre ko chumne lagi ,

"bhyiaa , app mere sath sex karna chahte the naa , bhyiaaa me tyar huu , karoo sex mere sathhhh , fuckk meee , fuckk meee , utho naaa , plsss , karooo , kuch toh karooo , me kuwari nai marna chahtii , plsss , areee muzse shadii hi kar looo , kyaa bhigada mane kisi ka , kyuu , muze chain se nai jeene deteee , harr barr , muze hi kyu yeh dard miltaa haiii , kyuu , harr barr mera pyarr adhuraa rehh jataa haiii , bhyiaaaaa , apkoo merii kasammm uthooo , plsss , me hath jodtii huu , uthoo..." komal ne beintha rote hue bola , uske shabado me etna dard tha , etni tanhai thi , me kya likhu , muze kuch samaz nai a reha ,

"bhyiaaa , thik hai app matt uthoo , apko sona hai , so jaoo , me bhi so jati hu , apke pas , ham dono so jate hain , thak gye hain , ham dono bhag bhag kar , lad lad kar , abh chain ki nend so jate hain , bhyiaaa , me apke seene par saar rakh so jati hu , jab bhi utho , muze bhi utha denaa , ummaa..." komal ne apne asnu saf kar muskrate hue apne bhai ke hontho ko chuma or phir , apne bhai ke seene par saar rakh so gai , uske lambe khubsurat baalo ne uska chehra chupa liya ,

lekin tabhi , vaha ik safad dhuaa sa uthaaa , khushi or baby nam akhon se us dhuee ki traf dekhne lagi ,

hasshhh yeh suhana thii , uske sath dyana or joker bhi the , or sath me lara bhi thi , voh charo vaha hui ladai ke parinam dekh rehe the ,

"areee vahhh , meri betii ne sabkoo hara diyaa , abh mera maksad pora hone se koi nai rok sakta..." suhana beintha khushi me haste hue boli ,

"tabahi , tabahi , har traf tabahi , or esme muze khushi milti hai , me hu pagal shetian joker , ahahahahaa..." joker ne ravi ke murda jism ko dekh behad haste hue bola ,

"abh bol komall , abh karegi muze kaidd , khiiiiikhiiiiiii , abh sachai nai , burai raz karegiii , es dunia par naii , pore brehmand parrrrr..." dyana , komal ke pas bethte hue boli ,

"ahhh yeh sab tumara sapna hi rehega ..." khushi ne behad gusse me chila kar bola ,

"shhhhh , tume lagta hai , tumari yeh ghatiya se talwar , meri beti ko mar degi , bevkuf ladki , use marna etna asan nai , use me bhi nai mar saktiii , voh , voh , hehehe , abhi chand palu bad uth jayegiii..." suhana ne behad khushi me haste hue thoda gusse me chekh kar bola ,

"naiii chodugiii tumee..." baby uth kar gusse me uski traf badi , tabhi suhana ne akhen band kar koi mantra padha ,

baby uski traf badh hi rehi thi ke uska jism jadui lohe ki janjeer me jakada gya , jo aag jaisi garam thi ,

"ahhhhhhhh shhh..." baby dard se chilati jamen par gir gaiii ,

"yahhhhhhh..." khushi ne tezi se chilate suhana par chalang lagai , par suhana ne use gardan se pakad liya , or apne dusre hath ki mutthi ko kas kar band kar liya , uske hath me aag jalne lagi ,

suhana ne ik jordar punch khushi ke pet me jad diya , khushi uddte hue ik pedh se ja takrai , or niche jamen par gir gai , khushi apna pet pakade karah rehi thi ,

"tumm dono bevkuf hoo , malika suhana se jeet pana namumkin haii , suhana ne tume pichle janam me bhi mara tha or es janam me bhi maregiii..." suhana beintha haste hue boli ,

lekin komal abh bhi ravi ke seene par saar rakhe bethi hui thi , usne ik bar bhi apna chehra utha , suhana ko nai dekha tha ,

"malika suhana , dekho komal ki traf , bechari kitna dar gai apse , apna chehra tak utha nai rehi , khiiiiiikhiiiiiiii , lekin eski balii toh chadegi , ham sab ke malik shetian ko..." dyana ne beintha haste hue bola ,

"han dyana , mere pita ji ko eski bali deker , unse milugi , sadyian beet gai , esi chah me , ke kab me apne pita se milugi , unse batian karugi , ajj mera sapna pora hoga , han na komalll , lyo jii , dekho , hamari pyari komal , apne bhai se chipak kar bethi hui hai , are koi esko batao ke , voh mar chuka hai , voh nai uthega...." suhana ne behad khushi me bola ,

lekin komal ne abh bhi apna chehra uper nai uthaya tha , kaisa pyar tha uska , yeh kis trah ki deewangi thi , chot ik ko lagti thi , dard dusre ko hota tha , lekin jo dard komal ko ajj mila tha , kya yeh dard uska pyar bhara dil sehan kar paya tha ,

abh tak rema ko hosh a chuka tha , voh uth kar , apne seene se khushi ki talwar nikal , suhana or baki sab ki traf badh rehi thi ,

jab suhana ko rema ke anne ka ehsas hua , tab usne apna roop seema ke roop me badal liya , or pyar se dekhte hue rema ki traf badne lagi ,

"meri bachiiiii , akhir tumne , rimi or shurti ko , en sabse bacha hi liya..." seema ne rema ka matha chumte hue bola ,

jaise hi seema ke honth rema ke mathe par lage , use ik tez bijli ka jatka laga , voh piche ki traf gir gai , lekin phir voh khud ko sambalte hue uth khadi hui ,

baby khud ko chudvane ki pori kossih kar rehi thi , khushi abh usi pedh se pith tikaye bethi hui thi , abh voh kiske liye ladti , voh khud sadme me thi ,

"laraa , komal ko bandi bana lo..." joker ne lara ki traf dekh kar bola ,

"jiiii malik..." lara chehra zuka kar boli , or komal ki traf badne lagi ,

lara ne apni talwar nikal li thi , kyu ki komal par use vishwas nai tha , kya pata , komal uthte hi us par hamla kar de , lara koi risk nai lena chahti thi ,

lara , komal ke karib pahunch , use awaz dene lagi ..."komalll , uthooo , varnaaa..." lara ne gusse me komal ko kande se pakad piche kiya , tab uski akhen khuli ki khuli reh gai ,

"naiiiii..." lara behad jor se chekh uthi , lara ki chekh sun , suhana , dyana , joker or rema , uske pas a gye , par jo un logu ne dekha , sabko apni akhon par vishwas nai ho reha tha ,

"naiiiii , yehh naii ho saktaaaa..." seema behad gusse me chekh uthi , uski byank chekh sun , sab ander tak kamp gye , bus rema ko chod kar ,

"yeh kaisi pagal ladki haiii , ik pyarr ke liyee yehh sabbb..." dyana bhi komal or ravi ke pyar se pharbavit hote hue boli ,

"ohhh naiii , abh kya hogaaa malikaa..." joker ne behad udas awaz me bola , har bat par , har pal , har lamha , hasne wala joker abh udas tha , lekin hua kya tha ,

jab komal ne sone ki bat ki tab , uske hatho me voh jadui tikhe tukde the , komal ne apne bhai ke seene par apna saar rakha , or dono tukde , badi khamoshi se , apne pet me ghusa liye ,

use dard toh beintha hua , uski band akhon se asnu beh nikale , lekin voh har dard sehti , apne bhai ke seene par saar rakhe , use bahu me bhar kar , usse chipak kar bethi rehi ,
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akhir kuch hi palu me un jadui tukdo ne komal ki sanse cheen li , voh chand palu me hi marne lagi , lekin voh kafi der tak , suhana or baki sab ki batian sunti rehi ,

par use sona tha , apne bhai ke sath , or voh so gai , usne apna vada pora kiya , jiyege toh sath , or marege bhi sath , or ajj uska har dard , har tanhai , khatam ho chuki thi ,

abh na toh use es samaz ka dar tha , na apni maa ka , na hi uski behan suhana ka , abh voh hamesha hamesha ke liye apne bhai ke sath so gai thi ,

jindgi bhar dard sehti rehi , har musibat se ladti rehi , kabhi apni abru bachati rehi , or kabhi apne pyar ke liye balidan deti rehi , par abh ik akhri balidan usne diya tha , or abh voh so chuki thi , ik chain ki nend , use koi nai utha sakta tha , koi bhi naii ,

"naaiiiii , naiiii , tum naii marrr saktiii , meraa maksadd , adhuraa rehh gyaa , kyuuu , harr barr tummm marr jatiii hoo , kyaa haii ess pyarr mee , kyuu , akhirrr kyuuu..." suhana , komal ke pas ghutno ke bal beth rote , chilate hue boli , par abh sab khatam ho chuka thaa , kuch nai bachaa thaa...

"malika sambalo khud ko , jo hona tha , voh ho chuka hai..." dyana ne seema ke kande par hath rakh bola ,

"naiii , naiiiii , yeh nai ho saktaaa , komal muzse jayda pyarr kaisee karrr saktiii haiii , pichle janam me bhiii , esnee apneee bhaii kee liyee jaann dediii , or abh phirr vahii sab , me haar gaiiii , me phirrr se haarr gaiiii..." suhana ne beintha rote hue bola ,

burai ke sath hamesha yahi hota hai , abh na toh suhana , apna pyar pa sakti or na apne pita ko mil sakti thi , agar voh ravi or komal ke sath mil kar rehti toh , shyad use uska pyar mil jata , jo use pichle janam me nai mila tha , lekin use pyar pana nai tha , voh pyar cheen lena chahti thi ,

lekin abh ravi , prince nai tha , abh voh insan tha , jiske sath kai jindgyian judi thi , uski 7 behne or kai premikayian , lekin suhana toh bus akele ravi ko chahti thi ,

lekin abh uske ahnkar ne uska sab kuch cheen liya tha , uska premi , uska maksad , or abh shyad , jise voh apni beti kehti thi , voh bhi uske khilaf hone wali thi...


to be counited....

:cry: ravi aur komal ko mar diya apne galat baat lekin apne kaha tha ki ravi ka beta bhi hoga joh hero banega aage jaa kar lekin ab tak toh ravi ki koi aulad hai hi nahi :hmm: aur rekha kahan gai uska bhi nahi pata kuch:waiting:
 
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"naaiiiiiii , bhyiaaaaaa , bhyiaaaaa ahhhhhhhhhh yaaahhhhhhhhhhh...." komal jor jor se chekhti hui , ravi ke seene par saar rakh rone lagi , uski chekh se khushi or baby bhi kamp sa gai , uski chekh me etna dard tha , jise byan kar pana mushkil hoga ,

"bhyiaaa , apne vada kiya tha , sath jeene ka , phir kyu , kyu , aisa kiya , kyu vada tod diya , aaaaaaaahhh , en bhedyion ke bech akela chod diya , yeh muze mar denge , bhyiaaaa , apko uthna hogaaa , uthooo bhyiaaa , plsss uthhh jaooo..." komal apne bhai ke bejan hontho ko chumte , chuste hue boli , phir ika ik voh apne bhai ke pore chehre ko chumne lagi ,

"bhyiaa , app mere sath sex karna chahte the naa , bhyiaaa me tyar huu , karoo sex mere sathhhh , fuckk meee , fuckk meee , utho naaa , plsss , karooo , kuch toh karooo , me kuwari nai marna chahtii , plsss , areee muzse shadii hi kar looo , kyaa bhigada mane kisi ka , kyuu , muze chain se nai jeene deteee , harr barr , muze hi kyu yeh dard miltaa haiii , kyuu , harr barr mera pyarr adhuraa rehh jataa haiii , bhyiaaaaa , apkoo merii kasammm uthooo , plsss , me hath jodtii huu , uthoo..." komal ne beintha rote hue bola , uske shabado me etna dard tha , etni tanhai thi , me kya likhu , muze kuch samaz nai a reha ,

"bhyiaaa , thik hai app matt uthoo , apko sona hai , so jaoo , me bhi so jati hu , apke pas , ham dono so jate hain , thak gye hain , ham dono bhag bhag kar , lad lad kar , abh chain ki nend so jate hain , bhyiaaa , me apke seene par saar rakh so jati hu , jab bhi utho , muze bhi utha denaa , ummaa..." komal ne apne asnu saf kar muskrate hue apne bhai ke hontho ko chuma or phir , apne bhai ke seene par saar rakh so gai , uske lambe khubsurat baalo ne uska chehra chupa liya ,

"naiiiii , yehh naii ho saktaaaa..." seema behad gusse me chekh uthi , uski byank chekh sun , sab ander tak kamp gye , bus rema ko chod kar ,

"yeh kaisi pagal ladki haiii , ik pyarr ke liyee yehh sabbb..." dyana bhi komal or ravi ke pyar se pharbavit hote hue boli ,

"ohhh naiii , abh kya hogaaa malikaa..." joker ne behad udas awaz me bola , har bat par , har pal , har lamha , hasne wala joker abh udas tha , lekin hua kya tha ,

jab komal ne sone ki bat ki tab , uske hatho me voh jadui tikhe tukde the , komal ne apne bhai ke seene par apna saar rakha , or dono tukde , badi khamoshi se , apne pet me ghusa liye ,

use dard toh beintha hua , uski band akhon se asnu beh nikale , lekin voh har dard sehti , apne bhai ke seene par saar rakhe , use bahu me bhar kar , usse chipak kar bethi rehi ,
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akhir kuch hi palu me un jadui tukdo ne komal ki sanse cheen li , voh chand palu me hi marne lagi , lekin voh kafi der tak , suhana or baki sab ki batian sunti rehi ,

par use sona tha , apne bhai ke sath , or voh so gai , usne apna vada pora kiya , jiyege toh sath , or marege bhi sath , or ajj uska har dard , har tanhai , khatam ho chuki thi ,

abh na toh use es samaz ka dar tha , na apni maa ka , na hi uski behan suhana ka , abh voh hamesha hamesha ke liye apne bhai ke sath so gai thi ,

jindgi bhar dard sehti rehi , har musibat se ladti rehi , kabhi apni abru bachati rehi , or kabhi apne pyar ke liye balidan deti rehi , par abh ik akhri balidan usne diya tha , or abh voh so chuki thi , ik chain ki nend , use koi nai utha sakta tha , koi bhi naii ,

"naaiiiii , naiiii , tum naii marrr saktiii , meraa maksadd , adhuraa rehh gyaa , kyuuu , harr barr tummm marr jatiii hoo , kyaa haii ess pyarr mee , kyuu , akhirrr kyuuu..." suhana , komal ke pas ghutno ke bal beth rote , chilate hue boli , par abh sab khatam ho chuka thaa , kuch nai bachaa thaa...



Baby ko bhi pichla janm yaad aa gaya.
Baby or khushi ravi ke mout ke baad rema par hamla karne lage.
Rema dono se bachav bhi nhi kar rahi thi.
Shyad use pichla sab yaad aa gaya.
Komal ke bare me kya kahu mujhe uske bare me shabd hi nhi mil rahe hai.
Uski tadap ko dekhkar mere pass word hi nhi hai.

Suhana ka ahnkar ne sab le duba .
Kya ye ravi or komal ka ant hai ya koi nyi shurwat hone wali ye to aane wale samay par nirbhar hai.
Suhana rema ke samne seema ka roop dharan karti hai.
Yani seema or suhana dono alag hai .
Seema kahin or jagah kaid hai.
 
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